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Kana Nishino - Darling

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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 8 de março de 2018 at 17:36:13

Artist: Kana Nishino
Title: Darling
Tags: Alexsander TheBenderGamer fabiojhon Hoen Marianna with love short ver version cut japan record award
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5055kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alex's Normal (1,96 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Marianna's Easy (1,31 stars, 71 notes)
  3. Marixia's Advanced (2,14 stars, 130 notes)
  4. My Dear (3,25 stars, 205 notes)
Download: Kana Nishino - Darling
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tag Stolen from Fii's mapset

red 2018 new d i f f
Last edited by Ataraxia , edited 86 times in total.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Mercusheigan
eae eae, M4M de volta xD

perae que eu vo fazendo devagar e vo dando muito edit D:

My Dear

SPOILER
00:06:547 (3) - blanket (sug: mid point 452, 80. end point 440, 128

00:14:047 (2) - blanket

00:14:797 (1) - blanket

00:15:359 (2,3) - ctrl+g soa melhor (vai ter que arrumar a pattern, tho)

00:19:859 (2) - se vc quebrar em 2, colocando 1 hit circle aqui e um halfbeat slider começando em 00:20:047 fica show

00:21:359 (2) - ^ msm coisa. o vocal começa no white tick, nao no red

00:25:859 (2) - bota um circle aqui, move esse slider pro white tick e transforma o slider de 00:26:422 (3) - em um hitcircle no red tick (to falando disso ó ali na timeline: http://puu.sh/ol231/d2fa9051dd.jpg)

continuamos em irc

2016-04-16 21:44 Mercusheigan: pronto
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: ativei
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: ai vai tar na pasta que você salvou o osu!
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: hm, blz
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: uma pasta chamada Chats
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: vamos ver se vai funcionar xD
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: ja deve ter a nossa conversa la agora
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: vai la so para testar
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: é ta mesmo
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: então partiu
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: vo começar pelo que ja tinha pego no forum post
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: 00:06:547 (3) - 
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: o blanket aqui da pra melhorar
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: sug: mid point 452, 80. end point 440, 128
2016-04-16 21:46 Ataraxia: lol
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: fica quaaase perfeito
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4947935
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: ah boa eu deixei tick azul apoirjaeir
2016-04-16 21:47 Mercusheigan: é entao lol
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4947939
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: assim esta good
2016-04-16 21:47 Mercusheigan: da pra melhorar mais vai :<
2016-04-16 21:48 Mercusheigan: bota o mid point mais pra esquerda
2016-04-16 21:48 Mercusheigan: ai fica bonitao
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: deve ser por que esta muito perto
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: eu vou aumentar o ds no geral aqui
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2yq/d35f92cea7.jpg
2016-04-16 21:50 Mercusheigan: nah n precisa
2016-04-16 21:50 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol2Bc/6938cef76e.jpg
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2FK/c381ecc774.jpg
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: acho que agora esta otimo
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: fico igual o seu ( e n aumentei DS
2016-04-16 21:51 Mercusheigan: ae show
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: falei q n precisa aumentar o DS :P
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: ok agora q vc passou na fase blanket 1
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: vem a fase blanket 2
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: 00:14:047 (2,1) - 
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: esses 2 aqui dava pra ficar mais arrumado
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: o 2 é facil, só brincar com o end dele
2016-04-16 21:54 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2Nj/9b868d8ffe.jpg
2016-04-16 21:54 Mercusheigan: nice, pode subir um pouco mais o end desse?
2016-04-16 21:54 Mercusheigan: nao se preocupa com o slider que vem dps
2016-04-16 21:55 Ataraxia: subi um quadradinho a mais
2016-04-16 21:55 Ataraxia: mas esta bom agora
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: show
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: 00:15:359 (2,3) - 
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: ctrl G soou melhor pra mim
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: nah, tipo
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: o flow desse mapa é linear
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: ele vai seguindo, nao fica bom por que nao combina com o mapa em geral em si
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: digo
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: nao no sentido da pattern ficar melhor
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: mas do som do circle com os sliders mais coeso
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: escuta em 25%
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: 00:15:547 (3) - 
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: o vocal começa aqui
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: aí é mais conveniente o slider começar aqui
2016-04-16 21:57 Ataraxia: ah, você quis dizer tipo começar com um circle é isso?
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: entendeu oq eu tava falando? xD
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: isso!
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: circle e depois slider
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: nao em relação da pattern
2016-04-16 21:58 Ataraxia: e por eu to seguindo o violao mas deixa eu ver
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: fica bom tb pq eles vao acabar em red tick
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: que é onde ta a polaridade do violao
2016-04-16 22:01 Ataraxia: do jeito que voce falou mesmo
2016-04-16 22:01 Ataraxia: vou ter que deixar assim
2016-04-16 22:02 Ataraxia: a nao achei uma solucao mais simples e daora
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: bom lol
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: vamos em frente
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: 00:19:859 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:03 Ataraxia: beleza
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: IMO, quebrava esse slider, botava 1 hitcirle na red tick
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: e um slider da white pro red
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: segue melhor o vocal e o violao, pq tem uma batida no violao no white tick
2016-04-16 22:04 Ataraxia: eu to seguindo a batida totalmente ai nessa parte
2016-04-16 22:04 Ataraxia: eu diria que ignorei praticamente o vocal e o violao
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: bom
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: e eu vou ter que fazer isso com o mapa todo coitado
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: aí a decisão eh tua quanto ao que seguir lol
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: é, se tu pegou uma linha.. mudar td eh foda
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: ah ye
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: mas fica o input quanto a isso :P
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: e igual o que você falou do control g
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: se eu colocar aquilo eu vou ter que coloca em tudo quase
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: mas enfim
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: continuando
2016-04-16 22:06 Mercusheigan: agr tpo
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: uma coisa q era interessante pensar sobre
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:23:047 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: sliders desse tipo
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: na real volta pro começo que é mais facil de mostrar
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:02:609 (1) - 
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: esses 2 aqui
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: e esses 2
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:04:109 (1,2) - 
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: o jeito que eles seguem do 1 e do 2
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: poderiam ser iguais, IMO
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: até pq a batida é igual
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: tendi
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: batida igual slider igual
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: é isso
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: ?
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: é
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: deixar a "caida" dele pro prox slider mais parecido
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: por questao de consistencia
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: agora mais pra frente
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: 00:26:422 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:10 Mercusheigan: esse slider aqui tem que se preocupar mais com o slider anterior do que com o da frente
2016-04-16 22:10 Mercusheigan: vc pode fazer isso arrumando o blanket do 00:25:859 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:11 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol3Pr/35a1db3fd6.jpg (isso que to falando)
2016-04-16 22:12 Ataraxia: 00:25:297 (1) -  fazer um blanket com 00:25:859 (2) -
2016-04-16 22:12 Ataraxia: é isso?
2016-04-16 22:12 Mercusheigan: s
2016-04-16 22:12 Mercusheigan: ai move o 3 pra +/- 302, 209
2016-04-16 22:13 Ataraxia: Done
2016-04-16 22:13 Ataraxia: n ficou mais ou menos mas chegou perto
2016-04-16 22:14 Mercusheigan: 00:27:922 (3,4) - 
2016-04-16 22:14 Mercusheigan: DS nessa regiao dava pra ficar mais consistente
2016-04-16 22:15 Mercusheigan: só o 3 que ta com "problema" mesmo
2016-04-16 22:15 Mercusheigan: pq ele ta com prev 1,52 e next 1,42
2016-04-16 22:16 Ataraxia: ah sim
2016-04-16 22:16 Ataraxia: agora tao iguais mesmo
2016-04-16 22:16 Mercusheigan: 00:29:422 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:16 Mercusheigan: bota o end point em 394, 185
2016-04-16 22:17 Mercusheigan: ai da uma melhorada no blanket
2016-04-16 22:18 Mercusheigan: ai se vc mudar, bota os 00:29:797 (1,2,3) - (seleciona td e move) em 463, 193
2016-04-16 22:18 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol4bY/b605193d35.jpg
2016-04-16 22:18 Ataraxia: assim esta bom?
2016-04-16 22:19 Mercusheigan: tenta fazer com que ele faça a curva certinho com o sliderend do outro
2016-04-16 22:20 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol4ge/ac48ed8ed0.jpg
2016-04-16 22:20 Ataraxia: think is good now
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: ai ta melhorzin
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: agora
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: seleciona as 3 notas seguintes
2016-04-16 22:21 Ataraxia: resnapa
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: e bota como se o slider tivesse continuado
2016-04-16 22:22 Mercusheigan: 464, 203 com esse blanket parece ficar bom
2016-04-16 22:22 Ataraxia: ah o  fazer blanket com o slider de tras?
2016-04-16 22:22 Mercusheigan: nao
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: seleciona esses 3
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: 00:29:797 (1,2,3) - 
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: e move pra 464, 203
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4s0/1abe2e28f6.jpg
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: isso aqui ó que to falando
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: erm ops
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: puush bugou
2016-04-16 22:25 Ataraxia: arfalire
2016-04-16 22:26 Mercusheigan: perae xo reiniciar a bagaça aqui q ferro td
2016-04-16 22:26 Ataraxia: aaah tendi]
2016-04-16 22:29 Mercusheigan: mas senhor saiu bugando td
2016-04-16 22:29 Mercusheigan: enfim lol
2016-04-16 22:30 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4948126
2016-04-16 22:30 Ataraxia: desse jeito que ficou
2016-04-16 22:30 Mercusheigan: nao nao
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: n eh isso nao
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: to falando disso ó
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4Lh/cc65d7e9b6.jpg
2016-04-16 22:32 Ataraxia: ah tendi
2016-04-16 22:32 Ataraxia: pronto, era simples apoerjaoeri mals a demora
2016-04-16 22:32 Mercusheigan: kkk
2016-04-16 22:32 Mercusheigan: da nd
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: meu puush fico louco tb
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: começo a dar upload na msm SS varias vezes >.>
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: 00:33:359 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:33 Ataraxia: ojaeoirjaeiojr lol
2016-04-16 22:34 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4VC/32e675b6c9.jpg
2016-04-16 22:34 Mercusheigan: arruma o blanket +/- assim
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: move o end to 3 pra 360, 308
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: ai ela já cai de cara com o 4, que fica massa
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: e fica facil de arrumar com o 1
2016-04-16 22:36 Ataraxia: sim, editado
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: 00:45:547 (4,5) - 
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: msm papo de antes
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: axo que faz mais sentido um slider e depois o circle
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: ai fica 2 circle, slider e 2 circle
2016-04-16 22:38 Ataraxia: nah, eu acho que assim esta otimo
2016-04-16 22:38 Mercusheigan: kk
2016-04-16 22:39 Ataraxia: mas parando para pensar
2016-04-16 22:39 Mercusheigan: se tiver em duvida
2016-04-16 22:40 Mercusheigan: escuta em 25%
2016-04-16 22:40 Mercusheigan: geralmente ajuda a solucionar o problema
2016-04-16 22:42 Mercusheigan: mas eh igual antes, se mudar aqui tem que mudar em todas as outras seções
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: eu vou ver
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: pode postar la
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: eu to arrumando tudo ja
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: ta
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: uma ultima coisa
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: é 01:06:734 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:44 Mercusheigan: se virar um reverse ia ficar legal 
2016-04-16 22:44 Mercusheigan: :D
2016-04-16 22:44 Ataraxia: mas nao existe nada no tick vermelho :s
2016-04-16 22:44 Ataraxia: 01:05:797 (1,1) -  e isso aqui é um blanket
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: só fica legal xD
2016-04-16 22:45 Ataraxia: beleza xd
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: vo postar lá
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: depois eu termino de dar mod nas 2 outras difs
2016-04-16 22:46 Ataraxia: Opa, valeu mano <3
2016-04-16 22:46 Mercusheigan: <33

Kitty's Normal

SPOILER
Nice sliderarts yo

00:10:297 (3) - NC this and RNC 00:11:797 (1) -
00:25:297 (4) - blanket could be improved
00:23:797 (1) - Should this really be NC? I mean the vocals are kinda the same from the previous combo :S

Dunno how I'd improve this even further, it's already quite awesome :D

Mariana's Easy

SPOILER
Vou ter que ser nazi e pegar os miiinimos detalhes

00:27:172 (2) - ta muito proximo do prox slider, mova para 255, 303

00:35:422 (2) - mesma justificativa, mova para 432, 186

00:41:797 (3) - blanket em volta do 2 dava pra melhorar um pouco

01:06:922 (3,1) - eles nao deveriam ser iguais a 01:05:797 (1,2) - em questão de angulo?

nice diff :o

eu volto pra dar mod nas outras 2 difs, desculpa lol pronto

Perdão pela demora! espero ter ajudado algo, boa sorte :D
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
As únicas coisas que eu não arrumei foram as coisas sobre blanket porque não faz a minima diferença ingame

:p
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
DeRandom Otaku
Ello ~~ Random person passing by

Went through the map in editor , Really neat map imo~

Dear :
  1. 00:30:734 (3) - add reverse
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - blanket could be better
  3. 00:49:109 (6,1) - ^
Kitty's Normal :
  1. 00:48:547 (3,1) - blanket could be better
also i m not so good at modding easy/normals~
Hope i helped owo

Good Luck!~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Ello ~~ Random person passing by

Went through the map in editor , Really neat map imo~

Dear :
  1. 00:30:734 (3) - add reverse This not to vocal t.t
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - blanket could be better not make much difference, but nice suggestion
  3. 00:49:109 (6,1) - ^ Sure

Good Luck!~
Thanks !
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Fixed all etc. DeRandom Otaku's mod because it's already blanket but used distance snap!
Thank you for mod~ <3

Upgrade! :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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368,148,25859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,26047,2,0,L|208:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,60,26797,2,0,L|124:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,27359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,252,27547,2,0,P|60:320|88:368,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,28297,6,0,P|199:300|192:251,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,28859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,168,29047,2,0,B|305:176|305:176|381:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,68,29797,5,2,0:0:0:0:
197,80,30172,2,0,P|153:144|225:268,1,200.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,348,31297,6,0,P|76:324|20:332,2,100.000000596046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,251,32422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,300,32797,2,0,P|352:276|408:284,2,100.000000596046,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,384,33922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,344,34297,6,0,P|488:276|396:180,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,100,35422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,172,35797,2,0,B|212:148|168:168|168:168|136:160|136:160|100:180|40:168,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,64,36922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,171,37297,6,0,L|74:283,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,328,38047,2,0,L|171:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,164,38797,2,0,P|316:152|372:172,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,39547,2,0,P|468:184|452:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40297,12,2,42172,0:0:0:0:
448,68,42922,5,2,0:0:0:0:
388,160,43297,6,0,P|344:112|340:48,2,100.000000596046,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,236,44422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,304,44797,2,0,P|316:288|256:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45547,2,0,L|232:196,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,46297,6,0,P|100:180|128:56,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,52,47797,2,0,P|268:108|264:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,48547,2,0,P|385:90|413:49,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,128,49297,6,0,L|500:260,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,244,50047,2,0,L|378:343,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,50797,2,0,P|256:244|264:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,51547,2,0,B|100:132|100:132|52:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,212,52297,6,0,B|68:228|88:276|88:276|148:272|148:272|160:364|264:368,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,53797,2,0,B|304:232|352:256|352:256|400:280|464:244,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,54922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,64,55297,6,0,B|408:20|324:44|300:100|300:100|240:60|240:116|160:72,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,56797,2,0,P|88:212|116:268,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,57359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,57547,2,0,B|272:292|272:292|316:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,344,58297,6,0,B|396:276|396:276|424:232,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,58859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,59047,2,0,P|416:140|424:84,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,59797,2,0,B|272:68|212:48|212:48|140:56|100:156|216:204,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,61297,6,0,P|220:284|272:244,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,62047,2,0,P|344:220|280:172,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,62797,2,0,L|220:80,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,44,63547,2,0,L|152:160,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,64297,6,0,B|108:268|172:256|172:256|140:300|172:364|172:364|208:340|280:356,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,65797,2,0,P|232:188|192:168,1,100.000000596046,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,56,66922,2,0,L|172:52,1,50.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,28,67297,5,6,0:0:0:0:
Mekki
1,793 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[Marianna's Easy]
  1. 00:08:797 (4) - Remove your NC combo here, doesn't fit your comboing pattern. NOTE: same here 00:11:797 (1) -
  2. 00:35:797 (1) - I don't hear a cymbal sound here for having a finish. Just remove it, it sounds useless. And same for NC, remove it from there too!
  3. 00:38:047 (2) - Movement is very umconfortable to play here, the position that (2) it is compared to (1) makes a bad flow, especially for beginners. Try using something softer like that > http://puu.sh/ooxcY/2bbfe86658.jpg
  4. 00:46:297 (1) - It'd be good if slider body weren't completely covered by (3), as it can confuse beginners due to heavy overlap.
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - You missed a clap at the slider tail (end).
  6. 01:01:297 (3) - Put NC here to be consistent with your comboing and remove it here 01:02:797 (1).
Nice!

[Kitty's Normal]
  1. Why you don't try using CS 3,5? It'd fill the gap with Hard (that is CS 5) better.
  2. Set slider tick rate to 1. Being on 2 makes non sense on this song, as you are giving unecessary combo and score for players.
  3. 00:07:297 (1,2) - I really can't understand what you are trying to follow with those long sliders, first of all, you are ignoring a lot of important beats. Second, they doesn't fit the gap to Hard very well. As you can see, vocal is ending 1/1 earlier, so that means 00:08:047 (1) - here. shortening both sliders 1/1 and then add a note would be a much better idea.
  4. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Slider head is being completely covered by (4)'s tail. That's very bad, keep in mind that this is a Normal, you should avoid causing extra confusing to beginners :)
  5. 00:14:797 (4) - This NC shouldn't be here, as represented by your 2 stanzas comboing pattern.
  6. 00:42:922 (1) - For a normal diff with this BPM, 2 beats after spinner is necessary, not just 1. Delete this note, or finish the spinner here 00:41:797.
  7. 00:53:797 (2,3,4) - You could follow rhythm much better on this part using something like that http://puu.sh/ooyyE/aa49177f9d.jpg You are losing so many important beats with those long sliders :(
Well, apart from almost all 3/1 and 4/1 sliders, this diff seems pretty nice. Great job!

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

MkGuh wrote:

I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Wow MkGuh, Very thanks, i fixed all
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
[Marianna's Easy]

00:52:297 (1) - blanket a bit off :c
btw beautiful diff

[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar)
squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail)

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more?

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png

Kitty Normal
• 00:16:297 (1,2) - You can blanket here if you wanted to

• 00:19:859 (2,3) - I would generally not recommend stacking in Normal. It could be more consistent with these patterns 00:25:859 (2,3) anyways

• 00:59:797 (4) - Make this two sliders? One at 00:59:797 and another at 01:00:547 would be nice

• 01:02:797 (3,4) - Why not curve these like 01:01:297 (1,2) ?

Marianna Easy
• 00:23:047 (2,3) - Make this blanket look nicer? (Adjust 2nd slider node)

• 00:41:422 (2,3) - Blanket here

• 00:44:797 (3,1) - The overlap of 3 doesn't read well for new players

• 00:51:922 (4,1) - Adjust sliderend of 1 to make a better blanket

Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho Opa
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo Opa²
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito Opa³
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar) e Opa4 (n tinha o 4 menor ;c)
valeu <3 otimas sugestoes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa But the "real" correct is Kana Nishino, is the correct metadata

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part I Follow the Distance snap :p

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail) uh.. yes

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more? Yes

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing but i follow the DS...

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png Fixed !


Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Thanks !
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Will check tomorrow!
AmigoDoChroome
228 posts
Joined September 2014
AmigoDoChroome
oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030

Easy
00:15:172 (2) - stack estranha
00:19:297 (1) - x236 y288
00:28:297 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988887

Normal
cs 4?
00:10:672 (2) - move to x288 y304
00:15:547 (3) - replace it with a simple curved slider
00:17:797 (2) - x444 y224
00:39:547 (4) - ctrl shift r; +4

Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl >
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl <
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais

boa sorte com o mapa~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030


Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl > Nah
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada Opa
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949 Eu estou fazendo um Flow Linear, e isso quebraria o flow inteiro do mapa, e não é necessario tanto assim :p
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl < Gostei, mas isso quebraria o mapa todo, pois so ocorreria apenas essa vez, eu fiz tudo seguido e bonitinho, mas achei daora essa sugestão :D
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais Corrigi"da"

boa sorte com o mapa~
Valeu Jc das tampa
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/oskvD/5b64dc063f.osu

:3~
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter.

[Marianna's Easy]

00:08:797 (4) - this slider is touching this circle: 00:08:422 (3) - and it's breaking the blanket
00:23:047 (2,3) - it's touching again, please fix :P
00:41:422 (2,3) - fix blanket

the rest is fine ;)

[Kitty's Normal]

00:59:797 (4) - the 2nd curve is not perfect round, try to use a hitcircle to make it rounder, like this: http://puu.sh/osSQq.jpg (remember to remove the hitcircle if finished!)

nice diff!!! :o

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg
00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Nickelony wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter. i will check this

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg i Think is good with this, i follow the Vocal's moment

00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg Fixed !
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed !
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better Reeealy better :D

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
very thanks Nicke ♥
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again.
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way.
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good.
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map.
[Kitty]
  1. 00:14:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - ^
  3. 00:42:922 (1) - I highly recommend you to replace this note to somewhere closer to the center for being friendly to normal-player and make it easier to hit after the spinner.
[marianna]
  1. 00:23:797 (3) - move second point (sorry that don't know what is it called) to 446|341 for more blanket. I mention this because it's almost touch and pretty noticeable.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  3. 00:34:297 (1) - idk if this still a case recently-mapping. blanket would solve if you wanna be safe. (overlapped makes beginner hard to read) << this reason.
    00:35:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  4. 00:52:297 (1) - blanket is off (noticeable)
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - same as 00:34:297 (1) - would be great if you discuss this with BN or QAT. if it's fine, fine then.
  6. 01:04:297 (5,1) - switch NC here actually.
  7. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is more friendly to beginner tbh, less confusing.
nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/ot2wC/0c1b1a81fa.osu

Some fixed~
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