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Trost

Joined November 2014

Trost 2016-12-04T06:37:44+00:00

A little thing I noticed from your Insane diff

00:35:161 (1) - Why is this placed here? It's really awkward and kills the flow. You should probably move it somewhere else

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-04T18:47:38+00:00

Epiclol wrote:
A little thing I noticed from your Insane diff

00:35:161 (1) - Why is this placed here? It's really awkward and kills the flow. You should probably move it somewhere elsefixed

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-12-17T22:31:40+00:00

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I feel this is the correct map lol

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-17T22:43:42+00:00

Underforest wrote:
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I feel this is the correct map lol

ye, right map

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-12-20T05:40:09+00:00

Sorry for inactive
already respond to all mod (thanks for the mod~)
please update it~

Lefia's Easy

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Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2016-12-21T21:26:42+00:00

Hey, doing my end of the M4M:

Insane
I see a lot of flow issues in this map in the beginning already, I'm just going to list some so hopefully you get an idea on what i'm going for flow-wise.
00:01:621 (3,4,1) - This is the the calmest part of the song, so you should have more circular flow here imo.

Flow

00:04:416 (2) - rotate 90 degrees
00:05:161 (4,1) - again with flow, the song is very calm compared to other parts of the song. Easy fix would be flipping the slider horizontally
00:09:261 (1,1) - You can blanket this better imo. Blanket the first slider to the sliderend of the next slider.
00:11:683 (7) - the loudest part of that stream is the very end, yet you mapped that part with a sliderEND. that last part should be clickable.
00:16:900 (4,1) - is 1/2 beat and 00:17:087 (1,2) - 1/1 beat, but they both currently have very similar spacing. You should have spacing difference here.
00:18:205 (1) - Again, the loudest beat is mapped the the sliderend.
00:18:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what you are trying to map here. the sliders and circles here are kind of placed randomly rhythmically (dunno if that's the right phrase). Like you should emphasize the loud parts like 00:18:577 - 00:19:509 - 00:20:254 - 00:20:254 - with sliders, and the rest can be just be circles.

Suggestion

Watch this short clip of how I would interpret the rhythm (and pattern) of this portion: https://puu.sh/sWTpc/ed19931576.mp4 Notice the flow (This is kinda made in like 10 seconds so If you choose to go with this idea, make it prettier than mine

ALso notice how I broke flow here 00:18:205 (2,1) - on purpose because the loud beat allows me to break flow there

00:21:559 (2,3) - I think a triple would be nice here.
00:22:304 (4,1) - distance is too big and the slider is facing the opposite way from the next circle
I think you're using too many repeating sliders on the next part where you can just do a circle then a slider. Repeating sliders are commonly used to break change flow to the opposite direction, which you should do in most of these situations. Examples: 00:25:285 (3) - 00:28:080 (3) -
00:27:521 (1,2) - should be a circle to slider, not slider to circle
00:29:198 (1) - Make this into 2 circles so that you can map to the little piano part there
00:29:757 (3,4) - flow break here when the music is still calm.
00:26:776 (2) - this can just be a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeating slider
00:32:180 (4) - just make into a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/4 repeating slider.
00:32:553 (1,2) - & 00:34:602 (6,1) - you can do better than just 2 repeating sliders here.
00:45:596 (1,2) - just make into 1/2 or ~~1/1 slider~~ to map to the voice.
00:46:528 (6,7) - The 6 should be 2 circles and then the 7 should be a 1/2 slider
00:50:441 (2,3,4) - wide angle jump here, almost a line, which is uncomfortable to play. I suggest making slider (4) rotated 90 degrees counterclockwise and place above circle (3)
01:00:316 (2) - slider velocity change so NC here.
01:17:273 (2,3) - should be a circle, then a slider to map to the voice.
01:18:205 (5) - ^
01:22:677 (7,8) - should be changed to circle, 1/2slider, then a circle.

Like this

01:26:403 (2,1,2) - spacing inconsistency here. 01:26:403 (2,1) - is separated with a 1/1 beat while 01:27:149 (1,2) - is 1/2 beat. That means 01:26:403 (2,1) - has to be farther. This is only 3.85 difficulty so some spacing should be kept consistent unless the song allows you to have irregular spacing. (this song is a calm song, not a camellia song so it should have consistent spacing).
01:31:435 (1,1) - ctrl+g this please
01:31:062 (7,1) - make the slider point towards the circle.

For this mod i mostly focus on the flow and rhythmic patterns since those are important. There are more flow issues other than the ones i listed, so you should look it over. You also need to work on the aesthetic parts with the map because many of these patterns seem messy & out of place (and i see a lot of bad blankets, examples: 00:14:105 (6,7) - 00:18:764 (2,3) - 00:19:323 (4,5) i don't if there are on purpose or not).

So yah there'd mah mod, good luck on ranking!

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-21T22:59:46+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
Hey, doing my end of the M4M:

Insane
I see a lot of flow issues in this map in the beginning already, I'm just going to list some so hopefully you get an idea on what i'm going for flow-wise.
00:01:621 (3,4,1) - This is the the calmest part of the song, so you should have more circular flow here imo. i dont like circular flow and it would break the map cause only other time i use circular flow is for jumos
Flow
00:04:416 (2) - rotate 90 degrees this would break flow, but ill change slider shape
00:05:161 (4,1) - again with flow, the song is very calm compared to other parts of the song. Easy fix would be flipping the slider horizontally song is trying to speed up and this jump helps the map speed up
00:09:261 (1,1) - You can blanket this better imo. Blanket the first slider to the sliderend of the next slider.
00:11:683 (7) - the loudest part of that stream is the very end, yet you mapped that part with a sliderEND. that last part should be clickable.the reason i why i leave it as a slider as my intentions was not to make this a death stream. to compensate i did add a hit sound to emphasize that slider end
00:16:900 (4,1) - is 1/2 beat and 00:17:087 (1,2) - 1/1 beat, but they both currently have very similar spacing. You should have spacing difference here. ???. they have the same part of the music, so i just mirror's them
00:18:205 (1) - Again, the loudest beat is mapped the the sliderend. its not loud enough to the point of needing another circle to click on
00:18:764 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what you are trying to map here. the sliders and circles here are kind of placed randomly rhythmically (dunno if that's the right phrase). Like you should emphasize the loud parts like 00:18:577 - 00:19:509 - 00:20:254 - 00:20:254 - with sliders, and the rest can be just be circles. if it were to put a lot of circles in this section to fill it up, it would be weird as this part would be the only place where i do this. i do emphasize the points you mentioned with circles. with the video demonstration, i really didn't like how the circles weren't really there for something to be click on. sliders are suppose to full up the space on the map
Suggestion
Watch this short clip of how I would interpret the rhythm (and pattern) of this portion: https://puu.sh/sWTpc/ed19931576.mp4 Notice the flow (This is kinda made in like 10 seconds so If you choose to go with this idea, make it prettier than mine ALso notice how I broke flow here 00:18:205 (2,1) - on purpose because the loud beat allows me to break flow there
00:21:559 (2,3) - I think a triple would be nice here. nothing really special to emphasise with a triple here
00:22:304 (4,1) - distance is too big and the slider is facing the opposite way from the next circle i ctrl+g
I think you're using too many repeating sliders on the next part where you can just do a circle then a slider. Repeating sliders are commonly used to break change flow to the opposite direction, which you should do in most of these situations. Examples: 00:25:285 (3) - 00:28:080 (3) - i personally don't like to use repeaters to change flow
00:27:521 (1,2) - should be a circle to slider, not slider to circle if it was circle to slider, then 00:27:894 wouldn't be emphasised through circle.
00:29:198 (1) - Make this into 2 circles so that you can map to the little piano part there slider has something to click on and the slider end is emphasising the last point
00:29:757 (3,4) - flow break here when the music is still calm. ctrl+g
00:26:776 (2) - this can just be a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 repeating slider no reason for 1/1, singer says something diffrent during the time period that kinda needs repeater
00:32:180 (4) - just make into a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/4 repeating slider.cant be 1/4 b/c it has to be either triple or 1/4 slider
00:32:553 (1,2) - & 00:34:602 (6,1) - you can do better than just 2 repeating sliders here. ???, it fits fine though ?
00:45:596 (1,2) - just make into 1/2 or ~~1/1 slider~~ to map to the voice. ???, it is mapped to voice ?
00:46:528 (6,7) - The 6 should be 2 circles and then the 7 should be a 1/2 slider 6 cant be two circles cause it different from the rest of the jump music. 7 also really doesn't fit to be a 1/2 slider
00:50:441 (2,3,4) - wide angle jump here, almost a line, which is uncomfortable to play. I suggest making slider (4) rotated 90 degrees counterclockwise and place above circle (3) i mapped it like this b/c the music is asking for something hard to play
01:00:316 (2) - slider velocity change so NC here.
01:17:273 (2,3) - should be a circle, then a slider to map to the voice. i like it better the way it is now
01:18:205 (5) - ^ doesn't fit with song
01:22:677 (7,8) - should be changed to circle, 1/2slider, then a circle. i like the way it is now
Like this
01:26:403 (2,1,2) - spacing inconsistency here. 01:26:403 (2,1) - is separated with a 1/1 beat while 01:27:149 (1,2) - is 1/2 beat. That means 01:26:403 (2,1) - has to be farther. This is only 3.85 difficulty so some spacing should be kept consistent unless the song allows you to have irregular spacing. (this song is a calm song, not a camellia song so it should have consistent spacing).
01:31:435 (1,1) - ctrl+g this please
01:31:062 (7,1) - make the slider point towards the circle. it is ?

For this mod i mostly focus on the flow and rhythmic patterns since those are important. There are more flow issues other than the ones i listed, so you should look it over. You also need to work on the aesthetic parts with the map because many of these patterns seem messy & out of place (and i see a lot of bad blankets, examples: 00:14:105 (6,7) - 00:18:764 (2,3) - 00:19:323 (4,5) i don't if there are on purpose or not).

So yah there'd mah mod, good luck on ranking!

no reply= fixed

thanks for the mod !

Buster

928 posts

Joined April 2016

Buster 2016-12-24T03:03:27+00:00

Normal

00:04:602 move to x:383 y:48
00:08:329 move these notes a bit low
00:30:689 move a bit downright
00:39:074 should be like this
00:43:919 move to x:216 y:48
00:46:900 move a bit up
01:05:265 move to x:120 y:240
01:08:329 (4,5,6) move a a bit down
01:10:751 move to x:280 y:328

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-12-27T00:30:27+00:00

Lolinator2000 wrote:
Normal
00:04:602 move to x:383 y:48 No thanks
00:08:329 move these notes a bit low It's fine like this
00:30:689 move a bit downright just a little
00:39:074 should be like this This is not a consistent spacing so I don't
00:43:919 move to x:216 y:48 ^
00:46:900 move a bit up It's fine like this
01:05:265 move to x:120 y:240 I move the circle 5
01:08:329 (4,5,6) move a a bit down No thanks
01:10:751 move to x:280 y:328 ^

Update~

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59385
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Last Diary
TitleUnicode:Last Diary
Artist:Eri Sasaki
ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
Creator:-Latias-
Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags:plastic memories visual novel opening op ps vita celsiuslk shogunmoon lefia
BeatmapID:1122743
BeatmapSetID:500800

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CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.95
SliderTickRate:1

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2016-12-30T00:28:35+00:00

hi Celsius

Celsius
00:44:851 (3) - unsnapped

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-11T17:32:50+00:00

Hi, from queue.~

[

General]

Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version?
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

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[

Farewell]

00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat.
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo.
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them.
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.

So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.

[

Celsius' Hard]

00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance.
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section.
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped.
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple?
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket.
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png

[

Shogun's Normal]

I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.

00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you.
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider?
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket?
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) -
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want.

Lefia's diff is fine.

Good luck.~

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-11T23:26:33+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ General]
Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version? i dont know what this is . ill ask people for help with this one
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

[]

[ Farewell]
00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat. some nc's are there to introduce new music like 00:11:869 (1,1,1) - (transition in to faster music), while other nc's were my fault. mostly it was to introduce to new music or to emphasis specific places
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo. hmm, i see what you mean. ill do change, but aesthetically speaking, this make it ugly imo. lets see what other modders (if i get others) see about this
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them. following vocals here, 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) is same sound throughout
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.hmm, the stack is here b/c of music. listen closely and you hear it. its also there to show the 'ending' of these jumps
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.if i were to put 3 on 1, it would create 2 things that i want to avoid. abnormal spacing, and it would mess the look of triangle. as for "it can be misread", i feel thats a good thing as this section of jumps are really diffrent than the other jump sections in this map
So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.
Good luck.~

no reply = fixed

thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-12T14:10:45+00:00

-Latias- wrote:
hi Celsius

Celsius
00:44:851 (3) - unsnapped i think it's ok the vocal sound is on 1/6

Mir wrote:
[ Celsius' Hard]
00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance. i think it sound not really noticeable at 100% speed like the one at the reverse slider
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section. rhythm pattern here is like rhythm with triplet -> rhythm with no triplet -> rhythm with triplet to make sure the intensity is fair for hard diff imo
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png rhythm kinda feel weird there for me i don't want to focus on vocal or piano much here since the first thing that come from this rhythm is the sound of instrument on white tick so i want player to only focus on that suddenly switch to vocal halfway like that would just make thing pretty awkward there for me because vocal also start on the offbeat which sound pretty unnatural
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped. yea , it's like a way to transition to the next rhythm which sound different , i think it better to let the player have time to prepare for the next rhythm that sound different
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple? vocal sound is 1/6
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket. ok
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png not following vocal , the sound on white tick is kinda a fade in sound so i think i map it like that

Good luck.~

thanks for the mods

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-12T18:49:53+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ Shogun's Normal]
I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.
00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you. Fixed
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png I don't too much want to map on the vocal.
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider? ^
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo. It doesn't matter, I leave that like that.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png Fixed
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket? Fixed
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end. But it's fine this is not a very strong beat.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) - No thanks
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want. Fixed

Good luck.~

Thanks for modding!~

asadaf

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Graffin

131 posts

Joined June 2014

Graffin 2017-01-12T20:23:56+00:00

NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
00:01:994 (4,1) -
00:03:484 (1,2) -
00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) -
00:28:267 (3,4) -
00:30:503 (4,5) -
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these
nothing wrong, good diff

normal and easy are fine
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-12T23:40:33+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
00:01:994 (4,1) - its a fine blanket here
00:03:484 (1,2) -
00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) - this wasnt suppose to be blanket as it was suppose to be the same as 00:24:726 (4)
00:28:267 (3,4) - if i were to blanket these two together, it would make that entire section ugly
00:30:503 (4,5) - it is blanketed ?
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped i disagree. there is a sound there for a triple
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5 its there to show end of jumps,along with the distance
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat want to be consistent with other diffs
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

aetwuns

138 posts

Joined July 2016

aetwuns 2017-01-13T04:50:28+00:00

Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis

Good luck with ranking

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-13T13:42:06+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis Fixed

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this No thanks, it's sound good already

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for modding!

agf

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-13T23:48:33+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here since modders said a lot of this note, removed !

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so hmm, i think spacing here is good, as there is clear indication of a new "section" or part of music

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis it would sound weird if this was the only triple of the map, plus i dont think it fits well here

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for the mod !

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-01-14T23:00:54+00:00

metadata q~!

Red - Currently incorrect

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Artist: 佐々木恵梨
Romanised Artist: Eri Sasaki
Title: Last Diary
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add "Recalling" to tags

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midori_wah

426 posts

Joined April 2015

midori_wah 2017-01-16T18:22:17+00:00

Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider.
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity.
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle.

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional.
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.)

[Shogun's Normal]
All good to go (according to an underleveled mapper).

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai.

Okay another done, more to go.

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-17T00:35:13+00:00

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider. 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) all has the same sound
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity. not meant to emphasis, just jumps. if i were to change the shape, it would make it harder to read
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle. there a sound at 01:25:472 though
Okay another done, more to go.

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-17T13:17:58+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2 uh ok
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these looks fine tbh for me
nothing wrong, good diff

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis no i prefer my current rhythm since it express the feel of the vocal and fade in of the instrument on 01:24:354 (1) - better

Good luck with ranking

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional. this is intentional to fully emphasis the strong piano 00:03:112 (2) - at 100% speed
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.) i don't think it necessary to do that , it's the end of song now so nothing after that imo

Okay another done, more to go.

Thanks

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-01-19T13:07:48+00:00

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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer here
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer

shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read

lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c

gl

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-19T20:41:10+00:00

Lasse wrote:
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shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice Fixed
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too Fixed
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read Fixed

gl

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-20T01:12:53+00:00

Lasse wrote:
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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer herei don't see a place where it could be not ignored
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

gl

no reply = fixed
thanks for the big mod !

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2017-01-22T05:04:09+00:00

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai. fixed

Okay another done, more to go.

Lasse wrote:
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lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c will try to reduce it

Thanks for the mod~

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-22T14:54:25+00:00

Lasse wrote:
celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer yea

gl

thanks

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Hishiro Chizuru

Hishiro Chizuru 2017-01-24T00:48:10+00:00

Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt.

Farewell

00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) -
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well)
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it)
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)

Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-24T01:24:22+00:00

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt. its okie, we all have to start from somewhere

Farewell
00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow the flow diffrence is to differentiaite 00:01:994 (4,5) from 00:01:621 (3) . since it has some new music
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there 00:09:261 (2,3) is starting up in to a faster part of song
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) - changed a bit
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well) 00:59:385 (1,2,3) the jumps here are to represent starting in to kiai time, and the distance from 01:00:316 (1) seems fine
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before distance represents 'new' part of music
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it) not suppose to blanket here, as i'm just connecting the slider to the next part of the song
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)way to big of a jump

Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!

thanks !

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-01-27T09:33:38+00:00

hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?
really messy diff imo...

gl

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-28T01:44:20+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.i suck at nc's
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude00:18:950 (3,4) , i always map this part of the music like this, so i see no reason to not map that here. ill decrease spacing for 5 and 4, which also awnsers the mod below
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..the entire part of the music there is the same thing, so thats why its stacked like that
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?i think spacing is fine here since its the really quite end part of the song
really messy diff imo... im sorry

gl

thanks for the mod !

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-02-02T09:58:49+00:00

m4m

Easy :
- combo color?
- AR 3 is best for easy diff
- 00:03:857 (1) - move to 164,224 for at least make a symmetrical with 00:02:366 (2) - ? if u agree then fix spacing for rest
- 00:18:577 - finish
- 00:16:341 - whistle for piano
- 00:21:000 (4) - i think a circular flow will work better for smoother flow here try move to 428,176?
- 00:43:546 (2) - drum sampleset because there is drum sound
- 00:55:472 (2) - i prefer to remove this, its kinda weird to map here when the vocal is weak
- 00:59:757 (2) - i know you follow music but in easy diff you dont have to follow anything so i think you better remove this for give a little break for newbie
- 01:02:180 (3,1) - also the score from (3)'s tail doesnt cover for (1)'s tail but i still not recommended stack them in short time like this
- 01:08:143 (3,4) - having 3/2 gap for them might make newbie confuse especially (4) is circle (when they have to click it) so try this instead http://puu.sh/tKQbz/3305637564.jpg
- 01:26:776 (1) - easy diff needs 1 full measure for recovery after spinner so you have to remove this
- 01:27:894 - whistle for strong piano and guitar snare
- 01:30:689 (4,5) - 1/2 gap isnt allowed

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle?
- 00:03:484 - ^
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x?
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree.

Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-02-03T00:07:46+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m
Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?i dont want to stack since 00:18:205 (1) starts a new part of music, so thats why its not stack
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~

no reply=fixed
thanks for the mod !:D

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-03T00:30:05+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

good luck~

All fixed! Thanks for modding~

Hereee

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-02-05T13:26:06+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle? yea
- 00:03:484 - ^ same
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal fixed
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x? mmm ok i decreased a bit
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree. i agree

good luck~

all fixed

thanks xinely

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Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2017-02-08T16:32:28+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Easy :
- combo color?
- AR 3 is best for easy diff i'm trying to avoid overlap, but fixed
- 00:03:857 (1) - move to 164,224 for at least make a symmetrical with 00:02:366 (2) - ? if u agree then fix spacing for rest nope, i want to make it stack
- 00:18:577 - finish fixed
- 00:16:341 - whistle for piano fixed
- 00:21:000 (4) - i think a circular flow will work better for smoother flow here try move to 428,176? nice advice, thanks!
- 00:43:546 (2) - drum sampleset because there is drum sound fixed
- 00:55:472 (2) - i prefer to remove this, its kinda weird to map here when the vocal is weak keep it
- 00:59:757 (2) - i know you follow music but in easy diff you dont have to follow anything so i think you better remove this for give a little break for newbie okay, will remove it
- 01:02:180 (3,1) - also the score from (3)'s tail doesnt cover for (1)'s tail but i still not recommended stack them in short time like this fixed
- 01:08:143 (3,4) - having 3/2 gap for them might make newbie confuse especially (4) is circle (when they have to click it) so try this instead http://puu.sh/tKQbz/3305637564.jpg fixed
- 01:26:776 (1) - easy diff needs 1 full measure for recovery after spinner so you have to remove this fixed
- 01:27:894 - whistle for strong piano and guitar snare fixed
- 01:30:689 (4,5) - 1/2 gap isnt allowed fixed

Thanks for the mod!

update

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A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-02-11T20:59:53+00:00

From my queue

[Farewell]

00:00:876 (1,2) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMhI/ec546000bf.jpg
00:03:857 (1) - ^
00:06:745 (8,1) - Spacing waaay too big
00:06:466 (5) - http://puu.sh/tYMpz/52412e1332.jpg like this
00:07:956 (4) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMss/0676f1c536.jpg
00:08:888 (6) - better flow http://puu.sh/tYMvx/0e12f906b9.jpg
00:10:751 (1,2) - CTRL+G
00:18:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns could be made much more interesting
00:35:347 (1) - remove NC
00:44:664 (1) - ^
00:43:546 (1) - ^
00:42:615 (6) - NC
00:51:559 (2) - NC
00:51:372 (1) - remove nc
01:03:298 (1,2) - swap NC
01:01:807 (5) - place NC
ETC you know always place NC on big white tick

[Hard]

01:06:838 (2) - that flow is.. meh

[Easy]

00:18:577 (1) - Blanket fix pls
00:26:217 (2) - ^
00:30:689 (1) - ^
00:38:143 (3) - ^
etc.. check your blankets pls

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-02-11T22:43:56+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
From my queue

[Farewell]
00:00:876 (1,2) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMhI/ec546000bf.jpg
00:03:857 (1) - ^
00:06:745 (8,1) - Spacing waaay too big
00:06:466 (5) - http://puu.sh/tYMpz/52412e1332.jpg like this
00:07:956 (4) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMss/0676f1c536.jpg
00:08:888 (6) - better flow http://puu.sh/tYMvx/0e12f906b9.jpg
00:10:751 (1,2) - CTRL+G
00:18:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns could be made much more interestinghmm, since theres not much new sounds here ill keep it like this. if another mod complains something about this ill change
00:35:347 (1) - remove NC
00:44:664 (1) - ^
00:43:546 (1) - ^
00:42:615 (6) - NC it is for me
00:51:559 (2) - NC
00:51:372 (1) - remove nc
01:03:298 (1,2) - swap NC
01:01:807 (5) - place NC
ETC you know always place NC on big white tick

no reply=fixed
thanks for the mod !:D

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-02-16T13:59:00+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
[Hard]

01:06:838 (2) - that flow is.. meh what do you mean ? i fixed the slider curve btw lol

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