Eri Sasaki - Last Diary · forum

-Latias-

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-11-20T02:01:39+00:00

Xelasto wrote:
Let's Do This

Insane
00:00:876 (1) - This shape needs some cleaning up. cleaned
00:02:366 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The spacing is really odd here fixed
00:04:975 (3,4,1) - Put 1 in the middle of 3 and 4 if we're talking about where the slider is to circles, its already in the middle of 3 and 4. if we're talking about where they are on the timeline, i like my rhythm better
00:06:838 (1,2,3,4) - This formation is VERY hard to read. made triangle here
00:09:633 (2) - This also needs to be cleaned up i think its pretty good for the music. if another modder says anything about this, ill change
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think a stream is necessary i think its pretty good for the music. if another modder says anything about this, ill change
00:16:714 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Make the spacing even fixed
00:16:155 (2) - Too close to 1 fixed
00:21:745 (3) - Make this bend along with 1 this would be hard to manage with all the slider's around it. i think its being straight is ok
00:22:304 (4,6) - Stack? fixed
00:23:422 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing even fixed
00:24:726 (1) - Curve less to blanket better fixed
00:33:112 (1,2,3) - Even spacing fixed
00:33:671 (4,5,6,7) - ^ fixed
00:34:230 (5,6) - I don't suggest you overlap these. It kinda breaks the flow. triangle boys
00:36:652 (1) - Put this inbetween 6 and 7 if we're talking about where the slider is to circles, its already in the middle of 3 and 4. if we're talking about where they are on the timeline, i like my rhythm better
00:37:211 (1) - Make both ends curve a bit more. fixed
00:39:074 (5,6) - There are too many overlapping circles in this section. It makes the flow start, then stop. Start, then stop. fixed
00:43:174 (4,5,6,7) - There's no need for such a big jump at such a calm part. fixed
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that this could be replaced with a beautiful pattern. i tried my best to make beauty ;w;
00:49:323 (3) - Make this blanket 2 better fixed
00:50:254 (1,2,3) - Fix triangle fixed
00:55:099 (1,2) - Blanket? sure
01:00:316 (2) - This whistle hitsounds are offbeat. Move them to the white tick before them on the timeline. fixed
01:08:888 (5,6,7) - Spacing is uneven fixed
01:12:242 (1) - I suggest you go for a different shape. fixed
01:17:273 (3) - This should be divided into a note and slider so you can get the red tick in the middle. i think 1/1 slider fits better
01:20:441 (1) - No need for a new combo fixed
01:23:236 (2) - Same thing with last slider. Divide this one up so you can get the red tick. i think it would sound overmapped if i did this
01:25:844 (1,2) - Blanket fixed

Pretty good difficulty. It just needs some cleaning up of shapes and patterns. Also don't forget to fix some of the uneven spacing, as it sometimes can be confusing. Good luck on getting your map ranked!

Thanks !

Thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-11-20T05:51:17+00:00

Xelasto wrote:
Let's Do This

[Celsius' Hard]
00:02:925 - Add a beat? no want to focus only dominant piano
00:05:348 (1) - I feel like the jump is unnecessary jumps for emphasis
00:06:838 (1,2) - Make these the shapes symmetrical or parallel k
00:07:956 (4) - I'm pretty sure this is a "Do-not-do" for hard modes. no 1/4 like this is fine
00:09:633 - I don't know about you but I think this is a bit of a jump in difficulty from normal. i think it pretty common to have jumps like this in hard , we take intensity into account more when we consider about the gap from normal to hard
00:13:546 (4,5) - Fix this blanket not intended
00:14:851 (2,4) - Overlap? no
00:17:087 (1) - I think this jump is also a bit unnecessary for emphasis
00:23:049 (1,2,3) - Make these parallel? it is
00:23:795 (3,1) - Blanket? k
00:28:826 (4) - This slider feels out of place why?
00:41:124 (1,2) - Please no overlap why?
00:55:658 (5,6,1) - The spacing on these is uneven jumps for emphasis 6 which is emphasized beat
00:57:335 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle with these tried
00:59:757 (1) - No New combo big sv change
00:59:385 (1,1) - Make parallel? ye
01:04:789 (1) - Move this more to the bottom right to make a plus formation with 01:04:230 (3,4,5). Just thought it would look cooler. that make thing overlap a lots , i don't want overlap
01:05:348 (2,3) - I think these would look good if they blanketed eachother don't care about blanket much here cus it might looks weird
01:06:838 (2) - To me this slider jutting out kinda ruins the flow. again , why? uhh if you try to mention something subjective you need a bit of reason too
01:07:584 (4,1) - Please no overlap ^ try to make sure you include a reason of why that thing is not good for you
01:12:242 (1,2) - Easy opportunity for a blanket i don't want blanket
01:16:714 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle? just keep current triangle cus migh make the flow bad if i use perfect triangle
01:18:950 (2,1) - These aren't parallel intended
Overall great difficulty. Just a lot of missed opportunity for cool formations.

make sure to consider some mapper intention and add a bit of reasons if you don't agree with it
just something to say to help you improve modding skill

thanks anyway

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Nowaie

1,021 posts

Joined December 2014

Nowaie 2016-11-20T14:04:10+00:00

NM from #modreqs

Consider cutting the mp3 song file from the end because there is a long unused space there ( 01:36:652 - to 01:47:232 - )

I'm sorry if i sound harsh but i want to keep it real and point out the things that could imo be better

Lefia's Easy

Check the spacing issues noted out by aimod and decide are they valid

Btw can i ask are you ded? I haven't seen you responding to any of the mods in the thread. If you see this could you please respond to this one atleast? It helps me improve as a modder

00:03:857 - Imo there is a clear beat circulation so NCing the slider here would not be a bad idea at all

00:08:329 (3,4) - Fix blanket x3

00:16:714 (2,3,4) - IMO this pattern could be placed so it would be bit easier to read for newer players. So what do you think about something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6610161 ? It would fix the problem mainly standing out for me which is that the 3 is placed so 4's body is too close to it

00:20:254 (3) - This is just too curved to be a blanket with this one 00:21:000 (4) - this shows when the head and the tail are closer to the object that is supposed to be blanketed than the midpoint of the slider. If you intended to blanket those it should look something like this 00:21:000 (4,1) -

01:05:348 (3) - This slider does not share any kind of flow with the slider before it thus making it really random looking and not relevant to the combo it should belong in. Atleast replacing and maybe overhauling the shape is pretty much needed imo to make it work

01:16:155 (2,4) - Excessive stack. This is an easy (and the lowest) difficulty and usually this kind of visible stacking is theoretically prohibited because they may give a hard time to beginners to read. Quoted from the wiki "Overall, you want to achieve the highest possible readability while keeping the balance between too boring and too complex beat patterns."

01:22:677 (3) - This kinda lacks flow when compared to the objects before it. My suggestion would be somewhat like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6610769 (pretty much just making the slider less curved and replacing it so it flows circulary with the 2). It creates a nice circular/waveish flow from the slidertail of 1 to the slidertail of 3

01:23:608 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is too low for an easy difficulty (should be a measure or over) and the way it's currently done is unrankable Read more about this

01:29:571 (2,3,4) - Flow issues. First of all the 3 is placed so it pretty much has no flow or relation to the 2. You should be able to fix that by yourself because according to your play history you do have a ranked GD. Another thing is that 3 and 4 don't share flow either because both of the sliders are too curved thus creating two random bulges insted of a nice circular flow like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6610851

Shogun's Normal

Yo shogun, i'll finish the GD asap xd

First of all you could increase the AR to like 5 because the hop from 4 to 7,5 is quite big (normal -> hard)

00:02:366 (1) - I mean it wouldn't hurt to move this little bit downwards and to the left (roughly x194|y276 so the 2|3|sliderhead1 would form a 90 degree angle) also this would improve the circular flow over these 00:01:994 (3,1) - objects

00:09:633 (4) - Ever though about NCing this? It theoretically starts the next section so it's like the "important" note. Also speaking about that slider 00:09:633 (4,5) - the flow between these is kinda dull imo. My suggestion to improve the flow would be to curve the 5 and move it so it'd look somewhat like this http://puu.sh/snYaR/9f070ad866.jpg

00:15:782 (6) - Imo it would work better if this was CTRL H'd on it's place. Or atleast it would make it little bit more interesting and atleast to me visually pleasing

00:17:832 (3) - Few suggestion to this slider. Remove the finish from the midpoint because it doesn't really have a reason to be there and add it to the head of the slider because there is a clear cymbal hit in the song. Secondly remove the reverse from it and add a hitcircle with a NC here 00:18:577 - . This imo represents the melody little bit better than it's currently

00:19:137 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Even though you would add a NC to where i told you above ^ this combo is really long for a normal, consider cutting it somewhere

00:24:726 (1) - Imo the second half of the S slider is bit more curved than the other one. To fix this you can move the higher follow point that are forming the S shape down by 1 to 1.5 (small) grids. This imo atleast makes it look better and more even

00:39:074 (1,2) - Can you like open little bit the fact that you have NCd the 1 to me so i'd understand your logic behind it? I can't really see a reason why it's like so because there are no beat circulations, no SV multiplier changes and no patterns that need clarification. I'd deem the following slider much more worthy of a NC (beat circulation) and most likely you would too as you already have a "finish" on the head of it

00:50:068 (4,5) - Purely opinion based but it would look better if the 4 would be curved like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611108 (or it would look more interesting atleast)

01:05:720 (6,7,1) - You should improve the circular flow here because right now 6, 7 and the sliderhead are forming the first part but the body of the slider instead of following the flow, forms an additional and random bulge into the flow. Imo optimally it would look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611134

01:22:677 (4,1) - This is an excessive overlap which just does not look good because it makes pretty much anyone feel that it's mapped really tightly. This would be something i'd strongly recommend to fix. Though this overlap 01:23:795 (6,1) - is fine (my point of view when compared Xelasto's)

01:25:844 (3) - NC this because it starts the final calm section

Celsius' Hard

00:00:876 (1,2,3) - The placement of 3 when compared to the shape of it seems rather weird and imo unappealing. As you are technically creating an obtuse angle ( http://puu.sh/so0Zh/9e6c549f74.png ) which kinda causes the weird look of the pattern overall. My suggestion would be to move the 3 to create a sort of vertical wave effect on the pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611281

00:02:925 - I know you already denied the idea of adding a hitcircle here but it begin not mapped under something kinda stands out atleast for me. My suggestion would be to lengthen this slider 00:02:366 (1) - by 2 ticks so the tail would cover up the less prominent sound and making it less prioritized than the dominant piano you seem to want to focus on but still covered. Also imo this 00:02:739 - piano note would be prioritized lower than the other one right after it

00:27:708 (1) - Did you place this intentionally like so? My vision for the pattern would be that 00:26:776 (2,3,4,1) - Slidertail2|hitcircle3|hitcircle4|sliderhead1 forms a sort of square pattern and for that the 1 is little bit off. If you want to make something like this happen the optimal coords for the slider would be x419|y143. Though if it's intentionally placed like it's currently it should be fine

01:06:838 (2) - Maybe you have some intentions i'm not noticing so please correct me if needed. So the thing that imo has the issue is the shape and angle of 2 when compared to the 3. It just doesn't look good for me or atleast it looks like you could've done something much better looking there. I'd personally do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6614594 as it would improve it visually by making it look much more loose and easy going. Also the flow from the tail of 2 to the 3 would make more sense (Utilizing both circular flow and snapped flow by creating this kind of a "bounce")

Great diff though

Insane

There are alot of spacing and pattern issues, i'd recommed somewhat overhauling the difficulty as it technically is holding down the other set. Also reading through this and this before doing so would be a good idea. Fxed DS (And sticking with it) could improve the mapping so you wouldn't have to worry about the spacing looking just... random, dull and unappealing like it's currently

Important : Just so you know i haven't pointed out every issue because it would just take too much time to write them down and the issues would be similiar to each other all the time

00:02:366 (1) - Oh come on. The S shape here just feels halfway done ;^; this is mostly because the first curve is there but the other part is non existant. Though you should be able to fix this by yourself. Also check the whole map for similiar stylish problems such as this one 00:03:857 (1) -

00:05:161 (4) - I don't see a reason to create this much emphasis for the little bit higher note here... Could you help me understand your intentions behind it or just fix the spacing to make sense? Also regarding Xelasto's mod the placement issue is in the body of the 1 which makes it look like it's not in the middle of the hitcircles

00:07:584 (5,6) - The way you have mapped this just makes me wonder how big of an opportunity to make a good pattern here you missed. 1. The pattern overall is quite hard to read because of the overlap under a slider body when the note is right after the slider and 2. there isn't really anything to justify that kind of a pattern

00:09:633 (2) - There are three main problems with this one. Firsly the smaller curve formed by the two first followpoints really falls short and really drops the quality for the slider, secondly the slidertail of 1 could be blanketed by the body of 2 one way or another thus making them really feel that they are "connected" and thirdly the followpoints are just a mess (you most likely know this by yourself). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6614816 something like this would work much better and it wouldn't create similiar issues i noted out for the current design

00:12:242 (1) - So why was this NCd again? It doesn't really have any factors imo to make it worthy of a NC (SV change, pattern clarification, beat circulation and so on) so could you help me understand the world little bit better by clarifying the reason for the NC?

00:12:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you decide to overhaul the diff this is stuff that you should avoid doing by few reasons

Spacing on slidertail1|2|3 is inequal and does not even look good
Here 00:13:360 (3,4) - the flow for the slider is next to non-existant and the placement just does not make sense to me
And lastly the flow from the slidertail4 to the 5 just does not work either

This is the stuff that really holds down the mapset because it just does not work. The sad part is that there are issues like this throughout the difficulty which just drops the level of quality by alot for the mapset overall

00:15:037 (1,1) - These should be blanketed atleast imo

00:16:900 (4,1) - 00:17:087 (1,2) - 00:17:646 (3,1) - You are using 1/1 spacing mixed with 1/2 spacing in a section that has similiar intensity throughout it and even in the same combo. Maybe it was to emphasize the major beat (which it most likely is made for) but it's still way too much or it's not represented so the players are ready for such of a change

00:18:205 (1,2) - 00:18:577 (2,3) - Here are similiar issues with the spacing as above but this time it's not even justified by emphasizing the other note because it does not have anything special on it

00:26:031 (3) - Then there are problems like these. No matter what you are following this 00:26:217 - point should have so much more emphasis than begin a midpoint of a slider. The sound is much more prominent than for example the head of the slider both rhythmically and vocally

00:28:826 (1,2,3) - One good example of abusing the DS because there is nothing that would really justify such a jump there

00:30:689 (7) - The piano notes crearly change here so why haven't you NCd here?

00:32:180 - This would be another good example of a note that should have much higher prioritization than it currently has because it's much more prominent vocally and rhythmically and so on

00:44:478 - I mean... this should not be left unmapped. It's a notable and improtant cymbal hit which doesn't have a reason to be left unmapped even though you would be following the vocals

00:49:695 - As you seem to follow the vocals for most of the time spaces like these should be mapped if there are for example drum hits because spaces like that are way too random and leave a feeling to the players that something was definently missing from there. Also on top of that the spacing choice here 00:49:323 (3,4) - is quite bad imo (again)

00:59:851 - Then why does the kiai even start from here? I'd see this 01:00:316 - as much better choice to start the kiai section from for example like in every other difficulty

01:03:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stuff like this is just really messy aswell because 1. some of the objects overlap with each other and 2. there isn't any kind of a clearly visible patterning going on anyway which just makes the whole pattern look undone. Also killing the movement by stacking the 8 with the 9 is kinda dull aswell. After all that on the similiar section about 10-15 seconds after it you are for some reason missing a note here 01:16:528 - even though you have mapped it in the other one. Both of these sections share the intensity and the beat pattern thus making the inconsistency unjustified

01:16:714 (1) - 01:17:459 - Another issue with inconsistency but it's little bit more visible this time. 01:16:714 (1) - Here you have mapped the cymbal hit correctly but you just leave it out here 01:17:459 - . Why?

01:19:509 (4,5,6,7,8) - Having notes constantly stacked on each other makes it look really dull and extremely hard to read unless it's in the right circumstances which this one is definitly not in. On top of that 001:18:950 (3,5) - Touchy touchy~

01:30:316 (4,5) - Apart from the messy patterning with irritatingly low DS you have chosen to use really high DS for these. Could i ask what makes that kind of patterning justified in this case?

in conclusion the mapping does not match the quality of the other set and for that reason need a complete overhaul. Also why haven't you responded to Kujinn even though you did respond to Xelasto? If you want to get this ranked you have to listen and communicate with the people aswell who may think that it's bad, you must be able to handle criticism instead of just swiping the facts/suggestions represented by others under the carpet

That's about it, good luck with the set

Last edited by Nowaie 2016-11-20T14:08:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Shunao

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Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-11-20T14:04:22+00:00

Xelasto wrote:
Let's Do This

Shogun's Normal
00:03:112 (2,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:08:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this is too many quick sliders I think it's good, I prefer keep this
00:27:708 (1,2) - Make these the same shape? I keep this because, I like this shape
00:32:180 (4,5) - The overlap on this is a bit too strong. I prefer keep this, because if I change this maybe the rythm could change.
00:39:633 (2) - This zig zag is uneven I reshaping it
00:48:577 (1,3) - Same shape? No thanks
00:56:590 (5) - Bend it more and put the bend more in the middle fixed
00:59:385 (5,6) - Why not replace these with a repeating slider? Because it's sound better with 1 note
01:01:435 (4) - It'd be much more preferable if you started a note or slider rather than ended one on a strong beat If I but a note on the white tick the rythm is weird..
01:10:751 (4) - This shape is too curvy Fixed
01:14:105 (1,2) - (This is just personal opinion but) I feel like this could be replaced with something a bit less....choppy, if you know what I mean. Yes but I prefer my version ^^
01:21:372 (2,3) - Make these the same shape? No thanks
01:22:677 (4,6,1) - Please don't overlap these. Why? It's sound good, I find

Very good normal mode. Not much to say. Thanks!

Thanks for mod!

Here~

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Artist:Eri Sasaki
ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
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Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-11-20T14:37:59+00:00

DTM9 Nowa wrote:
[centre]NM from #modreqs

[Celsius' Hard]
00:00:876 (1,2,3) - The placement of 3 when compared to the shape of it seems rather weird and imo unappealing. As you are technically creating an obtuse angle ( http://puu.sh/so0Zh/9e6c549f74.png ) which kinda causes the weird look of the pattern overall. My suggestion would be to move the 3 to create a sort of vertical wave effect on the pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611281 I kinda want to make flow to 3 to go down to emphasis 3 there cus the sound there sound like the start of the new thing , making them straight just make it feel too monotonous imo

00:02:925 - I know you already denied the idea of adding a hitcircle here but it begin not mapped under something kinda stands out atleast for me. My suggestion would be to lengthen this slider 00:02:366 (1) - by 2 ticks so the tail would cover up the less prominent sound and making it less prioritized than the dominant piano you seem to want to focus on but still covered. Also imo this 00:02:739 - piano note would be prioritized lower than the other one right after it the idea of this rhythm is to make sure polarity is at best and make sure to have player only to focus on the emphasized piano only 00:02:925 - isn't really emphasized for me so i ignore that , mapping it would ruin the polarity and make it play awkward too anyway it's my method to make sure that player can listen to the beat carefully and hit the notes in time

00:27:708 (1) - Did you place this intentionally like so? My vision for the pattern would be that 00:26:776 (2,3,4,1) - Slidertail2|hitcircle3|hitcircle4|sliderhead1 forms a sort of square pattern and for that the 1 is little bit off. If you want to make something like this happen the optimal coords for the slider would be x419|y143. Though if it's intentionally placed like it's currently it should be fine actually a rhombus lol i fixed it a bit

01:06:838 (2) - Maybe you have some intentions i'm not noticing so please correct me if needed. So the thing that imo has the issue is the shape and angle of 2 when compared to the 3. It just doesn't look good for me or atleast it looks like you could've done something much better looking there. I'd personally do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6614594 as it would improve it visually by making it look much more loose and easy going. Also the flow from the tail of 2 to the 3 would make more sense (Utilizing both circular flow and snapped flow by creating this kind of a "bounce") 2 is a copy of 1 , actually try to emphasis how the vocal pitch change here by changing the way of flow here and then continue with 3 there , your suggestion is good but the way flow from (1) to (2) is a bit weird for me like it could give player a bit of confuse trying to play it imo

Great diff though
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thanks for the mods

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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-11-20T14:39:53+00:00

DTM9 Nowa wrote:
NM from #modreqs

Shogun's Normal
Yo shogun, i'll finish the GD asap xd

First of all you could increase the AR to like 5 because the hop from 4 to 7,5 is quite big (normal -> hard) Fixed

00:02:366 (1) - I mean it wouldn't hurt to move this little bit downwards and to the left (roughly x194|y276 so the 2|3|sliderhead1 would form a 90 degree angle) also this would improve the circular flow over these 00:01:994 (3,1) - objects Fixed

00:09:633 (4) - Ever though about NCing this? It theoretically starts the next section so it's like the "important" note. Also speaking about that slider 00:09:633 (4,5) - the flow between these is kinda dull imo. My suggestion to improve the flow would be to curve the 5 and move it so it'd look somewhat like this http://puu.sh/snYaR/9f070ad866.jpg You're right, fixed

00:15:782 (6) - Imo it would work better if this was CTRL H'd on it's place. Or atleast it would make it little bit more interesting and atleast to me visually pleasing No thanks, I think it should be difficult for new players

00:17:832 (3) - Few suggestion to this slider. Remove the finish from the midpoint because it doesn't really have a reason to be there and add it to the head of the slider because there is a clear cymbal hit in the song. Secondly remove the reverse from it and add a hitcircle with a NC here 00:18:577 - . This imo represents the melody little bit better than it's currently Fixed but tne NC I put here 00:19:137 (1) -

00:19:137 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Even though you would add a NC to where i told you above ^ this combo is really long for a normal, consider cutting it somewhere ^

00:24:726 (1) - Imo the second half of the S slider is bit more curved than the other one. To fix this you can move the higher follow point that are forming the S shape down by 1 to 1.5 (small) grids. This imo atleast makes it look better and more even Fixed

00:39:074 (1,2) - Can you like open little bit the fact that you have NCd the 1 to me so i'd understand your logic behind it? I can't really see a reason why it's like so because there are no beat circulations, no SV multiplier changes and no patterns that need clarification. I'd deem the following slider much more worthy of a NC (beat circulation) and most likely you would too as you already have a "finish" on the head of it Fixed, I think

00:50:068 (4,5) - Purely opinion based but it would look better if the 4 would be curved like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611108 (or it would look more interesting atleast) You're right, I like it fixed!

01:05:720 (6,7,1) - You should improve the circular flow here because right now 6, 7 and the sliderhead are forming the first part but the body of the slider instead of following the flow, forms an additional and random bulge into the flow. Imo optimally it would look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6611134 Fixed

01:22:677 (4,1) - This is an excessive overlap which just does not look good because it makes pretty much anyone feel that it's mapped really tightly. This would be something i'd strongly recommend to fix. Though this overlap 01:23:795 (6,1) - is fine (my point of view when compared Xelasto's) Fixed

01:25:844 (3) - NC this because it starts the final calm section Fixed

Thanks for mod!

Here again, lol

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-11-20T16:14:35+00:00

DTM9 Nowa wrote:
NM from #modreqs

Consider cutting the mp3 song file from the end because there is a long unused space there ( 01:36:652 - to 01:47:232 - )

I'm sorry if i sound harsh but i want to keep it real and point out the things that could imo be better

Insane
There are a lot of spacing and pattern issues, i'd recommend somewhat overhauling the difficulty as it technically is holding down the other set. Also reading through this and this before doing so would be a good idea. Fxed DS (And sticking with it) could improve the mapping so you wouldn't have to worry about the spacing looking just... random, dull and unappealing like it's currently

Important : Just so you know i haven't pointed out every issue because it would just take too much time to write them down and the issues would be similiar to each other all the time

00:02:366 (1) - Oh come on. The S shape here just feels halfway done ;^; this is mostly because the first curve is there but the other part is non existant. Though you should be able to fix this by yourself. Also check the whole map for similiar stylish problems such as this one 00:03:857 (1) - fixed

00:05:161 (4) - I don't see a reason to create this much emphasis for the little bit higher note here... Could you help me understand your intentions behind it or just fix the spacing to make sense? Also regarding Xelasto's mod the placement issue is in the body of the 1 which makes it look like it's not in the middle of the hitcircles the intention of the distance was to start getting the beatmap is be faster, as in this time the song is trying to speed up. regarding the mod of Xelasto, it has become more clear to me what he was trying to refrence.

00:07:584 (5,6) - The way you have mapped this just makes me wonder how big of an opportunity to make a good pattern here you missed. 1. The pattern overall is quite hard to read because of the overlap under a slider body when the note is right after the slider and 2. there isn't really anything to justify that kind of a pattern fixed

00:09:633 (2) - There are three main problems with this one. Firsly the smaller curve formed by the two first followpoints really falls short and really drops the quality for the slider, secondly the slidertail of 1 could be blanketed by the body of 2 one way or another thus making them really feel that they are "connected" and thirdly the followpoints are just a mess (you most likely know this by yourself). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6614816 something like this would work much better and it wouldn't create similiar issues i noted out for the current design thanks for giving a better slider shape for this part of the map, i tried to recreate it as best as i can

00:12:242 (1) - So why was this NCd again? It doesn't really have any factors imo to make it worthy of a NC (SV change, pattern clarification, beat circulation and so on) so could you help me understand the world little bit better by clarifying the reason for the NC? this was nc's as it was a separate beat from the music. if you listen carefully, where 00:12:242 (1) is, it has a separate beat from 00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . the song wouldn't really justify for these two combos here to be connected now would it ?

00:12:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you decide to overhaul the diff this is stuff that you should avoid doing by few reasons
Spacing on slidertail1|2|3 is inequal and does not even look good
Here 00:13:360 (3,4) - the flow for the slider is next to non-existant and the placement just does not make sense to me
And lastly the flow from the slidertail4 to the 5 just does not work either
This is the stuff that really holds down the mapset because it just does not work. The sad part is that there are issues like this throughout the difficulty which just drops the level of quality by alot for the mapset overall i see, what you mean. after all of the mods in this post are done, i'll take a look at what can be done in these parts of the map

00:15:037 (1,1) - These should be blanketed atleast imo fixed

00:16:900 (4,1) - 00:17:087 (1,2) - 00:17:646 (3,1) - You are using 1/1 spacing mixed with 1/2 spacing in a section that has similiar intensity throughout it and even in the same combo. Maybe it was to emphasize the major beat (which it most likely is made for) but it's still way too much or it's not represented so the players are ready for such of a change i don't get why this was as much as an issue as the other things in the mod. 00:16:714 (3,4) - are suppose to represent similiar beats supported by the music. while 00:17:087 (1) has a lot of emphasis also supported by the music. this goes for the other points here as well. if your saying to make it less of an emphasis, i think it would ruin the point of the circles as this area of the song has points that need to be addrssed by circles and distance

00:18:205 (1,2) - 00:18:577 (2,3) - Here are similiar issues with the spacing as above but this time it's not even justified by emphasizing the other note because it does not have anything special on it fixed

00:26:031 (3) - Then there are problems like these. No matter what you are following this 00:26:217 - point should have so much more emphasis than begin a midpoint of a slider. The sound is much more prominent than for example the head of the slider both rhythmically and vocally i see what you mean here where there is point that needs to be emphasised with something other than a repeater.

00:28:826 (1,2,3) - One good example of abusing the DS because there is nothing that would really justify such a jump there changed

00:30:689 (7) - The piano notes crearly change here so why haven't you NCd here? i was thinking about nc'ing here when i was doing a check of nc's. however i thought it would interfere with 00:31:248 (1) as that's also another point that should be nc'd

00:32:180 - This would be another good example of a note that should have much higher prioritization than it currently has because it's much more prominent vocally and rhythmically and so on replaced with triple

00:44:478 - I mean... this should not be left unmapped. It's a notable and improtant cymbal hit which doesn't have a reason to be left unmapped even though you would be following the vocals fixed

00:49:695 - As you seem to follow the vocals for most of the time spaces like these should be mapped if there are for example drum hits because spaces like that are way too random and leave a feeling to the players that something was definently missing from there. Also on top of that the spacing choice here 00:49:323 (3,4) - is quite bad imo (again) fixed, however i didn't quite know what you meant by spacing, if the spacing was to large or to small, so i just left it as is

00:59:851 - Then why does the kiai even start from here? I'd see this 01:00:316 - as much better choice to start the kiai section from for example like in every other difficulty fixed

01:03:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stuff like this is just really messy aswell because 1. some of the objects overlap with each other and 2. there isn't any kind of a clearly visible patterning going on anyway which just makes the whole pattern look undone. Also killing the movement by stacking the 8 with the 9 is kinda dull aswell. After all that on the similiar section about 10-15 seconds after it you are for some reason missing a note here 01:16:528 - even though you have mapped it in the other one. Both of these sections share the intensity and the beat pattern thus making the inconsistency unjustified fixed

01:16:714 (1) - 01:17:459 - Another issue with inconsistency but it's little bit more visible this time. 01:16:714 (1) - Here you have mapped the cymbal hit correctly but you just leave it out here 01:17:459 - . Why? fixed

01:19:509 (4,5,6,7,8) - Having notes constantly stacked on each other makes it look really dull and extremely hard to read unless it's in the right circumstances which this one is definitly not in. On top of that 001:18:950 (3,5) - Touchy touchy~

01:30:316 (4,5) - Apart from the messy patterning with irritatingly low DS you have chosen to use really high DS for these. Could i ask what makes that kind of patterning justified in this case?none really. to fix this, i remapped most of the ending

in conclusion the mapping does not match the quality of the other set and for that reason need a complete overhaul. Also why haven't you responded to Kujinn even though you did respond to Xelasto?certain "circumstances" didnt allow me to respond, but i will after this mod If you want to get this ranked you have to listen and communicate with the people aswell who may think that it's bad, you must be able to handle criticism instead of just swiping the facts/suggestions represented by others under the carpet

That's about it, good luck with the set

Thanks for the mod !

vekt0r

175 posts

Joined May 2016

vekt0r 2016-11-25T19:39:23+00:00

Hi, m4m from your queue

Insane

00:08:702 (2,3) - Why stack these? There’s a pretty distinct drum on the 3
00:08:143 (5,1) - I know you’re going for low intensity, but I think a triple here would still be good
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Something like 0.5x ds stream instead of stacking
00:22:863 (6) - This is quite hard to see because it stacks into the slider body, either do a partial overlap or manually stack to the top-left
00:29:198 (2) - NC here instead
00:34:602 (7,1) - This overlap is really bad, please remove this
00:39:447 (1) - Don’t put the downbeat on the repeat arrow, especially because nothing warrants the placement of the sliderhead
00:40:379 (3) - Starting the slider here also feels wrong, something like this instead:

My personal opinion is also not making 6 (4 after the edit) a repeat slider since the first 2 sounds are similar
00:41:869 (8) - Nothing suggests a circle here either
00:42:428 (1) - Downbeat on a sliderend
00:47:087 (2) - In this case, the music is actually syncopated, so there is nothing on the downbeat, turn 1 into a slider
00:49:695 (4,5,6) - Fix stacking, and NC on 6
00:53:422 (3,4,5) - The white ticks are stronger here
00:57:521 (2) - remove circle
00:59:757 - and 00:59:944 (1) - there is a double sound that would be good to map
01:04:509 (7) - fix, on the wrong tick
01:03:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also dislike this pattern in general, besides, I think the strong beats are usually placed in the position of 01:03:298 (1,3,5,7) -
01:08:702 (4) - Make sliderend instead
01:15:223 (1,2) - triple?

There seem to be a lot of beats placed in deliberate silences in the music, I think I got them all since this is short, but look out for that

Celsius’ Hard

00:21:000 (4) - I like having a triple start here instead
00:24:354 (4,1) - Probably not stacking these would be better
00:30:316 (3,4,1) - I think 3,4 should be a slider and 1 should be 2 circles instead
00:47:459 (2,3) - Same as 00:24:354 (4,1) -
00:55:844 (6) - NC
00:56:776 (4) - NC, this one is really fine either way though
01:24:354 (1) - Even if the chimes start here, I think the slider should start 1/2 beat earlier

Shogun’s Normal

00:05:348 (1,2,3) - This seems better and easier to read:

00:22:304 (7) - Don’t think this should be here
00:40:565 (3,4) - Even though vocals suggest otherwise, I think making 3 a beat long and 4 a half beat is better
01:14:664 (2,3) - Combine into one slider

That's it; Normal and Hard were difficult to mod, so I just picked on some things

Good luck!

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-11-26T01:46:35+00:00

vekt0r wrote:
Hi, m4m from your queue

Insane
00:08:702 (2,3) - Why stack these? There’s a pretty distinct drum on the 3 ok, lets adress why i stacked these. if you listen at 25% speed, there is no "distinct drum" that you say, it's just a build up.
00:08:143 (5,1) - I know you’re going for low intensity, but I think a triple here would still be good no point in having a triple as it would leave this overmapped
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Something like 0.5x ds stream instead of stacking 0.5 ds stream wouldn't work here. its just one long part of the music, which really doesn't need to have a stream. my mapping style i guess
00:22:863 (6) - This is quite hard to see because it stacks into the slider body, either do a partial overlap or manually stack to the top-left its not stacked on to the slider body, i think this work well here as the music is going for small jumps
00:29:198 (2) - NC here instead k
00:34:602 (7,1) - This overlap is really bad, please remove this if another modder complains about this overlap, ill change
00:39:447 (1) - Don’t put the downbeat on the repeat arrow, especially because nothing warrants the placement of the sliderhead k
00:40:379 (3) - Starting the slider here also feels wrong, something like this instead: instead of repeater, which you suggested, i put 1/1

My personal opinion is also not making 6 (4 after the edit) a repeat slider since the first 2 sounds are similar ???
00:41:869 (8) - Nothing suggests a circle here either k
00:42:428 (1) - Downbeat on a sliderend nothing wrong here, slider fits the music
00:47:087 (2) - In this case, the music is actually syncopated, so there is nothing on the downbeat, turn 1 into a slider this would make the jumps feel less intense, as the song is in a somewhat fast part of the song. it wouldn't play well if there was a slider here
00:49:695 (4,5,6) - Fix stacking, and NC on 6 fixed stacking, but no reason for 6 to be nc'd as 00:50:254 (1) is a new beat
00:53:422 (3,4,5) - The white ticks are stronger here its white ticks are strong here, but will sound weird if sliders start on white ticks.
00:57:521 (2) - remove circle why? it would leave the song under mapped and leave the player feeling as if something was missing, as the song is trying to build up to kiai time
00:59:757 - and 00:59:944 (1) - there is a double sound that would be good to map ok, extended 00:59:385 (1)
01:04:509 (7) - fix, on the wrong tick ty
01:03:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also dislike this pattern in general, besides, I think the strong beats are usually placed in the position of 01:03:298 (1,3,5,7) - ok, but you didn't suggest a fix for this. i think its fine, just opinions on styles of pattern. regarding the strong beats, it would be bad if i spammed finish's as it would sound bad
01:08:702 (4) - Make sliderend insteadno, would sound weird if jumps ended of on 01:08:515 (3)
01:15:223 (1,2) - triple? no... the jumps already started on 01:15:223 (1)

There seem to be a lot of beats placed in deliberate silences in the music, I think I got them all since this is short, but look out for that

That's it; Normal and Hard were difficult to mod, so I just picked on some things
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-11-26T03:46:56+00:00

vekt0r wrote:
Hi, m4m from your queue

Celsius’ Hard
00:21:000 (4) - I like having a triple start here instead not sound right for me
00:24:354 (4,1) - Probably not stacking these would be better emphasis the stop moment of the song
00:30:316 (3,4,1) - I think 3,4 should be a slider and 1 should be 2 circles instead i don't think so cus the 1 sound more calmer than 3,4
00:47:459 (2,3) - Same as 00:24:354 (4,1) - same
00:55:844 (6) - NC want to make nc consistent for every downbeat so no
00:56:776 (4) - NC, this one is really fine either way though same
01:24:354 (1) - Even if the chimes start here, I think the slider should start 1/2 beat earlier i will think about it

That's it; Normal and Hard were difficult to mod, so I just picked on some things
Good luck!

thanks for the mods

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2016-11-26T06:06:20+00:00

Hi, from my queue :3

[Celsius' Hard]

00:11:124 (1) - I don't know if this is intentionally made, but you ignored the drums at the other part and made some 1/2s to represent the instrument, 00:10:751 (4,5,2,3) - . I'd recommend making this a 1/2 slider or 2 single notes for consistency, not to follow the drums.
00:33:671 (1) - Not emphasizing this like the others, like you did at 00:32:180 (1) - 00:29:198 (1) - ?
00:51:372 (5,6,1) - Spacing seems uneven because of the triplet, making it even?
00:54:167 (4) - I think making the shape of this slider similar to 00:53:049 (1,2,3) - would be more fitting due to the sliders you made for the increase on the instrument at 00:53:422 (2,3) - .
01:13:733 (1) - The angle from 01:13:546 (4,1) - is more edgy than 01:01:621 (4,1) - which has the same music. It's like https://puu.sh/suMZx/c910e278c1.jpg - https://puu.sh/suMZx/c910e278c1.jpg. How about making 01:13:546 (4,1) - less edgy like the one you did before? Like https://puu.sh/suN5J/20ca2cdef4.jpg but with 1 emphasized more.

[Insane]

00:05:348 (1) - Shaped a bit unfitting, making it tidier?
00:02:925 (2,3,4) - I think 00:03:112 (3,4) - the spacing here should've been smaller than 00:02:925 (2,3) - since the piano seemed to be decreasing itself, I tried to made 00:03:112 (3,4) - smaller. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659163?
00:09:261 (1,2) - How about swapping NCs here?
00:18:205 (1) - I don't think that a 1/2 reverse arrow would work best here, because the start of 00:18:205 - has a smaller sound than 00:18:577 - . I'd recommend making this slider non-reversed and make a single note for the strong sound.
00:13:546 (4,5,6,7,8) - The pattern seems random to me, and the rhythm too. You made a pattern at 00:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - but why not here?
00:31:807 (3) - How about CTRL+G-ing this slider to have a better flow and emphasizing the strong vocals at 00:32:180 (4) - ?
00:37:770 - Seems empty here if you don't put a note, since you put a note notes at drums 00:39:074 (5,6) - .
01:00:316 (2) - NC here? To notice players that it's not a slow SV anymore?

That's all from me :3

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-11-26T17:49:57+00:00

vekt0r wrote:
Hi, m4m from your queue

Shogun’s Normal
00:05:348 (1,2,3) - This seems better and easier to read: Fixed!

00:22:304 (7) - Don’t think this should be here There is a small beat here
00:40:565 (3,4) - Even though vocals suggest otherwise, I think making 3 a beat long and 4 a half beat is better I prefer keep like this, it's sound better
01:14:664 (2,3) - Combine into one slider It's sound better, fixed!

That's it; Normal and Hard were difficult to mod, so I just picked on some things

Thanks for modding!

Here~

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-11-26T21:28:27+00:00

William K wrote:
Hi, from my queue :3

[Insane]

00:05:348 (1) - Shaped a bit unfitting, making it tidier? ok
00:02:925 (2,3,4) - I think 00:03:112 (3,4) - the spacing here should've been smaller than 00:02:925 (2,3) - since the piano seemed to be decreasing itself, I tried to made 00:03:112 (3,4) - smaller. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659163? fixed
00:09:261 (1,2) - How about swapping NCs here? see what you mean, i just made 00:09:633 (2) a nc since i think 00:09:261 (1) needs a nc
00:18:205 (1) - I don't think that a 1/2 reverse arrow would work best here, because the start of 00:18:205 - has a smaller sound than 00:18:577 - . I'd recommend making this slider non-reversed and make a single note for the strong sound. i prefer what i have here instead
00:13:546 (4,5,6,7,8) - The pattern seems random to me, and the rhythm too. You made a pattern at 00:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - but why not here? changed
00:31:807 (3) - How about CTRL+G-ing this slider to have a better flow and emphasizing the strong vocals at 00:32:180 (4) - ? ok
00:37:770 - Seems empty here if you don't put a note, since you put a note notes at drums 00:39:074 (5,6) - . fixed
01:00:316 (2) - NC here? To notice players that it's not a slow SV anymore?ok

That's all from me :3

Thank for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-11-29T16:31:00+00:00

William K wrote:
Hi, from my queue :3

[Celsius' Hard]

00:11:124 (1) - I don't know if this is intentionally made, but you ignored the drums at the other part and made some 1/2s to represent the instrument, 00:10:751 (4,5,2,3) - . I'd recommend making this a 1/2 slider or 2 single notes for consistency, not to follow the drums. intentionally , the stream there sound noticeable but i don't want to put a lots of 1/4 there so i just put only on the dominant part which is the downbeat
00:33:671 (1) - Not emphasizing this like the others, like you did at 00:32:180 (1) - 00:29:198 (1) - ? no cus circle jumps would feel a bit too sudden for player to react , the others are slider jumps and it easy to navigate them
00:51:372 (5,6,1) - Spacing seems uneven because of the triplet, making it even? k
00:54:167 (4) - I think making the shape of this slider similar to 00:53:049 (1,2,3) - would be more fitting due to the sliders you made for the increase on the instrument at 00:53:422 (2,3) - . make sense but i want to use different slider for the switching rhythm here 00:54:167 (4,1) - also ithe pitch just sound less smooth tho but maybe i will need to get more opinion
01:13:733 (1) - The angle from 01:13:546 (4,1) - is more edgy than 01:01:621 (4,1) - which has the same music. It's like https://puu.sh/suMZx/c910e278c1.jpg - https://puu.sh/suMZx/c910e278c1.jpg. How about making 01:13:546 (4,1) - less edgy like the one you did before? Like https://puu.sh/suN5J/20ca2cdef4.jpg but with 1 emphasized more. nice one ,i fixed the flow here 01:01:621 (4,1) - tho , flow should be consistent now

That's all from me :3

thanks for the mods

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AtoNiik

81 posts

Joined July 2016

AtoNiik 2016-12-01T10:03:51+00:00

HI.

[Celsius' hard]

01:30:316 - the double sliders ,double single note and double spinner is made intentionally? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67002
if you do that for the sounds you can try to add a timing and increase the audio at 100%.

Sorry for my bad english.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-12-01T16:52:13+00:00

wow idk why that happen lol
fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59518
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

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Title:Last Diary
TitleUnicode:Last Diary
Artist:Eri Sasaki
ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
Creator:-Latias-
Version:Celsius' Hard
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags:plastic memories visual novel opening op ps vita celsiuslk shogunmoon
BeatmapID:1122741
BeatmapSetID:500800

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
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Trost

188 posts

Joined November 2014

Trost 2016-12-04T06:37:44+00:00

A little thing I noticed from your Insane diff

00:35:161 (1) - Why is this placed here? It's really awkward and kills the flow. You should probably move it somewhere else

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-04T18:47:38+00:00

Epiclol wrote:
A little thing I noticed from your Insane diff

00:35:161 (1) - Why is this placed here? It's really awkward and kills the flow. You should probably move it somewhere elsefixed

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-12-17T22:31:40+00:00

placeholder for m4m response
I feel this is the correct map lol

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-17T22:43:42+00:00

Underforest wrote:
placeholder for m4m response
I feel this is the correct map lol

ye, right map

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-12-20T05:40:09+00:00

Sorry for inactive
already respond to all mod (thanks for the mod~)
please update it~

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Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2016-12-21T21:26:42+00:00

Hey, doing my end of the M4M:

Insane
I see a lot of flow issues in this map in the beginning already, I'm just going to list some so hopefully you get an idea on what i'm going for flow-wise.
00:01:621 (3,4,1) - This is the the calmest part of the song, so you should have more circular flow here imo.

Flow

00:04:416 (2) - rotate 90 degrees
00:05:161 (4,1) - again with flow, the song is very calm compared to other parts of the song. Easy fix would be flipping the slider horizontally
00:09:261 (1,1) - You can blanket this better imo. Blanket the first slider to the sliderend of the next slider.
00:11:683 (7) - the loudest part of that stream is the very end, yet you mapped that part with a sliderEND. that last part should be clickable.
00:16:900 (4,1) - is 1/2 beat and 00:17:087 (1,2) - 1/1 beat, but they both currently have very similar spacing. You should have spacing difference here.
00:18:205 (1) - Again, the loudest beat is mapped the the sliderend.
00:18:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what you are trying to map here. the sliders and circles here are kind of placed randomly rhythmically (dunno if that's the right phrase). Like you should emphasize the loud parts like 00:18:577 - 00:19:509 - 00:20:254 - 00:20:254 - with sliders, and the rest can be just be circles.

Suggestion

Watch this short clip of how I would interpret the rhythm (and pattern) of this portion: https://puu.sh/sWTpc/ed19931576.mp4 Notice the flow (This is kinda made in like 10 seconds so If you choose to go with this idea, make it prettier than mine

ALso notice how I broke flow here 00:18:205 (2,1) - on purpose because the loud beat allows me to break flow there

00:21:559 (2,3) - I think a triple would be nice here.
00:22:304 (4,1) - distance is too big and the slider is facing the opposite way from the next circle
I think you're using too many repeating sliders on the next part where you can just do a circle then a slider. Repeating sliders are commonly used to break change flow to the opposite direction, which you should do in most of these situations. Examples: 00:25:285 (3) - 00:28:080 (3) -
00:27:521 (1,2) - should be a circle to slider, not slider to circle
00:29:198 (1) - Make this into 2 circles so that you can map to the little piano part there
00:29:757 (3,4) - flow break here when the music is still calm.
00:26:776 (2) - this can just be a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeating slider
00:32:180 (4) - just make into a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/4 repeating slider.
00:32:553 (1,2) - & 00:34:602 (6,1) - you can do better than just 2 repeating sliders here.
00:45:596 (1,2) - just make into 1/2 or ~~1/1 slider~~ to map to the voice.
00:46:528 (6,7) - The 6 should be 2 circles and then the 7 should be a 1/2 slider
00:50:441 (2,3,4) - wide angle jump here, almost a line, which is uncomfortable to play. I suggest making slider (4) rotated 90 degrees counterclockwise and place above circle (3)
01:00:316 (2) - slider velocity change so NC here.
01:17:273 (2,3) - should be a circle, then a slider to map to the voice.
01:18:205 (5) - ^
01:22:677 (7,8) - should be changed to circle, 1/2slider, then a circle.

Like this

01:26:403 (2,1,2) - spacing inconsistency here. 01:26:403 (2,1) - is separated with a 1/1 beat while 01:27:149 (1,2) - is 1/2 beat. That means 01:26:403 (2,1) - has to be farther. This is only 3.85 difficulty so some spacing should be kept consistent unless the song allows you to have irregular spacing. (this song is a calm song, not a camellia song so it should have consistent spacing).
01:31:435 (1,1) - ctrl+g this please
01:31:062 (7,1) - make the slider point towards the circle.

For this mod i mostly focus on the flow and rhythmic patterns since those are important. There are more flow issues other than the ones i listed, so you should look it over. You also need to work on the aesthetic parts with the map because many of these patterns seem messy & out of place (and i see a lot of bad blankets, examples: 00:14:105 (6,7) - 00:18:764 (2,3) - 00:19:323 (4,5) i don't if there are on purpose or not).

So yah there'd mah mod, good luck on ranking!

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-21T22:59:46+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
Hey, doing my end of the M4M:

Insane
I see a lot of flow issues in this map in the beginning already, I'm just going to list some so hopefully you get an idea on what i'm going for flow-wise.
00:01:621 (3,4,1) - This is the the calmest part of the song, so you should have more circular flow here imo. i dont like circular flow and it would break the map cause only other time i use circular flow is for jumos
Flow
00:04:416 (2) - rotate 90 degrees this would break flow, but ill change slider shape
00:05:161 (4,1) - again with flow, the song is very calm compared to other parts of the song. Easy fix would be flipping the slider horizontally song is trying to speed up and this jump helps the map speed up
00:09:261 (1,1) - You can blanket this better imo. Blanket the first slider to the sliderend of the next slider.
00:11:683 (7) - the loudest part of that stream is the very end, yet you mapped that part with a sliderEND. that last part should be clickable.the reason i why i leave it as a slider as my intentions was not to make this a death stream. to compensate i did add a hit sound to emphasize that slider end
00:16:900 (4,1) - is 1/2 beat and 00:17:087 (1,2) - 1/1 beat, but they both currently have very similar spacing. You should have spacing difference here. ???. they have the same part of the music, so i just mirror's them
00:18:205 (1) - Again, the loudest beat is mapped the the sliderend. its not loud enough to the point of needing another circle to click on
00:18:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what you are trying to map here. the sliders and circles here are kind of placed randomly rhythmically (dunno if that's the right phrase). Like you should emphasize the loud parts like 00:18:577 - 00:19:509 - 00:20:254 - 00:20:254 - with sliders, and the rest can be just be circles. if it were to put a lot of circles in this section to fill it up, it would be weird as this part would be the only place where i do this. i do emphasize the points you mentioned with circles. with the video demonstration, i really didn't like how the circles weren't really there for something to be click on. sliders are suppose to full up the space on the map
Suggestion
Watch this short clip of how I would interpret the rhythm (and pattern) of this portion: https://puu.sh/sWTpc/ed19931576.mp4 Notice the flow (This is kinda made in like 10 seconds so If you choose to go with this idea, make it prettier than mine ALso notice how I broke flow here 00:18:205 (2,1) - on purpose because the loud beat allows me to break flow there
00:21:559 (2,3) - I think a triple would be nice here. nothing really special to emphasise with a triple here
00:22:304 (4,1) - distance is too big and the slider is facing the opposite way from the next circle i ctrl+g
I think you're using too many repeating sliders on the next part where you can just do a circle then a slider. Repeating sliders are commonly used to break change flow to the opposite direction, which you should do in most of these situations. Examples: 00:25:285 (3) - 00:28:080 (3) - i personally don't like to use repeaters to change flow
00:27:521 (1,2) - should be a circle to slider, not slider to circle if it was circle to slider, then 00:27:894 wouldn't be emphasised through circle.
00:29:198 (1) - Make this into 2 circles so that you can map to the little piano part there slider has something to click on and the slider end is emphasising the last point
00:29:757 (3,4) - flow break here when the music is still calm. ctrl+g
00:26:776 (2) - this can just be a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeating slider no reason for 1/1, singer says something diffrent during the time period that kinda needs repeater
00:32:180 (4) - just make into a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/4 repeating slider.cant be 1/4 b/c it has to be either triple or 1/4 slider
00:32:553 (1,2) - & 00:34:602 (6,1) - you can do better than just 2 repeating sliders here. ???, it fits fine though ?
00:45:596 (1,2) - just make into 1/2 or ~~1/1 slider~~ to map to the voice. ???, it is mapped to voice ?
00:46:528 (6,7) - The 6 should be 2 circles and then the 7 should be a 1/2 slider 6 cant be two circles cause it different from the rest of the jump music. 7 also really doesn't fit to be a 1/2 slider
00:50:441 (2,3,4) - wide angle jump here, almost a line, which is uncomfortable to play. I suggest making slider (4) rotated 90 degrees counterclockwise and place above circle (3) i mapped it like this b/c the music is asking for something hard to play
01:00:316 (2) - slider velocity change so NC here.
01:17:273 (2,3) - should be a circle, then a slider to map to the voice. i like it better the way it is now
01:18:205 (5) - ^ doesn't fit with song
01:22:677 (7,8) - should be changed to circle, 1/2slider, then a circle. i like the way it is now
Like this
01:26:403 (2,1,2) - spacing inconsistency here. 01:26:403 (2,1) - is separated with a 1/1 beat while 01:27:149 (1,2) - is 1/2 beat. That means 01:26:403 (2,1) - has to be farther. This is only 3.85 difficulty so some spacing should be kept consistent unless the song allows you to have irregular spacing. (this song is a calm song, not a camellia song so it should have consistent spacing).
01:31:435 (1,1) - ctrl+g this please
01:31:062 (7,1) - make the slider point towards the circle. it is ?

For this mod i mostly focus on the flow and rhythmic patterns since those are important. There are more flow issues other than the ones i listed, so you should look it over. You also need to work on the aesthetic parts with the map because many of these patterns seem messy & out of place (and i see a lot of bad blankets, examples: 00:14:105 (6,7) - 00:18:764 (2,3) - 00:19:323 (4,5) i don't if there are on purpose or not).

So yah there'd mah mod, good luck on ranking!

no reply= fixed

thanks for the mod !

Buster

928 posts

Joined April 2016

Buster 2016-12-24T03:03:27+00:00

Normal

00:04:602 move to x:383 y:48
00:08:329 move these notes a bit low
00:30:689 move a bit downright
00:39:074 should be like this
00:43:919 move to x:216 y:48
00:46:900 move a bit up
01:05:265 move to x:120 y:240
01:08:329 (4,5,6) move a a bit down
01:10:751 move to x:280 y:328

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-12-27T00:30:27+00:00

Lolinator2000 wrote:
Normal
00:04:602 move to x:383 y:48 No thanks
00:08:329 move these notes a bit low It's fine like this
00:30:689 move a bit downright just a little
00:39:074 should be like this This is not a consistent spacing so I don't
00:43:919 move to x:216 y:48 ^
00:46:900 move a bit up It's fine like this
01:05:265 move to x:120 y:240 I move the circle 5
01:08:329 (4,5,6) move a a bit down No thanks
01:10:751 move to x:280 y:328 ^

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-30T00:28:35+00:00

hi Celsius

Celsius
00:44:851 (3) - unsnapped

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-11T17:32:50+00:00

Hi, from queue.~

[

General]

Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version?
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

[]

[

Farewell]

00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat.
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo.
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them.
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.

So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.

[

Celsius' Hard]

00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance.
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section.
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped.
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple?
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket.
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png

[

Shogun's Normal]

I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.

00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you.
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider?
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket?
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) -
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want.

Lefia's diff is fine.

Good luck.~

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-11T23:26:33+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ General]
Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version? i dont know what this is . ill ask people for help with this one
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

[]

[ Farewell]
00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat. some nc's are there to introduce new music like 00:11:869 (1,1,1) - (transition in to faster music), while other nc's were my fault. mostly it was to introduce to new music or to emphasis specific places
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo. hmm, i see what you mean. ill do change, but aesthetically speaking, this make it ugly imo. lets see what other modders (if i get others) see about this
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them. following vocals here, 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) is same sound throughout
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.hmm, the stack is here b/c of music. listen closely and you hear it. its also there to show the 'ending' of these jumps
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.if i were to put 3 on 1, it would create 2 things that i want to avoid. abnormal spacing, and it would mess the look of triangle. as for "it can be misread", i feel thats a good thing as this section of jumps are really diffrent than the other jump sections in this map
So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.
Good luck.~

no reply = fixed

thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-12T14:10:45+00:00

-Latias- wrote:
hi Celsius

Celsius
00:44:851 (3) - unsnapped i think it's ok the vocal sound is on 1/6

Mir wrote:
[ Celsius' Hard]
00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance. i think it sound not really noticeable at 100% speed like the one at the reverse slider
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section. rhythm pattern here is like rhythm with triplet -> rhythm with no triplet -> rhythm with triplet to make sure the intensity is fair for hard diff imo
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png rhythm kinda feel weird there for me i don't want to focus on vocal or piano much here since the first thing that come from this rhythm is the sound of instrument on white tick so i want player to only focus on that suddenly switch to vocal halfway like that would just make thing pretty awkward there for me because vocal also start on the offbeat which sound pretty unnatural
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped. yea , it's like a way to transition to the next rhythm which sound different , i think it better to let the player have time to prepare for the next rhythm that sound different
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple? vocal sound is 1/6
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket. ok
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png not following vocal , the sound on white tick is kinda a fade in sound so i think i map it like that

Good luck.~

thanks for the mods

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-12T18:49:53+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ Shogun's Normal]
I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.
00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you. Fixed
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png I don't too much want to map on the vocal.
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider? ^
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo. It doesn't matter, I leave that like that.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png Fixed
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket? Fixed
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end. But it's fine this is not a very strong beat.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) - No thanks
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want. Fixed

Good luck.~

Thanks for modding!~

asadaf

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Graffin

131 posts

Joined June 2014

Graffin 2017-01-12T20:23:56+00:00

NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
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00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) -
00:28:267 (3,4) -
00:30:503 (4,5) -
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these
nothing wrong, good diff

normal and easy are fine
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-12T23:40:33+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
00:01:994 (4,1) - its a fine blanket here
00:03:484 (1,2) -
00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) - this wasnt suppose to be blanket as it was suppose to be the same as 00:24:726 (4)
00:28:267 (3,4) - if i were to blanket these two together, it would make that entire section ugly
00:30:503 (4,5) - it is blanketed ?
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped i disagree. there is a sound there for a triple
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5 its there to show end of jumps,along with the distance
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat want to be consistent with other diffs
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

aetwuns

138 posts

Joined July 2016

aetwuns 2017-01-13T04:50:28+00:00

Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis

Good luck with ranking

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-13T13:42:06+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis Fixed

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this No thanks, it's sound good already

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for modding!

agf

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-13T23:48:33+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here since modders said a lot of this note, removed !

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so hmm, i think spacing here is good, as there is clear indication of a new "section" or part of music

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis it would sound weird if this was the only triple of the map, plus i dont think it fits well here

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for the mod !

Venix

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Venix 2017-01-14T23:00:54+00:00

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Artist: 佐々木恵梨
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midori_wah

426 posts

Joined April 2015

midori_wah 2017-01-16T18:22:17+00:00

Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider.
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity.
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle.

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional.
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.)

[Shogun's Normal]
All good to go (according to an underleveled mapper).

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai.

Okay another done, more to go.

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-17T00:35:13+00:00

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider. 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) all has the same sound
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity. not meant to emphasis, just jumps. if i were to change the shape, it would make it harder to read
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle. there a sound at 01:25:472 though
Okay another done, more to go.

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-17T13:17:58+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2 uh ok
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these looks fine tbh for me
nothing wrong, good diff

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis no i prefer my current rhythm since it express the feel of the vocal and fade in of the instrument on 01:24:354 (1) - better

Good luck with ranking

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional. this is intentional to fully emphasis the strong piano 00:03:112 (2) - at 100% speed
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.) i don't think it necessary to do that , it's the end of song now so nothing after that imo

Okay another done, more to go.

Thanks

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Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-19T13:07:48+00:00

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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer here
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer

shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read

lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c

gl

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