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Kana Nishino - Darling

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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 8 de março de 2018 at 17:36:13

Artist: Kana Nishino
Title: Darling
Tags: Alexsander TheBenderGamer fabiojhon Hoen Marianna with love short ver version cut japan record award
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5055kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alex's Normal (1,96 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Marianna's Easy (1,31 stars, 71 notes)
  3. Marixia's Advanced (2,14 stars, 130 notes)
  4. My Dear (3,25 stars, 205 notes)
Download: Kana Nishino - Darling
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tag Stolen from Fii's mapset

red 2018 new d i f f
Last edited by Ataraxia , edited 86 times in total.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Mercusheigan
eae eae, M4M de volta xD

perae que eu vo fazendo devagar e vo dando muito edit D:

My Dear

SPOILER
00:06:547 (3) - blanket (sug: mid point 452, 80. end point 440, 128

00:14:047 (2) - blanket

00:14:797 (1) - blanket

00:15:359 (2,3) - ctrl+g soa melhor (vai ter que arrumar a pattern, tho)

00:19:859 (2) - se vc quebrar em 2, colocando 1 hit circle aqui e um halfbeat slider começando em 00:20:047 fica show

00:21:359 (2) - ^ msm coisa. o vocal começa no white tick, nao no red

00:25:859 (2) - bota um circle aqui, move esse slider pro white tick e transforma o slider de 00:26:422 (3) - em um hitcircle no red tick (to falando disso ó ali na timeline: http://puu.sh/ol231/d2fa9051dd.jpg)

continuamos em irc

2016-04-16 21:44 Mercusheigan: pronto
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: ativei
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: ai vai tar na pasta que você salvou o osu!
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: hm, blz
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: uma pasta chamada Chats
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: vamos ver se vai funcionar xD
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: ja deve ter a nossa conversa la agora
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: vai la so para testar
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: é ta mesmo
2016-04-16 21:45 Ataraxia: então partiu
2016-04-16 21:45 Mercusheigan: vo começar pelo que ja tinha pego no forum post
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: 00:06:547 (3) - 
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: o blanket aqui da pra melhorar
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: sug: mid point 452, 80. end point 440, 128
2016-04-16 21:46 Ataraxia: lol
2016-04-16 21:46 Mercusheigan: fica quaaase perfeito
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4947935
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: ah boa eu deixei tick azul apoirjaeir
2016-04-16 21:47 Mercusheigan: é entao lol
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4947939
2016-04-16 21:47 Ataraxia: assim esta good
2016-04-16 21:47 Mercusheigan: da pra melhorar mais vai :<
2016-04-16 21:48 Mercusheigan: bota o mid point mais pra esquerda
2016-04-16 21:48 Mercusheigan: ai fica bonitao
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: deve ser por que esta muito perto
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: eu vou aumentar o ds no geral aqui
2016-04-16 21:49 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2yq/d35f92cea7.jpg
2016-04-16 21:50 Mercusheigan: nah n precisa
2016-04-16 21:50 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol2Bc/6938cef76e.jpg
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2FK/c381ecc774.jpg
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: acho que agora esta otimo
2016-04-16 21:51 Ataraxia: fico igual o seu ( e n aumentei DS
2016-04-16 21:51 Mercusheigan: ae show
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: falei q n precisa aumentar o DS :P
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: ok agora q vc passou na fase blanket 1
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: vem a fase blanket 2
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: 00:14:047 (2,1) - 
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: esses 2 aqui dava pra ficar mais arrumado
2016-04-16 21:52 Mercusheigan: o 2 é facil, só brincar com o end dele
2016-04-16 21:54 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol2Nj/9b868d8ffe.jpg
2016-04-16 21:54 Mercusheigan: nice, pode subir um pouco mais o end desse?
2016-04-16 21:54 Mercusheigan: nao se preocupa com o slider que vem dps
2016-04-16 21:55 Ataraxia: subi um quadradinho a mais
2016-04-16 21:55 Ataraxia: mas esta bom agora
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: show
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: 00:15:359 (2,3) - 
2016-04-16 21:55 Mercusheigan: ctrl G soou melhor pra mim
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: nah, tipo
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: o flow desse mapa é linear
2016-04-16 21:56 Ataraxia: ele vai seguindo, nao fica bom por que nao combina com o mapa em geral em si
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: digo
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: nao no sentido da pattern ficar melhor
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: mas do som do circle com os sliders mais coeso
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: escuta em 25%
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: 00:15:547 (3) - 
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: o vocal começa aqui
2016-04-16 21:57 Mercusheigan: aí é mais conveniente o slider começar aqui
2016-04-16 21:57 Ataraxia: ah, você quis dizer tipo começar com um circle é isso?
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: entendeu oq eu tava falando? xD
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: isso!
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: circle e depois slider
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: nao em relação da pattern
2016-04-16 21:58 Ataraxia: e por eu to seguindo o violao mas deixa eu ver
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: fica bom tb pq eles vao acabar em red tick
2016-04-16 21:58 Mercusheigan: que é onde ta a polaridade do violao
2016-04-16 22:01 Ataraxia: do jeito que voce falou mesmo
2016-04-16 22:01 Ataraxia: vou ter que deixar assim
2016-04-16 22:02 Ataraxia: a nao achei uma solucao mais simples e daora
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: bom lol
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: vamos em frente
2016-04-16 22:02 Mercusheigan: 00:19:859 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:03 Ataraxia: beleza
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: IMO, quebrava esse slider, botava 1 hitcirle na red tick
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: e um slider da white pro red
2016-04-16 22:03 Mercusheigan: segue melhor o vocal e o violao, pq tem uma batida no violao no white tick
2016-04-16 22:04 Ataraxia: eu to seguindo a batida totalmente ai nessa parte
2016-04-16 22:04 Ataraxia: eu diria que ignorei praticamente o vocal e o violao
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: bom
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: e eu vou ter que fazer isso com o mapa todo coitado
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: aí a decisão eh tua quanto ao que seguir lol
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: é, se tu pegou uma linha.. mudar td eh foda
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: ah ye
2016-04-16 22:05 Mercusheigan: mas fica o input quanto a isso :P
2016-04-16 22:05 Ataraxia: e igual o que você falou do control g
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: se eu colocar aquilo eu vou ter que coloca em tudo quase
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: mas enfim
2016-04-16 22:06 Ataraxia: continuando
2016-04-16 22:06 Mercusheigan: agr tpo
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: uma coisa q era interessante pensar sobre
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:23:047 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: sliders desse tipo
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: na real volta pro começo que é mais facil de mostrar
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:02:609 (1) - 
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: esses 2 aqui
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: e esses 2
2016-04-16 22:07 Mercusheigan: 00:04:109 (1,2) - 
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: o jeito que eles seguem do 1 e do 2
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: poderiam ser iguais, IMO
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: até pq a batida é igual
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: tendi
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: batida igual slider igual
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: é isso
2016-04-16 22:08 Ataraxia: ?
2016-04-16 22:08 Mercusheigan: é
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: deixar a "caida" dele pro prox slider mais parecido
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: por questao de consistencia
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: agora mais pra frente
2016-04-16 22:09 Mercusheigan: 00:26:422 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:10 Mercusheigan: esse slider aqui tem que se preocupar mais com o slider anterior do que com o da frente
2016-04-16 22:10 Mercusheigan: vc pode fazer isso arrumando o blanket do 00:25:859 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:11 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol3Pr/35a1db3fd6.jpg (isso que to falando)
2016-04-16 22:12 Ataraxia: 00:25:297 (1) -  fazer um blanket com 00:25:859 (2) -
2016-04-16 22:12 Ataraxia: é isso?
2016-04-16 22:12 Mercusheigan: s
2016-04-16 22:12 Mercusheigan: ai move o 3 pra +/- 302, 209
2016-04-16 22:13 Ataraxia: Done
2016-04-16 22:13 Ataraxia: n ficou mais ou menos mas chegou perto
2016-04-16 22:14 Mercusheigan: 00:27:922 (3,4) - 
2016-04-16 22:14 Mercusheigan: DS nessa regiao dava pra ficar mais consistente
2016-04-16 22:15 Mercusheigan: só o 3 que ta com "problema" mesmo
2016-04-16 22:15 Mercusheigan: pq ele ta com prev 1,52 e next 1,42
2016-04-16 22:16 Ataraxia: ah sim
2016-04-16 22:16 Ataraxia: agora tao iguais mesmo
2016-04-16 22:16 Mercusheigan: 00:29:422 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:16 Mercusheigan: bota o end point em 394, 185
2016-04-16 22:17 Mercusheigan: ai da uma melhorada no blanket
2016-04-16 22:18 Mercusheigan: ai se vc mudar, bota os 00:29:797 (1,2,3) - (seleciona td e move) em 463, 193
2016-04-16 22:18 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol4bY/b605193d35.jpg
2016-04-16 22:18 Ataraxia: assim esta bom?
2016-04-16 22:19 Mercusheigan: tenta fazer com que ele faça a curva certinho com o sliderend do outro
2016-04-16 22:20 Ataraxia: http://puu.sh/ol4ge/ac48ed8ed0.jpg
2016-04-16 22:20 Ataraxia: think is good now
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: ai ta melhorzin
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: agora
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: seleciona as 3 notas seguintes
2016-04-16 22:21 Ataraxia: resnapa
2016-04-16 22:21 Mercusheigan: e bota como se o slider tivesse continuado
2016-04-16 22:22 Mercusheigan: 464, 203 com esse blanket parece ficar bom
2016-04-16 22:22 Ataraxia: ah o  fazer blanket com o slider de tras?
2016-04-16 22:22 Mercusheigan: nao
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: seleciona esses 3
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: 00:29:797 (1,2,3) - 
2016-04-16 22:23 Mercusheigan: e move pra 464, 203
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4s0/1abe2e28f6.jpg
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: isso aqui ó que to falando
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: erm ops
2016-04-16 22:24 Mercusheigan: puush bugou
2016-04-16 22:25 Ataraxia: arfalire
2016-04-16 22:26 Mercusheigan: perae xo reiniciar a bagaça aqui q ferro td
2016-04-16 22:26 Ataraxia: aaah tendi]
2016-04-16 22:29 Mercusheigan: mas senhor saiu bugando td
2016-04-16 22:29 Mercusheigan: enfim lol
2016-04-16 22:30 Ataraxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4948126
2016-04-16 22:30 Ataraxia: desse jeito que ficou
2016-04-16 22:30 Mercusheigan: nao nao
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: n eh isso nao
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: to falando disso ó
2016-04-16 22:31 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4Lh/cc65d7e9b6.jpg
2016-04-16 22:32 Ataraxia: ah tendi
2016-04-16 22:32 Ataraxia: pronto, era simples apoerjaoeri mals a demora
2016-04-16 22:32 Mercusheigan: kkk
2016-04-16 22:32 Mercusheigan: da nd
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: meu puush fico louco tb
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: começo a dar upload na msm SS varias vezes >.>
2016-04-16 22:33 Mercusheigan: 00:33:359 (3) - 
2016-04-16 22:33 Ataraxia: ojaeoirjaeiojr lol
2016-04-16 22:34 Mercusheigan: http://puu.sh/ol4VC/32e675b6c9.jpg
2016-04-16 22:34 Mercusheigan: arruma o blanket +/- assim
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: move o end to 3 pra 360, 308
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: ai ela já cai de cara com o 4, que fica massa
2016-04-16 22:35 Mercusheigan: e fica facil de arrumar com o 1
2016-04-16 22:36 Ataraxia: sim, editado
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: 00:45:547 (4,5) - 
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: msm papo de antes
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: axo que faz mais sentido um slider e depois o circle
2016-04-16 22:37 Mercusheigan: ai fica 2 circle, slider e 2 circle
2016-04-16 22:38 Ataraxia: nah, eu acho que assim esta otimo
2016-04-16 22:38 Mercusheigan: kk
2016-04-16 22:39 Ataraxia: mas parando para pensar
2016-04-16 22:39 Mercusheigan: se tiver em duvida
2016-04-16 22:40 Mercusheigan: escuta em 25%
2016-04-16 22:40 Mercusheigan: geralmente ajuda a solucionar o problema
2016-04-16 22:42 Mercusheigan: mas eh igual antes, se mudar aqui tem que mudar em todas as outras seções
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: eu vou ver
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: pode postar la
2016-04-16 22:43 Ataraxia: eu to arrumando tudo ja
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: ta
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: uma ultima coisa
2016-04-16 22:43 Mercusheigan: é 01:06:734 (2) - 
2016-04-16 22:44 Mercusheigan: se virar um reverse ia ficar legal 
2016-04-16 22:44 Mercusheigan: :D
2016-04-16 22:44 Ataraxia: mas nao existe nada no tick vermelho :s
2016-04-16 22:44 Ataraxia: 01:05:797 (1,1) -  e isso aqui é um blanket
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: só fica legal xD
2016-04-16 22:45 Ataraxia: beleza xd
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: vo postar lá
2016-04-16 22:45 Mercusheigan: depois eu termino de dar mod nas 2 outras difs
2016-04-16 22:46 Ataraxia: Opa, valeu mano <3
2016-04-16 22:46 Mercusheigan: <33

Kitty's Normal

SPOILER
Nice sliderarts yo

00:10:297 (3) - NC this and RNC 00:11:797 (1) -
00:25:297 (4) - blanket could be improved
00:23:797 (1) - Should this really be NC? I mean the vocals are kinda the same from the previous combo :S

Dunno how I'd improve this even further, it's already quite awesome :D

Mariana's Easy

SPOILER
Vou ter que ser nazi e pegar os miiinimos detalhes

00:27:172 (2) - ta muito proximo do prox slider, mova para 255, 303

00:35:422 (2) - mesma justificativa, mova para 432, 186

00:41:797 (3) - blanket em volta do 2 dava pra melhorar um pouco

01:06:922 (3,1) - eles nao deveriam ser iguais a 01:05:797 (1,2) - em questão de angulo?

nice diff :o

eu volto pra dar mod nas outras 2 difs, desculpa lol pronto

Perdão pela demora! espero ter ajudado algo, boa sorte :D
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
As únicas coisas que eu não arrumei foram as coisas sobre blanket porque não faz a minima diferença ingame

:p
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
DeRandom Otaku
Ello ~~ Random person passing by

Went through the map in editor , Really neat map imo~

Dear :
  1. 00:30:734 (3) - add reverse
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - blanket could be better
  3. 00:49:109 (6,1) - ^
Kitty's Normal :
  1. 00:48:547 (3,1) - blanket could be better
also i m not so good at modding easy/normals~
Hope i helped owo

Good Luck!~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Ello ~~ Random person passing by

Went through the map in editor , Really neat map imo~

Dear :
  1. 00:30:734 (3) - add reverse This not to vocal t.t
  2. 00:46:859 (3,4) - blanket could be better not make much difference, but nice suggestion
  3. 00:49:109 (6,1) - ^ Sure

Good Luck!~
Thanks !
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Fixed all etc. DeRandom Otaku's mod because it's already blanket but used distance snap!
Thank you for mod~ <3

Upgrade! :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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368,148,25859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,26047,2,0,L|208:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,60,26797,2,0,L|124:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,27359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,252,27547,2,0,P|60:320|88:368,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,28297,6,0,P|199:300|192:251,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,28859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,168,29047,2,0,B|305:176|305:176|381:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,68,29797,5,2,0:0:0:0:
197,80,30172,2,0,P|153:144|225:268,1,200.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,348,31297,6,0,P|76:324|20:332,2,100.000000596046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,251,32422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,300,32797,2,0,P|352:276|408:284,2,100.000000596046,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,384,33922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,344,34297,6,0,P|488:276|396:180,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,100,35422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,172,35797,2,0,B|212:148|168:168|168:168|136:160|136:160|100:180|40:168,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,64,36922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,171,37297,6,0,L|74:283,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,328,38047,2,0,L|171:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,164,38797,2,0,P|316:152|372:172,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,39547,2,0,P|468:184|452:228,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40297,12,2,42172,0:0:0:0:
448,68,42922,5,2,0:0:0:0:
388,160,43297,6,0,P|344:112|340:48,2,100.000000596046,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,236,44422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,304,44797,2,0,P|316:288|256:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,45547,2,0,L|232:196,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,46297,6,0,P|100:180|128:56,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,52,47797,2,0,P|268:108|264:164,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,48547,2,0,P|385:90|413:49,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,128,49297,6,0,L|500:260,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,244,50047,2,0,L|378:343,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,50797,2,0,P|256:244|264:180,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,51547,2,0,B|100:132|100:132|52:112,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,212,52297,6,0,B|68:228|88:276|88:276|148:272|148:272|160:364|264:368,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,53797,2,0,B|304:232|352:256|352:256|400:280|464:244,1,200.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,54922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,64,55297,6,0,B|408:20|324:44|300:100|300:100|240:60|240:116|160:72,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,56797,2,0,P|88:212|116:268,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,57359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,57547,2,0,B|272:292|272:292|316:308,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,344,58297,6,0,B|396:276|396:276|424:232,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,58859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,59047,2,0,P|416:140|424:84,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,59797,2,0,B|272:68|212:48|212:48|140:56|100:156|216:204,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,61297,6,0,P|220:284|272:244,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,62047,2,0,P|344:220|280:172,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,62797,2,0,L|220:80,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,44,63547,2,0,L|152:160,1,100.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,216,64297,6,0,B|108:268|172:256|172:256|140:300|172:364|172:364|208:340|280:356,1,300.000001788138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,65797,2,0,P|232:188|192:168,1,100.000000596046,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,56,66922,2,0,L|172:52,1,50.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,28,67297,5,6,0:0:0:0:
Mekki
1,795 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[Marianna's Easy]
  1. 00:08:797 (4) - Remove your NC combo here, doesn't fit your comboing pattern. NOTE: same here 00:11:797 (1) -
  2. 00:35:797 (1) - I don't hear a cymbal sound here for having a finish. Just remove it, it sounds useless. And same for NC, remove it from there too!
  3. 00:38:047 (2) - Movement is very umconfortable to play here, the position that (2) it is compared to (1) makes a bad flow, especially for beginners. Try using something softer like that > http://puu.sh/ooxcY/2bbfe86658.jpg
  4. 00:46:297 (1) - It'd be good if slider body weren't completely covered by (3), as it can confuse beginners due to heavy overlap.
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - You missed a clap at the slider tail (end).
  6. 01:01:297 (3) - Put NC here to be consistent with your comboing and remove it here 01:02:797 (1).
Nice!

[Kitty's Normal]
  1. Why you don't try using CS 3,5? It'd fill the gap with Hard (that is CS 5) better.
  2. Set slider tick rate to 1. Being on 2 makes non sense on this song, as you are giving unecessary combo and score for players.
  3. 00:07:297 (1,2) - I really can't understand what you are trying to follow with those long sliders, first of all, you are ignoring a lot of important beats. Second, they doesn't fit the gap to Hard very well. As you can see, vocal is ending 1/1 earlier, so that means 00:08:047 (1) - here. shortening both sliders 1/1 and then add a note would be a much better idea.
  4. 00:11:797 (4,1) - Slider head is being completely covered by (4)'s tail. That's very bad, keep in mind that this is a Normal, you should avoid causing extra confusing to beginners :)
  5. 00:14:797 (4) - This NC shouldn't be here, as represented by your 2 stanzas comboing pattern.
  6. 00:42:922 (1) - For a normal diff with this BPM, 2 beats after spinner is necessary, not just 1. Delete this note, or finish the spinner here 00:41:797.
  7. 00:53:797 (2,3,4) - You could follow rhythm much better on this part using something like that http://puu.sh/ooyyE/aa49177f9d.jpg You are losing so many important beats with those long sliders :(
Well, apart from almost all 3/1 and 4/1 sliders, this diff seems pretty nice. Great job!

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

MkGuh wrote:

I'll prob mod it soon. This song is love ♥

Hey, as I ''promised'' :3

[My Dear]
  1. 00:03:172 (2) - Why you don't try softening the shape of this slider to look like (1)? It'd make visual more stable.
  2. 00:52:297 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks very unpolished with every aspect of the map. First because I wasn't expecting the slider pointing at this angle, it feels so sudden... And... It breaks the flow D: And second, this overlap doesn't seem proposital and it's a bit bad :l Why you don't try something like that? http://puu.sh/ooz3H/e1b6dbc64d.jpg Or, if you still insist on having it pointed to another angle, try that http://puu.sh/oozc8/1a3dd6256a.jpg
  3. 00:17:234 (3,1) - Oh please, blanket could be clearly improved here. http://puu.sh/oozkY/1724635180.jpg
Nice job with that! Overall it's a good set GL!
Wow MkGuh, Very thanks, i fixed all
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
[Marianna's Easy]

00:52:297 (1) - blanket a bit off :c
btw beautiful diff

[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar)
squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail)

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more?

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png

Kitty Normal
• 00:16:297 (1,2) - You can blanket here if you wanted to

• 00:19:859 (2,3) - I would generally not recommend stacking in Normal. It could be more consistent with these patterns 00:25:859 (2,3) anyways

• 00:59:797 (4) - Make this two sliders? One at 00:59:797 and another at 01:00:547 would be nice

• 01:02:797 (3,4) - Why not curve these like 01:01:297 (1,2) ?

Marianna Easy
• 00:23:047 (2,3) - Make this blanket look nicer? (Adjust 2nd slider node)

• 00:41:422 (2,3) - Blanket here

• 00:44:797 (3,1) - The overlap of 3 doesn't read well for new players

• 00:51:922 (4,1) - Adjust sliderend of 1 to make a better blanket

Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
[My Dear]

00:02:422 (3,1,2) - eu pessoalmente tentaria descolar essas notas um pouquinho Opa
00:13:297 (1) - http://puu.sh/orkB3/b79c41c326.jpg me atrevo a dizer que uma nota assim deixaria mais espontâneo Opa²
00:33:172 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/orkDs/7fc04672d5.jpg acho que algo assim não afetaria muito a jogabilidade e deixaria um tanto quanto mais esteticamente bonito Opa³
00:40:672 (2,3) - x: 249 y: 309 (lembrando de ajustar 00:41:234 (4) - depois caso for mudar) e Opa4 (n tinha o 4 menor ;c)
valeu <3 otimas sugestoes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M!

General
• The artist name in the ranked version of the set is Nishino Kana, not vice versa But the "real" correct is Kana Nishino, is the correct metadata

My Dear
• 00:06:547 (3,1) - Decrease spacing? It's still a calm part I Follow the Distance snap :p

• 00:08:797 (1) - move to x240 y242? (puts 3 on the slidertail) uh.. yes

• 00:27:359 (2) - Curve/angle this a little more? Yes

• 00:30:734 (3,1) - Decrease this spacing but i follow the DS...

• 00:32:797 (1,2,3) - Make 3 align with 1 better, like this? http://imgur.com/RIbotYw.png Fixed !


Well mapped you guys!
Good luck! :)
Thanks !
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Will check tomorrow!
AmigoDoChroome
228 posts
Joined September 2014
AmigoDoChroome
oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030

Easy
00:15:172 (2) - stack estranha
00:19:297 (1) - x236 y288
00:28:297 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988887

Normal
cs 4?
00:10:672 (2) - move to x288 y304
00:15:547 (3) - replace it with a simple curved slider
00:17:797 (2) - x444 y224
00:39:547 (4) - ctrl shift r; +4

Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl >
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl <
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais

boa sorte com o mapa~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

oi fabio m4m dos parça; https://osu.ppy.sh/b/956030


Hard
00:04:109 (1) - ctrl > Nah
00:16:297 (1) - distancia forçada Opa
00:21:922 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4988949 Eu estou fazendo um Flow Linear, e isso quebraria o flow inteiro do mapa, e não é necessario tanto assim :p
00:23:797 (1) - ctrl g; duas vezes ctrl < Gostei, mas isso quebraria o mapa todo, pois so ocorreria apenas essa vez, eu fiz tudo seguido e bonitinho, mas achei daora essa sugestão :D
00:51:172 (2,3,5) - perto demais Corrigi"da"

boa sorte com o mapa~
Valeu Jc das tampa
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/oskvD/5b64dc063f.osu

:3~
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter.

[Marianna's Easy]

00:08:797 (4) - this slider is touching this circle: 00:08:422 (3) - and it's breaking the blanket
00:23:047 (2,3) - it's touching again, please fix :P
00:41:422 (2,3) - fix blanket

the rest is fine ;)

[Kitty's Normal]

00:59:797 (4) - the 2nd curve is not perfect round, try to use a hitcircle to make it rounder, like this: http://puu.sh/osSQq.jpg (remember to remove the hitcircle if finished!)

nice diff!!! :o

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg
00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Nickelony wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

I think the kiai time is a little bit too long, try to make it shorter. i will check this

[My Dear]

00:10:297 (1,2,3) - the reverse arrow breaks the flow, I recommend to do something like this: http://puu.sh/osTG9.jpg i Think is good with this, i follow the Vocal's moment

00:13:297 (1) - this wave doesn't fit the blanket, try this: http://puu.sh/osTKp.jpg Fixed !
00:28:859 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed !
01:00:922 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:32:797 (1,3) - these sliders are touching, which doesn't look good, try this: http://puu.sh/osTV5.jpg
01:02:422 (4) - try this: http://puu.sh/osU2K.jpg looks better Reeealy better :D

rest is fine. :)

That's all, good luck!
very thanks Nicke ♥
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again.
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way.
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good.
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map.
[Kitty]
  1. 00:14:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - ^
  3. 00:42:922 (1) - I highly recommend you to replace this note to somewhere closer to the center for being friendly to normal-player and make it easier to hit after the spinner.
[marianna]
  1. 00:23:797 (3) - move second point (sorry that don't know what is it called) to 446|341 for more blanket. I mention this because it's almost touch and pretty noticeable.
  2. 00:29:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  3. 00:34:297 (1) - idk if this still a case recently-mapping. blanket would solve if you wanna be safe. (overlapped makes beginner hard to read) << this reason.
    00:35:797 (1) - remove NC, you NC per every two stanza.
  4. 00:52:297 (1) - blanket is off (noticeable)
  5. 00:59:797 (2) - same as 00:34:297 (1) - would be great if you discuss this with BN or QAT. if it's fine, fine then.
  6. 01:04:297 (5,1) - switch NC here actually.
  7. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is more friendly to beginner tbh, less confusing.
nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
http://puu.sh/ot2wC/0c1b1a81fa.osu

Some fixed~
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

P A N wrote:

overall, this map is really good and calm to play plus the song is already good. so don't expect my mod to be long.

[Darling]
  1. 00:14:047 (2,1) - I saw you pay attention to blanket so I mention this one. it's not a good blanket yet. (move 2's tail to right a bit). also 00:18:547 (3) and goes on. please check blankets on your map again. All FIxed
  2. 00:24:359 (2,3,4,1,2) - why it's suddenly short spacing? I don't feel like the song going that way. Fixed
  3. 00:25:859 (2) - spread to this? more fit with vocal. you also did like this at 00:22:859 (2,3,4) which sounds really good. sure
  4. 00:28:297 (1,2,3) - why you make the spacing inconsistent? idk if it's intentional. not that different in gameplay , agreed, but better if you make them consistent. apply to all same case.I think is good like mine
  5. 00:35:422 (4) - increase spacing. so short.Ya
  6. 00:52:297 (1) - ^Ya²
  7. overall, it's really a great diff. just make it more polish by fixing all blanket and inconsistent spacing the whole map. Thanks !

nice mapset. only thing that bug me is normal has CS 3 but hard CS 5. the gap is pretty large imo. beware of that. good luck !
smau5
133 posts
Joined October 2014
smau5
random from #modreqs
@kitty's normal
00:46:297 (1) - how about making this a slider 2times repeat slider, i think it doesnt match with the part flow
00:52:297 (1) - this one too
00:53:797 (2) - make this a slider 1/1 slider and then a circle at 00:54:547
00:55:297 (1) - slider repeat 2 times
00:59:797 (4) - same
01:04:297 (1) - same

i feel like the chorus it's more groovy and long sliders does't fit.
EarwormS
10 posts
Joined January 2014
EarwormS
Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

Marianna's Easy
Some suggestions:
00:08:797 (4) - UnWhistled from sliderhead (Sound like the singer's voice
00:59:797 (2) - Move up a bit. Make 00:58:297 (1,2) - better. Like this


Kitty's Normal
Suggest OD3
01:04:297 (1) - make this two turning points fit with the drumbeats(own opinion

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Disagree all mods etc. P A N, MkGuh, squirrelpascals, AmigoDoChroome, and Nickelony's mod! (Seriously, i feel sick & tired with IRC so can't respond all mods ;w;)

CS = I better used 3 than 3.5 or 4, it's really distrub! if QAT & BN say same, i keep to used 3
Long Slider = I following the vocal
Not Curve = Trying used other flow
00:11:797 (4,1) = It's overlap, not really hard :>

Ataraxia ask me to make normal is maximal 1.90- star rating and i thing 1.72 it's hard for me!
I put long slider because it's simple & clean to rank :3

Kitty's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42359
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 55297
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Darling
TitleUnicode:Darling
Artist:Kana Nishino
ArtistUnicode:Kana Nishino
Creator:Ataraxia
Version:Kitty's Normal
Source:
Tags:gokugohan12468 fabiojhon Hoen KittyAdventure Marianna kaitlin japan record award with love short ver version cut -wwwww kaitlin japan record award
BeatmapID:954154
BeatmapSetID:443078

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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0,0,"KittyAdventure.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

EarwormS wrote:

Hello! -From ur m4m in #modreqs
I'm a rookie modder.
Here is my mod~

My Dear
00:13:297 (1) - slider tail~ Already A Tail
00:30:172 (2) - & 00:42:172 (2) - add a Finish
Its a good idea, but i wanna to follow with simple drums clap, and the finish is not good with the drum

>Nice song and nice maps.
>I cant give more suggestions because those maps are better than mine.
>Good luck!
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko
General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff.

Marianna's Easy
00:13:297 (1) - bad flow ( try ctrl+H and rotate it by -90 )
00:23:047 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:35:422 (2,3) - ^
00:41:422 (2,3) - ^
00:47:797 (2,3,1) - this flow is bad IMO. why not just follow the flow of the slider ?
00:56:797 (2) - ctrl+H ?
00:59:797 (2,1,2) - bad flow
01:06:922 (4) - NC here
01:07:297 (1) - remove NC

Kitty's Normal
00:08:797 (2) - NC
00:17:797 (2) - ^
00:31:297 (1) - ctrl+J for better flow
00:33:922 (4) - off grid :?
00:35:797 (3,1) - stack properly
00:54:922 (3,1) - fix blanket

My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

General
diff spread is not good. you need to make the normal diff harder. try targeting 2-2.1 star diff. or a advanced diff :D


My Dear
00:10:297 (1,3) - overlap Done
00:46:297 (1,4) - stack properly Fixed
00:52:297 (1,3) - ^ ^

Nice song ! Good Luck !
Thanks !
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Hitorikko wrote:

you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
You see, we want the advanced
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Hitorikko wrote:

Ataraxia wrote:

or a advanced diff :D
you can also do that. but, their will still be problem with the diff spread cos total number of notes in easy is 71 and normal and normal is 83. :o 12 notes difference is not good. you really need to make the normal diff harder IMO
Very Thanks , is not a reeaaaal problem x.x but the advanced diff is real good, now, Is Cs 3, 3 ,4 and 5 Correct .
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
I never say to change cs is 3,4 <___<
Well, like before i say, Ataraxia already tell me to make normal diff with 1.90 star rating, i mean this is calm and beautiful song, i can't make it with cs 3+, but it's already hard for newbie players!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia
I Don't think necessary 2 stars normal, because of the music, is calm and relaxing, for this, i want a "easy normal"

So, in chose to do a advanced diff, its the real soluction and the spreads its real good now :)
Doj
232 posts
Joined March 2014
Doj
Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:27:547 (3,1) - You can make this look better by doing this

    SPOILER
  2. 01:01:297 (1,2) - You can apply the above suggestion to this too
  3. 01:04:297 (1) - I don't think this slider shape fits how smooth all your others are.

    Nazi blanket fixes
  4. 00:52:297 (1) -
  5. 00:35:797 (3) -
Kitty's Normal
  1. 00:44:797 (3,4,5) - I don't think that (4) fits where it is. It'll sounds and play much better if it were stacked on 00:46:297 (1) - instead.
  2. 00:52:297 (1) - fix blankettt
  3. 00:55:297 (1) - ^
Marixia's Advanced
  1. 00:10:297 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern could be improved. Maybe if you made it something like this


  2. 00:56:797 (1) - new combo
  3. 01:02:797 (1) - new combo
My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better.
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
@Doj
No changes
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Ataraxia

Doj wrote:

Most of these mods are probably gonna be cosmetic because it's pretty consistent already

My Dear
  1. One of the patterns for your kiai time is kinda weird imo Like 00:51:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:54:172 (2,3,4) - and 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:03:172 (2,3,4,5) - I think a better pattern would be something like this .


  2. 00:30:734 (3) - mmm I don't like how this note is stacked under the other two when there's a gap in between them. I think placing it elsewhere would work better. .
This mapset is pretty solid imo. Good luck!
Thanks !
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Marianna, will be great if you reply mods properly. Thanks.
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From m4m queue

  • Marianna's Easy
  1. 00:58:297 (1,2) - You did a great job on blankets in this diff, I think you can improve this obvious place as well, right?

    Kitty's Normal
  2. 00:11:797 (4) - 00:17:797 (2) - to keep consistency, please fix the spacing to 1.1. 1.03 or 1.05 is a bit incorrect
  3. 00:29:797 (4) - have a NC to stress the change of the music?

    Marixia's Advanced
  4. 00:48:172 - 00:49:672 - 00:54:172 - miss a clap?
  5. 01:00:547 - addtion=soft then clap it?
  6. 01:06:734 (2) - Sampleset=drum, then add a finish?

Totally fine to me, good luck :)
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