This took like 5x longer than expected. But I'm glad as long as this is of any help!
[General]Freaky timing but it seems 101% accurate:
http://puu.sh/38MD[Fight69's Easy]The overlaps were mentioned by Sakura already. But I only see them @800x600, which seems odd. I don't think the 50% SV for the (obviously) slower part is a problem here.
[Normal]As requested I don't post every stupid slider, pattern and stuff that looks "weird". I fixed those patterns and sliders but the map is (and plays) 99% the same as before.
Download:
ZUN - Judgement in the Sixtieth Year ~ Fate of Sixty Years (DarkDunskin) [Normal fix].osuNow to the actual mod:
HP Drain: 4
AR: 6
OD: 4
00:43:558 (4) - this *might* be a problem with the scorebar-skin so consider selecting everything between 00:33:431 - 01:00:183 and moving it down 2-3 grids @lvl3
01:14:704 (2) - add clap here
01:14:895 (1) - remove clap from beginning, add clap on ending
02:01:137 (4) - replace clap on ending with whistle
[Hard]Some parts of this map are really fun to play...others are not. Overall this map is, in it's current state, playable (FC 99%+ 1st try so no problem here). I suggest spicing up/correcting some parts by mapping rhythm and dominant instruments at the same time (marked
red) and use some more (repeating) sliders to bring the overall score back in line.
00:38:782 (X) - add note here
00:41:074 (1,2) - use slider instead, preferable "v" or "m" shape to map melody+beat: http://puu.sh/393M
423,234,41074,6,0,B|378:201|392:144|392:144|338:169|289:136,1,200
00:42:603 (5,6) - ^
00:45:851 (X) - add note
00:46:234 (X) - add note
00:46:616 (2,3) - replace with slider
00:47:189 (3,4) - replace with one slider each (use the red ticks of the circles as slider endings): http://puu.sh/394r00:59:801 (5,6,7) - Maybe replace by 1x repeat slider
01:12:602 (1) to 01:35:532 (4) - this part is very good and it plays fantastic imo. Still some suggestions:
01:14:704 (1,2,3,4) - slightly change this pattern to be less cramped:
http://puu.sh/396501:20:819 (1) - add 2 (maybe stacked) 1/4 notes after this (blue and white tick), adjust spacing afterwards
01:21:201 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/398Q01:46:232 (4) - delete all repeats here, end this slider on 01:47:570 (red tick)
01:47:952 (X) - add 1x repeat slider (red tick to red tick, turning point on white tick)
01:48:525 (X) - ^ (white tick to white tick, turning point on red tick)
01:49:289 (X) - add note01:50:436 (2) - ugly slider
360,192,106232,2,0,B|316:192|272:200|260:240|256:300|256:300|252:240|240:200|196:192|147:192,1,350
222,73,107952,2,0,B|190:113,2,50
290,73,108525,2,0,B|318:113,2,50
256,208,109289,5,0
256,48,109863,1,2
212,252,110436,2,0,B|260:288|304:248,1,100
02:07:825 (2,3) - Ctrl+R or avoid stacking (1) and (2) in a different way
02:15:850 (6,7) - ^
02:25:977 (4) - ugly slider
(code below)
02:27:124 (5) - use a 1x repeat slider from red tick to red tick instead: http://puu.sh/395r
02:28:079 (7) - use slider from previous red tick to this circle instead: http://puu.sh/395B226,284,145977,2,4,B|172:266|160:214|160:214|110:171|44:202|13:271|59:305,1,300,4|0
180,355,146933,2,0,B|231:394|284:345,2,100
226,302,147506,1,0
296,284,147697,2,0,B|325:233|377:233|377:233|429:233|461:179,1,200
03:04:957 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing
03:09:926 (6,7) - I don't like those slider+circle 1/4 combos if your general spacing is anything else but 1,0x. With your 0,7x spacing this looks weird, is hard to read and therefore plays like $%&# imo. Either use 3 circles (triplets) or a 1x repeat slider (to avoid inflating overall score).
03:13:747 (8,9) - ^
03:16:518 (1) - end on 03:20:626
03:21:199 (1) - delete, use 1x repeat slider from big white tick (03:21:008) to following white tick
03:21:963 (3) - ^, use 1x repeat slider from white tick (03:21:772) to white tick03:27:695 (1,2) - use slider instead
03:28:651 (3,4) - ^
03:29:797 (1) - shorten by 1 repeat, move to 03:30:179, add note @03:29:79703:39:351 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - don't waste such a great beat-placement with boring random circles! Use sliders for (2,3); (4,1) and (2,3) as those notes have the perfect timeline distance to form a symmetric pattern.03:42:409 (4,1) - use slider instead
03:43:746 (4) - remove 2 repeats, fix ugly-ness
03:44:320 (X) - add stacked note
03:44:511 (X) - ^
449,256,218969,6,0,B|396:220|414:166,1,100,0|8
368,112,219351,2,0,B|312:80|264:112|256:168|256:168|248:112|200:80|144:112,1,300
183,193,220498,2,0,B|205:261|256:249|305:265|330:192,1,200
384,264,221453,2,0,B|328:352|184:352|128:264,1,300
256,208,222409,6,0,B|247:153|189:139,1,100
76,220,222982,1,8
216,220,223364,1,8
348,174,223746,2,8,B|382:217|348:266,2,100
296,220,224320,1,0
296,220,224511,1,0
296,220,224702,2,8,B|240:220,4,50
03:48:715 (3,4) - use 1x repeat slider instead
03:49:288 (6,7,8) - use 4x repeat slider or maybe a "triplet going into 1x repeat slider" here:
http://puu.sh/39b503:53:300 (2,3) - same as 03:48:715 (3,4)
03:53:874 (5,6,7) - same as 03:49:288 (6,7,8)
03:56:167 (2,3,4,5,6) - not quite sure what to do with this...maybe just turn this into a "boring" stream (and people will love you for this...)
03:59:224 (X) - add note
04:08:396 (1) - Maybe split this into several seperate repeating sliders (combos are just to show seperation):
http://puu.sh/39bFSorry if this seems a bit much
After you fixed all the weird beat placements you should still rework the "boring", "plain" or "ugly" parts by using the exact same notes but with different (interesting) placements.
~star
