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Pastry - Goblin Girl

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Andrea
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 2 febbraio 2011 at 19:51:47

Artist: Pastry
Title: Goblin Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: Bubblerecords Koishi Komeiji tieff Louis Cyphre Lucifer climbb65588
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4131kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Calm (1,94 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Challenging (4,45 stars, 232 notes)
  3. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 703 notes)
  4. Lucifer's Advanced (2,87 stars, 138 notes)
  5. Lunatic (4,99 stars, 389 notes)
  6. tieff's Stage (4,94 stars, 426 notes)
Download: Pastry - Goblin Girl
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My 114th Beatmap.

Since I loved tieff's version of this song and he didn't finished it, I'm submitting this for him ^^

Also, this is my 2nd Touhou map!

Mapset:

Lunatic - Done.
tieff's Stage - Done.
Climbb's Taiko Oni - Done.
Challenging - Done.
Lucifer's Advanced - Done.
Calm - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 18 times in total.
KanaRin
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KanaRin
yeah ww First >w<
Star!
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
:)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Remove Audio Lead in.
There are already 2 seconds of emptiness.

[tieff's Hard]
00:49:292 (8) - new combo
01:07:667 (9) - ^
01:52:479 (7) - ^
00:40:667 (5) - ^
00:12:542 (2) - add finish
00:20:417 (3) - ^
00:34:667 (1) - ^

Andrea's difficulties are clear as always <_<
Andrea
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Andrea
All fixed, thanks!

Also, waiting for an Insane from Kite~

Nevermind, I'll make it @_@
Cute Bunny
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Cute Bunny
[ Easy ]

00:55:667 (1) - spacing
02:10:667 (2,3) - I think this may be a little confused. // spacing?

[ Normal ]

00:03:354 (4) - move? ( x:256 y:152 )
01:38:417 (4,5) - spacing

[ tieff's Hard ]

00:11:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Confusing o_o;; and It's bad for the sudden jump.
00:15:354 (7) - new combo
00:15:917 (8) - remove combo
00:17:042 (1) - ^
00:18:167 (2,1) - spacing
00:18:542 (1) - remove combo
00:20:979 (1,2) - spacing
00:45:167 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Confusing......spacing or relocation
01:00:729 (6) - move? x:152 y:168
01:00:917 (1) - move? x:176 y:264
01:36:167 (1,2) - hmm...originally posted slider? // stick
01:37:667 (1,2) - ^

Easy and Normal is good. but Hard of intervals and jump is not good. o_o; Need to fix
and good song >v<
STAR~★+3
Kite
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Kite
i guess you dont need an insane anymore >>
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
:>
Download: Pastry - Goblin Girl (osuplayer111) [Lucifer's Advanced].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Updated~
eddieee
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eddieee
+1
Anto
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Anto
Star
-maJu
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-maJu
star :!:
Ekoro
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Ekoro
Hey~

  1. Only suggestions >.<
[Calm]

  1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid in right?~
[Lucifer's Advanced]

  1. 00:36:181 (1) - Try like this , it's more kawaii~ http://puu.sh/OWQ
  2. 02:05:806 (2) - Try like this , it's more kawaii http://puu.sh/OX0
[Challenging]

uh , fine~

[tieff's Stage]

Approach Rate +1 , the diff would be more readable.Personally , i don't like this diff , sorry ;A;"

[Lunatic]

00:45:181 (5) - New Combo~00:45:743 (1) - Remove New Combo~00:47:806 (6) - New Combo~01:06:181 (5) - ^01:06:743 (1) - Remove New Combo~
Andrea
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Andrea

_LRJ_ wrote:

Hey~

  1. Only suggestions >.<
[Calm]

  1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid in right?~
[Lucifer's Advanced]

  1. 00:36:181 (1) - Try like this , it's more kawaii~ http://puu.sh/OWQ
  2. 02:05:806 (2) - Try like this , it's more kawaii http://puu.sh/OX0
[Challenging]

uh , fine~

[tieff's Stage]

Approach Rate +1 , the diff would be more readable.Personally , i don't like this diff , sorry ;A;"

[Lunatic]

00:45:181 (5) - New Combo~00:45:743 (1) - Remove New Combo~00:47:806 (6) - New Combo~01:06:181 (5) - ^01:06:743 (1) - Remove New Combo~
All fixed, thank you!
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Star *o*
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
IS A TOHO MAP
RobotoRaccoon
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RobotoRaccoon
Excellent job, So here's a star :D
climbb65588
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climbb65588
shall I map a taiko diff fot this map?

Star!
Andrea
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Thanks everyone for the stars and for the support! :)

@climbb: Yes, you can.
JoJo
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JoJo
Just some suggestions..>.<

[Lunatic]
Fine...

[tieff's stage]
01:52:493(1)Remove new combo?
01:56:431(9)Move the next "new combo" to here.
01:59:056(2)Move the previou "new combo" to here.

[Challenging]
00:18:931(4,..)1 grid right?

[Lucifer's advanced]
00:24:556(1,...)Might change some arrangement?(Hmm..I dont like such notes focus on center.Just my point of view..Feel free to ignore this..)

[Calm]
00:31:306(2,3,4)Sounds a little weird...I will map like this:

01:27:181(1)Maybe too close to the next note?Not recommend in easy diff..

1st time to mod an experienced mapper's map~>.<
Star~~★~
Kurai
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☆ ~ Genral ~ ☆

- Add "Bubblerecords" in the tags, it's the song's circle name.
- Add "Koishi Komeiji" in the tags because because this song is an arrangement of her theme.

☆ ~ Easy ~ ☆

- 01:39:931 (x) - Add note here ? It's weird to to have anything here because of the drums
- 02:12:181 (1) - Too far from the previous note

☆ ~ Lucifer's Advanced ~ ☆

- 00:03:181 (3) - Remove reverse
- 00:05:806 (3) - Add 1 reverse
- 00:12:556 (1) - Extend by 1/2
- 00:15:181 (1) - Extend by 1/2
- 00:16:681 (2,3) - Do something like http://puu.sh/Ppj
- 00:19:306 (2) - This slider should begin 1/2 earlier
- 01:37:681 (2) - New combo

☆ ~ Challenging ~ ☆

- 00:33:368 (x) - Add note

☆ ~ tieff's Stage ~ ☆

- tieff's mapping style is so unique °3°

☆ ~ Lunatic ~ ☆

- Fine, but I suggest HP drain -1

Nice map :3 Star~
Andrea
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Most of the suggestions fixed, thanks guys!
Tony
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Tony
Star! :)
Natteke
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Natteke
definitely starring this one
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
touhou songs, so tag the relavent characters?

[Lunatic]
00:08:993 (5) - up 1 grid?
00:24:181 (1,2,3,4) - up 1 grid

[tieff's Stage]
00:32:618 (3) - up 1 grid?
00:33:368 (7) - make it symmetrical, up 1 grid

[Challenging]
00:02:056 (1,2) - up 1 grid?

Only some minor suggestions only, I don't see any problems

star~ :D
Daru
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Daru
[Calm]
01:39:931 (4) - Right 1 grid

[Lucifer's Advanced]
-

[Challenging]
01:11:431 (3) - Concave up instead of concave down, ending toward (4)

[tieff's Stage]
-

[Lunatic]
-

[overall]
Looks pretty solid. Those were just nitpicks, with the correction in [calm] being the only real objective thing.
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks everyone.
galvenize
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galvenize
[General]

Diffs (except tieff's) lack hitsounds. There are claps but I swear I tought they were part of the music at first.

[Calm]

01:09:556 (1,2,3,4) - one grid up in order to get 01:08:806 (4,1) up on the same line while keeping distance snap.
01:39:931 (4,5) - Spacing

[Lucifer's]

00:32:806 (2) - Silence end of slider
01:08:431 (3,1) - Could be placed more cleanly.
Suggestion:
01:11:056 (4) - One grid right
01:12:556 (2) - ^
01:40:681 (1,1,1,1) - 4 in a row feels a bit heavy, I'm sure you could have come up with something better.

[Challenging]

Nothing to point out.

[Tieff's stage]

00:16:493 (1) - remove nc. Start the next combo at 00:16:868 (2) . The jump will be easier to read.
00:55:868 (2) - two grids right to even the spacings?
01:35:243 (2,4) - remove wistle? That bit would sound better imo.

[Lunatic]

00:47:806 (1) - Make it a bit curved so it won't touch the previous slider:
01:08:806 (1) - ^

Nothing more to point out.

Hopefully we'll get to see this one ranked soon.

Oh and yea Tieff, I always loved you for making a Type-Moon New Dawn map. I literally grew up on osu playing this.
Nyan-Zapo
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:D
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
andrea~ :P
miss_dior
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;)
Andrea
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Andrea
Updated, thanks everyone for supporting this map :)
Kyonko Hizara
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:)
climbb65588
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climbb65588
The rhythm of the song is complicated xD
But finally I've done it.



Download: Pastry - Goblin Girl (osuplayer111) [Climbb's Taiko Oni].osu
Andrea
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Andrea
Everything is ready to go now :)
KanaRin
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KanaRin
Ok~ Here's some mod~

[Calm]
Good~


[Lucifer's Advanced]
00:11:056 (3,4) - Spacing?
00:16:493 (2) - Ah~~ I think it's too far with 00:15:181 (1) -
My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53732
01:54:931 (3) - New combo
01:55:306 (1) - Remove new combo
01:56:056 (3) - New combo
01:56:431 (1) - Remove new combo


[Challenging]
fine>w<


[Cbb's Taiko]
01:17:618 (x) - Add a Red
01:19:118 (x) - ^
01:20:618 (x) - ^
01:22:118 (x) - ^


[tieff's Stage]
01:09:556 (5) - ahhh. Is it too far?
Crazy!

[Lunatic]
Suggestion:
01:40:868 (x) - add a spin
01:43:306 (x) - ^
01:45:931 (x) - ^
01:48:556 (x) - add a spin & off volume in the 01:50:056
Other is fine~>w<

Ok, i already star it~~
my map here --> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22720 it bubbled, Thanks~>w<
Andrea
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Updated :3

Last mod4mod slot available, just saying <3
spboxer3
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Star! ;)
kiririn_
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kiririn_
hi~

[Clam]
01:59:431 (5) - delete note here?
01:59:806 (?) - add note here? and delete the one just after
02:09:931 (1) - delete note here?

[Lucifer's Advanced]
00:16:493 (2,3) - move 1/4 later is better?
00:32:806 (2) - soft hitnormal 1 and soft hitclap 1 in the end of the slider?
00:48:931 (2) - delete this note and move the last slider here?

[Challenging]
Fine :3

[tieff's Stage]
Fine.^_^

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
i am not good at modding taiko but i think this diff is awesome :3

[Lunatic]
00:04:868 (4) - new combo
00:11:431 (1) - ^
01:40:774 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - i think normal hitwhistle doesn't fit very well with these spinners.
01:57:368 (4) - left 2 grids and up 2 grids?
02:01:587 (4) - left 1 grid
02:04:493 (4) - new combo

awesome job! star!
Andrea
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Updated, thank you ^_^

Mod4mod is now closed, but you can still mod the map if you want a kudosu :3
James2250
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Hard to hear the clap at first but I got used to it~

Calm:
AR -1 for the easiest difficulty?
Needs more hitsounds
Otherwise looks good

Lucifer's Advanced:
00:11:243 (4,1) - spread out more
Spacing between 00:15:181 (1,2) and 00:17:806 (1,2) should be the same
01:08:431 (3,1) - move slightly further apart
01:34:681 (3,1) - don't overlap (same for other ones around this area)
01:40:681 (1,1,1,1) - players normally don't like more than 2 spinners in a row

Challenging:
Needs more hitsounds
00:08:431 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeat if possible
00:11:056 (4,5) - ^
00:18:931 (4,5) - ^

Taiko:
No major errors, looks good
You might want to stop the map at the same place as the other difficulties though?

teiff's Stage:
Some odd slider overlaps but they play fine, map is nice
01:42:556 (1,1,1) - I personally don't like this part

Lunatic:
(Still could use more hitsounds) Some nice patterns
01:42:649 (1) - I wouldn't do this..isn't really rankable
01:45:274 (1) - ^
01:47:899 (1) - ^
(Don't like so many spinners in a row as mentioned in other difficulties but anyway)

Deserves a star~
Andrea
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James2250 wrote:

Hard to hear the clap at first but I got used to it~

Calm:
AR -1 for the easiest difficulty? Fixed.
Needs more hitsounds Added them.
Otherwise looks good

Lucifer's Advanced:
00:11:243 (4,1) - spread out more Fixed.
Spacing between 00:15:181 (1,2) and 00:17:806 (1,2) should be the same Fixed.
01:08:431 (3,1) - move slightly further apart Fixed.
01:34:681 (3,1) - don't overlap (same for other ones around this area) Seems fine to me.
01:40:681 (1,1,1,1) - players normally don't like more than 2 spinners in a row Fixed.

Challenging:
Needs more hitsounds Added them.
00:08:431 (5,6) - try and avoid hidden repeat if possible Seems fine to me.
00:11:056 (4,5) - ^ Seems fine to me.
00:18:931 (4,5) - ^ Seems fine to me.

Taiko:
No major errors, looks good
You might want to stop the map at the same place as the other difficulties though?

teiff's Stage:
Some odd slider overlaps but they play fine, map is nice
01:42:556 (1,1,1) - I personally don't like this part Seems fine to me.

Lunatic:
(Still could use more hitsounds) Some nice patterns Added them and thanks :3
01:42:649 (1) - I wouldn't do this..isn't really rankable Fixed.
01:45:274 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:47:899 (1) - ^ Fixed.
(Don't like so many spinners in a row as mentioned in other difficulties but anyway)

Deserves a star~
Thank you for modding :)
James2250
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-You guys and your ninja spinners. Well auto can get 2000 on all of them by themselves so.... ok will let them pass
-Offset - 10, all notes/timing sections resnapped~

6-7 bubbles popped/ranked sooo

Bubbled~

osu is being odd these days and always saying I need to update everything after download ._.
Andrea
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Andrea
Thank you James <333
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Go Go Rank it :)
H1ko
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H1ko
starr x)
yaya
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ranked
Louis Cyphre
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;)
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Oh, congrats!

EDIT: Whoops, barline misplaced in Taiko.
Kurosanyan
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Kurosanyan
Uh, 2 unrankable spinner?
Well seems like auto get 2000 but the 2000 doesn't appear at the end of the spinner.
So it must be because of my PC, sorry.
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