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Duca - Jewel Days

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 09, 2017 at 7:54:52 AM

Artist: Duca
Title: Jewel Days
Source: Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-
Tags: visual novel eroge lotta ensemble ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ asaiga yamicchi
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4421kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asaiga's Insane (4.6 stars, 478 notes)
  2. Easy (1.64 stars, 158 notes)
  3. Hard (3.25 stars, 336 notes)
  4. Illumination (5.65 stars, 485 notes)
  5. Normal (2.12 stars, 217 notes)
  6. Yamicchi's Extra (5.23 stars, 504 notes)
Download: Duca - Jewel Days
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Need mods :)

GD by Asaiga and Yamicchi
Asaiga
First

GD dekittaaaaaaaaaa xd

Edit : Update lại, có polish + hitsound 1 tí

Thêm '' lotta ensemble ♪ '' vào tag. Với asaiga và yamicchi thì để sau cũng dc.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62534
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38534
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Jewel Days
TitleUnicode:Jewel Days
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:thai0109
Version:Asaiga's Insane
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ ―ジュエルデイズ―
Tags:game visual novel eroge golden marriage ensemble -Jewel Days-
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lilyanna
hi from q

add ur gders names in tags
e:

00:34:700 (2,3) - blanket
01:58:534 (4) - nc

n:

00:07:700 (1) - why this nc and this not 00:10:367 (3) -
01:18:534 (1,2) - this flow wierd maybe stack these 01:18:200 (5,2) -
01:20:867 (4,1) - u blanket here maybe blanket this also 01:19:867 (3,4) -
01:32:200 (1,3) - make them symmetrical
01:58:534 (3) - still can nc

h:

00:40:200 (2,3) - they are not parallel
00:42:534 (1) - imo dont like the slider shape maybe make the red node in between the white like a liner at least
01:02:367 (1) - remove nc add nc here on the downbeat 01:02:534 (3) - instead
01:58:534 (5) - nc

sorry if i didnt help, Good luck!
Topic Starter
0109-

Lilyanna wrote:

hi from q

add ur gders names in tags
e:

00:34:700 (2,3) - blanket fixed
01:58:534 (4) - nc no :(

n:

00:07:700 (1) - why this nc and this not 00:10:367 (3) - fixed
01:18:534 (1,2) - this flow wierd maybe stack these 01:18:200 (5,2) - its not weird :(
01:20:867 (4,1) - u blanket here maybe blanket this also 01:19:867 (3,4) - not necessary
01:32:200 (1,3) - make them symmetrical fixed
01:58:534 (3) - still can nc as above :(

h:

00:40:200 (2,3) - they are not parallel fixed
00:42:534 (1) - imo dont like the slider shape maybe make the red node in between the white like a liner at least don't really understand this :(
01:02:367 (1) - remove nc add nc here on the downbeat 01:02:534 (3) - instead fixed
01:58:534 (5) - nc nope

sorry if i didnt help, Good luck!
Thanks for modding :)
[MTF] Wolfette
Hard:

00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - These all would be better off as 3 hitcircles rather than a reverse arrow slider
00:16:867 (6) - NC
00:22:367 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:367 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:700 (3) - Move to x:400 y:100
00:37:700 (2) - Move to x:296 y:152
00:46:534 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:700 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:200 (2) - NC

Asaiga's Insane:

00:07:367 (5) - Move to x:164 y:264
00:07:534 (6) - Move to X:256 Y:192
00:08:867 (5) - Move to X:152 Y:204
00:10:200 (7) - Move to X:160 Y:68
00:11:200 (4) - Move to X:160 Y:292
00:11:367 (5) - Move to X:276 Y:268
00:11:534 (6) - NC
00:12:534 (3) - NC
00:12:534 (3) - Move to X:288 Y:344
00:12:867 (5) - Move to X:172 Y:236
00:16:534 (1) - Move to X:364 Y:192
00:16:700 (2) - Move to X:364 Y:100
00:16:867 (3) - Move to X:256 Y:100
00:17:034 (4) - Move to X:152 Y:100
00:24:867 (4) - NC
00:25:200 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:700 (3) - Move to X:432 Y:152
00:29:867 (4) - Move to X:280 Y:264
00:30:034 (5) - Move to X:284 Y:152
00:30:534 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:867 (2) - NC
00:31:867 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:034 (2) - Move to X:432 Y:100
00:32:034 (2) - NC
00:32:200 (3) - Move to X:320 Y:36
00:32:367 (4) - Move to X:280 Y:96
00:34:867 (2) - Move to X:184 Y:164
00:35:367 (5) - Move to X:152 Y:84
00:35:534 (6) - Move to X:352 Y:84
00:42:034 (2) - Move to X:172 Y:316
00:48:200 (5) - NC
00:49:200 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:700 (2) - NC
01:20:534 (2) - NC

Wow. This took a while to mod
Topic Starter
0109-

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Hard:

00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - These all would be better off as 3 hitcircles rather than a reverse arrow slider too hard for a hard diff :(
00:16:867 (6) - NC fixed
00:22:367 (1) - Remove NC not suit with the finsh sound
00:24:367 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:28:700 (3) - Move to x:400 y:100 why :(
00:37:700 (2) - Move to x:296 y:152 it's need to emphasize the finish sound
00:46:534 (1) - Remove NC No :(
00:55:700 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:56:200 (2) - NC no, it's weird :(
Thanks for modding :)
Asaiga

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Asaiga's Insane:

00:07:367 (5) - Move to x:164 y:264 I see that you are trying to create a perfect triangle here, but it would cause overlap with 00:06:867 (3) - and I intended to make the distance like that.

00:07:534 (6) - Move to X:256 Y:192 did you make a mistake on your coordinate, because it looks unreal to me xD
00:08:867 (5) - Move to X:152 Y:204 Ahhh I see we are having a different mapping styles here. I intended to make it go like that
00:10:200 (7) - Move to X:160 Y:68 This sound is stronger thus spacing is bigger. Plus 00:10:200 (7,1) - this gets the emphasis as well
00:11:200 (4) - Move to X:160 Y:292 No thanks xD
00:11:367 (5) - Move to X:276 Y:268 From my point of view, it would just throw the player off with such angle and spacing and flow
00:11:534 (6) - NC Yes
00:12:534 (3) - NC No
00:12:534 (3) - Move to X:288 Y:344 Sorry, I don't map with straight angles like that
00:12:867 (5) - Move to X:172 Y:236 ^
00:16:534 (1) - Move to X:364 Y:192 //
00:16:700 (2) - Move to X:364 Y:100 //
00:16:867 (3) - Move to X:256 Y:100 //
00:17:034 (4) - Move to X:152 Y:100 What era are we in? xDDD
00:24:867 (4) - NC Ok
00:25:200 (1) - Remove NC Ye
00:29:700 (3) - Move to X:432 Y:152 00:29:534 (2,3) - Angle is intended
00:29:867 (4) - Move to X:280 Y:264
00:30:034 (5) - Move to X:284 Y:152 00:29:034 (1,4,5) - Here is a stack
00:30:534 (1) - Remove NC not because it's on one stream, doesn't mean it can't have nc
00:30:867 (2) - NC
00:31:867 (1) - Remove NC same
00:32:034 (2) - Move to X:432 Y:100 Moved somewhere else instead
00:32:034 (2) - NC
00:32:200 (3) - Move to X:320 Y:36 not really xD
00:32:367 (4) - Move to X:280 Y:96 will cause overlap
00:34:867 (2) - Move to X:184 Y:164 will damage readability
00:35:367 (5) - Move to X:152 Y:84 The instrument's sound doesn't rise here and so is spacing
00:35:534 (6) - Move to X:352 Y:84 same
00:42:034 (2) - Move to X:172 Y:316 wanted to emphasise this 00:42:034 (2,3) -
00:48:200 (5) - NC no
00:49:200 (1) - Remove NC ye
00:49:700 (2) - NC no
01:20:534 (2) - NC I think spacing like this is enough

Wow. This took a while to mod Thanks for your time! But don't be disheartened, the problem with your mod is that you are applying your view of mapping on others maps and that is the least favorite thing that every mapper would like to receive. I went through all the coordinates you gave me to see how did you come up with that and it just not MY intention . I'm not saying your modding is wrong, but from the look of it, it's not right either. When I first saw this I thought : ''maybe just a few mm for aesthetic look'' but after 3 lines of your mod I was disappointed. Good luck!
small update
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194,334,68200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,230,68367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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348,285,74034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,150,74200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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365,159,76867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,120,77034,2,0,P|158:129|108:221,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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325,222,77700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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325,222,77867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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217,126,78200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,305,78367,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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450,249,79200,2,0,P|449:203|438:167,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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245,243,81034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,243,81117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,243,81200,6,0,P|309:268|394:226,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,133,81700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,95,81867,2,0,P|308:134|313:172,1,75
384,41,82200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,36,82367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,199,82534,5,8,0:0:0:0:
295,261,82700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,91,82867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,195,83034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,58,83200,5,8,0:0:0:0:
167,78,83367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,265,83534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,160,83700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,160,83784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,160,83867,2,0,P|262:150|177:154,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,348,84534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
343,239,84700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
202,338,84867,2,0,P|178:290|172:255,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,104,85200,6,0,P|77:132|71:229,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,231,85700,2,0,P|300:230|322:228,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,101,86034,2,0,P|218:100|176:106,1,75,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,253,86367,6,0,P|192:314|262:323,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,242,86867,2,0,P|323:229|286:229,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,164,87200,2,0,P|215:172|242:170,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,94,87534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,56,87700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,83,87867,6,0,L|98:254,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,297,88367,2,0,P|256:234|220:165,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,75,88867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,75,89034,6,0,P|325:156|338:231,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,311,89534,2,0,P|462:265|461:226,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,310,89867,2,0,L|261:298,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,269,90200,2,0,L|167:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,171,90534,6,0,P|257:138|181:179,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,56,91034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,56,91200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,188,91367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,147,91534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,68,91700,6,0,P|235:50|327:63,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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478,335,92534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
494,228,92700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,332,92867,2,0,L|266:314,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,269,93200,6,0,L|251:255,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,191,93534,2,0,L|297:179,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,124,93867,2,0,L|209:110,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,84,94200,5,0,0:0:0:0:
394,79,94284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,89,94367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,111,94450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,142,94534,6,0,L|447:296,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,194,95034,2,0,L|351:278,1,75
241,189,95367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,299,95534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,272,95700,6,0,P|69:225|165:235,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,96200,2,0,L|191:115,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,29,96534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,138,96700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,38,96867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,38,96950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,37,97034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,37,97117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,38,97200,6,0,P|385:90|369:185,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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270,27,98200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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290,227,99867,6,0,L|133:246,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,37,100534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
146,122,100700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
26,230,100867,2,0,P|24:190|43:146,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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333,32,101534,2,0,L|425:39,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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275,194,102200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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242,241,102367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,270,102450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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322,245,103534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,218,103700,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,191,103867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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205,306,104200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,258,104367,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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242,86,105034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,86,105117,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,86,105200,2,0,P|312:81|388:85,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,317,105867,6,0,L|471:235,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,123,106200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,198,106367,6,0,P|305:208|220:201,1,134.999995880127,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,120,106867,2,0,P|137:169|141:200,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,315,107200,2,0,P|110:308|155:318,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,345,107534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,198,107700,5,2,0:0:0:0:
209,198,107784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,198,107867,2,0,P|201:136|205:45,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,74,108534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
331,142,108700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,11,108867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,190,109034,6,0,B|440:249|418:290|418:290|401:253,1,134.999995880127,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,142,109534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,152,109700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,227,109867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,58,110034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,221,110200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,142,110367,5,2,0:0:0:0:
331,142,110450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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225,263,111534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
42,215,111700,6,0,P|55:152|125:124,1,134.999995880127,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,170,112200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,325,112367,2,0,P|131:268|138:236,1,67.4999979400635
226,172,112700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,296,112867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,296,112950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,296,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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387,124,113534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,125,113700,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,206,113867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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153,86,114534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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239,224,115034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,86,115200,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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333,54,115534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,110,115700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,282,115867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
299,336,116034,2,0,L|208:333,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,207,116367,5,4,0:0:0:0:
246,248,116534,2,0,L|170:235,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,87,116867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
205,28,117034,2,0,L|271:17,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,157,117367,5,4,0:0:0:0:
277,107,117534,2,0,L|358:115,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,281,117867,5,4,0:0:0:0:
338,190,118034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,295,118367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118450,12,0,126534,0:0:0:0:
Left
lol song too nice OoO
Silky
sorry for late, M4M back :3
my English isn't good, I hope your understanding><

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.

General

  1. I think this songs source is "Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-" cuz official staffs called this game so, "ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ" should move to tags
  2. please add "Asaiga" to tags
  3. don't you use custom hitsounds like Traveler's tale? xdd

Easy

  1. 00:28:367 - 00:28:700 (2) - add finish instead of whistle?
  2. 00:47:200 (2,3) - you should avoid stack like this in Easy, these stacks are a bit hard to read for beginners imo
  3. 00:51:200 - make clickable for crash sound?
  4. 00:57:200 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this rhythm, I'd like make rhythm like this

Normal

  1. 00:10:200 (2,1) - 00:13:034 (1,2) - you could make consistency with 01:48:867 (2,3,4) - 01:51:534 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  2. 00:34:867 (2,4) - umm I thought you stack these on 00:35:034 (3,1) - , like 00:44:367 (2,3) - 00:48:200 (4,5) - 00:55:534 (3,1) - 01:43:700 (3,4) -
    (you did unstack only there xd)
  3. 00:51:534 (4,1) - this stack get confuse easily 1/1 and 1/2, unstack pls

Hard

  1. 00:14:200 (4,5,6) - use 1/4 reverse instead of triple? Insane diff used 1/4 slider in there
  2. 00:19:867 (5,1,2,3) - you could use same DS, not good appearance ><
    also 00:19:867 (5,1) - switch NC for easier to read 1/1 rhythm?
  3. 00:30:534 (5,1) - ^
  4. 01:02:367 (5) - switch NC or 01:01:534 (2,3,4) - decreasing DS? 01:01:867 (3,4,5) - I thought these are 1/2 when I played this for the first time
  5. 01:04:367 (2,3,1) - why did you use x1.5 ...
  6. 01:38:867 (2,3) - whistle for what...? use clap is better imo
  7. 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - same as 00:14:200 (4,5,6) -

Extra

  1. 00:18:700 (3) - add NC
  2. 01:02:367 (1,2,1) - if you changed same point in hard diff, please remove 01:02:534 (1) - 's NC
  3. 01:09:700 (2,3) - this 3/4 is unnaturally compared with others, please try use 1/2
  4. 01:12:200 (1) - is this NC really necessary...?
  5. 01:31:034 (2,3) - same as 01:09:700 (2,3) -
  6. 01:33:534 (1) - same as 01:12:200 (1) -
  7. 01:38:867 (2,3) - same as hard, clap is better imo
  8. 01:44:950 (2,3,4) - I got misread on the first play lol, try this?

gl :3
Topic Starter
0109-

Kanau wrote:

sorry for late, M4M back :3
my English isn't good, I hope your understanding><

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.

General

  1. I think this songs source is "Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-" cuz official staffs called this game so, "ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ" should move to tags fixed
  2. please add "Asaiga" to tags fixed
  3. don't you use custom hitsounds like Traveler's tale? xdd I will add some :)

Easy

  1. 00:28:367 - 00:28:700 (2) - add finish instead of whistle? I don't like to spam finishes here
  2. 00:47:200 (2,3) - you should avoid stack like this in Easy, these stacks are a bit hard to read for beginners imo fixed
  3. 00:51:200 - make clickable for crash sound? I prefer the current one
  4. 00:57:200 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this rhythm, I'd like make rhythm like this
    good recommendation but i think new players may misreading this

Normal

  1. 00:10:200 (2,1) - 00:13:034 (1,2) - you could make consistency with 01:48:867 (2,3,4) - 01:51:534 (2,3,4,5,6) - fixed
  2. 00:34:867 (2,4) - umm I thought you stack these on 00:35:034 (3,1) - , like 00:44:367 (2,3) - 00:48:200 (4,5) - 00:55:534 (3,1) - 01:43:700 (3,4) -
    (you did unstack only there xd) fixed
  3. 00:51:534 (4,1) - this stack get confuse easily 1/1 and 1/2, unstack pls fixed

Hard

  1. 00:14:200 (4,5,6) - use 1/4 reverse instead of triple? Insane diff used 1/4 slider in there well i guess it's not a problem
  2. 00:19:867 (5,1,2,3) - you could use same DS, not good appearance >< fixed
    also 00:19:867 (5,1) - switch NC for easier to read 1/1 rhythm? fixed
  3. 00:30:534 (5,1) - ^ fixed
  4. 01:02:367 (5) - switch NC or 01:01:534 (2,3,4) - decreasing DS? 01:01:867 (3,4,5) - I thought these are 1/2 when I played this for the first time fixed
  5. 01:04:367 (2,3,1) - why did you use x1.5 ... fixed
  6. 01:38:867 (2,3) - whistle for what...? use clap is better imo fixed
  7. 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - same as 00:14:200 (4,5,6) - yeah

Extra

  1. 00:18:700 (3) - add NC fixed
  2. 01:02:367 (1,2,1) - if you changed same point in hard diff, please remove 01:02:534 (1) - 's NC fixed
  3. 01:09:700 (2,3) - this 3/4 is unnaturally compared with others, please try use 1/2 I wanna keep the consistency here
  4. 01:12:200 (1) - is this NC really necessary...? fixed
  5. 01:31:034 (2,3) - same as 01:09:700 (2,3) - ^^
  6. 01:33:534 (1) - same as 01:12:200 (1) - ^
  7. 01:38:867 (2,3) - same as hard, clap is better imo fixed
  8. 01:44:950 (2,3,4) - I got misread on the first play lol, try this?
    the sound changed which needs something to emphasize i think

gl :3
Thanks for modding :)
Hikan
randum mod lul

Easy
felling sad since my diff was rejected :(

  1. 00:30:534 (1) - this shape looks ugly, please change
  2. 00:27:867 (1,2,3) - try this, this one will be better for making flow i guess
  3. 01:23:200 (3,1) - good position to make it symmetrical
  4. 01:13:200 (1) - make this slider toward to 01:14:034 (2) - this circle maybe will be nicer imo ( like this, or something you can imagine)

Hard
  1. 00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - Just a few idea I found when I saw that
  2. 00:19:867 (1,2,3,4) - Because those are just the same DS, so maybe you can make a square here ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068081 )
  3. 01:01:034 (1) - I recommend you to improve this slider, it isn't adequacy yet, and 01:28:367 (2) - this too
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - Try putting it at position (360;16)

Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:27:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the sound must be this
  2. 01:07:534 (4) - This circle must be deleted, to emphasis the slider at 01:07:700 (1) - .Otherwise, if that beat is needful, I recommend you to change from 01:07:034 (2,3) - to 2 short slider, like something you did at 01:25:700 (2,3,1)
  3. 01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Balance DS please
  4. 01:45:200 (7) - Change this to a reverse slider, to follow a rhythm at 01:45:367 -
  5. 01:58:534 - Please add the circle at here, it's very necessary to highlight the end of the song

Extra
Should give some cool name for this diff instead of Extra only XD

  1. Ctrl + G 00:07:200 (3,4) - will make flow more better I guess
  2. Same with this, Ctrl + G 00:09:867 (3,5) - for a better flow imo
  3. 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - It will looks cooler if you add more curvy
  4. 00:28:034 (2,3) - How about Ctrl + G them? It will be easier to play, and more familiar too
  5. 00:34:034 (4,5,1) - Improve this triangle, try putting 00:34:367 (1) - at position (237;39)
  6. 00:38:700 (2,3) - Ctrl +G them? For flow, always, but it's up to you
  7. 00:40:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - Dem, this stream looks so ugly, please fix it D:
  8. 00:50:534 (4,5,6) - Balance DS, try putting 00:50:700 (5) - at position (192;296)
  9. 00:51:617 (2,3,4,1) - Thôi không bắt cái này nữa đâu huhu D:
  10. 01:01:367 (1,2,3,1,2) - For beautiness, I recommend you to make a star here
  11. Those 01:38:867 (2,3) - circles are overlapped with 01:38:367 (1) - So I think you can Ctrl + J 01:38:867 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - all of this. Then, 01:39:867 (1,2,1) - will become a beautiful triangle <3 <3 (pp rain). Anyway it's up to you
Well, the last part is fun to play and it's fine imo

Good luck with ranked hjhj Noob modder + trash Engrisk, sorry :<
Topic Starter
0109-

Hikan wrote:

randum mod lul

Easy
felling sad since my diff was rejected :(

  1. 00:30:534 (1) - this shape looks ugly, please change không ảnh hưởng lắm
  2. 00:27:867 (1,2,3) - try this, this one will be better for making flow i guess lul nó cũng như nhau mà
  3. 01:23:200 (3,1) - good position to make it symmetrical như thế này là được rồi :)
  4. 01:13:200 (1) - make this slider toward to 01:14:034 (2) - this circle maybe will be nicer imo ( like this, or something you can imagine) không cần thiết lắm :(

Hard
  1. 00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - Just a few idea I found when I saw that đẹp đó như không ảnh hưởng lắm :(
  2. 00:19:867 (1,2,3,4) - Because those are just the same DS, so maybe you can make a square here ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068081 ) ok
  3. 01:01:034 (1) - I recommend you to improve this slider, it isn't adequacy yet, and 01:28:367 (2) - this too không ảnh hưởng đâu kệ đi :)
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - Try putting it at position (360;16) ok

Extra
Should give some cool name for this diff instead of Extra only XD

  1. Ctrl + G 00:07:200 (3,4) - will make flow more better I guess không đâu :(
  2. Same with this, Ctrl + G 00:09:867 (3,5) - for a better flow imo như nhau thôi mà
  3. 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) - It will looks cooler if you add more curvy thế này là ổn rồi
  4. 00:28:034 (2,3) - How about Ctrl + G them? It will be easier to play, and more familiar too hay
  5. 00:34:034 (4,5,1) - Improve this triangle, try putting 00:34:367 (1) - at position (237;39) không cần thiết lắm
  6. 00:38:700 (2,3) - Ctrl +G them? For flow, always, but it's up to you nó cũng như nhau thôi
  7. 00:40:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - Dem, this stream looks so ugly, please fix it D: bình thường mà?
  8. 00:50:534 (4,5,6) - Balance DS, try putting 00:50:700 (5) - at position (192;296) ok
  9. 00:51:617 (2,3,4,1) - Thôi không bắt cái này nữa đâu huhu D: bình thường mà ...
  10. 01:01:367 (1,2,3,1,2) - For beautiness, I recommend you to make a star here không thích star lắm
  11. Those 01:38:867 (2,3) - circles are overlapped with 01:38:367 (1) - So I think you can Ctrl + J 01:38:867 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - all of this. Then, 01:39:867 (1,2,1) - will become a beautiful triangle <3 <3 (pp rain). Anyway it's up to you flow sida ...
Well, the last part is fun to play and it's fine imo

Good luck with ranked hjhj Noob modder + trash Engrisk, sorry :<
yay <3 :)
LMT
  • [Extra]
  1. 00:14:200 (4,5,6,1) - tick xanh có 1 nốt nữa nên để trống hơi bị hẫng. có thể để cái 6 là 1/4 slider jump sang 1 (giảm chút spacing nếu đổi).
  2. 00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - chỗ này cần làm nổi bật cách tick xanh hơn vì trống snare nhấn âm ở tick xanh. Thử như vầy xem sao https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6076555 .
  3. 00:21:534 (2,1) - nếu đổi như trên thì nerf chỗ này 1 chút tại vừa phải read pattern khó -> ra đây dễ chút.
  4. 00:22:034 (2) - stack với 1 chứ ko có thể nhầm là 1/2 , đang còn là tick đỏ nữa.
  5. 00:28:700 (2) - ^

    Nếu sửa mấy chỗ vừa rồi thì đừng quên sửa mấy cái sau vì cấu trúc.
  6. 00:40:534 (3,4) - bắt đầu stream bằng tick xanh khá khó chịu, nên thử đổi 3 thành circle sau đó bắt đầu stream bằng tick đỏ. Còn nếu muốn giữ slider thì stack 4 với 5 để người chơi nhận biết đây là triple sang tick trắng, nhưng đây là pattern khó, trừ khi có cấu trúc mới sử dụng pattern đó.
  7. 00:47:200 (4) - ở đây đổi rhythm pattern nên phải để người chơi nhận biết được 5 là slider tick đỏ, thử stack 4 lên 5 xem.
  8. 01:53:200 (1,2,3) - vì spacing ở đây to (hơi quá to đấy =)) cẩn thận ng ta kêu pp map ) , nên 01:52:867 (2,3) - cũng nên để spacing to to 1 chút để cho người chơi có chút quán tính, bây giờ nhỏ quá nên lúc thấy cái jump to rất giật mình. Thử kiểu này: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6076645 .

    [Asaiga's Insane]
  9. 00:28:200 (3,4,5) - select cả 3 xong ctrl+g cho ra đúng giai điệu, sau đó stack 3 (circle) lên 4 (slider) để thông báo là đảo rhythm pattern.
  10. 00:32:200 (3,4,5) - đây đúng nè mà sao chỗ trên sai :V . Nếu stack cái ở trên thì stack luôn cái này .
  11. 00:35:034 (3) - cái này thành 1/2 slider thì nổi bật hơn vì nốt này có guitar + piano + trống + vocal dồn vào.
  12. 00:50:367 (1) - đổi rhythm pattern so với cái ô trước có thể để 1 cái flow break hay gì đó tại vì vocal là nhấn ở tick trắng, làm cho rõ là cái slider này đang theo trống thì tốt hơn.
  13. 01:01:034 (2,1) - cẩn thận là đọc nhầm 1/2 với 1/1 nhé
  14. 01:02:367 - map triple đê tại trống dồn.
  15. 01:23:534 (3,4) - sao ko map 5 nốt luôn?
  16. 01:44:867 (4) - ^, đặc biệt ở đây còn mạnh hơn.
  17. 01:58:450 (1) - y u no map downbeat :(

    [Hard]
  18. 00:24:867 (2) - có lẽ nên map 3 nốt ở đây thay vì slider tick trắng vì vocal nhấn âm ở tick đỏ (mà slider diễn đạt vocal tốt hơn trống) nên map 3 circle để thể hiện trống tốt hơn.
  19. 00:45:034 - nên map 1 circle ở đây vì nhạc ko dừng lại. Nguyên ô nhịp này ko có 1/1 gap nào, với cả ở đây có 1 nốt piano.
  20. 01:07:034 (2) - nhấn âm ở đuôi slider yếu lắm. Thử map 3 1/2 slider xem sao.
  21. 01:09:700 (2) - ^ nguyên cấu trúc luôn

    [Normal]
  22. 00:49:034 - ở đây nên map 1 nốt nữa để highlight dồn trống. Khó tí cũng được đoạn chuyển tiếp này đủ mạnh mà.
  23. 01:02:367 - map 1 nốt đây để tránh gap 3/2 với cả để highlight trống.

    [Easy]
  24. 00:07:200 (2,3) - 3/2 gap này hơi vô duyên cho người mới chơi, đặc biệt là còn mới vô bài chưa quen giai điệu. Nên để 2 là reverse slider. (Nếu thấy đúng thì remap hơiiiiii mệt :< )
  25. 00:09:867 (2,3) - ^
  26. 00:57:200 (1,2,3) - chỗ này simplify hơi quá. Thử như vầy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6076810 . Sau đó duỗi thẳng 3 ra bởi 1 là slider thẳng :V .
  27. 01:46:867 (3,4) - ở tick đỏ thì đúng hơn. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6076824 .
  28. 01:49:367 (3,4) - ^
  29. 01:53:200 (1) - easy thì mấy cái flow break này hơi lạ cho người chơi mới, ctrl+h?
Cái diff easy coi vậy chứ khó làm vãi :| ...
gl
Asaiga

Hikan wrote:

randum mod lul lel

Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:27:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the sound must be this hmu
  2. 01:07:534 (4) - This circle must be deleted, to emphasis the slider at 01:07:700 (1) - .Otherwise, if that beat is needful, I recommend you to change from 01:07:034 (2,3) - to 2 short slider, like something you did at 01:25:700 (2,3,1) Um, có lý. Deleted
  3. 01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Balance DS please Muốn nhấn mạnh chỗ này 01:18:200 (3,1) -
  4. 01:45:200 (7) - Change this to a reverse slider, to follow a rhythm at 01:45:367 - Không có map theo tiếng guitar.
  5. 01:58:534 - Please add the circle at here, it's very necessary to highlight the end of the song ừ ha, dở. Added

Good luck with ranked hjhj Noob modder + trash Engrisk, sorry :< nice mod

LMT1996 wrote:

[Asaiga's Insane]

00:28:200 (3,4,5) - select cả 3 xong ctrl+g cho ra đúng giai điệu, sau đó stack 3 (circle) lên 4 (slider) để thông báo là đảo rhythm pattern. ye
00:32:200 (3,4,5) - đây đúng nè mà sao chỗ trên sai :V . Nếu stack cái ở trên thì stack luôn cái này . really? người chơi đọc dc chỗ này mà nhỉ :-?. Mà thôi kệ, stacked. to avoid drama lel
00:35:034 (3) - cái này thành 1/2 slider thì nổi bật hơn vì nốt này có guitar + piano + trống + vocal dồn vào. are you telling me to destroy my lovely star pattern? :(. K, changed
00:50:367 (1) - đổi rhythm pattern so với cái ô trước có thể để 1 cái flow break hay gì đó tại vì vocal là nhấn ở tick trắng, làm cho rõ là cái slider này đang theo trống thì tốt hơn. I see I see
01:01:034 (2,1) - cẩn thận là đọc nhầm 1/2 với 1/1 nhé moved
01:02:367 - map triple đê tại trống dồn. ooo
01:23:534 (3,4) - sao ko map 5 nốt luôn? vậy sao không hỏi chỗ này 01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - . Lý do là muốn để jump triangle chỗ này + để triple
01:44:867 (4) - ^, đặc biệt ở đây còn mạnh hơn. khó ghê hà, muốn giảm độ khó của map cũng ko dc nữa
01:58:450 (1) - y u no map downbeat :( forgot
aaa
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Topic Starter
0109-
@LMT: đã fix nhưng ko nhớ là fix cái j do mỗi lúc sửa 1 tẹo @@ :(
Ward74
Easy

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1,5-2,5 = Normal
0.5-1.5= Easy

So reduce the difficult easy

For me you easy is ready for ranked after reduce under 1.5 star 8-)

Good job et Good continuations :)
DeletedUser_423548
Hi! From my queue 8-)

日本語で行きます


  • [General]
  1. 問題ないと思います

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:06:534 - から00:19:534 - まではclapの音が目立つのでclap部分をwhistleにしても良いかも
    目立ちすぎてうるさいです
  2. 00:19:867 (1) - Easyにしては少し奇怪なスライダーかも
  3. 00:21:700 - 00:22:034 - Add whistleなんてどうでしょう?
  4. 00:23:200 - Add clapなんてどうでしょう?
    カスタムの音が鳴っているので良いと思います
  5. 00:31:534 - ピアノに合わせてwhistleあっても良いと思います
  6. 00:32:367 - 00:32:700 - Add whistleなんてどうでしょう?
  7. 00:33:867 - Add clap
    00:23:200 -同じ理由
  8. 00:49:200 (1,1) - stackしませんか?
  9. 00:56:200 (1) - 短すぎると思うのでNC外しませんか?
  10. 01:04:367 - 01:04:700 - 01:05:034 - ここのfinishと同様に01:07:034 - 01:07:367 - 01:07:700 - にclap 又は whistleを入れたほうがいいかも
    物足りない感じがします
  11. 01:09:700 - 01:10:034 - 01:10:367 - ^
    似たようなところは省きます

  • [Normal]
  1. 全体的にwhistleをもっと使ったほうがいいかも
  2. 00:06:534 - 00:19:534 - Easyと同じ理由で
  3. 00:07:700 (1) - 短いと思います NC外しましょう
    00:10:367 (1) -  00:13:034 (1) -  00:23:700 (1) -  00:34:367 (1) -  00:40:034 (1) -  00:45:200 (1) -  00:55:700 (1) -  01:01:034 (1) -  01:03:867 (1) -  01:14:867 (1) -  01:25:200 (1) -  01:38:867 (1) -  01:46:367 (1) -
  4. 00:22:700 (4,1) - 真横に移動するよりスライダーの流れにあわせて置いてみませんか?
  5. 00:28:367 (2,3) - blanketが大きくずれています
    blanketじゃない場合はスルーしてください
  6. 00:30:534 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:23:200 - 01:23:534 - Add clap

  • [Extra]
    00:29:034 (1) - asymmetry!
    slider endを少し左にしてsymmetryにしませんか?
  1. 00:41:200 - 00:51:867 - 少し静かになるパートなのでスライダーの速度を遅くしませんか?
    1.00のままだと早いように感じます
  2. 01:04:367 (2,3) - 見た目が悪いです
    01:07:034 (2,3) - と同じように傾斜を同じにしませんか?
  3. 01:25:700 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:44:534 (1,2,3,4,1) - 流れや音取りがつかみづらいです
    こうしませんか?
あまり良いmodはできませんでした :o

Good luck!
Topic Starter
0109-

Yasaija 714 wrote:

Hi! From my queue 8-)

日本語で行きます


  • [General]
  1. 問題ないと思います

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:06:534 - から00:19:534 - まではclapの音が目立つのでclap部分をwhistleにしても良いかも
    目立ちすぎてうるさいです そう思いませんね
  2. 00:19:867 (1) - Easyにしては少し奇怪なスライダーかも ほとんど 長いBeatだったら、このようなスライダーをよく使っていると思います
  3. 00:21:700 - 00:22:034 - Add whistleなんてどうでしょう? いいね!
  4. 00:23:200 - Add clapなんてどうでしょう?  あまり 合わないね
    カスタムの音が鳴っているので良いと思います
  5. 00:31:534 - ピアノに合わせてwhistleあっても良いと思います 
  6. 00:32:367 - 00:32:700 - Add whistleなんてどうでしょう? ok!
  7. 00:33:867 - Add clap  
    00:23:200 -同じ理由 ^x2
  8. 00:49:200 (1,1) - stackしませんか? もう消えちゃったので、良いです
  9. 00:56:200 (1) - 短すぎると思うのでNC外しませんか? ok!
  10. 01:04:367 - 01:04:700 - 01:05:034 - ここのfinishと同様に01:07:034 - 01:07:367 - 01:07:700 - にclap 又は whistleを入れたほうがいいかも
    物足りない感じがします Cymbalのある所にclapとかは 合わないと思います
  11. 01:09:700 - 01:10:034 - 01:10:367 - ^ 
    似たようなところは省きます

  • [Normal]
  1. 全体的にwhistleをもっと使ったほうがいいかも 
  2. 00:06:534 - 00:19:534 - Easyと同じ理由で 
  3. 00:07:700 (1) - 短いと思います NC外しましょう
    00:10:367 (1) -  00:13:034 (1) -  00:23:700 (1) -  00:34:367 (1) -  00:40:034 (1) -  00:45:200 (1) -  00:55:700 (1) -  01:01:034 (1) -  01:03:867 (1) -  01:14:867 (1) -  01:25:200 (1) -  01:38:867 (1) -  01:46:367 (1) - fixed some :)
  4. 00:22:700 (4,1) - 真横に移動するよりスライダーの流れにあわせて置いてみませんか? いいね!
  5. 00:28:367 (2,3) - blanketが大きくずれています fixed :)
    blanketじゃない場合はスルーしてください
  6. 00:30:534 (1,2) - ^ ずれていないよ
  7. 01:23:200 - 01:23:534 - Add clap ok!

  • [Extra]
    00:29:034 (1) - asymmetry!
    slider endを少し左にしてsymmetryにしませんか? fixed :)
  1. 00:41:200 - 00:51:867 - 少し静かになるパートなのでスライダーの速度を遅くしませんか?
    1.00のままだと早いように感じます Drumの音がまだ続いているから、大丈夫と思います
  2. 01:04:367 (2,3) - 見た目が悪いです 
    01:07:034 (2,3) - と同じように傾斜を同じにしませんか? このままで 良いと思います
  3. 01:25:700 (2,3) - ^ ^
  4. 01:44:534 (1,2,3,4,1) - 流れや音取りがつかみづらいです
    こうしませんか?
いいね!

あまり良いmodはできませんでした :o

Good luck!
Modしてくれて ありがとう。 :)
Asaiga
Update technical NCs
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
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Title:Jewel Days
TitleUnicode:Jewel Days
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:0109-
Version:Asaiga's Insane
Source:Golden Marriage -Jewel Days-
Tags:game visual novel eroge lotta ensemble ゴールデンマリッジ ジュエルデイズ asaiga yamicchi
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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spIyrg
[Hard]:
Too forgiving. You need to make it a little more draining.
[Extra]:
01:58:200 (2) - should have a finish hitsound

Otherwise it's all good from me.
Topic Starter
0109-
@AmateurMonkeyYT: I don't think so :(

Anyway thanks for modding :)
Arutsuki
hello

Asaiga's Insane
00:08:200 (2) - the sound at the slider end should be clickable too, try changing with a circle and put a slider after
00:28:701 (5) - ctrl+G
00:29:534 (2,3) - ^, move them closer to the next two to make it a square
01:03:200 (5) - ^
01:19:534 (6) - ^
makes it flow better imo

Yamicchi's Insane
first rename it to extra plz
00:13:700 (4,5) - same sound as 00:13:200 (2,3), why the long slider
from 00:14:534 (1) to 00:19:034 (2) - a little confusing to read, maybe space the sliders a bit more
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - this angle feels weird
00:34:034 (6,7) - same sound as 00:33:867 (5) - move 7 to like x:400 y180
stack 01:03:534 (4) with 01:03:034 (2)
01:16:700 (3) - ctrl + j

last diff is pretty good as it is, doubt I can be any help there
good luck tho!
Yamicchi

Arutsuki wrote:

Yamicchi's Insane
first rename it to extra plz depends on 0109-'s decision
00:13:700 (4,5) - same sound as 00:13:200 (2,3), why the long slider didn't hear the sound. fixed
from 00:14:534 (1) to 00:19:034 (2) - a little confusing to read, maybe space the sliders a bit more made some changes
00:22:867 (3,4,5) - this angle feels weird hmmm okay
00:34:034 (6,7) - same sound as 00:33:867 (5) - move 7 to like x:400 y180 obviously I made a wrong decision on the hitclap so yea fixed a bit
stack 01:03:534 (4) with 01:03:034 (2) no need
01:16:700 (3) - ctrl + j nah I don't like that flow

last diff is pretty good as it is, doubt I can be any help there
good luck tho!
Thanks

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Asaiga

Arutsuki wrote:

hello

Asaiga's Insane
00:08:200 (2) - the sound at the slider end should be clickable too, try changing with a circle and put a slider after not really
00:28:701 (5) - ctrl+G not necessary and I prefer flow this way
00:29:534 (2,3) - ^, move them closer to the next two to make it a square wasn't intended to make a square
01:03:200 (5) - ^ no thx
01:19:534 (6) - ^ no circular flow because clap and it doesn't matter
makes it flow better imo yea, but not necessarily feel good while playing

good luck tho!
thx
Aloda
Hi.
The source should be the original (Japanese) title of the game, not the romanisation. It should be 'ゴールデンマリッジ ―ジュエルデイズ―'.
You can add the romanisation to the tags.
gl with the map c:
Garden
randomly found the last spinner hard to pass with hr lol
http://puu.sh/sR0ZW/55a36ca0a9.jpg
Hanazawa Kana
nice song and map!
dont grave ahhhhhhh
Asaiga

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

dont grave ahhhhhhh
dont grave ahhhhhhh
TequilaWolf
mod
Extra-

00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - any reason why only 00:18:200 (1) - is curved slider? maybe curve all or straighten all to keep it consistent
00:19:867 (1,2,3) - would use 1/2 sliders instead of circles, feels like it transitions better into the stream
01:17:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything this feels like it should be small ds -> big not the other way round
01:21:700 - there's a sound here ya?

nothing much for me, very clean map!
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Topic Starter
0109-

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
Extra-

00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - any reason why only 00:18:200 (1) - is curved slider? maybe curve all or straighten all to keep it consistent it's not really a problem
00:19:867 (1,2,3) - would use 1/2 sliders instead of circles, feels like it transitions better into the stream that's weird
01:17:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything this feels like it should be small ds -> big not the other way round i don't really get it :(
01:21:700 - there's a sound here ya? fixed :)

nothing much for me, very clean map!
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Thanks for modding
Firiiu
Ill be honest, I may not have the best hearing, so if there are sounds where I say there aren't I'm sorry.
General
SPOILER
Ill be honest, in Extra I had no idea what you were following, the voice or drums. Half was voice half was drums.
Yamicchi's Extra
SPOILER
00:47:034 (2,3,4) - Blue tick doesnt have a sound on it, no need for triple.
00:55:034 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:200 (7) - Probably be better if this was a 1/4th slider with repeats.
01:50:284 (4) - This doesnt have a sound on it.

Extra
SPOILER
00:06:867 (2,3,4) - These do not flow at all.
00:11:367 (5,6) - You could put a triple here instead, since theres a drum hit on the blut tick in between.
00:14:200 (4,5,1) - Making 5 a 1/4th slider would fir the song, as there is a drum sound on the blue tick, and that seems to be what your following here.
00:28:367 (1,2,1) - On the white ticks in between here there are loud hits that you should cover
00:49:700 - I see your following the voice here, but you could probably fit a circle on this red tick here.
01:02:867 (4) - There is a slider end on a strong part of the song.
01:03:367 (6,7) - 6 is where the voice starts and would be a better place to start the slider.
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - This doesnt flow, you could turn the slider upward instead and then it would flow better.
01:50:200 (4,5,6,7) - This stream should be a triple instead, as 5 doesnt land on a sound at all. (and theres also a hit on the blut tick before 4)

Sorry for a small mod I can mod anything other than extra and hard insanes..nor am I that good..
mindmaster107
Sorry I cannot find anything else :(

[Extra]
00:34:367 (1) - This is over-mapping a bit, since 00:13:034 (1) is the same shape, and it represents a more complex sound. Change the slider to match --> 00:35:700 (1)
00:48:367 (1) - /\
01:36:534 (4,5) - These should have clap sounds on them.
01:56:367 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - These jumps are off to the side. Maybe to emphasize the changing intensity, move it down and up rather than to the side.
Topic Starter
0109-
i followed both

Extra
SPOILER
00:06:867 (2,3,4) - These do not flow at all. these do
00:11:367 (5,6) - You could put a triple here instead, since theres a drum hit on the blut tick in between. fixed :)
00:14:200 (4,5,1) - Making 5 a 1/4th slider would fir the song, as there is a drum sound on the blue tick, and that seems to be what your following here. no sound on the blue tick
00:28:367 (1,2,1) - On the white ticks in between here there are loud hits that you should cover yeah
00:49:700 - I see your following the voice here, but you could probably fit a circle on this red tick here. fixed :)
01:02:867 (4) - There is a slider end on a strong part of the song. what do you mean?
01:03:367 (6,7) - 6 is where the voice starts and would be a better place to start the slider. i followed the drum here
01:18:534 (1,2,3) - This doesnt flow, you could turn the slider upward instead and then it would flow better. it does
01:50:200 (4,5,6,7) - This stream should be a triple instead, as 5 doesnt land on a sound at all. (and theres also a hit on the blut tick before 4) fixed :)

Sorry for a small mod I can mod anything other than extra and hard insanes..nor am I that good..

mindmaster107 wrote:

Sorry I cannot find anything else :(

[Extra]
00:34:367 (1) - This is over-mapping a bit, since 00:13:034 (1) is the same shape, and it represents a more complex sound. Change the slider to match --> 00:35:700 (1) fixed
00:48:367 (1) - /\ ^
01:36:534 (4,5) - These should have clap sounds on them. no :(
01:56:367 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - These jumps are off to the side. Maybe to emphasize the changing intensity, move it down and up rather than to the side. fixed
Thanks for modding
Sakurauchi Riko
hi, #modreqs

easy
00:07:200 (2,3,1) - maybe make them like this http://puu.sh/uppzM/35fd13e07e.jpg so it looks more structured (and aeshetically it has a better look imo). i think theres no worry for hard flow for beginners

some blankets are a bit off like for example 00:46:534 (1,2) - 00:37:200 (3,4) - or 00:34:700 (2,3) - try to polish them a little bit more.

01:01:867 (3,1) - newbies follow the path of this short slider while more experienced players wouldnt. so this sudden movement change to the next object, even though a movement change is justified cuz start of kiai, is pretty awkward to hit for the player. so maybe try to connect them to each other a bit more

01:18:534 (1) - move the shape a bit to the left like this http://puu.sh/upq41/954c2d4745.jpg so the slider flows better to 01:19:534 (2) - . you can even consider adding a slight curve to make it flow more better

01:23:200 (3,1) - this may be my style but since you had such a movement change for the beginning of the first kiai, i think you should do this somewhat here too. currently it flows perfectly which means no empahsis at all, but yeah... up to you

01:29:867 (2,3) - blanket them too so you get a nice pattern?

01:41:867 (5,3) - stack

01:45:867 (2,3,1,2,3) - this is a mess if you look at your blankets, every blanket is off here :(

normal
really hard for me to mod this because our sense of aesthetic are very different here i think. easy looked really clean to me while this difficulty doesnt. it feels like you didnt put much effort in this diff but maybe thats just me. i think its just because yeah... our sense of aesthetic varies here...
01:33:867 (4,2) - avoid this overlap :D

hard
00:17:700 (3,1,2,3) - youz should increase the DS slightly here aswell as you did before with these finish sounds
00:21:200 (1) - this too because here 00:24:367 (1) - you did the increase again
00:29:867 (3) - ^
00:30:534 (1) -
00:31:867 (1) - yeah you should go through this diff and make this consistent
00:37:200 (1) - here is no finish sound, no emphasis basically only the vocal pitches a bit but you empahsize it with DS increase... looks pretty inconistent overall if you ask me because 00:37:700 (2) - is finsih again (stronger emphasis in music and your hitsounds) but you dont icnrease DS here

00:34:367 (1,3) - generally a nice idea but i think since the sliderhead of 00:35:034 (3) - gets slightly overlapped it doesnt look really neat, so idk.. personal preference i guess lol

01:23:784 - add circle here, you begin the first kiai with 1/4 rhythm too

01:47:700 (5,6,1) - 01:50:367 (5,6,1) - are manually ds'ed while 01:02:367 (1,2,3) - 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - are automatically stacked. idk if you thought something by doing this because i dont get it >< if you didnt then u should make it consistent


cant really mod high sr diff but i can say that it plays nicely :D fun to play

btw i think 5.24* is rather considered as an expert/extra difficulty. maybe you can name the 5.24* extra and find for your highest diff a cool custom name
hope i could help you a little bit!
best of luck with your map!
Lami
extra

00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - plz same ds
00:13:034 (1) - yes, plz finish
00:48:367 (1) - ^
01:00:867 (1,2) - increase DS?
01:04:367 (2,3) - actually, i don't think this 3/4 rhythm usage is good choice,
just 1/2 slider is better. simply
01:21:867 (3,5) - avoid weird stack..?
01:22:700 (6,1,2,3,4) - listen carefully, new melody start at 01:22:700 - ,
reconsider to swap NC 01:22:534 (5,1) - . and also reparttening 01:22:534 (5,6,1,2,3,4) -
doesn't follow song as well. imo.
01:33:200 (1,1) - why nc spaming :/ compare with 01:11:867 (1,2,3,4) -
01:40:200 (1) - remove nc
01:44:700 - aa not good idea, skiping this beat. since no basis for putting 3/4 slider 01:44:534 - .
00:11:367 (5,6,7) - is triplet but not 01:50:034 (5,6) - .
00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm.. i know every note don't keep same rhythm usage in everytime.
but compare with 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - they are really different.....
01:57:700 (3,2) - avoid overlap
01:58:700 (1) - aa plz no hp 6.5. it will make discourage HR player, by long spinner at HP 6.5 with hardrock = fail
change to hp6

need more hitsound work, let example, 00:22:867 (2,3,4) - , 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) -
song have really pretty drum, but there is no any hitsounds.
also, non-custom hitsound(especially clap) doesn't fit with song, imo.



will continue later...
Topic Starter
0109-

Phyloukz wrote:

hi, #modreqs

easy
00:07:200 (2,3,1) - maybe make them like this http://puu.sh/uppzM/35fd13e07e.jpg so it looks more structured (and aeshetically it has a better look imo). i think theres no worry for hard flow for beginners fixed

some blankets are a bit off like for example 00:46:534 (1,2) - 00:37:200 (3,4) - or 00:34:700 (2,3) - try to polish them a little bit more. fixed
01:01:867 (3,1) - newbies follow the path of this short slider while more experienced players wouldnt. so this sudden movement change to the next object, even though a movement change is justified cuz start of kiai, is pretty awkward to hit for the player. so maybe try to connect them to each other a bit more i'll ask for more others opinion to see if it really need to be changed

01:18:534 (1) - move the shape a bit to the left like this http://puu.sh/upq41/954c2d4745.jpg so the slider flows better to 01:19:534 (2) - . you can even consider adding a slight curve to make it flow more better fixed

01:23:200 (3,1) - this may be my style but since you had such a movement change for the beginning of the first kiai, i think you should do this somewhat here too. currently it flows perfectly which means no empahsis at all, but yeah... up to you

01:29:867 (2,3) - blanket them too so you get a nice pattern? i didnt tend to create a blanket here

01:41:867 (5,3) - stack that's fine

01:45:867 (2,3,1,2,3) - this is a mess if you look at your blankets, every blanket is off here :( those look fine lol

normal
really hard for me to mod this because our sense of aesthetic are very different here i think. easy looked really clean to me while this difficulty doesnt. it feels like you didnt put much effort in this diff but maybe thats just me. i think its just because yeah... our sense of aesthetic varies here...
01:33:867 (4,2) - avoid this overlap :D fixed

hard
00:17:700 (3,1,2,3) - youz should increase the DS slightly here aswell as you did before with these finish sounds
00:21:200 (1) - this too because here 00:24:367 (1) - you did the increase again
00:29:867 (3) - ^
00:30:534 (1) -
00:31:867 (1) - yeah you should go through this diff and make this consistent fixed
00:37:200 (1) - here is no finish sound, no emphasis basically only the vocal pitches a bit but you empahsize it with DS increase... looks pretty inconistent overall if you ask me because 00:37:700 (2) - is finsih again (stronger emphasis in music and your hitsounds) but you dont icnrease DS here fixed

00:34:367 (1,3) - generally a nice idea but i think since the sliderhead of 00:35:034 (3) - gets slightly overlapped it doesnt look really neat, so idk.. personal preference i guess lol it's fine i guess

01:23:784 - add circle here, you begin the first kiai with 1/4 rhythm too fixed

01:47:700 (5,6,1) - 01:50:367 (5,6,1) - are manually ds'ed while 01:02:367 (1,2,3) - 01:52:867 (4,5,6) - are automatically stacked. idk if you thought something by doing this because i dont get it >< if you didnt then u should make it consistent i made those consistent with the beginning


cant really mod high sr diff but i can say that it plays nicely :D fun to play

btw i think 5.24* is rather considered as an expert/extra difficulty. maybe you can name the 5.24* extra and find for your highest diff a cool custom name
hope i could help you a little bit! i'll think about it :)
best of luck with your map!

Lami wrote:

extra

00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - plz same ds fixed
00:13:034 (1) - yes, plz finish fixed
00:48:367 (1) - ^
01:00:867 (1,2) - increase DS? okay :)
01:04:367 (2,3) - actually, i don't think this 3/4 rhythm usage is good choice,
just 1/2 slider is better. simply im not really like putting 1/2 sliders here
01:21:867 (3,5) - avoid weird stack..? its fine

01:22:700 (6,1,2,3,4) - listen carefully, new melody start at 01:22:700 - ,
reconsider to swap NC 01:22:534 (5,1) - . fixed and also reparttening 01:22:534 (5,6,1,2,3,4) -
doesn't follow song as well. imo. i dont really get it..
01:33:200 (1,1) - why nc spaming :/ compare with 01:11:867 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
01:40:200 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:44:700 - aa not good idea, skiping this beat. since no basis for putting 3/4 slider 01:44:534 - . fixed
00:11:367 (5,6,7) - is triplet but not 01:50:034 (5,6) - . fixed
00:17:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm.. i know every note don't keep same rhythm usage in everytime.
but compare with 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - they are really different.....fixed
01:57:700 (3,2) - avoid overlap fixed
01:58:700 (1) - aa plz no hp 6.5. it will make discourage HR player, by long spinner at HP 6.5 with hardrock = fail fixed
change to hp6

need more hitsound work, let example, 00:22:867 (2,3,4) - , 00:24:867 (2,3,4,5,1) -
song have really pretty drum, but there is no any hitsounds.
also, non-custom hitsound(especially clap) doesn't fit with song, imo. yeah..



will continue later...
Thanks for modding :)
Lami
modding #2
yea, no kd

easy

00:13:867 (3) - move left a bit, too close with 00:14:534 (1) -

normal

00:40:034 (1) - nc remove
01:01:034 (1) - ^
01:14:867 (1) - ^
01:38:867 (1) - ^
01:58:200 (6,1) - inconsistent DS



hard

01:06:534 (1,2) - blanket?

insane

00:50:367 (1) - well.. i don't make sense 1/1 slider here.
because this slider is unique rhythm usage which don't fit with vocal.
01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - since you already use many some stream partten,
why don't you skip this mostly stressed drum. xd
01:23:700 (4) - nc plz
01:03:034 (4) - pretty different rhythm usage, compare with 01:24:367 (4) -
01:38:200 (3,1) - buff DS, emphasis vocal and finish?
01:40:534 (1) - remove nc
01:40:367 - fill up rhythm
01:57:367 (1,1) - not important, but stack?

Yami

00:13:867 - clickable?
00:20:200 (2) - really weak beat, reduce volume or remove whislte.
slider's end too.
00:33:867 (5,6) - , 00:23:200 (4,5) - i guess you might put different partten by 00:34:200 (7) - ,
but i wish you make sure your partten design on the same part.
00:35:117 (5) - really overmapping, imo.
00:41:700 (2,3) - , 00:43:034 (2,3) - feel kinda unbalance DS, because (1,2) really small DS.
this DS is so contrasting at same NC cycle.
i think 00:44:367 (2,3) - is appropriate maximum DS.
00:58:034 (4,2) - player can see reverse arrow well?
01:02:034 (5,6) - i wish you handle this kinda weird overlap
01:22:367 (4,1) - placed straight same line. with 01:22:367 (4,5) -
Yamicchi

Bacwux wrote:

Yamicchi's Extra
SPOILER
00:47:034 (2,3,4) - Blue tick doesnt have a sound on it, no need for triple.
00:55:034 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:200 (7) - Probably be better if this was a 1/4th slider with repeats.
01:50:284 (4) - This doesnt have a sound on it. so is 01:50:117 (2) - and I believe I made that for intensity

Lami wrote:

Yami

00:13:867 - clickable? not necessary ^^
00:20:200 (2) - really weak beat, reduce volume or remove whislte. not really a weak beat since it represent's the piano pretty well
slider's end too.
00:33:867 (5,6) - , 00:23:200 (4,5) - i guess you might put different partten by 00:34:200 (7) - ,
but i wish you make sure your partten design on the same part.
00:35:117 (5) - really overmapping, imo.
00:41:700 (2,3) - , 00:43:034 (2,3) - feel kinda unbalance DS, because (1,2) really small DS.
this DS is so contrasting at same NC cycle. i dont get what you mean here
i think 00:44:367 (2,3) - is appropriate maximum DS.
00:58:034 (4,2) - player can see reverse arrow well?
01:02:034 (5,6) - i wish you handle this kinda weird overlap
01:22:367 (4,1) - placed straight same line. with 01:22:367 (4,5) - it doesn't look bad to me at least ^^
Thanks for the mod, and sorry I'm in a rush can't reply to you guys properly

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Asaiga

Lami wrote:

insane

00:50:367 (1) - well.. i don't make sense 1/1 slider here. fixed
because this slider is unique rhythm usage which don't fit with vocal.
01:17:700 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - since you already use many some stream partten, at that time i didn't want diff spike, now changed
why don't you skip this mostly stressed drum. xd
01:23:700 (4) - nc plz done
01:03:034 (4) - pretty different rhythm usage, compare with 01:24:367 (4) - fixed
01:38:200 (3,1) - buff DS, emphasis vocal and finish? buffed. there is snare sound
01:40:534 (1) - remove nc done
01:40:367 - fill up rhythm this happens everywhere in the map, so i don't think it's a problem here
01:57:367 (1,1) - not important, but stack? i like it this way
thanks

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Lasse
00:35:367 - should probably have finish since music spams cymbals here

extra
00:13:034 (1,3) - as much as I like 1/1 sliders myself, they seem unfitting here cause of the skipped guitars you mapped before. also doesnrt really reflect the change in intensity compared to 00:10:367 (1) - something like http://i.imgur.com/OT2obDR.jpg for example would be nicer I think
00:17:117 - since you focus so much on guitar, mapping this with a triple or a kickslider would be nice // 01:42:534 (1) -
00:24:867 (2,3,4,5) - 00:20:867 (4,5,6,7) - these are mapped in the exact same way, but one has this piano roll in the background thats pretty noticeable, so patterning them differently would be great. like lower spacing or even stacking the drum ones (this repeats a few times)
00:40:534 (3) - since this doesnt map any held sound or whatever, I think 2 circles would be better as that lets people start the stream on the first beat of the drumroll http://i.imgur.com/lUss0yh.jpg
00:45:700 - why would you suddenly overmap 1/2? I think having a 1/1 gap here would represent the song much better. or if you dont want a gap maybe http://i.imgur.com/PTppQUN.jpg
00:51:200 (1) - stream after this emphasizes drums, but this ignores them completely, why not http://i.imgur.com/ff3oqxJ.jpg for a better transition to drums?
01:21:867 (3,5) - you dont really do overlaps like that anywhere else so it looks unfitting, why not just place it somewhere else
01:41:367 (2,3) - why suddenly a stack where the second sound is much weaker than first? doesnt really fit with your other stacks

gameplay seems alright overall. but I think this really lacks some differentiation between parts of the song. nearly the whole map uses the same sv, rhythm and base spacing making it feel very "consistent" but no in the good way, since songs also aren't consistent.
like 00:30:534 (1,2,3) - these things are nice as the give a good contrast for example
00:41:200 (1,2,3) - this part starts off nicely, lower rhythm density and way less tapping, lower spacing but then 00:43:200 (3,4,5) - already goes back to the usual "everything is jumps" patterning
only differentiation the chorus has is these 3/4 sliders


yamicchi
maybe rename to expert instead of extra to have some more "progression" in the names?00:06:242 -
00:06:242 - add a green line with ~25% volume here I think. repeats sound a bit too loud for the piano // 00:20:867 (1) - here too and for others
00:17:117 - see extra
00:34:034 (6) - think it would be nice to have this a 1/2 slider since your whole pattern focuses on the guitar sound and then suddenly (7) is on drums, even if it's only a stack. this way you would also get a short break in tapping, which would make 00:34:367 - where guitar is back feel more important

kinda similar issue with parts feeling a bit too "same", though here at least different sv was used for different parts


asaiga
00:14:534 (1,1,1,1,1) - the transitions between these patterns seem a bit random to me since so many different types of angles are used some more obtuse and some more acute ones
00:20:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:24:867 (1,2,3,4) - similar thing for these as top diff
00:28:367 (4) - seems weird to suddenly have cymbal under a stack when you usually emphsized it with spacing. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/de6NlW3.jpg ?
would also nicely differentiate it from 00:32:367 (4) - which has no cymbal
01:09:700 (2) - no idea why you'd suddenly use such low spacing for vocal and slider => slider transition
01:13:200 (1) - why is the end of this so "blocky" lol. how about making the second red note grey instead and moving it as bit to get http://i.imgur.com/xuW5esm.jpg ? or just http://i.imgur.com/SZncYVI.jpg
01:14:367 (1) - similar lol, think it would look more neat if you moved the last nodes a bit http://i.imgur.com/RTGS7it.jpg
01:29:034 (1) - another stack that doesn't really fit with your overall stack usage (also should probably have finish) cause you usually have them when the second sound is way less important
01:45:200 (1) - can you at least have this a 1/2 repeat? skipping red tick guitar completely seems weird
01:50:534 (3,1) - bit similar, though (1) kinda works with the vocal
01:52:367 - finish?
01:54:200 (1,2,3) - why is this the only time you map these as a line? I think just using the same thing as before and after makes more sense


hard
00:14:534 (1,2,3,4) - tapping density is a bit low here considering insane spams jumps here, could really use some 1/2 circles // 01:53:200 (1,2,3,4) - same here
spots like 00:25:117 - could probably use a 1/4 circle, since insane uses lots of 5 note streams with some spacing already
similar for things like 00:51:784 - that could be a triple for example
01:07:700 - would be nice to have the most important sound here clickable instead of being the end of a repeat slider (=one of the least emphasized objects in the game). same for things like 01:09:700 (2) -
01:23:534 (6,7,8) - emphasis wise, doing http://i.imgur.com/xzf5Bmh.jpg would make more sense since triples tend to put most pressure on the last note

normal
could really use less slider and more circles in part like 00:10:367 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for example
spots like 00:25:034 - also could just add a 1/2 circle maybe since there is a lot going on in the song
00:58:034 - rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/HRanS2e.jpg for example would work better here as current has really weird emphasis

easy
same about circles > sliders than normal
01:01:867 - i dont really think you need 1/2 sliders on a such a low difficulty

gl
Topic Starter
0109-
Yeah mostly fixed :)
Extra
00:17:117 - since you focus so much on guitar, mapping this with a triple or a kickslider would be nice // 01:42:534 (1) - i don't really get it :(

Normal/Easy
less slider and more circles i'd rather keep but.. is it really that necessary?
Asaiga

Lasse wrote:

00:35:367 - should probably have finish since music spams cymbals here added on my diff

asaiga
00:14:534 (1,1,1,1,1) - the transitions between these patterns seem a bit random to me since so many different types of angles are used some more obtuse and some more acute ones changed to stacks to avoid high SR and more appropriated to the diff
00:20:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:24:867 (1,2,3,4) - similar thing for these as top diff changed
00:28:367 (4) - seems weird to suddenly have cymbal under a stack when you usually emphsized it with spacing. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/de6NlW3.jpg ? done as suggested
would also nicely differentiate it from 00:32:367 (4) - which has no cymbal I see
01:09:700 (2) - no idea why you'd suddenly use such low spacing for vocal and slider => slider transition This map was one of a few Insane maps I started mapping back in the day I knew almost nothing. Changed now
01:13:200 (1) - why is the end of this so "blocky" lol. how about making the second red note grey instead and moving it as bit to get http://i.imgur.com/xuW5esm.jpg ? or just http://i.imgur.com/SZncYVI.jpg had no idea how to slider art xD, changed
01:14:367 (1) - similar lol, think it would look more neat if you moved the last nodes a bit http://i.imgur.com/RTGS7it.jpg done xd
01:29:034 (1) - another stack that doesn't really fit with your overall stack usage (also should probably have finish) cause you usually have them when the second sound is way less important fixed and added finish. you know my map better than i do lol *tmw I feel I mapped randomly*
01:45:200 (1) - can you at least have this a 1/2 repeat? skipping red tick guitar completely seems weird
01:50:534 (3,1) - bit similar, though (1) kinda works with the vocal fixed for consistency xd
01:52:367 - finish? added
01:54:200 (1,2,3) - why is this the only time you map these as a line? I think just using the same thing as before and after makes more sense remapped this to stacks as well

Thanks!!! hoyl only trivial errors I think, didn't have to fix that much
I feel it's coming near
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Yamicchi

Lasse wrote:

yamicchi
maybe rename to expert instead of extra to have some more "progression" in the names? I'll let you decide this for me 0109- :3
00:06:242 - add a green line with ~25% volume here I think. repeats sound a bit too loud for the piano // 00:20:867 (1) - here too and for others
00:17:117 - see extra
00:34:034 (6) - think it would be nice to have this a 1/2 slider since your whole pattern focuses on the guitar sound and then suddenly (7) is on drums, even if it's only a stack. this way you would also get a short break in tapping, which would make 00:34:367 - where guitar is back feel more important

kinda similar issue with parts feeling a bit too "same", though here at least different sv was used for different parts I couldn't really express anything back then because I was new to those kind of music, but look at a fact that the song is a bit the same itself so...
All fixed :3 Thanks Lasse

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Affirmation
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[Jewel]
00:14:034 (2) - kickslider for add a beat 00:14:117 - , this part has a weak beat,
00:26:534 (1,2,3) - weird flow
00:39:034 (1,2) - make similar pattern with 00:28:367 (1,2) -
01:02:034 (2,1) - I suggest you stacking this since you stacked in 1/1 parts. 01:01:034 (2,1) -
01:43:034 - add a beat here?
01:48:200 (2) - ctrl G looks better flow
01:58:284 - Is this part has a beat?

GL
Dstorv
Random mod, cause I love eroge the song

Jewel
00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - It would be great, if both of these are like moving horizontally, since they are both equally (similiar) sound, but one mapped by moving vertically, and the other horizontally
00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - its personal preference I guess, but I never really like when curved stream is done in small ds, cause sometime it kinda mess up when you're trying to tap it
00:33:867 (3,4,5) - shouldnt this have the same spacing?
00:36:534 (3,4) - copy-paste (4) from (3), cause its weird for me that both of this is different .-.
00:39:700 (1,2) - You're breaking the flow a lot on this
00:54:200 (5) - I would suggest to make the slider like this , so that it flow much better
00:55:034 (2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit baffled here, cos neither the vocal nor the drum support this jump (especially the jump on (2,3)), I would suggest to change 00:55:034 (2,3) - to slider, to show that the jump on (4,5) - is definitely mapped to the drum.
01:09:200 (1) - Why is this slider so weird.. .-.
01:22:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like the build-up for the massive jump on (4,5,6) is not enough
01:57:367 (1,2) - Why are the movement here is different from the rest 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ?

Hopefully, this got ranked~ :)
Topic Starter
0109-

sullywally wrote:

Random mod, cause I love eroge the song

Jewel
00:11:367 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - It would be great, if both of these are like moving horizontally, since they are both equally (similiar) sound, but one mapped by moving vertically, and the other horizontally it's fine since the ds stayed the same
00:20:867 (4,5,6,7,1) - its personal preference I guess, but I never really like when curved stream is done in small ds, cause sometime it kinda mess up when you're trying to tap it it's actually 1/8 rhythm here but using a small ds stream may be an alternate way to reflect the sound imo
00:33:867 (3,4,5) - shouldnt this have the same spacing? why lol
00:36:534 (3,4) - copy-paste (4) from (3), cause its weird for me that both of this is different .-. okay
00:39:700 (1,2) - You're breaking the flow a lot on this adjusted the slider a bit
00:54:200 (5) - I would suggest to make the slider like this , so that it flow much better agreed
00:55:034 (2,3,4,5) - I'm a bit baffled here, cos neither the vocal nor the drum support this jump (especially the jump on (2,3)), I would suggest to change 00:55:034 (2,3) - to slider, to show that the jump on (4,5) - is definitely mapped to the drum. all those notes supported the drum lol
01:09:200 (1) - Why is this slider so weird.. .-. adjusted a bit
01:22:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like the build-up for the massive jump on (4,5,6) is not enough fixed
01:57:367 (1,2) - Why are the movement here is different from the rest 01:55:867 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ? it's not really a problem tbh, the flow was fine

Hopefully, this got ranked~ :)
Thanks for modding :)
lit120
[jewel]
  1. 00:06:534 (1) - add finish
  2. 01:00:867 (1) - clap
  3. 01:21:867 (3,4,1) - clap
  4. 01:24:867 (5) - would be better for the flow if u ctrl+g this
  5. 01:55:784 - u missed a note here
[yamicchi]
  1. 01:02:034 (5) - it'd be confusing where u have to hit a note on 01:02:367 (6) - . since it's a pause part, u should stack it instead .-.
  2. 01:43:700 (4,5) - was expecting to have this a higher spacing due to its downbeat, but u didn't
[asaiga]
  1. 00:49:867 (3) - nice error stack :^)
  2. 01:18:367 (1,2,3) - what a weird start to NC it .-. would NC at 01:18:534 (3) - instead though
[hard]
  1. 00:22:367 (1,2) - not so neat blanket here
  2. 00:41:117 - a good way to do a triplet here for a better emphasize
  3. 00:43:534 (3,1) - not so neat blanket
looks like u need to do something with the hitsounds by rechecking them .-.

GL!
Topic Starter
0109-

lit120 wrote:

[jewel]
  1. 00:06:534 (1) - add finish ok
  2. 01:00:867 (1) - clap okay
  3. 01:21:867 (3,4,1) - clap whistle fits the sound better
  4. 01:24:867 (5) - would be better for the flow if u ctrl+g this i prefer mine
  5. 01:55:784 - u missed a note here ??

[hard]
  1. 00:22:367 (1,2) - not so neat blanket here i wasn't tend to make a blanket
  2. 00:41:117 - a good way to do a triplet here for a better emphasize added
  3. 00:43:534 (3,1) - not so neat blanket that looks fine
looks like u need to do something with the hitsounds by rechecking them .-. yeah :(

GL!
Thanks for modding

edit: fixed for asaiga
riffy
did a quick scan through the whole set. disagreed with a certain number of ideas, generally found Extras sort of unpolished.

IRC log
19:15 0109-: hi, um... can i have a quick check on my map please :( ?
19:16 Bakari: I guess, a quick check never hurts
19:16 Bakari: link me the set :)
19:17 *0109- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1048502 Duca - Jewel Days]
19:17 0109-: i asked 4 bns and they ignored because of generic style :|
19:22 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1048502 Duca - Jewel Days [Jewel]]
19:22 0109-: <3
19:23 Bakari: 00:34:367 (1) - considering that (1) has a finish hitsound and a new combo it probably should've been spaced further?
19:23 Bakari: 00:45:200 (1) - I don't really get the reason to curve this slider in such a way
19:24 Bakari: 00:46:534 (1) - the first/last parts of the slider aren't parallel. they also seem to be different in length
19:24 0109-: yeah ...
19:24 Bakari: don't know if this matters to you
19:24 Bakari: 00:49:200 (1,2) - probably these were meant to be a blanketed pattern
19:25 Bakari: is it this way on purpose?
19:25 0109-: yeah
19:25 Bakari: can you explain why then?
19:26 Bakari: I don't really know the lyrics/meaning of the song, so it seems to me that these are just untidy :p
19:26 Bakari: 00:50:700 (6,7) - compare this with 00:50:534 (5,6) -
19:26 0109-: hmm...
19:27 Bakari: (6) has a stronger beat, so it should be spaced further, I suppose. (7) actually doesn't really have anything to justify the jump
19:27 0109-: ok
19:28 Bakari: 00:54:867 - probably could use a circle here, leaving strong drum beat and vocals unclickable doesn't feel like the right thing to do
19:28 Bakari: 00:57:200 (1) - can you explain why it is curved this way?
19:28 0109-: i just randomly make it different from others lol :|
19:29 Bakari: what makes you think that random sliders are acceptable, though?
19:29 Bakari: mapping is all about the song, use the rhythm and ideas the song has to offer
19:29 Bakari: I'm pretty sure there is a plenty of things you could do instead of random sliders :p
19:30 0109-: yeah, i'll fix that
19:30 Bakari: 01:03:534 (7) - is objectively stronger as a beat. it has a clap sound on it as well.
19:30 Bakari: the question is: why 5-6-7 spaced the same?
19:32 Bakari: 01:39:700 (7) - I don't feel like it is strong enough to keep the spacing high, are you sure of this pattern?
19:34 Bakari: 01:52:867 (2,3) - a plain triplet would fit better both in termns of rhythm (01:53:117 - there's nothing there)
19:34 Bakari: and in terms of consistency with the map, since there were no similar patterns before
19:34 Bakari: In general, it could use more work with the jumps, as a number of those feel quite random
19:35 Bakari: and it does feel a bit unpolished visually as well. you said it was intended, but you never came up with a reason why
19:35 0109-: yeah..
19:35 0109-: okay <(")
19:36 Bakari: Well, since you asked for a quick check I'll comment on the guest difficulties as well
19:36 Bakari: not to point out any specific flaws (if there are any) but just to give a general idea
19:36 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1101027 Duca - Jewel Days [Yamicchi's Extra]]
19:37 0109-: gosh, thanks
19:37 Bakari: 00:16:534 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps feel overdone, the guitar is sort of faded and there are no other instruments. some lower spacing figures would've worked better, I suppose
19:39 Bakari: 00:34:034 (6,1) - should've been spaced higher, if I got the mapper's idea right
19:39 Bakari: it seems like they went for the drums in this part and the spacing would increase with every strong drum hit
19:39 Bakari: (1) doesn't do this, for some reason, though
19:40 Bakari: again, more of a subjective thing, 00:45:867 (1,2,3) - but I disagree with the spacing here
19:41 Bakari: 00:47:034 (2) - does (2) really provide enough strength for this jump?
19:41 Bakari: 00:47:700 (1,2) - 00:48:367 (3,4) - they are mapped in a similar way, shouldn't they represent the same idea?
19:41 Bakari: if that's so, either 1-2 should've been unstacked, or 3-4 stacked.
19:42 0109-: hmm...
19:42 Bakari: I see that the mapper is going for the vocals but I still feel quite confused about 00:51:200 - being unclickable
19:43 Bakari: 01:27:200 (3,4,6) - not sure if this kind of stacks is readable/comfortable enough for a player
19:44 0109-: yeah..
19:44 Bakari: 01:43:200 - assuming that (3) represents the highly pitched sound
19:45 Bakari: it's quite odd that 01:42:867 - is unclickable
19:45 Bakari: 01:43:867 - this is also unclickable, and this one is even stronger, it has some kind of drum support there
19:46 Bakari: 01:46:367 (1) - more of a subjective thing, but I don't understand a reason for this curve. It's not unrabkable, nor is it really wrong
19:46 Bakari: It's just something I dislike personally :p
19:47 0109-: do that kind of curved sliders really a problem?
19:47 Bakari: 01:55:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't feel like this is the right way to map it. 01:56:534 (2,3) - 01:57:534 (2,3) - are so much weaker, yet spaced in the same way
19:48 Bakari: it's not a problem, it's just something I disagree with
19:48 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074492 Duca - Jewel Days [Asaiga's Insane]]
19:48 Bakari: 00:07:700 (1) - I just don't see why
19:50 Bakari: 01:13:200 (1) - I really fail to understand this kind of slidercurves
19:51 Bakari: 01:16:367 - 01:16:700 - these beats are pretty much equal. same pitch of the vocals and drums
19:51 Bakari: same intensity
19:51 Bakari: yet one of them is clickable, the other isn't. why?
19:52 0109-: :|
19:52 Bakari: the Insane in generalfeels a bit too slow to me, not sure if that's an actual issue
19:53 Bakari: I feel like for a song this energetic a higher velocity would work better, though
19:54 0109-: i'll consider to adjust it
19:55 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047631 Duca - Jewel Days [Hard]]
19:55 Bakari: 00:16:034 (2,1) - this is kind of a jump pattern, any reasons to start using higher spacing specifically here?
19:56 0109-: the pitch kinda raised here so ...
19:56 Bakari: it did sort of similar thing with 00:15:367 (4,1) -
19:57 Bakari: 00:37:700 (2,1) - blanketing :p
19:57 Bakari: 00:40:700 - the actual 1/4 sound starts here, and not on 00:40:867 (4) -
19:57 Bakari: you're just a bit late with the triplet
19:59 Bakari: 01:37:034 (5,1) - no x1.4 spacing / 01:34:200 (3,1) - x1.4 spacing
19:59 Bakari: why? aren't these two pretty much identical?
20:00 Bakari: I mean, I could be missing something in the lyrics that explains this, it might be justified with the piano tones of some sort. It isn't necessarily wrong, I just want you to explain it
20:01 Bakari: 01:42:200 (3,1) - wouldn't it make more sense to place it in a way that would make the second reverse on (3) more obvious? I'd read it better this way http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/gdpAXplp.jpg
20:01 0109-: yeah i missed that
20:01 Bakari: that was good, though
20:02 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047632 Duca - Jewel Days [Normal]]
20:03 Bakari: 00:29:534 - 00:29:867 - 00:30:200 - I feel like these are three equally strong beats, why not just map them by placing three circles?
20:03 Bakari: or 3 short 1/2 sliders, kind of like 01:01:534 (4,5) -
20:05 Bakari: 01:07:034 (4) - this could follow vocals slightly better, so that when there is no vocals, there'd be no sliderslide effect [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711502 try this rhythm?]
20:06 Bakari: it's not bad at all, could use a bit more work here and there, but hey, it's already pretty promising
20:06 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1052500 Duca - Jewel Days [Easy]]
20:06 0109-: lol
20:07 Bakari: 00:34:700 (3,4) - blanketing :p
20:07 0109-: ._.
20:08 Bakari: 01:21:200 (1) - again, I don't really see why
20:09 0109-: those are counted as overmapped?
20:09 Bakari: nope
20:09 Bakari: they just feel random to me. there is no rule to disallow them, and I can't stop you from using these sliders
20:10 Bakari: anyways, the Easy-Normal-Hard part of the set is pretty good
20:10 Bakari: Insane feels sort of slow, but it's okay
20:10 0109-: yeah, i'll try to get those higher diffs polished, thanks for checking <3
20:11 Bakari: Extras could be imporved
20:11 Bakari: anytime
20:11 Bakari: do you want the log posted?

Hope this helped!
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Easy

  1. 00:46:200 (3,1) - can you blanket properly?
  2. 00:51:200 - missing finish? should be better to add it in order to your finish pattern

Normal

  1. 00:24:034 - i suggest to pick up this sound differently Easy diff. can you try to use 1/1 slider + circle instead? 00:35:034 (3) - same. you add finish on 00:35:367 - at other diffs. then should be better imo.

Hard

    1. HP6 is kinda high on hard. just a my preference.
    2. 01:58:534 (5) - add NC like Normal?

Asaiga's Insane

  1. 00:17:034 (4,1,2) - i think the placements is not comfortable in term of playable. can you edge from 00:17:200 (1) - ?

Yamicchi's Extra

  1. 01:34:534 (1,2) - there are close a bit i think in term of should be better to emphasize upbeat sound like 01:37:200 (1,2) -
  2. 01:58:617 (1) - can you unify spinner end with others?

Jewel

  1. nothing to say. nice work!

i cant mod anymore cuz of nice qualities and already gathered mod quantities.
sure, I love Duca's song. Good Luck!
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