Hi mjw5150
sorry for the late reply m(_ _)m
[General]- I'm looking on google and most of the result used Stellula Eques ~Shokuzai no
Himekishi~ not Himeknight. Use
this guide to change the source of your map
- Somehow I don't get the Insane diff even after re-DL it. I take the osu file from the web to mod it. Can you try upload it again to see if there's something wrong or it's just me
- 00:12:042 for this timing section one every diff it has 60% volume but it is still too quite. Increase it to 75% or 80%
- For the kiai section I suggest to use 100% volume
[Easy]- On hard diff you used whistle on each note in the beginning of stanza so I suggest you to add whistle in the notes at the beginning of the map
- You're using 55% volume timing section on almost every note with finish. It making the finish sounds too low imo.
- Just remove the timing sections that u used to silent the slider tick. The slider ticks don't sound bad either
00:53:075 (1) - The slider path is overlapped by 00:51:526 (3). This doesn't look good, try moving this slider down a little more so it won't touch the previous slider
02:24:817 (1) - add clap to continue the clap pattern from before?
[Normal]- Same as above, I suggest to add whistle on the notes at the beginning of the map
00:23:655 (1) - Try using max volume here too. The song's volume really over power the soft hitsound here
01:20:171 (1) - add finish at the end
00:58:881 (1) - add whistle at the start to continue your previous pattern?
01:00:429 (3) - ^
01:31:591 (3) - add whistle at the end?
01:33:333 (2) - finish this ?
01:55:010 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern could be a little hard
[Hard]00:23:655 (1) - Try using max volume here too. The song's volume really over power the soft hitsound here
00:28:300 (1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider?
00:58:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - For these notes how about following the vocal just like the previous notes? Something like
this01:36:429 (2,3,4) - The stack messed up. To fix this turn off distance snap then use grid lv 4. after that move all of 01:36:429 (2,3,4) 1 grid down and 1 grid right
02:19:010 (6,7,1) - ^ same as above. Turn off distance snap and use lv 4 grid, then move 02:19:010 (6,7,1) 3 grid down and 2 grid right
[Insane]- The sharp angled stream doesn't play very nice. Some of them are
00:59:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
01:00:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
01:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this is not as bad as above though
01:13:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^
02:03:526 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
Could you make it curve a bit more, something like
this? It's not a very good sample but that's the gist of it
00:24:429 (1) - Yup, I can hear it loud and clear~
01:16:300 (1) - This anti jump disrupt the flow imo. Better use the normal spacing here
00:52:688 (7) - add whistle here
00:55:784 (11) - ^
That's all from me, if there's something that's not clear don't hesitate to ask me~
Good luck and ~star