Luck Life - Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)

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O-Moei
Hi !

General :
At Normal diff I think it's unnecessary that you made SV changes like that, but well

There's Widescreen Support at Hard diff

Normal :
01:43:931 (4,5) - Irregular spacing, slightly

You can hear the new melodies started at these red ticks, like at 00:03:499 - . Better start the NCs there, also apply on most overall (Like you did at Hard diff)

00:30:394 (4) - Somehow, soften the bend on this one (at least like 00:14:240 (1) - ) would much more fitting

00:44:114 (2,3) - These two is the most imperfect blanket among others

01:21:614 (1,2,3) - Try having this with rhythm still be like 01:24:541 (1,2,3,4) -

Hard :
00:14:240 (4) - I don't think SV change suit here, but if it is, it should be NC

00:54:541 (3) - NC

01:24:358 (1,2) - Swap NC

01:44:297 (5,6,7) - Line hit flow seemed better imo


That's all from me. Good luck !
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

CharmCaster wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue!

Sorry for the late mod >.<

Normal

-General
OD should be changed to 3 or 4 fixed

  1. 00:42:468 (4,5) - Improve the spacing here I used distance snapping in this case tho, and I wasn't sure if I should be following it or not. but since you mentioned it, fixed
  2. 00:48:321 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 00:52:711 (1,2) - ^ ^
  4. 01:36:248 - Kiai time should have ended here ok


Hard

  1. 00:13:129 (1,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice here fixed
  2. 01:12:651 (7,1) - Spacing here can be improved fixed
  3. 01:36:248 - Kiai time should have ended here fixed

    Thats all! Good luck with your map!
Thanks for the mod! >w<
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Yahuri wrote:

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TitleUnicode:名前を呼ぶよ
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added just basic hitsounding cuz lol
hmu when you want to fix hitsounding!
sure! though I won't be able to do that or even work on my beatmap for more than a week starting from tomorrow since I'll be off station for more than a week :cry: I'll pm you when the time comes! ><

I grabbed the metadata from the ranked map
Artist: ラックライフ
Title: 名前を呼ぶよ (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)
Source:文豪ストレイドッグス
Tags: yahuri bungou stray dogs ending spring 2016

fix those on your diffs, ive already made the changes on my diff
Thanks for the gd! :)
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ General ]
00:20:151 - i think this offset change to 20166 will be better~~ it WAS the offset I used. I don't know anymore tbh lol maybe I should just request for a offset check from Rolled :')

[ Normal ]
00:42:833 - 00:48:687 - 00:53:077 - these SV change is really no useful and they will make newbies feel confused.please delete them changed the ds to prevent confusion instead
00:14:240 (1) - just my own opinion,i think it's not a nice pattern. fixed

00:21:614 (4,6) - blanket? fixed
00:25:638 (1) - remove NC ok
00:26:004 (2) - NC,i think you are follow the drums so there is no need to NC for vocals~~ ^
00:28:565 - add note?it sounds really empty sure
00:30:394 (4) - not a good pattern I don't even know why I did that :v
00:31:492 (6,1) - blanket? fixedd
00:36:614 - here have a obvious drum,i think you can make it clickable. 00:36:980 - there have a really heavily downbeat,you can make it clickable as also. changed

00:41:736 (4,1) - no overlap,it's crowded and not easy to read changed a bit here an there, hopefully this one works
00:44:114 (2,4) - hard to read fixed

01:01:126 (1,2) - bad flow ok

01:01:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - the ryhthm is messy in my opinion,i don't know which track you are following really have to agree on the messy part lol but I can't seem to find the solution to this flow. tried yours before when I was experimenting with it but I wasnt satisfied with that. i changed it to something else anyways lol hope this one works

001:04:053 (1,2,3,4) -

i think this diff is nice to me before the kiai time but the ryhthm become really messy in the kiai time.If you have some questions just poke me and i'm pleasure to help you~ thanks! I'll work on it x3

[ Hard ]
00:02:018 (2) - delete note,i can't hear anything //its the same note in Normal btw// I think I'll keep it this way. Rather than thinking of t that way, I'd like to see it as creating a note there?
00:09:425 (1,3) - not a good shape and this overlap is hard to read seriously dont know why I have those shapes :v fixed
00:12:388 (1,3,4) - avoid this overlap fixed
00:14:240 (4) - you need NC when you change the SV. fixed
00:27:285 (5,6) - not a good flow um, as in pattern flow, or..?
00:54:541 (3) - you can NC here for such a obvious downbeat sure
01:14:297 (5,1) - you can avoid this overlap easy~ done
01:32:955 (6,2) - ↑ done?
01:34:419 (1,3) - ↑ yepp
01:36:797 (2,5) - ↑ like this?
01:22:163 (2) - ok

01:24:358 (1) - remove NC ok
01:24:541 - NC ^

That's all from me~~GL
Thanks for your mod!! :)
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

O-Moei wrote:

Hi ! hii

General :
At Normal diff I think it's unnecessary that you made SV changes like that, but well changed the distance so players wont get confused. would that be better? :p

There's Widescreen Support at Hard diff fixed

Normal :
01:43:931 (4,5) - Irregular spacing, slightly fixed

You can hear the new melodies started at these red ticks, like at 00:03:499 - . Better start the NCs there, also apply on most overall (Like you did at Hard diff) whoops didnt notice that, thanks!

00:30:394 (4) - Somehow, soften the bend on this one (at least like 00:14:240 (1) - ) would much more fitting changed since last mod xd thanks

00:44:114 (2,3) - These two is the most imperfect blanket among others ^

01:21:614 (1,2,3) - Try having this with rhythm still be like 01:24:541 (1,2,3,4) do you mean the pattern? cause the rhythm is already quite similar

Hard :
00:14:240 (4) - I don't think SV change suit here, but if it is, it should be NC changed from last mod, but thanks! xd

00:54:541 (3) - NC ^

01:24:358 (1,2) - Swap NC ^

01:44:297 (5,6,7) - Line hit flow seemed better imo gaspp. i like that idea *n*


That's all from me. Good luck !
Thank you!! x3
Sharu
Hey NM from my queue

  1. 00:02:018 (2) - delete this please
  2. 00:03:499 (1) - delete nc
  3. 00:05:351 (3) - nc
  4. 00:06:462 (1) - delete nc
  5. 00:06:462 (1,1) - stack?
  6. 00:17:203 - something like this should be better http://puu.sh/sL70n/f77bf44353.jpg
  7. 00:54:541 (5,6) - slider here
  8. 01:17:224 (3) - ctrl g
  9. 01:17:224 (3) - stack?
  10. 01:22:894 (3) - end this slider on the blue tic and 01:23:443 - put a circle here
  11. 01:29:663 (4,2,3) - stack
  1. 00:02:018 (2) - delete
  2. 00:06:462 (1,4) - stack
  3. 00:17:203 (1) - end the spinner at the red tic before 00:20:151 (1) -
  4. 00:54:541 (3,4) - ctrl g
  5. 00:58:199 (1) - try to follow the tail of this slider 00:57:102 (5) -
  6. 00:59:846 (5) - reverse
  7. 01:05:699 (4) - ^
  8. 01:32:955 (6) - stack with the sliderend of 01:31:675 (3) -
  9. 01:38:077 (4) - delete this and move 01:37:529 (3) - on the white tic http://puu.sh/sL9Bh/70b9d043e3.jpg
  1. 00:29:495 (2) - something like this should be better http://puu.sh/sL89D/8a77e5dc9f.jpg
  2. 00:32:422 (2) - ^


Good song : )
Yahuri

[ Sharuresu ] wrote:

Hey NM from my queue
  1. 00:29:495 (2) - something like this should be better http://puu.sh/sL89D/8a77e5dc9f.jpg
  2. 00:32:422 (2) - ^
nope to both, i dont use normal stacking anywhere in the song, DS too high from the sliders, and the rhythm patterns im using right now only follow what is in the music
kwk
hi,from Q

[Normal]
  1. Im not too well versed in the ranking criteria and guidelines but from what i know, if you don't have an easy difficulty, your normal difficulty should try to follow easy difficulty guidelines. So what i think you will have to change in your diff to reflect this would be to avoid stacked/overlapping notes and probably simplify a bit of the rhythm.
  2. 00:06:462 (1) - fix blanket
  3. 00:33:138 (2) - delete this note to simplify rhythm? you don't have a note here 00:37:529 - or 00:38:992 - so no need to have that note imo
  4. 00:41:370 (3) - replace with note to simplify rhythm? you dont use this 1/4 slider elsewhere to represent similar sounds either
  5. 00:46:492 (1) - plays better if you ctrl+g since previous pattern built expectation that the next note would be below
  6. 01:05:516 (3) - delete note here since you dont have it here 01:28:931 -
  7. 01:35:516 (2,3) - i personally would simplify the rhythm further by just using a 1/1 slider here from start of (2) to start of (3)
  8. 01:38:992 (4) - suggest you just use a 1/2 slider here starting on the white tick, since there is a pretty significant beat there.

[Hard]
  1. 00:25:638 (1,2,3,4) - a bit questionable with the stacking, since this can be tricky to read in conjunction with the AR
  2. 00:51:797 - do believe you should map this instead of purely following the background, since its very dominant, being the sentence starter and significantly louder.
  3. 00:56:004 (2,3) - intentional dsing?
  4. 01:12:285 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i do like this bit but i think it would be better if you deleted (1) in each NC to tone down the intensity, and better reflect the music since there is no significant beat there.
  5. 01:19:419 (3,4,5) - intentional dsing?
  6. really like this diff~


might want to fix volume conflict at 00:20:166 - on yahuri's diff

glgl
Rieri
Hello~ NM from my queue

General
  1. Audio preview time is not consistent on Yahuri's Novel.
  2. soft-hitfinish2.wav has a delay time of >=5ms
  3. First bpm line: should not be a time signature of 3/4. It should be 4/4 with the offset being 2388, or -576 if you want to map the guitar before it. Make sure you fix all the new combo patterns after.
Normal
  1. 00:00:902 - 00:20:151 - Volume seems a bit high for such a quiet section, try reducing to 30% or lower
  2. 00:02:018 (2) - no sound here, it really doesn't make sense in placing a circle here
  3. 00:44:114 (2,5) - this overlap doesn't look really nice, you have a lot of space to use above the slider
  4. 00:49:419 (1,3) - can we copy and paste so it looks the same?
  5. 00:55:272 (1) - the "whistles" on the tails sounds really awkward and doesn't follow the song. the correct use of the "whistles" would be to add them on the second and fourth white lines in a full measure. and those hitsounds should actually be claps but whatev
  6. 01:45:029 (1) - would be nice if you could add a circle here for the loud finish in the back
Hard
  1. same thing about volumes
  2. 00:02:018 (2) - again, no sound here
  3. 00:14:240 (1,1) - I really don't understand why this has to be sv 0.5x, seems very confusing and unnecessary.
  4. 00:15:721 (1) - why is the hitsound here different? seems pretty inconsistent
  5. 00:17:203 (1) - it would make more sense to pull this up to 00:19:425 - since there's actually a separate sound there instead of ending the spinner in the middle of a note
  6. fix hitsounds
yahuri
  1. 00:30:044 (3,4) - the distance here and 00:32:970 (3,4) - here is different
    not bad

gl
Yahuri

kwk wrote:

might want to fix volume conflict at 00:20:166 - on yahuri's diff ill talk about volume with kirisakiii

ProEzreal wrote:

General
  1. Audio preview time is not consistent on Yahuri's Novel. fixed offset, timing points, preview point
  2. First bpm line: should not be a time signature of 3/4. It should be 4/4 with the offset being 2388, or -576 if you want to map the guitar before it. Make sure you fix all the new combo patterns after. waiting for approval
yahuri
  1. 00:30:044 (3,4) - the distance here and 00:32:970 (3,4) - here is different fixed!
    not bad yay \o/
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hanyuu_nanodesu
Hi there
NM from my modding Q
Yay~ something from BSD ^^

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. Consider to add an Easy. This song is short, it wouldn't be much trouble. And it would make a better diff spread so it would increase the quality of the mapset.


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:907 (1,2) - tl;dr, fix blanket. If you're not sure how to, read next :arrow: . As you can see here, this is a perfect pattern for blanket and I see you're attempting to do blanket here. But it still imperfect. The trick to make the perfect blanket is to use blanketed note's approach circle as a guide. 00:02:018 (2) - for this case. In your current pattern, you can see that the slider body is not following the approach circle perfectly, take a look http://puu.sh/sSpn8/cb1def4ded.jpg that's why the blanket seems imperfect. First step to perfect it, you can use 25% playback rate so you can place the approach circle in such a way that it would be easier to follow it, look here : http://puu.sh/sSpvA/89713ae1dd.jpg Next step, you can adjust the anchors so the slider body would coincide with the approach circle, like so : http://puu.sh/sSpz2/cd4b942a21.jpg And voila, a perfect blanket. Repeat for another blanket pattern like 00:04:240 (2,3) - 00:05:351 (3,1) - and so on because they also seemed imperfect. You can manipulate the note position like ctrl+g-ing it or adding a note to create an approach circle guide. Just be creative ^^
  2. 00:19:795 (1) - Warning, spinner gap. I read a new rules that say that there's must be min 2 empty beat after a spinner at Normal for a recovery. Because of this note, the gap you have rn is only 1 and a half beat. I suggest to just remove this note since it don't really cover an important sound.
  3. 00:24:541 (2,1) - They are almost touching, it doesn't look good. I suggest to move 00:26:004 (1) - a bit higher while maintaining the DS http://puu.sh/sSpNO/60b0907421.jpg would look much better. Don't forget to DS next notes.
  4. 00:33:138 (2) - I don't think this note is necessary because there's barely any sound there. Maybe just remove it?
  5. 00:33:321 (3) - I think it would flow much better if this curved another way http://puu.sh/sSpXa/af373c33e4.jpg but well, you'll have to do some modification for next notes. Let me guide you. First, make sure (3)'s tail still land perfectly on top of 00:34:785 (1) - 's head http://puu.sh/sSpYC/333d10d445.jpg Next, place (4) and (5) like this http://puu.sh/sSq18/e9358ffcd9.jpg try to maintain triangle and blanket pattern for extra plus on looks ;) Last, curve 00:34:785 (1) - so it would blanket 00:34:053 (4) - and tadaah.
  6. 00:41:187 There's a pretty big drum sound that you ignored here. You can add a note to cover it but it might be too much note for Normal tho because the next pattern is pretty tricky as well. Or maybe, you can end 00:40:638 (2) - there so the tail would cover the sound, but it would be no longer covering vocal. Well, choose your own way.
  7. 01:09:907 (1,3) - This don't look like blanket pattern but I think you better blanket it, lol.
  8. 01:12:468 (6,1) - Well I don't know if you have another stacked 1/2 pattern before, but I think this is the first one, the other is 1/4 pattern, so maybe player will think of this as another 1/4 pattern... It also downbeat so stacking would reduce the emphasize. Maybe you better unstack them. But well, it's no big deal, you still can keep this.
  9. 01:13:931 Add circle to cover vocal? It also be a nice lead up to 01:14:297 (2) -
  10. 01:17:955 (4,2) - They are overlapping and it's not a good thing. There's two option, move (4) somewhere like this http://puu.sh/sSqmR/0860257c04.jpg withe extra perk that it make better flow but you will have to go through DS-ing hell, or rotate this entire thing 01:19:419 (2,3,4) - with ctrl+shift+R command so it would look something like this http://puu.sh/sSqpD/9f39db4788.jpg or it's not overlapping anymore. I totally recommend the latter ofc.
  11. 01:19:419 (2,5) - Stack. Try to fix this blanket 01:19:419 (2,4) - and you'll be able to stack perfectly without disturbing the DS.
  12. 01:22:894 (3,1) - Naaahhh, this is very tricky for Normal. Don't do this. But well, I can't find a nice easy way to fix this so make sure to find it yourself. Anyway, I oblige you to change this.
  13. 01:36:248 (4) - Try to make the curve part blanket 01:34:419 (1) - 's body. http://puu.sh/sSqyo/20a89a9fe2.jpg it won't be visible in gameplay but lol, y not.
  14. 01:37:711 (2) - I hear sound at blue tick, maybe make this a 1/4 reverse slider?
  15. 01:42:651 (2,5) - The way they're overlapping is not really good imo, maybe try to move (5) like this http://puu.sh/sSqD9/da6c0197a9.jpg while keeping nice triangle pattern and changing its direction a bit for better flow.
  16. 01:45:029 (1) - Tip about spinner, don't directly put a spinner at big white tick. Precede it with a circle like so http://puu.sh/sSqH9/f822a3f2ac.jpg (you can start the spinner at blue tick or even yellow tick (1/8) at slower BPM like this for harder diff). That way, you can add finish hitsound to the circle and the big sound would be emphasized better. But well, it's not obligatory, especially for lower diff like this so you can keep. Feel free to apply tho.


Wow, I totally feel like modding rn
Good map overall ^^
I'll end this here for a while, I'll go check Hard (and maybe Insane) later.

Good luck for now :3

Ediiiittt
let's mod Hard~

[Hard]
  1. HP 7 is VERY high!!! Use 5 or 6. Considering the Insane is 7 and Normal is 4, maybe 5.5.
  2. I still see some blanket problems, better fix them~
  3. 00:09:425 (1,2) - Is the stack really necessary? Considering there's no really sound that suggest stacking, I think it's better to unstack them. Well, if you can figure out a nice place to unstack, at least stacking on top of 00:11:277 (3) - would be better.
  4. 00:15:721 (1) - Okay, I know you're trying to make some symmetrical rhythm with 00:14:240 (1) - but considering the sound is not symmetrical, I mean, there's guitar sound here 00:16:092 I think you better adapt to the sound by ending the slider there and adding a circle at white tick afterwards.
  5. 00:17:203 (1) - Well, there's no spinner gap rule for Hard so maybe you can end this spinner here 00:19:425 where the last guitar note was because ending it at where it is now don't really make sense imo. Some more suggestion, maybe you can make a lead up to the verse by adding a 1/4 slider here 00:19:795 to support the vocal.
  6. 00:23:077 (3,4) - Polarity stuff, try to watch this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws tl;dr, it would be better if you delete this slider 00:24:175 (4) - and then make reverse for (3) and add a note afterwards (if necessary) Or maybe you can use some trickier rhythm like this http://puu.sh/sSE6Q/11227837d9.jpg since this is Hard.
  7. 00:30:394 (6,7) - Unstack, people might mistake this as 1/4 pattern since you don't even stack 1/4 pattern.
  8. 00:39:175 (6) - There's a guitar and vocal sound here 00:39:541 that's very worth mapping but got ignored. Just end the slider there and add a circle afterwards.
  9. 00:51:980 (1,2) - It kinda weird that you cover these two vocal sound but not this one 00:51:797 It felt, incomplete or something. I suggest to cover that vocal note as well. You can simply add a circle or change the entire thing to 1/4 reverse slider. Personally I prefer the latter because not only it become simpler, but it would also differ from the drum note here 00:51:614 (4) - , but well, the entire thing is up to you~
  10. 00:53:809 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda weird pattern tbh... Either stack these three 00:53:809 (1,2,3) - entirely or separate them entirely. Don't separate only one and stack the other because they are one of a kind sound.
  11. 00:58:199 (1) - Maybe follow 00:57:102 (5) - 's shape for the part before red anchor to make it looks neater. Because currently it looks like bad overlap. http://puu.sh/sSExk/fd55d6c847.jpg I guess you get the idea.
  12. 00:59:663 (4,5) - Try to swap (ctrl+g) these two. I think it would be more fitting because it would cover the long vocal sound better and the bigger sound here 01:00:029 would be covered with circle instead of slider end thus emphasizing it better.
  13. 01:09:907 Ignored big white tick here. Honestly I prefer if this part is clickable so you might have to make a little rhythm change but I guess you're concentrating on vocal so at least use this slider 01:09:541 (6) - to emphasize it with making the big white tick land on red anchor. http://puu.sh/sSEJw/386653a73e.jpg something like that. But really, it's better if it's actually clickable.
  14. 01:15:760 (1,2) - Umm, maybe make this symmetrical? http://puu.sh/sSEOh/b524751c19.jpg
  15. 01:20:516 (6,1) - Same thing about 00:58:199 (1) -, follow (6)'s shape.
  16. 01:48:138 Well since this is Hard, I'll say this. Maybe consider adding another spinner here? Since there's still pretty long aftersound when the spinner ends. If you do, end the spinner here 01:49:053


Still good map
Take a little glance on the Insane and it seems good as well.
Soo good luck
And have a star
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
sorry for the late reply! c:

[ Sharuresu ] wrote:

Hey NM from my queue

  1. 00:02:018 (2) - delete this please
  2. 00:03:499 (1) - delete nc im putting nc at the beginning of a new section? this one here has a larger emphasis on the music
  3. 00:05:351 (3) - nc same reason above^
  4. 00:06:462 (1) - delete nc ^
  5. 00:06:462 (1,1) - stack? better not for normal c:
  6. 00:17:203 - something like this should be better http://puu.sh/sL70n/f77bf44353.jpg I start it at 00:17:203 since thats where the music is so i dont think it should be there
  7. 00:54:541 (5,6) - slider here I like it this way? but I'll keep that in mind
  8. 01:17:224 (3) - ctrl g
  9. 01:17:224 (3) - stack? nah
  10. 01:22:894 (3) - end this slider on the blue tic and 01:23:443 - put a circle here
  11. 01:29:663 (4,2,3) - stack

    unreplied ones are fixed, thanks!
  1. 00:02:018 (2) - delete
  2. 00:06:462 (1,4) - stack rest of them are unstacked so nah
  3. 00:17:203 (1) - end the spinner at the red tic before 00:20:151 (1) - it would be too late for players to react to the sliders
  4. 00:54:541 (3,4) - ctrl g I prefer this way
  5. 00:58:199 (1) - try to follow the tail of this slider 00:57:102 (5) -
  6. 00:59:846 (5) - reverse fixed something here myself instead
  7. 01:05:699 (4) - ^ i dont think this is necessary
  8. 01:32:955 (6) - stack with the sliderend of 01:31:675 (3) - dont really like the idea of stacking here
  9. 01:38:077 (4) - delete this and move 01:37:529 (3) - on the white tic http://puu.sh/sL9Bh/70b9d043e3.jpg

    unreplied ones are fixed, thanks!
  1. 00:29:495 (2) - something like this should be better http://puu.sh/sL89D/8a77e5dc9f.jpg
  2. 00:32:422 (2) - ^


Good song : ) agree :)
thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
sorry for the late reply! c:

kwk wrote:

hi,from Q

[Normal]
  1. Im not too well versed in the ranking criteria and guidelines but from what i know, if you don't have an easy difficulty, your normal difficulty should try to follow easy difficulty guidelines. So what i think you will have to change in your diff to reflect this would be to avoid stacked/overlapping notes and probably simplify a bit of the rhythm. working on it, thanks ;w;
  2. 00:06:462 (1) - fix blanket done?
  3. 00:33:138 (2) - delete this note to simplify rhythm? you don't have a note here 00:37:529 - or 00:38:992 - so no need to have that note imo ok
  4. 00:41:370 (3) - replace with note to simplify rhythm? you dont use this 1/4 slider elsewhere to represent similar sounds either ^
  5. 00:46:492 (1) - plays better if you ctrl+g since previous pattern built expectation that the next note would be below ^
  6. 01:05:516 (3) - delete note here since you dont have it here 01:28:931 - it would feel empty then, i changed around 01:28:931 instead similar to the rhythm at 01:05:516 (3,4,5,1)
  7. 01:35:516 (2,3) - i personally would simplify the rhythm further by just using a 1/1 slider here from start of (2) to start of (3) made it to a reverse slider c:
  8. 01:38:992 (4) - suggest you just use a 1/2 slider here starting on the white tick, since there is a pretty significant beat there. ok

[Hard]
  1. 00:25:638 (1,2,3,4) - a bit questionable with the stacking, since this can be tricky to read in conjunction with the AR fixed
  2. 00:51:797 - do believe you should map this instead of purely following the background, since its very dominant, being the sentence starter and significantly louder. hmm like this?
  3. 00:56:004 (2,3) - intentional dsing? whoops nope
  4. 01:12:285 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i do like this bit but i think it would be better if you deleted (1) in each NC to tone down the intensity, and better reflect the music since there is no significant beat there. deleting (1) would feel empty and its more like im creating an emphasis there?
  5. 01:19:419 (3,4,5) - intentional dsing? nope again :9
  6. really like this diff~ gaspp// thank you ;v;


might want to fix volume conflict at 00:20:166 - on yahuri's diff still waiting for offset check ;w;

glgl
thanks for the mod! :D
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
sorry for the late reply! ><

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ NM from my queue

General
  1. Audio preview time is not consistent on Yahuri's Novel.
  2. soft-hitfinish2.wav has a delay time of >=5ms hmm I remembered getting this file from the osu! library. hopefully this one works?
  3. First bpm line: should not be a time signature of 3/4. It should be 4/4 with the offset being 2388, or -576 if you want to map the guitar before it. Make sure you fix all the new combo patterns after.fixed the time signature, but I'm still confused about the right offset. I'll be using -576 for now. Still waiting for the offset check from the bpm q ;n;
Normal
  1. 00:00:902 - 00:20:151 - Volume seems a bit high for such a quiet section, try reducing to 30% or lower changed
  2. 00:02:018 (2) - no sound here, it really doesn't make sense in placing a circle here done
  3. 00:44:114 (2,5) - this overlap doesn't look really nice, you have a lot of space to use above the slider fixed
  4. 00:49:419 (1,3) - can we copy and paste so it looks the same? ^
  5. 00:55:272 (1) - the "whistles" on the tails sounds really awkward and doesn't follow the song. the correct use of the "whistles" would be to add them on the second and fourth white lines in a full measure. and those hitsounds should actually be claps but whatev still suck at hitsounds sorry ;w; will be working on it with Yahuri later on
  6. 01:45:029 (1) - would be nice if you could add a circle here for the loud finish in the back I like the idea of keeping the spinner this way
Hard
  1. same thing about volumes done
  2. 00:02:018 (2) - again, no sound here ^
  3. 00:14:240 (1,1) - I really don't understand why this has to be sv 0.5x, seems very confusing and unnecessary. softens that note?
  4. 00:15:721 (1) - why is the hitsound here different? seems pretty inconsistent just missed a whistle at the front
  5. 00:17:203 (1) - it would make more sense to pull this up to 00:19:425 - since there's actually a separate sound there instead of ending the spinner in the middle of a note I'm using the spinner as an end note
  6. fix hitsounds yep working on it
yahuri
  1. 00:30:044 (3,4) - the distance here and 00:32:970 (3,4) - here is different
    not bad

gl
thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
sorry for the late reply! ><

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi there hi :)
NM from my modding Q
Yay~ something from BSD ^^ hehe ^^

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. Consider to add an Easy. This song is short, it wouldn't be much trouble. And it would make a better diff spread so it would increase the quality of the mapset. I'll consider it _(:3 」∠ )_


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:907 (1,2) - tl;dr, fix blanket. If you're not sure how to, read next :arrow: . As you can see here, this is a perfect pattern for blanket and I see you're attempting to do blanket here. But it still imperfect. The trick to make the perfect blanket is to use blanketed note's approach circle as a guide. 00:02:018 (2) - for this case. In your current pattern, you can see that the slider body is not following the approach circle perfectly, take a look http://puu.sh/sSpn8/cb1def4ded.jpg that's why the blanket seems imperfect. First step to perfect it, you can use 25% playback rate so you can place the approach circle in such a way that it would be easier to follow it, look here : http://puu.sh/sSpvA/89713ae1dd.jpg Next step, you can adjust the anchors so the slider body would coincide with the approach circle, like so : http://puu.sh/sSpz2/cd4b942a21.jpg And voila, a perfect blanket. Repeat for another blanket pattern like 00:04:240 (2,3) - 00:05:351 (3,1) - and so on because they also seemed imperfect. You can manipulate the note position like ctrl+g-ing it or adding a note to create an approach circle guide. Just be creative ^^ turned out I had to change a bit here since I removed a note few mods ago but thanks for the tips :D
  2. 00:19:795 (1) - Warning, spinner gap. I read a new rules that say that there's must be min 2 empty beat after a spinner at Normal for a recovery. Because of this note, the gap you have rn is only 1 and a half beat. I suggest to just remove this note since it don't really cover an important sound. had time signature issue so I guess its okay now? //I used to not have a spinner here tho but some suggested to put in so im just honestly confused lol
  3. 00:24:541 (2,1) - They are almost touching, it doesn't look good. I suggest to move 00:26:004 (1) - a bit higher while maintaining the DS http://puu.sh/sSpNO/60b0907421.jpg would look much better. Don't forget to DS next notes. fixed!
  4. 00:33:138 (2) - I don't think this note is necessary because there's barely any sound there. Maybe just remove it? ^
  5. 00:33:321 (3) - I think it would flow much better if this curved another way http://puu.sh/sSpXa/af373c33e4.jpg but well, you'll have to do some modification for next notes. Let me guide you. First, make sure (3)'s tail still land perfectly on top of 00:34:785 (1) - 's head http://puu.sh/sSpYC/333d10d445.jpg Next, place (4) and (5) like this http://puu.sh/sSq18/e9358ffcd9.jpg try to maintain triangle and blanket pattern for extra plus on looks ;) Last, curve 00:34:785 (1) - so it would blanket 00:34:053 (4) - and tadaah. since I have already removed 00:33:138's note from a couple of mods back, I've made my own modifications :D
  6. 00:41:187 There's a pretty big drum sound that you ignored here. You can add a note to cover it but it might be too much note for Normal tho because the next pattern is pretty tricky as well. Or maybe, you can end 00:40:638 (2) - there so the tail would cover the sound, but it would be no longer covering vocal. Well, choose your own way. wow I completely missed that. hope this one works!
  7. 01:09:907 (1,3) - This don't look like blanket pattern but I think you better blanket it, lol. changed a lot here few mods back. cant remember if it is a blanket pattern or nah :v
  8. 01:12:468 (6,1) - Well I don't know if you have another stacked 1/2 pattern before, but I think this is the first one, the other is 1/4 pattern, so maybe player will think of this as another 1/4 pattern... It also downbeat so stacking would reduce the emphasize. Maybe you better unstack them. But well, it's no big deal, you still can keep this. stacking helps emphasize it imo so I'll keep it
  9. 01:13:931 Add circle to cover vocal? It also be a nice lead up to 01:14:297 (2) - sure
  10. 01:17:955 (4,2) - They are overlapping and it's not a good thing. There's two option, move (4) somewhere like this http://puu.sh/sSqmR/0860257c04.jpg withe extra perk that it make better flow but you will have to go through DS-ing hell, or rotate this entire thing 01:19:419 (2,3,4) - with ctrl+shift+R command so it would look something like this http://puu.sh/sSqpD/9f39db4788.jpg or it's not overlapping anymore. I totally recommend the latter ofc. fixed!
  11. 01:19:419 (2,5) - Stack. Try to fix this blanket 01:19:419 (2,4) - and you'll be able to stack perfectly without disturbing the DS. whoops. missed that one
  12. 01:22:894 (3,1) - Naaahhh, this is very tricky for Normal. Don't do this. But well, I can't find a nice easy way to fix this so make sure to find it yourself. Anyway, I oblige you to change this. fixed! //hopefully
  13. 01:36:248 (4) - Try to make the curve part blanket 01:34:419 (1) - 's body. http://puu.sh/sSqyo/20a89a9fe2.jpg it won't be visible in gameplay but lol, y not. again, changed a lot few mods back lol thanks anyway XD
  14. 01:37:711 (2) - I hear sound at blue tick, maybe make this a 1/4 reverse slider? I'll keep it this way since its Normal :3
  15. 01:42:651 (2,5) - The way they're overlapping is not really good imo, maybe try to move (5) like this http://puu.sh/sSqD9/da6c0197a9.jpg while keeping nice triangle pattern and changing its direction a bit for better flow. ok
  16. 01:45:029 (1) - Tip about spinner, don't directly put a spinner at big white tick. Precede it with a circle like so http://puu.sh/sSqH9/f822a3f2ac.jpg (you can start the spinner at blue tick or even yellow tick (1/8) at slower BPM like this for harder diff). That way, you can add finish hitsound to the circle and the big sound would be emphasized better. But well, it's not obligatory, especially for lower diff like this so you can keep. Feel free to apply tho. I'll keep it this way :3


Wow, I totally feel like modding rn
Good map overall ^^ yay \>///</
I'll end this here for a while, I'll go check Hard (and maybe Insane) later.

Good luck for now :3

Ediiiittt
let's mod Hard~

[Hard]
  1. HP 7 is VERY high!!! Use 5 or 6. Considering the Insane is 7 and Normal is 4, maybe 5.5.
  2. I still see some blanket problems, better fix them~ fixed!
  3. 00:09:425 (1,2) - Is the stack really necessary? Considering there's no really sound that suggest stacking, I think it's better to unstack them. Well, if you can figure out a nice place to unstack, at least stacking on top of 00:11:277 (3) - would be better. ^
  4. 00:15:721 (1) - Okay, I know you're trying to make some symmetrical rhythm with 00:14:240 (1) - but considering the sound is not symmetrical, I mean, there's guitar sound here 00:16:092 I think you better adapt to the sound by ending the slider there and adding a circle at white tick afterwards. not for symmetrical purposes lol but ok
  5. 00:17:203 (1) - Well, there's no spinner gap rule for Hard so maybe you can end this spinner here 00:19:425 where the last guitar note was because ending it at where it is now don't really make sense imo. Some more suggestion, maybe you can make a lead up to the verse by adding a 1/4 slider here 00:19:795 to support the vocal. again, it was a time signature issue so maybe this would be okay :3
  6. 00:23:077 (3,4) - Polarity stuff, try to watch this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws tl;dr, it would be better if you delete this slider 00:24:175 (4) - and then make reverse for (3) and add a note afterwards (if necessary) Or maybe you can use some trickier rhythm like this http://puu.sh/sSE6Q/11227837d9.jpg since this is Hard. hmm i did a thing here hopefully this works :p
  7. 00:30:394 (6,7) - Unstack, people might mistake this as 1/4 pattern since you don't even stack 1/4 pattern. there are similar patterns later on so i dont think its necessary
  8. 00:39:175 (6) - There's a guitar and vocal sound here 00:39:541 that's very worth mapping but got ignored. Just end the slider there and add a circle afterwards. fixed!
  9. 00:51:980 (1,2) - It kinda weird that you cover these two vocal sound but not this one 00:51:797 It felt, incomplete or something. I suggest to cover that vocal note as well. You can simply add a circle or change the entire thing to 1/4 reverse slider. Personally I prefer the latter because not only it become simpler, but it would also differ from the drum note here 00:51:614 (4) - , but well, the entire thing is up to you~ ^
  10. 00:53:809 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda weird pattern tbh... Either stack these three 00:53:809 (1,2,3) - entirely or separate them entirely. Don't separate only one and stack the other because they are one of a kind sound. I kinda like whats going on here tbh but I'll keep that in mind
  11. 00:58:199 (1) - Maybe follow 00:57:102 (5) - 's shape for the part before red anchor to make it looks neater. Because currently it looks like bad overlap. http://puu.sh/sSExk/fd55d6c847.jpg I guess you get the idea. yepp
  12. 00:59:663 (4,5) - Try to swap (ctrl+g) these two. I think it would be more fitting because it would cover the long vocal sound better and the bigger sound here 01:00:029 would be covered with circle instead of slider end thus emphasizing it better. changed the rhythm here few mods back, following 00:56:736 (4,5,6)
  13. 01:09:907 Ignored big white tick here. Honestly I prefer if this part is clickable so you might have to make a little rhythm change but I guess you're concentrating on vocal so at least use this slider 01:09:541 (6) - to emphasize it with making the big white tick land on red anchor. http://puu.sh/sSEJw/386653a73e.jpg something like that. But really, it's better if it's actually clickable. changed this bit my way ><
  14. 01:15:760 (1,2) - Umm, maybe make this symmetrical? http://puu.sh/sSEOh/b524751c19.jpg ok
  15. 01:20:516 (6,1) - Same thing about 00:58:199 (1) -, follow (6)'s shape. done
  16. 01:48:138 Well since this is Hard, I'll say this. Maybe consider adding another spinner here? Since there's still pretty long aftersound when the spinner ends. If you do, end the spinner here 01:49:053 nahh it wouldnt be long enough and itll risk breaking combo


Still good map ;w;/
Take a little glance on the Insane and it seems good as well.
Soo good luck
And have a star
thanks for your mod! and your star! ><
WildCry
Hi° NM from my modding queue...

Easy
01:01:983 (3,4) - fix distance
01:13:324 (2,3) - here to



Normal
01:04:178 (2,3) - fix distance
01:05:641 (3,4) - same

Good diff's very well made.



Hard
00:59:056 (5,6) - improve this blanket



Yahuri's Novel
Anything to say great diff!


Great beatmap!,i will leave something here.
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

WildCry wrote:

Hi° NM from my modding queue...

Easy
01:01:983 (3,4) - fix distance fixed
01:13:324 (2,3) - here to ^



Normal
01:04:178 (2,3) - fix distance no problems there? I moved it around tho
01:05:641 (3,4) - same same thing

Good diff's very well made.
thanks!


Hard
00:59:056 (5,6) - improve this blanket done



Yahuri's Novel
Anything to say great diff!


Great beatmap!,i will leave something here. thanks!
thanks for the mod! :)
Yahuri
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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Title:Namae wo Yobu yo
TitleUnicode:名前を呼ぶよ
Artist:Luck Life
ArtistUnicode:ラックライフ
Creator:Kirisakiii
Version:Yahuri's Novel
Source:文豪ストレイドッグス
Tags:yahuri bungou stray dogs ending spring 2016
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509,112,62714,2,0,P|489:80|460:58,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,242,63080,2,0,P|441:241|512:200,1,75
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273,378,72958,2,0,P|233:316|236:242,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,112,82104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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197,86,84300,2,0,P|193:124|178:158,1,75
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178,157,85031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,271,85214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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331,233,85580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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327,266,93446,2,0,P|291:280|254:284,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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262,314,95092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
111,189,95275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,377,95458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,198,95641,6,0,B|231:162|219:123|219:123|227:81|253:58,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,144,96190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,285,96373,2,0,B|345:250|323:215|323:215|339:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,205,96922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,337,97104,6,0,B|476:305|445:277|445:277|454:236|443:205,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,85,97653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,285,97836,2,0,B|345:250|323:215|323:215|339:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,85,98385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,198,98568,6,0,B|231:162|219:123|219:123|227:81|253:58,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,284,99300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,112,99665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,198,99848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,302,100031,5,6,0:0:0:0:
383,135,101495,6,0,B|382:104|361:81|361:81|331:75|303:90,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,135,102044,2,0,B|129:104|150:81|150:81|180:75|208:90,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,247,102592,2,0,B|311:303|256:319|256:319|198:302|164:247,1,240,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,85,103690,5,8,0:0:0:0:
349,247,103873,1,4,0:3:0:0:
163,246,104056,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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version: full-hitsounded

fix the hitsounds on ur diffs btw
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Kirisakiii

Yahuri wrote:

fix the hitsounds on ur diffs btw
already did, just late to update =w= thanks for the hitsound update btw!
PotatoJA
hi from #modreq

[Hard]
01:15:153 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - make as one combo

[Yahuri's Novel]
01:01:617 (4) - this placement feels weird imo, maybe a little higher? stack it with 01:00:885 (2)'s start point

GL :v
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