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Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]

This is a pretty good beatmap; I like the way you used the slidertick sound to carry out the beat. The only issue I could have with this is the BG, r.e. the Pantieshot.

Official Ranking Guidelines wrote:

No obscene imagery in background image/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity or near-nudity. Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.
This could be considered near nudity at a stretch; keep that in mind and be prepared to make Easy and Normal the same BG as Hard/Insane.

[Normal]

Same thing applies here with the BG

01:06:623 (4) - Maybe reshape like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136167
01:49:591 (3) - Move this slider's middle tick closer to the center of the slider so that the curve is more rounded/pretty.

Other than that, all good here.

[Hard]

I recommend using this BG with all difficulties, to be honest. At least everything's covered =3

00:06:623 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How does this even keep the same flow as the preceeding and next combos? Don't place pointless jumps here and continue the usual flow, please.
00:17:075 (3) - move this up one grid level so that the spacing stays consistent.

Other than that, nothing to see here.

[Insane]

00:44:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe respace these out like this, so the stream flows better, instead of being linear and boring. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136179
00:45:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same here, just vertical flipped.
01:13:010 (15,15) - Move the first one here down one grid, and the 2nd one up one grid; makes the stream more circular and pretty.


Other than that, no glaring issues that I can see. The Insane feels like it needs some refining, but other than that, it's a solid enough mapset. nice job.
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Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]

This is a pretty good beatmap; I like the way you used the slidertick sound to carry out the beat. The only issue I could have with this is the BG, r.e. the Pantieshot.

Official Ranking Guidelines wrote:

No obscene imagery in background image/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity or near-nudity. Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.
This could be considered near nudity at a stretch; keep that in mind and be prepared to make Easy and Normal the same BG as Hard/Insane.

[Normal]

Same thing applies here with the BG

01:06:623 (4) - Maybe reshape like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136167
01:49:591 (3) - Move this slider's middle tick closer to the center of the slider so that the curve is more rounded/pretty.

Other than that, all good here.

[Hard]

I recommend using this BG with all difficulties, to be honest. At least everything's covered =3

00:06:623 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How does this even keep the same flow as the preceeding and next combos? Don't place pointless jumps here and continue the usual flow, please.
00:17:075 (3) - move this up one grid level so that the spacing stays consistent.

Other than that, nothing to see here.

[Insane]

00:44:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe respace these out like this, so the stream flows better, instead of being linear and boring. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136179
00:45:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same here, just vertical flipped.
01:13:010 (15,15) - Move the first one here down one grid, and the 2nd one up one grid; makes the stream more circular and pretty.


Other than that, no glaring issues that I can see. The Insane feels like it needs some refining, but other than that, it's a solid enough mapset. nice job.
all fixed,thx a lot :)
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EZ

00:00:430 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 音效可以再轻一点

HARD

02:19:010 (6) - 这个是故意放歪的吗?


没啥大问题
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xinhe wrote:

EZ

00:00:430 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 音效可以再轻一点

HARD

02:19:010 (6) - 这个是故意放歪的吗?


没啥大问题
都改了~
thx :)
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Hi there

[All diffculties]
  1. 0% volume is unrankable according to new ranking rules, please use at least 5%


[Easy]
  1. 01:36:429 (2) - Consider adding a finish?
  2. 02:26:365 (1) - Add clap?


[Normal]
  1. 01:36:430 (3) - Add finish?


[Hard]
  1. 01:36:429 (2) - Add finish
  2. 02:01:204 (1) - Add finish


[Insane]
  1. 01:36:430 (4) - Add finish
  2. 01:48:139 (8) - Remove clap, add clap to 9
  3. 02:01:204 (1) - Add finish
  4. 02:07:397 (1) - ^
  5. 02:19:784 (1) - ^[/[/list]


nice map
when you done changes, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game for a recheck
posted

Breeze wrote:

•01:48:139 (8) - Remove clap, add clap to 9
hmm... i still think add clap here is OK~
others are all fixed,thx :)
posted
OK, then. good enough for a bubble now
good luck
it says my message is too short D:
posted
来声援mjw萌妹子

Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
posted
:roll:
nanikore


原来现在字数还有最低限制了啊
posted
I dont have much problems with the maps themselves but i'd suggest you take a bit more care with your sliders for example
[Easy] 00:00:430 (1) - Would look a lot better if you try to align the center anchor with the slider tick like this: http://puu.sh/6rRU
This is just an example of what could be improved in your sliders so they dont look like you just put them there to get them out of the way, just my thoughts map's are fine themselves.

I wish you followed the music a bit better like [Hard] 00:36:817 (5) - Dont see why use a slider when everything in the song is moving at a nice steady rythm? there's no held note here at all.

And Normal could use some more constant rythms since for example 01:38:946 (1,2,3) - The sudden switch from a slider on red ticks to a slider on white ticks, then another slider on white ticks can be quite confusing specially since there's a vocal on 01:40:107, which can easily be fixed by adding a note in there or the player might end up hitting 01:40:300 (3) too early.

Just my thoughts let me know what you think and i'll recheck this

Edit: Ok i got no idea what you changed, although some of the map does play different i still wish you spent more time on your sliders but i guess that's not your intention Rebubbled~
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Easy和 Normal 有一段用原本的soft hitsound,在歌曲平緩的地方會聽到比較明顯的sliderslide,而且和Hard及Insane的音效不一樣,我是覺得改成沒有sliderslide的custom hitsound會好一點.
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this one is close to rank I think XD .
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abalee wrote:

Easy和 Normal 有一段用原本的soft hitsound,在歌曲平緩的地方會聽到比較明顯的sliderslide,而且和Hard及Insane的音效不一樣,我是覺得改成沒有sliderslide的custom hitsound會好一點. 加了:3 fixed(use sliderslide from 00:49:978 to 01:36:429 in easy and normal
thanks~
posted
是不是應該丟回一個泡會保險一點.....
不過貌似應該心也行得通的樣子...
fixed and ranked.
posted
Oh hey, finally ranked, Congrats!
posted
恭喜阿!!~~~~~~~~~

Congrats~ :D:D:D
posted
水货rank歌曲了 >_> 前来道喜
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