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Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
KanaRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月3日 at 17:43:14

Artist: Rita
Title: Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)
Source: Marguerite Sphere
Tags: Meteor karenying SiU_Leaf
BPM: 152
Filesize: 14574kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kana (4.93 stars, 274 notes)
  2. Karen (2.03 stars, 104 notes)
  3. Leaflet (4.09 stars, 173 notes)
  4. Taiko Oni (4.67 stars, 419 notes)
Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.)
Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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13th Beatmap.
PC Game 'Marguerite Sphere' Opening theme
Rita - 笑顔のスフィア

Hope you will like it ^w^/

Mapset:
[Easy+] - By karenying
[Normal] - By SiU_LeAf
[Taiko Oni] - By me
[Kana] - By me
Herschel
bakabakana :oops:
arien666

kanopu wrote:

bakabakana :oops:
>.>
aabc271
Star~ :)
Moe BG www
PeaChick
bakana :(
Sekai
here my star ;)
S o r d a
:oops:
Alace
i got -7ms to both offsets
good job AnaRin
K o h a k u
nemurin 8-)
h3k1ru
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆
Holoaz
<333 Love Rita Love <333
-maJu
star
Kotone
subarasikibuta
cuteww
Rucker
:3
bakabaka
Star:D
Disoy
XD

加油XDD~
期待中
poringlord
Okay! I see I am the first to actually mod this so here it is:
Anything that is blue is a suggestion ;)
Red stuff is important :twisted:
Karen
Must have gone through this dificulty one hundred times and still couldn't finding anything wrong. Good for you :D

Leaftet
Shame but this difficulty isn't as good as Karen =/
00:05:766(1) Remove?
00:05:766(4,5,6,7) Kind of a deathstream for normal players
00:10:898(1,2) You should alterate the way of the slider, it should start where it ends and vice versa
00:29:545 Make a slider here with the same lenght as 1 from this combo
00:30:681 Make a slider here that has the same lenght as 2 from the same combo

00:40:454 Keep the pattern that you have been using before the rhytm is still the same (like in 00:38:636)
01:06:818 (2) Remove =/
01:14:090 (4) Remove =/=/

01:25:454 New combo*
1:27:272 Not new combo*

*You should redesign this whole segment*
01:30:681 (1) Clap!
01:36:590 Replace this with a slider like the one at 01:35:681

Kana
Same as Karen, couldn't find anything wrong here either

Overall you made very few mistakes congratulations =D
Star <3

Kudo please? :oops:
Topic Starter
KanaRin

poringlord wrote:

Okay! I see I am the first to actually mod this so here it is:
Anything that is blue is a suggestion ;)
Red stuff is important :twisted:
Karen
Must have gone through this dificulty one hundred times and still couldn't finding anything wrong. Good for you :D

Leaftet
Shame but this difficulty isn't as good as Karen =/
00:05:766(1) Remove?
00:05:766(4,5,6,7) Kind of a deathstream for normal players
00:10:898(1,2) You should alterate the way of the slider, it should start where it ends and vice versa
00:29:545 Make a slider here with the same lenght as 1 from this combo
00:30:681 Make a slider here that has the same lenght as 2 from the same combo

00:40:454 Keep the pattern that you have been using before the rhytm is still the same (like in 00:38:636)
01:06:818 (2) Remove =/
01:14:090 (4) Remove =/=/

01:25:454 New combo*
1:27:272 Not new combo*

*You should redesign this whole segment*
01:30:681 (1) Clap!
01:36:590 Replace this with a slider like the one at 01:35:681

Kana
Same as Karen, couldn't find anything wrong here either
Thanks for modding
Fixed some.
Caami
;3
SiU_LeAf
Star~☆

最喜歡此花茉莉這個名字了!! >v<
Kotone
8-) update.
koko6162006
PC gal game song ww :)
Hinacle
star~ 8-)
DarkRingSystem
8-)
KSHR
~ :)
Cyril Scarlet
;)
Potofu
( ノ゚Д゚)ノ★
Madoka
star
kanpakyin
Mod.

[General]
統一開始的地方(Taiko Oni)

[Karen]
SV過快了..
00:25:908(1.2)-拉好一點把...
00:34:999(2)-其實你是不是在偷懶?
00:45:454(x)-加音.
01:06:022(x)-由於後面已經有1個spinner.連續2個spinner一齊就會好辛苦.所以這個spinner還是刪掉然後map點東西把. :D
01:08:863(x)沒有完全消音的比要..+vol然後加finish.
01:16:136(1.2)-這個節奏不工整(藍線上).新手很難抓.所以一般(2)-都會打快.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.

[Leaflet]
00:04:286(x)-建議在這裏加個spinner.
00:27:727(1.3)-折返加whistle.
00:38:636(1)-加Finish.
00:42:272(1.3)-^同上上.
01:14:090(x)-加一個音以平衡節奏.
01:14:545(1.2)-不要stack..打起來不順手.
01:31:818(2.3.4.5)-誤導新手.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.(在E/N diff)

[Taiko Oni]
首先.你需要向Jo同學拿一張Taiko BG 8-)
00:18:636(9.10.11)-聽起來不太fit the music.而且在白線上開是triplet很怪.
00:37:727(20~)-dkdkkdk.
00:59:318(9.10.11)-刪3連.在這種不是很強烈的地方不適合3連.
01:40:227(20)-這裏放slider不太好..用一個spinner代替/map
恩...其實還有一些pattern打起來不太順手..
Rating: (10)
pattern-(4)
rhythm-(3)
total-(7/10)

[Kana]
只做一個diff=懶人mapping法!
適當的加上whistle.
00:00:635(1)-據andrea的mod.notes不太建議放在offset前,第2..開是部分聲量過大.聽起來不舒服.
00:09:714(6)-這個note未和(2.3.5)-成一直線
00:30:454(6)-移走clap.
00:40:227(1.2.3.4)-這個跳有點突然..無法預測.
00:59:090(x)-加音.

就這樣.我懶.
Topic Starter
KanaRin

kanpakyin wrote:

[Taiko Oni]
首先.你需要向Jo同學拿一張Taiko BG 8-)
00:18:636(9.10.11)-聽起來不太fit the music.而且在白線上開是triplet很怪. 好吧改了00:37:727(20~)-dkdkkdk. Ok. dkdkddk, ^o^
00:59:318(9.10.11)-刪3連.在這種不是很強烈的地方不適合3連. 唔制
01:40:227(20)-這裏放slider不太好..用一個spinner代替/map 嗯..好吧
恩...其實還有一些pattern打起來不太順手.. 明明很順手
Rating: (10)
pattern-(4)
rhythm-(3)
total-(710000/10)

[Kana]
只做一個diff=懶人mapping法! 明明是兩個阿!!笨賢!! 還有我最喜歡懶了!
適當的加上whistle. 去死吧!
據andrea的mod.notes不太建議放在offset前,第2..開是部分聲量過大.聽起來不舒服. Byebye!
00:30:454(6)- 移走clap. 嗯..好吧
00:40:227(1.2.3.4)- 這個跳有點突然..無法預測. 明明好簡單
00:59:090(x)- 加音. [/color]
就這樣.我懶. 懶鬼,咬!
紅字=不改! 藍=改!
JoJo
Star!!~~o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ ★

Edit:Taiko BG by request >w<
SPOILER

如果有细节部分(如字体)需要修改的再找我哦 ._.
No kds~
SiU_LeAf

kanpakyin wrote:

[Leaflet]
00:04:286(x)-建議在這裏加個spinner.     不要~
00:27:727(1.3)-折返加whistle.     加clap去
00:38:636(1)-加Finish.     fixed.
00:42:272(1.3)-^同上上     小葉也同上上
01:14:090(x)-加一個音以平衡節奏.     fixed.
01:14:545(1.2)-不要stack..打起來不順手.     fixed.
01:31:818(2.3.4.5)-誤導新手.     fixed.
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短.(在E/N diff)     fixed.(?)
另外, 小葉嘗試去造1個taiko background~~
結果變成這樣呢...嗯嗯嗯

Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (KanaRin) [Leaflet].osu
Kotone

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod.
[Karen]
SV過快了.. this is Easy+
00:25:908(1.2)-拉好一點把... 我覺得還好吧
00:34:999(2)-其實你是不是在偷懶? 正是
00:45:454(x)-加音. k
01:06:022(x)-由於後面已經有1個spinner.連續2個spinner一齊就會好辛苦.所以這個spinner還是刪掉然後map點東西把. :D 因為是Easy+所以大丈夫
01:08:863(x)沒有完全消音的比要..+vol然後加finish. k
01:16:136(1.2)-這個節奏不工整(藍線上).新手很難抓.所以一般(2)-都會打快. 因為是Easy+所以大丈夫
01:49:545(x)-spinner過短. k
thanks
改番呢個係easy+

Download: Rita - Egao no Sphere (Short Ver.) (KanaRin) [Karen].osu
Topic Starter
KanaRin
Ok. All fixed
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Kana

00:22:954 - 这个上面的音效换成clap好点?
00:24:090 - 个人不建议把开始的这拍放到slider尾巴上,缺少进入感。
00:37:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这stream最后3个音加clap?因为你第一个音加了,后面感觉有点轻
01:43:636 (1) - stream头部加clap感觉不好


Leaflet

AR+3


Karen

fine to me
Topic Starter
KanaRin

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Kana

00:22:954 - 这个上面的音效换成clap好点? Fixed
00:24:090 - 个人不建议把开始的这拍放到slider尾巴上,缺少进入感。
00:37:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这stream最后3个音加clap?因为你第一个音加了,后面感觉有点轻 Fixed
01:43:636 (1) - stream头部加clap感觉不好 Fixed


Leaflet

AR+3 Fixed
Thanks 豬豬
loli_milk
:3
wmfchris
taiko mod

01:04:772 - d k k d kkd, whole phrase back to 1.0x instead of putting first 3 notes at 0.75x
01:07:727 - k d k

no problem at all~

Don't know why but I think the xx xx pattern at the beginning doesn't fit well with the 3/4 beat pattern in the kiai time, make them unique? lol

Rating (-1 ~ 1)
Pattern : 1
Density : 1

:D
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
两个GD的countdown没去掉,砍了吧
。。。为什么是1250这么神奇的数1500不就好了。还是说这个可以留给妖妖妖么w
timing恐怕有问题,我觉得首先是两个offset:+4,然后最后一段总会莫名其妙early


[Karen]
Easy的slider比Normal快比较无厘头,下次先协调好吧orz
00:06:951 (3) - 往右下一点(大概是右下各两格)和前面摆菱形会不会美观点
00:20:454 (1) - 就重叠上吧这点间距没人管的
01:26:818 (3,4) - 其实换下的感觉比较好,下个1左一点

[Leaflet]
HP-1/-2。对Normal来讲太高了吧
00:04:192 - 之后不来一发spinner么
01:07:727 (1) - 建议拆成两个spinner
01:22:272 (5,6) - 消掉5和6尾的clap

[Taiko]
fine.

[Kana]
00:04:187 (1) - 感觉是让一个whistle 的note出来了再转比较好
00:59:317 (2) - 折返点该有个clap?
感觉如果要24白线就不要想长slider了,否则到那点上就有些不伦不类
Topic Starter
KanaRin

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
两个GD的countdown没去掉,砍了吧 OK
。。。为什么是1250这么神奇的数1500不就好了。还是说这个可以留给妖妖妖么w 留給妖妖妖吧(大誤
timing恐怕有问题,我觉得首先是两个offset:+4,然后最后一段总会莫名其妙early



[Leaflet]
HP-1/-2。对Normal来讲太高了吧 OK
00:04:192 - 之后不来一发spinner么 OK
01:07:727 (1) - 建议拆成两个spinner OK
01:22:272 (5,6) - 消掉5和6尾的clap OK


[Kana]
00:04:187 (1) - 感觉是让一个whistle 的note出来了再转比较好 OK
00:59:317 (2) - 折返点该有个clap? OK
感觉如果要24白线就不要想长slider了,否则到那点上就有些不伦不类 不明白,不過就這樣該沒大問題吧><
THX Rin sama
Kotone
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
These diff names... I understand them, but there's no way to tell which is easy, normal, etc... aside from star rating. Please rename with them using "karenying's Easy/Normal' and so on.

Karen
There are quite a lot of complicated rhythms... but the diff isn't hard, so it's fine. I'd just use the biggest circles out of habit, but your call.

Leaflet
Seems fine.

Kana
Seems fine.

Taiko Oni
Why doesn't it start at the same point as the others ?



Nothing to point out. Do not kudosu this post and call me back if you decide to change the diff names (or if not)
Topic Starter
KanaRin

Odaril wrote:

General
These diff names... I understand them, but there's no way to tell which is easy, normal, etc... aside from star rating. Please rename with them using "karenying's Easy/Normal' and so on.
Well. Don't worry.
I think a lot of player will read the Creator's Words. There has some information for the diff (Difficulty , mapper etc.)


Karen
There are quite a lot of complicated rhythms... but the diff isn't hard, so it's fine. I'd just use the biggest circles out of habit, but your call.
Okay. I change the circles to biggest setting.


Taiko Oni
Why doesn't it start at the same point as the others ?
Well. Since that part haven't any drum sound.
Usually we will not add note for Taiko diff if it's piano.



Nothing to point out. Do not kudosu this post and call me back if you decide to change the diff names (or if not)
Kudosu for checking & I have changed the circles. So yeah.
Thanks for modding >w</
Shiro
Well, it seems fine now. I honestly don't like the map much, but it's good enough to get ranked.

Enjoy your bubble~
Topic Starter
KanaRin

Odaril wrote:

Well, it seems fine now. I honestly don't like the map much, but it's good enough to get ranked.

Enjoy your bubble~
Okay.
I will try to map my best in the next time.
So yeah :D Thanks so much. ;)
Mastodonio
Star!
banvi
:3
Rigeru_old
8-)
Frostmourne
love rita's song :) and note :D
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