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Thanks :3 update~

will update when i get GDs :)
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Where's the Hard?
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finally finished!

take mah star owo
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Thanks!
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いちばーん!

Easy

  1. 01:39:651 (2,3) - なんかこの間気持ち悪い感じです、単純に01:39:651 (2) - をreverseさせるか

    な感じでどうですか?Nがここ1/2slider使いまくってるのでSpread的にもこちらの方が良いかと思います
  2. 01:46:004 (2) - 全体を通してこれだけ苦しいというか角度が急なので違う形を取りたいです
  3. 01:51:827 - ^
  4. 02:24:828 (2,3) - も最初の音取りでいいかなと

Marianna's Normal

  1. 01:50:239 (3,4) - 02:02:239 (4,5) - 02:07:180 (1,2) - i suggest to use only one type of stack (in this diff is 1/2 stack.), because it is hard to Normal player.

いやしねさん

  1. 00:21:474 (1) - うーんなんか分かりにくい距離かなと思いました
    00:19:886 (1,2,3,4) - 手前のこれでわりと速いAIM移動があるので
    00:20:945 (4) - の終点に00:22:357 (4) - が重なるようにまとめて00:21:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - を動かしたいです
  2. 00:41:063 (1) - このNCいります?手前のパターンからしてないほうがまとまって見えます
  3. 00:55:445 (5) - いらないとおもいます、このセクションは配置も音も静かでここだけ無理に1/4circleにする必要ないと思いますし
    配置patternから見ても1/2、1/1と混同してしまいます
    Voよりにするとしたらこんな感じの方が自然かなって思います
  4. 01:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - なんかrhythmにまとまりがなくないですか?
    ドラムとってたり電子音とったりしてるので分かり難いです
    01:20:063 (4,4) - などは始点に分かりやすい音もなくクリックさせるまでとは思えません
    ドラムよりにしても01:23:239 (5,1,5,1) - で急に音を空けるのには違和感あります
    こういった感じの方が優れてませんか?
  5. 01:40:180 (1) - patternや音からしても01:40:886 (3) - とNC交換したほうが合いそうです
  6. 01:41:592 (7) - なんか苦し紛れのStack感というか、音もどっちかっていうと繰り返す感じに聴こえるのでこだけStackは浮いて見えます
    01:41:239 (5) - に重ねると次への流れもよく強調されるかなって
  7. 01:46:886 (7,8) - 01:49:710 (7,8) - いきなりJumpさせた意図が分かりませんでした
    折り返し前のKiaiには存在しませんでしたし01:49:710 (7,8) - に至っては01:44:063 (7,8) - と同じ音なのですごい変です
    その音でJumpは理にかなってはいるのでどちらかに統一させたいです、一貫性がないので浮いて見えてしまいます
  8. 01:51:651 (1) - すっごい変な感じ、手前まで電子音始点の終点ドラムみたな感じなので
    01:51:474 (4) - を1/2sliderに変更した方が01:51:827 (2,3,4) - の音と差別化できていいと思います
  9. 01:52:357 (5) - 01:52:621 - の音はそんなに重要です?私には聴こえないですし01:52:533 - の音の方が大事じゃないですか?
  10. 02:15:651 - からは最初のサビの指摘と同じです
  11. 02:36:121 (2) - Vol下げてBodyにwhistleつけるとBackに合いそう()

Frey's Insane


  • check Aimod
  1. 00:21:651 (3,4) - Im not sure, only jump this
    00:21:651 (3) - 305/138?
  2. 01:38:063 (3,4) - I feel nothing to this jump, so better to lower tha spacing a bit
  3. 01:51:651 (1,2,3,4) - 01:52:357 (5,6,7,8) - Why do these have different Jumppattern?

もこりん

  1. 00:38:592 (3,4) - こっちでJumpさせといて00:47:063 (2,3) - でくっつけるのはどうなんだろ
    手前のがBackは静かだし統一させないにしても逆じゃないかな
  2. 00:56:416 - 00:55:356 (2,3,4) - でVoに合わせてキック置いたかもしれないけど、だったらここ開けるのは変じゃない?
    音あるし00:56:239 (3) - 1/2sliderとかにしたい
  3. 01:15:827 (1,2) - 01:18:474 (3,4) - 遠すぎない?少なくともこういったインパクトKiaiでは感じなかった
    特に後者は次がsliderってわけでもないし抑えた方が良いと思う
  4. 01:24:474 (3) - 最初と同じだけど01:23:769 (2,1) - と距離感似てるから01:24:298 (2,3) - 少し上にやって近づけた方が読みやすそう
  5. 02:00:827 (9,10) - 02:01:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - のパターン的にNCあったが見た目好き
  6. 02:25:357 (4) - NC忘れ
  7. 02:26:239 (1) - 最初のKiaiがキックで最後がこれって拍子抜けというか弱くない?
  8. 02:02:945 (1) - の間にあるピロピロ音取りたくない?ドラム目立つの02:03:298 (3) - 02:03:121 - とかだから02:02:945 (1) - を1キックか2キック置いてドラムでcircleJumpしたほうが好きかな

Extra


  • Aimodがエラーはいてます
  1. 00:21:651 (2) - 少し窮屈に感じます
    00:21:651 (2) - を24/175あたりにおいて00:22:004 (1) - と△作ってあげた方が見た目的にも好きです
  2. 00:22:180 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが綺麗な流れな気がします
  3. 00:47:592 (4,5) - or 00:47:416 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?00:47:592 - のクリックに魅力を感じないですし、伸ばすような音でもないので00:47:769 - からVoで伸ばすか00:47:945 - のクリックにこだわりあるなら手前反転させてもこりんみたいにしたほうが自然かなって思います
    00:58:710 (3) - と同じでもいいと思います
  4. 01:03:298 (5) - 完全にnaziですが1Grid終点上げて01:03:651 (1) - 角度合わせたいです
  5. 01:18:474 (4) - から転調というか音変わるのでNCあったほうが好きです
  6. 01:29:769 (4,5) - いやしねさんのDiffでも書きましたが01:30:033 - の音はそんなに重要じゃないと思います
    01:51:651 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - みたいに01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - でJump作ったほうがかっこいいと思います
    譜面全体を通してもそこだけその3/4は違和感です
  7. 02:14:945 (1) - 減速するなり02:15:298 (2) - 加速させたりするのはどうでしょう?
  8. 02:15:651 (1) - これも近すぎるというか素直すぎるというか、あまり強調されてない感じです
  9. 02:26:945 (1) - 同じ理由です、その後の配置かえなきゃですが、こんな感じで回すようなAim運動好きです
     

がんばってください :)
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-Nanaka- wrote:

Frey's Insane


  • check Aimod
  1. 00:21:651 (3,4) - Im not sure, only jump this didn't feel anything wrong when playing, guess it's ok
    00:21:651 (3) - 305/138?
  2. 01:38:063 (3,4) - I feel nothing to this jump, so better to lower tha spacing a bit fixed
  3. 01:51:651 (1,2,3,4) - 01:52:357 (5,6,7,8) - Why do these have different Jumppattern? can't explain why but i don't see any problem here.
Thanks for modding! :)

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-Nanaka- wrote:

いちばーん!

いやしねさん

  1. 00:21:474 (1) - うーんなんか分かりにくい距離かなと思いました
    00:19:886 (1,2,3,4) - 手前のこれでわりと速いAIM移動があるので
    00:20:945 (4) - の終点に00:22:357 (4) - が重なるようにまとめて00:21:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - を動かしたいです fixed!
  2. 00:41:063 (1) - このNCいります?手前のパターンからしてないほうがまとまって見えます fixed!
  3. 00:55:445 (5) - いらないとおもいます、このセクションは配置も音も静かでここだけ無理に1/4circleにする必要ないと思いますし
    配置patternから見ても1/2、1/1と混同してしまいます
    Voよりにするとしたらこんな感じの方が自然かなって思います fixed!
  4. 01:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - なんかrhythmにまとまりがなくないですか?
    ドラムとってたり電子音とったりしてるので分かり難いです
    01:20:063 (4,4) - などは始点に分かりやすい音もなくクリックさせるまでとは思えません
    ドラムよりにしても01:23:239 (5,1,5,1) - で急に音を空けるのには違和感あります
    こういった感じの方が優れてませんか?おっしゃる通りでパターンがバラバラですが、こういうのもなかなか味なもので自分は結構すきです :D
  5. 01:40:180 (1) - patternや音からしても01:40:886 (3) - とNC交換したほうが合いそうです fixed!
  6. 01:41:592 (7) - なんか苦し紛れのStack感というか、音もどっちかっていうと繰り返す感じに聴こえるのでこだけStackは浮いて見えます
    01:41:239 (5) - に重ねると次への流れもよく強調されるかなって うーん、ここはAIMの流れを反時計回りのみで行きたいです。
  7. 01:46:886 (7,8) - 01:49:710 (7,8) - いきなりJumpさせた意図が分かりませんでした
    折り返し前のKiaiには存在しませんでしたし01:49:710 (7,8) - に至っては01:44:063 (7,8) - と同じ音なのですごい変です
    その音でJumpは理にかなってはいるのでどちらかに統一させたいです、一貫性がないので浮いて見えてしまいます 一部修正しました!
  8. 01:51:651 (1) - すっごい変な感じ、手前まで電子音始点の終点ドラムみたな感じなので
    01:51:474 (4) - を1/2sliderに変更した方が01:51:827 (2,3,4) - の音と差別化できていいと思います 本日のMVP :oops:
  9. 01:52:357 (5) - 01:52:621 - の音はそんなに重要です?私には聴こえないですし01:52:533 - の音の方が大事じゃないですか?
    音取りの優先順位は確かにそうですが01:30:121 (3) - ここや02:15:298 (2) - ここでフレーズの区切りとして使っているので無視しています :!:
  10. 02:15:651 - からは最初のサビの指摘と同じです かしこまり 8-)
  11. 02:36:121 (2) - Vol下げてBodyにwhistleつけるとBackに合いそう()世界

がんばってください :)
ななかさん毎度毎度ありがとうございます!ちょっとイジったのでご確認ください ;)
https://puu.sh/udPs5/59b936986e.rar
posted
すいません!少し遅くなりました!
m4m req from discord

Marianna's Normal

  1. 00:21:298 (1) - i feel better to move spinner start at 00:21:474 - . if you concern about spinner length, you can try to use long slider at same timing
  2. 00:45:298 - 01:06:298 - hmm... can you add more hitsound on this part? sure, the part is very calm however it's not meaning "don't need to add hitsound mostly". for instance, can you try to add whistle on every upbeat sound? soft whistle sound is very useful i think.
  3. 01:10:180 (3) - i suggest rhythm pattern below in this part. the reason why in term of consistency with 01:14:769 (3,4,5) -
  4. 01:18:651 - why you dont put object on here? should be better to put 1/2 slider at 01:18:474 -
  5. 01:19:180 (1) - hype slider art... it's a just minor suggestion. i think more better to stack red point and slider tick each other. then fit with 01:20:592 - and 01:21:298 - in my thought.
    :arrow:
  6. 01:58:710 (1,2,3) - it's difficult a bit to play for beginner i think. you can try to change 1/2 sliders?
  7. 02:32:592 (1) - i dont understand why you dont map after here. can you add objects like other diffs by 02:38:239 - ?
    []
    i suggested many things. the reason is just i'd like to be fare with alacat about quantity of mod.
    if you feel hurt due to my suggestions and some expressions, i will apologize to you. :bow:

iyasine's Hard

  1. 00:04:710 (1) - なぜここだけ周りの音取りと変えているんでしょうか?リズムは変わっていないようなので同じような音とりでもいいかもしれません
  2. 00:12:827 (1) - このスライダーエンドを00:12:121 (3) - のスライダーエンドと完全にスタックさせるほうが見栄えがいいと思いました。ここのパートではこれ以外このような配置はなかったので、統一感という観点のもとから提案させていただきました。
  3. 01:32:416 (6,7,8) - distanceに関してですが、6-7 > 7-8となっているのに少し違和感を感じました。この気合パートではほかの同じようなところでは6-7 = 7-8もしくは6-7 < 7-8だったので、曲的にもそのほうが合うと個人的には思います。それらに合わせてみてはいかがでしょうか?

いい譜面すぎて書くことなかったです…
頑張ってください! Good Luck!!! :)
posted

joker- wrote:

すいません!少し遅くなりました!
m4m req from discord

iyasine's Hard

  1. 00:04:710 (1) - なぜここだけ周りの音取りと変えているんでしょうか?リズムは変わっていないようなので同じような音とりでもいいかもしれません
    小節感覚を保ちやすくするために入れているんですが、確かに少し違和感がありますね。あと2回くらい同じ指摘を受けたら変えてみようと思います。
  2. 00:12:827 (1) - このスライダーエンドを00:12:121 (3) - のスライダーエンドと完全にスタックさせるほうが見栄えがいいと思いました。ここのパートではこれ以外このような配置はなかったので、統一感という観点のもとから提案させていただきました。いいですね :)
  3. 01:32:416 (6,7,8) - distanceに関してですが、6-7 > 7-8となっているのに少し違和感を感じました。この気合パートではほかの同じようなところでは6-7 = 7-8もしくは6-7 < 7-8だったので、曲的にもそのほうが合うと個人的には思います。それらに合わせてみてはいかがでしょうか?ここやりにくかったですよね。修正しました ;)

いい譜面すぎて書くことなかったです…
頑張ってください! Good Luck!!! :)
jokerさんmodありがとうございます :D
https://puu.sh/uPcUQ/00ac8d0ee0.rar
posted

joker- wrote:

すいません!少し遅くなりました!

Marianna's Normal

  1. 00:21:298 (1) - i feel better to move spinner start at 00:21:474 - . if you concern about spinner length, you can try to use long slider at same timing fixed
  2. 00:45:298 - 01:06:298 - hmm... can you add more hitsound on this part? sure, the part is very calm however it's not meaning "don't need to add hitsound mostly". for instance, can you try to add whistle on every upbeat sound? soft whistle sound is very useful i think. fixed
  3. 01:10:180 (3) - i suggest rhythm pattern below in this part. the reason why in term of consistency with 01:14:769 (3,4,5) - I do not want to leave everyone the same, I do not like to leave a pattern and both forms represent well the instrumental
  4. 01:18:651 - why you dont put object on here? should be better to put 1/2 slider at 01:18:474 - For me this is fine, I want to maintain consistency
  5. 01:19:180 (1) - hype slider art... it's a just minor suggestion. i think more better to stack red point and slider tick each other. then fit with 01:20:592 - and 01:21:298 - in my thought. fixed
    :arrow:
  6. 01:58:710 (1,2,3) - it's difficult a bit to play for beginner i think. you can try to change 1/2 sliders? This is normal I think, does not seem so difficult since it is a difficulty after easy
  7. 02:32:592 (1) - i dont understand why you dont map after here. can you add objects like other diffs by 02:38:239 - ? fixed
    []
    i suggested many things. the reason is just i'd like to be fare with alacat about quantity of mod.
    if you feel hurt due to my suggestions and some expressions, i will apologize to you. :bow:
Really Thanks!!! Helped me a lot


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220,244,7180,2,0,P|132:244|68:112,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,8239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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432,132,9298,2,0,L|312:124,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,10004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,10357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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76,252,11063,2,0,P|83:220|97:191,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,128,12474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,240,12827,2,0,P|196:296|220:356,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,220,14239,6,0,P|384:228|444:204,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,120,49180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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100,116,50945,6,0,L|108:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,288,52004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,96,53063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,53416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,340,57651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,88,60474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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184,128,63298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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56,316,69827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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472,320,71063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,124,72651,2,0,P|200:112|136:132,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,348,73886,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,312,74239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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348,208,76004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,340,76710,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,240,77063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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418,44,78298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
418,44,78474,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,144,78827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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96,312,91180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,91533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,284,93298,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,244,93651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,124,94004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,94357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,212,95769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,308,96121,6,0,P|180:348|112:352,1,120
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260,64,98592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,84,106357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,296,107416,6,0,P|216:290|160:322,1,120
48,348,108121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,236,108474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,76,114121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,132,122592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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28,248,127533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,64,135474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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196,300,136357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,220,136710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,182,137063,2,0,L|340:186,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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380,308,138827,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,139180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,192,140239,2,0,P|156:138|183:72,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,36,140945,2,0,B|316:48|316:48|344:40,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,141298,6,0,L|392:160,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,272,142004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,188,142357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,276,142710,2,0,P|144:288|96:260,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,164,143416,2,0,P|144:99|163:46,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,144121,6,0,L|388:92,2,120,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,145180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,52,145357,6,0,B|172:112|172:112|156:172,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,146063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,196,147298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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448,216,152239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,112,152592,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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posted

-Nanaka- wrote:

いちばーん!

Easy

  1. 01:39:651 (2,3) - なんかこの間気持ち悪い感じです、単純に01:39:651 (2) - をreverseさせるか

    な感じでどうですか?Nがここ1/2slider使いまくってるのでSpread的にもこちらの方が良いかと思います
  2. 01:46:004 (2) - 全体を通してこれだけ苦しいというか角度が急なので違う形を取りたいです
  3. 01:51:827 - ^
  4. 02:24:828 (2,3) - も最初の音取りでいいかなと
    :arrow:音取りの部分は変更しました!角度はそこまでプレイに支障が出ないと思うのでこのままでいきます

Extra


  • Aimodがエラーはいてます :arrow:なおしました~
  1. 00:21:651 (2) - 少し窮屈に感じます
    00:21:651 (2) - を24/175あたりにおいて00:22:004 (1) - と△作ってあげた方が見た目的にも好きです
  2. 00:22:180 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが綺麗な流れな気がします:arrow: 上の部分とあわせて配置しなおしました~
  3. 00:47:592 (4,5) - or 00:47:416 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?00:47:592 - のクリックに魅力を感じないですし、伸ばすような音でもないので00:47:769 - からVoで伸ばすか00:47:945 - のクリックにこだわりあるなら手前反転させてもこりんみたいにしたほうが自然かなって思います
    00:58:710 (3) - と同じでもいいと思います :arrow:現状の音取りが一番後ろの音に合っていると思うのでこのままで~
  4. 01:03:298 (5) - 完全にnaziですが1Grid終点上げて01:03:651 (1) - 角度合わせたいです :arrow:なおしました!
  5. 01:18:474 (4) - から転調というか音変わるのでNCあったほうが好きです :arrow:ここは追加しなくてもいいかなと思います
  6. 01:29:769 (4,5) - いやしねさんのDiffでも書きましたが01:30:033 - の音はそんなに重要じゃないと思います
    01:51:651 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - みたいに01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - でJump作ったほうがかっこいいと思います
    譜面全体を通してもそこだけその3/4は違和感です :arrow:いいですね :) かえました~
  7. 02:14:945 (1) - 減速するなり02:15:298 (2) - 加速させたりするのはどうでしょう? :arrow:配置を調整しました
  8. 02:15:651 (1) - これも近すぎるというか素直すぎるというか、あまり強調されてない感じです :arrow:ジャンプ作りました!
  9. 02:26:945 (1) - 同じ理由です、その後の配置かえなきゃですが、こんな感じで回すようなAim運動好きです :arrow:ここもジャンプさせて作り直しました!
     

がんばってください :)
ありがとうございます :)
posted
M4M from your queue -

Espoir
Note: Mainly suggestions
  1. 00:16:533 (1) - this seems to flow a bit awkward after 00:16:357 (3) - (this is most likely me so ya can ignore)
  2. 00:17:769 (1,2,3,4) - right here the sound is getting louder but why does (3) have low spacing compare to (2) (1) (4) ?
  3. 00:36:827 (3) - if your following the vocals - this seems more fitting to have a slider that end here 00:37:357 -
  4. 01:22:710 (3,4,1,2) - there is not really a difference yet both have different spacing
  5. 02:06:474 (1,2,3) - there is a difference between spacing here compare to the other triples - I mean that (1) spacing is inconsistent with (2) (3)


Frey's Insane
Nothing but minor stuff I found here that can be ignore if you choose to do that
  1. 01:28:180 (2) - should go up a little so the stream look more curve
  2. 01:41:769 (1,2) - no much of a difference but (2) should just be a copy of (1) - Ctrl C, Ctrl G, Ctrl H and a bit of rotate would do


iyasine's Hard
  1. 01:03:651 (6) - this should have the same distance as 01:04:180 (7,8) -
  2. 01:18:474 (2,3,4) - move this down so they all have the same distance



Ugh that is all I could do for this map so sorry if it doesn't help ya :( (did look at others diff like easy and normal but I didn't see anything to mod)
posted
Hi alacat sama. Here's my M4M from your Queue!
I am suprised you decided to map a song like this o:

General

  1. Is this song by Stonebank? I mean, checking carefully on Google I found this: https://soundcloud.com/monstercat/stonebank-be-alright and it says "by Monstercat" now I do not know if it's referred to the original version (long version) or it's just a remix of the original music. Check this carefully please!
  2. Did momoko forget to use custom combo colours or is it intentional? If not, consider to add them
  3. (For Easy and Normal) Consider to map the break time at 00:22:710 or a part of it being this break too huge in my honest opinion.. Mapping it with filling vocal melody would make it consistent with all next diffs
  4. The spread between Hard and Insane looks too huge imo. This kind of Insane with large unconsistent spacing between parts and with symmetric patterns is really hard to play considering that is should be a simple Insane. I am not saying it's bad, I really like and enjoy it (indeed I almost didn't mention anything in the modpost) but from a gameplay point of view it's too pushed to be an Insane. Said that I HIGHLY suggest you to map a light Insane by yourself because I know very well you can do a great job.
  5. Is the widescreen support necessary?


Easy

  1. 00:13:180 (2,1) - I would move the whole pattern with distance snap activated some grid below so the (2) will be placed on the horizontal line on the editor to make it symmetric and 00:14:239 (1) - won't be covered by HP bar's shadow anymore (it looks too pushed on top imo)
  2. 00:16:710 (4) - Consider to move this circle some grid upward because it's actually covered by accuracy bar and this can be avoided
  3. 00:19:886 (1) - What about to make some curves on the first and second part of the body like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001649 I think it gives more impact and it's esthetically cooler to see
  4. 02:34:533 (4) - I would use whistle on this slider's tail to emphasize trumpet (is it a trumpet? lol I really suck at recognizing instruments xd) and to be consistent with previous 02:32:945 (2,3) 's tails
    02:36:827 (1) - Finish with drum sampleset fits much better on this spinner's end due to the drum sound in the music


Marianna's Normal

  1. 00:46:004 (2,1) - I would remove the whistle from (2)'s head adding it on (1)'s head instead. It sounds better considering how you placed next whistles on next elements
  2. 01:18:298 (4,1,2) - This elements doesn't fill the music properly atm. I would make two 1/2 sliders instead that can fill every sound in the music and it's perfectly adaptable for a Normal diff: https://puu.sh/xq0Jq.png Or even better, to make the last tick clickable I would use first an 1/2 repeating slider so you can place a circle at the end: https://puu.sh/xq0Lm.png It's your choice but please don't keep rhythm like that. The skipped unmapped sounds in the music are kinda confusing honestly
  3. 01:19:180 (1) - Can you edit this slider in a way that the body doesn't touch itself? https://puu.sh/xq0Ph.png they should not touch to each other to make it esthetically better
  4. 01:37:533 (3) - This slider direction actually destroy the nice flow you created. I would move it's body on the up-left instead than down-left. It even connects the pattern better with the next part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001776
  5. 01:40:180 (3) - I feel this slider too pushed on the left. I would move its body some grid on the right instead to make it more confortable to follow with cursor movement and to make it esthetically better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001788 I would make the same for 01:41:769 (1) - this one as well moving the body on some grids on the left instead
  6. 01:50:592 (4) - Try to unstack this slider from the previous circle? This is probably the only stack I have seen in this kiai '-'
  7. 02:33:827 (3) - (nazi) But improve this blanket. If you do so don't forget to restack properly the 02:35:769 (5) too


iyasine's Hard

  1. 01:34:533 (4) - So far This is the only slider you completely stacked with previous one and it even looks very ugly imo. Consider to unstack it like you did for all other parts! This applies to 01:45:827 (4) - as well
    02:13:180 (2) - I would move this one (or the (3) but I do not suggest it since you should fix all the next elements) in this way so you can make a perfect triangle with (1)'s tail and (3)'s head: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001871
  2. 02:19:710 (4) - Same of before and 02:31:004 (4) (well since you even used them here as well maybe you could keep it but I THINK, (personal taste) they would be better if stacked like all the other patterns)
  3. I love iyasine's maps


Frey's Insane

  1. First of all consider to snap properly this elements Aibat catched: https://puu.sh/xq1y4.png
  2. 00:41:592 (3,4) - I know this pattern is symmetric with the previous 00:40:710 (1,2) - but it actually plays very bad since the curves are facing each other. I would place these in this way instead to make it smoother to play. It connects better the previous pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001923


Espoir

  1. 00:10:886 (1) - (Personal taste) I do not like how this slider flows actually. What about making it like this so its head and tail are directed to the previous and next circle? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002024 If you accept you could curve this other slider more as well 00:16:533 (1) - but it's your choice :3
  2. 01:16:004 (4) - (very nazi) Make the stack perfect with 01:14:769 (2) -
  3. 01:26:592 (3) - Stack it properly with (4)'s head. Also, why is the 01:25:886 (4) linear on the first part before getting curved? I mean, shouldn't it be symmetric or similar to 01:25:533 (3) for a smoother flow?
  4. 01:37:710 (2) - I do not like when this slider is placed actually :\ It destroys the flow imo. I would try to place it somewhere else instead (I do not know where actually this is why I ask you to try it because I didn't have any idea here sorry TwT but just I felt like this is flowing very bad imo connected to the previous slider). You could make something like 02:22:533 (1,2) -
  5. 01:57:651 (2) - Move it some grid below? It's a little covered by HP bar actually
  6. 02:06:298 (3) - Move this circle with grid snap because it's not perfectly linear with previous two circles actually


Nice mapset as always alacat.
I hope this mod will help you a bit, good luck for the rank!
posted

DJ Lucky wrote:

Frey's Insane
Nothing but minor stuff I found here that can be ignore if you choose to do that
  1. 01:28:180 (2) - should go up a little so the stream look more curve umm, it's good to keep the 0.7x spacing for me tho.
  2. 01:41:769 (1,2) - no much of a difference but (2) should just be a copy of (1) - Ctrl C, Ctrl G, Ctrl H and a bit of rotate would do why I feel the flow is better if don't change... ummm, ok let's keep it for a while/

)

Chewin wrote:

General

  1. Is this song by Stonebank? I mean, checking carefully on Google I found this: https://soundcloud.com/monstercat/stonebank-be-alright and it says "by Monstercat" now I do not know if it's referred to the original version (long version) or it's just a remix of the original music. Check this carefully please!
    I could show the metadata:https://www.monstercat.com/release/MCS432
  2. The spread between Hard and Insane looks too huge imo. This kind of Insane with large unconsistent spacing between parts and with symmetric patterns is really hard to play considering that is should be a simple Insane. I am not saying it's bad, I really like and enjoy it (indeed I almost didn't mention anything in the modpost) but from a gameplay point of view it's too pushed to be an Insane. Said that I HIGHLY suggest you to map a light Insane by yourself because I know very well you can do a great job. thx for playing! thb the gap is not very huge.. Let's see, In iyas' Hard, he used 3/4 slider & 1/4 circle triples like 01:00:827 (5,6) - 01:29:769 (2,3) - 01:35:769 (8,1) - and he often used jumps like 00:58:004 (4) - 01:20:416 (5) -01:21:298 (3) - 01:37:710 (5) - to create an inconsistent flow, fairly to say, it's a difficult hard, not a hard which is consistent much... so the gap between a difficult hard and a standard insane should be fine. I believe the gap exists, but not that bad to hurt the play performance. ————of course, it's alacat who make the decision.

    Frey's Insane

    1. First of all consider to snap properly this elements Aibat catched: https://puu.sh/xq1y4.png weird, all fixed.
    2. 00:41:592 (3,4) - I know this pattern is symmetric with the previous 00:40:710 (1,2) - but it actually plays very bad since the curves are facing each other. I would place these in this way instead to make it smoother to play. It connects better the previous pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001923 fixed
Thanks for modding! :)

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400,312,137945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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107,178,138474,6,0,P|130:139|131:94,1,90
40,112,138827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,300,139004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,328,139180,1,2,0:2:0:0:
228,140,139357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,116,140769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,32,140945,2,0,P|425:32|473:78,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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428,336,142004,1,2,0:2:0:0:
392,160,142180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,220,142533,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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104,252,142886,1,2,0:2:0:0:
192,220,143063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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176,312,143592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,304,145710,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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327,185,146239,5,2,0:2:0:0:
172,166,146416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,321,146592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,146769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,44,147651,1,2,0:2:0:0:
44,192,147827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,149063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,120,149239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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129,61,149769,6,0,L|111:155,1,90
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304,192,150474,1,2,0:2:0:0:
380,244,150651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,150827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,244,151004,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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512,84,151533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,224,151710,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,112,151886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,132,152063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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385,290,156651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156827,12,0,158239,0:0:0:0:
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とりあえずできてるところまで!
(後から読み返したら何かいてるのか分からなくて10は削った..)


[Easy]
  1. 01:20:239 - ここに単発を追加、01:24:474 (4) - の単発を削除して01:24:827 - から音取りを激しくする方がドラムには合うのかなと思いました。
  2. 01:41:063 (3) - 急に音量が30%に下げると次のサークルのタイミングがやや取りにくくなるんじゃないかなあと思いました。ここから50%にしてみてはどうでしょう!
  3. 02:32:945 (2) - 上に同じく音量の問題です。曲の音がまだ残ってるせいでN60%からS30%の音量変化が始点の打感を消しすぎているように感じました。S30%の緑線を02:32:945 - に移動して、02:32:945 - に新しくS45~50%くらいの緑線を追加してあげるとちょうどいいと思います。
[Marianna’s Normal]
  1. 00:45:298 (1,2) - I don’t mean to stick on consistency, but I wonder why you made difference from 00:45:298 (1,2,3) - 00:50:945 (1,2,3) - here. Using the same rhythm as them would be more fun imo because the current one looks a bit too simple and easy.
  2. 00:52:357 (1,2,3) - In order to fill in the blank at 00:53:592 - where there is the notable electric(?) sound, make a 1/2 slider at 00:53:416 - instead of a note. Because of that blank, the current rhythm kinda sounds like 1/1 spam to me.
  3. 01:40:180 (3) - Rotating (3) by -10 would make 01:39:651 (2,3,4) - more comfortable to play. The current angle of this slider surely affects cursor movement during gameplay imo. Don’t forget to adjust 01:41:769 (1) - as well if you fix this as I suggested.
  4. 01:59:945 - Don't you put an object here like 01:57:121 - ?



About the difficulty gap between iyasine's Hard and Frey's Insane, I'm also one who think it's clearly too huge for the exact same reason Chewin posted above. Even after reading Frey's reply, I still think that. Considering Frey's difficulty is the only Insane in this mapset, there should be a light Insane between iyasine's and Frey's.
Well, since I've been inactive for a long time, I don't have confidence in my own opinion. Leave it to alacat, Frey and BNs :p
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Thank you mods!
plan to make a Light Insane and Normal diff (Guest mapper ignored my pm and he is gone) Guest mapper asked me to fix mods from now on.
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DJ Lucky wrote:

M4M from your queue -

iyasine's Hard
  1. 01:03:651 (6) - this should have the same distance as 01:04:180 (7,8) - ok~
  2. 01:18:474 (2,3,4) - move this down so they all have the same distance some fixed :)



Ugh that is all I could do for this map so sorry if it doesn't help ya :( (did look at others diff like easy and normal but I didn't see anything to mod)

Chewin wrote:

Hi alacat sama. Here's my M4M from your Queue!
I am suprised you decided to map a song like this o:

iyasine's Hard

  1. 01:34:533 (4) - So far This is the only slider you completely stacked with previous one and it even looks very ugly imo. Consider to unstack it like you did for all other parts! This applies to 01:45:827 (4) - as well ok~fixed!
    02:13:180 (2) - I would move this one (or the (3) but I do not suggest it since you should fix all the next elements) in this way so you can make a perfect triangle with (1)'s tail and (3)'s head: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001871 nice!
  2. 02:19:710 (4) - Same of before and 02:31:004 (4) (well since you even used them here as well maybe you could keep it but I THINK, (personal taste) they would be better if stacked like all the other patterns) fixed!
  3. I love iyasine's maps thanks chewin ( ˘◡˘ )


Nice mapset as always alacat.
I hope this mod will help you a bit, good luck for the rank!
thanks for modding~ Lucky , Chewin ;)
https://puu.sh/xyPOu/106617f127.rar
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