00:16:083 (1) - This slider is kinda weird to play. In my opinion, it sounds better if you end it on 00:17:006 -
00:18:083 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:237 (2,3,4) - Make sure that 00:32:391 (4) - is stacked on 00:31:622 (5) - for better flow
00:31:006 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:545 (3) - Sounds better if you remove it!
00:53:776 (2) - Awkward slider! It's starting on a less intense sound and ending on a strong sound. Sliders are always used to start in strong sounds and end on sounds of equal or relatively less strength. Change it to circles!
00:55:006 (1) - Same ^ but I think in this case it's acceptable. Only change it if you want.
00:56:545 (4) - ^
00:58:699 (2) - Remove NC
01:21:929 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:006 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:006 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:853 (1) - Remove NC
01:33:776 (2) - This back and forth slider is awkward and can misslead the player. Make it end here 01:34:083 - and add 2 circles or a slider!
01:35:160 (3) - Remove NC
01:37:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:37:929 (1) - Remove NC
01:38:237 (7) - Remove NC
01:39:622 (1) - This is optional but I'd remove this circle 01:39:929 (2) - and make the slider longer so it ends on the red tick. Sounds better to me
01:40:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:006 (1) - NC
01:41:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:083 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:237 (2) - NC
You get what I mean, you have some unecessary new combos. New combos are supposed to reflect patterns expressed in the song, such as bars of music and vocal/instrumental phrases. Take a look where you place new combos and fix it if you feel like it's wrong!
01:45:314 (2) - Remove NC. It would make more sense having a New Combo here if the slider velocity changed, but it's the same as 01:45:006 (1) -
01:47:929 (1) - This feels awkward. I'd remove it and replace it with something like 01:47:622 (1) - and a circle here 01:48:237 - or make this slider end on 01:47:776 - , copy it and paste on 01:47:929 - and add a circle on 01:48:237
01:49:776 (1) - Remove NC
01:53:160 (1) - Remove NC
01:54:545 (7,1) - Replace these two circles with a slider and create a NC on 01:54:545 -
01:55:468 (2) - Remove this! Sounds better!
01:59:776 (1) - Remove NC
02:00:083 (1,1,1,1) - Same combo on these!
02:00:699 (2) - NC
02:01:314 (1,1,1,1) - Same combo on these!
02:01:929 (2) - NC
02:02:545 (1,1,1,1) - Same
02:03:160 (2) - NC
02:05:622 (7) - NC
02:06:545 (1) - Remove NC
02:18:545 (1) - Remove NC
02:18:853 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:853 (4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped! If you delete these 02:40:929 (5,7,8) - and add a circle here 02:41:314 - it sounds better in my opinion!
02:47:314 (1) - Remove NC
03:02:699 (1) - Remove NC
03:03:776 (1) - Remove NC
03:47:929 (1) - Stack this on 03:47:468 (2) - for consistency!
03:48:545 (1) - Remove NC
03:48:853 (1) - Remove NC
03:49:006 (2) - NC
04:45:160 (2) - Adding a circle here sounds better!
04:45:468 (1) - Ending this slider here 04:46:237 - and adding a circle here 04:46:391 (2) - sounds better!
04:46:699 (1) - Ending this slider here 04:47:468 - and adding a circle here 04:47:622 (2) - sounds better!
04:47:929 - Adding a circle here works!
Need some NC work! Spacing seems random at some parts but this is a 6.66* map. As I mentioned above, you have unecessary new combos, but overall it's a fun map!