Hello.
Remove
Background Music Game from Tags.
BGM is fine enough.
I should also mention that MP3's bitrate is
below ranking criteria,it should be between
128-192 kbps.So,use
this link if you want to get a MP3 with a higher quality.
Thanks to Armin for sharing a link :>[Easy]Claps so sound disgusting,really..
Maybe you could change them with whistles?
00:09:031 (1) - Finish?
00:35:212 (1) - Finish and how about using plain slider shape? Cause this curve looks a little weird.And yeah,it's few grids out of Distance Snap,so fix it.
00:39:576 (6) - This slider almost overlaps with 00:38:485 (4) and it doesn't look so good.How about using this pattern?
00:41:212 - Add a note here to keep the rhytm on,or just start a spinner from here.
01:03:167 (2) - What is this? Start it from white tick (01:03:031).
01:40:667 - Finish fits really well.
[Normal]Approach rate doesn't perfectly fit the map's speed,I would use AR4 for this one.
Also,remove all these short breaks.They're unrankable.
00:13:395 (1,2,3,4) - Make it symmetrical?
00:15:440 (5) - Uh..what can I say..I'd like you to use 00:15:303 note instead of 00:15:440.
00:28:122 (6) - Huh? A jump? No way,it's only Normal,fix distance,please.
00:30:303 (6) - ^
00:30:849 (7) - New combo.
00:40:940 (1) - Again.Don't jump,please.
00:43:940 (1,2,1,2) - These are acceptable to me,but still..
00:47:213 (2,1,3) - Just HOW?
00:50:076 (3) - Anyway,use new combo and it shouldn't be snapped on blue tick.Use white/red.
00:54:440 (2) - ^
00:55:667 (3) - Oh come on -_- What does it follow?
00:58:804 (2,3) - Distance isn't correct and these blue ticks are hard to read.
01:03:167 (2) - And once again..
01:31:940 (1) - Finish?
01:36:304 (6) - Nice attempt at slider design,but shape isn't perfect and 01:37:940 (2) is covered by the slider
01:46:804 (1,2) - Remove this and just extend 01:44:758 (1) slider up to this point.
[Hard]Same for breaks.
00:16:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's covered by 00:15:440 (5,6),place this pattern somewhere instead?
00:50:690 (3) - Is it snapped on 1/8? Are you serious?
00:54:440 (1,2,3) - ^ Same,it's not acceptable..
00:55:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing isn't correct,(2) should be 2x closer to (1).
Well..
Easy was fine,but Normal and especially Hard are unacceptable.
You can't randomly snap your notes on blue(yellow) ticks. Cause it's unreadable.
I know it will be hard,but you should re-arrenge your maps using white/red ticks,mostly following main rhytm.
Unless you won't make your map ranked..
Anyway,good luck to you,I'll leave my star.