This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年6月11日 at 13:06:43

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai
Tags: gokou ruri Vicho-kun kuroneko
BPM: 145
Filesize: 13368kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.63 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (4.59 stars, 192 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 292 notes)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size)
Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3 Kuroneko-shi~

Kuroneko-shi <3

Offset: 4.835 :3

EDIT:
I put the hitsounds for you, if you want use this, if not don't worry :3

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size) (wojiushi2p) [Insane].osu

thanks

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Hi~ 我来mod了..下面的只是建议而已
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.
红色 = 我特别觉得这个应该被改掉

帖很长，抱歉= =

[Insane]
*这是外国人的GD 所以用英语写了 如果这个GD不是他管,你又想看中文就PM我吧 >.>
Lower the volume, especially in the Normal sections. It's quite a bit noisy.
I suggest you use more soft-whistle than soft-finish, the latter one is quite noisy, and most soft-finishes you used in this map could be replaced with soft-whistle.
00:10:628 (9) - new combo
00:10:835 (3) - maybe delete this?
00:13:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - those notes doesn't fit the song. please maintain the rhythm pattern used in the second last stanza, as demonstrated with image:

00:17:972 - add circle here
00:18:076 - ^
00:30:490 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:31:317 (1)
00:58:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make a volume tween (increasing) here, and maybe use Normal set.
00:31:731 (10) - new combo this if you followed the line above
01:20:972 (5) - new combo
01:23:248 (4) - move this up a grid. fixes spacing, and makes 01:24:386 (2) perfectly hidden

[Normal+]
减小一下音量吧,尤其是normal的section 挺吵的
00:10:628 (5) - new combo
00:11:455 (1,2) - slider画的不是很完美 如果觉得下面的图更好就用给出的代码吧
00:17:248 (9) - 减1个repeat 改完了别忘记 00:17:662 补上clap 改过重复次数后hitsound会丢
00:23:662 (6,7,8) - 这是歪的...看你slider是横的 摆正了吧
00:37:110 (7) - slider画的实在不好看 结尾处的节点和开始节点X位置应该一样(建议 x=264) 把时间线调到00:37:524, 然后拖红点，直到红点在球心而且slider在00:37:938 结束 像这样:
00:51:386 (2) - 中间repeat没意义 换成00:51:386 00:51:593 两个circle比较好
00:56:145 (5) - 建议用0.5x或者0.75x的slider速度
01:06:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 放歪了 建议开grid snap来放正方形. 01:08:972 (4) 也没有stack好
01:09:386 (1) - repeat没藏好
01:16:421 (4) - 减一个repeat
01:25:731 (7) - spacing

[Easy]
个人觉得开头节奏下的不是很好 以下的你可以试一试然后考虑是否改
以下说的都是指时间轴，如果决定按这样改的话请重新排列一下
00:08:145 (1) - 结尾加clap
00:09:800 (2,3) - 移到00:09:386, 2上加clap
00:12:283 (1) - 移到00:11:455, 开头去掉clap 结尾加clap
00:13:938 (2) - 移到00:12:283, 开头结尾去掉clap 中间加上clap
00:13:938 - 00:14:352 - 00:14:766 加note, circle或者slider都可以. 00:13:938 - 00:14:352 加上clap

00:56:145 (1) - 结束在00:57:800
这个diff应该减少遮挡，重新排列一下，毕竟是easy 要考虑一下新玩家的感受啊

歌不错>.> 希望加油~ Star

除了insane的00:17:972 - add circle here外其他都修复了
多谢modding

还有..那个不是GD..他弄了音效而已

hehe

Goooooooooooooood song!
黑猫萌爆了

HI ^ mod time!

just suggestions

[Easy]
你开的间距是1.0还是0.8?
我按照1.0的mod
00:06:076(2)-snap
00:07:317(3)-^
00:09:386(2)-^
00:13:938(5)-^
00:24:697(1,2,3,4,5)-整体向上一格
01:24:076(6)-add one note? 然后silder提前到蓝线上 结束点不变

[Normal+]
00:39:179(4,5)-向上一格
00:58:007(1)-what's wrong with this spinner?!

[Insane]
no problems

nice song ~
/me shoot starr~

BakaHuang wrote:

HI ^ mod time!

just suggestions

[Easy]
你开的间距是1.0还是0.8?
我按照1.0的mod
00:06:076(2)-snap fixed
00:07:317(3)-^ fixed
00:09:386(2)-^ fixed
00:13:938(5)-^ fixed
00:24:697(1,2,3,4,5)-整体向上一格 嗯..
01:24:076(6)-add one note? 然后silder提前到蓝线上 结束点不变 嗯..乃指的是spinner吧..

[Normal+]
00:39:179(4,5)-向上一格 嗯.
00:58:007(1)-what's wrong with this spinner?! QAQ调了slider速度忘了调长度，现在好了

[Insane]
no problems

nice song ~
/me shoot starr~

谢谢modding

thx request~

[Normal+]
0.19.317(4,5) - use grid
0.19.938(6~) - 1grid right and up
0.23.248(5,6) - use grid
0.26.559(6) - 1grid up
0.29.455(3~6) - use grid
0.47.041(4) - 1grid left
0.49.524(9) - 1grid up and left
1.00.076(3) - 1grid left
1.22.628(1) - x211 y92

[Easy]
0.04.835(1~4) - use spacing x1.0
1.14.352(4) - spacing (x0.0 and off grid)

+star

As requested

Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx request~

[Normal+]
0.19.317(4,5) - use grid
0.19.938(6~) - 1grid right and up
0.23.248(5,6) - use grid
0.26.559(6) - 1grid up
0.29.455(3~6) - use grid
0.47.041(4) - 1grid left
0.49.524(9) - 1grid up and left
1.00.076(3) - 1grid left
1.22.628(1) - x211 y92

[Easy]
0.04.835(1~4) - use spacing x1.0
1.14.352(4) - spacing (x0.0 and off grid)

+star

thank you all fixed

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

As requested

Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome

thank you for your video ~

ssssssssssssssssssssssssstar先
求QQ传图试玩

Hi
没太多的东西需要mod，不过有些建议还是最好修改

Easy
00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - 改成00:44:559 (2,3) - 这样，对于easy来说难了
01:10:214 (2,3) - 3向下更好一些，毕竟玩easy的大部分还是新手，读图会有困难
01:24:076 (6) - 取消这个，原因一样，难，让spinner从01:24:076 - 这里开始

Hard
排列有些僵硬，能多一些类型就好了，都是直来直去的

Insane
没什么好改的，非常好

不用给我kds，没太多mod内容

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Easy 改好了，我觉得现在应该简单点了
00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - 改成00:44:559 (2,3) - 这样，对于easy来说难了
01:10:214 (2,3) - 3向下更好一些，毕竟玩easy的大部分还是新手，读图会有困难
01:24:076 (6) - 取消这个，原因一样，难，让spinner从01:24:076 - 这里开始

Hard
排列有些僵硬，能多一些类型就好了，都是直来直去的 我去重新排一下，排hard的时候有点仓促了

谢谢

[General]
Tag 里加上 Vicho-kun (所有diff)


[Easy]
AR+1
00:16:421 (3) - spacing.
00:18:490 (1) - ^
00:56:145 (1) - 结尾消音 并且end at 00:57:800
01:14:352 (4) - 建议分开
01:22:628 (5) - 弄得好看点>.> (如果你认为这样很好那就算了..)


[Hard]
00:18:076 (10) - add a note?
00:21:179 (10) - 很容易被误导，看成circle，所以建议分开


[Insane]
00:10:628 (1) - streams like this use 0.8x spacing (may be better._.)
01:25:110 (9) - newcombo.
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做得不错~
加油
Star~☆

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
Tag 里加上 Vicho-kun (所有diff) added


[Easy]
AR+1
00:16:421 (3) - spacing.
00:18:490 (1) - ^
00:56:145 (1) - 结尾消音 并且end at 00:57:800
01:14:352 (4) - 建议分开
01:22:628 (5) - 弄得好看点>.> (如果你认为这样很好那就算了..)
除了这个长slider不太会处理外其他都搞定了....


[Hard]
00:18:076 (10) - add a note? added
00:21:179 (10) - 很容易被误导，看成circle，所以建议分开 嗯，分开了


[Insane]
00:10:628 (1) - streams like this use 0.8x spacing (may be better._.) ._. 我感觉好点了
01:25:110 (9) - newcombo.done

谢谢

Hi there, again!
Nway, here's the mod for the song:

I like the rhythm in this one, and I like the song (but not the anime), so here's a star to you~
All the best!

kurohacker wrote:

kurohacker's mod

[General]
The hitsounds are very loud during the intro part for all diffs, maybe you can reduce it a bit? ok

[Easy]
0:26:972 [5] - The end of the slider will sound nicer with a finish, but I'm not so sure about the beginning, maybe just remove hitsound here. no, i think its fine
0:32:490 [5] - Maybe a finish at the end instead? ok
0:32:559 [2,3] - Maybe move these two one grid left (level 3). Not important, but it'll make them look better. done
0:41:662 [2.3] - Maybe move these ones one grid right. fixed
1:07:214 [3] - I suggest that you remove the whistle body here. removed
1:19:317 [3] - ^ removed
1:22:628 [5] - ^ ?

[Hard]
0:20:766 [9] - New combo here. ok
0:38:766 [2-4] - I think they'll look better if they are aligned with end of slider [1] and beginning of slider [5]. ok
0:41:041 [7] - New combo here. yes
0:44:766 [4] - Move this one 1/4 beats forward (blue tick), to match the singer better. no, i think it don't match better
0:46:421 [2] - ^ ^, you can use 50% playback rate to hear
0:47:869 [6] - New combo here. done
0:52:421 [5] - ^ done
0:53:662 [old 9] - Remove this one, coz it's kinda out of place. removed
0:54:490 [1 & 3] - The anti-jump from the previous notes here are kinda hard, maybe you can flip vertical these two to compensate for that?ok

[Insane]
0:14:041 [6 & 8] - Maybe you move these 1/4 beats forward, to match the rhythm of the previous combo? If you choose to do so, then you will need to correct the placement as well. no, i think the old one matches the rhythm better
0:51:593 [4] - You should move this slider 1/4 beats backwards and lenghthen the slider so that it ends at 0:51:800 instead. This way, it'll match the music better. ok
0:53:248 [6] - Move this 1/4 beats backwards, for the same reason. ok
0:54:697 [3] - Move this 1/4 beats forwards, to follow the singer. no, i don't think so
0:55:524 [6] - ^ no
0:58:628 [1-8] - I think these will look better as a stream, rather than a stack. yes
1:22:628 [1-7] - The spacing here feels weird and inconsistent, is this intentional? yes, i enlarged it

thank you for your modding

好吧！！咱表示被黑猫萌翻了！！

star~！

你好

音效上的建議基於common sense和一致性, 如果你不喜歡完全可以不用改

[General]
- 請去 這裡 或者自行找人幫你把MP3轉換成192kpbs的格式
- Insane的preview time和其他難度不一樣
- 刪除所有難度4,850這條綠線, 把你需要的sample和volume擺在紅線上即可

[Easy]
- 考慮到你靜音了NC1:slider tick和soft的slider tick相當小聲, 我會覺得STR 2只是在灌combo數和無謂的增加難度
- 挺想建議不要stack任何note的, 不過既然map都完成了..就只在這囉嗦一下, 有1/2和1兩種拍數間隔對新手還是比較困難的
<00:18:076> (4) 感覺上這裡應該要是finish
<00:31:317> (1) ^
<00:35:869> (2) 頭尾clap都拔掉改下clap在(3), 頭想要的話能下whistle
<00:37:938> (1..) 和一樣的hitsound pattern建議 (1,3,5,7白線 clap 4,8白線 whistle)
<00:53:248> (4) 把clap移到(5)的頭
<01:05:248> (1) 拔new combo, 改下在(3), <01:09:386> (1)也拔
<01:15:179> (1..) 和上面一樣的new combo建議, 基本上就是8拍擺一個, 擺在高白線上

[Hard]
<00:10:628> (1,2,3,4,1) 我會說x-x-clap-x-finish
<00:20:766> (1,2,3) 不太有實感, 挑一或二個擊點下whistle? 後面一串一樣
- 31秒到58秒的部分, 因為softclap和其他音效的對比比較大, 你下的密度低又較分散我覺得是不太好聽的, 建議在43秒後的部分插點whistle, 或者是整段都用同樣的規律去下clap
<00:59:455> (1) 下finish?
<01:12:697> (1) 這裡就明顯覺得finish比clap好聽

[Insane]
<00:13:524> (3) 漏了個clap?
<00:30:490> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:52:214> (1) new combo改下在(2)
<00:52:835> (3,4,5) 認為把(4,5)往後移1/4拍符合背景節奏, 並且較直覺
<00:58:628> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:59:455> KIAI 綠線沒有snap好, 請snap到這裡
<01:23:041> (3,4,5,6,7) spacing稍嫌不好看了些

star

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

音效上的建議基於common sense和一致性, 如果你不喜歡完全可以不用改 关于音效的意见我觉得都很合理，所以我都已经修改好了

[General]
- 請去 這裡 或者自行找人幫你把MP3轉換成192kpbs的格式 我现在就去那边发request
- Insane的preview time和其他難度不一樣 已经统一为00:59:455
- 刪除所有難度4,850這條綠線, 把你需要的sample和volume擺在紅線上即可 嗯

[Easy]
- 考慮到你靜音了NC1:slider tick和soft的slider tick相當小聲, 我會覺得STR 2只是在灌combo數和無謂的增加難度 STR改为1了
- 挺想建議不要stack任何note的, 不過既然map都完成了..就只在這囉嗦一下, 有1/2和1兩種拍數間隔對新手還是比較困難的 以后我会注意的，毕竟缺乏做图经验
<00:18:076> (4) 感覺上這裡應該要是finish
<00:31:317> (1) ^
<00:35:869> (2) 頭尾clap都拔掉改下clap在(3), 頭想要的話能下whistle
<00:37:938> (1..) 和一樣的hitsound pattern建議 (1,3,5,7白線 clap 4,8白線 whistle)
<00:53:248> (4) 把clap移到(5)的頭
<01:05:248> (1) 拔new combo, 改下在(3), <01:09:386> (1)也拔
<01:15:179> (1..) 和上面一樣的new combo建議, 基本上就是8拍擺一個, 擺在高白線上

[Hard]
<00:10:628> (1,2,3,4,1) 我會說x-x-clap-x-finish
<00:20:766> (1,2,3) 不太有實感, 挑一或二個擊點下whistle? 後面一串一樣
- 31秒到58秒的部分, 因為softclap和其他音效的對比比較大, 你下的密度低又較分散我覺得是不太好聽的, 建議在43秒後的部分插點whistle, 或者是整段都用同樣的規律去下clap
<00:59:455> (1) 下finish?
<01:12:697> (1) 這裡就明顯覺得finish比clap好聽

[Insane]
<00:13:524> (3) 漏了個clap?
<00:30:490> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:52:214> (1) new combo改下在(2) 修改完毕
<00:52:835> (3,4,5) 認為把(4,5)往後移1/4拍符合背景節奏, 並且較直覺 嗯
<00:58:628> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:59:455> KIAI 綠線沒有snap好, 請snap到這裡 resnapped
<01:23:041> (3,4,5,6,7) spacing稍嫌不好看了些 修改完毕

谢谢你的modding

wojiushi2p 好~ \(◕‿◕三◕‿◕) / 黑貓好 ~
很喜歡這歌,排列和音效也很滿意~
給點小意見吧。
[Easy]

2. 00:56:041 - 00:57:593 - 刪掉綠線

[Hard]

1. 00:38:972 (3) - 右一格
2. 00:56:041 - 00:57:593 - 刪掉綠線

[Inanse]

1. 00:21:593 (10) - 右一格
2. 00:32:559 (4,5) - 左兩格
3. 01:25:524 (6) - 多了個note 阿!

真的非常喜歡
first kudo star~

192kbps的mp3

[General]
Add "Kuroneko" to the Tags
Use this comboburst


I can't suggest nothing.... you did a good work

chungskale wrote:

wojiushi2p 好~ \(◕‿◕三◕‿◕) / 黑貓好 ~
很喜歡這歌,排列和音效也很滿意~
給點小意見吧。
[Easy]

2. 00:56:041 - 00:57:593 - 刪掉綠線

处理完毕

[Hard]

1. 00:38:972 (3) - 右一格 嗯
2. 00:56:041 - 00:57:593 - 刪掉綠線

删掉了
[Inanse]

1. 00:21:593 (10) - 右一格 好
2. 00:32:559 (4,5) - 左兩格 嗯
3. 01:25:524 (6) - 多了個note 阿!

QAQ 居然多了一个
真的非常喜歡
first kudo star~

谢谢你的modding

impossiblexu wrote:

192kbps的mp3

谢谢

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Add "Kuroneko" to the Tags
Use this comboburst


I can't suggest nothing.... you did a good work

tags added

thank you for your comboburst , i like it so much

Halo

[general]
BG大小改为1024*768

[easy]
01:05:248 (2) - 1格左(grid lv3)
01:05:662 (3) - 1格左1格下
01:06:076 (4) - ^
01:08:972 (5,6,7,8) - 全部1格左

[insane]
kiai段可以考虑多加些new combo...

GJ! BONUS 80000!

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

Halo

[general]
BG大小改为1024*768 改完了

[easy]
01:05:248 (2) - 1格左(grid lv3) all done
01:05:662 (3) - 1格左1格下
01:06:076 (4) - ^
01:08:972 (5,6,7,8) - 全部1格左

[insane]
kiai段可以考虑多加些new combo... 加了两个还是一个来着...不记得了

GJ! BONUS 80000!

多谢

omg xD again~
I noticed you put the claps in wrong place in Hard diff so I tried to help xD

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size) (wojiushi2p) [Hard].osu

thanks a lot , Vicho-kun

Hi Shiki,
This is my first mod in my life, lets go

Easy:
-sounds/looks fine

Hard:
-00:44:766(4): move to 00:44:869
-00:46:421(2): move to 00:46:524
-01:03:800(5): new combo

Insane:
-sounds/looks fine

Not much to say in general, I like the map.
~star~

warriorjan wrote:

Hi Shiki, Hi!
This is my first mod in my life, lets go

Easy:
-sounds/looks fine

Hard:
-00:44:766(4): move to 00:44:869 done
-00:46:421(2): move to 00:46:524 done
-01:03:800(5): new combo ok

Insane:
-sounds/looks fine

Not much to say in general, I like the map.
~star~

Thank you very much~

EDIT:
Insane:
0:21:628 - There is no sound there, so remove note (10).
0:25:145 - Nc here not 1/1 before because before you began new combo when she first started singing, and here you did not.
0:24:732 - I think that the (10) is missplaced... There is a finish at the beginning, yet then it is like... dragged on kind of. I think it needs to be a proper simple finish so make a 1/2 slider where (9) and remove slider (10). Make the end of the new slider a finish.
0:27:835 (1,2) - Move (1) and (2) 1/2 back please and remove 3. Switch the finish so its at the beginning of (1) and place a note which will be your new combo inteast of the fallowing slider where (1) use to start.
0:29:076 - Add a note?
0:30:628 - Nc instead of one at 0:30:525.
0:42:732 - Possibly a new cembo..? What do you think?
1:02:801 - New combo
1:03:835 - Remove? I really can't hear any important sound here...
1:11:076 - New combo?
1:13:766 - Can't hear anything again. Remove please.
1:16:042 - Nc
1:18:525 - Nc
1:25:145 - I would like to see a finish here rather than a whistle...

Star and good luck!

General

For the source, this is how I typed it and how I was told I should type it : "Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai" (I don't think capitals matter that much. but whatever.) edit: i think the Konna and ni should be together, but that wasn't how i typed it in my beatmap... shhh.. lol ._.

Also, add "oreimo" to the tags

Insane

00:33:593 (8,9) - Move the originaly combo 9 before combo 8, so the slider matches with the vocals (then fix spacing and hitsounds)
00:41:662 (3,6) - put finishes on these two notes?
00:44:145 (3) - add clap?
00:51:283 (2,3) - move these two notes 1/4 tick forward and fix spacing (keep the hitsounds tho)
00:59:352 (8,1) - i don't like having the stream end with a stacked note like this. I'd rather have it unstacked.

Hard

00:13:110 (3) - add finish
00:14:766 (1) - add finish (you can add more if you want if you want to follow the drums more)
00:20:972 (1) - starting from here and on, i noticed you used whistle, while in Insane, you do not use any whistles at all. It may be something you might want to change in Insane. (or hard)
00:21:800 (1) - add finish
00:24:697 (8) - add finish
00:51:179 (1) - try something like this..?(there are finishes at the end of each slider)
00:52:421 (1) - ^ do something similar.

Easy

--You may consider placing some more finishes to follow drums, but that your decision

00:04:835 (1) - add finish
00:07:731 (4) - remove finish
00:11:455 (2) - add finsh
00:14:766 (5) - add finishes according to music?
00:31:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Some of these 2/1 sliders feel a little weird. If you want, you can switch around some things to make it sounds more on sync with the vocals. It's fine and readable the way it is now, though.
01:01:938 (3,4,5) - the spacing seems a tiny bit smaller than the rest of the kiai time. (or my eyes are failing me)

Nice map! :3
Star~~

Hi ^^. Please note this mod are only suggestions (except offset)

General

Offset: 4870 (0 ms ^^)

Easy

00:10:628 (1) - Remove New combo
00:11:455 (5) - New combo
00:19:569 (2) - Too hard for an easy. Hidden circle and rythm hard.
00:20:397 (4) - Do rect?
00:22:880 (2) - Hard again.
00:26:190 (3) - ^
00:31:362 (1,2,3) - Align
01:04:466 (6) - New combo
01:04:880 (2) - Remove New combo
01:06:121 (5) - New combo
01:09:431 (3) - New combo

Hard

00:25:352 (2) - Align
00:36:111 (4) - ^
00:56:180 (5,1) - I think is better without the slider and in the place of the slider use the spin.
01:11:697 (5,7) - Align

Insane

00:32:387 (3) - Align
00:33:007 (5) - ^
00:34:456 (10) - ^
00:34:663 (11) - New combo
00:35:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:11:076 (4) - New Combo

Good BG ^^ and Hitsounds.

Good luck and star ~

Rating:

Song: 8.8
Map: 8.3

Revise all align and spacing I saw much things not aligned.

Hushu wrote:

Easy:
Has a lot of pointless 1/1 but I'll leave it as it is the easiest difficulty.

Hard:
I'll focus on making this difficulty stable, as in all bits equaly hard and bla bla bla.
0:05:869 - Focus on not doing 1/1 beats even if it is only on the beginning of the song. And therefore, add a note here. OK
0:07:731 - Move this note 1/4 back? No. I think it's correct.
0:07:938 - Add a note? Add one at 00:07:524
0:09:179 - ^ Done
0:11:455 - I would place a volume increase here for the finish on the slider. OK, volume increased by 80%
0:13:110 - Finish sound? Also a volume increase for this finish~ ^
0:14:766 (1,4,6,) - ^ ^
0:17:248 - A volume increase for this slider please, you could also volume inc the slider before (8)
0:19:317 - It is a useless 1/1 beat. Remove please to stay away from those kind of notes deleted
0:21:593 - ^ deleted
0:24:903 - Move 1/2 back, remove (2)? done
0:32:972 - Shorten it by a half and add a circle where it use to end? This is just to keep away repetitions... Done
0:34:628 - ^, but also make the circle you added be the new combo. OK
The chorus... No variation at all, boring 1/1s. You have to make sure that your map what is going for ranking will be fun to play! Any chance of fixing it the same way I did above? Ok~ I will try

Life is calling, so I'll check Insane mm.. Tomorrow? OK.

winber1 wrote:

General

For the source, this is how I typed it and how I was told I should type it : "Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai" (I don't think capitals matter that much. but whatever.) edit: i think the Konna and ni should be together, but that wasn't how i typed it in my beatmap... shhh.. lol ._. Fixed, changed into "Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai"

Also, add "oreimo" to the tags Done

Insane

00:33:593 (8,9) - Move the originaly combo 9 before combo 8, so the slider matches with the vocals (then fix spacing and hitsounds) Done
00:41:662 (3,6) - put finishes on these two notes? Done
00:44:145 (3) - add clap? Added
00:51:283 (2,3) - move these two notes 1/4 tick forward and fix spacing (keep the hitsounds tho) No.
00:59:352 (8,1) - i don't like having the stream end with a stacked note like this. I'd rather have it unstacked. fixed

Hard

00:13:110 (3) - add finish added
00:14:766 (1) - add finish (you can add more if you want if you want to follow the drums more) done
00:20:972 (1) - starting from here and on, i noticed you used whistle, while in Insane, you do not use any whistles at all. It may be something you might want to change in Insane. (or hard) I used whistle because I think Hard is easier, soft hitsounds may be more suitable for this difficulty, but I will add some in Insane
00:21:800 (1) - add finish added
00:24:697 (8) - add finish added
00:51:179 (1) - try something like this..?(there are finishes at the end of each slider) OK

SPOILER

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00:52:421 (1) - ^ do something similar. OK

Easy

--You may consider placing some more finishes to follow drums, but that your decision

00:04:835 (1) - add finish OK
00:07:731 (4) - remove finish OK
00:11:455 (2) - add finsh added
00:14:766 (5) - add finishes according to music? added
00:31:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Some of these 2/1 sliders feel a little weird. If you want, you can switch around some things to make it sounds more on sync with the vocals. It's fine and readable the way it is now, though. ok, i will take your suggestion
01:01:938 (3,4,5) - the spacing seems a tiny bit smaller than the rest of the kiai time. (or my eyes are failing me) OK fixed

Nice map! :3
Star~~

Thank you all. And I will fix K i R a's mod tomorrow

Time to mod this

[General]

1. Timing明顯沒對準鼓點..off嚴重..Offset:4866.(改這個之前先看mod.)
2. 沒記錯靜音slider+tick是unrankable的.

[Easy]

1. 00:09:386(2)-這裏移走finish hitsound.很明顯的違和感.
2. 00:18:490(1.2)-這個是一個easy..1/2 stack會造成誤導新手.
3. 00:20:662(x.x)-話說這綠線和後面的綠線有甚麼用?
4. 00:21:800(1.2)-同00:18:490. (後面的請舉一反三
5. 00:31;317(1.2.3)-不相等間距.請關掉grid再重新排過.
6. 00:42:697(x)-這裏空起來很怪..
7. 00:52:835(3)-這個note被skin hidden了...換一個位置.
8. 01:02:766(5)-這裏加New combo.然後在01:04:835 Remove.在01:06:076再加一個New combo.
9. 01:22:628(3)-說實話這條slider確實不太好看.重新拉一遍...
10. 務必把kiai time 的2條綠線snap好.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:525(1-7)-在這段的red tick上可加上whistle.
2. 00:38:387(1-6)-這段的1/2排位不好打.
3. 00:42;732(x)-空這的時間太長..加一個note下去會比較好.
4. 01:01:973(1.2.3.4)-為甚麼這裏間距突然放大?想嚇人嗎?
5. 01:09:421(1)-拉得不太好看..
6. 001:17:283(5)-New combo.
7. 整體間距較窄..可以的話請修修冇一些得貪吃蛇排列

[Insane]

1. 00:09:318(5)-不太好看...可以的話重排把..
2. 00:18:111(1)-加finish..這個note請-20%的音量.
3. 00:39:421(5)-New combo here.
4. 01:03:007(5.6.7)-可以考慮在這裏放大間距.
5. 01:11:076(4)-New combo here.

Star.

Hushu wrote:

Insane:
0:21:628 - There is no sound there, so remove note (10). removed
0:25:145 - Nc here not 1/1 before because before you began new combo when she first started singing, and here you did not. OK
0:24:732 - I think that the (10) is missplaced... There is a finish at the beginning, yet then it is like... dragged on kind of. I think it needs to be a proper simple finish so make a 1/2 slider where (9) and remove slider (10). Make the end of the new slider a finish. done
0:27:835 (1,2) - Move (1) and (2) 1/2 back please and remove 3. Switch the finish so its at the beginning of (1) and place a note which will be your new combo inteast of the fallowing slider where (1) use to start. ok
0:29:076 - Add a note? done
0:30:628 - Nc instead of one at 0:30:525. no..
0:42:732 - Possibly a new cembo..? What do you think? ok
1:02:801 - New combo no..
1:03:835 - Remove? I really can't hear any important sound here... ok
1:11:076 - New combo? done
1:13:766 - Can't hear anything again. Remove please. done
1:16:042 - Nc done
1:18:525 - Nc done
1:25:145 - I would like to see a finish here rather than a whistle... no, i don't like it

Star and good luck! Thank you

K i R a wrote:

Hi ^^. Please note this mod are only suggestions (except offset)

General

Offset: 4870 (0 ms ^^)

Easy

00:10:628 (1) - Remove New combo done
00:11:455 (5) - New combo done
00:19:569 (2) - Too hard for an easy. Hidden circle and rythm hard. ok
00:20:397 (4) - Do rect? I've tried but it doesn't look good
00:22:880 (2) - Hard again. fixed
00:26:190 (3) - ^ fixed
00:31:362 (1,2,3) - Align done
01:04:466 (6) - New combo done
01:04:880 (2) - Remove New combo done
01:06:121 (5) - New combo ok
01:09:431 (3) - New combo ok

Hard

00:25:352 (2) - Align done
00:36:111 (4) - ^ done
00:56:180 (5,1) - I think is better without the slider and in the place of the slider use the spin. ok
01:11:697 (5,7) - Align done

Insane

00:32:387 (3) - Align done
00:33:007 (5) - ^ done
00:34:456 (10) - ^ done
00:34:663 (11) - New combo done
00:35:076 (1) - Remove new combo done
01:11:076 (4) - New Combo fixed

Good BG ^^ and Hitsounds.

Good luck and star ~ Thank you

Rating:

Song: 8.8
Map: 8.3

Revise all align and spacing I saw much things not aligned.

kanpakyin wrote:

Time to mod this

[General]

1. Timing明顯沒對準鼓點..off嚴重..Offset:4866.(改這個之前先看mod.) 基本对齐了
2. 沒記錯靜音slider+tick是unrankable的.已删除静音slidertick

[Easy]

1. 00:09:386(2)-這裏移走finish hitsound.很明顯的違和感. removed
2. 00:18:490(1.2)-這個是一個easy..1/2 stack會造成誤導新手. 嗯
3. 00:20:662(x.x)-話說這綠線和後面的綠線有甚麼用? 删掉了，后面的也是
4. 00:21:800(1.2)-同00:18:490. (後面的請舉一反三
5. 00:31;317(1.2.3)-不相等間距.請關掉grid再重新排過. done
6. 00:42:697(x)-這裏空起來很怪.. 加了一个slider
7. 00:52:835(3)-這個note被skin hidden了...換一個位置. removed
8. 01:02:766(5)-這裏加New combo.然後在01:04:835 Remove.在01:06:076再加一個New combo. 嗯
9. 01:22:628(3)-說實話這條slider確實不太好看.重新拉一遍... 缩短了一半，然后加了repeat
10. 務必把kiai time 的2條綠線snap好.好了

[Hard]

1. 00:18:525(1-7)-在這段的red tick上可加上whistle. added
2. 00:38:387(1-6)-這段的1/2排位不好打. (1)和(2)移开了
3. 00:42;732(x)-空這的時間太長..加一個note下去會比較好. 嗯
4. 01:01:973(1.2.3.4)-為甚麼這裏間距突然放大?想嚇人嗎? fixed
5. 01:09:421(1)-拉得不太好看.. 好了
6. 001:17:283(5)-New combo. done
7. 整體間距較窄..可以的話請修修冇一些得貪吃蛇排列 把间距放大了点，可能还是有点贪吃蛇..

[Insane]

1. 00:09:318(5)-不太好看...可以的話重排把.. 嗯
2. 00:18:111(1)-加finish..這個note請-20%的音量. done
3. 00:39:421(5)-New combo here. done
4. 01:03:007(5.6.7)-可以考慮在這裏放大間距. done
5. 01:11:076(4)-New combo here.done

Star.

Thank you for moddings

[Easy]
:3

[Hard]
01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - WHAT? It is some confusing ;_; Some note place missing I guess :3?
01:15:210 (1,2,3) - Also but whatever ;_;

[Insane]
:3



Some nice set anyway >_>
[Sorry for late modding ;_;]

Okay, I think it's fine for bubbling but
2 things are matter for me ;_;

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3 :3

[Hard]
01:01:969 (1,2,3,4) - WHAT? It is some confusing ;_; Some note place missing I guess :3? fixed :3
01:15:210 (1,2,3) - Also but whatever ;_; fixed

[Insane]
:3



Some nice set anyway >_>
[Sorry for late modding ;_;]

Okay, I think it's fine for bubbling but
2 things are matter for me ;_;

Thank you :3

Good luck on this song :3

:3

star

Fuck i am late
I am going to pop your bubble~~~ ! Lalala!
Funfunfunfun
Easy
00:10:659 (4) Second control point , 1 grid right
00:21:831 (1) Missing finish!~
00:24:728 (1) ^
00:40:038 (2) Silly! Remove clap and put whistle!
00:48:728 (1) No one will see that reverse arrow coming! ALALALALA
01:03:624 (1) ^!

Hard
00:09:417 (4) Missing clap!~
00:41:693 (2) No one will see that freakin shit coming! ~

Insane
Fine

That was fun! LOL

Hyguys wrote:

Fuck i am late
I am going to pop your bubble~~~ ! Lalala! Lalala~
Funfunfunfun
Easy
00:10:659 (4) Second control point , 1 grid right ok
00:21:831 (1) Missing finish!~ no
00:24:728 (1) ^ ^
00:40:038 (2) Silly! Remove clap and put whistle! done
00:48:728 (1) No one will see that reverse arrow coming! ALALALALA I can ._. you don't play with edit mode, right?
01:03:624 (1) ^!

Hard
00:09:417 (4) Missing clap!~ done
00:41:693 (2) No one will see that freakin shit coming! ~ ._. I can

Insane
Fine

That was fun! LOL

OK , i finally decided to pop the bubble , thank you for modding

But how can't you see the reverse arrow?

Kuroneko!

STAR!☆~