1. Collab (4,99 stars, 613 notes)
2. Hard (4,8 stars, 470 notes)
3. ShaggoNormal (3,05 stars, 247 notes)

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

Halo

[Hard]

Recalculate slider length

00:33:195 (5) - Length is incorrect
01:04:480 - 01:09:087 This part seems off sync especially 01:04:480 (1,2,3) , 01:06:195 (2,3,4) , 01:07:909 (1,2,3,4)
However i dont know how to change them and whether they should be changed
02:40:480 (1,2,3) - stack them. Reverse (1),(2) and move (1,2,3) all to center, then reverse (1) and (2) again.
01:40:909 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked
02:02:552 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:01:909 (1,2,3,1,2) - Flip them vertically?

GOOD!
BONUS 80000

K o h a k u wrote:

hi~ nice too meet you!

suggest about hit sound a bit

[Hard]

01:55:480 (3)remove whistle and add clap
02:02:338 (3)-^
02:04:052 (4)-^

I think better
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cute rin and song <3
star~

Fight69 wrote:

Hello~

[General]

Your mp3's bitrate is too high (320kbps), it should be between 128kbps~192kbps
You need a new reencoded mp3, so here is one just for you ! (192kbps)

http://www.mediafire.com/?qc9u5rnboogpcw4

For the new offset, I've found : 826
But I'm not sure at all, it should be great if someone can confirm it

Don't forget to resnap everything, especially the inherited timing section, they are a bit messed up now :<

[Hard]

01:04:254 - Add a circle here
01:07:683 - ^

Nice
~Starz'd !

ShaggoN wrote:

Here we go :3
And nobody told me about any collab u_u ...just let me take a shower xD
EDIT: Collab done.

Giorgos wrote:

привет)
поставь Audio-Lead in на 1,5 секунды.

ZLOdeuka's Hard:
а вот это уже на инсейн тянет))) AR 8 - это слишком много для харда. понизь до семи хотя бы..либо переименуй в инсейн..HP Drain тоже огромный - пощади людей,поставь 6 что ли))
01:36:826 - закончили бы с Шаггоном что ли KIAI mod в одно время) красиво смотрится,когда все синхронно) и это касается многих последующих KIAI модов.
03:35:111 - раз уж тут заканчивается KIAI мод,то продли лучше до этого момента спиннер.


Collab:
тут нечего сказать) классно сделано.

STAR!

CrimmiSkye wrote:

Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

oh lol you mispelled galvenize's name to "gelvenize", just letting you know there xD I have not noticed this ^^' thx~

on to the mod!!

Overall, it's good just some minor suggestions. *Star*

Giorgos wrote:

ShaggoNormal:
Wow,pretty high velocity for normal diff here,Shaggon But it looks good anyway. and such a big distance spacing... It seems to me that you often like to turn 'Distance Snap' off I would increase here AR and call it - 'Hard'. Sorry, it's supposed to be Normal, and it'll stay as Normal.

CrimmiSkye wrote:

[ShaggoNormal]

01:03:826 (7) - align with (5). Fixed with little changes.
01:20:540 (4) - Just a grid down if you don't mind. Ofc i don't mind. Thanks.
01:34:255 (4) - just a grid up. Ofc i don't mind. Thanks.

rust45 wrote:

[ShaggoNormal]
02:06:183 (1) - This part caught me up and I figure it might catch noobs as stacks under sliders can be confusing. And just so it's clear, it caught me up because I thought it was a beat away and not 1/2 a beat. Hmm, i guess you're right. Fixed.

Aleks719 wrote:

ShaggoNormal
00:40:254 (1) - remove clap from spinner, add whistle. Hmm, yeah sounds better.
wow, great again :3 Thanks ^.^

fartownik wrote:

offset +18 (844) -> Resnap All Notes

Also you should make kiai time in Collab and Hard as it is in Shaggon difficulty. Feels more reasonable.ok


[Collab]

I see a bit overdone of new combos in galvenize's parts. You should decrease their amount

00:30:611 - just a reminder: Don't place any timing sections in the top of the note/slider, because when you change offset in its state, the sliders and hitsounds
might screw up. Goes to all of the diffs.ok
00:43:683 (4) - New combo.ok
00:53:540 (1) - Delete new combo.ok
00:59:325 (4,5) - This is actually VERY confusing. You're not obliged that the coming slider is 1,0x, not 0,5x. Make (4) 1,0x or (5) 0,5x. Your choice.ok
01:02:540 (9,1) - Swap new combos.ok
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing.ok


[Hard]

Here also overdone of new combos.

00:27:611 (1,2,3) - Make this jump... more normal? It goes pretty weird.no
00:41:326 (1,2,3) - ^no
01:01:040 (2,3,5) - Aren't you overdoing this? ;o It's meant to be Hard, these jumps are actually Insane.no
01:04:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^no
01:11:968 (1,2,3,4) - ^no
01:15:397 (1,2,3,4) - ^no
02:09:611 (6) - Add finish.ok
03:17:968 (7) - New combo + finish.ok


Nice beatmap.
star

osuplayer111 wrote:

[ShaggoNormal]

03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

[Hard]

00:13:701 (1) - Silence this spinner, it would sound much better than now.
00:53:772 (1) - ^
02:02:558 (9) - New combo.
02:35:665 (6,7,8) - What's with this sudden spacing change? I disagree of having it here. oops x]
02:40:486 (1,2,3) - Stack all the endpoints? It would look nicer.
03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

[Collab]

00:53:986 (1) - Same as Hard about spinner suggestion.
02:51:415 (1,2) - Add a warning for these 2 sliders? They are unexpected, I have to say.
03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

Also, I'm not a big fan of these slider speed changes.

Other than that, it's a good map! Let me know when you've fixed and I'll gladly rebubble this.

James2250 wrote:

-Not really a good idea to have a break right near the start and then not have another one for 3 mins, try and add a break on the second half tooI think it's a good idea and a suitable break
-Doesn't only the last difficulty need the 2x warning? Remove it from the .osb file and move it to the .osu in the difficulty
-Add Vocaloid to the tags? You could also add Junky to the source (the composer) like this map has
-Your offset might be slightly late, I would get it double checked quickly

fix

ShaggoNormal:
03:31:701 (1) - would be nicer for the easiest difficulty to just extend the spinner to 03:34:701 and delete the note

fix

Hard:
00:34:915 (3,1) - space out more if possible [spacing here is not broken.]
01:16:486 (1,2,3) - keep spacing like this equal