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Hadise - Dum Tek Tek

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Tony
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Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7 februarie 2011 at 07:26:40

Artist: Hadise
Title: Dum Tek Tek
Source: Eurovision Song Contest 2009
Tags: Turkey Oriental Pop
BPM: 115
Filesize: 2888kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,95 stars, 178 notes)
  2. Hard (4,66 stars, 353 notes)
  3. Normal (3,23 stars, 220 notes)
Download: Hadise - Dum Tek Tek
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I <3 this song !!!! enjoy
ready for ranking!
Last edited by Tony , edited 38 times in total.
Puskin
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Joined May 2010
Puskin
Star
miss_dior
miss_dior
cool map
;)
vladutz65
6 posts
Joined July 2010
vladutz65
and another star
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
Oh hey :)

[General]
Mp3 is 320Kbps. The allowed range is 128-192.
Delete osb file from the song folder if you won't make a sb.
Preview points are not set. You can do it in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.

[Easy]
This might look a bit nazi *shy*
Some notes are not snapped. Go Timing -> Resnap All Notes and then check it again.
00:12:687 (5) - 1 grid up?
00:16:339 (10) - 1 grid right?
00:18:948 (5) - 1 grid right?
00:16:861 (1) - this combo is way too long. Try to keep them not longer than 9-10 notes if possible.
00:31:470 (20) - 1 grid right?
00:37:731 (23) - 1 grid down?
01:23:644 (7) - 1 grid up?

[Normal]
Some notes are not snapped. Go Timing -> Resnap All Notes and then check it again.
00:28:078 (1) - this combo is kinda long. Split it.

[Insane]
Some notes are not snapped. Go Timing -> Resnap All Notes and then check it again.
Change it's name from [Insane] to [Hard] since it's kinda easy.

Not bad, star. Good luck ;)
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony
changes made! thanks for your mod!
-libili
-libili
Star
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
for an offset, i got 162, since 165 sounds a little late towards the end of the song
_Angel
106 posts
Joined May 2010
_Angel
star
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Black circles are not allowed.
I'm strongly recomending you to avoid blue ticks on Normal difficulty

[Normal]
00:33:553 (7) - New combo
00:43:988 (1) - add finish
01:09:031 (1) - ^


Spacing is kinda random on Hard diff.
VulpiXXX_old
VulpiXXX_old
cool map 10 star :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
warwolf
42 posts
Joined September 2010
warwolf
Star
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
[General]
Lower hitsound volume for all diffs a tiny bit.

[Easy]
Please note Easy maps should always be snapped to ONE distance setting. I really suggest you fix this.

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:18:946 (5) - New Combo
00:23:120 (8) - New combo
00:31:468 (4) - New combo
00:37:468 (10) - New combo
01:09:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Remove whistle, and add claps. :> Sounds better IMO
01:21:555 (4) - New combo
01:23:642 (9) - New Combo
01:27:816 (6) - Clap on start/end
01:31:990 (5) - New combo
01:35:903 (2) - New Combo
01:37:990 (4) - New Combo
02:22:077 (3) - New Combo
02:43:990 (3) - Look closely, its not aligned properly.
02:46:077 (7) - New Combo
02:54:424 (7) - New Combo
02:58:598 (4) - New Combo

Nice diff :>

[Hard]
01:38:511 (1) - End spinner on 01:41:120 and move slider to middle then remap fix spacing of rest :>
02:26:250 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try and make some jumps with in this section! Jumps fit the music! its a hard, dont be scared to make some jumps :>
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
By Mod Request:

General
Offset: 182 (+18)
Snap the preview timing point after that.
Add some kiai time.

[Easy]
Use a constant Distance Spacing for each of the combos. (1.5 seems fine)
It just seems a bit random in some places.

[Normal]
00:37:486 (10) - new combo
00:53:399 (3,4,5,6) - follow the formation of (1,2) and spacing
00:55:486 (7,8,9) - make sure these are directly in the middle
01:20:529 (2) - 1 grid up (make the others in the combo follow)
01:29:660 (4,5) - 1 grid to the right
01:55:486 (6,7) - 2 grids down
02:44:008 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as 00:53:399 and 00:55:486

[Hard]
same as easy

Star!!
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
General : pls insert Source in song set up & add some kiai time or at least fountain :3

Normal
00 09 055 down 1 grid
00 11 499 ^
00:37:486 new combo
01 22 598 ^
01 31 990 ^

Hard

00 55 468 new combo
01 07 990 ^
01 06 337^
01 22 337 ^
01 55 990 ^
02 16 859 ^
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony

Xeno32 wrote:

[General]
Lower hitsound volume for all diffs a tiny bit. Fixed!

[Easy]
Please note Easy maps should always be snapped to ONE distance setting. I really suggest you fix this.
1.5 seems great

[Normal]
00:18:946 (5) - New Combo Fixed!
00:23:120 (8) - New combo Fixed!
00:31:468 (4) - New combo Fixed!
00:37:468 (10) - New combo Fixed!
01:09:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Remove whistle, and add claps. :> Sounds better IMO Fixed!
01:21:555 (4) - New combo Fixed!
01:23:642 (9) - New Combo Fixed!
01:27:816 (6) - Clap on start/end Fixed!
01:31:990 (5) - New combo Fixed!
01:35:903 (2) - New Combo Fixed!
01:37:990 (4) - New Combo Fixed!
02:22:077 (3) - New Combo Fixed!
02:43:990 (3) - Look closely, its not aligned properly. Fixed!(thanks a lot)
02:46:077 (7) - New Combo Fixed!
02:54:424 (7) - New Combo Fixed!
02:58:598 (4) - New Combo Fixed!

Nice diff :>

[Hard]
01:38:511 (1) - End spinner on 01:41:120(Nah! and move slider to middle then remap fix spacing of rest :> Fixed!
02:26:250 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try and make some jumps with in this section! Jumps fit the music! its a hard, dont be scared to make some jumps :> Fixed!
thank you for modding! :)
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

General
Offset: 182 (+18) Fixed!
Snap the preview timing point after that.
Add some kiai time.Fixed!

[Easy]
Use a constant Distance Spacing for each of the combos. (1.5 seems fine)
It just seems a bit random in some places. Fixed!

[Normal]
00:37:486 (10) - new combo Fixed!
00:53:399 (3,4,5,6) - follow the formation of (1,2) and spacing Fixed!
00:55:486 (7,8,9) - make sure these are directly in the middleFixed!
01:20:529 (2) - 1 grid up (make the others in the combo follow)Fixed!
01:29:660 (4,5) - 1 grid to the rightFixed!
01:55:486 (6,7) - 2 grids downFixed!
02:44:008 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as 00:53:399 and 00:55:486 Fixed!

[Hard]
same as easyFixed! Somehow

Star!!
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony

artpiggo wrote:

General : pls insert Source in song set up & add some kiai time or at least fountain :3 Fixed!

Normal
00 09 055 down 1 grid Fixed!
00 11 499 ^ Fixed!
00:37:486 new combo Fixed!
01 22 598 ^ Fixed!
01 31 990 ^ Fixed!

Hard

00 55 468 new combo Fixed!
01 07 990 ^ Fixed!
01 06 337^ Fixed!
01 22 337 ^ Fixed!
01 55 990 ^ Fixed!
02 16 859 ^ Fixed!
ReVeNg3r
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ReVeNg3r
^.^
Aleks719
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Aleks719
General
Remove "Dum Tek Tek" from tags.

Hard
00:33:573 (1) - remove clap from the end, add finish to the start of slider
00:35:660 (2) - add finish to the start of slider
01:08:008 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:20:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where claps? You made it specially? Specially for what?
01:23:660 (1,2,3) - add finishes
01:34:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - so, this pattern is copy of 1st and 2nd suggestions. Fix them too.

Normal
good

Easy
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
or 1.5x ? fix please
Where your whistles? >. <
Add whistles please, only claps is annoying

So, this is a easy. Usually we use distance snap in easy, fix please:
00:12:703 (1,2) - spacing (too far)
00:23:138 (4,1) - ^ (too far)
00:52:355 (1,2) - ^ (too close)
01:52:877 (1,2) - ^ (too close)
02:16:877 (4,1,1) - ^ (too far/close)
02:24:181 (1,1) - ^ (too far)
02:51:312 (1,2) - ^ (too close)


Star, very nice.
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Remove "Dum Tek Tek" from tags.

Hard
00:33:573 (1) - remove clap from the end, add finish to the start of slider
00:35:660 (2) - add finish to the start of slider
01:08:008 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:20:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where claps? You made it specially? Specially for what?
01:23:660 (1,2,3) - add finishes
01:34:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - so, this pattern is copy of 1st and 2nd suggestions. Fix them too.

Normal
good

Easy
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
or 1.5x ? fix please
Where your whistles? >. <
Add whistles please, only claps is annoying

So, this is a easy. Usually we use distance snap in easy, fix please:
00:12:703 (1,2) - spacing (too far)
00:23:138 (4,1) - ^ (too far)
00:52:355 (1,2) - ^ (too close)
01:52:877 (1,2) - ^ (too close)
02:16:877 (4,1,1) - ^ (too far/close)
02:24:181 (1,1) - ^ (too far)
02:51:312 (1,2) - ^ (too close)


Star, very nice.
~FIXED~!
theowest
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theowest
ohai thar

letz begin with mah awesome mod!

EASY:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:43:486: Move the inherited timing section with the kai mode to 00:44:008
00:44:008 Finish hitsound.
01:16:095 Let this inherited timing begin at 01:16:355 and 01:16:355 begins at 01:16:877
01:39:834 make the spinner begin at 01:40:355, make sure to drag it down a bit so it isn't just only moved.
01:44:008 Same as the first. Move the inherited timing section here: 01:44:529. The kai mode must begin where the big sound comes in y'know..? ;D
01:44:529 Finish hitsound at that beat too.
02:16:616 Move the inherited timing section like before to 02:16:877 and the one at 02:16:877 to 02:17:399
02:17:660 Make a new inherited timing section with 4 left keyboard keys presses to the left so the volume goes down. (In the timing setup)
02:26:008 4 right keyboard presses to the right so the volume goes up. (In the timing setup)
02:34:355 Move this inherited timing to 02:34:616
02:34:616 Finish hitsound again!
02:38:790-02:42:442 Add claps? (1,2,3,4,5 and 6)
02:47:138 ^ same as above
02:59:138 Here should the 02:59:660 timing section be.

Other than that stuff it is very good! :D

NORMAL:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:44:008 Here shall the inherited timing start + finish hitsound!
01:16:355 Move the inherited timing sections like in Easy
01:40:355 Move the spinner live in Easy
01:44:529 Start of inherited timing + finish hitsound.
02:16:877 Let this inherited timing begin at 01:16:355 and 01:16:355 begins at 01:16:877
02:17:660 Make a new inherited timing section with 4 left keyboard keys presses to the left so the volume goes down. (In the timing setup)
02:26:008 4 right keyboard presses to the right so the volume goes up. (In the timing setup)
02:34:616 Inherited timing here + finish hitsound.
02:59:138 is where the last inherited timing section should be.

This is very good! Keep it up! :D

HARD:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:44:008 inherited timing like all the other diffs y'know + finish hitsound..
01:00:703 Hard doesn't need that break. ;D When it's harder, it's also more beats to play and that includes less breaks. (This is just really up to you if you want..)
01:16:355 move the inherited timing sections like before in the other diffs.
01:44:529 timing section here + finish hitsound.
02:16:877 move the inherited timing sections like before in the other diffs. 1,2,3 should be cowered in kai.
02:17:660 lower volume like the other diffs. 4 key presses with your left key y'know. ;D
02:26:008 higher volume 4 key presses from being low. just like before.
02:34:616 finish hitsound + inherited timing section just like the others.
02:59:138 last inherited timing section moved here.

This beatmap looks very good! I'm very pleased what I have seen so far and this could very well be ranked soon! :D

STAR!!
Last edited by theowest , edited 1 time in total.
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony

theowest wrote:

ohai thar

letz begin with mah awesome mod!

EASY:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:43:486: Move the inherited timing section with the kai mode to 00:44:008
00:44:008 Finish hitsound.
01:16:095 Let this inherited timing begin at 01:16:355 and 01:16:355 begins at 01:16:877
01:39:834 make the spinner begin at 01:40:355, make sure to drag it down a bit so it isn't just only moved.
01:44:008 Same as the first. Move the inherited timing section here: 01:44:529. The kai mode must begin where the big sound comes in y'know..? ;D
01:44:529 Finish hitsound at that beat too.
02:16:616 Move the inherited timing section like before to 02:16:877 and the one at 02:16:877 to 02:17:399
02:17:660 Make a new inherited timing section with 4 left keyboard keys presses to the left so the volume goes down. (In the timing setup)
02:26:008 4 right keyboard presses to the right so the volume goes up. (In the timing setup)
02:34:355 Move this inherited timing to 02:34:616
02:34:616 Finish hitsound again!
02:38:790-02:42:442 Add claps? (1,2,3,4,5 and 6)
02:47:138 ^ same as above
02:59:138 Here should the 02:59:660 timing section be.

Other than that stuff it is very good! :D

NORMAL:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:44:008 Here shall the inherited timing start + finish hitsound!
01:16:355 Move the inherited timing sections like in Easy
01:40:355 Move the spinner live in Easy
01:44:529 Start of inherited timing + finish hitsound.
02:16:877 Let this inherited timing begin at 01:16:355 and 01:16:355 begins at 01:16:877
02:17:660 Make a new inherited timing section with 4 left keyboard keys presses to the left so the volume goes down. (In the timing setup)
02:26:008 4 right keyboard presses to the right so the volume goes up. (In the timing setup)
02:34:616 Inherited timing here + finish hitsound.
02:59:138 is where the last inherited timing section should be.

This is very good! Keep it up! :D

HARD:

00:08:529 Finish hitsound
00:44:008 inherited timing like all the other diffs y'know + finish hitsound..
01:00:703 Hard doesn't need that break. ;D When it's harder, it's also more beats to play and that includes less breaks. (This is just really up to you if you want..)
01:16:355 move the inherited timing sections like before in the other diffs.
01:44:529 timing section here + finish hitsound.
02:16:877 move the inherited timing sections like before in the other diffs. 1,2,3 should be cowered in kai.
02:17:660 lower volume like the other diffs. 4 key presses with your left key y'know. ;D
02:26:008 higher volume 4 key presses from being low. just like before.
02:34:616 finish hitsound + inherited timing section just like the others.
02:59:138 last inherited timing section moved here.

This beatmap looks very good! I'm very pleased what I have seen so far and this could very well be ranked soon! :D

STAR!!
All Fixed~
Great mod! Thanks for encouraging me
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
EASY
Fine~

Normal
00:28:095 (1) - Move this a bit further
00:33:573 (4) - New combo
00:45:051 (2) - Move this further from the previous note
00:49:225 (2) - ^
00:57:573 (2) - ^
02:26:268 (2) - ^
02:27:312 (3) - ^
02:29:399 (5,6,7) - ^
02:30:964 (2) - ^
02:31:486 (3) - ^
Some other parts need to be fixed too~

Hard
Fine~
____________________________________
Star~
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony

DragonSparta wrote:

EASY
Fine~

Normal
00:28:095 (1) - Move this a bit further
00:33:573 (4) - New combo
00:45:051 (2) - Move this further from the previous note
00:49:225 (2) - ^
00:57:573 (2) - ^
02:26:268 (2) - ^
02:27:312 (3) - ^
02:29:399 (5,6,7) - ^
02:30:964 (2) - ^
02:31:486 (3) - ^
Some other parts need to be fixed too~

Hard
Fine~
____________________________________
Star~
Awsome mod! All Fixed, thanks :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi hi

Easy
00:47:138 (4) - Move 2 grid up? Sorry for nazi
02:17:921 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spammerrrrrrrrr. Remove new combo of 02:20:008 (1,1,1) please
02:27:312 (3) - Remove whistle and finish, otherwise, the sound is crazy
02:28:355 (1) - Move further away from 02:26:790 (2) to avoiding some overlapping
02:31:486 (1) - Remove whistle

Normal
00:18:964 (1,2) - Try combine this into one slider, since 00:19:355 (2) are place in blue ticks
01:21:573 (1,2) - Again, combine this into one slider, because 01:21:964 (2) are place in blue ticks. This is getting easier to read for average player if you do this
01:34:095 (1) - Wave slider is kinda ugly, please re-arrange those slider and make it prettier
01:36:181 (2) - ^
02:33:573 (6,7,8) - Move 1 grid left? Naziiiiiiii

Hard
00:18:964 (1) - Ugly slider
00:21:051 (1) - ^
01:01:747 (1,1,1) - Please remove this combo, it's a combo spammer
01:32:008 (1) - Move further away from 01:30:442 (1)? To prevent any overlapping?
02:20:008 (1) - Remove new combo, to prevent combo spam
02:24:181 (1) - ^

Star4u
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
all fixed~
thanks! :)
Gotori
81 posts
Joined September 2010
Gotori
star
Byenkutzyka
1 post
Joined October 2010
Byenkutzyka
Nice map! Star ^_^
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
[General]

Offset to 190
I prefer you to use grid level 3. it's up to you
there are so many notes out of shape
(ex:easy 00:27:826 (2,3,5,6) should be in one straight line, and yours arent.
using grid level 3 will solve this problem.

[Easy]
I wonder why all notes are not distance snapped (actually it is, but its x1.5 distance snapped. not a real problem)
no matter how it looks (i agree x1.5 looks better), x 1.5 distance snap is kinda hard for beginners tho.


00:18:450(4,5) : down some grid (I wont nazi mode anymore)
00:33:581 (1,2) : I would put these sliders like this : http://cfile221.uf.daum.net/image/181E5 ... 9E62019851
01:13:223 (1) : down some grid
02:26:798 (2) this overlaps the next slider, move the slider or this to some else

Remember to use grid level 3 and replace all of your notes. there are too many circles out of shape.


[Normal]
same as easy, grid level 3.
Too many notes are not distance snapped. use distance snap

00;15:834 (7,1) others are kinda okay even it's not distane snapped, this jump is too far for normal
00:50:268 (3) making this slider flat would look better.

Same as easy, no major problem but grid level and distance snap, using distance snap and grid level 3 is
strongly recommended to your map.



[Hard]

actually it was good map,

but same here, use grid level 3, this feels mu~ch better then grid level 4.
there are too many 1~2grid out of shaped circles.





Nice try, and have a star
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
~Most of them Fixed!~ :D
Piotrekol
1,002 posts
Joined March 2010
Piotrekol
~star
Mastodonio
1,118 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
Easy:
00:23:146 - maybe you should make here one more repeat moment in this slider till - 00:24:711?
01:25:233 - I think it will be better if you add here a circle
Can't say more about this difficulty - nicely done ;)

Normal:
02:16:885 - 02:17:407 - put these 3 circles 1 grid down
That is all what I can say about this difficulty too :) Good job!

Hard:
00:08:276 - put a circle here

That is all what I can say! Nice song,and I hope it will be ranked soon! Star!
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
Most of them fixed~ Thanks :)
Kasen
37 posts
Joined April 2009
Kasen
Hi
I checked all diff, easy and normal are fine. I have some sugestion for hard.

00:56:016 (3) - 1 grid to right.
01:00:711 ~ 01:16:885 - this part sound better if you put more claps.
01:21:581 (5) - extense the slider to blue line.
01:22:103 (6) - delete this note.

Thats all i think, is a great map.
Star
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
(lol'd me and james modded at the same time)

i have to say your mp3 is not the nicest, its a 128kbps and a average one too, i would really like you to get a better one, but i guess you dont have to :/

Easy

pretty solid so just a combo mos mostly for you to look at

00:37:755 (3) - new combo to help follow your vocal pattern
01:23:668 (4) - new combo again to follow your pattern
01:38:276 (3) - new combo for same reason ;p
02:58:624 (1,2,3) - only a tiny thing but (3) need to be a little closer to (2) so these notes have the same timing and spacing

Normal
01:17:407 (1,2) - really really bad jump, the jump here feels so odd because every single time this timing is used you use a overlap spacing, also later in the same combo you use that same overlap spacing, i really advise you to fix this by giving it the same spacing as you have at (2,3) of this same combo
01:56:016 (7) - new combo to follow your pattern ;p
01:51:842 (4,5,6) - give this the same spacing as 02:00:189 (4,5,6) - so its consistent and flows better
02:16:885 (7,8,9) - tiny thing with the spacing inconsistent again, fix these the same as i said above ;p
02:29:407 (5,6,7) - give these the closer spacing like i pointed out above too
02:33:581 (6,7,8) - same
02:58:624 (1,2,3) - same

ok you dont have to fix this, but im just letting you kno about it and hope you might think about it, patterns like 01:28:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you look close they have 2 spacings rather than one (1,2) is different then (2,3). it would look much nicer if you insted gave these patterns the same spacing, it happens quite a few times in the map so just have a look through the map, its your choice to fix them or not, but it really would be good if you did

Hard
00:59:668 (4) - new combo to keep your pattern, or take the newcombo off 00:51:320 (1)
01:51:841 (1) - again either remove the new combo here or add a new combo to 02:00:189 (4)

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overall the maps are solid but abit samey, still solid so good job :P
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
(jericho modding the map at the same time as me, prob get 2 repeated posts :P)

-Move the breaks back so they begin when the kiai ends? (you can drag the start/end of the breaks)
-You don't need 'Eurovision 2009 Hadise' in tags as they are already in the source/artist

Easy:
The map is very linear and gets kind of dull to play after a while, you might want to try to think of some new creative patterns to add to it to keep it interesting. No technical errors though

Normal:
-Why keep this difficulty as the only one with whistles? They go well with the song
-Just some small design issues to look over
00:28:885 (3,4,5) - minor thing but if you look at things like these you can see the spacing isn't equal (space 4-5 out slightly more) Go through and check all of these if you have time to
00:45:059 (2,3) - don't overlap?
00:48:190 (1) - move up slightly so it doesn't touch 4?
01:18:972 (4,5,6) - same as mentioned earlier
01:33:059 (3,1) - space out more
01:47:668 (1) - new combo isn't needed
01:56:016 (7,1) - space out more

Hard:
01:35:407 (4,1) - spacing
02:16:885 (1) - new combo on stuff like this isn't needed unless they are jumps
02:50:276 (1) - ^

The maps are pretty well done, the main problem at the moment is they stick to straight lines so much and they won't keep the player entertained for the entire time. Otherwise not too much to complain about
Deserves a star~
Tony
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Tony
Thanks u2 for modding! most of them fixed~
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Hard]
00:01:363 (1,2) - right 1 grid
00:44:016 (1,2) - left 1 grid
00:55:494 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
02:26:798 (2,2,2,2) - uneven spacing... all left 1 grid?
02:46:233 (1,2,3) - ^, (3) left 2 grids?

[Normal]
00:33:581 (1,3) - better make them in the same shape?
00:54:450 (5,6,...) - [Nazi] to fix the uneven spacing, all notes till break right 1 grid
01:09:859 (1,2,3) - left 1 grid
01:51:842 (2,4,6) - I think jericho has mentiond' this, uneven spacing o_o
02:13:755 (1,2,3,4...) - The overall feeling of this map is quite linear, so I expect (4,1) is vertical. all left 1 grid?

Pretty good spacing (yet you'll have to pay more attention to maintain even spacing), nice sounding, star~
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wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Hard]
00:01:363 (1,2) - right 1 grid
00:44:016 (1,2) - left 1 grid
00:55:494 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
02:26:798 (2,2,2,2) - uneven spacing... all left 1 grid?
02:46:233 (1,2,3) - ^, (3) left 2 grids?

[Normal]
00:33:581 (1,3) - better make them in the same shape?
00:54:450 (5,6,...) - [Nazi] to fix the uneven spacing, all notes till break right 1 grid
01:09:859 (1,2,3) - left 1 grid
01:51:842 (2,4,6) - I think jericho has mentiond' this, uneven spacing o_o
02:13:755 (1,2,3,4...) - The overall feeling of this map is quite linear, so I expect (4,1) is vertical. all left 1 grid?

Pretty good spacing (yet you'll have to pay more attention to maintain even spacing), nice sounding, star~



double posted
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Tony
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Tony
Fixed~Fixed~and Fixed~
senaya
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senaya
I looks a lot better now.

[Hard]
00:45:059 (1) - move this 1 grid down so it will be in one line witrh 00:44:798 (3)

That's all I could notice. Good job and good luck ;)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
I double posted but you don't need to give me double kd :/
Armin
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Armin
[General]

*Optimize the offset: +5ms~ Don't forget to resnap all notes
* Recalculate slider lenghts in Normal and Hard, then recheck manually all sliders


All is fine, simple map with an enjoyable rhythm. Fix this and I'll bubble the map
Rukario
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Joined May 2009
Rukario
Easy:
00:39:842 (1) - Start this spinner one 1/2 tick later so it's synced up with the lyrics.
01:39:842 (1) - This spinner starting so early makes not much sense to me. Put the start point here 01:40:624 -
02:01:233 - Start your break here. Like you did after the first chorus.
Pretty solid diff. Nothing to really complain about it was just kinda boring because it was the same 1/1 rythm all the time.

Normal:
01:00:711 - Start your break here like you did in Easy.
01:40:363 (1) - Start this spinner one 1/2 tick later so it's synced up with the lyrics.
01:57:059 (1) - New Combo.
02:01:233 - Start your break here. Like you did in Easy.
02:54:450 (1) - Remove new combo.

Hard:
Tick rate 2 like in Normal, please.
01:53:146 (2,3,4) - Please make this spacing consistent.
02:01:233 - Start your break here like you did in Easy.
02:58:624 (5) - New Combo.

Man this song is fun to listen to. Pretty nice map, only Easy is a bit too boring IMO.
Tony
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Tony
All fixed :)
Armin
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Armin
After another recheck, implementing some of Rukarioman's advices (that you forget to add) and changing again the offset, consider this bubbled.
Tony
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Tony
yeey! :) 10x!
Tufan
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Tufan
Nice map.
Raffey
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Joined October 2010
Raffey
I like it:)
Very good job=) ;)
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