]00:11:402 (1,2) - Blanket? It will match 00:18:460 (1,2,3) these blankets
00:24:460 (4,5) - stack on the same point
00:25:343 (7,1,2,3) - Try to do something here with a blanket, It would look better and maybe play better too
00:27:637 (6,7) - Change timing to this -
00:29:754 (3,4,5) - Do a triangle like this maybe
00:34:696 (2) - Move red point to the center of the slider
00:35:931 (5,6) - Parallel?
00:36:637 (7,8) - You can blanket this if you want to, it might look prettier
00:41:049 (3,4) - Make sure these sliders look the same (use copy + paste)
00:42:284 (6,1) - turn into long slider
00:50:225 (2,4) - stack
00:51:813 (4,5) - Maybe make it look more like
00:58:519 (7,2) - Stack
01:03:284 (9) - move red point to center of the slider
01:05:049 (7) - ctrl+h and move it back
01:09:637 (2,3,4,5) - Equal spacing
01:11:754 (4,3) - Stack if you want to
01:13:519 (1,2,3) - Equal spacing
01:13:519 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These all look different, copy and paste to make them all the same
01:21:990 (1,2,3,4) - Equal spacing
01:24:107 (4,5,6,1) - Make the jump bigger here, because the song is getting more intense
01:24:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
About the KiaiThe slider shapes are nice. You can blanket most of the circles in this whole section, I would remap this section so it looks better I guess... ?
You don't have to worry about flow on this section because it is a dubstep portion, it can be random.
Look at the last kiai on this map, and do what happened there, because that part was pretty nice.
01:47:754 (1,2,3) - also equal spacing here :3
02:18:813 (1,2,3) - stack in the same spot
02:20:578 (4,5) - ^
02:23:401 (6) - 2012 sliders :3 ... It's fine like this but maybe change it.. It doesn't look right to me :3
02:26:225 (6,8) - stack and make the distance 02:26:578 (8,9) bigger
02:35:049 (4,5,6) - Make it look like this
03:00:813 (1) - Maybe try to make the part before this kiai have bigger spacing, because this part is a lot harder than the rest of the map.
03:41:049 (3,5) - stack
03:46:696 (1,2) - Do this
03:47:401 (2,3) - then do this
03:59:225 (4,1,2) - stack
04:27:990 (1,2) - Fix blanket somehow...
04:34:696 (6,7,8) - When you play this, the 8 doesn't blanket the 6 because of the stacking. Try to move the 8 somewhere else so the blankets are consistent
04:38:225 (1,4) - You could probably blanket this
Overall :
- nice map, some of the jumps are inconsistent in spacing, I pointed out a few of those.
- Some sliders give the opportunity to blanket, so make sure to use those, especially on a pretty song like this.
- The jump section is a lot harder than the rest of the map (covered that). Try to make the non-kiai parts have bigger spacing around those kiais so it matches.