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SHO - Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village

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Topic Starter
Kite
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 7. März 2011 at 20:54:52

Artist: SHO
Title: Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village
Source: Touhou
Tags: keine kamishirasawa IN zun imperishable night divine beast metal arrange boss battle theme eiyashou sonic hispeed omega lepidopodus
BPM: 124
Filesize: 7747kb
Play Time: 04:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 1030 notes)
  2. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4,78 stars, 1419 notes)
Download: SHO - Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A Plain Asia arrange by the Circle Sonic Hispeed Omega.

Taiko Oni by lepidopodus

Enjoy!
Dragvon
Ninja Star!
H1ko
good map
Rucker
nice :)
Omega
I can't pass this D:

But it's generally fun until I can. I won't mod it, though. But have a star.
Aron
Fun map ^^
lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Oni lvl. 9 so it's pretty hard. I hope you like it...

Download: SHO - Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village (Kite) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Kite
Thanks a lot lepi
Kurai
/o/
Pheon
I wouldn't consider this to be an insanely hard taikomap, but I love it a lot!
However, in the middle section where it's calm (the piano playing), there's a bit of a break... About 8 beats or so, I don't know how many exactly. Maybe you could map for the left hand a bit over there?
Also, personally, I think the drumroll on 76.8% or so is kinda hard to hit.
.... Probably just a case of me being bad at them, I don't really like 1/4s followed by a drumroll without some sort of break ^^

Star anyhow, for mapping SHO and for it being Keine~
And for the taikomap being awesome.
Oh, and the regular map, too. : D
Topic Starter
Kite
Thanks for the irc suggestions Pheon.
Increased HP drain by 1.
Dragvon
Hitsound fullcheck
So yeah, i've gave a quick look on your map and here's what i've found:

Suggestions,Warnings and Errors~
Oh yeah, i also like to "split" your song in parts, mostly because of normal/soft and kiai changes.

<Insane>

INTRO
00:00:099 (1,3,1,3) - I would move those Whistles from the 3th to the 2nd note of the slider.
00:08:809 (4) -Replace Finish with Claps. Imo it sounds better.
00:10:745 (4) and 00:12:680 (3) - ^
00:14:132 (6) - Remove Whistles in the SECOND note and replace Finish with Claps
00:15:583 (3,3) - Try adding Whistles in the SECOND note (keep in first), and replace the one in the THIRD note with Claps (W;W;C) I likle this effect 8D
00:22:358 (1) - Whistle in the second note also.
00:19:938 (3) - Claps in the last note. (Remove Finish)
00:24:293 (5,6) - Claps-only here :3

Comments: Okay no errors so far, just some suggestions xD! Nice flow~

PART 1
00:53:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Hmm call me a bitch but... i find this part.. "weird". Try this:

Explaining: I've added a note in 00:53:40 and in 00:53:656. Also, removed 00:54:082 (3). I think it sounds better :3
01:32:350 (2) - Claps here sound nice :3

Commetns: Fine ^^

PART 2 - FIRST KIAI

Comments: Nothing caught my attention here. There is a whistle flood here, but i think it's pretty nice.

PART 3
02:51:141 (1,1,1) -Whistles here~ and remove that ugly Finish from 02:52:835 (4) -
03:00:819 (4,5) - Replae Finishs with whistles and add another one in the 1st note of (5)

Comments: Fine.

PART 4 + SECOND KIAI

Comments: ,,/

PART 5
04:07:074 (2,5) and all following notes following this pattern -I would set Normal ITS's for these single notes. Check my alternative diff for more info here
04:15:256 (2) - ^ If you choose my suggestion, this would need a whistle instead of a Finish

Comments: You should at leat check that suggestion 8D

ENDING

Comments: Just, perfect <3

Diff with my suggestions:
Download: SHO - Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village (Kite) [Insane-Alternative Hitsounds].osu
Topic Starter
Kite
Looking good, I will thoroughly check it out once I find the time.
Thanks!

Edit: Finally checked it, the hitsounds are way better at the parts you mentioned, thanks a lot. :3
Hyguys
Insaneeee~
What about adding another combo colour? (214,226,215 , aka : http://puu.sh/10WE)
00:27:192 Ha end this spinner here? (00:31:789 , red tick)
00:44:968 Clap
01:07:468 Align like this? http://puu.sh/10WL
01:19:911 (8,9,10,11,12) 1 Grid up :<
03:22:757 (Those crazy sliders) Stack those sliders? like that http://puu.sh/10WR
03:45:598 1 grid right
04:30:769 http://puu.sh/10X1 otl
gonna go fast star 3;
Topic Starter
Kite

Hyguys wrote:

Insaneeee~
What about adding another combo colour? (214,226,215 , aka : http://puu.sh/10WE) Nah, but thanks.
00:27:192 Ha end this spinner here? (00:31:789 , red tick) Keeping it the way it is~
00:44:968 Clap Clap sounds weird, but added a Whistle instead
01:07:468 Align like this? http://puu.sh/10WL Would be an unexpected random and big jump if I did that
01:19:911 (8,9,10,11,12) 1 Grid up :< Ah, this was actually a spacing issue :P Thanks
03:22:757 (Those crazy sliders) Stack those sliders? like that http://puu.sh/10WR Done!
03:45:598 1 grid right Done
04:30:769 http://puu.sh/10X1 otl Looks fine as it is now, I dislike linear type
Thanks a lot for the mod
winber1
Insane

00:49:230(4) - i would move this note 1/2 later, but it's fine.
00:54:684(5) - ^
01:03:377(4) - for some reason, i kind of like having the stream of 5 start here instead of at 01:03:548
01:05:252(1) - remove combo?
01:52:468(3) - new combo?
02:47:259(1) - remove custom finish and add it onto 02:47:743.
03:23:098(1,2,3,4) - sounds a lot better if the sliders are 1/1 in length, not 5/4, imo. But if u do change it, kinda messes up the shapes :/

Cool map !


Star~~
Topic Starter
Kite

winber1 wrote:

Insane
01:05:252(1) - remove combo?
02:47:259(1) - remove custom finish and add it onto 02:47:743.
Fixed those, thanks!
ziin
[insane]
00:59:968 - reset metronome
01:02:525 (1) - new combo here is inconsistent with later patterns
01:45:309 (1,1) - worth looking at to see if you really need new combos here
01:44:968 (4,3) - about ^ I think they should go here, since you're doing a 2 measure, 1 measure, 1 measure pattern. and you did it that way later
01:50:252 (1,2) - 01:50:423 - I would want to start the new combo here, so you'd have to split up 1 into circles.
02:39:517 - reset metronome/move uninherited here

pretty good. It's not going to be one of my favorites, since I like lots of sliders, but you have to make a map that you enjoy first and foremost, then worry about what others think.
Topic Starter
Kite

ziin wrote:

[insane]
00:59:968 - reset metronome Done
01:02:525 (1) - new combo here is inconsistent with later patterns Fixed
01:45:309 (1,1) - worth looking at to see if you really need new combos here Hm, I made new combos to signify spacing change, I'll see if I'll change
01:44:968 (4,3) - about ^ I think they should go here, since you're doing a 2 measure, 1 measure, 1 measure pattern. and you did it that way later
01:50:252 (1,2) - 01:50:423 - I would want to start the new combo here, so you'd have to split up 1 into circles.It's fine the way it is imo
02:39:517 - reset metronome/move uninherited here Can't, I want to keep the 0,5x bpm slow down and I cant put green on red section =/
Thanks for the mod ziin, I get what you mean.. but it's more like I make the maps for others and not just for myself :P
IMO there are plenty sliders, I just didn't use that many in the streamy bits because it fits more to the song~
Lesjuh
Remove .osb file!

Insane
01:21:702 (14) - Unsnapped
02:17:014 (9) - Mute the slider's end or shorten it by 1/4. Sounds/looks better.
03:22:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dislike this. Why don't you end the sliders on a red tick and put some space between them. It sounds quite off now.

Last two are just suggestions. Good work on this!
Topic Starter
Kite
Done done done and done.
Thanks a lot~
Mafiamaster
A lot of unsnapped objects in the Taiko difficulty.

Other difficulty is great.
Topic Starter
Kite
No idea how that happened! Fixed all; thanks!
Mafiamaster
Ok then, bubble #1.
Doomsday
[Insane]

03:16:195 (2) - Isn't this slider supposed to be on the white tick? it starts 1/4 earlier than it should, and is 1/4 longer. Sounds like you misplaced it.

Everything else looks A OK to me, but yeah, that's an issue. I'd pop for this normally, but I won't. I'll get your word on it first. I'll pop if someone else bubbles this in the meantime though.
Topic Starter
Kite
I mapped it to the guitar; but I guess its overplayed by everything else and isnt that good to hear.
I fixed it by placing 1/2s

Thanks!
Doomsday
Alrighty then. Since it was an opinionated fix, Approval bubble #1!
Mafiamaster
Ok then, bubble #2.
lepidopodus
Barlines are messed up in Taiko map, 00:59:968~02:38:831, by 2 beat & 02:39:518~03:06:614, by 1 beat. Seems it was moved when resetting timing (I set uninheritted section to do that).

Can it be fixed before the mapset got ranked? Seems this one got 2nd bubble already, but it can be fixed easily by setting an uninheritted section in certain place(59,968 & 159,518). (It won't change actual timing.)

EDIT: Ask 3rd BAT before updating this.

Download: SHO - Plain Asia ~ Guardian of the Village (Kite) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Andrea
Little IRC Modding.

- Adjusted Audio Lead-In to 2000 on both difficulties.
- Fixed what lepidopodus said.

Approved~
Keksi
gratz
Mafiamaster
Nice!!
Cardivia
a very good map! go go go!
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