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Kalibe
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Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Kalibe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 września 2016 at 16:05:37

Artist: fhana
Title: calling
Source: テイルズ オブ ゼスティリア ザ クロス
Tags: Tales of Zestiria the X Cross ufotable ending akitoshi doormat sotarks TV size
BPM: 71
Filesize: 14733kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (1,81 stars, 168 notes)
  2. Doormat's Hard (2,73 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Easy (1,38 stars, 112 notes)
  4. Insane (3,39 stars, 247 notes)
  5. Sotarks' Melancholy (4,1 stars, 305 notes)
Download: fhana - calling
Download: fhana - calling (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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osu! needs more fhána! <3








Credits ♪♫ | Checkout fhána!

► fhána - Facebook Official http://www.facebook.com/fhanamusic/
► fhána_info (@fhana_info) | Twitter https://twitter.com/fhana_info?lang=fr
► towana /とわな (@_towana) | Twitter https://twitter.com/_towana
► fhána | Website http://www.fhana.jp/
► fhána | Lantis http://www.lantis.jp/artist/fhana/
► fhána | Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fh%C3%A1na


Sotarks' fhána osu! Beatmaps

○ fhána - Kimi to Iu Tokuiten [singular you]
○ fhána - What a Wonderful World Line
○ fhána - little secret magic (sotarks' edit ver.)
○ fhána - calling
○ fhána - The Color to Gray World
○ fhána - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY
○ fhána - Outside of Melancholy -Yuuutsu no Mukougawa- (sotarks' edit ver.)
○ fhána - Genzaichi (sotarks' edit ver.)
○ fhána - moon river
○ fhána - tiny lamp
○ fhána - Rebuilt world
○ fhána - Niji o Ametara
○ fhána - Hello!MyWorld!! (TV size)
○ fhána - Hello!MyWorld!! (sotarks' edit ver.)
○ fhána - Comet Lucifer ~The Seed and the Sower~ (sotarks' edit ver.)


  1. Easy by mee
  2. Normal by you know who
  3. Hard by Doormat
  4. Insane by meeee
  5. Fhana trademark diffname by Soterks

mEmElAncHOLY
Last edited by Kalibe , edited 59 times in total.
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible
first xd



Cute little moddy poo for yooo <3
__________


Easy
Overall lots of blankets could use improvement.

00:03:605 (1) - I'd pull the end of this slider to the left some. It flows better with how the previous slider goes into that one.
00:53:464 (3,1) - ^ (another example)
00:06:140 (3,1) - Blanket these if possible. Sliders like 1 clash a lot with others if not used properly.
00:20:506 (1) - Middle curve in this feels a bit... off? Maybe move the center point further right and down.
00:40:788 (1) - Very well fitted slider, nicely done, goes well with vocals ^_^
00:47:548 (1) - This doesn't feel right shapewise. Move the end point up.
00:56:844 (4,1) - The overlap here isn't really pretty to look at. :(
00:59:379 (3) - Why have a clap here? This hitsound doesn't really fit the kiai too well in general.
01:03:605 (5) - End of this one too ^
01:11:210 (1,2) - Might as well blanket these, no?

Akitoshi's Normal
00:52:196 (2,3,4,5,1) - The claps are missing in this area, and without them it feels awkward, I suggest changing the mapping here to make those be able to be heard.
01:30:436 (5) - Why silent hitsound? No reason, bring up the audio so the clap can be heard. Almost can't hear it :(
01:34:027 (1) - ^

Journey
Overall, lots of the sliders here feel oddly out of place in some cases. It lacks variety. Many are just the 3 point curves or straight/barely curved sliders. Rounded ones with blankets involved would make this difficulty a lot better.
00:04:027 (2,3) - This jump feels too big. It comes out of nowhere compared to the rest. I'd just individually ctrl+ g all of 00:03:605 (1,2,3) and make it similar to 00:01:915 (1,2,3), works better.
00:00:225 (1,2) - Honestly, I feel these would be better parallel. Staggering their shapes as you did here doesn't really work unless you have more sliders.
00:00:225 (1,3) - Feel like you could blanket these, it looks awkward as is. Then maybe make 00:01:703 (4) be on top of the start of 00:00:225 (1)? (May take readjustments, I know you meant to put 00:01:915 (1) alongside it, but it just looks awkward as is. :cry:
00:15:436 (3,4,5) - Though not wrong, stacking like this is cruel for a 3 star song and I strongly suggest change.
00:50:929 (1) - Move left

Your difficulties have good flow, but it lacks some appeal to visuals. Blankets and more variety in sliders and maybe more stacking (but not stacking beats too close to each other) can help make it look nicer. Good luck! Cool song~
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
hi from your queue

journey
00:04:027 (2,3) - big spacing compared to 00:00:647 (2,3) - 00:02:337 (2,3) -
00:50:717 (3) - there is a loud sound not to skip imo
00:54:309 (1,2) - arf D:
01:04:450 (1) - shape should be improuved
otherwise it seems fine to me
maybe just, you should not use alot of overlaps it'll end up to make the diff ugly

akitoshi
00:52:196 (2) - circle works too imo 00:52:408 - is not enough important to get noticed
01:34:872 (3) - 70% it's too loud decrease a bit

easy
00:50:084 (5) - i think it will play better if (5) was a bit higher
easy is fine
it reminds me a bit janpai's easy but it's fine veri fine

Sorry for this short mod, arf if one day you need a mod for another map feel free to notice me, cause this mod is so poor : (
star!
Modem
3,013 posts
Joined February 2014
Modem
Hi~ M4M is here~ :3

Surprise Box \>w</
General


* fhaaaaaanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa issssssss loooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeee fhaaaaaaaanaaaaaaaaaaaa isssssssssss liiiiiiiiiiiiiivvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee

* Others seems fine~ :3

Easy


* Please disable the Widescreen Support since there's no storyboard in this mapset ;)

* 00:06:140 (3,1) - This blanket could use some improvement like this :


* 00:13:746 (1) - Just a suggestion, but how about moving this slider into x:259 y:204 so that the head of this slider would be indirectly stacked with the tail of the previous slider -> 00:11:210 (1) and it would make a parallel pattern with 00:12:055 (3) like this :

To fix the DS problem, you only need to tweak the tail of 00:13:746 (1) like this :

It would add an aesthetic touch in this part ;)

* 00:21:774 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved like this :


* 00:23:041 (4,1) - Improve this blanket by moving the point at the tail of this slider -> 00:23:464 (4) one grid to the left, then move the center point of this slider's frame one grid to the right


* 00:34:872 (1,2) - This blanket also could be improved as well. Just do it like this :


* 00:42:055 (2,3) - Improve this blanket by moving the tail point of this slider -> 00:42:478 (3) one grid to the left. After that, just move the next slider -> 00:43:323 (4) one grid downwards

* 00:43:323 (4,1) - Improve this blanket by moving the center point of 00:43:323 (4) one grid to the left like this :


* 00:59:379 (3,4) - These twin sliders could be improved. Just move this note -> 00:58:957 (2) to x:32 y:320, then move the next slider -> 00:59:379 (3) into x:112 y:372 like this :


It wouldn't cause any DS problem so it should be fine ;)

* 01:02:760 (3,4) - This slider -> 01:01:915 (3) is too curvy for the blanket with 01:03:182 (4) . So, please move the center point of 01:01:915 (3) one grid to the left to fix it

* 01:28:112 (1) - How about improving the shape of this slider into like this :

To add some aesthetic touch on it ;)

* 01:34:872 (1) - Using 70% volume in this note while the music ended was too loud. Please lower down the volume of this note into 40% so that it would blend perfectly with the cymbals from the main music :D

Akitoshi's Normal


* Please disable the Widescreen Support since there's no storyboard in this mapset ;)

* 00:13:323 (7,1) - You could improve this blanket by moving the end point of this slider's frame -> 00:13:746 (1) a little bit to the left by disabling the grid snap like this :


* 00:38:886 (3) - Since you were mapping the voice here, in my opinion, it would be nice if you make the shape of this slider into a perfectly centered 'v'-shaped slider like this :

Since it would emphasize here voice better ;)

* 00:42:267 (3) - This 'v'-shaped slider almost perfect. Just tweak the center point (the red point) of this slider's frame to fix it like this :


* 00:52:196 (2) - How about change the shape of this slider into a curvy slider instead of the straight slider, so that it would blanket the tail of 00:51:774 (1) ?

* 01:04:450 (1) - This slider shape could be improved since the first angle of its round side is a little bit too curvy. You could tweak it a little here and there like this :


* 01:34:872 (3) - Using 70% volume in this note while the music ended was too loud. Please lower down the volume of this note into 40% so that it would blend perfectly with the cymbals from the main music, then change its audio into soft-custom 1 (S:C1) since the audio that you were using at that slider now (soft-default) was making some disturbing noises >.<

Journey


* In my opinion, using 3 Stack Leniency is a bit dangerous for the ranking process. How about using 4 Stack Leniency instead? Just to make it safer ;)

* Um, the way you were mapping this diff was just like a Light Insane diff (by looking at some long distance jumps, 1/8 sliders, and the spacing between the objects), and it somehow made the gap with the previous diff (Normal diff) a little bit bigger than how it should be, since usually the QAT would look at the map's spread by its game play in each diff, not with its star difficulty, so I suggest you to make or ask someone to make a GD for a Hard/Advanced diff (if you refer the Journey diff as a Hard diff) to make it safe during the ranking process ;)

* 00:54:098 (5,1) - This blanket could be improved like by moving the tail point of this slider -> 00:55:154 (1) one grid upwards like this :


* 01:11:844 (2,4) - How about stacking this note -> 01:11:844 (2) directly with the head of this slider -> 01:12:478 (4) directly? Or, if you want them to keep indirectly stacked then, how about moving this slider -> 01:12:478 (4) into x:288 y:88 it like this :

To make the jump pattern more aesthetic, plus it would make a better emphasize with the next upbeat -> 01:12:901 (1)

* The flow and the jumps in this diff were very nice. I really enjoy test playing this diff :3

Okay that's all~
Good Luck in rank~ >w</
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Sotarks
where's the soterks gd on fhana song ? ><
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai

Sotarks wrote:

where's the soterks gd on fhana song ? ><
no more turtle diff ≧▽≦y
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Sotarks
better
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
that revenge from kimi ni peiro
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Kalibe
aaa
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Sotarks
pp
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
lol i'm super late on all my gds..

http://puu.sh/q9Xn7/52fa07577d.zip
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
M4M from your modding Q o/

General

  1. Shouldn't you add TV size in the tags? I mean, I always see TV size in the tags in other anime opening/endings. o.o

    Easy

    1. 00:00:255 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Don't you think those object's volume are too high for this part? I recommend reducing the volume to 45 or 40.
    2. 00:56:844 (4,1) - I don't think overlap here would fit, consider moving (4) a little bit further away from (1).
    3. 00:59:379 (3) - Don't you think this one is a little bit confusing for easy players..? because I think it's REALLY down. Consider moving this up a bit.

    Akitoshi's Normal

    1. First suggestion in easy should also be applied here.
    2. 00:08:675 (4) - It's kinda of hard to notice the red tick of this slider because (3) is blocking it, maybe you should do this with (4) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5666532 ?
    3. 00:18:816 (1,4) ^

    Doormat's Hard


    1. Just like in easy, normal.
    Insane

    1. Just like above..
    2. 00:31:492 (3,4,5) - Wouldn't be better to make the spacing between these 3 objects the same? Move (4) to x:182 y:43 to make the spacing equal.
    3. 00:35:717 (1,2,3) - Just like above, move (3) to x:362 y:86
Not really good at mapping extra diffs.

Anyways, nice mapset, goodluck! ^^
Reillia
1,162 posts
Joined August 2014
Reillia
yeah, fhana daisuki plz rank this map and song
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
m4m here is my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/483206 - insane is not finished but up to you mod it now or wait for it

E
00:23:041 (4) - Maybe stack this with the slider tail of this - 00:20:506 (1) -
01:34:872 (1) - Addition Normal


N
00:18:605 (4) - Delete this to do the flow more empathized
01:22:196 (2,3) - Replace this with a slider
01:34:872 - Addition Normal
01:34:872 (3) - I know is rankable but it will be nice do consistent the ending time between all the mapset
H
Fine

I
Fine

X with Insane icon
00:12:901 (9) - According to your combo patterns, you should add a New Combo here
00:35:717 (5) - I'm disagree you use this rhythm, you use a 1/2 slider when insane diff use a experimental rhythm and that feels odd
00:50:084 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe do those jumps more bigger so I can get pp

gl!
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai
Payback =w=)/

General
  1. Fine =w=)/

Easy
  1. 00:00:225 (1,3) - How about forming them like this? https://puu.sh/qb75P/a9badaee3f.jpg looks more organized and clean to me
  2. 00:13:746 (1) - I think you could raise the second white node to have a little bit symmetry to the first white node
  3. 00:36:563 (4,5,1) - You could expand that zigzag pattern like adjusting 1 and 5 a little bit more so it wouldn't look like compressed to each other
  4. 01:08:675 (2) - A slight curve would fit here I think
  5. 01:09:520 (3,4,1) - Well stacking is not bad but I was still holding 01:09:520 (3) - and 01:10:788 (4,1) - already appeared on this point 01:10:154 , might lead hesitation to players (not confusion because it's not really confusing).
  6. Sorry for pointing out nazi things ;w;

Akitoshi's Normal
  1. 00:41:633 (2) - Split to circle then 1/2 slider? cuz high pitch at 00:41:844
  2. Big fan

Doormat's Hard
  1. 00:27:267 (1) - How about a little jump here? cuz vocals are in a ascending pitch compared to the vocals of 00:20:506 (1) -
  2. 00:41:633 (3,4) - I think stacking 00:41:422 (2,3) - is better than 00:41:633 (3,4) - because pitch of vocals on 00:41:844 (4) - needs to be emphasized i think
  3. 00:55:999 (1) - Split into circles? cuz drums at 00:56:210

Insane
  1. 01:08:886 (4) - Lend more spacing here cuz the high pitch vocal was not emphasized properly or you could stack 01:08:464 (2,3) -
  2. 01:09:520 (1) - Here also vocal thingy ;w; 01:09:520 (1,2) - stacking them would be pretty cool
  3. 01:12:055 (3,4) - Replace with 1/2 reverse and a circle instead? cuz they were supposed to be 1/3 but I know you want to follow drums and the vocals there are connected so that rhythm would make more sense and clicking 01:12:689 is pretty nice atleast for me xD

Sotarks' Melancholy
  1. Wow no customized slider body this time :o xDD
  2. 00:08:675 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seems a bit overdone, the sound maybe rising yet their spacing were increasing as if there are upcoming bang sound but the upcoming one was the opposite which is clam. Reducing their spacing a little bit would be better
  3. 00:12:901 (9,10,11) - Follow the vocals here? cuz you were following vocals on the next objects and this is the only objects that I've seen in 11 combo count xD
  4. 00:32:760 (6,7) - I'm too bad I missed here, mind reducing their spacing?
  5. I said no more turtle diff tnx
AAAAAA SUNO TAME NIIIIIII goodluck meme turtles <3333
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Plaudible wrote:

Akitoshi's Normal
00:52:196 (2,3,4,5,1) - The claps are missing in this area, and without them it feels awkward, I suggest changing the mapping here to make those be able to be heard. followed vocals so maybe its fine imo, but i added some clap anyway
01:30:436 (5) - Why silent hitsound? No reason, bring up the audio so the clap can be heard. Almost can't hear it :(
01:34:027 (1) - ^

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

akitoshi
00:52:196 (2) - circle works too imo 00:52:408 - is not enough important to get noticed triple click here isn't fit imo based on how I mapped the entire prev parts.
01:34:872 (3) - 70% it's too loud decrease a bit

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Akitoshi's Normal[/size][/centre]
  1. First suggestion in easy should also be applied here.
  2. 00:08:675 (4) - It's kinda of hard to notice the red tick of this slider because (3) is blocking it, maybe you should do this with (4) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5666532 ?
  3. 00:18:816 (1,4) ^

Underforest wrote:

N
00:18:605 (4) - Delete this to do the flow more empathized
01:22:196 (2,3) - Replace this with a slider its fine imo, since not rly high bpm even I mapped like double-bpm'd
01:34:872 - Addition Normal
01:34:872 (3) - I know is rankable but it will be nice do consistent the ending time between all the mapset

Janpai wrote:

Akitoshi's Normal
  1. 00:41:633 (2) - Split to circle then 1/2 slider? cuz high pitch at 00:41:844 daz why i used reverse, and pitch goes down again on 00:42:055 - so ye
  2. Big fan poi
no comment = fixed, thanks guys o/

armpits
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50823
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:calling
TitleUnicode:calling
Artist:fhana
ArtistUnicode:fhána
Creator:Kalibe
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:Tales of Zestiria the X
Tags:テイルズ オブ ゼスティリア ザ クロス Cross ufotable ending akitoshi doormat sotarks
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102,72,26422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,66,26844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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273,286,29802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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406,350,33605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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174,90,39520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,55,39943,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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448,170,43323,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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413,135,47126,2,0,L|419:66,1,52.5,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,45,47548,6,0,P|328:30|257:43,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:943 (4) - not stacked on 2?
  2. 01:04:450 (1,2,3) - might do a double blanket thing http://puu.sh/qdoW4/09b9821988.jpg cuz currently 1,3 don't look gud with each other imo
  3. 01:17:971 (1) - maybe feature a slight curve to make the flow smoother
[Akitoshi's Normal]
  1. 01:13:746 (5,1,2,3,4) - too many 1/2 sliders spamming, might consider this rhythm pattern to follow the vocal here 01:16:915 - as well
[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:10:154 (4,1) - should feature a larger spacing than 00:09:520 (3,4) - for the finish just like what u did here 00:43:534 (3,4,1) - ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:154 (4,1) - 01:01:703 (2,3) - the distance with the centred slider looks unbalanced
  2. 00:23:041 (6,7) - tho u wanna show the lowering pitch here, the distance makes the incoming finish less emphasized, try sth like this? http://puu.sh/qdskh/7954ea3026.jpg
  3. 01:28:957 (3) - curving this way might look better http://puu.sh/qds4j/e42a41a0b6.jpg
[Sotarks' Melancholy]
  1. 00:00:225 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:06:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same rhythm pattern with different nc pattern?
  2. 00:19:239 (5,1,2) - 2 looks even closer with the slider body of 5 than 1, maybe balance the distance like 00:15:858 (7,1,2) - . would look neater imo
  3. 00:32:760 (6,7,8) - the spacing u use is not intuitive enough to read the different gaps on the timeline
  4. 01:27:267 (1) - only place with a different pitch around 01:26:422 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , so maybe replace 01:27:267 (1,2) - with a slider to note that, if u deem it kinda hard to rearrange the pattern then wutever
  5. 01:22:196 (3) - similar point mentioned above, this is the highest pitch so maybe replaced with 2 circles to feature a nice jump
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Kalibe
ok i already fix most of things you've mentioned in Easy and Insane diff, thx for mod guys !!!!!

@Garden -> fixed all, thx! :3
@[ C u r i ] -> aaaa <3

Guys, pls re-dl, i changed the background~
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
IRC
15:03 -NanoRIPE-:  hey kalibe
15:04 Kalibe: o/
15:04 *-NanoRIPE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1028435 fhana - calling [Easy]]
15:04 Kalibe: ?
15:05 -NanoRIPE-: i will mod your map
15:05 -NanoRIPE-: as requested
15:05 -NanoRIPE-: but irc 
15:05 Kalibe: hmm ok
15:06 -NanoRIPE-:  00:35:717 (3,4,5) - the pattern looks weird imo (maybe move circle 5 little bit down?)
15:07 Kalibe: (5) on 96/148 is good?
15:08 -NanoRIPE-: 108,148 (it looks close with circle 4 if u use 96)
15:09 Kalibe: ok
15:10 -NanoRIPE-: 00:10:365 (1) - why u use this finish? it looks incosistent with 00:23:886 (1)
15:11 Kalibe: aa right ><
15:11 Kalibe: changed 00:10:365 (1) - to soft
15:12 -NanoRIPE-: 00:47:548 (1,2,3,4) - this  pattern looks little bit difficult for a beginner
15:12 Kalibe: not sure imo
15:13 -NanoRIPE-: 00:59:379 (3) - what this clap mean? (it looks incosistent)
15:13 -NanoRIPE-: 01:08:675 (2) - maybe curve slider?
15:14 Kalibe: there's a similar click sound that feels cool
15:14 Kalibe: with that clap
15:14 -NanoRIPE-: ok
15:14 Kalibe: curved
15:14 Kalibe: a bit
15:14 -NanoRIPE-: 01:17:971 - why u add kiai time here? (it looks unnecessary imo)
15:15 Kalibe: hmm
15:15 -NanoRIPE-: 01:34:027 (4,5,1) - maybe delete this cicles into a 1/1 slider? (to make it easier)
15:15 Kalibe: will consider that later
15:15 -NanoRIPE-: ok
15:16 Kalibe: or maybe 1/2 with repeater?
15:16 -NanoRIPE-: up to you (both is fine imo)
15:16 -NanoRIPE-: oh my god,akitoshi take a gd again
15:17 Kalibe: aktioshi best normal gd mapper xd
15:17 -NanoRIPE-: that boy looks never satisfied
15:17 -NanoRIPE-: yeah :3
15:17 -NanoRIPE-: doormat D:
15:17 Kalibe: duurmat
15:18 -NanoRIPE-: and sotarks ~ (it seems your map can be quickly ranked)
15:18 Kalibe: dunno idk how to find bn
15:18 Kalibe: xD
15:18 -NanoRIPE-: xd lol
15:19 Kalibe: my first ranked was qualified by moderator and qat so ye xD
15:19 -NanoRIPE-: 00:01:070 (3,1) - why u make overlap here?
15:19 -NanoRIPE-: D:
15:19 *-NanoRIPE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1028436 fhana - calling [Insane]]
15:19 -NanoRIPE-: :>
15:19 Kalibe: looks cool here
15:19 -NanoRIPE-: it looks incosistent imo
15:19 Kalibe: for me cuz these slider have the same curves
15:20 Kalibe: and plays well
15:20 -NanoRIPE-: hmm okay
15:21 -NanoRIPE-: 00:21:774 (3) - ctrl h and inc curve?
15:21 -NanoRIPE-: 00:26:422 (5,6) - D: why u make pattern like this? (its confusing me)
15:22 Kalibe: did ctrl h
15:22 Kalibe: maybe just stack on (6) head?
15:22 -NanoRIPE-: 00:37:408 (1,2,3) - bad pattern imo?
15:23 Kalibe: i love making patterns like that ><
15:23 Kalibe: intentional like here too 00:44:168 (1,3) -
15:23 -NanoRIPE-: 00:26:422 (5,6) - for this pattern i think stack would be better
15:23 Kalibe: ok
15:24 -NanoRIPE-: 00:51:563 (2,3) - nah (it looks u love make pattern like this on insane)
15:25 Kalibe: this one plays fine
15:25 -NanoRIPE-: 00:56:844 (4,1) - i think stack would be great
15:26 Kalibe: i'll leave that now, maybe stack it when ppl will notice that or smth
15:26 -NanoRIPE-: ok
15:26 -NanoRIPE-: 01:06:774 - why u make blank here? it looks awakward imo
15:27 Kalibe: 01:06:140 (4) - add repeater here?
15:27 Kalibe: then
15:28 -NanoRIPE-: for me is circle for fill blank here 01:06:879 
15:28 -NanoRIPE-: thats it from me :3
15:29 Kalibe: :3
15:30 -NanoRIPE-: since u just make easy and insane diff on this map huehue :3
15:31 Kalibe: cuz
15:31 Kalibe: idk how to map normals
15:31 -NanoRIPE-: ?
15:31 -NanoRIPE-: xd
15:31 Kalibe: duurmat really wants to map diff
15:31 Kalibe: since its a fan of zestiria
15:31 Kalibe: and soterks ....
15:31 Kalibe: fhana lover
15:31 Kalibe: so ye
15:31 Kalibe: xd
15:31 -NanoRIPE-: D: (you so luck)
15:32 Kalibe: im not D: cuz i cant even rank any map now xd
15:33 -NanoRIPE-: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392758
15:33 -NanoRIPE-: ?
15:34 Kalibe: :3
15:34 Kalibe: really dont know how i rank this xd
15:37 Kalibe: post log aa
15:37 Kalibe: and updated
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
M4M from your queue

fhana <3
the music is so beautiful that I'm going to cry

[Doormat's Hard]

So great
00:23:886 (1) - You increased the spacing here right? I think 1.9x or even 2.0x might be better. It's so hard to perceive the emphasis.
00:42:901 (2) - I'm curious. You did put a lot emphasis on the drums previously and after this point. It's just so weird that one of them is on a slider's tail.
00:47:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think normal spacing(1.7x) on these might be better. If done so, 00:49:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - will stand out because of the acceleration. Right now I think the yellow-ish notes don't recieve as much emphasis as they should get. I know you did this because of the strong vocals, but since you didn't care about the vocals much previously (emphasis only on drums), 1.7x spacing should make more sense.
00:53:041 (2) - blanket? this one is so off
00:54:309 (1) - delete the finish here? if you want to keep this, put one on 01:01:070 (1) - and 01:07:830 (1) -
01:08:886 (4) - out of curiosity, why were these stacked? It flows so smoothly and well before this point. Don't get me wrong, this is just fine, I'm just asking lol.
01:12:901 (1) - 01:14:591 (1) - weird choice. I'd emphasize the latter or none of them.

[Insane]
00:11:422 (2) - can you improve this? like making it symmetrical or something like that
00:15:436 (3) - this jump is a little bit too much considering the intensity. Something like 00:12:055 (3) - is better
00:32:126 (5) - why did you decide to skip 00:32:337 ? You were putting a lot of emphasis on previous similar notes.
00:18:816 (3) - a jump maybe? Put this somewhere around 00:20:295 (7) - or stack them will be nice. It's a great thing to be consistent.
00:59:379 (1,2) - suddenly manual stack lol
00:56:210 (2) - put this around 160/88 to put emphasis on 00:56:422 (3) - maybe? So that 00:55:577 (3,3,4,1) - kinda rhyme XD
Good one! I had a lot of fun playing this.

Since mods above just suck and are nazi :o I'm going to do another one

[Akitoshi's Normal]
00:10:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a little bit too dense for the calm music
00:35:717 (4,5,6) - - nazi but these are kinda too stiff imo, with that angle and stuff. Curve them a little bit perhaps?
00:53:253 (4) - turn the tail a bit downwards and move 00:53:886 (5) - with it should improve the flow between 00:53:886 (5,1) -
01:12:055 (2,3) - merge them into a 1/1 slider should go well with the vocal

good song
awesome map XD

Looking forward to this getting nominated ;)
good luck! ~
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