Underforest wrote:

wtf i didn't notice it orz my mistake, sorry

Natsu wrote:

00:46:703 (1,2) - slightly awkward how you map to the drums then ignore them in favor or the violin all of a sudden yeah, I know, but is the only way to map this part without making it that empty, idk a long slider would be not that nice IMO, what do you suggest?

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

is my problme or something? i cant heard music of hitsound :/ I don't get what you mean o.O

[*] Remove -Long Version- on title But is the correct title
[*] add tag -> Parousia Bof2010 Cytus okay
[*]look one more time aumod I'll check it later
[*] Deity -> 01:04:515 (1,2,1,2) - make longer slider is better no the timing don't allow me to do that, also my rhythm is fine

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay 5ms about soft-hitfinish62.wav
   
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2. Please confirm whether you use all wav file once again

1. 00:01:453 (2) - add Nc. because please check Deity diff (and if you changed nc pattern please fix Human diff)
2. 01:45:106 (1,2) - why only not stack pattern ? i think stack pattern more better.
3. 03:38:026 (3) - same Deity diff. (and if you changed nc pattern please fix Human diff)
4. 04:36:875 (5) - 1ms unsnapped

1. 00:07:434 (1) - I understand that you are conscious of this slider blanket 00:05:233 (2) - but please wait. i think It is the object which I cannot confirm anymore. so 00:07:434 (1) - this slider try changed ”ctrl + h” more better flow!
   
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2. 00:26:600 (1) - really good slider. but there was a place to be worried about 00:27:188 - ~ 00:27:384 - this place why you used straight follow? i think changed more curve pattern better.
3. 00:34:110 (2) - i like this pattern. it's sugguestion.
4. 00:50:472 (4) - why not start nc pattern ?
5. 00:53:613 (6) - I think that you should move this 00:53:613 (6) - to the center of 00:52:985 (5) -
   
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6. 00:56:441 (3,4,1) - I think some these flows are dirty. so changed " 00:56:127 (1,2) - ctrl+g and 00:56:441 (3,4) - ctrl+g " ?
7. 02:23:195 (4) - There is no sound of the piano only in this place. so i think remove note more better rhythm.
8. 02:51:389 (1) - 04:36:875 (1) - more +1 repeat ?
9. 03:01:755 (8,1) - 04:47:241 (8) - swap nc ?
10. 03:07:567 (1) - 04:53:053 (1) - not need Nc imo
11. 03:14:320 (5) - add nc ?
12. 03:20:305 (1) - i think changed ctrl+g more better flow.
13. 03:38:026 (3) - It knows that there is a sound in this place, but thinks that you should do remove note because it is a too weak sound.
14. 03:54:466 - lol start monstrata part LOL
15. 04:36:875 (1) - slider end 1ms unsnapped.
16. 04:40:958 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - really fun
17. 04:59:807 (1,1) - why yellow color + yellow color lol
18. 05:00:121 (1) - lol hello Amnesia www

Satellite wrote:

Hello ~

[General]

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay 5ms about soft-hitfinish62.wavI'll ask first, tbh isn't meant to bring feedback >:
2. Please confirm whether you use all wav file once again fixed

[Demigod]

1. 00:01:453 (2) - add Nc. because please check Deity diff (and if you changed nc pattern please fix Human diff) done
2. 01:45:106 (1,2) - why only not stack pattern ? i think stack pattern more better. stack will be bored, this is more original and fun to read
3. 03:38:026 (3) - same Deity diff. (and if you changed nc pattern please fix Human diff) cool
4. 04:36:875 (5) - 1ms unsnapped k

[Deity]

1. 00:07:434 (1) - I understand that you are conscious of this slider blanket 00:05:233 (2) - but please wait. i think It is the object which I cannot confirm anymore. so 00:07:434 (1) - this slider try changed ”ctrl + h” more better flow! I really like my current one is the slow part with sliders so both ways are fine
   
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2. 00:26:600 (1) - really good slider. but there was a place to be worried about 00:27:188 - ~ 00:27:384 - this place why you used straight follow? i think changed more curve pattern better. the slider straight part don't have any meaning, only design and to be stacked with 00:26:434 (4) - that' sall
3. 00:34:110 (2) - i like this pattern. it's sugguestion. thank you
4. 00:50:472 (4) - why not start nc pattern ? sure thing
5. 00:53:613 (6) - I think that you should move this 00:53:613 (6) - to the center of 00:52:985 (5) - done
6. 00:56:441 (3,4,1) - I think some these flows are dirty. so changed " 00:56:127 (1,2) - ctrl+g and 00:56:441 (3,4) - ctrl+g " ? oh man, I really like my current flow and pattern, gonna keep it
7. 02:23:195 (4) - There is no sound of the piano only in this place. so i think remove note more better rhythm. yes
8. 02:51:389 (1) - 04:36:875 (1) - more +1 repeat ? yes
9. 03:01:755 (8,1) - 04:47:241 (8) - swap nc ? my current one follows the music better
10. 03:07:567 (1) - 04:53:053 (1) - not need Nc imo I like them and they fit those parts imo
11. 03:14:320 (5) - add nc ? I also think my current pattern is better
12. 03:20:305 (1) - i think changed ctrl+g more better flow. I think is basically the same
13. 03:38:026 (3) - It knows that there is a sound in this place, but thinks that you should do remove note because it is a too weak sound. yes, cool done
14. 03:54:466 - lol start monstrata part LOL I did monstrata before monstrata was a thing
15. 04:36:875 (1) - slider end 1ms unsnapped. k
16. 04:40:958 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - really fun thank you
17. 04:59:807 (1,1) - why yellow color + yellow color lol lol
18. 05:00:121 (1) - lol hello Amnesia www [/color]

Human diff looks fine to me. but There is something that I am worried about "StackLeniency" 0.2 is fine?

Good Luck!

pishifat wrote:

uh... i don't think you wanted to do that lol

Natsu wrote:

lol Enon your avatar so cute haha thanks for star~


BTW metadata: https://remywiki.com/Halcyon

Krah wrote:

Natsu wrote:

lol Enon your avatar so cute haha thanks for star~


BTW metadata: https://remywiki.com/Halcyon

Well the song also appear in https://diverse.direct/diverse-system/100sr-a013/ and there is no "long version"
If you ask me how xi wanted to name it matter more xD

Natsu wrote:

Krah wrote:

Well the song also appear in https://diverse.direct/diverse-system/100sr-a013/ and there is no "long version"
If you ask me how xi wanted to name it matter more xD

Are you sure is the long version of the song? I'll as to IamKwan or Alacat later to confirm it

Sulker wrote:

Well from looking at the release times between Parousia and Groundbreaking -BOF2010 COMPILATION ALBUM-, Parousia came after. So most likely xi changed the name in general due personal choice plus the fact, Halcyon started 2 minute short song in SDVX. Hence why it was named "Long vers.: in -BOF2010 COMPILATION ALBUM-, and soon after finally Halcyon in the Parousia album o3o.

Kroytz wrote:

Could include Diverse System into tags since that is his record label.
Also, BG has been used before :<

alacat wrote:

cute Natsu

General :
00:11:898 - The green section is not necessary. fixed
03:47:087 - unsnapped green section ?.? fixed

Deity :
01:37:881 (3,1,2) - try to move right this part for design like this ? done
02:38:824 (2,3) - I feel the flow is unnatural on jumps from here 02:38:352 (6,1) - prefer to use ctrl + g flow fixed
04:05:775 (1) - no hitsound to here ? :O I'm going to check this later
04:55:880 (4,1) - The slider is not good flow for stream part, How about this ? cool


Demigod :
02:22:096 (6) - ,02:22:567 (10) - Please add new combo for players to here, i feel it's hard to read stream if these are same colors. done
03:02:070 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have a sense of discomfort with this stream, try to follow the background sound like this ? if you notice there are two rhythms at this part, that's why I'm starting my streams in red, since the sounds are similars to 02:41:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but with 1/4 beats, so I think my current way is more close to the song
04:47:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same
03:33:419 (1,2,3) - same reason about combo color, it's better to add it from here 03:33:733 (2) - for reading. Fixed