SoundTeMP - Ancient Groover

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Topic Starter
Ruish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February-19-12 at 7:39:53 PM

Artist: SoundTeMP
Title: Ancient Groover
Source: Ragnarok Online
Tags: MMORPG RPG OnosakiHito Payon Gravity Dungeon Cave
BPM: 110
Filesize: 4191kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.14 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (4.85 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Normal (4.13 stars, 157 notes)
  4. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 550 notes)


Download: SoundTeMP - Ancient Groover
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last full submit: 16/02/2012

Thanks to Armin for MP3 and Ono for taiko :3
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 9031

Relaxing~ Star ^^
Topic Starter
Ruish
Thanks for the offset :D
chungskale
hi~
this is like some bg music in RPG :3
suggestion here~

[General]
  1. Both diff. got too fast slider velocity. maybe 1.0 for normal and 1.5 for hard.
  2. Don't just follow the beat to place notes~ you will miss something and difficult for players to get the rhyme.
  3. Not recommended to use whistle in this music :( it is too loud for me.
  4. Try to make an Easy for new players.
  5. Click two times on slider to make it black circled to add hitsounds.
  6. Use distance snap. Holding alt and move your notes. this makes the arrangement tidy.


[Normal]
  1. This one is much better than Hard~ :)
  2. 00:18:576 - add note
  3. 00:19:667 - ^
  4. 00:22:940 - ^
  5. 00:36:577 (1) - delete 2 reverse
  6. 00:34:121 - add finish
  7. 00:36:304 (5) - ^
  8. 00:37:395 (1) - ^
  9. 00:39:576 - ^
  10. 00:39:577 (6) - lengthen it. end at 00:40:667
  11. 00:40:940 (1) - delete
  12. 00:43:940 (1,1,1,1) - remove whistle
  13. 00:50:077 (1,2) - place together
  14. 01:46:804 (1,2) - ^
  15. 00:52:667 (1) - i don't understand 3 2 1~ Lol. Make those 321 sliders into some good looking sliders~And remove whistle from sliders
  16. 00:55:667 (4) - it is non sense for repeating so long. maybe just 3 reverse and place a note at 00:55:667 (4)
  17. 01:07:395 (6) - ^ 3 reverse and delete (7) and place two notes on white lines
  18. 01:17:076 (5) - move to white line but not blue line
  19. 01:18:577 (1) - 3 reverse.
  20. 01:40:667 (4,1,1,1) - remove whistle
  21. 01:43:940 - remove finish at the beginning of slider.

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:304 (9,10,11,12) - delete and use a no reverse slider.
  2. 00:15:030 (1,2) - move them together to 00:14:894 -
  3. 00:15:440 (3,4) - move them together to 00:15:440 -
  4. 00:20:349 - add note
  5. 00:20:894 - ^
  6. 00:23:485 (7) - delete
  7. 00:34:395 (8) - 3 reverse
  8. 00:36:576 (6) - half the reverse.
  9. 00:38:076 (3) - place it at 00:38:212 -
  10. 00:39:577 (6) - remove whistle
  11. 00:43:941 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  12. 00:52:667 (1) - ^
  13. 00:41:759 (4,5,6) - remove clap
  14. 01:26:485 (5) - +1 reverse
  15. 01:27:577 (7) - ^
  16. 01:31:940 (1) - ^
  17. 01:39:031 - add note
  18. 01:40:667 (1,3,4,5) - remove whistle


A lot of problems need to be fixed Lol...
you still need to learn more about the mapping functions, check for them in the forum~
star for encouragement :D
LaunchedthousandShip
I willing to mod this, but the timing sounds still off to me. Find a time talk to me. I would rather like to do this mod in-game, too much stuffs and for better understanding, I think IRC mod would be better.

Edit: IRC modded alot.
akrolsmir
Yeah... it's been a long time since you posted on my queue, sorry for the wait orz.

General:
You need a difficulty under 3 stars to be ranked. Consider making an easy or making normal easier.
Try using hitsounds more often? I'm not too good with them myself, but someone might be able to help you with those.
I don't like the repeating sliders that are short and vary in length, because it's really hard to tell how long to hold those, especially in Normal.

Normal:
00:10:122 (3,4) - I don't like overlapping sliders like this, maybe see 00:18:849 (3,4) - for something I prefer. That's my personal opinion, though, it's technically fine.
00:22:121 (1,2) - ^
00:25:122 (7,8,9) - Align to the end of 6?
00:30:849 (2) - New combo
00:40:940 (1,2,3,4) - Align to end of previoius note?
00:50:621 (3) - 1 grid right
01:12:849 (2,3) - Spacing is too far
01:37:667 (1) - Not quite in the center of the loop, go to grid level 4 to fix

Hard:
00:20:894 (1) - Delete this note
00:57:031 (1) - Kinda funky slider, was this intentional?
01:08:486 (12) - Maybe replace with a note and then a slider, like so:

01:30:849 (4,5) - Spacing (too close together)

Nice music, I can see a lot of potential on your maps. The slider art in easy was appreciated. Starred!
Topic Starter
Ruish

akrolsmir wrote:

Yeah... it's been a long time since you posted on my queue, sorry for the wait orz.

General:
You need a difficulty under 3 stars to be ranked. Consider making an easy or making normal easier.
Try using hitsounds more often? I'm not too good with them myself, but someone might be able to help you with those.
I don't like the repeating sliders that are short and vary in length, because it's really hard to tell how long to hold those, especially in Normal.

Normal:
00:10:122 (3,4) - I don't like overlapping sliders like this, maybe see 00:18:849 (3,4) - for something I prefer. That's my personal opinion, though, it's technically fine.ok
00:22:121 (1,2) - ^ok
00:25:122 (7,8,9) - Align to the end of 6?ok
00:30:849 (2) - New combook
00:40:940 (1,2,3,4) - Align to end of previoius note?ok
00:50:621 (3) - 1 grid rightok
01:12:849 (2,3) - Spacing is too farok
01:37:667 (1) - Not quite in the center of the loop, go to grid level 4 to fixok

Hard:
00:20:894 (1) - Delete this noteok
00:57:031 (1) - Kinda funky slider, was this intentional?yes ^^
01:08:486 (12) - Maybe replace with a note and then a slider, like so:
ok
01:30:849 (4,5) - Spacing (too close together)i think it's fine

Nice music, I can see a lot of potential on your maps. The slider art in easy was appreciated. Starred!
Thank you ^^. Added an easy difficulty.
Topic Starter
Ruish

chungskale wrote:

hi~
this is like some bg music in RPG :3
suggestion here~

[General]
  1. Both diff. got too fast slider velocity. maybe 1.0 for normal and 1.5 for hard.decreased velocity for hard~
  2. Don't just follow the beat to place notes~ you will miss something and difficult for players to get the rhyme.
  3. Not recommended to use whistle in this music :( it is too loud for me. took out a lot of whistles and decreased volume in the ones left
  4. Try to make an Easy for new players.done~
  5. Click two times on slider to make it black circled to add hitsounds.
  6. Use distance snap. Holding alt and move your notes. this makes the arrangement tidy.

    [Normal]
    1. This one is much better than Hard~ :)Thanks. I worked on this one more.
    2. 00:18:576 - add note
    3. 00:19:667 - ^
    4. 00:22:940 - ^
    5. 00:36:577 (1) - delete 2 reverse
    6. 00:34:121 - add finish
    7. 00:36:304 (5) - ^
    8. 00:37:395 (1) - ^
    9. 00:39:576 - ^
    10. 00:39:577 (6) - lengthen it. end at 00:40:667
    11. 00:40:940 (1) - delete
    12. 00:43:940 (1,1,1,1) - remove whistle
    13. 00:50:077 (1,2) - place together
    14. 01:46:804 (1,2) - ^
    15. 00:52:667 (1) - i don't understand 3 2 1~ Lol. Make those 321 sliders into some good looking sliders~And remove whistle from sliders
    16. 00:55:667 (4) - it is non sense for repeating so long. maybe just 3 reverse and place a note at 00:55:667 (4)
    17. 01:07:395 (6) - ^ 3 reverse and delete (7) and place two notes on white lines
    18. 01:17:076 (5) - move to white line but not blue line
    19. 01:18:577 (1) - 3 reverse.
    20. 01:40:667 (4,1,1,1) - remove whistle
    21. 01:43:940 - remove finish at the beginning of slider.

    [Hard]
    1. 00:12:304 (9,10,11,12) - delete and use a no reverse slider.
    2. 00:15:030 (1,2) - move them together to 00:14:894 -
    3. 00:15:440 (3,4) - move them together to 00:15:440 -
    4. 00:20:349 - add note
    5. 00:20:894 - ^
    6. 00:23:485 (7) - delete
    7. 00:34:395 (8) - 3 reverse
    8. 00:36:576 (6) - half the reverse.
    9. 00:38:076 (3) - place it at 00:38:212 -
    10. 00:39:577 (6) - remove whistle
    11. 00:43:941 (1,1,1,1) - ^
    12. 00:52:667 (1) - ^
    13. 00:41:759 (4,5,6) - remove clap
    14. 01:26:485 (5) - +1 reverse
    15. 01:27:577 (7) - ^
    16. 01:31:940 (1) - ^
    17. 01:39:031 - add note
    18. 01:40:667 (1,3,4,5) - remove whistle


A lot of problems need to be fixed Lol...
you still need to learn more about the mapping functions, check for them in the forum~
star for encouragement :DThanks for the star
I took most advice from this but didn't have time to comment. Thank you!
loveFantasy
hi.

[General]
  1. your MP3 has a bitrate of 96kbps, it's recommended to use a 128~192kbps MP3 file, try to find a better one
  2. title: Ancient Groover. (capitalize 'G', ref: wikipedia)
  3. [Easy] has different tags as [Normal] and [Hard], please makes them the same, also suggest adding tags: RO.


[Easy]
after seeing all your difficulties, i'm not giving you a standard full mod, instead i'll give you a very detailed mod to diff [Easy], please check it and understand the major problem of your map at the moment, basically..
  1. sync new combo with high white ticks is usually better (and it's better in your case, too), pic:

    check the [Easy] diff mod below to find some example of misplaced new combos
  2. keep distance snap, distance multiplier is shown at top-right corner of the editor, check the 00:18:849 part of the mod and you'll know what i'm saying.
  3. keep the rhythm, see the [Easy] mods which i told you to add notes to understand how, of course you can bring variety to your mapset by introducing different rhythm, but they must be intuitive and sounds good..
  4. you need a hitsound pattern, not like how you did in 0:09~0:15 in your [Easy]: place 8 normals and then place 4 claps (you did similar things in other diff too), the most basic hitsounding skill is called 2/4 white tick hitsounding, which means place hitsound on 2nd/4th white ticks and leave all other points without hitsound, pic:

    it has different form like 3/7 or 4/8 white ticks hitsounding, i'll give an example of 3/7 below (Easy diff), try to understand yourself and go hitsounding your other part/diff:
  5. 00:10:121 (2) - clap
  6. 00:12:303 (6) - clap (only startpoint, don't clap the whole slider)
  7. 00:14:486 (3) - clap
  8. 00:16:667 (1) - due to pattern this one should have clap, but since it's a transformation between paragraph, we leave it without hitsound, and...
  9. 00:17:758 (3) - finish here, to indicate it's the start of a new paragraph.

    ok now mod.
  10. if you're going to keep the square pattern (grid snap/distance snap/parallel movements), suggest you go press Ctrl+1 to enter grid lv4 and adjust your notes a bit, this is small but will makes your layout neat and tidy (which is important when you're applying square pattern), since it's small i'll only give <00:10:667> (3,4) for example, you decide if you want to fix the whole layout through the map:
    (3) -->
    (4) -->
  1. 00:16:667 (1) - remove new combo
  2. 00:17:758 (3) - new combo
  3. 00:18:849 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - keep the 1.00x spacing
  4. 00:25:121 (4) - delete note
  5. 00:25:940 (x) - add note
  6. 00:26:212 (x) - add note, this provide better rhythm
  7. 00:40:667 (x) - add note
  8. 00:41:758 (x) - add spinner, end at 00:43:940
  9. 00:48:303 (1) - delete
  10. 01:00:304 (1) - remove new combo
  11. 01:03:031.. - i don't think you need a break here and it breaks the music flow, just map this part
  12. 01:21:031 (5) - new combo
  13. 01:22:107 (1) - remove new combo
  14. 01:24:849 (1) - remove new combo
  15. 01:25:394 (2) - new combo
  16. 01:36:303 (1) - end at 01:38:485 instead
  17. 01:45:031 (1) - end at 01:47:212 instead


try to apply similar fixes to Normal and Hard, there're still a lot you can do yourself before posting modding reqs in forum.
if you have any question about the editor function or mapping tips, feel free to PM me or ask me in-game.

good luck
MoodyRPG
[Easy]

00:28:667 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:849 (5) - Add new combo here
01:01:394 (7) - New combo

[Normal]

00:24:303 (6) - New combo
00:52:667 (6) - ^
01:01:394 (7) - ^
01:27:576 (4) - ^
01:34:121 (7) - ^

[Hard]

- Slider Tick Rate: 2

00:23:758 (5) - Line up with (3)

Star~
Topic Starter
Ruish

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Easy]

00:28:667 (1) - Remove new combo ok
00:30:849 (5) - Add new combo here ok
01:01:394 (7) - New combo ok

[Normal]

00:24:303 (6) - New combo nah
00:52:667 (6) - ^ok
01:01:394 (7) - ^ok
01:27:576 (4) - ^nah
01:34:121 (7) - ^ok

[Hard]

- Slider Tick Rate: 2 ok

00:23:758 (5) - Line up with (3) ok

Star~
Thanks for the mod :D
xBourbon_Kid
first mod D: i'm newb :<

Blue: Is this right?
Green: Suggestion
Red: fix plz

Easy:
01:03:170 (2) - shouldn't this be on the white one?
01:35:214 (4) - clap maybe?
looks quite good , i like it

Normal:
00:50:617 (3) remove it and place circle or silence the end of the slider , i don't really like it
00:54:984 (4) same as above
01:35:231 (4) maybe it sounds better with clap at first hit (not at the end)
01:43:940 (2) same as above
01:47:080 (2) remove it and place a circle there or silence the end of the slider OR place a circle there and at 01:47:490

i won't mod hard cuz i'm newb.

star~
Topic Starter
Ruish

rezz1337 wrote:

first mod D: i'm newb :<

Blue: Is this right?
Green: Suggestion
Red: fix plz

Easy:
01:03:170 (2) - shouldn't this be on the white one? music starts on that though
01:35:214 (4) - clap maybe? thx
looks quite good , i like it

Normal:
00:50:617 (3) remove it and place circle or silence the end of the slider , i don't really like it
00:54:984 (4) same as above
01:35:231 (4) maybe it sounds better with clap at first hit (not at the end) thanks, made a mistake here
01:43:940 (2) same as above took off the finish and added clap
01:47:080 (2) remove it and place a circle there or silence the end of the slider OR place a circle there and at 01:47:490

For the places i commented on, another mapper actually suggested changing it to that. Something constant is easy for the players to follow. Part of it is actually on the 1/8th note but i didn't want to use the 1/8 so i used the slider.
i won't mod hard cuz i'm newb.

star~
Thank you for the mod!
OnosakiHito
Everytime I hear Ragnarok BPM's, I'm really happy...
May I make a Taiko guest diff. please? :3

Star
Jayel
Hello~ here is my mod~! :D

Notice: The text in blue is something that is optional.

[General]
This is the best time for your beatmap's kiai time.
00:48:303 ~ 01:05:758


[Easy]
First, it would be better if you lessen the slider tick rate into 1.

00:09:031(1) Finish sound at the beginning of the slider
00:18:849(2) Clap sound
00:25:394(4,5,6,7) I think it is a little hard for [Easy]. Try something else so that it can be easier.
00:33:031(3) Make it more symmetric: Move the slider 1 tick to right & move the curve point 1 tick to left
00:39:031(5) Eliminate the clap sound
00:39:576(6) Eliminate the clap sound and add finish sound at the beginning of the slider
00:39:576(6,7) I think it would be better if you make 6,7 as one slider. Not slider and circle.
01:03:167(2) Nice try, but... I think it is bad for easy. Just set the beginning point at 01:03:576 and the ending point at 01:04:121 or you can make other try~
01:04:667(3) Clap sound

Ok, great!


[Normal]
GOOD.


[Hard]
00:18:849(2,3) What are the meaning of these notes;;; you'd better get rid of note 3.
01:33:303(5,6) Making these notes as one slider would be better :)


OK, sorry for being late :(

I think this song is great. It makes me relaxed :D
Topic Starter
Ruish

Jayel wrote:

Hello~ here is my mod~! :D

Notice: The text in blue is something that is optional.

[General]
This is the best time for your beatmap's kiai time. sorry, don't want to use kiai time.
00:48:303 ~ 01:05:758


[Easy]
First, it would be better if you lessen the slider tick rate into 1. nah

00:09:031(1) Finish sound at the beginning of the slidernah
00:18:849(2) Clap sound ok
00:25:394(4,5,6,7) I think it is a little hard for [Easy]. Try something else so that it can be easier. nah
00:33:031(3) Make it more symmetric: Move the slider 1 tick to right & move the curve point 1 tick to left fixed
00:39:031(5) Eliminate the clap sound ok
00:39:576(6) Eliminate the clap sound and add finish sound at the beginning of the slider eliminated clap sound but did not add finish
00:39:576(6,7) I think it would be better if you make 6,7 as one slider. Not slider and circle. changed to single slider
01:03:167(2) Nice try, but... I think it is bad for easy. Just set the beginning point at 01:03:576 and the ending point at 01:04:121 or you can make other try~ i think i will stick with this for now
01:04:667(3) Clap sound ok

Ok, great!


[Normal]
GOOD.


[Hard]
00:18:849(2,3) What are the meaning of these notes;;; you'd better get rid of note 3. i think it suits the music
01:33:303(5,6) Making these notes as one slider would be better :)i think they're ok


OK, sorry for being late :(

I think this song is great. It makes me relaxed :D
Thank you for your mod! I missed a lot claps.
Yomeiro
Hi there~
From my riddle modding queue

General

Did you consider to add Kiai-Time at your diffs?
I would probably add Kiai from 00:26:485 - 00:39:577 and 01:23:213 - 01:36:303.

Hard


These Hitsounds.... Oh....My....God....
Let's say... I would use the claps more at the parts where I would also use Kiai, and then throughout the song may some claps but most of the time whistles... finishes where needed apparently.
Since it's easier for me to show you what my ideas are, I'll just give you a file where I would feel like "this sounds ok." (no offense intended here~, Everyone has a different hearing and taste for hitsounds~ :3)
Note: If you use that file, make sure you make a backup of your own latest copy so you can replace it easily again.

00:17:212 (8,1) - Remove finish from 1 and add it on 8.
00:32:758 (10,11,1) - Add NC at 10 and remove it from 1....
00:45:849 (3) - I would add a finish here~
01:42:576 (3) - ^
00:46:121 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of this slider.
01:42:849 (4) - ^
00:50:621 (3) - Slider doesn't fit in my opinion~, change it to a single note~
00:54:985 (3) - ^
01:05:758 (1) - Combo starting from here on is too long... (15 notes x_x)... try to split it up~
01:14:486 (1) - ^
01:27:577 (8) - Add NC here.
01:44:894 (6,7) - Add finish on 6 and 7.

I attach the file I mentioned as already said, use parts which you like of it. Otherwise, I would like to see if you changed at least the things I stated above for this diff.

Normal

Well, I guess if you take at the Hitsounds of the file I'll attach for your Hard diff, you probably see how I would use them here as well....

00:28:122 (1) - I see what you try to do here, but I would appreciate it if you could remove the NC here. Because of the claps from the "stream" before, I would add a finish on this.
00:30:304 (1) - ^
00:36:577 (1) - Remove NC.
00:46:122 (1) - Add finish to the beginning~
01:42:849 (1) - ^
00:50:621 (3) - Same as in Hard, Slider doesn't really fit here.~, Since this is a Normal, could you change 00:50:077 (1,2,3) into a slider with repeat then? :o
00:59:349 (4) - ^
01:01:394 (1) - No finish here like at 00:52:667 (1)?

I guess that's all for Normal then.

Easy

Same with the Hitsounds as in Normal, you see how I would probably use them here as well when taking a look at the attached file.

01:01:394 (1) - No finish at the beginning like at 00:52:667 (1)?
01:22:121 (1) - I would probably remove the NC from here~

I guess that's all for Easy....

Well, other than what I could find I guess you did a pretty good job there.
Maps still need some work probably but other than that...^^
I hope you're going to map stuff like Rose of Sharon or Into the Arena too~ :3
Star for you~

Download: SoundTeMP - Ancient Groover (Ruish) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Ruish

Yomeiro wrote:

Hi there~
From my riddle modding queue

General

Did you consider to add Kiai-Time at your diffs?
I would probably add Kiai from 00:26:485 - 00:39:577 and 01:23:213 - 01:36:303. don't really want to use kiai

Hard


These Hitsounds.... Oh....My....God....
Let's say... I would use the claps more at the parts where I would also use Kiai, and then throughout the song may some claps but most of the time whistles... finishes where needed apparently.
Since it's easier for me to show you what my ideas are, I'll just give you a file where I would feel like "this sounds ok." (no offense intended here~, Everyone has a different hearing and taste for hitsounds~ :3)
Note: If you use that file, make sure you make a backup of your own latest copy so you can replace it easily again.

00:17:212 (8,1) - Remove finish from 1 and add it on 8. i think it's ok
00:32:758 (10,11,1) - Add NC at 10 and remove it from 1.... ok
00:45:849 (3) - I would add a finish here~ ok
01:42:576 (3) - ^^
00:46:121 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of this slider.^
01:42:849 (4) - ^^
00:50:621 (3) - Slider doesn't fit in my opinion~, change it to a single note~ i don't think a single note fits either...
00:54:985 (3) - ^ ^
01:05:758 (1) - Combo starting from here on is too long... (15 notes x_x)... try to split it up~ ok
01:14:486 (1) - ^ ^
01:27:577 (8) - Add NC here. k
01:44:894 (6,7) - Add finish on 6 and 7. added finish on 7

I attach the file I mentioned as already said, use parts which you like of it. Otherwise, I would like to see if you changed at least the things I stated above for this diff.

Normal

Well, I guess if you take at the Hitsounds of the file I'll attach for your Hard diff, you probably see how I would use them here as well....

00:28:122 (1) - I see what you try to do here, but I would appreciate it if you could remove the NC here. Because of the claps from the "stream" before, I would add a finish on this. ok
00:30:304 (1) - ^ ^
00:36:577 (1) - Remove NC. ok
00:46:122 (1) - Add finish to the beginning~ ok
01:42:849 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:621 (3) - Same as in Hard, Slider doesn't really fit here.~, Since this is a Normal, could you change 00:50:077 (1,2,3) into a slider with repeat then? :ook
00:59:349 (4) - ^ ^
01:01:394 (1) - No finish here like at 00:52:667 (1)? it is at 01:05:758 (1)

I guess that's all for Normal then.

Easy

Same with the Hitsounds as in Normal, you see how I would probably use them here as well when taking a look at the attached file.

01:01:394 (1) - No finish at the beginning like at 00:52:667 (1)? it is at 01:05:758 (1)
01:22:121 (1) - I would probably remove the NC from here~ ok

I guess that's all for Easy....

Well, other than what I could find I guess you did a pretty good job there.
Maps still need some work probably but other than that...^^
I hope you're going to map stuff like Rose of Sharon or Into the Arena too~ :3
Star for you~
Thank you for fixing my hitsounds~
IceBeam
Hello.

Remove Background Music Game from Tags.BGM is fine enough.

I should also mention that MP3's bitrate is below ranking criteria,it should be between 128-192 kbps.

So,use this link if you want to get a MP3 with a higher quality.
Thanks to Armin for sharing a link :>

[Easy]
Claps so sound disgusting,really.. :o
Maybe you could change them with whistles?

00:09:031 (1) - Finish?
00:35:212 (1) - Finish and how about using plain slider shape? Cause this curve looks a little weird.And yeah,it's few grids out of Distance Snap,so fix it.
00:39:576 (6) - This slider almost overlaps with 00:38:485 (4) and it doesn't look so good.How about using this pattern?
00:41:212 - Add a note here to keep the rhytm on,or just start a spinner from here.
01:03:167 (2) - What is this? Start it from white tick (01:03:031).
01:40:667 - Finish fits really well.

[Normal]
Approach rate doesn't perfectly fit the map's speed,I would use AR4 for this one.

Also,remove all these short breaks.They're unrankable.

00:13:395 (1,2,3,4) - Make it symmetrical?
00:15:440 (5) - Uh..what can I say..I'd like you to use 00:15:303 note instead of 00:15:440.
00:28:122 (6) - Huh? A jump? No way,it's only Normal,fix distance,please.
00:30:303 (6) - ^
00:30:849 (7) - New combo.
00:40:940 (1) - Again.Don't jump,please.
00:43:940 (1,2,1,2) - These are acceptable to me,but still..
00:47:213 (2,1,3) - Just HOW? :|



00:50:076 (3) - Anyway,use new combo and it shouldn't be snapped on blue tick.Use white/red.
00:54:440 (2) - ^
00:55:667 (3) - Oh come on -_- What does it follow?
00:58:804 (2,3) - Distance isn't correct and these blue ticks are hard to read.
01:03:167 (2) - And once again..
01:31:940 (1) - Finish?
01:36:304 (6) - Nice attempt at slider design,but shape isn't perfect and 01:37:940 (2) is covered by the slider :|
01:46:804 (1,2) - Remove this and just extend 01:44:758 (1) slider up to this point.

[Hard]
Same for breaks.

00:16:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's covered by 00:15:440 (5,6),place this pattern somewhere instead?
00:50:690 (3) - Is it snapped on 1/8? Are you serious? :|
00:54:440 (1,2,3) - ^ Same,it's not acceptable..
00:55:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing isn't correct,(2) should be 2x closer to (1).

Well..
Easy was fine,but Normal and especially Hard are unacceptable.
You can't randomly snap your notes on blue(yellow) ticks. Cause it's unreadable.
I know it will be hard,but you should re-arrenge your maps using white/red ticks,mostly following main rhytm.
Unless you won't make your map ranked..

Anyway,good luck to you,I'll leave my star.
Topic Starter
Ruish

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Remove Background Music Game from Tags.BGM is fine enough.

I should also mention that MP3's bitrate is below ranking criteria,it should be between 128-192 kbps.

So,use this link if you want to get a MP3 with a higher quality.
Thanks to Armin for sharing a link :> Thanks for sharing! I was looking for it.

[Easy]
Claps so sound disgusting,really.. :o
Maybe you could change them with whistles?

00:09:031 (1) - Finish?
00:35:212 (1) - Finish and how about using plain slider shape? Cause this curve looks a little weird.And yeah,it's few grids out of Distance Snap,so fix it.
00:39:576 (6) - This slider almost overlaps with 00:38:485 (4) and it doesn't look so good.How about using this pattern?
00:41:212 - Add a note here to keep the rhytm on,or just start a spinner from here.
01:03:167 (2) - What is this? Start it from white tick (01:03:031).
01:40:667 - Finish fits really well.

[Normal]
Approach rate doesn't perfectly fit the map's speed,I would use AR4 for this one.

Also,remove all these short breaks.They're unrankable.

00:13:395 (1,2,3,4) - Make it symmetrical?
00:15:440 (5) - Uh..what can I say..I'd like you to use 00:15:303 note instead of 00:15:440.
00:28:122 (6) - Huh? A jump? No way,it's only Normal,fix distance,please.
00:30:303 (6) - ^
00:30:849 (7) - New combo.
00:40:940 (1) - Again.Don't jump,please.
00:43:940 (1,2,1,2) - These are acceptable to me,but still..
00:47:213 (2,1,3) - Just HOW? :|



00:50:076 (3) - Anyway,use new combo and it shouldn't be snapped on blue tick.Use white/red.
00:54:440 (2) - ^
00:55:667 (3) - Oh come on -_- What does it follow?
00:58:804 (2,3) - Distance isn't correct and these blue ticks are hard to read.
01:03:167 (2) - And once again..
01:31:940 (1) - Finish?
01:36:304 (6) - Nice attempt at slider design,but shape isn't perfect and 01:37:940 (2) is covered by the slider :|
01:46:804 (1,2) - Remove this and just extend 01:44:758 (1) slider up to this point.

[Hard]
Same for breaks.

00:16:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's covered by 00:15:440 (5,6),place this pattern somewhere instead?
00:50:690 (3) - Is it snapped on 1/8? Are you serious? :|
00:54:440 (1,2,3) - ^ Same,it's not acceptable..
00:55:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing isn't correct,(2) should be 2x closer to (1).

Well..
Easy was fine,but Normal and especially Hard are unacceptable.
You can't randomly snap your notes on blue(yellow) ticks. Cause it's unreadable.
I know it will be hard,but you should re-arrenge your maps using white/red ticks,mostly following main rhytm.
Unless you won't make your map ranked..

Anyway,good luck to you,I'll leave my star.
Followed most of these.
-turned a lot of claps into whistles
-changed breaks
-used new mp3
-no more 1/8th in hard
-left 2 blue ticks in normal

Thanks for the mod and star!
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