ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - rewrite · forum

Irohas

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-06-23T14:44:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 11 mai 2018 at 19:23:42

Artist: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Title: rewrite
Source: 鋼の錬金術師
Tags: fullmetal alchemist hagane no renkijutsushi ハガレン hagaren fma edward elric alphonse akg opening 4 tv size mugiwarasekai hazu- pkhg
BPM: 179
Filesize: 6369kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:

dignity (5,26 stars, 422 notes)
hazu's hard (3,27 stars, 290 notes)
insane (4,33 stars, 379 notes)
normal (2,05 stars, 186 notes)
pkhg's easy (1,79 stars, 148 notes)

Download: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - rewrite
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Irohas 2020-12-23T22:49:07+00:00, edited 137 times in total.

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-06-24T18:37:45+00:00

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58943
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11094,32546,37909,48636
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Rewrite
TitleUnicode:Rewrite
Artist:ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
ArtistUnicode:ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Creator:MugiwaraSekai
Version:Hazu's Hard
Source:鋼の錬金術師
Tags:fullmetal alchemist hagane no renkijutsushi ハガレン hagaren fma edward elric alphonse elric opening 4 tv size
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-06-24T21:39:03+00:00

added hazu-'s diff

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-06-26T12:05:15+00:00

Hi from #modreqs

[Easy]

you need one lo

[Normal]

By using a DS of 1.2 you've kind of shot yourself in the foot for this whole diff, as with a 1/2 gap you will have an ugly-ass overlap every time. Restructuring in 1.4x DS would make everything look a whole lot better

[Insane]

Same hitsounding issues as in Rewrite

00:12:099 (4) - Stack this properly
00:14:781 (1) - I assume you've done this NC so that it's more readable... but if you have to use an NC to make something readable you probably shouldn't do that something lol - move it a bit further out so that it half overlaps like you do elsewhere and remove NC
00:28:189 (4) - Ctrl+G? Plays better
00:30:535 (3) - Make it blanket the long slider like you've done everywhere else
00:59:027 (1,1) - So you've managed to make this harder than it is in Rewrite lol, either increase the spacing on the one in Rewrite (cross-diff modding!?!?!?!?) or reduce this one

[Rewrite]

00:01:541 (5) - Why not give this a clap since it's the same drum beat as the end of 00:01:038 (3) -
00:02:546 (4) - This should also have a clap, it's the same drum as 00:02:379 (3) -
Ok so you seem to be missing out on a lot of drum beats like these^ so I'll stop mentioning them since you should be able to just go through and fix them all yourself
00:13:440 (4) - Move this a bit further out so it overlaps, I see you do this kind of structure a lot but here there's no sliderbody or anything to show that theres another hitobject here so some people might find it hard to read
00:37:909 (1,3) - Can you make these parallel pls, would look better
01:20:312 (1,2,3) - Move this stream away from that slider, looks really cramped

Really solid diff honestly, if I had one thing to complain about is that for every 1/1 slider you've either used a straight slider or a curve, you could spice things up by introducing more shapes like wave sliders or elbow sliders

Stars!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-06-26T16:11:48+00:00

Cheesecake wrote:
Hi from #modreqs

[Easy]

you need one lo still on wip I'll surely make it I hope
[Normal]

By using a DS of 1.2 you've kind of shot yourself in the foot for this whole diff, as with a 1/2 gap you will have an ugly-ass overlap every time. Restructuring in 1.4x DS would make everything look a whole lot better okay used 1.3 instead
[Insane]

Same hitsounding issues as in Rewrite
00:12:099 (4) - Stack this properly okay
00:14:781 (1) - I assume you've done this NC so that it's more readable... but if you have to use an NC to make something readable you probably shouldn't do that something lol - move it a bit further out so that it half overlaps like you do elsewhere and remove NC actually.. it was simply a mistake xd NC'ed
00:28:189 (4) - Ctrl+G? Plays better okay
00:30:535 (3) - Make it blanket the long slider like you've done everywhere else I think it's fine
00:59:027 (1,1) - So you've managed to make this harder than it is in Rewrite lol, either increase the spacing on the one in Rewrite (cross-diff modding!?!?!?!?) or reduce this one reduced a bit, good find
[Rewrite]

00:01:541 (5) - Why not give this a clap since it's the same drum beat as the end of 00:01:038 (3) - okay why not
00:02:546 (4) - This should also have a clap, it's the same drum as 00:02:379 (3) - ^
Ok so you seem to be missing out on a lot of drum beats like these^ so I'll stop mentioning them since you should be able to just go through and fix them all yourself rofl
00:13:440 (4) - Move this a bit further out so it overlaps, I see you do this kind of structure a lot but here there's no sliderbody or anything to show that theres another hitobject here so some people might find it hard to read k but really dont know stack looked good too
00:37:909 (1,3) - Can you make these parallel pls, would look better okay
01:20:312 (1,2,3) - Move this stream away from that slider, looks really cramped okay
Really solid diff honestly, if I had one thing to complain about is that for every 1/1 slider you've either used a straight slider or a curve, you could spice things up by introducing more shapes like wave sliders or elbow sliders surely it would make the diff more pretty, but I just have a slight preference for straight sliders

Stars! Thank you!

Thanks!

tatemae

847 posts

Joined November 2014

tatemae 2016-06-27T12:41:45+00:00

hi

Rewrite

00:21:485 (1) - This slider is too curved imo
00:24:502 (1,2) - blanket

? sry
00:45:284 (3) - ctrl+g?
00:59:027 (1,1) - Not bad to play, but a bit boring imo.
01:18:133 (1,2,3,4) - These could be paralleled better imo
01:19:474 (1) - . I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but like this 01:18:803 (3) -
01:28:859 (1,2,3) - Play with slivervelocity

gl, dude~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-06-27T14:16:35+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
hi

Rewrite

00:21:485 (1) - This slider is too curved imo I think It's fine, since I wanted to show the SV change
00:24:502 (1,2) - blanket ? sry okay
00:45:284 (3) - ctrl+g? nah
00:59:027 (1,1) - Not bad to play, but a bit boring imo. seems good to me xd
01:18:133 (1,2,3,4) - These could be paralleled better imo this is not what I wanted to make
01:19:474 (1) - . I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but like this 01:18:803 (3) - looked good imo, I wanted to show that 01:18:133 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:19:474 (1) - are differents so I think straight slider would fit better
01:28:859 (1,2,3) - Play with slivervelocity SV change only on kiai part, will maybe change on this part tho, keep in mind

gl, dude~

Thankss

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-07-02T22:50:01+00:00

[general]
first offset felt a little early to me, would get more opinions on that

[hitsounds]
why are your claps kick sounds
and your whistles clap sounds xd
guess it won't matter since the actual sounds are mostly correctly placed
(all based on highest diff)
00:23:999 - should be clap for kick like 00:22:658 - etc
00:35:563 - would've loved if you hitsounded this high pitched sound that appears a few times in some spots with some real whistle or anything
01:31:063 - missing kick (clap)
there are probably mrofe i didnt notice

[rw]
00:05:563 (1,2,3) - suddensly stacking the 1/4 when they are like the same as before is weird, how about http://i.imgur.com/mGapUmB.jpg which also looks nice?
00:07:909 (4) - such a huge jump is not justified here. similar spacing to 00:08:245 (6) - fits better.
00:09:083 - such a strong sound, at least use a repeat sldier instead if you want to focus guitar mainly // 00:35:898 - too
00:18:803 (4) - why is this suddenly only 1x ds lol. you always space this way more
00:21:820 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/ebIg4Tw.jpg ctrlg on 00:21:820 (1) - and moving 2 around a bit would work better for example
00:22:993 (5) - bit high spacing compared to similar ones again, same for some other spots like 00:27:016 (5) -
just seems weird that the strong beat (vocal+clap) like 00:26:848 (4) - gets less spacing than this

appears on some other spots too, like 00:42:796 (4) - etc.
00:33:719 (5) - would look great if this was stacked on 00:32:546 (1) - head and blanketed with 00:33:049 (3) - , but thta would need changes to so many things after, so rip :d
00:37:407 (3) - some spacing after this makes it easier to read cause less cluttered
00:48:662 (1,2) - what is this spacing // 01:12:796 (1,2) - // and some more
00:50:170 (2,3,5,6) - could make the overlaps the same distance/angle for visuals lol
00:54:025 (1,2,3) - this pattern feels kinda overused by now xd
01:17:153 (3,5,1) - can you make this even to make it more cute?
01:20:170 (7,1) - what is this movement http://i.imgur.com/q18P6zw.jpg
01:27:543 (1) - vocals starting in the middle of this, remove the repeat and split it or sth so there is sth on 01:27:879 - that is not a repeat
01:28:884 (1,2,3) - why not http://i.imgur.com/A90qQDh.jpg instead of having 3 kill the pattern even though vocals dont change
01:34:164 - rip kick : (
01:34:247 (1) - idk why rhis is skipped, you even mapped it on insane lo
01:35:254 (3) - spacing pls ;_; like http://i.imgur.com/PjVgyAa.jpg for example

[ins]
od7 for spread
00:01:038 (3) - forcing this blanket makes for really weird movement visually. example of sth that would work nicer (dunno if you like it though) http://i.imgur.com/IImHedX.jpg
00:05:060 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - same drums, so same spacing?
00:13:775 (1,1) - perfect overlap would look nice here
00:14:781 (1) - wtf is this nc
00:25:842 (1) - could ctrl-h - ctrl-j 00:25:507 (4) - to make movement onto 2 nicer and all
00:26:848 (5,1) - http://i.imgur.com/lcXHyem.jpg
00:37:407 (2,3) - like extra // 01:20:170 (2) -
actually quite some points from extra appyl here too so I won't mention again
01:24:527 (4) - why suddenly like no spacing at all for this, when similar ones in the chorus are usually jumps?

[hazu]
00:09:083 (3,1) - can you not
00:53:353 (3,4) - making them the same shape would look so good. same for all the times you copypasted this
00:58:550 (4) - why does this get more spacing than 3, which is way stronger? sth like http://i.imgur.com/xo2hiYV.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/LnNtnzl.jpg or anything makes more sense than this
01:32:571 - clickable for this strong drum and all would be great

[nrm]
using 1.4x or sth for the whole map would look so much less clumped and be nicer to read cause of that.
00:20:479 (1,2,3) - check this with stacking enabled xd
00:23:831 (2,3) - same for this and many others
00:27:854 (2,3) - what is this movement, are you expecting new players to avbuse lenicency to get normal movement here lol
same for some others like 01:10:113 (1,2) -
00:59:052 (4,1) - sudden 1/1 stack after lots of stacked 1/2 : /
01:03:409 (1) - what is this

most of these diffs seem to consist of like 3 different patterns lol

[pkhg]
http://i.imgur.com/s4YY0zC.jpg nice
fine, though some of those long vocal sliders make it feel like some ultra beginner diff in some spots ;d

gl

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-02T23:29:04+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[hazu]
00:09:083 (3,1) - can you not Ok.
00:53:353 (3,4) - making them the same shape would look so good. same for all the times you copypasted this Actually previous isn't so... I changed a little bit >.<
00:58:550 (4) - why does this get more spacing than 3, which is way stronger? sth like http://i.imgur.com/xo2hiYV.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/LnNtnzl.jpg or anything makes more sense than this 2
01:32:571 - clickable for this strong drum and all would be great Fixed.

gl

btw... I fixed unsnapped objets in my diff.
Add tags: "Hazu-" in pkhg's Easy and "pkhg" in all diffs

Does the title should not be "リライト"?
http://www.hagaren.jp/music/

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Irohas

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-02T23:56:06+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[general]
first offset felt a little early to me, would get more opinions on that

[hitsounds]
why are your claps kick sounds too lazy to switch D: ; and all fixed for hitsounds
and your whistles clap sounds xd
guess it won't matter since the actual sounds are mostly correctly placed
(all based on highest diff)
00:23:999 - should be clap for kick like 00:22:658 - etc
00:35:563 - would've loved if you hitsounded this high pitched sound that appears a few times in some spots with some real whistle or anything
01:31:063 - missing kick (clap)
there are probably mrofe i didnt notice

[rw]
00:05:563 (1,2,3) - suddensly stacking the 1/4 when they are like the same as before is weird, how about http://i.imgur.com/mGapUmB.jpg which also looks nice? okay
00:07:909 (4) - such a huge jump is not justified here. similar spacing to 00:08:245 (6) - fits better. okay why not
00:09:083 - such a strong sound, at least use a repeat sldier instead if you want to focus guitar mainly // 00:35:898 - too maybe not I skipped this at 00:06:233 (5) - so made the same for consistency
00:18:803 (4) - why is this suddenly only 1x ds lol. you always space this way more rofl didn't notice that, fixed
00:21:820 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/ebIg4Tw.jpg ctrlg on 00:21:820 (1) - and moving 2 around a bit would work better for example I guess it'll never pass but I think it's not really bad to play so I'll keep it. Or I will maybe change the shape for.
00:22:993 (5) - bit high spacing compared to similar ones again, same for some other spots like 00:27:016 (5) - arf, fixed
just seems weird that the strong beat (vocal+clap) like 00:26:848 (4) - gets less spacing than this I guess it's inconsistent rofl
appears on some other spots too, like 00:42:796 (4) - etc.
00:33:719 (5) - would look great if this was stacked on 00:32:546 (1) - head and blanketed with 00:33:049 (3) - , but thta would need changes to so many things after, so rip :d too lazy to make this more aesthetic and it's not really bad so xd
00:37:407 (3) - some spacing after this makes it easier to read cause less cluttered okay
00:48:662 (1,2) - what is this spacing // 01:12:796 (1,2) - // and some more fixed 01:12:796 (1,2) but I think 00:48:662 (1,2) is not bad since I want to show that (3) is important (will no doubt rework spacing)
00:50:170 (2,3,5,6) - could make the overlaps the same distance/angle for visuals lol okay
00:54:025 (1,2,3) - this pattern feels kinda overused by now xd maybe but I keep for the moment
01:17:153 (3,5,1) - can you make this even to make it more cute? okay copy/paste 01:17:153 (3) -
01:20:170 (7,1) - what is this movement http://i.imgur.com/q18P6zw.jpg okay it surely looks better
01:27:543 (1) - vocals starting in the middle of this, remove the repeat and split it or sth so there is sth on 01:27:879 - that is not a repeat okay since you're not the first who said that
01:28:884 (1,2,3) - why not http://i.imgur.com/A90qQDh.jpg instead of having 3 kill the pattern even though vocals dont change okay
01:34:164 - rip kick : ( rofl added a circle
01:34:247 (1) - idk why rhis is skipped, you even mapped it on insane lo I think it's fine as the two importants beats are 01:34:248 (1,2) -
01:35:254 (3) - spacing pls ;_; like http://i.imgur.com/PjVgyAa.jpg for example consistency with 01:32:572 (3,1) -

[ins]
od7 for spread
00:01:038 (3) - forcing this blanket makes for really weird movement visually. example of sth that would work nicer (dunno if you like it though) http://i.imgur.com/IImHedX.jpg made it differently
00:05:060 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - same drums, so same spacing? Privileged emphasize 00:05:731 (3) - so I think spacing is ok
00:13:775 (1,1) - perfect overlap would look nice here sure
00:14:781 (1) - wtf is this nc fixed on the previous mod but not updated
00:25:842 (1) - could ctrl-h - ctrl-j 00:25:507 (4) - to make movement onto 2 nicer and all both suits imo
00:26:848 (5,1) - http://i.imgur.com/lcXHyem.jpg arf, keep in mind I think I'll change
00:37:407 (2,3) - like extra // 01:20:170 (2) - fun to play i guess D:
actually quite some points from extra appyl here too so I won't mention again
01:24:527 (4) - why suddenly like no spacing at all for this, when similar ones in the chorus are usually jumps? okay wtf fixed

[nrm]
using 1.4x or sth for the whole map would look so much less clumped and be nicer to read cause of that. fixed
00:20:479 (1,2,3) - check this with stacking enabled xd ok
00:23:831 (2,3) - same for this and many others ^
00:27:854 (2,3) - what is this movement, are you expecting new players to avbuse lenicency to get normal movement here lol rofl
same for some others like 01:10:113 (1,2) -
00:59:052 (4,1) - sudden 1/1 stack after lots of stacked 1/2 : / I think It's fine as (1) is different from others xd
01:03:409 (1) - what is this fine i guess

most of these diffs seem to consist of like 3 different patterns lol

gl

Thanks!

Hazu- wrote:

btw... I fixed unsnapped objets in my diff.
Add tags: "Hazu-" in pkhg's Easy and "pkhg" in all diffs forgot it thanks D:

Does the title should not be "リライト"? arf, also forgot should I ask IamKwaN for confirmation
http://www.hagaren.jp/music/

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Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-07-05T09:45:18+00:00

uhh hi

mp3 bitrate is 320 kbps yet it's very bad quality ( or the original itself already like that ? idk)
find another mp3 pls and reduce it to 192 kbps. i can reduce the bitrate for you if you want

pkhg's easy got different combo colour with the rest of the diffs

[rewrite]
00:08:086 (5,6) - i think this is too far considered the song pace is still the same with the others and there're no typical different instrument here
00:09:845 (2) - 00:21:075 (4) - add whistle
00:31:382 (2) - missing clap
00:32:555 (1,3) - wtf super netpicky but this blanket is really poor

00:55:700 (2,3) - doesn't flow really good that the note placement was the opposite from the sliderpoint. try smth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542052
01:20:840 (1) - missing whistle, also try finish at slidertail ?
01:30:226 (1,2) - i'd swap this tbh lol

[insane]
00:32:546 - unsnapped greenlines
00:14:790 (3) - i'll recommend a half overlap instead of full one for better readibility. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542070
00:31:968 (2,4) - why they got no hitsounds ? o.o
00:41:958 (1,2) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542076
01:07:768 (3) - add whistle or maybe finish at slidertail
01:32:572 (4,1) - i think less-edgy jump would feel more comfortable, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542091

this diff really resemble pkhg's nowaday maps.. or it's just my concern xD

[hard]
00:09:091 (3,4) - is this supposed to be like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542095
00:48:662 (1) - add finish for cymbal crash
00:53:018 - 01:11:120 (4) - missing whistle
00:58:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - a kind of difficulty-spike compared to other pattern. try to nerf this a bit
01:08:605 - 01:09:275 - add whistles

[normal]
weweewe spaced 1/2 note, haven't seen this for a while
00:37:934 (1) - described as unsnapped by aimod. check it
00:08:420 (1) - is this nc necessary ?
01:07:432 (1,2,1) - anti-climax, i do expect something dense here considered that you mapped a lot of 1/2s before and the music here is very intense

[pkhg]
00:11:094 - unsnapped greenline
00:11:102 (1,2) - why this one is the only different rhythm lol, the other part is smth like 00:16:465 (1,2) -
good

good luck !

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-05T15:20:28+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
uhh hi

mp3 bitrate is 320 kbps yet it's very bad quality ( or the original itself already like that ? idk)
find another mp3 pls and reduce it to 192 kbps. i can reduce the bitrate for you if you want If i'm not disturb you then I gladly accept ;_;

pkhg's easy got different combo colour with the rest of the diffs pkhg has a different BG

[rewrite]
00:08:086 (5,6) - i think this is too far considered the song pace is still the same with the others and there're no typical different instrument here maybe not if you consider that the song gradually "increase"
00:09:845 (2) - 00:21:075 (4) - add whistle okay
00:31:382 (2) - missing clap okay
00:32:555 (1,3) - wtf super netpicky but this blanket is really poor arf, will try to make this differently
00:55:700 (2,3) - doesn't flow really good that the note placement was the opposite from the sliderpoint. try smth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542052 yeah sure it looks better
01:20:840 (1) - missing whistle, also try finish at slidertail ? whistle won't fit imo but added finish at slidertail
01:30:226 (1,2) - i'd swap this tbh lol maybe not (1) should be a minimum emphasis

[insane]
00:32:546 - unsnapped greenlines okay
00:14:790 (3) - i'll recommend a half overlap instead of full one for better readibility. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542070 sure
00:31:968 (2,4) - why they got no hitsounds ? o.o o.ops forgot, fixed
00:41:958 (1,2) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542076 okay
01:07:768 (3) - add whistle or maybe finish at slidertail added finish sure
01:32:572 (4,1) - i think less-edgy jump would feel more comfortable, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542091 oh yeah why not

this diff really resemble pkhg's nowaday maps.. or it's just my concern xD maybe yes I pretty like his maps/mapping style but it's just inspiration I may do unconsciously sorry if it bother D:

[normal]
weweewe spaced 1/2 note, haven't seen this for a while rofl
00:37:934 (1) - described as unsnapped by aimod. check it yus fixed
00:08:420 (1) - is this nc necessary ? fail D:
01:07:432 (1,2,1) - anti-climax, i do expect something dense here considered that you mapped a lot of 1/2s before and the music here is very intense keep in mind that I'll surely make it differently when I know how to make it lol

good luck !

Thanks!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-06T03:41:09+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
uhh hi
[hard]
00:09:091 (3,4) - is this supposed to be like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5542095 No xDD I'll see to do.
00:48:662 (1) - add finish for cymbal crash Fixed.
00:53:018 - 01:11:120 (4) - missing whistle Fixed.
00:58:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - a kind of difficulty-spike compared to other pattern. try to nerf this a bit Okay~
01:08:605 - 01:09:275 - add whistles Fixed.

good luck !

Poi

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-06T09:53:33+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
uhh hi
[pkhg]
00:11:094 - unsnapped greenline oops
00:11:102 (1,2) - why this one is the only different rhythm lol, the other part is smth like 00:16:465 (1,2) - idk tbh i might change that if not lazy x d
good 'w'

good luck !

Lasse wrote:
[pkhg]
http://i.imgur.com/s4YY0zC.jpg nice beginners deserve challenging diffs too!
fine, though some of those long vocal sliders make it feel like some ultra beginner diff in some spots ;d same to asphalt

gl

upd00t

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Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2016-07-10T10:50:05+00:00

pkhg's Easy

00:31:884 (3) - This one is almost out of the screen, maybe you should move it up a bit
01:16:482 (3) - You havent used a shape like this the whole map, why now? Kinda unfitting
01:35:421 - I would add a circle here. I think its cool as an end in an Easy

Normal

00:18:811 (3,1) - This blank can be clearly improved
00:23:839 (2) - How about you move the slidertail into the opposite direction? Would fit with the next slider
00:25:850 (1) - This one is too high, on the same height as the hp bar
00:37:247 (3) - Try to make this slider look better by moving the first reddot a bit more down, it depends on you though
01:00:728 (1) - You should move this one down aswell, too close to the hp bar
01:30:895 (2,1) - Why did you place (1) after the repeat? Kinda kills the flow, I would move (1) higher like 41/95 to fit more. You have to rearrenge all the following objects though

Hazu's Hard

00:05:068 (4,5,6,7,1) - May be just me, but I think this is a bit too hard for a Hard. You could let (4) repeat till the whitetick, will fit more considering that this is a Hard. Same here 00:09:761 (1,2,3) -

Good Diff

Thats it from me, Good Luck!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-10T14:47:36+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Normal

00:18:811 (3,1) - This blank can be clearly improved fixed
00:23:839 (2) - How about you move the slidertail into the opposite direction? Would fit with the next slider sure maybe
00:25:850 (1) - This one is too high, on the same height as the hp bar but DS
00:37:247 (3) - Try to make this slider look better by moving the first reddot a bit more down, it depends on you though make it differently
01:00:728 (1) - You should move this one down aswell, too close to the hp I don't think that it'll really bother imo but keep in mind
01:30:895 (2,1) - Why did you place (1) after the repeat? Kinda kills the flow, I would move (1) higher like 41/95 to fit more. You have to rearrenge all the following objects though Maybe not, I think it still playable

Thats it from me, Good Luck!

Thank you !

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-07-10T15:07:56+00:00

irc des familles

16:49 MugiwaraSekai: Hey!
16:50 MugiwaraSekai: Je pourrais avoir vite fait ton avis sur une map ?
16:52 Sotarks: vite fait ouai
16:52 Sotarks: hi!
16:52 Sotarks: :D
16:54 MugiwaraSekai: ok merci!
16:54 *MugiwaraSekai is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1011261 ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - rewrite]
16:54 Sotarks: oh cette musique
16:54 Sotarks: xd
16:54 MugiwaraSekai: vieille c'est vrai
16:54 MugiwaraSekai: mais elle est cool
16:54 *Sotarks is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1010068 ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - rewrite [rewrite]] +Hidden
16:56 Sotarks: Oh
16:57 Sotarks: Interessant
16:57 Sotarks: quelle diff tu veux un avis
16:59 MugiwaraSekai: Merci D:
16:59 MugiwaraSekai: la dernière si possible
16:59 Sotarks: LOL
16:59 Sotarks: ce run
16:59 Sotarks: XD
16:59 MugiwaraSekai: xDD
16:59 Sotarks: elle est agréable a jouer
16:59 Sotarks: franchement
17:00 MugiwaraSekai: Merci beaucoup :D
17:00 Sotarks: Pourquoi tu map avec GridSnap
17:00 Sotarks: ><
17:00 MugiwaraSekai: Je map pas avec D:
17:00 Sotarks: 00:18:477 (3,4,5) - ducoup tu pourrais faire ça linéaire comme [http://puu.sh/pWQoq/0a6b45b3db.jpg ça]
17:01 MugiwaraSekai: ah bah oui!
17:01 Sotarks: 00:21:494 (1,1) - Ce flow il est pas ouf :/ Stack le début de 00:21:829 (1) - sur le début de 00:21:494 (1) - magie!
17:02 Sotarks: 00:22:332 (2,3) - ça te fait un jolie flow en V pour ce patern
17:02 Sotarks: après :)
17:02 Sotarks: 00:22:332 (2,4,5) - parfaite ligne stp comme avant (nazi structure mod)
17:03 MugiwaraSekai: Ouais c'est vrai que ça rend mieux
17:03 Sotarks: 00:29:874 (1,2,3,4) - un peu chiant ça, plus de créativité mr. mugi pls
17:03 MugiwaraSekai: J'aime bien faire des sliders comme ça D:
17:03 Sotarks: 00:31:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - ce flow ici est un peu tendu, mais a voir avec les mods
17:04 MugiwaraSekai: Pour l'instant j'ai rien eu sur ça D:
17:04 Sotarks: J'trouve que overall tu as pas trop d'originalité pour les slider shapes
17:04 Sotarks: C'est soit une basic curve a blanket soit tout droit
17:04 Sotarks: xD
17:05 MugiwaraSekai: On m'a reproché ça aussi dans mon premier mod
17:05 MugiwaraSekai: Du coup je mettrai sans doute + de formes originales dans ma prochaine map
17:05 MugiwaraSekai: Y a pas mal de vagues d'ailleurs xD
17:05 Sotarks: Pas trop original nom plus
17:06 Sotarks: mais des vagues / des curve rouge + blanche
17:06 Sotarks: des zig zag
17:06 Sotarks: ya pleins de slider stylé différent
17:06 MugiwaraSekai: J'avais vu un forum qui portait sur ça d'ailleur
17:06 Sotarks: osef des forums
17:06 Sotarks: xD
17:06 Sotarks: c'toi et ta propre
17:06 Sotarks: créativité
17:06 Sotarks: va pas copité des fofo xD
17:07 MugiwaraSekai: xDD
17:07 MugiwaraSekai: d'acc mais souvent ça rend moche du coup D:
17:07 Sotarks: C'est tout sinon xD

gl

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-10T16:30:44+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Hazu's Hard

00:05:068 (4,5,6,7,1) - May be just me, but I think this is a bit too hard for a Hard. You could let (4) repeat till the whitetick, will fit more considering that this is a Hard. Same here 00:09:761 (1,2,3) - I don't think it very hard, I'll also watching others mods say.

Good Diff Thanks (/ >w<)/

Thats it from me, Good Luck!

No changes for now.

Saut

473 posts

Joined December 2013

Saut 2016-07-11T18:05:57+00:00

u mod 3
i mod 3

!!

general
-why is your whistle a clap sound tho

pkk's easy
- 00:01:046 (2) - while this is prob fine because of the strong beat on the red tick, 00:03:057 (1) - this is not. Going for something like this would be more pkkgh'isher tbh
- you tend to stack a lot which isnt really the best chioce in a ez diff // things like 00:58:046 (3,4,1) - or 01:20:840 (1,2,3) - will prob be a problem
- also 00:17:806 (2,1) - makes scrubs think that the slider end of (1) is the next sliderhead
mugiwaras bg is better

normal
- 00:01:046 (2,3,1) - try to make things more clearisher, because atm (2) is pointing at (3) with fitting ds, which makes scrubs click on 3 after 1. Something like this workssss // also applies to 00:07:750 (2,3,1) 01:13:465 (2,3,1) - 01:21:510 (2,3,1) - 01:28:884 (1,2,3) -
- 00:11:102 - the vocals are way stronger than those drums in this part. Sacrifice some drums so you can follow the vocals xxx for example: 00:11:102 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/pY6sD/01ba058ac1.jpg
- 00:59:052 (4,1) - space these apart, otherwise it will be misinterpret as something like 00:56:538 (3,1) - . Also this gives emphasis on the strong vocal
- i also think the kiai could be more intense. means you should add some more objects and dencity. Like this for example: 00:59:387 (1) - http://puu.sh/pY6Hn/113c908bc7.jpg
- 01:09:443 - should be clickable
- 01:15:476 (1,2) - they will click on the sliderend // 01:23:521 (1,2) - 01:27:543 (1,2) -
- stack leniency makes them touch ->>>> http://puu.sh/pY6SG/64f6f8af58.jpg
- 01:19:499 (3) - go for easy and beautiful slider forms in the normal diffff

haru
- 00:01:716 (1) - new combo and slider should start here on the strong beatt 00:01:549 - just change (4) into a circle and move (1) 1/2 back
- i dont really like how you sometimes tend to use harsh angles and movements like 00:23:672 (2,3) - or 00:28:364 (4,1) - because I cant really spot a consistent pattern :/
- list of things that shouldnt overlap xx: 00:11:102 (1,4) - 00:13:951 (2,5) - 00:38:606 (3,1) - 01:01:734 (3,3) -
- 00:58:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - bascially the only place where you used custom ds. While this is probably fine i would recommend going for an easier pattern without overlaps like this for example
- 01:19:750 - presonally would extend (1) to cover the clap sound here
- 01:34:416 (2) - make 2 start here 01:34:247 - to follow the guitar

great song choice, gl with that one

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-11T18:39:00+00:00

Saut wrote:
u mod 3
i mod 3

!!

general
-why is your whistle a clap sound tho too lazy to swap them

normal
- 00:01:046 (2,3,1) - try to make things more clearisher, because atm (2) is pointing at (3) with fitting ds, which makes scrubs click on 3 after 1. Something like this workssss // also applies to 00:07:750 (2,3,1) 01:13:465 (2,3,1) - 01:21:510 (2,3,1) - 01:28:884 (1,2,3) - okay sure np applied for readability but 01:13:465 (2,3,1) want to keep blanket
- 00:11:102 - the vocals are way stronger than those drums in this part. Sacrifice some drums so you can follow the vocals xxx for example: 00:11:102 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/pY6sD/01ba058ac1.jpg both suits too, but I keep it, a simple preference. In my opinion, it looks better when I follow drums instead of vocal.
- 00:59:052 (4,1) - space these apart, otherwise it will be misinterpret as something like 00:56:538 (3,1) - . Also this gives emphasis on the strong vocal
- i also think the kiai could be more intense. means you should add some more objects and dencity. Like this for example: 00:59:387 (1) - http://puu.sh/pY6Hn/113c908bc7.jpg mmh yeah maybe unstack will make it more readable xd; for the kiai I thought about making like that but I wondered if it wasn't too hard for a normal diff. So, I thought skip this note that seemed less important than others
- 01:09:443 - should be clickable yeah certainly
- 01:15:476 (1,2) - they will click on the sliderend // 01:23:521 (1,2) - 01:27:543 (1,2) - Surely, but it's like a kind of difficulty for beginners imo
- stack leniency makes them touch ->>>> http://puu.sh/pY6SG/64f6f8af58.jpg yus
- 01:19:499 (3) - go for easy and beautiful slider forms in the normal diffff I want to try to make different shape D:

great song choice, gl with that one thank you saut

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-11T18:50:19+00:00

Saut wrote:
haru wut.
- 00:01:716 (1) - new combo and slider should start here on the strong beatt 00:01:549 - just change (4) into a circle and move (1) 1/2 back Fixed.
- i dont really like how you sometimes tend to use harsh angles and movements like 00:23:672 (2,3) - or 00:28:364 (4,1) - because I cant really spot a consistent pattern :/ I really don't think it's problematic, If more mods tell me I will change.
- list of things that shouldnt overlap xx: 00:11:102 (1,4) - 00:13:951 (2,5) - 00:38:606 (3,1) - 01:01:734 (3,3) - Fixed 1 and 2, 3 isn't ovelap and 4 no problem (To correct 2 I had to do ctrl+H all map xd)
- 00:58:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - bascially the only place where you used custom ds. While this is probably fine i would recommend going for an easier pattern without overlaps like this for example No, I like more current.
- 01:19:750 - presonally would extend (1) to cover the clap sound here I think it would be too difficult for Hard diff.
- 01:34:416 (2) - make 2 start here 01:34:247 - to follow the guitar This better keep rhythm

great song choice, gl with that one

Poi

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pkhg

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Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-12T05:14:05+00:00

Saut wrote:
pkk's easy
- 00:01:046 (2) - while this is prob fine because of the strong beat on the red tick, 00:03:057 (1) - this is not. Going for something like this would be more pkkgh'isher tbh sur
- you tend to stack a lot which isnt really the best chioce in a ez diff // things like 00:58:046 (3,4,1) - or 01:20:840 (1,2,3) - will prob be a problem bns are more lenient about that nowadays
- also 00:17:806 (2,1) - makes scrubs think that the slider end of (1) is the next sliderhead scrubs can retryxd
mugiwaras bg is better

great song choice, gl with that one

i think im pkk

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OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fma.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2016-07-15T11:43:02+00:00

#modreqs, Haven't got much to say :/

Hard
00:05:571 (6,7) - Too hard for this. Two options that work: Move 6&7 right which is a little easier or move 7&8 left.

00:42:963 (4) - Possibly too long. It sounds fine but sounds better shorter.

00:58:550 (4) - Still new to modding, is this stacking fine?

00:59:053 (1) - Putting that there is going to break a tonne of first playthrough combos.

Normal
00:56:538 (3) - 00:58:549 (2) - Lower AR causes those circles to appear in the path of cursor movement, causes some confusion.

Easy
00:08:420 (1) - 3 looks slightly closer to 2 compared to 1

01:01:063 (2) - Closer than usual

Last edited by Xinnoh 2016-07-15T12:11:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Strategas

1,378 posts

Joined July 2013

Strategas 2016-07-15T11:57:06+00:00

[general]

sadly 320kbps audio bitrate is not allowed, you will have to lower the quality to 192kbps

[rewrite]

the way you use hitsound a bit confuses me like 00:42:628 (3,4) - in the music these sounds are completely the same yet you put one clap one whistle here, it would sound better if both of them would have claps here imo. I noticed you use this hitsound paterning every 2 downbeats or so, but still I feel it's not needed and sticking to 00:38:606 (3) - kind of hitsounding would be better

00:08:086 (5,6) - emphasis on these notes seems messed up 6 is weak and 5 is strong beat, so the extreme jump to 6 is lol

00:09:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't look very nice, would look better if you blanketed

00:13:114 (3) - ctrl g? for flow

00:21:326 (6) - can stack this on 00:20:488 (1) - slider head to improve transition into 00:21:494 (1) -

00:23:170 (1,3) - dunno if intentional but can look better
00:24:511 (1,4) - same

00:29:874 (1,2,3,4) - maybe lower the spacing here, it's kinda huge out of nowhere tbh

00:33:058 (3,1) - seems too close

00:41:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole patern has huge spacing, but there's no reason to increase it here so much imo, also inconsistant with 00:45:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:50:170 (2) - too big of a jump imo

01:25:868 (6,2) - stack?

01:32:740 (1,2) - sloppy blanket

[insane]

00:08:086 (5,1) - really off blanket

00:27:695 (2) - if you put this at x416,y185 it will look better structured

00:30:377 (2) - unsnapped, resnap

00:37:248 (1) - ctrl g plays better

00:48:326 (5,6) - make shapes the same? better copy 00:48:494 (6) - because the 5 looks weird lol

00:58:047 (1) - could use more distance

01:01:231 (2,3,4) - doesn't look good
01:11:958 (2,5) -

[hard]

00:13:783 (1,5) - dis overlap isn't cool

00:51:845 (2,3) - transition into 3 is not very good http://image.prntscr.com/image/2896583c ... a146f0.png something like this feels better
01:07:935 (2,3) - same

flow can be improved mostly, otherwise fine

[normal]

01:16:817 (1,2) - autostacking breaks your DS here http://image.prntscr.com/image/753b7e84 ... 255545.png

[easy]

00:45:979 (1,2) - triggers me that they don't blanket each other at the same distance lol http://image.prntscr.com/image/4deb5078 ... e7834f.png make the red lines even

gl

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-15T14:22:33+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
#modreqs, Haven't got much to say :/

Normal
00:56:538 (3) - 00:58:549 (2) - Lower AR causes those circles to appear in the path of cursor movement, causes some confusion. I think it's fine if I keep it

Strategas wrote:
[general]

sadly 320kbps audio bitrate is not allowed, you will have to lower the quality to 192kbps arf need someone to give me a better mp3 pls

[rewrite]

the way you use hitsound a bit confuses me like 00:42:628 (3,4) - in the music these sounds are completely the same yet you put one clap one whistle here, it would sound better if both of them would have claps here imo. I noticed you use this hitsound paterning every 2 downbeats or so, but still I feel it's not needed and sticking to 00:38:606 (3) - kind of hitsounding would be better don't know if my clap or whistle will fit better but sure I'll correct this inconsistency later

00:08:086 (5,6) - emphasis on these notes seems messed up 6 is weak and 5 is strong beat, so the extreme jump to 6 is lol we can hear that the song gradually increase so I think it's fine to emphasize (4) and (6) imo

00:09:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't look very nice, would look better if you blanketed (6) will be close if I blanket
00:13:114 (3) - ctrl g? for flow ok sure

00:21:326 (6) - can stack this on 00:20:488 (1) - slider head to improve transition into 00:21:494 (1) - okay okay

00:23:170 (1,3) - dunno if intentional but can look better intentional dont want to blanket
00:24:511 (1,4) - same but here fixed

00:29:874 (1,2,3,4) - maybe lower the spacing here, it's kinda huge out of nowhere tbh I don't really know, I'll surely make this differently but dont know

00:33:058 (3,1) - seems too close blanket

00:41:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole patern has huge spacing, but there's no reason to increase it here so much imo, also inconsistant with 00:45:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - reduced (3,4,5)

00:50:170 (2) - too big of a jump imo made an overlap with (4)

01:25:868 (6,2) - stack? sure

01:32:740 (1,2) - sloppy blanket there is no blanket

[insane]

00:08:086 (5,1) - really off blanket ok

00:27:695 (2) - if you put this at x416,y185 it will look better structured okay

00:30:377 (2) - unsnapped, resnap fixed

00:37:248 (1) - ctrl g plays better nah, change direction will play (2) better

00:48:326 (5,6) - make shapes the same? better copy 00:48:494 (6) - because the 5 looks weird lol okay

00:58:047 (1) - could use more distance it's fine

01:01:231 (2,3,4) - doesn't look good it's fine to me xd
01:11:958 (2,5) - both still playable

[normal]

01:16:817 (1,2) - autostacking breaks your DS here http://image.prntscr.com/image/753b7e84 ... 255545.png arf

gl

Thanks!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-15T18:45:46+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
#modreqs, Haven't got much to say :/

Hard
00:05:571 (6,7) - Too hard for this. Two options that work: Move 6&7 right which is a little easier or move 7&8 left. I don't see problems :/

00:42:963 (4) - Possibly too long. It sounds fine but sounds better shorter. Sounds good so.

00:58:550 (4) - Still new to modding, is this stacking fine? No, explanation in Lasse's mod

00:59:053 (1) - Putting that there is going to break a tonne of first playthrough combos. I don't think so xD

Strategas wrote:
[hard]

00:13:783 (1,5) - dis overlap isn't cool Fixed.

00:51:845 (2,3) - transition into 3 is not very good http://image.prntscr.com/image/2896583c ... a146f0.png something like this feels better Fixed.
01:07:935 (2,3) - same Fixed.

flow can be improved mostly, otherwise fine

gl

Thanks for both mods :3

Poi

osu file format v14

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Artist:ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
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Creator:MugiwaraSekai
Version:Hazu's Hard
Source:鋼の錬金術師
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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-07-17T06:17:04+00:00

[General]
Idk whether the romanised title is correct. It'll better to discuss using the capital letter with QAT
What about adjusting the first offset? I think it seems a bit off. Maybe +7 or 8? idk :p
00:36:577 - it seems a bit fast. Consider trying to adjust offset here

[rewrite]
*00:10:935 (6,1) - It seems little close imo. What about increasing the spacing between them?
*00:16:466 (1) - 00:27:192 (1) - Remove finish
*00:37:416 (3,4) - Also it's fine they have the farther spacing
*01:09:275 (2,3,4) - What about this flow? (it's' just a example TwT) If you want to change it like this, also it would be better to consider better 01:08:773 (1) - 's shape
*01:20:170 (7,6) - The idea is cool. But actually i think stacking them is not a good choice hm.. Cuz the overlaps might make the map messy.

[Insane]
*00:01:550 (5,1,2) - What about replacing the rhythm with 00:04:231 (1,2) - ?
*00:31:214 (5) - Adding NC would be better
*00:37:440 (2,3) - Same as rewrite diff lol
*00:50:680 (3) - It may be better to change it to two circles
*01:06:099 (1) - Um move it to the left slightly? Also adjust the next patterns
*01:17:991 (5) - Personally I think you shouldn't put a circle here. You didn't do it even in the highest diff. I just recommend removing the circle, making the spacing with 01:17:488 (3,4) - and lastly stacking 01:18:159 (1) - on 01:17:824 (4) -
*01:20:170 (2,3) - Same as 00:37:440 (2,3) - .. But it's up to you whether fix or not

[Hazu's Hard]
Just consider using more less DS when you put a circle with reverse slider like 00:05:068 (4,5) - . I recommend using 0.9 ~ 1.0. It might be more good to see and play (Also same as 00:21:493 (6,1) - )
*00:32:219 (4) - Why did you use DS 1.5 here? Consider to fix it lol
*01:19:500 (1) - What about changing it to 3/4?

Cool diff

[Normal]
*00:01:716 (1,2,1) - Adjust their DS
*00:44:303 (3) - Make more spacing
*00:48:158 (2,3) - Don't toggle Distance snap here TwT. The overlap with stacked notes seems messy
*01:00:560 (3,1) - It touchs HP bar slightly hm... Idk
*01:19:499 (3) - I can't be sure of that twisted slider hm

Easy is fine for me. Nice work with nice song xd

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-17T09:35:27+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[General]
Idk whether the romanised title is correct. It'll better to discuss using the capital letter with QAT I already had a confirmation with KwaN about that !
What about adjusting the first offset? I think it seems a bit off. Maybe +7 or 8? idk :p I really don't know, but I have to change my current .mp3 because bad quality ;_;
00:36:577 - it seems a bit fast. Consider trying to adjust offset here ^

[rewrite]
*00:10:935 (6,1) - It seems little close imo. What about increasing the spacing between them? sure
*00:16:466 (1) - 00:27:192 (1) - Remove finish okay okay
*00:37:416 (3,4) - Also it's fine they have the farther spacing okay wtf i applied this in lasse's mod
*01:09:275 (2,3,4) - What about this flow? (it's' just a example TwT) If you want to change it like this, also it would be better to consider better 01:08:773 (1) - 's shape oh yeah it looks cool
*01:20:170 (7,6) - The idea is cool. But actually i think stacking them is not a good choice hm.. Cuz the overlaps might make the map messy. i think it still pretty cool to play ;_;
c
[Insane]
*00:01:550 (5,1,2) - What about replacing the rhythm with 00:04:231 (1,2) - ? both work imo
*00:31:214 (5) - Adding NC would be better okay fixed
*00:37:440 (2,3) - Same as rewrite diff lol okay
*00:50:680 (3) - It may be better to change it to two circles consistency with 00:55:366 (1,2,3,4) -
*01:06:099 (1) - Um move it to the left slightly? Also adjust the next patterns okay okay
*01:17:991 (5) - Personally I think you shouldn't put a circle here. You didn't do it even in the highest diff. I just recommend removing the circle, making the spacing with 01:17:488 (3,4) - and lastly stacking 01:18:159 (1) - on 01:17:824 (4) - oh sure, why not I think it'll play better now
*01:20:170 (2,3) - Same as 00:37:440 (2,3) - .. But it's up to you whether fix or not sure fixed

[Normal]
*00:01:716 (1,2,1) - Adjust their DS okay
*00:44:303 (3) - Make more spacing fixed here as well
*00:48:158 (2,3) - Don't toggle Distance snap here TwT. The overlap with stacked notes seems messy arff D:
*01:00:560 (3,1) - It touchs HP bar slightly hm... Idk arf I don't know
*01:19:499 (3) - I can't be sure of that twisted slider hm it looks pretty cool to me D:

Easy is fine for me. Nice work with nice song xd

Thank you Dailycare!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-17T17:40:23+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[Hazu's Hard]
Just consider using more less DS when you put a circle with reverse slider like 00:05:068 (4,5) - . I recommend using 0.9 ~ 1.0. It might be more good to see and play (Also same as 00:21:493 (6,1) - ) Reduced to 1.0x
*00:32:219 (4) - Why did you use DS 1.5 here? Consider to fix it lol xDDDD Nice catch
*01:19:500 (1) - What about changing it to 3/4? Oh, good :3

Cool diff

Thanks >w<

Poi

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Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-07-17T19:26:28+00:00

m4m~ sorry for late ><

*General

- I think you know that you should change mp3, right? 320kbps is really bad quality~
- Just a thing, but Easy and Hard have diffirent Audio Lead-In than other diffs.
- Uncheck Widescreen in all diffs, since it's unnessesary.

*pkhg's Easy

- OD and HP 2 are more proposed for Easy diff imo.
- 00:59:052 - for safety, please change SV of this greenline to 1.0
- 01:02:069 (1,2) - fix stack.
- 01:33:577 (3) - i think you should also add finish on end

*Normal

- OD and HP 4 more preferable for Normal diffs, also Hard have OD 6 and HP 5 so it'll be more fitting spread.
- Tbh you could raise Ar to 5,5~
- 00:15:962 (2) - 00:21:325 (2) - Whistle here sounds really weird, because there isn't any similar-clap hit. Not only these ones, also in the whole diff.
- 00:28:532 (1,2) - The flow looks kinda.. rather flow here is really awkward to play, for newbies this will be hard to play, so i prefer to change it, try this mayb?
- 01:05:756 (3) - That curve looks really ugly imo. I would remove this curve and make the same slider as you did with 01:05:420 (2) -
- 01:18:158 (1,2) - You can add finishes on these ends and heads imo.

*Hazu's Hard

- 00:02:387 (3) - This slider would plays better if you mitigate curve in this slider.
- 00:21:493 (6) - 00:42:963 (4) - Add finishes on heads?
- 00:52:014 (3,4,1) - This pattern could be looks better if you do that // when you do this 00:52:349 (4,3) - fix overlap ><
- 00:54:024 (1) - Missing finish on 1 head.
- 00:58:215 (2,3,4) - ?? Plays weird and looks very misleading, hard ppl will burn you so hard xd // I advise to 00:58:550 (4,5) - stack these ~ (4) on (2) and (5) on (1) !! Will be more enjoyable tho.
- 01:03:913 (3) - I really think you should weak this curve.
- 01:18:159 (1,3,4) - Add finishes? On (1)'s end and (3,4) ends.
- 01:21:176 (2) - Add finish.

*Insane

- 00:18:477 (3,1) - Welp, this blanket could be better imo xd
- 00:20:153 (4) - I'm not a fan of this curved slider tho, i think it should be changed into straight slider, then move white point in this slider on 363/344
- 00:45:309 (3) - That Whistle on end just don't fit with music for me : ?
- 01:18:159 (1,2,3,5,6) - You can add finishes on these objects, sad to skip those ;w;
- 01:20:840 (1,3) - First off, fix overlap, then 01:21:510 (3,5) - make a blanket and stack properly 01:20:840 (1,5) - This should be good :3

That's all. Good luck!!~ :3

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-17T21:24:59+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
m4m~ sorry for late ><

*General

- I think you know that you should change mp3, right? 320kbps is really bad quality~ looking for someone to give me it ;_;
- Just a thing, but Easy and Hard have diffirent Audio Lead-In than other diffs. actually.. I don't know what is that D:
- Uncheck Widescreen in all diffs, since it's unnessesary. fixed

*Normal

- OD and HP 4 more preferable for Normal diffs, also Hard have OD 6 and HP 5 so it'll be more fitting spread. okay sure
- Tbh you could raise Ar to 5,5~ why not
- 00:15:962 (2) - 00:21:325 (2) - Whistle here sounds really weird, because there isn't any similar-clap hit. Not only these ones, also in the whole diff. strategas point out the same thing, I'll change that if i'm not too lazy xd
- 00:28:532 (1,2) - The flow looks kinda.. rather flow here is really awkward to play, for newbies this will be hard to play, so i prefer to change it, try this mayb? oh sure why not
- 01:05:756 (3) - That curve looks really ugly imo. I would remove this curve and make the same slider as you did with 01:05:420 (2) - I don't think It's really ugly, seems pretty to me D:
- 01:18:158 (1,2) - You can add finishes on these ends and heads imo. okay okay

*Insane

- 00:18:477 (3,1) - Welp, this blanket could be better imo xd fixed
- 00:20:153 (4) - I'm not a fan of this curved slider tho, i think it should be changed into straight slider, then move white point in this slider on 363/344 prefer to copy/paste ;_; but yeah it looks good fixed
- 00:45:309 (3) - That Whistle on end just don't fit with music for me : ? no changes for consistency but I'll surely rework hitsounds
- 01:18:159 (1,2,3,5,6) - You can add finishes on these objects, sad to skip those ;w; yeah applied as normal
- 01:20:840 (1,3) - First off, fix overlap, then 01:21:510 (3,5) - make a blanket and stack properly 01:20:840 (1,5) - This should be good :3 fixed overlap and blanket but not stack, it looks cool with an overlap imo D:

That's all. Good luck!!~ :3

Thank you Kalibe!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-17T21:39:31+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
*Hazu's Hard

- 00:02:387 (3) - This slider would plays better if you mitigate curve in this slider.
- 00:21:493 (6) - 00:42:963 (4) - Add finishes on heads?
- 00:52:014 (3,4,1) - This pattern could be looks better if you do that // when you do this 00:52:349 (4,3) - fix overlap ><
- 00:54:024 (1) - Missing finish on 1 head.
- 00:58:215 (2,3,4) - ?? Plays weird and looks very misleading, hard ppl will burn you so hard xd // I advise to 00:58:550 (4,5) - stack these ~ (4) on (2) and (5) on (1) !! Will be more enjoyable tho.
- 01:03:913 (3) - I really think you should weak this curve.
- 01:18:159 (1,3,4) - Add finishes? On (1)'s end and (3,4) ends.
- 01:21:176 (2) - Add finish.

That's all. Good luck!!~ :3

All fixed AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
btw... I reduced the kbps in your mp3 xd

Poi

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Irohas

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Irohas 2016-07-17T22:06:31+00:00

Hazu- wrote:
All fixed AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
btw... I reduced the kbps in your mp3 xd Hazu, could you please convert it to .zip I can DL .rar files ;_; but really thank you

Hazu-

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Hazu- 2016-07-17T22:16:12+00:00

Poi

Irohas

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Irohas 2016-07-17T23:35:24+00:00

@pkhg @Hazu-
I changed the .mp3 and asked to Taeyang for a timing check, to finally change to this in all diffs. So please snap all of your inheriting sections and objects if necessary

eeezzzeee

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eeezzzeee 2016-07-22T14:07:52+00:00

hi from my queue

[rewrite]

00:04:275 (5) - tehcnically there should be NC here
00:10:812 (5,6) - some more spacing between these could be nice https://puu.sh/qavSe/4fa831e384.jpg
00:23:214 (1,3) - you can blanket it
00:31:761 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow of this stream is kinda awkward because its going in an opposite angle from the previous jump, making it much harder than i think you intended lol.
switching the notes around like this helps a little https://puu.sh/qawhU/ff2077d4c5.jpg .
but it would be best if you change the jumps so they end somewhere around here https://puu.sh/qawl5/498d3090e0.jpg
00:32:599 (1,3,5) - blanket is off
00:47:367 (6) - NC
00:48:372 (5) - check ds
00:48:623 (8) - ^
00:50:384 (3,4,5) - try using a 1/1 slider here instead for consistency with the previous pattern 00:49:210 (3) - which the music sounds very similar
00:51:724 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no reason for this really, the music is exactly the same as before lol. if you are going to keep the circles spam at least change 00:52:060 (4) - back into a clap
00:52:060 (4,5,6) - also reconsider this spacing, the emphasis should be more focused on 6 rather than 5 imo
00:57:088 (2,3,4,5,6) - use ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect star pattern c:
01:06:641 (2,3,4,5) - flow is pretty weird here cuz everything is so close lol. how about like this? https://puu.sh/qaxv4/aeb393849e.jpg (stacking 2 on 01:05:803 (4) - and ctrl+g on 3)
01:19:210 (4) - missing a whistle
01:20:048 (5,6,7) - check ds

ok that's all from me, too lazy to do more from nm lol. good luck! c:

Irohas

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Irohas 2016-07-22T15:15:04+00:00

eeezzzeee wrote:
hi from my queue

[rewrite]
00:04:275 (5) - tehcnically there should be NC here NC at 00:05:113 (1) - is more logical
00:10:812 (5,6) - some more spacing between these could be nice https://puu.sh/qavSe/4fa831e384.jpg prefer keep this spacing to show emphasis at 00:10:979 (6,1) -
00:23:214 (1,3) - you can blanket it it's already blanket with 00:22:376 (2) - and spacing will be too huge so I keep (3) stacked on 00:24:555 (1) -
00:31:761 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow of this stream is kinda awkward because its going in an opposite angle from the previous jump, making it much harder than i think you intended lol.
switching the notes around like this helps a little https://puu.sh/qawhU/ff2077d4c5.jpg . oh sure, it looks better
but it would be best if you change the jumps so they end somewhere around here https://puu.sh/qawl5/498d3090e0.jpg I think it's fine if I only switch notes xd
00:32:599 (1,3,5) - blanket is off okay
00:47:367 (6) - NC same at 00:04:275 (5)
00:48:372 (5) - check ds okay
00:48:623 (8) - ^ ^
00:50:384 (3,4,5) - try using a 1/1 slider here instead for consistency with the previous pattern 00:49:210 (3) - which the music sounds very similar It's fine since here I emphasize drums at 00:50:719 (4,5) -
00:51:724 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no reason for this really, the music is exactly the same as before lol. if you are going to keep the circles spam at least change 00:52:060 (4) - back into a clap This part is more intense than the previous so I have to make patterns more harder otherwise my diff will become quickly boring to play and here I'm not follow vocal xd but applied hitsound issue
00:52:060 (4,5,6) - also reconsider this spacing, the emphasis should be more focused on 6 rather than 5 imo sure, sure
00:57:088 (2,3,4,5,6) - use ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect star pattern c: okay okay
01:06:641 (2,3,4,5) - flow is pretty weird here cuz everything is so close lol. how about like this? https://puu.sh/qaxv4/aeb393849e.jpg (stacking 2 on 01:05:803 (4) - and ctrl+g on 3) I think jump at 01:06:641 (2,3) - is pretty good as well
01:19:210 (4) - missing a whistle sure
01:20:048 (5,6,7) - check ds okay
ok that's all from me, too lazy to do more from nm lol. good luck! c:

Thanks !

-NanoRIPE-

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-NanoRIPE- 2016-07-23T09:17:42+00:00

hey ~
just a modder passing by ~
no lol xd i came here because AKFG :3

[Easy]
00:04:443 (3) - inc curve (for perfect blanket)
00:05:113 (4,2) - stack? (since u always stack pattern like this)
00:54:070 (1) - finish?
01:02:115 (1) - why finish here? (i didnt hear cymbal here)
01:07:478 (1) - ^
01:12:841 (1) - ^
01:14:852 (3) - inc curve
01:28:930 (1,2) - remove finish?

[Normal]
01:00:606 (2) - seems out of screen
01:07:478 (1) - i think cut the slider into 1 circle and 1/1 slider would be better,same as previous pattern (vocal emphatize)
01:19:545 (3) - ^
01:22:226 (1,1) - overlap
01:30:941 (3) - ctrl g? (it looks weird if you make it that)

[Hard]
Hy Hazu o/

00:38:651 (3,1) - make it little bit further (seems overlap for me)
00:47:361 (1) - ctrl j?
00:52:729 (1) - make it curve (i think curve would be better)

GL ~

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2016-07-24T02:04:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Irohas

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Irohas 2016-07-23T10:58:53+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hey ~
just a modder passing by ~
no lol xd i came here because AKFG :3

[Normal]
01:00:606 (2) - seems out of screen okay
01:07:478 (1) - i think cut the slider into 1 circle and 1/1 slider would be better,same as previous pattern (vocal emphatize) prefer follow drums instead of vocal since they're a loud sound to emphasis
01:19:545 (3) - ^ ^
01:22:226 (1,1) - overlap okay
01:30:941 (3) - ctrl g? (it looks weird if you make it that) seems good to me imo xd

GL ~

Thank you !

Hazu-

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Hazu- 2016-07-23T20:18:16+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hey ~
just a modder passing by ~
no lol xd i came here because AKFG :3

[Hard]
Hy Hazu o/ Hi >w<

00:38:651 (3,1) - make it little bit further (seems overlap for me) Fixed.
00:47:361 (1) - ctrl j? the idea is to point to the next hitobject
00:52:729 (1) - make it curve (i think curve would be better) Same.

GL ~

Thanks owo

Poi

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-NanoRIPE-

2,059 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-07-24T02:06:17+00:00

ehh about the title why you wrote "rewrite"? i think "Rewrite" is correct
Source : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rewrite_(song)

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-24T09:11:10+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
ehh about the title why you wrote "rewrite"? i think "Rewrite" is correct
Source : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rewrite_(song)

I've already had a confirmation from KwaN with that!

IamKwaN wrote:
Sure thing!

Unicode Title: リライト
Romanised Title: rewrite
Artist: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Source: 鋼の錬金術師

References:
http://puu.sh/pOMwM/bdf040a8e2.png from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/disco/archive/?KSCL-925
http://puu.sh/pOMEy/5f19508aee.jpg from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/eng/disco/KSCL-925.html

Good luck!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-07-25T13:05:15+00:00

Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]

Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.

[pkhg's Easy]
Check AiMod, there's a lot of unsnapped timing lines

00:01:381 - 00:11:437 - etc... sometimes, doing stuff like these can be considered as unrankable. i know some issue like this a year ago in teichan aka lavender's map. he used a lot of custom slidertick to replace it as clap/drum sound. you might want to reduce some stuff like these, oh yea. you do the slidertick stuff only after this part 00:03:437 - then you started again from 00:11:437 - which is inconsistent while 00:07:460 - has that drum sound too, so... yeah
00:04:109 (2,3) - Nazi, blanket. actually its not noticable at all but consider fixing it
00:20:198 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, you can see it from the difference between follow points on 00:19:862 - to 00:20:197 - .
00:21:204 (4,2) - avoidable overlap imo because they doesnt look tidy at all
00:59:433 (1) - just a suggestion, i believe the tail can be stacked with 00:57:422 (2) - 's tail so it'll look more tidy
01:10:159 (1) - i believe its posibble to cover up the red node edge here by adjusting those curves
01:14:852 (3,1) - is this intended to be like this? not blanketed?

Pretty cool diff. tho i still dont understand why are you doing those slidertick stuff its rare nowadays that people use it

[Normal]

00:09:471 (3) - maybe you can move this to 260|237 so it will create a nice triangular pattern with 00:08:465 (1,2) -
00:18:856 (3,1) - nazi, blanket
00:21:370 (2,3) - the stack you made here caused the spacing inconsistent from 00:20:532 (1) - to 00:21:370 (2,3) - . probably manually move them would help or moving it too 371|302 can cover up the issue oh actually, there's a few objects in this diff that has the same issue, consider to fix them
00:23:884 (2,3,1) - same thing like above
00:44:014 (2,1) - nazi, the blanket is a bit off lol
00:59:433 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing
01:00:774 (1) - personally, i didnt like most design of this kind of slider. perhaps you can change them into a wave one would help
01:00:774 (1,2,1) - is the inconsistent spacing here intentional?
01:05:802 (3,1) - avoidable overlap with 01:06:137 (1) - . i do adjust 01:06:137 (1) - this a bit so it both tails wont be overlapped
01:07:478 (1) - is the last red node is intended? it seems necessary to me...
01:08:483 (2,1) - blanket xd
01:09:824 (4,3,1) - avoidable overlap too imo..
01:17:366 (2,3) - same issue with those stack stuff. but this should be moved to 345|213 so (2) wont touched with (1)'s tail
01:19:545 (3) - hmm just a warning. sometimes, wiggle sliders aren't allowed to use due to their slider design that can slower the sliderspeed. consider to change this into something more smoother
01:30:941 (2,1) - ah... should be a 1.40x imo so the emphasize here won't be break

Its rare to see spaced 1/2 sliders in Normal, thats so unique!

[Hazu's Hard]

00:21:035 (2,3,4,5) - ok jumps on intro isnt comfortable to play. you might want to replace 00:21:203 (4) - with a 1/2 slider instead and remove 00:21:370 -
00:25:895 (1) - the wave could be better imo
00:33:772 (1) - same thing
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you reduce the spacing on 00:58:260 (2,3,4) - ? this is still a hard diff, no need to make jumps with spacing like that xd
01:09:908 - i believe this 1/4 tick can be mapped. you should consider to change the whole part of 01:09:824 - to 01:10:075 - into a 1/4 repeated sliders
SPOILER

Pretty nice diff tho i still wanted you to reduce the big jumps there keep up the good work~

[Insane]

00:52:562 (5,1) - can you try a different angle from (5)>(1)? i tested it and the jumps plays weird and a bit confusing since most of the jumps in this diff are moving to leftwards if you understand what i mean
00:55:244 (5,1) - this too, but this leftwards plays different. you suddenly have to move your cursor into upwards which is weird. consider to change the angle of this jump too

actually... i didnt found any issue on this diff LOL i mod insanes and upper based on my playing skill so.. pardon if its not helpful at all ><

[Rewrite]
Can you use another diffname rather using the song title as diffname? xd There's a 3 Choice. Dignity, Fantasy or Freedom. everything is taken from the lyric but for personal. i'd pick Dignity as Diffname because it sounds cool

00:10:979 (6) - can you ctrl+g this? i'd recommend you to ctrl+g tho. current cursor movement is weird, sometimes kicksliders to kicksliders usually have jump between it, so why dont you make it a jump? so there'll be a better emphasize to on 00:10:979 (6,1) -
00:17:180 (3,4) - ctrl+g manually? i find it plays better when you ctrl+g them manually means ctrl+g them one by one. it will plays like this which is a lot better and can made a better emphasize too for 00:17:515 (4,1) -
SPOILER
00:37:460 (3,4) - please, put a jump gap there :c i mean, put a jump so players can play it more fun. uh, a bit hard to explain lol. most mappers mostly put jumps when there's a sliderkick > streams, but the jump isnt that big. you can made the jump looks standard, on your own. so consider to put a little jump there
01:04:462 (6) - you may want to move this to 120|233 so there'll be a jump that can make player's cursor movement to downwards instead rightwards
01:09:908 - ahhh this should be mapped :c its the highest diff anyway ;c
01:32:786 (1,2) - intended blanket? or it shouldnt be like that

Nice jumpy diff!

[]
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-25T15:32:08+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]
Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.
[Normal]
00:09:471 (3) - maybe you can move this to 260|237 so it will create a nice triangular pattern with 00:08:465 (1,2) - good eye!
00:18:856 (3,1) - nazi, blanket okay
00:21:370 (2,3) - the stack you made here caused the spacing inconsistent from 00:20:532 (1) - to 00:21:370 (2,3) - . probably manually move them would help or moving it too 371|302 can cover up the issue oh actually, there's a few objects in this diff that has the same issue, consider to fix them because of DS D: but yeah fixed
00:23:884 (2,3,1) - same thing like above okay
00:44:014 (2,1) - nazi, the blanket is a bit off lol fixed
00:59:433 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing oops
01:00:774 (1) - personally, i didnt like most design of this kind of slider. perhaps you can change them into a wave one would help okay removed all of these
01:00:774 (1,2,1) - is the inconsistent spacing here intentional? already fixed when I applied ^
01:05:802 (3,1) - avoidable overlap with 01:06:137 (1) - . i do adjust 01:06:137 (1) - this a bit so it both tails wont be overlapped overlap here looks cool imo
01:07:478 (1) - is the last red node is intended? it seems necessary to me... fixed
01:08:483 (2,1) - blanket xd okay
01:09:824 (4,3,1) - avoidable overlap too imo.. we don't see it when playing
01:17:366 (2,3) - same issue with those stack stuff. but this should be moved to 345|213 so (2) wont touched with (1)'s tail okay okay applied this
01:19:545 (3) - hmm just a warning. sometimes, wiggle sliders aren't allowed to use due to their slider design that can slower the sliderspeed. consider to change this into something more smoother okay changed it D:
01:30:941 (2,1) - ah... should be a 1.40x imo so the emphasize here won't be break okay fixed!

Its rare to see spaced 1/2 sliders in Normal, thats so unique! Yes, I know but it looks cool to me
[Insane]
00:52:562 (5,1) - can you try a different angle from (5)>(1)? i tested it and the jumps plays weird and a bit confusing since most of the jumps in this diff are moving to leftwards if you understand what i mean Maybe but, actually I don't really know how to make this differently as my main pattern is the star, but I think it's not really bad to play, but sure I'll keep in mind this to try making this differently D:
00:55:244 (5,1) - this too, but this leftwards plays different. you suddenly have to move your cursor into upwards which is weird. consider to change the angle of this jump too I think change of direction would show more emphasis imo

actually... i didnt found any issue on this diff LOL i mod insanes and upper based on my playing skill so.. pardon if its not helpful at all >< Don't worry, It was really helpful!
[Rewrite]
Can you use another diffname rather using the song title as diffname? xd There's a 3 Choice. Dignity, Fantasy or Freedom. everything is taken from the lyric but for personal. i'd pick Dignity as Diffname because it sounds cool Hmm yeah maybe, okay I'll try!
00:10:979 (6) - can you ctrl+g this? i'd recommend you to ctrl+g tho. current cursor movement is weird, sometimes kicksliders to kicksliders usually have jump between it, so why dont you make it a jump? so there'll be a better emphasize to on 00:10:979 (6,1) - okay okay sure, why not
00:17:180 (3,4) - ctrl+g manually? i find it plays better when you ctrl+g them manually means ctrl+g them one by one. it will plays like this which is a lot better and can made a better emphasize too for 00:17:515 (4,1) -
SPOILER
ooh yes it'll surely looks better, okay!
00:37:460 (3,4) - please, put a jump gap there :c i mean, put a jump so players can play it more fun. uh, a bit hard to explain lol. most mappers mostly put jumps when there's a sliderkick > streams, but the jump isnt that big. you can made the jump looks standard, on your own. so consider to put a little jump there okay increased a bit spacing and moved it a bit down, I think it'll play well now !
01:04:462 (6) - you may want to move this to 120|233 so there'll be a jump that can make player's cursor movement to downwards instead rightwards okay fixed this
01:09:908 - ahhh this should be mapped :c its the highest diff anyway ;c oops totally forgot, nice D:
01:32:786 (1,2) - intended blanket? or it shouldnt be like that yes a bad blanket...

Nice jumpy diff! Thank you
[]
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand! I understood everything, and thank you your mod was helpful !
Good Luck!

Thanks !

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-25T21:11:30+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[Hazu's Hard]
00:21:035 (2,3,4,5) - ok jumps on intro isnt comfortable to play. you might want to replace 00:21:203 (4) - with a 1/2 slider instead and remove 00:21:370 -
00:25:895 (1) - the wave could be better imo
00:33:772 (1) - same thing
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you reduce the spacing on 00:58:260 (2,3,4) - ? this is still a hard diff, no need to make jumps with spacing like that xd
01:09:908 - i believe this 1/4 tick can be mapped. you should consider to change the whole part of 01:09:824 - to 01:10:075 - into a 1/4 repeated sliders
SPOILER

Pretty nice diff tho i still wanted you to reduce the big jumps there keep up the good work~ Thanks ;w;
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

No complaints, all fixed, Thanks~

Poi

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2016-07-27T18:47:56+00:00

Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3

[General]

idk but why does pkhg's diff only have a different bg? maybe for hazu too? no problem though but i wanted to mention it xd
maybe low hp of insane to 6? so it scales like 5-6-7 in the hardest diffs

[Dignidad]
00:03:772 (3,4,5) - The actual transition from 4 to 5 and then from 5 to 6 seems to be a bit unnatural to follow, I guess it'd be better if you make some horizontal movements so it flows better imo. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/qgpUH/645dd83f6d.jpg
00:04:275 (5) - NC here? and also 00:05:784 (3) - make the NC here since the downbeat is more intuitive for a nc i guess.
00:10:812 (5,6,1) - This transition over here I really don't like it... it feels too crowded with those overlaps and low distance from each other sliders. I would suggest to make the 2nd stream more curvish and maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/qgqtf/fc820bca2e.jpg ? I think the pattern would play smoother~ Btw... if you do so, maybe try this linear flow for 00:10:141 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/qgqBI/cc6750db7b.jpg The actual one seems to be a bad blanket I guess which is not bad but idk xd
00:13:828 (1,3) - idk if you care about blankets, but maybe fix that?
00:25:895 (1,3) - ^
00:29:918 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is some good stuff, however I find it pretty boring and monotonous to play because you use it 5 times incluiding 00:29:247 (3) - Also I'd suggest to make 00:30:588 (3) - into 2 circles because there are two downbeats that would be better if you make them clickable.
Therefore I'd suggest something like this http://puu.sh/qgrQ7/97df9b0f5f.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgrRK/7064a7f6ea.jpg ?
00:37:460 (3) - make it a bit curvish so it flows better to the stream?
00:48:708 (1) - delete the last grey node? just a detail xd
00:48:708 (1,2,3) - The flow here feels a bit awkward in my opinion, mainly because 00:48:708 (1) - doesn't follow the curvature of the stream and also because of 00:49:043 (2,3) - this jump that feels too forced i guess. Maybe you can build a better flow with a pattern like http://puu.sh/qgsjo/d2bcfae50a.jpg ?
00:58:261 (2,3) - Add a bit more distance here to make the jumps more consistent? Maybe a symetrical star would work for this.
00:59:099 (1,1) - Maybe http://puu.sh/qgsr5/0301355104.jpg for better flow?
01:19:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For the first stream I think you can curve it a bit so the flow is smoother. Also I don't really like this overlap of both streams. I guess i'd suggest you something like this: http://puu.sh/qgsOr/a1ec74e8e7.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgsRQ/ee28572d20.jpg (where 01:21:556 (3,5) - is a blanket)
01:33:959 (5,6,1) - why the distance? would be better if you stack them with 0,5x I guess~
01:34:797 (1,2) - idk but since the intensity of the music here is the same for 01:35:300 (3,4) - this, i'd suggest to add some more distance for 01:34:797 (1,2) - maybe.
01:35:300 (1) - maybe NC?

[Insane]
00:23:884 (3,4) - this stack seems to be the only one in all this section so it's a bit weird when playing, consider unstack.
00:53:400 (3,4,3,4) - These double stack are totally fine.. it's just that you could've made them more consistent troughout the section. e.g 00:53:400 (3,4) - these is cool stuf because both are strong beats, however 00:54:909 (3,4) - here is not the case, where 00:55:075 - gives less emphasis for a stack. Just my opinion btw~
The rest seems to be ok, nice diff

[Hazu]
Hola... de nuevo xdd
00:09:136 (3,4) - Quizás hacer que tengan el mismo "shape"? no sé como decirlo en español xd forma?
00:39:321 (1,4) - La verdad el único "problema" que veo a primera vista es este overlap, en donde llega a ser muy notorio mientras se juega y se ve un poquito mal xd
00:16:426 - 00:21:789 - 00:27:152 - 00:43:260 - 00:53:986 - Bueno como te podrás fijar algunas de esas partes tienen sliders 3/4 y otras no, por lo que te sugiero que seas consistente con eso. Personalmente me gustaría que fueran todos 3/4.
00:56:081 (3,4) - blanket?
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - No sé si quieres mantener la distancia todo el rato igual, pero aquí podrías agregar un poquito más de distancia para simular la fuerte intensidad de la canción~ aunque sea una diff de bajo sr, un poquito no haría mal o si? 1,7x tal vez? xd
Anyway~ buena diff como siempre

[Normal]
01:07:478 (1) - nice

[pkhg]
omg those bookmarks and green lines
01:10:159 (1) - Quizás podrías mover el tick rojo un poquito más a la izquierda para que no se vea tan recta esa parte? o no sé pero dejarlo menos recto porque creo que en el blanket se nota un poquito xd 01:08:818 (3,1) -

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit

Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-27T20:22:09+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3 what a surprise : o

[General]
idk but why does pkhg's diff only have a different bg? maybe for hazu too? no problem though but i wanted to mention it xd it was my previous BG and pkhg wanna keep this
maybe low hp of insane to 6? so it scales like 5-6-7 in the hardest diffs okay

[Dignidad] it means dignity maybe my spanish is too bad : (
00:03:772 (3,4,5) - The actual transition from 4 to 5 and then from 5 to 6 seems to be a bit unnatural to follow, I guess it'd be better if you make some horizontal movements so it flows better imo. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/qgpUH/645dd83f6d.jpg okay yeah it makes a really good pattern, fixed
00:04:275 (5) - NC here? and also 00:05:784 (3) - make the NC here since the downbeat is more intuitive for a nc i guess. I think it's more logical to put a NC at 00:05:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - as they're strong and loud sounds who start here and also at 00:05:616 (1,2,3) -
00:10:812 (5,6,1) - This transition over here I really don't like it... it feels too crowded with those overlaps and low distance from each other sliders. I would suggest to make the 2nd stream more curvish and maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/qgqtf/fc820bca2e.jpg ? I think the pattern would play smoother~ Btw... if you do so, maybe try this linear flow for 00:10:141 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/qgqBI/cc6750db7b.jpg The actual one seems to be a bad blanket I guess which is not bad but idk xd hmm.. I think It will make a weird movement for the player imo, he expects to a circular movement with this curves slider imo
00:13:828 (1,3) - idk if you care about blankets, but maybe fix that? blanket is shiet but fixed!
00:25:895 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:29:918 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is some good stuff, however I find it pretty boring and monotonous to play because you use it 5 times incluiding 00:29:247 (3) - Also I'd suggest to make 00:30:588 (3) - into 2 circles because there are two downbeats that would be better if you make them clickable.
Therefore I'd suggest something like this http://puu.sh/qgrQ7/97df9b0f5f.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgrRK/7064a7f6ea.jpg ? actually, I know you're right for this point, but I don't really know how to make this, although your pattern is well, but it will bother the player if I change suddenly this imo but I'll surely keep in mind this to try to make it differently
00:37:460 (3) - make it a bit curvish so it flows better to the stream? yeah sure, sure
00:48:708 (1) - delete the last grey node? just a detail xd made the last two closer D:
00:48:708 (1,2,3) - The flow here feels a bit awkward in my opinion, mainly because 00:48:708 (1) - doesn't follow the curvature of the stream and also because of 00:49:043 (2,3) - this jump that feels too forced i guess. Maybe you can build a better flow with a pattern like http://puu.sh/qgsjo/d2bcfae50a.jpg ? hmm yes! sure!
00:58:261 (2,3) - Add a bit more distance here to make the jumps more consistent? Maybe a symetrical star would work for this. sure, improved
00:59:099 (1,1) - Maybe http://puu.sh/qgsr5/0301355104.jpg for better flow? I wanted to make a kind of "linear flow"
01:19:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For the first stream I think you can curve it a bit so the flow is smoother. Also I don't really like this overlap of both streams. I guess i'd suggest you something like this: http://puu.sh/qgsOr/a1ec74e8e7.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgsRQ/ee28572d20.jpg (where 01:21:556 (3,5) - is a blanket) It looks cool, I'll try this ! But I think overlap is not really bad so I'll only keep this D:
01:33:959 (5,6,1) - why the distance? would be better if you stack them with 0,5x I guess~ it's fine imo D:
01:34:797 (1,2) - idk but since the intensity of the music here is the same for 01:35:300 (3,4) - this, i'd suggest to add some more distance for 01:34:797 (1,2) - maybe. consistency with 01:32:115 (1,2) - I tried to make nearly the same DS
01:35:300 (1) - maybe NC? sure

[Insane]
00:23:884 (3,4) - this stack seems to be the only one in all this section so it's a bit weird when playing, consider unstack. It's fine I think It'll bother not that much D:
00:53:400 (3,4,3,4) - These double stack are totally fine.. it's just that you could've made them more consistent troughout the section. e.g 00:53:400 (3,4) - these is cool stuf because both are strong beats, however 00:54:909 (3,4) - here is not the case, where 00:55:075 - gives less emphasis for a stack. Just my opinion btw~ yes, totally, unstacked nice catch ; )
The rest seems to be ok, nice diff thank you o/

[Normal]
01:07:478 (1) - nice thanks c:

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!! don't worry and thank you for taking time to this shietty diff iYiyo and all other !

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit it helps me alot, one of the best mod i've received for a while !
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~ thank you

[]
Thanks !

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-30T17:49:25+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3

[Hazu]
Hola... de nuevo xdd asadsadsa estás en todos lados... ¿O yo estoy en todos? xD
00:09:136 (3,4) - Quizás hacer que tengan el mismo "shape"? no sé como decirlo en español xd forma? Fixed.
00:39:321 (1,4) - La verdad el único "problema" que veo a primera vista es este overlap, en donde llega a ser muy notorio mientras se juega y se ve un poquito mal xd Fixed.
00:16:426 - 00:21:789 - 00:27:152 - 00:43:260 - 00:53:986 - Bueno como te podrás fijar algunas de esas partes tienen sliders 3/4 y otras no, por lo que te sugiero que seas consistente con eso. Personalmente me gustaría que fueran todos 3/4. En realidad son diferentes sonidos, en los 2/4 no se escucha el platillo mientras que en los 3/4 se escucha un sonido de platillo extendido hasta el siguiente tick blanco, por eso son distintos, si surgen otras sugerencias respecto a esto lo cambiaré.
00:56:081 (3,4) - blanket? Es una copia del anterior con un giro de 90º.
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - No sé si quieres mantener la distancia todo el rato igual, pero aquí podrías agregar un poquito más de distancia para simular la fuerte intensidad de la canción~ aunque sea una diff de bajo sr, un poquito no haría mal o si? 1,7x tal vez? xd Antes tenían una distancia distinta, sin embargo surgieron muchas dudas respecto a esto, al final decidí dejarlo así xD
Anyway~ buena diff como siempre Gracias >w<

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

Gracias~

Poi

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pkhg

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Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-31T05:30:44+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]
Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.
[pkhg's Easy]
Check AiMod, there's a lot of unsnapped timing lines fixd
00:01:381 - 00:11:437 - etc... sometimes, doing stuff like these can be considered as unrankable. i know some issue like this a year ago in teichan aka lavender's map. he used a lot of custom slidertick to replace it as clap/drum sound. you might want to reduce some stuff like these, oh yea. you do the slidertick stuff only after this part 00:03:437 - then you started again from 00:11:437 - which is inconsistent while 00:07:460 - has that drum sound too, so... yeah isnt inconsistent, i just forgot it thanks xd
00:04:109 (2,3) - Nazi, blanket. actually its not noticable at all but consider fixing it too cuved sliders looks liek sht
00:20:198 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, you can see it from the difference between follow points on 00:19:862 - to 00:20:197 - . 0.02
00:21:204 (4,2) - avoidable overlap imo because they doesnt look tidy at all u cant see it while playing
00:59:433 (1) - just a suggestion, i believe the tail can be stacked with 00:57:422 (2) - 's tail so it'll look more tidy triangles http://puu.sh/qkvn9/14a4617ee0.jpg
01:10:159 (1) - i believe its posibble to cover up the red node edge here by adjusting those curves too hard
01:14:852 (3,1) - is this intended to be like this? not blanketed? ya

Pretty cool diff. tho i still dont understand why are you doing those slidertick stuff its rare nowadays that people use it cuz sounds dumb without them
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

iYiyo wrote:
[pkhg]
omg those bookmarks and green lines xd
[*]01:10:159 (1) - Quizás podrías mover el tick rojo un poquito más a la izquierda para que no se vea tan recta esa parte? o no sé pero dejarlo menos recto porque creo que en el blanket se nota un poquito xd 01:08:818 (3,1) - hice lo que pude [/list][/notice]

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

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Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-10-15T14:51:36+00:00

[pkhg]

00:08:465 - to 00:11:147 - are the clap sound on this section intentional or not ? feel weird with the song imo
00:59:433 (1,2) - small spacing error
01:14:852 (3,1) - uhh make blanket looks better ? lol

[normal]

00:01:426 (3,1) - ending (3) sliderend on emphasized redtick make rhythm transition there awkward imo , yo can try this
SPOILER
00:47:366 (1,2) -00:48:371 (3,1) - spacing error
01:14:182 (4) - forget to nc ?
01:19:545 (3) - nc to stay consistent with nc pattern ( you nc every downbeat ) lol ?

not really like how you make the overall so big like that for normal , i think it make spread from easy to normal large , it would be better to make spread more balance imo so can you do something with like 99% of the spacing here like lower them ?

[hazu]

00:40:662 (1,2) - kinda unexpected to see you use jumps here when you didn't do it here 00:39:321 (1,2) - 00:37:981 (1,2) - and i don't think the jumps there work very well there so maybe don't jumps there , i think the downbeat would be the better choice for jumps

try to add some jumps in this diff to make the spread from hard to insane better ? most of the downbeat is a good choice for jumps tho

[insane]

00:13:158 (3,4) - why the sudden spacing decrease on this , that make this plays pretty awkward imo , try move 00:13:493 (4) - to around x208 y248
00:19:191 (1,2) - mm why is this spaced different from 00:16:510 (1,2) - 00:17:851 (1,2) - which suppose to sound the same , imo make the spacing somehow consistent to each other would make thing play more smooth
00:24:555 (1,2) - similiar to the above this is low spacing but 00:23:214 (1,2) - 00:21:873 (1,2) - high spacing
00:32:096 (3,4,5) - i think the curve on this stream can be improved a bit , this looks better i think lol idk
SPOILER
00:48:661 - what this timing line snap to ?
01:03:456 (1,2) - sound similiar to 01:00:775 (1,2) - but why different spacing ?
01:18:540 (2,3) - a bit weird to stop using jumps for emphasis cymbal here i think would flow better if you keep continue to jumps to emphasis cymbal
00:45:356 (3,4) - would be better if the spacing here is a bit bigger to emphasis the snare on (4) better imo , try to move (4) to around x264 y276
01:22:898 (3,4) - aaa no symmetry ? I think that would make this looks better

my main concern is some inconsistent in spacing for some notes after the slider , try to recheck them and make them consistent and correlate with the song

[diginity]

00:34:778 (4,5) - i find that this should have higher spacing than 00:34:610 (3,4) - cus the snare there sound more impact than the kick imo , try move (4) to around x368 y224 ?
01:19:545 (1,2,3,4) - the curve feel off here for some reason
01:20:718 (5,6,1) - same as above
01:33:959 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm play a bit awkward for me , was expect it to be like 01:31:277 (6,1,2) - but it's not , maybe try to make the rhythm there consistent to make it play better ? i don't think 1/4 there is need to be map lol

same as insane about the spacing for some notes after the slider

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