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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 05 de marzo de 2017 at 03:02:03 a.m.

Artist: Various Artists
Title: drop pop candy (Multi-Language Version)
Tags: VOCALOID ボーカロイド ニコニコ Nico Nico Douga SoundCloud Edited Self Cover Rin Kagamine 鏡音リン Megurine Luka 巡音ルカ Rin*Luka オリジナル No title+ Plus and No title- Minus Giga-P GigaP ギガP Key Mochizuki けい Okiku お菊 REOL れをる Ilonka Obilinovic ilonqueen feat. Panqueque Kuraiinu + JubyPhonic Latin American Spanish Español Latino Americano Latinoamericano English Japanese Nihongo 日本語 UNDERTALE Sans & Papyrus the Skeleton Video Game Reference Determination Determinada Referencia Videojuego Juego
BPM: 130
Filesize: 26750kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. ezek's Average (1.91 stars, 414 notes)
  2. Relaxing (1.49 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Unrequited Love (3.13 stars, 703 notes)


Download: Various Artists - drop pop candy (Multi-Language Version)
Download: Various Artists - drop pop candy (Multi-Language Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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日本語 x Español Latino x English.
【REOL】 / 【Rin*Luka】 【Ilonka feat. Panqueque】 【Kuraiinu + JubyPhonic】
MP3 edited by Myself (Title was took from the Official REOL/Rin*Luka video, and the "Various Artists - (Multi-Language Version)" was added for obvious reasons).
Video edited by The Furry Guy.
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Mine.
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Gero wrote:

Nice.
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:3
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Not gonna end well because Undertale trash took over ;~;
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Interesting! 8-)
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Great song!
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Updated~

Ready for mods.
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Guess i'll help a bit :D

[Easy]

02:21:761 (4) - unsnapped

[ezek]

You could have gotten away with making the 1/2 not touch :o

as it is, the objects are at that point where they're just barely overlapping and it doesn't look that good :(

00:26:637 (4) - Don't like this, 00:26:868 - should probably be clickable due to vocal
01:04:021 (6) - would split this into circle+1/2 slider to match vocals
01:16:499 (2,3,4) - make an equilateral triangle out of these? would be neater
02:07:021 (4,1,2,3) - shouldnt use different types of stacks (1/1 vs 1/2) so close together in a normal
03:21:329 (5) - feels kinda random to me, why not just map it normally :o
03:29:636 - clickable for vocal?

Biggest concern is what I said earlier about everything barely overlapping, it woulda been alright for the spread if you spaced em out so that they weren't. But I guess it's fine.

Another concern is that your rhythm in general just felt inconsistent overall, somtimes you'd be mapping vocals but then other times there are sliders where there are important vocals in the middle of the slider that are unmapped. I suggest going through and making sure you're mapping what you want to be.

:3c

[Gero topdiff]

01:07:714 (4) - a bit underwhelming, maybe you can do a triplet on 01:07:714 - and 01:07:829 - and then have the reverse slider start on 01:07:945. same for the other kiais

This map is honestly just really clean, can't really spot anything lol

GL, good set
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Reminder post~
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I've fixed everything, thanks a lot Hobbes2.

Updated~
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Hai! M4M from PM
Not a great modder but I will try my best <3


00:16:483 (5) - Note would looks better and flow better if it was on the opposite side, so instead of being on the right have it on the left side of 00:16:021 (4) - and then 00:16:714 (1) - Flip this so it starts from the left side instead of the right side.
00:17:175 (2) - Overlap looks a bit weird in my opinion
00:41:637 (3) - Rotate this slider so it so it starts facing this note: 00:42:098 (4) - and also the end of 00:41:637 (3) - faces that note aswell
00:42:098 (4) - Make this slider straight? Would help it looks better going to the next slider
00:42:560 (1,3,4) - I'm not sure why, but this looks messy
00:54:098 (2) - Ctrl + G would help with flow
01:10:730 (2) - Move this a bit to the right so it doesnt touch the other slider
01:16:730 (5) - Ctrl + G, I feel right now it would be confusing to new players
01:19:269 (7) - Remove the overlap perhaps?
I honestly don't see anything else that could be changed, rest of this map looks good to me! :)

Heres the M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/523593 Ty :D
Btw Love the skin and the rest of the map! <3
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[General]
  1. I think that it would be cool to have the link of the "drop pop candy" song in the description of each artists that are in the song, even Vocaloids o:

    [Easy]
    1. 00:18:560 (3) - That's probably just me, but I think that this slider feels weird, on the previous sliders, you're focusing on the snare, and then on this slider, there is not real thing on that you're get focused. Otherwise, the symmetry looks perfect ! That's really weird, because on this slider 00:33:329 (3) - that looks really good! So I think you're the only one that could decide what to do o:
    2. 00:25:945 (2) - Same here so, but if you didn't accepted the previous mod, then keep it like that :)
    3. 00:53:637 (1,2) - The angle here doesn't feel a bit sharp compared to the other circles angle? :(
    4. 02:55:021 (2) - Same here owo
    5. 03:32:405 (4,1) - The slider is overlapping the next sliderend o:


    That's all for this diff. Since you used a lot of 1/2 reverse slider, I guess that's just me who's dumb, sometimes it feels good to me, and sometimes not, otherwise, very nice diff as always :)

    [ezek's Normal]
    1. 00:08:406 (5) - Why not moving this circle on this one 00:08:637 (6) - to do a stack, because those beats looks similar ! o:
    2. In my opinion, you should do a small 1/1 break on the begining, because from here: 00:03:791 (4) - to here: 00:24:098 (1) - there is no break for the player, and since it's an Normal diff, that might be quite hard to get so much stamina for a beginner!
    3. 00:51:791 (4,5,6) - On this pattern, why not doing something like this: https://puu.sh/up4Ft/77f517ad16.png ?
    4. 01:02:637 (4,5,6) - A small overlap, maybe intended?~
    5. 01:09:115 (2,3,4) - Same here, maybe by putting this slider more down 01:09:346 (3) - you could avoid this :o
    6. 01:13:038 (4) - Move this slider a bit up, so this would do a perfect line :)
    7. 02:35:636 (5,6,7) - On this part, you can clearly see that it's not linear, so I think you should fix it (only if it wasn't voluntary)
    8. 02:51:790 - Why not mapping this part? I agree with you on the fact that it add a break into a so long but cool song, so if you don't want to map it, let it like that.
    9. 03:07:482 (2,3,1) - The angle here feels really rude owo
    10. 03:45:098 (8) - To finish the map, I think that would be cool to have a stronger hitsound on this note or adding an NC, no? o:


    Pretty neat diff :)

    [Unrequited Love]
    1. 00:25:021 (5) - I think that you could move this slider away, because you can hear in the voice that this is not the same syllabs as those 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - so I think that would also be better if you do the same thing you did here 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - with adding this note: 00:24:098 (1) - in the pattern, let met show you a screenshot o: https://puu.sh/up66n/9b4b619f87.png
    2. 00:29:406 (5) - That triplet feels quite weird to me compared to the first one o:
    3. 01:04:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's very creative <3
    4. 01:16:730 (5,6) - I think you could try to move the slider elsewhere to avoid overlap on the sliderend, and I think that could be more beautiful :) (if you applied change here, then don't forget to change it here for consistancy 01:18:576 (5,6) - )
    5. 01:26:405 (4,1) - I don't think that those two sliders are parrallels owo
    6. 02:21:790 (6) - Why not adding changing it here to highlight the fact that this slider is longer than those two: 02:20:636 (2,3,6) - ? I think you could add a NC here, due to the drums playing in the background, that would be nice :)
    7. 02:54:790 (5,2) - Try to make those two sliders parrallels? o: (If you change it, then do it with this slider too: 02:56:405 (5) - )
    8. 03:06:444 (7,1) - That's not very linear with the end of the slider and the angle of the slider curve owo
    9. 03:07:713 (4,5,6) - Same as I said previously, why not adding a NC on this note: 03:07:713 (4) -


Good job on it !

[]

Okay, so sorry for that big mods, it's more a aesthetic mod instead of rhythm build, but I hope that it will help at least a bit ;w; !
Good luck for ranking and great job for both of you <3
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Alola

  • [general]
  1. Podrías agregar "edited" a tags.

    [Unrequited Love]
  2. 00:19:021 - Encuentro que terminar ese beat con un slider no queda del todo bien. Además de que en otras secciones sigues el ritmo de los ticks blancos en vez del rojo, por lo que se siente un poco raro esta sección tbh. Quizás podrías usar este ritmo, y stackear el 2 como sale en la imagen.
  3. 00:46:252 - Te quedó bueno el edit acá con los 4 temas
  4. 01:17:423 (7,1) - La distancia que ocupas aquí es bastante más grande que el resto del mapeado. Considera reducirlo a algo similar a 01:19:269 (7,1) -
  5. 01:20:423 (5,6) - El ritmo en esta parte es igual a 01:16:730 (5,6,5,6) - por lo que se me hizo extraño no ver los 2 sliders de 1/2. (Antes de que se me apagara el pc había escrito mejor esta parte pero bue xd) Aquí una recomendación de como setearía el ritmo para esta parte.
  6. 01:52:713 (1) - Podrías aplicarle ctrl+g a este slider ya que con tanto stack 01:51:329 (2,3,4,5) - al estilo back n fourth se hace un poco confuso xd.
  7. 02:00:098 - Acá no usaste las 4 versiones como antes D: Bueno, no es nada grave igual xd
  8. 02:34:252 (5,6) - Lo mismo que antes D:
  9. 02:52:713 (3,4) - Encuentro que si le haces ctrl+g a estas notas quedaría mejor estructurado el pattern en general, ya que 02:52:252 (2,3,4,1) - este spacing se podría jugar/sentir mejor si haces que 02:53:175 (4,1) - esta distancia sea mayor o igual que 02:52:252 (2,3) -. Además no quedaría mal que 02:52:713 - quedara en esa posición ya que el beat ahí es un poco más fuerte como para poder enfatizarlo así.
  10. 00:47:175 - 00:49:021 - 00:50:868 - Encuentro que poner tantos finishes no queda muy bien la verdad D: Además que la música que la música no da un real soporte para ellos.
  11. 00:42:329 - Sin contar las 2 primeras veces que usas este hitsound (y la parte final) Este es la única vez que lo usas en una tick rojo, el resto es todo el rato en ticks azules 00:31:368 - 00:46:137 - etc. Personalmente encuentro que queda mejor en los ticks rojos, como que en los azules se sienten un poco off D:
  12. 03:08:290 - Al igual que las otras secciones, podrías quitar el kiai en esta línea verde?

    [ezek's]
  13. 00:25:252 - 00:28:021 - estos espacios vacíos podrías usarlos en la sección previa también (00:16:714 - )
  14. 00:19:483 - Al igual que hiciste este beat cliqueable, también podrías hacerlo con 00:26:637 - este. Quizás podrías hacer que quede de esta manera? https://puu.sh/upDDE/4427aa9dfe.jpg
  15. 01:04:021 (6,1) - No sé si estás siguiendo las vocales aquí realmente ya que 01:04:252 - este beat lo soporta tanto vocales como instrumento por lo que se siente un poco raro tbh. Podrías probar haciendo ctrl+g al ritmo, quedaría bastante mejor imo ;o Este tipo de ritmo se repite más en el mapa, por lo que si estás de acuerdo conmigo podrías echarle una mirada a estos.
    --* Aquí updatié tu diff así que lo anterior puede que esté sinsentido xd *--
  16. 01:05:175 (2) - Quizás si haces de este slider un 1/2 + circle enfatize mejor lo que querías :d
  17. 02:01:713 (8,1,6,7) - Podrías deshacer estos stacks para que quede similar a lo que hiciste en la sección anterior. (00:46:252 - )
  18. 02:19:021 (2,3,4) - Este ritmo es bastante distinto al que sueles usar, además de ser poco intuitivo imo. Creo que haciendo de 02:19:713 (3) - un circulo + 1/2 sería mejor.
  19. Como 01:08:291 - y 02:22:136 - no pones ninguna nota, podrías borrarlas y aprovechas de hacer la secciones kiai todas continuas.

    [Easy]
  20. 00:06:560 (2) - Si bien aquí estás siguiendo un nuevo ritmo en la música, encuentro que puede ser un poco confuso para los newbies la verdad. De hecho al principio no sabía lo que estabas siguiendo, tuve que detenerme a escuchar mejor la canción. Podría quedar mejor si haces 2 sliders de 1/1.
  21. 00:13:021 (1,2) - ctrl+g este ritmo podría quedar más intuitivo según yo. O sino hacer de estos un slider tal como hiciste con 00:09:329 (1) - este.
  22. 01:19:499 (3) - Quizás podrías hacer que los movimientos del slider sean en los ticks blancos para que vayan acorde con la música D: Al final te quedarían 2 en vez de 3 pero no estaría mal. Lo mismo pasa con un slider al final del último kiai.
Okay eso es todo de mi parte. Me gustó que hayas hecho este tipo de edit. GL o/

Aquí mi mapa :d https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546011
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Hobbes2 wrote:

[ezek]

You could have gotten away with making the 1/2 not touch :o

as it is, the objects are at that point where they're just barely overlapping and it doesn't look that good :(I planned it like this~

00:26:637 (4) - Don't like this, 00:26:868 - should probably be clickable due to vocal k
01:04:021 (6) - would split this into circle+1/2 slider to match vocals k
01:16:499 (2,3,4) - make an equilateral triangle out of these? would be neater k
02:07:021 (4,1,2,3) - shouldnt use different types of stacks (1/1 vs 1/2) so close together in a normal I know this should be kinda like a sin, but I believe I'm doing it right here since the changes in the music are quite noticeable and players should expect something different in the mapping as well~
03:21:329 (5) - feels kinda random to me, why not just map it normally :oI want to have something special for the last kiai, makes the map more interesting imo~
03:29:6
36 - clickable for vocal?

Biggest concern is what I said earlier about everything barely overlapping, it woulda been alright for the spread if you spaced em out so that they weren't. But I guess it's fine.

Another concern is that your rhythm in general just felt inconsistent overall, somtimes you'd be mapping vocals but then other times there are sliders where there are important vocals in the middle of the slider that are unmapped. I suggest going through and making sure you're mapping what you want to be.
k I checked on those
Thanks fur the mod Hobbes! cool avatar btw!

Pachiru wrote:

[ezek's Normal]
  1. 00:08:406 (5) - Why not moving this circle on this one 00:08:637 (6) - to do a stack, because those beats looks similar ! o: I removed the note instead, feels like it follows better the song in some way~
  2. In my opinion, you should do a small 1/1 break on the begining, because from here: 00:03:791 (4) - to here: 00:24:098 (1) - there is no break for the player, and since it's an Normal diff, that might be quite hard to get so much stamina for a beginner! This diff is not exactly for beginners, I see it as a bit harder than Normal but less hard than an Advanced, and this is for spread concerns that raised, it should be good like this~
  3. 00:51:791 (4,5,6) - On this pattern, why not doing something like this: https://puu.sh/up4Ft/77f517ad16.png ? I prefer it my way~
  4. 01:02:637 (4,5,6) - A small overlap, maybe intended?~ yes
  5. 01:09:115 (2,3,4) - Same here, maybe by putting this slider more down 01:09:346 (3) - you could avoid this :oI have several overlaps like this, getting rid of one or two them will make the map less consistent and more messy
  6. 01:13:038 (4) - Move this slider a bit up, so this would do a perfect line :)oki doki
  7. 02:35:636 (5,6,7) - On this part, you can clearly see that it's not linear, so I think you should fix it (only if it wasn't voluntary) fixed, yee it looked ugly
  8. 02:51:790 - Why not mapping this part? I agree with you on the fact that it add a break into a so long but cool song, so if you don't want to map it, let it like that. I guess i have no other choice but to map it since Gero did on the Easy diff xp
  9. 03:07:482 (2,3,1) - The angle here feels really rude owo why gotta be so ruude♪ nah, I think it's fine like this
  10. 03:45:098 (8) - To finish the map, I think that would be cool to have a stronger hitsound on this note or adding an NC, no? o: a strong hitsound wouldn't match with the music; however, I do agree with adding NC


Pretty neat diff :)
Thanks fur the mod!

iYiyo wrote:

[ezek's]
  1. 00:25:252 - 00:28:021 - estos espacios vacíos podrías usarlos en la sección previa también (00:16:714 - ) varie el mapping por diferente cantante~
  2. 00:19:483 - Al igual que hiciste este beat cliqueable, también podrías hacerlo con 00:26:637 - este. Quizás podrías hacer que quede de esta manera? https://puu.sh/upDDE/4427aa9dfe.jpg hecho en un mod previo
  3. 01:04:021 (6,1) - No sé si estás siguiendo las vocales aquí realmente ya que 01:04:252 - este beat lo soporta tanto vocales como instrumento por lo que se siente un poco raro tbh. Podrías probar haciendo ctrl+g al ritmo, quedaría bastante mejor imo ;o Este tipo de ritmo se repite más en el mapa, por lo que si estás de acuerdo conmigo podrías echarle una mirada a estos.
    --* Aquí updatié tu diff así que lo anterior puede que esté sinsentido xd *-- exacto, ya no tenia sentido eso :v
  4. 01:05:175 (2) - Quizás si haces de este slider un 1/2 + circle enfatize mejor lo que querías :d me gusta mi manera, + seguir agragando notas 1/2 en el mapa no sea tan buena idea, ya tengo muchas
  5. 02:01:713 (8,1,6,7) - Podrías deshacer estos stacks para que quede similar a lo que hiciste en la sección anterior. (00:46:252 - ) solo me quite el primero, deje el segundo ya que lo que se aproxima es algo diferente a lo que se aproximaba en el otro patron~
  6. 02:19:021 (2,3,4) - Este ritmo es bastante distinto al que sueles usar, además de ser poco intuitivo imo. Creo que haciendo de 02:19:713 (3) - un circulo + 1/2 sería mejor. como que es distinto al que uso? de hecho hasta es consistente :o ejemplos: 01:05:175 (2,3,4) - & 03:05:175 (3,4,5) -
  7. Como 01:08:291 - y 02:22:136 - no pones ninguna nota, podrías borrarlas y aprovechas de hacer la secciones kiai todas continuas. estas lineas detienen el kiai para luego volverlo a empezar, es un buen efecto para el enfasis y es intencional~
iGracias :3

Update 2.0
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Creator:Gero
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posted
harmanjit102
Hai! M4M from PM
Not a great modder but I will try my best <3

[Unrequited Love]
00:16:483 (5) - Note would looks better and flow better if it was on the opposite side, so instead of being on the right have it on the left side of 00:16:021 (4) - and then 00:16:714 (1) - Flip this so it starts from the left side instead of the right side. I think it flows perfectly fine already through.
00:17:175 (2) - Overlap looks a bit weird in my opinion That's my style.
00:41:637 (3) - Rotate this slider so it so it starts facing this note: 00:42:098 (4) - and also the end of 00:41:637 (3) - faces that note aswell I don't get it to be honest.
00:42:098 (4) - Make this slider straight? Would help it looks better going to the next slider I don't think so.
00:42:560 (1,3,4) - I'm not sure why, but this looks messy Why?
00:54:098 (2) - Ctrl + G would help with flow The flow is good already for me.
01:10:730 (2) - Move this a bit to the right so it doesnt touch the other slider ^
01:16:730 (5) - Ctrl + G, I feel right now it would be confusing to new players The head of the slider is near the next one, so it shouldn't be a problem at all.
01:19:269 (7) - Remove the overlap perhaps? Moved a bit.
I honestly don't see anything else that could be changed, rest of this map looks good to me! :)

Heres the M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/523593 Ty :D
Btw Love the skin and the rest of the map! <3
Pachiru
[General]
  1. I think that it would be cool to have the link of the "drop pop candy" song in the description of each artists that are in the song, even Vocaloids o: Added.

    [Easy]
    1. 00:18:560 (3) - That's probably just me, but I think that this slider feels weird, on the previous sliders, you're focusing on the snare, and then on this slider, there is not real thing on that you're get focused. Otherwise, the symmetry looks perfect ! That's really weird, because on this slider 00:33:329 (3) - that looks really good! So I think you're the only one that could decide what to do o: Changed a bit.
    2. 00:25:945 (2) - Same here so, but if you didn't accepted the previous mod, then keep it like that :)^
    3. 00:53:637 (1,2) - The angle here doesn't feel a bit sharp compared to the other circles angle? :(Why? I don't get it.
    4. 02:55:021 (2) - Same here owo ^
    5. 03:32:405 (4,1) - The slider is overlapping the next sliderend o: That's the point haha.


    That's all for this diff. Since you used a lot of 1/2 reverse slider, I guess that's just me who's dumb, sometimes it feels good to me, and sometimes not, otherwise, very nice diff as always :)

    Pretty neat diff :)

    [Unrequited Love]
    1. 00:25:021 (5) - I think that you could move this slider away, because you can hear in the voice that this is not the same syllabs as those 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - so I think that would also be better if you do the same thing you did here 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - with adding this note: 00:24:098 (1) - in the pattern, let met show you a screenshot o: https://puu.sh/up66n/9b4b619f87.png I've changed the circle's direction instead.
    2. 00:29:406 (5) - That triplet feels quite weird to me compared to the first one o: Why?
    3. 01:04:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's very creative <3 Thanks.
    4. 01:16:730 (5,6) - I think you could try to move the slider elsewhere to avoid overlap on the sliderend, and I think that could be more beautiful :) (if you applied change here, then don't forget to change it here for consistancy 01:18:576 (5,6) - ) This is intentional, I wanted to overlap each other sliders to avoid a misleading to the players.
    5. 01:26:405 (4,1) - I don't think that those two sliders are parrallels owo Fixed.
    6. 02:21:790 (6) - Why not adding changing it here to highlight the fact that this slider is longer than those two: 02:20:636 (2,3,6) - ? I think you could add a NC here, due to the drums playing in the background, that would be nice :)You're right.
    7. 02:54:790 (5,2) - Try to make those two sliders parrallels? o: (If you change it, then do it with this slider too: 02:56:405 (5) - ) Changed.
    8. 03:06:444 (7,1) - That's not very linear with the end of the slider and the angle of the slider curve owo It is.
    9. 03:07:713 (4,5,6) - Same as I said previously, why not adding a NC on this note: 03:07:713 (4) - Already did it.


Good job on it !

[]

Okay, so sorry for that big mods, it's more a aesthetic mod instead of rhythm build, but I hope that it will help at least a bit ;w; !
Good luck for ranking and great job for both of you <3
iYiyo
Alola

  • [general]
  1. Podrías agregar "edited" a tags.

    [Unrequited Love]
  2. 00:19:021 - Encuentro que terminar ese beat con un slider no queda del todo bien. Además de que en otras secciones sigues el ritmo de los ticks blancos en vez del rojo, por lo que se siente un poco raro esta sección tbh. Quizás podrías usar este ritmo, y stackear el 2 como sale en la imagen. Es como si fuera un slider 1/1 por lo tanto no le veo problema alguno a mi parecer.
  3. 00:46:252 - Te quedó bueno el edit acá con los 4 temas \o/
  4. 01:17:423 (7,1) - La distancia que ocupas aquí es bastante más grande que el resto del mapeado. Considera reducirlo a algo similar a 01:19:269 (7,1) - Cierto, he cambiado esto por algo menos complicado.
  5. 01:20:423 (5,6) - El ritmo en esta parte es igual a 01:16:730 (5,6,5,6) - por lo que se me hizo extraño no ver los 2 sliders de 1/2. (Antes de que se me apagara el pc había escrito mejor esta parte pero bue xd) Aquí una recomendación de como setearía el ritmo para esta parte. La cosa es que quería alternar los ritmos para que fuera más divertido y diera una jugabilidad diferente al cambio de voz.
  6. 01:52:713 (1) - Podrías aplicarle ctrl+g a este slider ya que con tanto stack 01:51:329 (2,3,4,5) - al estilo back n fourth se hace un poco confuso xd. El flujo de los siguientes sliders se arruinarian, por lo tanto prefiero dejarlo asi.
  7. 02:00:098 - Acá no usaste las 4 versiones como antes D: Bueno, no es nada grave igual xd Blame the sliders.
  8. 02:34:252 (5,6) - Lo mismo que antes D: ^
  9. 02:52:713 (3,4) - Encuentro que si le haces ctrl+g a estas notas quedaría mejor estructurado el pattern en general, ya que 02:52:252 (2,3,4,1) - este spacing se podría jugar/sentir mejor si haces que 02:53:175 (4,1) - esta distancia sea mayor o igual que 02:52:252 (2,3) -. Además no quedaría mal que 02:52:713 - quedara en esa posición ya que el beat ahí es un poco más fuerte como para poder enfatizarlo así. Listo.
  10. 00:47:175 - 00:49:021 - 00:50:868 - Encuentro que poner tantos finishes no queda muy bien la verdad D: Además que la música que la música no da un real soporte para ellos. Pediré más opiniones al respecto.
  11. 00:42:329 - Sin contar las 2 primeras veces que usas este hitsound (y la parte final) Este es la única vez que lo usas en una tick rojo, el resto es todo el rato en ticks azules 00:31:368 - 00:46:137 - etc. Personalmente encuentro que queda mejor en los ticks rojos, como que en los azules se sienten un poco off D: 01:56:175 - Aquí lo use en rojo también para mantener consistencia.
  12. 03:08:290 - Al igual que las otras secciones, podrías quitar el kiai en esta línea verde? ¿Por qué?

    [Easy]
  13. 00:06:560 (2) - Si bien aquí estás siguiendo un nuevo ritmo en la música, encuentro que puede ser un poco confuso para los newbies la verdad. De hecho al principio no sabía lo que estabas siguiendo, tuve que detenerme a escuchar mejor la canción. Podría quedar mejor si haces 2 sliders de 1/1. Realmente no es mucho problema ya que el spacing entre ambos objetos es el mismo, por lo tanto esto hara que los newbies intuyan que el ritmo es diferente aquí debido a la longitud del slider.
  14. 00:13:021 (1,2) - ctrl+g este ritmo podría quedar más intuitivo según yo. O sino hacer de estos un slider tal como hiciste con 00:09:329 (1) - este. Quise tener una variación de ritmo en esta sección, es por eso que me centre en seguir los drums principalmente.
  15. 01:19:499 (3) - Quizás podrías hacer que los movimientos del slider sean en los ticks blancos para que vayan acorde con la música D: Al final te quedarían 2 en vez de 3 pero no estaría mal. Lo mismo pasa con un slider al final del último kiai. Arruinaría el patrón si elimino esos puntos.
Okay eso es todo de mi parte. Me gustó que hayas hecho este tipo de edit. GL o/

Aquí mi mapa :d https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546011


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Gero wrote:

  1. 03:08:290 - Al igual que las otras secciones, podrías quitar el kiai en esta línea verde? ¿Por qué?
Juré haber visto que el 3er kiai lo tenías sin cortes, my bad xd
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I've fixed the hitsounds in all difficulties.

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Gero wrote:

~MP3 edited by myself~
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nice song gorda
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