Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome · forum

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-03-09T10:11:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年6月11日 at 13:06:43

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai
Tags: gokou ruri Vicho-kun kuroneko
BPM: 145
Filesize: 13368kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.63 stars, 96 notes)
Hard (4.59 stars, 192 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 292 notes)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size)
Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3 Kuroneko-shi~

Last edited by Shiki 2011-06-11T05:06:48+00:00, edited 68 times in total.

Vicho

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Vicho 2011-04-03T15:48:50+00:00

Kuroneko-shi <3

Offset: 4.835 :3

EDIT:
I put the hitsounds for you, if you want use this, if not don't worry :3

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome (TV Size) (wojiushi2p) [Insane].osu

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-04T02:14:02+00:00

thanks

Cirno

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Cirno 2011-04-04T16:07:26+00:00

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Hi~ 我来mod了..下面的只是建议而已
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.
红色 = 我特别觉得这个应该被改掉

帖很长，抱歉= =

[Insane]
*这是外国人的GD 所以用英语写了如果这个GD不是他管,你又想看中文就PM我吧 >.>
Lower the volume, especially in the Normal sections. It's quite a bit noisy.
I suggest you use more soft-whistle than soft-finish, the latter one is quite noisy, and most soft-finishes you used in this map could be replaced with soft-whistle.
00:10:628 (9) - new combo
00:10:835 (3) - maybe delete this?
00:13:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - those notes doesn't fit the song. please maintain the rhythm pattern used in the second last stanza, as demonstrated with image:

00:17:972 - add circle here
00:18:076 - ^
00:30:490 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:31:317 (1)
00:58:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make a volume tween (increasing) here, and maybe use Normal set.
00:31:731 (10) - new combo this if you followed the line above
01:20:972 (5) - new combo
01:23:248 (4) - move this up a grid. fixes spacing, and makes 01:24:386 (2) perfectly hidden

[Normal+]
减小一下音量吧,尤其是normal的section 挺吵的
00:10:628 (5) - new combo
00:11:455 (1,2) - slider画的不是很完美如果觉得下面的图更好就用给出的代码吧

SPOILER

176,304,11455,6,0,B|142:232|176:160,1,150,0|8
293,145,12283,2,0,B|327:217|293:289,1,150,0|8

用法:用记事本开osu，搜索11455，把那两行换成给出的代码

00:17:248 (9) - 减1个repeat 改完了别忘记 00:17:662 补上clap 改过重复次数后hitsound会丢
00:23:662 (6,7,8) - 这是歪的...看你slider是横的摆正了吧
00:37:110 (7) - slider画的实在不好看结尾处的节点和开始节点X位置应该一样(建议 x=264) 把时间线调到00:37:524, 然后拖红点，直到红点在球心而且slider在00:37:938 结束像这样:

SPOILER

00:51:386 (2) - 中间repeat没意义换成00:51:386 00:51:593 两个circle比较好
00:56:145 (5) - 建议用0.5x或者0.75x的slider速度
01:06:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 放歪了建议开grid snap来放正方形. 01:08:972 (4) 也没有stack好
01:09:386 (1) - repeat没藏好
01:16:421 (4) - 减一个repeat
01:25:731 (7) - spacing

[Easy]
个人觉得开头节奏下的不是很好以下的你可以试一试然后考虑是否改
以下说的都是指时间轴，如果决定按这样改的话请重新排列一下
00:08:145 (1) - 结尾加clap
00:09:800 (2,3) - 移到00:09:386, 2上加clap
00:12:283 (1) - 移到00:11:455, 开头去掉clap 结尾加clap
00:13:938 (2) - 移到00:12:283, 开头结尾去掉clap 中间加上clap
00:13:938 - 00:14:352 - 00:14:766 加note, circle或者slider都可以. 00:13:938 - 00:14:352 加上clap

00:56:145 (1) - 结束在00:57:800
这个diff应该减少遮挡，重新排列一下，毕竟是easy 要考虑一下新玩家的感受啊

歌不错>.> 希望加油~ Star

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-05T01:35:43+00:00

除了insane的00:17:972 - add circle here外其他都修复了
多谢modding

还有..那个不是GD..他弄了音效而已

LuPiiTa

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Joined June 2010

LuPiiTa 2011-04-05T01:45:53+00:00

hehe

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2011-04-05T10:38:25+00:00

Goooooooooooooood song!

黑猫萌爆了

Axey

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Joined October 2009

Axey 2011-04-05T11:47:24+00:00

HI ^ mod time!

just suggestions

[Easy]
你开的间距是1.0还是0.8?
我按照1.0的mod
00:06:076(2)-snap
00:07:317(3)-^
00:09:386(2)-^
00:13:938(5)-^
00:24:697(1,2,3,4,5)-整体向上一格
01:24:076(6)-add one note? 然后silder提前到蓝线上结束点不变

[Normal+]
00:39:179(4,5)-向上一格
00:58:007(1)-what's wrong with this spinner?!

[Insane]
no problems

nice song ~
/me shoot starr~

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-06T04:39:12+00:00

BakaHuang wrote:
HI ^ mod time!

just suggestions

[Easy]
你开的间距是1.0还是0.8?
我按照1.0的mod
00:06:076(2)-snap fixed
00:07:317(3)-^ fixed
00:09:386(2)-^ fixed
00:13:938(5)-^ fixed
00:24:697(1,2,3,4,5)-整体向上一格嗯..
01:24:076(6)-add one note? 然后silder提前到蓝线上结束点不变嗯..乃指的是spinner吧..

[Normal+]
00:39:179(4,5)-向上一格嗯.
00:58:007(1)-what's wrong with this spinner?! QAQ调了slider速度忘了调长度，现在好了

[Insane]
no problems

nice song ~
/me shoot starr~

谢谢modding

zsr123

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Joined January 2010

zsr123 2011-04-07T05:31:18+00:00

frost-b-spec

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frost-b-spec 2011-04-07T06:20:47+00:00

thx request~

[Normal+]
0.19.317(4,5) - use grid
0.19.938(6~) - 1grid right and up
0.23.248(5,6) - use grid
0.26.559(6) - 1grid up
0.29.455(3~6) - use grid
0.47.041(4) - 1grid left
0.49.524(9) - 1grid up and left
1.00.076(3) - 1grid left
1.22.628(1) - x211 y92

[Easy]
0.04.835(1~4) - use spacing x1.0
1.14.352(4) - spacing (x0.0 and off grid)

+star

Kuroneko-sHerald

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Kuroneko-sHerald 2011-04-07T21:22:40+00:00

As requested

Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-08T04:58:19+00:00

frost-b-spec wrote:
thx request~

[Normal+]
0.19.317(4,5) - use grid
0.19.938(6~) - 1grid right and up
0.23.248(5,6) - use grid
0.26.559(6) - 1grid up
0.29.455(3~6) - use grid
0.47.041(4) - 1grid left
0.49.524(9) - 1grid up and left
1.00.076(3) - 1grid left
1.22.628(1) - x211 y92

[Easy]
0.04.835(1~4) - use spacing x1.0
1.14.352(4) - spacing (x0.0 and off grid)

+star

thank you

all fixed

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:
As requested

Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai - Inochi Mijikashi Koiseyo Otome

thank you for your video ~

sherrie__fay

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sherrie__fay 2011-04-09T03:34:35+00:00

ssssssssssssssssssssssssstar先
求QQ传图试玩

Daiguren

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Daiguren 2011-04-10T07:09:34+00:00

Shinki

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Shinki 2011-04-10T07:39:37+00:00

一库

LaunchedthousandShip

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Joined August 2009

LaunchedthousandShip 2011-04-11T09:32:29+00:00

Hi
没太多的东西需要mod，不过有些建议还是最好修改

Easy
00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - 改成00:44:559 (2,3) - 这样，对于easy来说难了
01:10:214 (2,3) - 3向下更好一些，毕竟玩easy的大部分还是新手，读图会有困难
01:24:076 (6) - 取消这个，原因一样，难，让spinner从01:24:076 - 这里开始

Hard
排列有些僵硬，能多一些类型就好了，都是直来直去的

Insane
没什么好改的，非常好

不用给我kds，没太多mod内容

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-12T05:13:34+00:00

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:
Easy 改好了，我觉得现在应该简单点了
00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - 改成00:44:559 (2,3) - 这样，对于easy来说难了
01:10:214 (2,3) - 3向下更好一些，毕竟玩easy的大部分还是新手，读图会有困难
01:24:076 (6) - 取消这个，原因一样，难，让spinner从01:24:076 - 这里开始

Hard
排列有些僵硬，能多一些类型就好了，都是直来直去的我去重新排一下，排hard的时候有点仓促了

谢谢

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2011-04-15T15:58:38+00:00

[General]
Tag 里加上 Vicho-kun (所有diff)

[Easy]
AR+1
00:16:421 (3) - spacing.
00:18:490 (1) - ^
00:56:145 (1) - 结尾消音并且end at 00:57:800
01:14:352 (4) - 建议分开
01:22:628 (5) - 弄得好看点>.> (如果你认为这样很好那就算了..)

[Hard]
00:18:076 (10) - add a note?
00:21:179 (10) - 很容易被误导，看成circle，所以建议分开

[Insane]
00:10:628 (1) - streams like this use 0.8x spacing (may be better._.)
01:25:110 (9) - newcombo.
-----------------------
做得不错~
加油

Star~☆

Shiki

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Shiki 2011-04-16T06:13:42+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
[General]
Tag 里加上 Vicho-kun (所有diff) added

[Easy]
AR+1
00:16:421 (3) - spacing.
00:18:490 (1) - ^
00:56:145 (1) - 结尾消音并且end at 00:57:800
01:14:352 (4) - 建议分开
01:22:628 (5) - 弄得好看点>.> (如果你认为这样很好那就算了..)
除了这个长slider不太会处理外其他都搞定了....

[Hard]
00:18:076 (10) - add a note? added
00:21:179 (10) - 很容易被误导，看成circle，所以建议分开嗯，分开了

[Insane]
00:10:628 (1) - streams like this use 0.8x spacing (may be better._.) ._. 我感觉好点了
01:25:110 (9) - newcombo.done

谢谢

Kurowolfe

459 posts

Joined June 2010

Kurowolfe 2011-04-16T09:17:08+00:00

Hi there, again!

Nway, here's the mod for the song:

kurohacker's mod

[General]
The hitsounds are very loud during the intro part for all diffs, maybe you can reduce it a bit?

[Easy]
0:26:972 [5] - The end of the slider will sound nicer with a finish, but I'm not so sure about the beginning, maybe just remove hitsound here.
0:32:490 [5] - Maybe a finish at the end instead?
0:32:559 [2,3] - Maybe move these two one grid left (level 3). Not important, but it'll make them look better.
0:41:662 [2.3] - Maybe move these ones one grid right.
1:07:214 [3] - I suggest that you remove the whistle body here.
1:19:317 [3] - ^
1:22:628 [5] - ^

[Hard]
0:20:766 [9] - New combo here.
0:38:766 [2-4] - I think they'll look better if they are aligned with end of slider [1] and beginning of slider [5].
0:41:041 [7] - New combo here.
0:44:766 [4] - Move this one 1/4 beats forward (blue tick), to match the singer better.
0:46:421 [2] - ^
0:47:869 [6] - New combo here.
0:52:421 [5] - ^
0:53:662 [old 9] - Remove this one, coz it's kinda out of place.
0:54:490 [1 & 3] - The anti-jump from the previous notes here are kinda hard, maybe you can flip vertical these two to compensate for that?

[Insane]
0:14:041 [6 & 8] - Maybe you move these 1/4 beats forward, to match the rhythm of the previous combo? If you choose to do so, then you will need to correct the placement as well.
0:51:593 [4] - You should move this slider 1/4 beats backwards and lenghthen the slider so that it ends at 0:51:800 instead. This way, it'll match the music better.
0:53:248 [6] - Move this 1/4 beats backwards, for the same reason.
0:54:697 [3] - Move this 1/4 beats forwards, to follow the singer.
0:55:524 [6] - ^
0:58:628 [1-8] - I think these will look better as a stream, rather than a stack.
1:22:628 [1-7] - The spacing here feels weird and inconsistent, is this intentional?

I like the rhythm in this one, and I like the song (but not the anime), so here's a star to you~
All the best!

Shiki

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Topic Starter

Shiki 2011-04-16T10:03:02+00:00

kurohacker wrote:
kurohacker's mod
[General]
The hitsounds are very loud during the intro part for all diffs, maybe you can reduce it a bit? ok

[Easy]
0:26:972 [5] - The end of the slider will sound nicer with a finish, but I'm not so sure about the beginning, maybe just remove hitsound here. no, i think its fine
0:32:490 [5] - Maybe a finish at the end instead? ok
0:32:559 [2,3] - Maybe move these two one grid left (level 3). Not important, but it'll make them look better. done
0:41:662 [2.3] - Maybe move these ones one grid right. fixed
1:07:214 [3] - I suggest that you remove the whistle body here. removed
1:19:317 [3] - ^ removed
1:22:628 [5] - ^ ?

[Hard]
0:20:766 [9] - New combo here. ok
0:38:766 [2-4] - I think they'll look better if they are aligned with end of slider [1] and beginning of slider [5]. ok
0:41:041 [7] - New combo here. yes
0:44:766 [4] - Move this one 1/4 beats forward (blue tick), to match the singer better. no, i think it don't match better
0:46:421 [2] - ^ ^, you can use 50% playback rate to hear
0:47:869 [6] - New combo here. done
0:52:421 [5] - ^ done
0:53:662 [old 9] - Remove this one, coz it's kinda out of place. removed
0:54:490 [1 & 3] - The anti-jump from the previous notes here are kinda hard, maybe you can flip vertical these two to compensate for that?ok

[Insane]
0:14:041 [6 & 8] - Maybe you move these 1/4 beats forward, to match the rhythm of the previous combo? If you choose to do so, then you will need to correct the placement as well. no, i think the old one matches the rhythm better
0:51:593 [4] - You should move this slider 1/4 beats backwards and lenghthen the slider so that it ends at 0:51:800 instead. This way, it'll match the music better. ok
0:53:248 [6] - Move this 1/4 beats backwards, for the same reason. ok
0:54:697 [3] - Move this 1/4 beats forwards, to follow the singer. no, i don't think so
0:55:524 [6] - ^ no
0:58:628 [1-8] - I think these will look better as a stream, rather than a stack. yes
1:22:628 [1-7] - The spacing here feels weird and inconsistent, is this intentional? yes, i enlarged it

thank you for your modding

Air_kannabi

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Air_kannabi 2011-04-19T10:50:32+00:00

好吧！！咱表示被黑猫萌翻了！！

star~！

loveFantasy

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loveFantasy 2011-04-19T22:30:11+00:00

你好

音效上的建議基於common sense和一致性, 如果你不喜歡完全可以不用改

[General]
- 請去這裡或者自行找人幫你把MP3轉換成192kpbs的格式
- Insane的preview time和其他難度不一樣
- 刪除所有難度4,850這條綠線, 把你需要的sample和volume擺在紅線上即可

[Easy]
- 考慮到你靜音了NC1:slider tick和soft的slider tick相當小聲, 我會覺得STR 2只是在灌combo數和無謂的增加難度
- 挺想建議不要stack任何note的, 不過既然map都完成了..就只在這囉嗦一下, 有1/2和1兩種拍數間隔對新手還是比較困難的
<00:18:076> (4) 感覺上這裡應該要是finish
<00:31:317> (1) ^
<00:35:869> (2) 頭尾clap都拔掉改下clap在(3), 頭想要的話能下whistle
<00:37:938> (1..) 和一樣的hitsound pattern建議 (1,3,5,7白線 clap 4,8白線 whistle)
<00:53:248> (4) 把clap移到(5)的頭
<01:05:248> (1) 拔new combo, 改下在(3), <01:09:386> (1)也拔
<01:15:179> (1..) 和上面一樣的new combo建議, 基本上就是8拍擺一個, 擺在高白線上

[Hard]
<00:10:628> (1,2,3,4,1) 我會說x-x-clap-x-finish
<00:20:766> (1,2,3) 不太有實感, 挑一或二個擊點下whistle? 後面一串一樣
- 31秒到58秒的部分, 因為softclap和其他音效的對比比較大, 你下的密度低又較分散我覺得是不太好聽的, 建議在43秒後的部分插點whistle, 或者是整段都用同樣的規律去下clap
<00:59:455> (1) 下finish?
<01:12:697> (1) 這裡就明顯覺得finish比clap好聽

[Insane]
<00:13:524> (3) 漏了個clap?
<00:30:490> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:52:214> (1) new combo改下在(2)
<00:52:835> (3,4,5) 認為把(4,5)往後移1/4拍符合背景節奏, 並且較直覺
<00:58:628> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:59:455> KIAI 綠線沒有snap好, 請snap到這裡
<01:23:041> (3,4,5,6,7) spacing稍嫌不好看了些

star

Shiki

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Topic Starter

Shiki 2011-04-20T05:27:07+00:00

loveFantasy wrote:
你好

音效上的建議基於common sense和一致性, 如果你不喜歡完全可以不用改关于音效的意见我觉得都很合理，所以我都已经修改好了

[General]
- 請去這裡或者自行找人幫你把MP3轉換成192kpbs的格式我现在就去那边发request
- Insane的preview time和其他難度不一樣已经统一为00:59:455
- 刪除所有難度4,850這條綠線, 把你需要的sample和volume擺在紅線上即可嗯

[Easy]
- 考慮到你靜音了NC1:slider tick和soft的slider tick相當小聲, 我會覺得STR 2只是在灌combo數和無謂的增加難度 STR改为1了
- 挺想建議不要stack任何note的, 不過既然map都完成了..就只在這囉嗦一下, 有1/2和1兩種拍數間隔對新手還是比較困難的以后我会注意的，毕竟缺乏做图经验
<00:18:076> (4) 感覺上這裡應該要是finish
<00:31:317> (1) ^
<00:35:869> (2) 頭尾clap都拔掉改下clap在(3), 頭想要的話能下whistle
<00:37:938> (1..) 和一樣的hitsound pattern建議 (1,3,5,7白線 clap 4,8白線 whistle)
<00:53:248> (4) 把clap移到(5)的頭
<01:05:248> (1) 拔new combo, 改下在(3), <01:09:386> (1)也拔
<01:15:179> (1..) 和上面一樣的new combo建議, 基本上就是8拍擺一個, 擺在高白線上

[Hard]
<00:10:628> (1,2,3,4,1) 我會說x-x-clap-x-finish
<00:20:766> (1,2,3) 不太有實感, 挑一或二個擊點下whistle? 後面一串一樣
- 31秒到58秒的部分, 因為softclap和其他音效的對比比較大, 你下的密度低又較分散我覺得是不太好聽的, 建議在43秒後的部分插點whistle, 或者是整段都用同樣的規律去下clap
<00:59:455> (1) 下finish?
<01:12:697> (1) 這裡就明顯覺得finish比clap好聽

[Insane]
<00:13:524> (3) 漏了個clap?
<00:30:490> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:52:214> (1) new combo改下在(2) 修改完毕
<00:52:835> (3,4,5) 認為把(4,5)往後移1/4拍符合背景節奏, 並且較直覺嗯
<00:58:628> (1..) 這串的(3,7)下whistle打節拍
<00:59:455> KIAI 綠線沒有snap好, 請snap到這裡 resnapped
<01:23:041> (3,4,5,6,7) spacing稍嫌不好看了些修改完毕