1. Futsuu (2.42 stars, 279 notes)
2. Kantan (1.42 stars, 152 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3.44 stars, 566 notes)
4. Oni (4.79 stars, 783 notes)

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Yoratama wrote:

Wow Mastah Teko ngemap .
Nyoba mod ah kapan2 xD

Yoratama wrote:

Hi, Sesuai janji XD
Coba baca ini dulu atau baca sambil mod t/152263

General

- Artist sama Judul gak usah dimasukin ke tags Fixed
- Uncheck Widescreen SUpport di semua diff, taiko gak butuh itu. Fixed
- Uncheck countdown? itu sih terserah.Iya juga sih , gak butuh '-')
- Prefer Normal Hitsound, tapi itu terserah sih. Apakah ini berefek saat Play ? , but i did

Kantan

Kantan diff gak boleh ada 1/2 note kyak gini 00:05:875 (4,5) - , gak boleh lebih dari 1/1 . pake 1/1 pun gak boleh kebanyakan.yash , Cuz i didn't know about this , ty 4 usefull article link:)

Futsuu

Kebanyakan 1/2 nya, BPM nya tinggi soalnya, kalo low gak masalah
00:04:119 (1,2) - kat sama remove finisher, pake finisher cuma pas ada suara crash/cymbal/special. OK
00:05:396 - Finisher I don't think so , Karna gak ada suara kayak "crash/cymbal/special" like u said *maybe '-')
00:15:609 - ^ OK
00:25:821 - ^ OK
00:36:034 - ^ OK
00:46:247 - ^ gak ditambahin , maybe i just dislike it '-')/
01:06:672 - ^ OK
00:26:779 (1,2) - pindah 00:26:938 - lebih pas kalo ikutin vocal. (kalo di apply ini mod, terapin juga ke semua pattern yg punya suara sama) Moved , I like it .
00:28:055 - kat, ada snare drum OK
00:39:545 (36,37) - remove finisher Yap!
00:46:566 (54,55,56,57) - kddd lebih pas sama drum sound nya. That's Rights
00:49:119 (63,64,65,66) - kddk same reason ^ OK

Saran, Kalo kesusahan buat low diff, coba minta GD ke org lain, sambil belajar juga dikit2 XD "Must" Try it later , Makasih Saranya .

Muzukashii

Coba apply kan semua mod yg kamu apply sebelumnya ke diff ini dan selanjutya, biar consistent (cth: finisher)
1/4 nya overmapped, coba hapus beberapa 1/4, terlalu susah buat noob player yg baru belajar muzukashii. buat senior sih gak masalah.

00:10:183 - add kat Nope , aku mau beri istirahat karna sebelumny disitu ada 1/4 .
00:14:970 - don biar lebih enak, agak susah kalo kat doang. disitu juga ada bass drum nya. OK
00:18:969 - don, variasi, biar gak monoton. pas juga ada bass drum OK
00:21:034 - kat, snare drum OK
00:34:917 (71,73,74) - don, bass drum. OK
00:45:130 (138,140,141) - ^ OK
00:43:215 (128,129) - CTRL+G kalo ngikutin drum. OK
Ane Stop disini
Saran, buat muzukashii gak boleh kebanyakan 1/4 nya, sama jangan terlalu panjang, harus ada break buat istirahat diki (baca yg diatas tadi)
Cth: 00:41:141 - 00:43:375 - kepanjangan
01:39:864 - 01:46:247 - banget OK

Oni
Gak bisa pass ini diff, jadi gak bisa mod (Im bad xD)

Kalo lagi ada waktu boleh mod punya ane https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969496, gak juga gak apa2 kok xD
Hope it help
Good Luck!

jukkaduei wrote:

JUKKADUEI

From M4M request

Kantan

00:16:885 (18) - change to k
00:17:524 (20) - ^
00:19:758 (24) - ^
00:32:843 (42) - ^
01:11:141 (97) - ^

Futsuu

00:31:885 (15,17) - Change to k
00:44:651 (51) - ^

Muzukashii

00:39:066 (98) - Change to d
00:40:024 (105) - ^

Oni

Oni is already good

Good luck with your beatmap

Mihaugoku wrote:

Sorry, if the mod is bad, i'm just a beginner!
Mod from the Queue

[Kantan]
00:42:417 (56) - if the sound follows the vocal, maybe k OK.
00:44:332 (58,59,60) - this should probably end with a d for the same reason as above OK

[Futsuu]
Looks fine to me!

[Muzukashii]
00:29:412 (36) - maybe delete and change 00:29:492 (37) to k? Yep! . It's make the sound better
00:34:518 (69) - delete too? OC
00:39:625 (103) - and maybe this too OK

[Oni]
This diff seems awkward for me overall.
01:00:928 (437,438,439,440,441,442) - i really don't like this pattern Actually me too , But i don't have an idea to change it , maybe later .

I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day!

Kasha wrote:

From my queue! \o/

These are suggestions, you don't need to change them if you don't want to.

[Kantan]

00:20:715 (26) - I suggest turning this into a don. OK

01:10:502 (96) - Turn this into a kat, and turn this into a kat as well at 01:15:290 (104) - Sounds Better

[Futsuu]

00:50:555 (69) - I think it sounds better as a kat. u r right .

00:53:268 (78) - remove, then move this note 00:53:109 (77) - 00:53:268 Sorry i think it's fine cuz that have a bass sound .

01:26:300 (166) - Turn this into a kat. OK

[Muzukashii]

00:22:311 (90) - Turn this into a don. OK

00:44:651 (131) - Turn this into a kat. OK

[Oni]

00:04:997 (6) - This doesn't sound good, change this into a don. Sorry , it's absolutely have a drum sound .

00:48:800 (355) - Turn this into hitfinish. OK

01:01:247 (441) - Turn this into a kat. OK


For your first map, this is incredible!

Good luck!

ZTH wrote:

Hai~ From M4M request.

General

1. Your current background ratio is 1151 x 768. Change it to 1366 x 768 to exactly fit the 16:9 ratio. Change it later .
2. You might want to lower the hitsound volume because 100% is a bit too loud. (Maybe around 75~85%?) OK
3. Difficulty spread is questionable. You might want to see this page for difficulty spread.

Oni

1. 00:10:662 (47) - Move this note to 00:10:183, and delete 00:10:343 (46). Gives better flow and consistency on the vocals. Moved But doesn't delete
2. 00:12:896 (65) - Move this note to 00:12:736 and change to k. Again, gives better flow by matching the vocals. OK
3. 00:36:992 (262,263,264) - dkd sounds awkward. I would change to kdk or ddk for smoother flow. (00:37:151 (264) should be a k due to increased vocal/bg pitch) Fixed
4. 01:44:172 - Considering the pace of the song hasn't change, this long stream is quite overdone (feels out of place) in my opinion. If I were you, I would delete 01:44:891 (760) and change 01:44:811 (759) to k for better representation of the song. Sounds good . TY
   

Muzukashii

1. This diff is a bit on the harder side, considering there are almost no 2/1 breaks. I would put some few 2/1 breaks to be on the safer side.
2. 00:10:183 - This is the only place where you use a 2/1 break (which is random). You might want to place more of this in the other similar areas for consistency and difficulty spread.One place i placed a note *to keep the other*
3. 00:37:630 (86) - Move to 00:37:470 to follow the vocal. You did the same at 00:27:258, so trying to be consistent. weeps , a mistake , TY .
4. 01:23:109 (111,121) - These patterns flow a bit awkward. Try the image below (those new 1/4 pauses seem to deliver the flow better):
   Hmmm .
5. 01:42:417 (199) - change to d. k overpowers the song OK
6. 01:43:375 (207) - change to k ( and also change 01:43:694 (209) to d.) Matches the trumpet(?) instrument better. Sorry sir , Trumpet blow at 01:43:534 and 01:43:694
7. 01:44:970 (219) - again, change to d for the same reason. The vocal plz .

Futsuu

1. This diff, again, is on the harder side (some patterns are quite complex for futsuu level). You might want to put some few 3/1 breaks in there.
2. 00:04:119 (1,2) - No finishers? You put finishers on the other diffs. (Also, I prefer DD than KK. ) Fixed it
3. 00:05:396 to 00:14:332 -No major problems here but I am not really satisfied with your note usage. They feel a bit independent (doesn't follow) to the song and I feel like the notes can be better placed by focusing on the simple vocals. (Just my opinion.) Followed drums , cuz i love it .
4. 00:36:992 (30,31) - You placed these notes on a 1/1 tick, but here 00:26:939 (1,2), they are on a 1/2 tick. This is inconsistent so either change one of these patterns to follow the another. Whew , that's a mistake , TY
5. 01:37:311 to 01:45:928 - Ehhhhhh another part which I am not satisfied with your note usage. I would follow more on the trumpet(?) along with the simple, audible drum, because the current way it is mapped is too improvisational.Just *TY*

Kantan

1. You seem to put 4/1 breaks in the more intense part of the song. Try putting some few 4/1 breaks from 00:05:396 to 00:24:545? This diff seems to lack some. I think it had been many break times. But , i add 1
2. 00:46:247 to 00:55:502 -This calm part is denser than the intense part from 00:55:502 to 01:05:396. You might want to change the note density. (Usually, the more intense the song, the higher the note density.) Yeah , i made it before , but my friend suggested to me to take a make a break at that point
3. 01:16:885 (106,107,108,109,110) - Instead of kdkdd, try dkdkd or dkddd? Consistent with your upbeat/downbeat usage, which adds some flow. OK
4. 01:25:183 (119) - Minor but change to k? Sounds and plays better than the boring ddd. OK
   

A quite solid mapset (considering this is your first map). A bit concerned with the difficulty spread though (you might want to get more experienced modders on that). Anyways, if you focus and improve more on the flow and pattern arrangement, then this map is good to go.

GL~

ZTH wrote:

Wait a moment. This is exactly an authentic chart with some few modified elements. I am not sure if you are supposed to do this.

Ahmad Haris wrote:

ZTH wrote:

Wait a moment. This is exactly an authentic chart with some few modified elements. I am not sure if you are supposed to do this.

Uhh .
Sorry , i don't get it What do you mean .?

ZTH wrote:

Wait a moment. This is exactly an authentic chart with some few modified elements. I am not sure if you are supposed to do this.

situ malingin map orang laen terus diedit yah? `-`

Ahmad Haris wrote:

But if u have a source , would you like to send me one ?

_kumakichi wrote:

I guess you might want to take a look of these
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gWpxIcQf16Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHRm2zVPIis

But I do not question that you created it. The patterns are pretty intuitive and the resulting maps would not differ much among different mappers imo

good luck

Ahmad Haris wrote:

Hmm , that's right , i took it from there , but is it forbidden ?
sorry i have a small experienced at mapping world

raianshimuzu wrote:

Ahmad Haris wrote:

Hmm , that's right , i took it from there , but is it forbidden ?
sorry i have a small experienced at mapping world

itu emang dilarang. maling chart laen terus diedit. mending bikin ulang aja dari awal dengan kreatifitas dan imajinasi ente