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Lumario
00:16:763 (1) - Try to add this one "orange" combo circle to the following "red" combo circle (me being picky :P)
00:17:116 (1) - Put this circle behind the one infront of it so you have to "double-tap" like you have to in the early part of this map [Fits the sound imo a better and makes it more confortable to play]
01:30:528 (1) - Maybe let the stream start already beginning with this circle so you have a nicer "flow" :D [alternative idea: You could delete the 2nd and 3rd circle do still have this short stop/pause feeling (ofc you have to edit the position of stream then ^.^)]

I liked the map and your ideas in general,
Good luck to get it ranked :P
Luma
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

KawaiiLuma wrote:

00:16:763 (1) - Try to add this one "orange" combo circle to the following "red" combo circle (me being picky :P)
00:17:116 (1) - Put this circle behind the one infront of it so you have to "double-tap" like you have to in the early part of this map [Fits the sound imo a better and makes it more confortable to play]
01:30:528 (1) - Maybe let the stream start already beginning with this circle so you have a nicer "flow" :D [alternative idea: You could delete the 2nd and 3rd circle do still have this short stop/pause feeling (ofc you have to edit the position of stream then ^.^)]

I liked the map and your ideas in general,
Good luck to get it ranked :P
Luma
Thanks alot! :) :)
Jakomo73
Hey! M4M from your queue :) Rip you edited and declined, whoops. Just consider it an NM ^^

General
Needs to be have hitsounds for ranked along with an easy or normal < 2* (but WIP so you're probably getting to that)
Insane you should raise the OD (I think for a 4.44* it should be like 7-8, and most ranked maps around there have that OD)
Hard has high AR, low OD and low HP drain. I would recommend 7.3 AR 6 OD and 5 HP
You have two mp3 files of the song in your folder, both of the diffs currently use audio.mp3 as the filename, so the other one can be deleted.
Need to add some tags :)
The BG image is 1085x768, but 1366x768 works best for the bg size

Insane
00:13:940 you're missing a big beat here, should add a circle imo
00:16:058 ^^
00:16:234 (1) - remove NC
00:16:763 (1) - ^
00:17:116 beat again
00:18:881 ^
00:19:587 ^^
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Make the 1's a curve
00:20:469 (1,2) - Make DS 2.0 instead of 1.9 for these, to keep the amt the DS increases the same
00:20:822 (1,2) - ^^ but 2.2
00:21:175 (1) - should place in the path that had been going so far with the NC's
00:21:705 - Note missed
00:23:293 - Should be mapped here imo
00:24:705 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:25:058 - This beat is dominant, should play around it instead of the current slider
00:26:293 (1) - Remove NC and make sure it doesn't overlap
00:27:175 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:33:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This should blanket something, 6 beforehand imo
00:34:586 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:528 (9) - remove overlap
00:38:822 (6) - ^
00:42:352 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:43:763 (1) - ^^
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Should make these fit the slider's curve, prob will need to increase DS to 1.3 for that Rough estimate
00:30:705 (6,1) - Fix blanket
00:31:939 (2) - Overlap
00:52:234 - End break here imo
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lots of notes missed like in beginning
Make sure you don't have any missed beats or overlaps! There are a few I didn't mention as well in the end (didn't want to spam you TOO much :P)

Hard
You're missing some of the notes on this diff as well, but I spammed you a bit too much with them in the insane diff, so most of those missed notes in insane are also missing in hard
00:13:410 (2) - curve this (and blanket 1), and ctrl + G for better flow
00:18:352 (1,2) - Kind of awkward flow, would consider flipping them around so 1 has 2's curve and vice versa
00:32:116 (1) - Match this with the pattern of red anchor in 00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) -
00:20:469 (3) - Put this between 1 and 2(like right in the middle), and bring down 4
00:35:293 (1) - Should have a slider where the slider end of 1 is, and have it end on where 2 currently is (timeline wise)
00:42:705 (7,8,1) - Stack all of these together
00:43:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Having all the NC's here I think is really confusing for a hard player
What I said about the break in Insane applies here too
01:00:705 (1) - Make this just a simple curve, keep the pattern of 1 is a blanket, 2 is a straight slider
01:04:940 (1) - Overlap here :(
01:10:587 - Big beat missed here imo (happens on the rest of the big white ticks too)
01:14:469 (2,1) - Increase DS here to avoid confusion with a shorter gap on the playfield when it's the same gap in the timeline
01:18:175 (2,4) - Overlap
01:19:763 (1) - Continue mapping this part
The big white ticks on the kiai section also got missed :(


Hopefully this helped and I didn't spam you too much with the same thing. I didn't really go into tooo much depth but if you want me to point out the smaller things as well, I can. GL with the map and your queue :)
onsaemiro
Hello from my queue~
Insane
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why not continue with the pattern you had with the first 3 pairs? <- not 100% necessary to fix btw. just wondering
00:16:763 (1,1) - remove NC from one of them
00:28:763 (7,8,9) - really clustered, messy and confusing. people will lose combo because they can't see the rebound symbol
00:43:058 (8,1,1) - overlap
00:45:175 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ i dont recommend this pattern
00:58:410 - missing a beat here
00:59:822 - ^
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - beat is off. you are missing beats (red ticks and large white ticks) and you have inconsistent rhythm here (sometimes skipping red ticks and sometimes skipping white ticks although you should have missed neither). you should skip every small white ticks in this part and have a note at all other ticks.
01:03:528 (1) - i personally think this spinner is uncalled for, but if that's how you want to build up tension from the music then sure. also the spinner shouldnt end on a major note (big white tick). have something clickable there
01:06:528 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent hold time (btw the first repeater should begin where your spinner currently ends. see ^)
01:21:881 - this is a major note you skipped. this is where your sliders should begin and they should end where your sliders currently begin
01:27:528 - 01:28:940 - 01:30:352 - ^
01:31:057 (7) - this is where stream should begin, not before

gl with mapping~!
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

jakomo73 wrote:

Hey! M4M from your queue :) Rip you edited and declined, whoops. Just consider it an NM ^^

General
Needs to be have hitsounds for ranked along with an easy or normal < 2* (but WIP so you're probably getting to that)
Insane you should raise the OD (I think for a 4.44* it should be like 7-8, and most ranked maps around there have that OD)
Hard has high AR, low OD and low HP drain. I would recommend 7.3 AR 6 OD and 5 HP
You have two mp3 files of the song in your folder, both of the diffs currently use audio.mp3 as the filename, so the other one can be deleted.
Need to add some tags :)
The BG image is 1085x768, but 1366x768 works best for the bg size

Insane
00:13:940 you're missing a big beat here, should add a circle imo
00:16:058 ^^
00:16:234 (1) - remove NC
00:16:763 (1) - ^
00:17:116 beat again
00:18:881 ^
00:19:587 ^^
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Make the 1's a curve
00:20:469 (1,2) - Make DS 2.0 instead of 1.9 for these, to keep the amt the DS increases the same
00:20:822 (1,2) - ^^ but 2.2
00:21:175 (1) - should place in the path that had been going so far with the NC's
00:21:705 - Note missed
00:23:293 - Should be mapped here imo
00:24:705 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:25:058 - This beat is dominant, should play around it instead of the current slider
00:26:293 (1) - Remove NC and make sure it doesn't overlap
00:27:175 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:33:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This should blanket something, 6 beforehand imo
00:34:586 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:528 (9) - remove overlap
00:38:822 (6) - ^
00:42:352 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:43:763 (1) - ^^
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Should make these fit the slider's curve, prob will need to increase DS to 1.3 for that Rough estimate
00:30:705 (6,1) - Fix blanket
00:31:939 (2) - Overlap
00:52:234 - End break here imo
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lots of notes missed like in beginning
Make sure you don't have any missed beats or overlaps! There are a few I didn't mention as well in the end (didn't want to spam you TOO much :P)

Hard
You're missing some of the notes on this diff as well, but I spammed you a bit too much with them in the insane diff, so most of those missed notes in insane are also missing in hard
00:13:410 (2) - curve this (and blanket 1), and ctrl + G for better flow
00:18:352 (1,2) - Kind of awkward flow, would consider flipping them around so 1 has 2's curve and vice versa
00:32:116 (1) - Match this with the pattern of red anchor in 00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) -
00:20:469 (3) - Put this between 1 and 2(like right in the middle), and bring down 4
00:35:293 (1) - Should have a slider where the slider end of 1 is, and have it end on where 2 currently is (timeline wise)
00:42:705 (7,8,1) - Stack all of these together
00:43:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Having all the NC's here I think is really confusing for a hard player
What I said about the break in Insane applies here too
01:00:705 (1) - Make this just a simple curve, keep the pattern of 1 is a blanket, 2 is a straight slider
01:04:940 (1) - Overlap here :(
01:10:587 - Big beat missed here imo (happens on the rest of the big white ticks too)
01:14:469 (2,1) - Increase DS here to avoid confusion with a shorter gap on the playfield when it's the same gap in the timeline
01:18:175 (2,4) - Overlap
01:19:763 (1) - Continue mapping this part
The big white ticks on the kiai section also got missed :(


Hopefully this helped and I didn't spam you too much with the same thing. I didn't really go into tooo much depth but if you want me to point out the smaller things as well, I can. GL with the map and your queue :)
Oops sorry for declining ): I should mod yours? Thanks for the mod anyway
btw I learned so much from your mod :)
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

chparkkim wrote:

Hello from my queue~
Insane
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why not continue with the pattern you had with the first 3 pairs? <- not 100% necessary to fix btw. just wondering
00:16:763 (1,1) - remove NC from one of them
00:28:763 (7,8,9) - really clustered, messy and confusing. people will lose combo because they can't see the rebound symbol
00:43:058 (8,1,1) - overlap
00:45:175 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ i dont recommend this pattern
00:58:410 - missing a beat here
00:59:822 - ^
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - beat is off. you are missing beats (red ticks and large white ticks) and you have inconsistent rhythm here (sometimes skipping red ticks and sometimes skipping white ticks although you should have missed neither). you should skip every small white ticks in this part and have a note at all other ticks.
01:03:528 (1) - i personally think this spinner is uncalled for, but if that's how you want to build up tension from the music then sure. also the spinner shouldnt end on a major note (big white tick). have something clickable there
01:06:528 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent hold time (btw the first repeater should begin where your spinner currently ends. see ^)
01:21:881 - this is a major note you skipped. this is where your sliders should begin and they should end where your sliders currently begin
01:27:528 - 01:28:940 - 01:30:352 - ^
01:31:057 (7) - this is where stream should begin, not before

gl with mapping~!
Thanks for the mod its really helpful
_Stan
Hey~ GD here

Stan's Normal
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Topic Starter
DJ Fish

_Stan wrote:

Hey~ GD here

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Thanks! Nice work btw
Juiceys
SPOILER
Normal

This difficulty didn't have technical problems but I do think that it was on the linear side of things
for example at 00:58:763 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part while not inaccurate could be changed to be more interesting if you understand what i mean
Instead of having all the sliders be symmetrical have them make a pattern or just move around the map more. Just a pentagon of sliders is sorta boring no?

Most of the map is good at not doing this but there are a few spots that could be made more interesting.

01:04:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - This could also be moved around to be more interesting, you could maybe flip some of them so they arent all in a straight line. :D

SPOILER
Hard


00:41:646 (1,2) - These circles seemed very awkward to me and when i played it I didn't hear anything that would give reason to why these were here. I would change them because they don't seem to follow any sound and they were awkward to hit when i did my test runs.

00:33:528 (5,1) - This would be a nice blanket :D

01:31:058 (1) - Combined with the length of this spinner and the maps BPM this spinner doesn't seem to have a purpose in the map. maybe change it to a long slider?

01:21:528 (4,5) - I do like this jump but I think it would be better if there were more of these in the kiai. Since it's the only jump in the kiai time its kinda weird to have, so you should add more jumps in this kiai

Topic Starter
DJ Fish

Juiceys wrote:

SPOILER
Normal

This difficulty didn't have technical problems but I do think that it was on the linear side of things
for example at 00:58:763 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part while not inaccurate could be changed to be more interesting if you understand what i mean
Instead of having all the sliders be symmetrical have them make a pattern or just move around the map more. Just a pentagon of sliders is sorta boring no?

Most of the map is good at not doing this but there are a few spots that could be made more interesting.

01:04:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - This could also be moved around to be more interesting, you could maybe flip some of them so they arent all in a straight line. :D

SPOILER
Hard


00:41:646 (1,2) - These circles seemed very awkward to me and when i played it I didn't hear anything that would give reason to why these were here. I would change them because they don't seem to follow any sound and they were awkward to hit when i did my test runs.

00:33:528 (5,1) - This would be a nice blanket :D

01:31:058 (1) - Combined with the length of this spinner and the maps BPM this spinner doesn't seem to have a purpose in the map. maybe change it to a long slider?

01:21:528 (4,5) - I do like this jump but I think it would be better if there were more of these in the kiai. Since it's the only jump in the kiai time its kinda weird to have, so you should add more jumps in this kiai
Thank you
_Stan
sorry for late.

stan's normal update
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DJMUKISOKU
Hard

00:34:587 (2) - You need to move this note, it is difficult to see
00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -It will be difficult to play a man who less than 50K, it is better in my opinion to do so
01:04:940 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe triangle?
01:21:528 (4,5) -We need to do less spacings
Insane

01:06:352 (1,2,1,2) - maybe stream?
DJMax
from my queue
Normal is good
Hard
一些单点距离太近了,无法和三连区分
01:13:058 (4,1,2) - these things' distance should looks like the same as previous
Inasane
00:29:116 (9) - can not see the reverse arrow
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really confuse here, if you overlap the stream under the slder, most players could not aware it
01:08:028 (4,5,6,7) - there should be 1/8

good luck thats all
_Yiiiii
Hi, this is my GD :)

It's my first time make dubstep map, I can't do better without overmapping XD pls don't kill me
File name
OMFG - Stardust (DJ Fish) [iiiii's Another].osu

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Topic Starter
DJ Fish

_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi, this is my GD :)

It's my first time make dubstep map, I can't do better without overmapping XD pls don't kill me
File name
OMFG - Stardust (DJ Fish) [iiiii's Another].osu

Content
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[Metadata]
Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:iiiii's Another
Source:
Tags:Stardust OMFG DJ Fish Star Dust
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116,213,91763,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Nice :)
Mir
Hi, M4M!

Let’s get into it.

Hard

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. 00:20:822 (4,1) – This jump is way too big for a Hard map imo. I’d nerf this.
  2. 00:34:587 (2) – This note threw me off. I’d recommend moving it out a little bit just so the slider end doesn’t hide the approach circle too much.

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:18:352 (1,2) – No blanket here?
  2. 00:32:822 (3,4) – Blanket.
  3. 00:33:528 (5,1) – Blanket!~
  4. 01:09:528 (2,5) – Could stack the slider end of 01:09:528 (2) with 01:10:587 (5)?
  5. 01:16:763 (2,3) – Blanket! D:
  6. 01:30:528 (6,7) – Blanket is triggering me. :c

Insane

Beats and Notes

  1. All good! (except for a lot of unnecessary triplets that can be easily compensated for with more jumps but that’s just my opinion)

Flow and Gameplay

  1. 00:28:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Cool idea but… this slider 00:29:116 (9) throws me off so much. You could add two more sliders like 00:28:939 (8) instead to make it easier to read and more comfortable to play imo. I don’t see why you have to hold it.

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:12:705 (1,2) – Blanket!
  2. 00:29:116 (9,1) – Blanket if you didn’t follow the above~

I couldn’t find anything noteworthy in the other diffs, so I didn’t add them to the mod. Cool song!~
Kanye
Hi, M4M from my queue.

Sorry I'm late, been catching up on sleep and other mods, finally got here though

[General]
(*) Why not replace the red combo colour with a purple, since it would fit better
(*) I think 30% volume is way too quiet to provide any feedback at all when clicking. At 23 seconds for example, you can't hear the clicks since they blend with the bg music so well, that it would confuse players into thinking they missed when they didn't. Maybe increase to 50%, but even then at the kiai you can barely hear it still. Possibly just add a hitsound change at 00:23:999 (1) - to use normal sounds, since it would fit this part better than soft.
(*) The audio track seems to just suddenly cut out at the end. It's not a major issue, but maybe you could edit it to fade out slowly

[Stan's Normal]
(*) 01:26:822 (2) - Replace this with a copy of the (1) slider and just rotate it slightly instead?
All seems good other than that!

[Hard]
(*) 00:19:763 (1,2,3,4) - I think this overlap would be too confusing to some, so maybe just keep it going down linear, or reverse the second lot and stack the tails, like this http://puu.sh/rBMJD.jpg
(*) 00:25:763 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:24:705 (3) -
(*) 00:29:646 (7) - NC
(*) 01:12:175 (1,2) - I think this should be replaced with a circle, slider, circle
(*) 01:16:410 (1,2) - Same here
(*) 01:23:469 (2,3) - And here


[Insane]
(*) 00:21:175 (1) - I think you should stack the head and the tail on the two notes it's overlapping
(*) 00:27:352 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 and shift along , then replace the current starting point with a circle, like this http://puu.sh/rBMWE.jpg
(*) 00:27:881 (1,2,3) - A triple doesn't fit here, remove the second note and just leave it as 1/2 spacing http://puu.sh/rBMYl.jpg
(*) 00:28:234 (3) - I really like this onwards :D
(*) 01:07:763 (5) - NC
(*) 01:07:763 (5) - The 1/8 space beat actually begins here, so replace the rest of this burst with two 1/8 reverse sliders like this http://puu.sh/rBN5g.jpg
(*) 01:11:999 (1) - Fix stacking
(*) 01:12:528 (3) - Replace with two circles
(*) 01:23:293 (1) - From here onwards there's a lot of overlapping, which doesn't look very good, so try fix this
(*) 01:30:175 (3) - Stack on tail

[iiiii's Another]
(*) Ayyy finally mapping the intro
(*) 00:09:969 (1,1) - These spinners are way too short, and if a player doesn't expect them then they have no time to react and spin fast enough. Just make the whole thing one spinner
(*) 00:31:058 (1) - Add some sliders in here, I know it fits, but it does wear out the player if they have to continue clicking 1/2 for that long. Maybe here 00:35:293 (1) -


Well that's all from me, a good set, with a couple issues, but they're fixable. You need to fix the hitsounding issue, since if there's no feedback in the clicks then it's difficult to play the map. Definitely watch this video that pishi made about it, as it will make things more clear https://youtu.be/Lz6D7HPJ0eQ?t=3m52s . I like what iiiii did in their diff, where they added claps their notes to provide some feedback to it, but I think overall the volume should be increased as a start. You might want to add custom hitsounds to your diff since some skins people use might be bad for this issue, and if you provide then with hitsounds then it'll make things a lot better. Well other than that, I think this set is good, I really love the song, so nice and peaceful, and a great way to end my night xD but yeah, good luck with the map, and I'll see you on my map :D https://osu.ppy.sh/s/377148
kanor
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[Normal]
01:06:352 (1,2) - 这里折返三次就够了,normal折返四次一是不好排,二是比较难
挺好的,整个set里最满意的diff,稍微修一下那几个红点滑条感觉差不多了
加油w
[Hard]
00:14:469 (3,5,6,1) - 建议叠起来
00:15:528 (1,2) - 没包好
00:16:234 (2,3) - 没叠好,建议关了堆叠效果
00:24:705 (3,4,5) - 分别ctrl+G一下flow顺得多
00:26:116 (2,3,4,5) - 如果叠就完全叠了,如果不叠就拉开点,这种要叠不叠看起来比较丑.......
00:29:293 (5,6,1) - 这里56最好叠在1上,不然和前面的放在一起你就得解释为什么56突然降DS
00:30:352 (3,4) - blanket
00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) - blanket的话看起来更舒服一点
00:33:528 (5,1) - 你大多数的blanket都和这里的这个差不多,但是里包好还有一定的距离
00:35:646 (3,4,5,6) - 这里DS起飞了,然后00:39:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里又强行缩小......不合曲,hard虽然不想前面低难度那样需要全程ds,但是你起码也要让Player能明显地感觉到这个diff又一个基础的ds,免得时不时“这里怎么又跳了?”“这里怎么又缩得这么小?”
然后是blanket,最好全图重新检查一遍,很多地方都没包好,这种小细节会直接决定Modder对这个图的第一印象
00:43:763 (1,2,7,8) - 这里是可以叠起来的,稍微挪一下就可以
这是没包好的
这是包好了的,后者看起来会舒服很多(如果是强迫症来摸这个首先心里给你1分然后写一版blanket)
[Insane]
00:15:528 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这一段很不建议stack,对读版很不友好,而且个人不太建议这么下节奏,没有合适的key做引导这么自己带节奏有点作死的嫌疑......
00:20:999 (2,1) - 如果你要靠近放,建议就叠在2上面,如果你不打算靠近放就放得更远一点,不然这里DS突然降低找不到合适的解释
00:22:410 (1,2) - 没搞懂这里怎么DS又拉近了
00:22:587 (2,3) - 没叠好
00:26:822 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的节奏不明所以,如果压琴的话滑条就应该下在3,如果要跟鼓点那么3和4中间就漏音了
00:28:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个overmap很没必要,也丑
00:31:058 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 如果你要放跳,最好保持一个固定的距离或者固定的趋势,比如全程一个DS或是DS随着跳逐渐拉大,像这种突然拉开又突然拉近的打起来很不顺手
00:57:881 - 这个音强烈建议不要漏
01:24:352 (4,5) - 没叠好
还有很大的提升空间,加油
[Another]
00:34:058 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G
00:37:763 (3,4) - 前面都是顺时针flow到这里突然变成逆时针,有点突兀
00:43:940 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G
00:44:469 (1,2,3,4) - 不推荐钝角跳,嘛不过你坚持的话随意,就整体来说00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段和整体难度脱节,建议把DS缩小一点或者跳得善良一点
00:53:646 (1,2,3,4) - 这里2和3的DS为什么突然缩小了?
00:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的DS为什么突然拉得这么大而00:55:763 (1,2,3,4) - 又马上缩小?
最后一段kai全是滑条spam很无聊
试着3个滑条+2个单点——2个滑条+4个单点——1个滑条+2个单点+1个滑条+2单点——全是单点
这样是不是更有层次感一点呢?
而且因为曲子本身比较单调,我反而希望能看到些overmap......算是我个人的偏好吧XD
差不多就这些
GL :)
_Yiiiii

Kanye wrote:

[iiiii's Another]
(*) Ayyy finally mapping the intro
(*) 00:09:969 (1,1) - These spinners are way too short, and if a player doesn't expect them then they have no time to react and spin fast enough. Just make the whole thing one spinner No, I just want to make the sense of something difficult is approaching by doing this, and the spinners are long enough.
(*) 00:31:058 (1) - Add some sliders in here, I know it fits, but it does wear out the player if they have to continue clicking 1/2 for that long. Maybe here 00:35:293 (1) - Well, you have a point, but I agree with the saying "make objective sense, and not make your sense." Adding some sliders here is good for playing but it is a subjective advice, it can't beat objective reasons in any situation. I added these sliders 00:23:999 (1) - because I am following those strange electrical sound, 00:35:293 (1) - since there is a kiai time, it is suitable to change a way to express those sound.
Thanks for modding! :)

kanor wrote:

[Another]
00:34:058 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G
00:37:763 (3,4) - 前面都是顺时针flow到这里突然变成逆时针,有点突兀 这里的滴滴滴的音明显比其他地方强,换一下感觉挺好
00:43:940 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G 不,这次这几个音是渐变的
00:44:469 (1,2,3,4) - 不推荐钝角跳,嘛不过你坚持的话随意,就整体来说00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段和整体难度脱节,建议把DS缩小一点或者跳得善良一点 故意恶心人的,再来一个这么说的我就改
00:53:646 (1,2,3,4) - 这里2和3的DS为什么突然缩小了? 我也不知道我当时怎么想的,改了
00:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的DS为什么突然拉得这么大而00:55:763 (1,2,3,4) - 又马上缩小?跟音调有关啦,音调高了,DS就稍微大一点
最后一段kai全是滑条spam很无聊
试着3个滑条+2个单点——2个滑条+4个单点——1个滑条+2个单点+1个滑条+2单点——全是单点
这样是不是更有层次感一点呢?我倒是觉得这坨滑条挺爽的,再来两个人说就改
而且因为曲子本身比较单调,我反而希望能看到些overmap......算是我个人的偏好吧XD 刚拿到曲子的确挺想overmap的,不过看Insane已经有overmap了就没做
谢摸!:)

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Naxess
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  1. You must add your GDers to your tags. Add _Yiiiii and _Stan to the tags.

    Ranking Criteria - Metadata wrote:

    The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.


  2. You don't need DJ Fish, Stardust or OMFG in the tags, since they're already provided by creator, title and artist respectively. Consider removing them.

  3. Add Alex Savage to the tags, it's the composer. Refer to the official website, or the official youtube video.

  4. The ending is quite sudden, perhaps you could gradually fade your mp3 from where you stop mapping to solve this.

iiiii's Another



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:02:646 - You don't have anything here, but you do at 00:05:469 (3) - and 00:08:293 - . Try keeping the coverage of sounds consistent if possible. This could be done easily by just adding another circle in between like this, or changing the rhythm a bit like this.

  2. 00:15:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps you could swap this measure's rhythm for the one on 00:16:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead. This way you won't have two same rhythms consecutively, as seen when comparing it to the previous measure.

  3. 00:25:763 (3,4) - I'd suggest you turn these into a slider instead to follow the song better. By mapping all the sounds as circles you're suggesting that the sounds are all monotone and with constant intervals, which the prominent melody does not suggest. I'm fine with you mapping circles wherever the main melody is idle with an already emphasized long note, but for stronger sounds I think you should try to emphasize it through a slightly different rhythm choice, preferably a slider of some kind.
    ^ 00:31:410 (3,4) -
    ^ 00:32:469 (1,2) - etc. I think you get what I'm trying to say. Make the sounds stand out using your rhythm.

    The more the player has to click, the stronger the effect is when the player doesn't have to click as much in comparison, visa versa. This is known as emphasis through rhythm, and it's extremely useful in higher difficulties. You can both use this to make things easier as well as harder while following the song well.

    You could, for example, make 00:13:763 (4) - into two circles instead in order to emphasize 00:14:116 (1) - . Same goes for 00:15:175 (6) - into 00:15:528 (1) - , just remember not to spam the same notes too much. At 00:14:469 - you'd want to make some of these into a slider where it fits, 00:14:469 (2,3) - for instance. This way things won't get too repetitive for the player and things can stay varied. Well, you can play around with it a bit.

    _Yiiiii wrote:

    Well, you have a point, but I agree with the saying "make objective sense, and not make your sense." Adding some sliders here is good for playing but it is a subjective advice, it can't beat objective reasons in any situation.
    Sure, you can do it however you want, but keep in mind that nothing is actually objective. What you think is objective is still subjective to you.


  4. 00:58:058 (2,1) - The spacing between these notes makes it look like you're following DS and that it's a 1/2 gap, but it's actually an anti-jump. Try moving it even closer, kind of like this. This is recognizable as an anti-jump and players of this skill level should be able to read it better. You might have to move around some patterns though.
    ^ 00:59:822 (3,1) - continue doing this for all of these for consistency, just space them close so they overlap, but don't stack.

  5. 01:13:763 (2,4) - This overlap doesn't look very intentional. Generally you'd want to keep your overlapping consistent and aesthetic, but this is neither. Try moving (4) further up to avoid them from touching.

  6. 01:31:763 (1) - Placing your last note this far away from a really fast repeat is probably not a good idea. Especially since it's going in the opposite direction of where the repeat ends. Try moving it further down and to the left.

  • Hitsounds
  1. 00:02:822 - 00:08:469 - In my opinion these could use whistles as well, since they're relatively strong beats in the melody.

  2. 00:07:763 - Why is there a whistle here but not at 00:02:116 - ? Your hitsounding is supposed to be fundamentally consistent and reflect as well as complement the song well. It wouldn't make sense to add a hitsound somewhere, and not do the same on a part where everything sounds the same as the first part.

  3. 00:09:881 (1) - Not sure a drum like that fits on these. I'd have replaced them with whistles, or at the very least added whistles to them as well.

  4. 00:23:999 - You've got the right thought, but claps and whistles are currently mixed up. Generally you'd want your claps and snares on offbeats, 00:24:352 - 00:25:058 - these parts of the measure. You'll notice the song has high-pitched sounds on those as well. Currently you seem to be using your whistles as snares, and it might work, but it sounds a bit strange in my opinion.
    ^ 01:09:175 - 01:20:469 - If you apply that, do it here as well.

  5. Your whistles sound a bit off either way, try replacing them with a custom drum-kick hitsound. Find a drum hitsound pack and look for something you think will fit, then just rename it to normal-hitwhistle.wav and change your sampleset to a custom one on your timing sections for said parts.

  6. 00:23:999 - Add finish
    ^ 00:34:587 -
    ^ 00:35:293 -
    ^ 00:45:881 -
    ^ 00:57:881 -
    ^ 01:09:175 -
    ^ 01:19:763 -
    ^ 01:20:469 -

  7. 00:45:881 - For this part, try changing to the soft sampleset and removing the clap and whistle, since the beat has stopped here.
    ^ 01:31:058 - Beat has also stopped here, you can keep the whistles though. Then for 01:31:763 - change the addition back to the normal sampleset for the finish.

Good luck!
_handholding

Another
  1. 00:02:646 - Why not map this note? It's part of the main melody and you also mapped a similar note at 00:05:469 (3) -
  2. 00:11:116 (1) - The deletion of this note would play much better trust me, it would be a lot more comfortable for the player and you really only need 00:11:293 (2) for the drum beat
  3. 00:18:175 (5) - how about placing this further down to create a bit more spacing between (5) and (1). Something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280263
  4. 00:20:116 (2,3,5,6) - I think stacking these is a very bad idea as it changes the flow a lot and it makes it feel like a different melody from the earlier parts; and it's not. Another reason to not stack them is because of how the notes are a different pitch so it just doesn't feel right
  5. 00:22:410 (1) - same as 00:11:116 (1)
  6. 00:26:469 (3,4) - pattern change suggestion, for better flow onto 00:26:822 (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280285
  7. 00:32:293 (4,1) - ok the flow here is really harsh. From (4) to (1) you really want to be going up instead of down
  8. 00:33:881 (1,2,3,4) - I know it doesn't seem like a big deal but I really don't think it makes much sense to use squares here when you didn't use them anywhere else for the same melody, it comes off as random
  9. 00:34:587 (1,2,3,4) - soft sampleset would sound nice here
  10. 00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  11. 00:44:646 (2,3,4,1) - it feels like you randomly placed these here as there is no real structure and the flow is severely lacking, especially between (4) and (1)
  12. 00:45:175 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is really hard and comes out of nowhere ><
  13. 00:52:940 (1) - hard to read
  14. 01:03:528 (1) - imho you're better off deleting this spinner and mapping the notes on the white ticks espcially because you went on to map 01:06:352 (1,2) which is part of the same melody
  15. 01:07:763 (1,2) - shortening these to the blue tick which reduce the chances of someone getting an annoying slider break
  16. 01:08:469 (3) - NC for consistency
  17. 01:13:763 (2,4) - the slight overlap doesn't look so pretty, move (4) up a bit
  18. 01:31:058 (1,2) - same as 01:07:763 (1,2) . Also a soft sampleset would be better imo.
  19. 01:31:763 (1) - soft finish would be better than a drum finish for the drum cymbal imo.
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Why isn't this map in pending, all the diffs are finished right? GL!
_Yiiiii
:x

Naxess wrote:

From stalking queues
You wanted the another modded.

General


  1. You must add your GDers to your tags. Add _Yiiiii and _Stan to the tags.

    Ranking Criteria - Metadata wrote:

    The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.

  2. You don't need DJ Fish, Stardust or OMFG in the tags, since they're already provided by creator, title and artist respectively. Consider removing them.

  3. Add Alex Savage to the tags, it's the composer. Refer to the official website, or the official youtube video.

  4. The ending is quite sudden, perhaps you could gradually fade your mp3 from where you stop mapping to solve this.
It is creator's work↑

iiiii's Another



  • Hit Objects
  1. 00:02:646 - You don't have anything here, but you do at 00:05:469 (3) - and 00:08:293 - . Try keeping the coverage of sounds consistent if possible. This could be done easily by just adding another circle in between like this, or changing the rhythm a bit like this. Fixed

  2. 00:15:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps you could swap this measure's rhythm for the one on 00:16:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead. This way you won't have two same rhythms consecutively, as seen when comparing it to the previous measure. Fixed

  3. 00:25:763 (3,4) - I'd suggest you turn these into a slider instead to follow the song better. By mapping all the sounds as circles you're suggesting that the sounds are all monotone and with constant intervals, which the prominent melody does not suggest. I'm fine with you mapping circles wherever the main melody is idle with an already emphasized long note, but for stronger sounds I think you should try to emphasize it through a slightly different rhythm choice, preferably a slider of some kind. I don't think it is a good idea here because sliders bring players a sense of relaxing, unless I increase the SV of the slider, but it may be an issue.
    ^ 00:31:410 (3,4) -
    ^ 00:32:469 (1,2) - etc. I think you get what I'm trying to say. Make the sounds stand out using your rhythm. I have changed flows carefully so it actually isn't that boring to play.

    The more the player has to click, the stronger the effect is when the player doesn't have to click as much in comparison, visa versa. This is known as emphasis through rhythm, and it's extremely useful in higher difficulties. You can both use this to make things easier as well as harder while following the song well.

    You could, for example, make 00:13:763 (4) - into two circles instead in order to emphasize 00:14:116 (1) - . Same goes for 00:15:175 (6) - into 00:15:528 (1) - , just remember not to spam the same notes too much. At 00:14:469 - you'd want to make some of these into a slider where it fits, 00:14:469 (2,3) - for instance. This way things won't get too repetitive for the player and things can stay varied. Well, you can play around with it a bit. But players will confuse because the track I followed doesn't tell that there should be two circlesFixed last example.

    _Yiiiii wrote:

    Well, you have a point, but I agree with the saying "make objective sense, and not make your sense." Adding some sliders here is good for playing but it is a subjective advice, it can't beat objective reasons in any situation.
    Sure, you can do it however you want, but keep in mind that nothing is actually objective. What you think is objective is still subjective to you.
    Logic don't agree with your saying because something has become a fact.

  4. 00:58:058 (2,1) - The spacing between these notes makes it look like you're following DS and that it's a 1/2 gap, but it's actually an anti-jump. Try moving it even closer, kind of like this. This is recognizable as an anti-jump and players of this skill level should be able to read it better. You might have to move around some patterns though. Good idea.
    ^ 00:59:822 (3,1) - continue doing this for all of these for consistency, just space them close so they overlap, but don't stack. OK,done

  5. 01:13:763 (2,4) - This overlap doesn't look very intentional. Generally you'd want to keep your overlapping consistent and aesthetic, but this is neither. Try moving (4) further up to avoid them from touching. Fixed, tho I don't mind

  6. 01:31:763 (1) - Placing your last note this far away from a really fast repeat is probably not a good idea. Especially since it's going in the opposite direction of where the repeat ends. Try moving it further down and to the left. There is a quite strong voice and I'v never broken the slider so this distance is OK

  • Hitsounds
  1. 00:02:822 - 00:08:469 - In my opinion these could use whistles as well, since they're relatively strong beats in the melody. You are right

  2. 00:07:763 - Why is there a whistle here but not at 00:02:116 - ? Your hitsounding is supposed to be fundamentally consistent and reflect as well as complement the song well. It wouldn't make sense to add a hitsound somewhere, and not do the same on a part where everything sounds the same as the first part. oops, that was by mistake

  3. 00:09:881 (1) - Not sure a drum like that fits on these. I'd have replaced them with whistles, or at the very least added whistles to them as well. Additions: Normal now

  4. 00:23:999 - You've got the right thought, but claps and whistles are currently mixed up. Generally you'd want your claps and snares on offbeats, 00:24:352 - 00:25:058 - these parts of the measure. You'll notice the song has high-pitched sounds on those as well. Currently you seem to be using your whistles as snares, and it might work, but it sounds a bit strange in my opinion.
    ^ 01:09:175 - 01:20:469 - If you apply that, do it here as well. I agree with you, they sound a bit strange, but since I can't get more type of hs, so the best solution to it is clap-whistle-clap-whistle..... I'll put some work on it later

  5. Your whistles sound a bit off either way, try replacing them with a custom drum-kick hitsound. Find a drum hitsound pack and look for something you think will fit, then just rename it to normal-hitwhistle.wav and change your sampleset to a custom one on your timing sections for said parts.

  6. 00:23:999 - Add finish
    ^ 00:34:587 -
    ^ 00:35:293 -
    ^ 00:45:881 -
    ^ 00:57:881 -
    ^ 01:09:175 -
    ^ 01:19:763 -
    ^ 01:20:469 -
    All added
  7. 00:45:881 - For this part, try changing to the soft sampleset and removing the clap and whistle, since the beat has stopped here. Fixed
    ^ 01:31:058 - Beat has also stopped here, you can keep the whistles though. Then for 01:31:763 - change the addition back to the normal sampleset for the finish. Fixed

Good luck!
Thanks for that long mod!

Kisses wrote:

Another
  1. 00:02:646 - Why not map this note? It's part of the main melody and you also mapped a similar note at 00:05:469 (3) -
  2. 00:11:116 (1) - The deletion of this note would play much better trust me, it would be a lot more comfortable for the player and you really only need 00:11:293 (2) for the drum beat Fixed
  3. 00:18:175 (5) - how about placing this further down to create a bit more spacing between (5) and (1). Something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280263
  4. 00:20:116 (2,3,5,6) - I think stacking these is a very bad idea as it changes the flow a lot and it makes it feel like a different melody from the earlier parts; and it's not. Another reason to not stack them is because of how the notes are a different pitch so it just doesn't feel right You are right
  5. 00:22:410 (1) - same as 00:11:116 (1) Fixed
  6. 00:26:469 (3,4) - pattern change suggestion, for better flow onto 00:26:822 (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6280285 No because I want 00:25:410 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:26:116 (1,2,3,4) - do different flow
  7. 00:32:293 (4,1) - ok the flow here is really harsh. From (4) to (1) you really want to be going up instead of down No, this wide angle is good 00:32:293 (4,1,2) -
  8. 00:33:881 (1,2,3,4) - I know it doesn't seem like a big deal but I really don't think it makes much sense to use squares here when you didn't use them anywhere else for the same melody, it comes off as random
  9. 00:34:587 (1,2,3,4) - soft sampleset would sound nice here Fixed
  10. 00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  11. 00:44:646 (2,3,4,1) - it feels like you randomly placed these here as there is no real structure and the flow is severely lacking, especially between (4) and (1) 00:44:469 (1,2,3,4) - is a group, and I need sth uncomfortable here
  12. 00:45:175 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is really hard and comes out of nowhere >< ^
  13. 00:52:940 (1) - hard to read That's up to you~
  14. 01:03:528 (1) - imho you're better off deleting this spinner and mapping the notes on the white ticks espcially because you went on to map 01:06:352 (1,2) which is part of the same melody I don't get your meaning :o
  15. 01:07:763 (1,2) - shortening these to the blue tick which reduce the chances of someone getting an annoying slider break Just let them do it
  16. 01:08:469 (3) - NC for consistency Fixed
  17. 01:13:763 (2,4) - the slight overlap doesn't look so pretty, move (4) up a bit
  18. 01:31:058 (1,2) - same as 01:07:763 (1,2) . Also a soft sampleset would be better imo.
  19. 01:31:763 (1) - soft finish would be better than a drum finish for the drum cymbal imo. Fixed
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Why isn't this map in pending, all the diffs are finished right? GL!
No reply=I said sth in Naxess's mod
Thanks for modding!

It took me an hour to reply to these two mod and fix them XD
Rushing for homework :o

Update
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Yoshimaro
PLACE HOLDER CUS LATE AS FUCK AND I FORGOT LOOOOOOOOOOL

im so sorry lmao i forgot :c

your offset should be 00:01:469 - , im assuming you changed audio files and never fixed offset

POST MOD EDIT: I REALIZED I WASNT CONSISTENT IN WHICH MODS I USED WITH THE TIMING FIX SO THE TIMES MIGHT BE A BIG OFF, BUT THE COMBO SHOULD CHANGE hi caps hello
stna's nrmoal
00:15:528 (1,2) - not symmetric (00:16:234 (2) - leaning a bit far down, just copy paste 00:15:528 (1) - )

other than that gj lo

hrad
00:24:056 (1) - this is the only 3/4 slider and it feels really out of place with the rest of the section,

00:36:586 (6) - you switched from the high pitch WEEEWEEEWEUUHWEUUUH thing to the scaling up melody element and didnt switch NC, also its a pretty awkward time to have a slider land on red tic

00:41:880 (4) - ^

01:14:174 - fill this because you filled it in instances like 01:15:586 - even though the synth noise thing cut out

01:31:115 (7) - NC

press ctrl+a... look how confined your mapping space is and how abused the right side of the screen is. not that this is particularly bad, but mapping space = expression space... and people could play this with 3/4 of a tablet lmao

isnane
00:16:940 - there is a note here, it's just in a very low key

00:27:087 (2) - remove

00:28:234 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this was cool, however you should really mute the slider ends because the way the current hitsounding is makes it feel like there is some emphasis on the 1/4 and 3/4 beat when there isn't for that element... also NC 00:28:940 (7) -

00:30:263 - if you're going to over map a tripple, this would be the place to do it and not 00:30:440 (4,5) -

00:32:116 (1) - fix stack

00:46:587 - should not be muted, clear emphasis with finish in the music

00:57:969 (1) - this will probably fix itself with the offset change, but if it doesnt, dont put that on blue

01:10:763 (2) - should be a 1/2 slider that repeats itself, not a 1/1 slider. there is emphasis on 01:10:940 - that is left out the way it is currently mapped

sections like 01:22:763 - to 01:23:293 - that occur throughout second kiai are very inconsistently mapped and its jarring to readjust to so many ways of mapping it. i suggest keep sections like this as 1/4 sliders like 01:23:293 - since thats how you introduce kiai. also, it just felt like it had the most personality as opposed to 01:22:763 (4,5) -

01:24:175 (3,4,5) - ^^^

01:24:705 - this is a heavy on beat and needs to be filled

01:25:587 (1,2) - 1/4 sliders thing again

01:26:999 (3,4,5) - good

01:28:410 (1,2,3) - good

01:29:822 (1,2,3) - almost good but remember to be consistent with the rhythm, the aesthetic can be whatever you want since nothing in this mod is really about aesthetic like fixing blankets and stuff but keep the rhythm consistent. basically, its the same musical chunk repeated several times so being inconsistent is confusing

01:31:058 - i liked the slider in hard diff but i guess this overmap is acceptable

omit i's another for other mods c:

fresh song, i liked it
_Stan
sorry for late and here~

update
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35293
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:Stan's Normal
Source:
Tags:Stardust OMFG DJ Fish Star Dust
BeatmapID:1095572
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Kanye wrote:

[Stan's Normal]
(*) 01:26:822 (2) - Replace this with a copy of the (1) slider and just rotate it slightly instead? I think it's cool and not nesessary to change
All seems good other than that!thx so much !!

kanor wrote:

hi,从我的modding Q来><
[Normal]
01:06:352 (1,2) - 这里折返三次就够了,normal折返四次一是不好排,二是比较难 yes~
挺好的,整个set里最满意的diff,稍微修一下那几个红点滑条感觉差不多了
加油w 谢大佬

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

[Stan's Normal]
00:15:528 (1,2) - not symmetric (00:16:234 (2) - leaning a bit far down, just copy paste 00:15:528 (1) - ) fixed
other than that gj lothx so much !!
Chocobo
Hi~, from my queue;
Sorry a bit late, I can see a lot changes have been made after your previous post. But some problems still exist, except for my modding on diff Insane, I'll give some general advise about the map, hope it will help~
MODDING Insane
1. I think the song ends quiet abruptly, perhaps it is cut from a longer version, I think the edit can be better;
2. 00:25:293 (6,1,2,3) - Not a good flow;
3. 00:27:146 (2) - to be symmetrical with the precious section(00:24:321 - ), I suggest remove this;
4. 00:46:646 (7) - Finish hit-sound;
5. 01:00:234 (2,1) - Maybe change it to note+slider rather than slider+note;
6. 01:08:527 - If u want to emphasize this section, dont let here be empty~;
7. 01:12:410 - Here should be a slider;
8.01:12:939 - Three consecutive 1/2 notes here;
01:12:410 (3,4,5,6) - I changed like this: ;
9. 01:15:674 - I added a note here to emphasize kiai time, similar places like: 01:17:263 - 01:18:674 -
10. 01:23:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - unclean placement, try to separate them, or it will be hard to read;
11. 01:24:057 (2) - not necessary;
12. 01:24:057 (2) - missing note, followed slider should actually start at here;
13. 01:31:822 (1) - Finish hit-sound;

SUGGESTIONS
1. There are many places in this map where u placed notes but actually without a background sound, try to avoid this;
2. Respectively, try not to miss notes during ur mapping, eg: a slider not long enough to cover a drag sound;
3. Be consistent, songs like this usually have similar repeated sections, make the mapping of similar sections be the same. There is a trade-off between symmetric and diversity indeed XD~
Personally, I like this song. If the whole map set is done and looking for another modding, dont hesitate to pm , good luck~
Chibi Maruko
Hi. From my modding queue.

[general]
  1. Pls fix all at aimod except part timing

[hard]
  1. 00:20:527 (3,4) - Ctrl + G
  2. 00:24:057 (1) - Blanket slider
  3. 00:29:351 (5,6,1) - Stack pls
  4. 00:35:704 (3) - Normal or blanket slider bcs hard diff doesn't need wub slider especially dt player
  5. 01:04:998 (1,2) - Ctrl + G
  6. 01:14:351 (1) - Remove NC

[insane]
  1. 00:19:116 (3) - Change this slider to blanket bcs uncomfortable
  2. 00:19:645 (1) - Remove NC and move NC to note big white tick
  3. 00:39:233 (1) - ^
  4. 00:58:027 (1,2) - http://i.imgur.com/WnR5eRr.png
  5. 01:09:233 (1) - I prefer this slider z should change to blanket
  6. 01:14:880 (1) - ^
  7. 01:15:586 (3,4,5) - Please stack bcs feel unatural or delete the triple bcs no sound
  8. 01:21:586 (6) - The slider could move to x:276 y:256

Hope your map will rank. GL
SkinnyJommy
hngggggghhh
shizukanoto
[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]
dat difficulty name lol
  1. 00:14:174 (1,2,3,4) - too clumped up, fix spacing
  2. 00:16:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349934
  3. 00:25:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350046
  4. 00:28:468 (2) - move down to (288, 264) for consistent spacing
  5. 00:34:292 (3,4) - very strange sudden drop in volume
  6. 00:39:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350087 (note that 00:39:763 (2,6) are stacked)
  7. 00:42:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better
  8. 00:52:292 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349884
  9. 00:53:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349886
  10. 00:55:821 (3,4) - ctrl+g to match music
  11. 00:56:174 (5,6) - ^
  12. 00:57:586 (5) - move down to (384, 224) to match music
  13. 01:03:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this structure could look better
[iiiii's Another]
  1. why is the offset 1411 here? cannot mod until you fix timing
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:587 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too lazy
You need to work on jump patterns, and flow your map to represent the music better. I hope you take a few of my ideas and use them as inspiration for the rest of your maps. Good luck!
_Yiiiii
An update and the audio file is too big
Update
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:iiiii's Another
Source:
Tags:_Stan _Yiiiii Jommy _Vanity Star Dust
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_vanity

samcircus wrote:

[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]
  1. 00:25:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350046 Don't really find moving that all around very necessary, considering the spacing between jumps is consistent.
  2. 00:28:468 (2) - move down to (288, 264) for consistent spacing Clearly wasn't my intention, considering how I am providing appropriate emphasis.
  3. 00:34:292 (3,4) - very strange sudden drop in volume We're both working on hitsounding our difficulty.
  4. 00:52:292 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349884
  5. 00:53:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349886
  6. 00:55:821 (3,4) - ctrl+g to match music I can't really agree with you.
  7. 00:56:174 (5,6) - ^
  8. 00:57:586 (5) - move down to (384, 224) to match music I honestly don't see the point.
No change. Thanks for the mod. Jimmy will follow up with the updated difficulty.
ColdTooth
Hey there, from my queue.

[General]

Why does Stan's Normal have a different offset than the other 4 difficulties? It's off by 58.

[Stan's Normal]

Yeah, your offset is pretty off. I was able to hear it within the claps once I began playing it. Notes felt pretty late. It's currently 1411, and the other difficulties are at 1469.

Your hitsounds are pretty quiet. Consider bumping up that volume for a more meaningful tone!

I might come back later when this is fixed just to check this difficulty. Looks good, but I just wanted to double check later.

[Hard]

00:14:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole combo just felt a little bit confusing to look at. Might just be me. I would make 00:14:175 (1,2) - into a 1/2 slider, flows better imo.

00:16:293 (2) - Fix blanket.

00:19:822 (1,4) - While I am ok with this combo, these two aren't stacking right as much as 00:20:175 (2,3) - .

00:23:351 - Feels rather empty. If you were to put something here, you could move 00:22:999 (4) - to x128 y272 and make a slider at 00:23:351 - that blankets this note, would be an idea.

00:25:469 (5) - Should be a new combo here, while getting rid of the new combo at 00:25:822 (1) -

00:29:352 (5,6) - I generally dislike this part right here only because it can easily get confused as a triplet rather than two 1/2 notes. Consider making these spaced out.

00:31:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, although it's not that big of an issue.

00:32:175 (1) - Remove NC?

00:36:410 (5,6,1,2) - The flow here isn't as pretty for a hard difficulty, I think a slider could go at 00:36:763 - , and continue from there. Would flow much better

00:39:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not so sure about this one for the same issue as 00:29:352 (5,6) - , but it seems to flow a little better.

00:41:881 (1) - This slider would fit much better a half step back.

00:41:881 (1) - Also, combo consistency, a new combo should've been added at 00:42:410 (3) - .

00:42:234 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is flat out ugly in my honest opinion. The jump between 00:42:587 (4) - and 00:42:763 (5) - is rather too big for a hard difficulty.

01:00:763 (3) - NC for combo consistency.

01:04:999 (1,2,3,4) - I think a square like this would be better.

01:12:940 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Eh, the whole flow here kinda doesn't feel right for a hard difficulty.

01:26:175 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The problem with these two combos is the fact that 01:27:940 (2,3,4) - would've had a lot of potential if these weren't so smooshed up against one another. Kinda looks like a 1/4th, but it's 1/2nd, and that is pretty bleh. You could move 01:26:528 (2,3,4,5) - to the left, and give some space for 01:27:587 (1,2,3,4) - .

[Insane]

00:13:469 (2) - Blanket.

00:16:116 (1,2,3) - Move this to x20 y236. That way it won't look sloppy.

00:15:763 (2) - In my opinion, these sliders could fit better on the 2nd and 4th line of each measure.

00:31:116 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why use a lot of new combos here but not at 00:25:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ?

00:46:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I actually really don't know if this stuff is rankable. It's questionable, unless things have changed and I'm just an idiot.

01:08:175 (2) - ctrl + g for better flow

01:22:998 (5) - Missing a clap

[iiiii]s Another]

I couldn't find anything worth pointing out.

00:45:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe it's just me, but I think something like this could be a possiblity and this would be one too. Just a thought, nothing really to point out.

[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]

What a name.

00:23:351 (5,6) - A small suggestion, nothing really major. Maybe these two could be slower.

00:31:116 (1) - Blanket 00:30:586 (4) - better.

01:16:292 (1) - ctrl + g?

01:16:645 (2) - ^

01:16:998 (3,4) - ^?

01:19:468 (2) - ^

I didn't find much in this difficulty. Well done in my opinion.

Call me back via PM in game or on the forums and I'll check the Normal once it has the right offset.
_vanity

ColdTooth wrote:

[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]

00:31:116 (1) - Blanket 00:30:586 (4) - better. Adjusted.

01:16:292 (1) - ctrl + g?

01:16:645 (2) - ^

01:16:998 (3,4) - ^?

01:19:468 (2) - ^ I won't be changing any of these, considering they flow pretty well on their own. Sorry!
SkinnyJommy

samcircus wrote:

[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]
dat difficulty name lol
  1. 00:14:174 (1,2,3,4) - too clumped up, fix spacing uhh that seems perfectly fine to me!!!
  2. 00:16:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349934 i like my pattern better
  3. 00:25:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350046
  4. 00:28:468 (2) - move down to (288, 264) for consistent spacing
  5. 00:34:292 (3,4) - very strange sudden drop in volume fixed
  6. 00:39:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6350087 (note that 00:39:763 (2,6) are stacked) i think my pattern is fine the way it is
  7. 00:42:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this structure could look better its fine though
  8. 00:52:292 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349884
  9. 00:53:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349886
  10. 00:55:821 (3,4) - ctrl+g to match music
  11. 00:56:174 (5,6) - ^
  12. 00:57:586 (5) - move down to (384, 224) to match music
  13. 01:03:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this structure could look better

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey there, from my queue.

[_vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!!]

What a name.

00:23:351 (5,6) - A small suggestion, nothing really major. Maybe these two could be slower. good eye! i made them slower

00:31:116 (1) - Blanket 00:30:586 (4) - better.

01:16:292 (1) - ctrl + g?

01:16:645 (2) - ^

01:16:998 (3,4) - ^?

01:19:468 (2) - ^

I didn't find much in this difficulty. Well done in my opinion.

Call me back via PM in game or on the forums and I'll check the Normal once it has the right offset.
ty for the mods my good lads, i love you all

here's the .osu
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_Stan
[Stan's Normal]

Yeah, your offset is pretty off. I was able to hear it within the claps once I began playing it. Notes felt pretty late. It's currently 1411, and the other difficulties are at 1469.

Your hitsounds are pretty quiet. Consider bumping up that volume for a more meaningful tone!

I might come back later when this is fixed just to check this difficulty. Looks good, but I just wanted to double check later.
THANK YOU SO MUCH ! and I'll so glad if you double check. You nice~ :)

Stan's Normal (fixed)
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:Stan's Normal
Source:
Tags:_Stan _Yiiiii SkinnyJommy _Vanity Star Dust
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Zonthem
Hi ! From my modding queue :

[general]
I think combo colours are too dark, they are not easily visible even if we put bg opacity to 100%

[insane]
00:12:763(1, 2) : fix blanket
00:15:586(1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4) : this part is really hard to read, i will assume this is the goal of the map^^
00:22:645(2) : unsnapped
00:37:468(2, 3) : Ctrl+G for smoother play ?
01:00:763 : it misses a note there, even if it's to increase the difficulty of reading
01:02:174 : same, but this one is quite less important imo
01:24:763 : ^
01:28:998 : ^
01:30:410 : ^

[i's another]
00:01:821(2) : too curvy imo, why not shape it like 00:04:645(2) ?

[mega jump machine]
How2Jump : i cant find anything wrong in this map ^^

I'm not found of these short maps, but this one is really really cool^^
Well, @+
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

Nherantelon wrote:

Hi ! From my modding queue :

[general]
I think combo colours are too dark, they are not easily visible even if we put bg opacity to 100%

[insane]
00:12:763(1, 2) : fix blanket
00:15:586(1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4) : this part is really hard to read, i will assume this is the goal of the map^^
00:22:645(2) : unsnapped
00:37:468(2, 3) : Ctrl+G for smoother play ?
01:00:763 : it misses a note there, even if it's to increase the difficulty of reading
01:02:174 : same, but this one is quite less important imo
01:24:763 : ^
01:28:998 : ^
01:30:410 : ^

[i's another]
00:01:821(2) : too curvy imo, why not shape it like 00:04:645(2) ?

[mega jump machine]
How2Jump : i cant find anything wrong in this map ^^

I'm not found of these short maps, but this one is really really cool^^
Well, @+
Thanks for the mod!
Mentai
from my queue

[iiii's another]

00:15:939 (2,4) - seems odd that you would do this overlap rather than reusing the previous slider head as you do a lot

00:35:351 (1) - i really don't think starting here a 1/2 circle spam is a very good idea, there really isn't a purpose in the song to deviate from the structure you were mapping before. seems very Fycho-esque to just spam circles and hope for the best

if you insist on keeping it, i guess i'll mod what you have, but i've seen a bunch of maps disqualified for this

00:34:998 (3,1) - odd overlap, i would just stack and push the ladder combo out more

00:39:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think it's just to obvious that you had two separate patterns in mind rather than a larger structural goal, could you make this flow into each a little better?

00:42:057 (1,2,1) - these wide angle patterns happen a lot here, which seems like you're emphasizing things pattern by pattern. seems odd to emphasize the start of every pattern but not do it here 00:39:233 (1,2,1), where it is a much sharper angle. i would just make it consistent

00:52:292 (1) - again, i think you have too many circles here. the stronger 1/2 obviously comes in at beat 3 of every measure, so i would do circle jumps there. so the structure would be something like this https://puu.sh/rVM6y.jpg

and so on and so forth

00:55:116 (1,2,3,4) - like this combo has obviously less emphasis than this one because of the pitches than this one 00:55:821 (1,2,3,4), yet its ds is much bigger. i just don't understand

00:57:939 (1,2,3,4) - why is this combo the way it is, where these 2 here are 00:59:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) different, and then the last one is also different than all of them? 01:02:174 (1,2,3) . QATs have often pinted these things out, so i would use 2 patterns instead of 3 maybe? I also removed every other NC because they were redundant and didn't do anything for readability or for the phrasing of the map

01:20:527 (1) - now this kiai is only 1/2 slider spams. idk what to tell you, its consistent, but it is very boring, especially considering there are literally like no ds changes. its just the same thing over and over till the song is over, and i think it could be improved

if you need a mod on the top difficulty, call me back. i spent a good amount of time on this mod and i really do not like the song too much lol
Shunao
Hi!
NM from my Queue~



  • [Stan's Normal]
  1. 00:32:174 (5,1) - I like this moment but why you don't have make the same thing here? 00:33:586 (3,4) - For a better consistence
  2. 00:44:880 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:21:939 (4,5) - This is not really symmetric
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:22:998 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket
  2. 00:32:175 (7) - New Combo
  3. 00:42:410 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is weird i think and the notes are a placing weird too so try this,the DS is 1.10
  4. 00:57:940 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why it's not aligned? It could make a good flow, I find. And it's not consistent the spacing between (Can be that it's made for?)
That's all, nice map!

GOOD LUCK!
_Stan
  • [Stan's Normal]
  1. 00:32:174 (5,1) - I like this moment but why you don't have make the same thing here? 00:33:586 (3,4) - For a better consistence | Actuallt, these two parts are not same
  2. 00:44:880 (3,4) - ^ | ^
  3. 01:21:939 (4,5) - This is not really symmetric | Fixed
Thank you for the mod !
_Yiiiii

ColdTooth wrote:

[iiiii]s Another]

I couldn't find anything worth pointing out. Great idea

00:45:233 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe it's just me, but I think something like this could be a possiblity and this would be one too. Just a thought, nothing really to point out.

Mentai wrote:

from my queue

[iiii's another]

00:15:939 (2,4) - seems odd that you would do this overlap rather than reusing the previous slider head as you do a lot Ok, killed the overlap

00:35:351 (1) - i really don't think starting here a 1/2 circle spam is a very good idea, there really isn't a purpose in the song to deviate from the structure you were mapping before. seems very Fycho-esque to just spam circles and hope for the best Sorry but I couldn't map some other thing with this repeating song. I'v thought for a long time before I set those circles and circle spam was the best choice fore me :(

if you insist on keeping it, i guess i'll mod what you have, but i've seen a bunch of maps disqualified for this

00:34:998 (3,1) - odd overlap, i would just stack and push the ladder combo out more Fixed

00:39:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think it's just to obvious that you had two separate patterns in mind rather than a larger structural goal, could you make this flow into each a little better? Fixed

00:42:057 (1,2,1) - these wide angle patterns happen a lot here, which seems like you're emphasizing things pattern by pattern. seems odd to emphasize the start of every pattern but not do it here 00:39:233 (1,2,1), where it is a much sharper angle. i would just make it consistent Fixed and made some stack

00:52:292 (1) - again, i think you have too many circles here. the stronger 1/2 obviously comes in at beat 3 of every measure, so i would do circle jumps there. so the structure would be something like this https://puu.sh/rVM6y.jpg Added sliders

and so on and so forth

00:55:116 (1,2,3,4) - like this combo has obviously less emphasis than this one because of the pitches than this one 00:55:821 (1,2,3,4), yet its ds is much bigger. i just don't understand ^

00:57:939 (1,2,3,4) - why is this combo the way it is, where these 2 here are 00:59:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) different, and then the last one is also different than all of them? 01:02:174 (1,2,3) . QATs have often pinted these things out, so i would use 2 patterns instead of 3 maybe? I also removed every other NC because they were redundant and didn't do anything for readability or for the phrasing of the map Fixed patterns but NC are kept, they do nothing but I need them when changing DS

01:20:527 (1) - now this kiai is only 1/2 slider spams. idk what to tell you, its consistent, but it is very boring, especially considering there are literally like no ds changes. its just the same thing over and over till the song is over, and i think it could be improved Replaced some sliders with circles

if you need a mod on the top difficulty, call me back. i spent a good amount of time on this mod and i really do not like the song too much lol
Thanks for modding!

Update
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
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[Metadata]
Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:iiiii's Another
Source:
Tags:_Stan _Yiiiii Jommy _Vanity Star Dust
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Vovan
M4M from my queue (I mod first)

In reply of my mod, you can choose one of these maps
Inside
Map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479701
Name : Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Artist : Yall ft. Gabriella Richardson
Length : 1:29 (1:25 drain) [This is a cut ver]
Diffs to mod : nyu's Farewell in priority
Special things : I love this map :p

Map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/526952
Name : Astronomia (Laeko Cover)
Artist : Tony Igy
Length : 1:10 [This is a cut ver]
Diffs to mod : No priority for now
Special things : I made this mapset in 2 days.

That is your 1st mapset, so I'll give you a tip :
- To help yourself with fixing blankets, you can be helped by the approach circles
- Try to keep diversity in your diffs, never use the same patterns too much times.
- Never use a pattern when the combo change (there is some exceptions)

I don't say that because your diffs haven't diversity etc..., it's just a tip ;)

~~ So, let my mod begin ! ~~


[
Stan's Normal
]

  1. 00:22:645 (3,4,5) - Make them in front of (2) for a better linear flow
  2. 00:27:586 (3,4) - Fix blanket
  3. 00:40:998 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do a blanket who is better than this actual flow
  4. 00:46:645 (6) - NC
  5. 01:14:880 (1,2,3) - A curve will look better than this random triangle
  6. 01:25:116 (4,1) - Make (1) in front of (4)
[
Hard
]

  1. 00:15:587 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:16:293 (2,3,4,5) - Why these stacks ? They aren't needed
  3. 00:18:410 (1,2) - Cool pattern but can be better if this can be a double blanket
  4. 00:22:999 (4,5) - Fix blanket
  5. 00:24:763 (3,4,1) - Move that pattern due to the changing combo.
  6. 00:26:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You can mix circles and slider together, you know ? =p
  7. 00:33:940 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  8. 00:39:234 (4,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Bad overlaps
  9. 01:12:057 (4) - Use this slider for a blanket, it will create a better flow
  10. 01:29:527 (3,4) - Fix blanket
Good set for a first one ! I'm pretty sure you can rank it !
I hope my mod help you !
Good luck for the next !
_Stan

Lexis wrote:

Stan's Normal


  1. 00:22:645 (3,4,5) - Make them in front of (2) for a better linear flow | absolutely right
  2. 00:27:586 (3,4) - Fix blanket | ok
  3. 00:40:998 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do a blanket who is better than this actual flow | em, I wanna keep this
  4. 00:46:645 (6) - NC | done
  5. 01:14:880 (1,2,3) - A curve will look better than this random triangle | fixed
  6. 01:25:116 (4,1) - Make (1) in front of (4) | changed
thank you so much and helpful~

Here
Stan's Normal
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Hekireki
Hey, NM from my queue

[SupEr LoNg DIfF N4m3]

  1. Could add something in description to know who mapped what
  2. 00:15:586 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6470073 move 3 to x:9 y:64 for the consistent ds and so the pattern looks cleaner
  3. 00:26:704 (8,1) - The spacing here for the downbeat is kinda low, maybe try to move it a bit towards down left so it blankets with 00:26:174 (5) - instead and gets a stronger emphasis
  4. 00:53:527 (6) - The prev DS is inconsistent with 00:53:174 (4) - this one's, which makes me think you did both individually, instead of that copy paste 00:52:998 (3,4) - and ctrl h for the a e s t h e t i c s
    01:09:233 - Kinda weird that this part uses 1/2 sliders in majority compared to 00:24:057 - which are basically the same, try adding more circles in the second one for consistency
    01:20:527 (1,3) - I believe this is the only time in the map where back and forths are fully stacked, you could move 3 a bit so it only slightly overlaps
    01:21:410 (6,4) - Really not a fan of these, i get that you're following the wubs but having the white tick which is a lot stronger on the reverse arrow is kinda weird especially because of the snare, could be just 3 circles tbh

    Really clean and consistent, the jumps play well and are a lot of fun
[iiiii's Another]

  1. 00:01:469 (1,2,3,1) - Would look cleaner if the start of two and all 3 circles where on the same line of grid
  2. 00:12:586 - Finish the second spinner here to make it consistent with the first one
  3. 00:22:733 (1) - Not a fan of this one since there's really mappable sounds starting at 00:23:351 -
  4. 00:31:116 - 00:46:645 - This part plays well tbh it only bugs me a bit since highest diff uses a few sliders in this one too so for the sake of the spread i'd suggest to add some in places such as 00:34:645 (1,2,3,4) - because circles here kinda feel uncalled for to me
  5. 01:00:233 (1,1) - These two are strictly vertical and it would make more sense to me if you made 00:58:821 (1) - this one too and 01:03:057 (1) - this one horizontal since it's the same sound
  6. 01:03:586 (1) - Why the spinner here D: this part is kinda asking for jumps since it's a build up
  7. 01:10:116 (4,4,4,4,4,4,4) - Same comment as highest diff for these, to me the reverse slider here doesn't work well and 3 circles would be more than ok giving the nature of your map
  8. 01:29:351 (2,3,4) - The angle here is really wide compared to the structure of your map i'd suggest moving 01:29:704 (4,5) - toward bottom right a bit so it makes the angle sharper

    Same as highest diff, clean and consistent and fun jumps
Alright that'll be all from me, hope this helped

Good luck with ranking :)
_Yiiiii

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

[iiiii's Another]

  1. 00:01:469 (1,2,3,1) - Would look cleaner if the start of two and all 3 circles where on the same line of grid I prefer same DS
  2. 00:12:586 - Finish the second spinner here to make it consistent with the first one ok
  3. 00:22:733 (1) - Not a fan of this one since there's really mappable sounds starting at 00:23:351 - replaced the spinner with circles
  4. 00:31:116 - 00:46:645 - This part plays well tbh it only bugs me a bit since highest diff uses a few sliders in this one too so for the sake of the spread i'd suggest to add some in places such as 00:34:645 (1,2,3,4) - because circles here kinda feel uncalled for to me replaced those circles with sliders actually it was the highest diff XD
  5. 01:00:233 (1,1) - These two are strictly vertical and it would make more sense to me if you made 00:58:821 (1) - this one too and 01:03:057 (1) - this one horizontal since it's the same sound good idea
  6. 01:03:586 (1) - Why the spinner here D: this part is kinda asking for jumps since it's a build up the sound start at 01:03:586 attracts more attention, i'd rather keep the spinner
  7. 01:10:116 (4,4,4,4,4,4,4) - Same comment as highest diff for these, to me the reverse slider here doesn't work well and 3 circles would be more than ok giving the nature of your map this isn't a circle spam part, and there are 3 almost the same sound so i prefer reverse sliders
  8. 01:29:351 (2,3,4) - The angle here is really wide compared to the structure of your map i'd suggest moving 01:29:704 (4,5) - toward bottom right a bit so it makes the angle sharper fixed
Thanks for modding!

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_vanity

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

[SupEr LoNg DIfF N4m3]

  1. 00:26:704 (8,1) - The spacing here for the downbeat is kinda low, maybe try to move it a bit towards down left so it blankets with 00:26:174 (5) - instead and gets a stronger emphasis Adjusted.
  2. 00:53:527 (6) - The prev DS is inconsistent with 00:53:174 (4) - this one's, which makes me think you did both individually, instead of that copy paste 00:52:998 (3,4) - and ctrl h for the a e s t h e t i c s Good eye.
    01:09:233 - Kinda weird that this part uses 1/2 sliders in majority compared to 00:24:057 - which are basically the same, try adding more circles in the second one for consistency I can't really agree with you, considering how different this part of the song is from the chorus. The sliders used during this part are to emphasize those different sounds.
Thank you for the mod!
Update
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NM from q

[general]

Tags on iiiii's another are different

[hard]

00:33:234 (4,5,1) - try to fix the blankets on these

00:35:705 (3) - This doesn't really sound good because there's a sound in the middle of it and doesn't fit with the pattern for the rest of the kiai

00:44:528 (5) - NC?

01:25:646 (1) - remove NC

01:28:293 (3,4) - this stack is different from all the other stacks? maybe change it to the same (small suggestion)

01:31:116 (1) - you did repeat sliders in the last part, so either change this to repeat sliders or change the previous repeat sliders to a long slider

[insane]

00:28:999 (7) - NC maybe?

01:07:734 (4,1) - spacing is different

00:46:645 (7) - NC here because you did it at the end

01:11:352 (1) - don't think you need NC

That's it, cool mapset
gl! :)
iiBehe
Stan's Normal


1. Try making the Circle Size into 3.2

ok, Here is my Mod :)
00:32:527 (1) : try making it closer to the Slider?
01:27:586 (3,4) : try moving these Circles a bit up
01:31:116 (4,5) : same ^^
00:27:763 (4) : Same ^^


Hard


1. Try making the Circle Size into 3.6

Ok, Here is my Mod :*
00:19:116 (2) : Try moving it a little bit Up
00:39:586 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) : Try making this Circles into Streams...
00:44:881 (7,8) : split this circles apart from each other making it look like a Single-tap style
01:13:469 (6) : put this circle Beside the Slider, near from the 01:13:645 (1)... But not too close to it
01:14:174 (3) : Put this circle beside the Slider
01:18:587 (4) : Set this as a New Combo
01:21:587 (4,5) : put this circle's not too low from the slider 01:21:233, and not too near from this slider 01:21:940 (1)
01:22:645 (3,4) : Move them a bit up... move the slider 01:22:821 (4) horizontal...
01:27:234 (4,5) : move them a little bit down from the slider 01:27:587 (1) causing them to look alike a stream



Sorry for the not response, i admit... Im not that much fan of Modding, but i like Modding... :)
_Stan

SignOfAge wrote:

Stan's Normal


1. Try making the Circle Size into 3.2 | 3.5 is fine
ok, Here is my Mod :)
00:32:527 (1) : try making it closer to the Slider? | nope, it's same ds
01:27:586 (3,4) : try moving these Circles a bit up | nope, it's triangle
01:31:116 (4,5) : same ^^ | nope, it's pentagon
00:27:763 (4) : Same ^^ | ok
thank you ! :)
Worldwide
Another

In general, your notes only follow the rhythm of the beat. You could try and follow the melody instead in some parts to make it more interesting.

00:10:027 (1,1) - Spinners in the intro don't really make sense imo. One is probably okay if you really want to keep it, but you should get rid of one of the spinners.
00:35:351 - 00:45:763 (4) - The whole part here is jumps, with the same rhythm, you should change some parts with different rhythms, or add streams (but it's okay if you don't want stream map). The placing of the notes are okay but you should change the rhythm up.
01:03:586 (1) - Instead of the spinner before the notes, put the notes first and then the spinner. It makes more sense for the spinner to be at the drop.
The main advice I have is to make the note rhythms more interesting. It gets a little tedious after playing the same thing over and over again. For example, in the hardest jump diff, there are some variations in the note rhythm.
Arutsuki
hi nm from q

jump thing
00:19:468 (4,1) - 00:22:292 (4,5,1) - make these same as 00:13:821 (4,1) - consistency in patterns is nice sometimes
00:19:821 (1,2,3,4) - decrease spacing - I dont wanna point out all of them so just listen to the whole song and put higher spacing on higher sounds, lower it on low sounds
00:28:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part comes in weird and doesnt seem to fit in being the only in the song
00:40:998 (1) - no need for this to be extended, make it end on the red tick
01:20:527 (1,3) - only jumps in the song that overlap like this, thus not really predictable

another
00:35:351 - this whole jump section just feels too random, also too focused around one area, just highlight it all you'll see. try to spread them out more
01:07:733 (8,1) - this gap seems a lil too hard since it's 4* still
01:31:468 (2,1) - space these more

gl
_Yiiiii
Sorry for the delay :o

donkat wrote:

Another

In general, your notes only follow the rhythm of the beat. You could try and follow the melody instead in some parts to make it more interesting. There actually is relation notes and rhythm, just a bit and I don't want have more

00:10:027 (1,1) - Spinners in the intro don't really make sense imo. One is probably okay if you really want to keep it, but you should get rid of one of the spinners. replaced with sliders
00:35:351 - 00:45:763 (4) - The whole part here is jumps, with the same rhythm, you should change some parts with different rhythms, or add streams (but it's okay if you don't want stream map). The placing of the notes are okay but you should change the rhythm up. They are jumping with different patterns and I've no idea about more rhythm orz
01:03:586 (1) - Instead of the spinner before the notes, put the notes first and then the spinner. It makes more sense for the spinner to be at the drop. ok
The main advice I have is to make the note rhythms more interesting. It gets a little tedious after playing the same thing over and over again. For example, in the hardest jump diff, there are some variations in the note rhythm. The song made me crazy and I really don't know what to map with the repeating song like this XD so circles~

Arutsuki wrote:

another
00:35:351 - this whole jump section just feels too random, also too focused around one area, just highlight it all you'll see. try to spread them out more They are jumping in a certain rule and they actually filled a suitable part of the screen in my mind
01:07:733 (8,1) - this gap seems a lil too hard since it's 4* still moved it up a bit
01:31:468 (2,1) - space these more There is only a 1/8 beat gap and it is difficult enough now
Thanks guys for modding!

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