harmanjit102
Hai! M4M from PM
Not a great modder but I will try my best <3
[Unrequited Love]
00:16:483 (5) - Note would looks better and flow better if it was on the opposite side, so instead of being on the right have it on the left side of 00:16:021 (4) - and then 00:16:714 (1) - Flip this so it starts from the left side instead of the right side. I think it flows perfectly fine already through.
00:17:175 (2) - Overlap looks a bit weird in my opinion That's my style.
00:41:637 (3) - Rotate this slider so it so it starts facing this note: 00:42:098 (4) - and also the end of 00:41:637 (3) - faces that note aswell I don't get it to be honest.
00:42:098 (4) - Make this slider straight? Would help it looks better going to the next slider I don't think so.
00:42:560 (1,3,4) - I'm not sure why, but this looks messy Why?
00:54:098 (2) - Ctrl + G would help with flow The flow is good already for me.
01:10:730 (2) - Move this a bit to the right so it doesnt touch the other slider ^
01:16:730 (5) - Ctrl + G, I feel right now it would be confusing to new players The head of the slider is near the next one, so it shouldn't be a problem at all.
01:19:269 (7) - Remove the overlap perhaps? Moved a bit.
I honestly don't see anything else that could be changed, rest of this map looks good to me!
Heres the M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/523593 Ty
Btw Love the skin and the rest of the map! <3
Not a great modder but I will try my best <3
[Unrequited Love]
00:16:483 (5) - Note would looks better and flow better if it was on the opposite side, so instead of being on the right have it on the left side of 00:16:021 (4) - and then 00:16:714 (1) - Flip this so it starts from the left side instead of the right side. I think it flows perfectly fine already through.
00:17:175 (2) - Overlap looks a bit weird in my opinion That's my style.
00:41:637 (3) - Rotate this slider so it so it starts facing this note: 00:42:098 (4) - and also the end of 00:41:637 (3) - faces that note aswell I don't get it to be honest.
00:42:098 (4) - Make this slider straight? Would help it looks better going to the next slider I don't think so.
00:42:560 (1,3,4) - I'm not sure why, but this looks messy Why?
00:54:098 (2) - Ctrl + G would help with flow The flow is good already for me.
01:10:730 (2) - Move this a bit to the right so it doesnt touch the other slider ^
01:16:730 (5) - Ctrl + G, I feel right now it would be confusing to new players The head of the slider is near the next one, so it shouldn't be a problem at all.
01:19:269 (7) - Remove the overlap perhaps? Moved a bit.
I honestly don't see anything else that could be changed, rest of this map looks good to me!
Heres the M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/523593 Ty
Btw Love the skin and the rest of the map! <3
Pachiru
[General]
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Okay, so sorry for that big mods, it's more a aesthetic mod instead of rhythm build, but I hope that it will help at least a bit ;w; !
Good luck for ranking and great job for both of you <3
- I think that it would be cool to have the link of the "drop pop candy" song in the description of each artists that are in the song, even Vocaloids o: Added.
[Easy]- 00:18:560 (3) - That's probably just me, but I think that this slider feels weird, on the previous sliders, you're focusing on the snare, and then on this slider, there is not real thing on that you're get focused. Otherwise, the symmetry looks perfect ! That's really weird, because on this slider 00:33:329 (3) - that looks really good! So I think you're the only one that could decide what to do o: Changed a bit.
- 00:25:945 (2) - Same here so, but if you didn't accepted the previous mod, then keep it like that ^
- 00:53:637 (1,2) - The angle here doesn't feel a bit sharp compared to the other circles angle? Why? I don't get it.
- 02:55:021 (2) - Same here owo ^
- 03:32:405 (4,1) - The slider is overlapping the next sliderend o: That's the point haha.
Pretty neat diff
[Unrequited Love]- 00:25:021 (5) - I think that you could move this slider away, because you can hear in the voice that this is not the same syllabs as those 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - so I think that would also be better if you do the same thing you did here 00:24:329 (2,3,4) - with adding this note: 00:24:098 (1) - in the pattern, let met show you a screenshot o: https://puu.sh/up66n/9b4b619f87.png I've changed the circle's direction instead.
- 00:29:406 (5) - That triplet feels quite weird to me compared to the first one o: Why?
- 01:04:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's very creative <3 Thanks.
- 01:16:730 (5,6) - I think you could try to move the slider elsewhere to avoid overlap on the sliderend, and I think that could be more beautiful (if you applied change here, then don't forget to change it here for consistancy 01:18:576 (5,6) - ) This is intentional, I wanted to overlap each other sliders to avoid a misleading to the players.
- 01:26:405 (4,1) - I don't think that those two sliders are parrallels owo Fixed.
- 02:21:790 (6) - Why not adding changing it here to highlight the fact that this slider is longer than those two: 02:20:636 (2,3,6) - ? I think you could add a NC here, due to the drums playing in the background, that would be nice You're right.
- 02:54:790 (5,2) - Try to make those two sliders parrallels? o: (If you change it, then do it with this slider too: 02:56:405 (5) - ) Changed.
- 03:06:444 (7,1) - That's not very linear with the end of the slider and the angle of the slider curve owo It is.
- 03:07:713 (4,5,6) - Same as I said previously, why not adding a NC on this note: 03:07:713 (4) - Already did it.
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Okay, so sorry for that big mods, it's more a aesthetic mod instead of rhythm build, but I hope that it will help at least a bit ;w; !
Good luck for ranking and great job for both of you <3
iYiyo
Alola
Okay eso es todo de mi parte. Me gustó que hayas hecho este tipo de edit. GL o/
Aquí mi mapa :d https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546011
[general]
- Podrías agregar "edited" a tags.
[Unrequited Love] - 00:19:021 - Encuentro que terminar ese beat con un slider no queda del todo bien. Además de que en otras secciones sigues el ritmo de los ticks blancos en vez del rojo, por lo que se siente un poco raro esta sección tbh. Quizás podrías usar este ritmo, y stackear el 2 como sale en la imagen. Es como si fuera un slider 1/1 por lo tanto no le veo problema alguno a mi parecer.
- 00:46:252 - Te quedó bueno el edit acá con los 4 temas \o/
- 01:17:423 (7,1) - La distancia que ocupas aquí es bastante más grande que el resto del mapeado. Considera reducirlo a algo similar a 01:19:269 (7,1) - Cierto, he cambiado esto por algo menos complicado.
- 01:20:423 (5,6) - El ritmo en esta parte es igual a 01:16:730 (5,6,5,6) - por lo que se me hizo extraño no ver los 2 sliders de 1/2. (Antes de que se me apagara el pc había escrito mejor esta parte pero bue xd) Aquí una recomendación de como setearía el ritmo para esta parte. La cosa es que quería alternar los ritmos para que fuera más divertido y diera una jugabilidad diferente al cambio de voz.
- 01:52:713 (1) - Podrías aplicarle ctrl+g a este slider ya que con tanto stack 01:51:329 (2,3,4,5) - al estilo back n fourth se hace un poco confuso xd. El flujo de los siguientes sliders se arruinarian, por lo tanto prefiero dejarlo asi.
- 02:00:098 - Acá no usaste las 4 versiones como antes D: Bueno, no es nada grave igual xd Blame the sliders.
- 02:34:252 (5,6) - Lo mismo que antes D: ^
- 02:52:713 (3,4) - Encuentro que si le haces ctrl+g a estas notas quedaría mejor estructurado el pattern en general, ya que 02:52:252 (2,3,4,1) - este spacing se podría jugar/sentir mejor si haces que 02:53:175 (4,1) - esta distancia sea mayor o igual que 02:52:252 (2,3) -. Además no quedaría mal que 02:52:713 - quedara en esa posición ya que el beat ahí es un poco más fuerte como para poder enfatizarlo así. Listo.
- 00:47:175 - 00:49:021 - 00:50:868 - Encuentro que poner tantos finishes no queda muy bien la verdad D: Además que la música que la música no da un real soporte para ellos. Pediré más opiniones al respecto.
- 00:42:329 - Sin contar las 2 primeras veces que usas este hitsound (y la parte final) Este es la única vez que lo usas en una tick rojo, el resto es todo el rato en ticks azules 00:31:368 - 00:46:137 - etc. Personalmente encuentro que queda mejor en los ticks rojos, como que en los azules se sienten un poco off D: 01:56:175 - Aquí lo use en rojo también para mantener consistencia.
- 03:08:290 - Al igual que las otras secciones, podrías quitar el kiai en esta línea verde? ¿Por qué?
[Easy] - 00:06:560 (2) - Si bien aquí estás siguiendo un nuevo ritmo en la música, encuentro que puede ser un poco confuso para los newbies la verdad. De hecho al principio no sabía lo que estabas siguiendo, tuve que detenerme a escuchar mejor la canción. Podría quedar mejor si haces 2 sliders de 1/1. Realmente no es mucho problema ya que el spacing entre ambos objetos es el mismo, por lo tanto esto hara que los newbies intuyan que el ritmo es diferente aquí debido a la longitud del slider.
- 00:13:021 (1,2) - ctrl+g este ritmo podría quedar más intuitivo según yo. O sino hacer de estos un slider tal como hiciste con 00:09:329 (1) - este. Quise tener una variación de ritmo en esta sección, es por eso que me centre en seguir los drums principalmente.
- 01:19:499 (3) - Quizás podrías hacer que los movimientos del slider sean en los ticks blancos para que vayan acorde con la música D: Al final te quedarían 2 en vez de 3 pero no estaría mal. Lo mismo pasa con un slider al final del último kiai. Arruinaría el patrón si elimino esos puntos.
Okay eso es todo de mi parte. Me gustó que hayas hecho este tipo de edit. GL o/
Aquí mi mapa :d https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546011
Updated~