Satoshi (CV:Matsumoto Rica) - XY&Z [CatchTheBeat] · forum

rew0825

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-01-18T12:58:10+00:00

Benny- wrote:
M4M with Rew I guess

General
Hitsounds Issues: Am I the only one noticing the extremely low hitnormal? I struggle with hearing the hitsounds on any beat that doesn't have finish/clap/whistle. I put hitsounds on 100% and music on 0% and still it's extremely quiet. You could try using this normal-hitnormal and this soft-hitnormal instead I think now is look ok didn't want to try anything.
Salad
00:03:076 (2,3) - I'd put more distance here, (3) is very strong but you can literally stand still catching it Ok move it.
00:05:084 (4) - This sounds a bit off when the actual beat is on 00:04:966 - . I would extend this 00:04:611 (3) - to end on the white tick and delete (4). Same goes for 00:06:973 (4) - 00:08:863 (4) - Sorry but i think on now. this sound is look ok and have better pattern.
00:22:682 (5,1) - Swap NC Ok.
00:24:572 - Maybe add a note Ohh sorry but I think if i add it's feel like weird a bit about distance.
00:26:462 (1) - What are you trying to follow here lol. I would just map this section as 1/1 as you did previously. It feels undermapped I want to take this time on 00:26:462 - 00:34:021 at relax to easy note.
01:07:328 - Add a note here maybe for vocals I think it not necessary.
01:18:430 (3) - This slider seems weird when you've mapped like this 01:02:367 (1,2,3) - 00:47:249 (1,2,3) - previously, feels empty compared to those patterns. Umm...I didn't want to change. I want to try on this time to same pattern all of my diff.
01:22:210 (3,4) - Seems weird when you've previously mapped vocals and there's unmapped vocal 01:22:800 - . Would delete (4) as it's not really a very strong beat to better emphasise the next note and extend (3) to 01:22:800 - Change in my own.
01:23:863 (3) - 01:25:753 (3) - imo beats like these aren't very strong and it would be better to delete them so you can put some distance to the next slider to better emphasize the stronger sounds I think it's look ok for new player.
Platter
00:18:785 (5,1) - Considering the high BPM, you should probably nerf this distance, you can put 00:18:666 (4,5) - all the way to x:200 and still keep the hyper I want Hdash every time i suggest. and on this is in my suggest so don't change.
00:54:690 (5) - Why suddenly map triplet? You didn't map similar sounds so why here? Forget delete xD.
01:09:926 (1,2) - 01:10:871 (3,4) - These are almost placed on same grid Ok.
01:11:698 - A note here would be nice for vocals Ok.
01:17:012 (3,4,5,1) - antiflow + hypers isn't a very good combo, try to make 01:17:485 (1) - a little bit more towards the left to follow the boost you get from the hyper Change.
Rain
00:00:477 (1,2,3,1) - imo these distances are a bit long and also fits better with the music to have them like this picture so you turn to the next strong beat and not on the strong beat if that makes sense, something like this: Now i think it's look ok. not change.
SPOILER
00:06:383 (4,5) - This hyper is very long and antiflowy, try moving the slider start closer to the pervious object and maybe curving it a bit more, same for 00:08:273 (4,5) - Ok.
00:09:690 (3,4) - 00:10:044 (6,1) - Why isn't this hyper? Would make sense to add here considering how you've mapped the rest of the map I don't want this to have Hdash because before this is have pattern to play hard i don't want it to have Hdash too much.
00:15:005 (8) - Slider end is a very strong beat, I recommend dividing these into two singlenotes with hyperdash to 00:15:123 - (also NC on this and remove 00:15:359 (1) - ) Ok.
00:22:682 (5,1) - Swap NC Ok.
00:26:462 (1,2) - You've previously mapped all vocals so why stop here with two 1/1 sliders? There's also a very strong drum here 00:26:934 - 00:27:525 - . Same for 00:26:462 (1,2) - I think follow vocal is look better.
00:28:351 (1,2,3) - This also feels very empty, there is very strong drum beat here 00:28:706 - 00:29:178 - . Same for 00:28:351 (1,2,3) - Sorry but i think it's feel weird a bit if i will add notes.
00:41:580 (1,2,3,4) - Distancing here is very inconsistent, you go from 1,70x to 1,10x and back to 1,70x. I think 1,70x is way too long distance so I'd try reducing it to somewhere near 1,10x at least Ok, change.
01:05:084 (3,4,5,6) - I think these would fit better as sliders, something like this: I like this more that sorry xD.
SPOILER
01:12:170 (2,3) - I'd move these further apart, it's a big flowstopper when they are so close to the same grid I think it's ok sorry but not change.
01:13:706 (1,2,3,4) - this is hypers while this 01:15:596 (1,2,3) - is not? Would try being a bit more consistent with hypers Ok, change.
01:25:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This pattern is overdone imo.. Maybe try reducing the distance a bit s: No lol, want to try some player miss it xD

I wanna see this map qualified again soon! GL! :3

Thank you very much

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-01-19T14:42:50+00:00

Benny- wrote:
M4M with Rew I guess

/images/expert-f.png[/img] Nely's Overdose
00:07:564 (1) - hm seems weird to have 1/2 here when you used 1/1 slider previously; 00:03:785 (1) - 00:05:674 (1) -
00:09:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This flows very bad and is very snappy Consider maybe tilting the sliders a bit, similar to this pattern 00:32:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i've asked many testplays and they say its fine so lemme keep ;w;
00:26:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - For the vocals here, maybe make the slider 1/2 and have like a zig-zag pattern gonna go time a bit break time here and the vocal is strong only at that slider so i prefer to make this
00:29:178 (4,1) - I find this dash a bit too long compared to other dashes not really that far imo
00:29:651 (2,3) - This is again very snappy and very antiflowy, try moving the slider a bit closer to (2) to make a slight curve so it isn't as snappy prefer u give an example since idk how to fix D:
00:43:470 - This stream doesn't flow very well.. 00:43:706 (5,6,1) - this is a very strong flow breaker cause the sliders have very small movements. If you make them 100% horisontal they play much better blame afb w
00:54:336 (3,4) - This is a very long distance D: make it equal to 00:53:863 (1,2) - but its same with 00:54:218 (2) - and consistent ? D:
00:58:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm idk but this pattern makes me miss everytime I play it and if I hit it I miss the next pattern 00:59:414 (6,1,2,3,4) - . Maybe reduce the distance between these 00:59:414 (6,1) - at least
01:00:320 (5,6) - Can't really hear any beats for these notes try use headset, its very clear even in 100% speed D:
01:15:123 (3,4) - This distance is a bit too long compared to other dashes i never miss in here so imo its fine, if u think too long then it uses for intense of the song
01:16:304 (1) - Seems off when there's a beat on red tick 01:16:659 - that you've mapped previously, maybe remove reverse and add a 1/2 slider or something cause it seems undermapped i tried but sounds weird. well on theory that should works fine so sure
01:21:147 (4,5,1) - I hear no triplets here? There is unmapped triplet here though; 01:20:910 - which makes it even more off.that 1/4 is totally hearable D:
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I wanna see this map qualified again soon! GL! :3

thanks

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-01-20T16:05:45+00:00

Update Nely's Overdose.

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2017-01-27T03:54:57+00:00

m4m! Why hasn't this got requalified yet?

[General]
looking fine to me

[Salad]
00:53:627 (2,3) - confusing ds here, it can be catched without using dash but I guess you want a dash here.

[Platter]
00:12:288 (3,4) - reduce ds a bit so that we can catch this pattern without a dash? like 00:13:706 (2,3)
00:28:351 (1,2) - comparing to other patterns in this part, I think you can reduce ds a bit here to make it a clear walk.
01:02:367 (1,2) - ds a bit larger than other small 1/2 jumps like 00:56:698 (1,2)

[Rain]
00:25:517 (3,4,5) - I would suggest using all circles to place a better flow, like this

SPOILER

00:50:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A more curved flow? My suggestion is move 00:50:202 (2) to x:136 and 00:50:792 (7) x:408
01:03:430 (5,6) - 1.0x ds?

[Nely's Overdose]
00:38:509 (3) - why no HDash here? it has a finish sound and I think it'll be better to emphasize it. Meanwhile some even lower beats are having HDash like 00:39:218 (3,4).
00:42:643 (1) - same question as above

Clean and nice set, can't pick out more problems. Good luck on requalifying!

rew0825

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-01-28T02:50:41+00:00

Yumeno Himiko wrote:
m4m! Why hasn't this got requalified yet?

[General]
looking fine to me

[Salad]
00:53:627 (2,3) - confusing ds here, it can be catched without using dash but I guess you want a dash here. Move it for dash.

[Platter]
00:12:288 (3,4) - reduce ds a bit so that we can catch this pattern without a dash? like 00:13:706 (2,3) Ok. move
00:28:351 (1,2) - comparing to other patterns in this part, I think you can reduce ds a bit here to make it a clear walk. Change it.
01:02:367 (1,2) - ds a bit larger than other small 1/2 jumps like 00:56:698 (1,2) Ok, Change.

[Rain]
00:25:517 (3,4,5) - I would suggest using all circles to place a better flow, like this I think now is look ok so don't change.
SPOILER
00:50:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A more curved flow? My suggestion is move 00:50:202 (2) to x:136 and 00:50:792 (7) x:408 Sure.
01:03:430 (5,6) - 1.0x ds? Move to left for 1.0x

Clean and nice set, can't pick out more problems. Good luck on requalifying!

Thank you very much <3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-01-29T04:00:06+00:00

added those hdash, thanks kaoshi

SPOILER

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-01-30T22:48:24+00:00

Update Nely's Overdose.

Unlucky_w

312 posts

Joined August 2014

Unlucky_w 2017-02-12T17:02:04+00:00

From modding queue

hmm. time to revive a bit.

Salad

00:09:454 (1) - This is bit far, just move to x:416 lol
00:56:698 (1) - Feel like something's wrong with the distant here. (The newbies will tend to dash quicker at the half of 00:56:225 (4) - and miss a combo.)
01:15:123 (3) - to x:424, feeling like it needs a dash but it doesn't so consider reducing the distant to make it obvious; plus it has similar sounds with 01:16:540 (2,3) - : so similar distant.

Platter

00:15:123 (1) - move to x:96, while having the HDash, some might go over this slider and miss the droplet, and also larger the distant with (2).
00:52:446 (6,7,8) - Reduce distant by moving them to x:176.

Rain

00:21:264 (5,6,7,8) - Move to x:64, the (6) can be easily miss.
can't find anymore..

Overdose

00:29:769 (3) - to x:100, the first combo of the slider can be easily miss.
00:58:115 (3) - to x:200, since there's purposely no HDash here, I think it should be move closer to (4), since it feels very edgy.

Now go and re-qualify this! -3-

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-02-13T01:05:06+00:00

FastYoshi wrote:
From modding queue

hmm. time to revive a bit.

Salad
00:09:454 (1) - This is bit far, just move to x:416 lol
00:56:698 (1) - Feel like something's wrong with the distant here. (The newbies will tend to dash quicker at the half of 00:56:225 (4) - and miss a combo.)
01:15:123 (3) - to x:424, feeling like it needs a dash but it doesn't so consider reducing the distant to make it obvious; plus it has similar sounds with 01:16:540 (2,3) - : so similar distant.

Platter
00:15:123 (1) - move to x:96, while having the HDash, some might go over this slider and miss the droplet, and also larger the distant with (2).
00:52:446 (6,7,8) - Reduce distant by moving them to x:176.

Rain
00:21:264 (5,6,7,8) - Move to x:64, the (6) can be easily miss.
can't find anymore..

Change everything.

Now go and re-qualify this! -3-

Thank you <3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-02-15T03:25:14+00:00

applied both, thank you :3

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Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2017-02-22T09:56:46+00:00

Hi~ from my queue.
Just some suggestions as the map is polished and I am still new modding CTB.
no kd if there is no help.

Mod

General

I suggest using same unicode. your title: サトシ（CV:松本梨香） you're using SBC case （） but DBC case :. And also, add a blank in Romanisez Artist (I am using _ instead of blank) : Satoshi (CV:_Rica Matsumoto)

Salad

01:26:462 (5) - newbies may dash to catch 01:26:698 (1) - and miss this note. consider 01:23:981 (4,5,1) - .
remove hitclap.
00:18:430 add soft-hitclap.

Platter

00:52:800 missing note here. also consider ctrl + H 00:52:446 (6,7,8,9) - to make them flow with 00:52:918 (1) - ?
move 00:52:446 (6) - to X: 140 https://puu.sh/uesOQ/cb1417d08b.png

Rain

00:51:383 (2) - move to X: 390 for hdashes ?
01:14:060 (2) - move to X: 85 and for hdash ?

Nely's Overdose

打不动啊。。。

01:07:682 (4,6) - 考虑加clap？可以用绿线降低下音效音量
01:16:659 (2) - 考虑加finish ？

GL~

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-02-22T10:29:02+00:00

Vanillas wrote:
Hi~ from my queue.
Just some suggestions as the map is polished and I am still new modding CTB.
no kd if there is no help.
Mod
General
I suggest using same unicode. your title: サトシ（CV:松本梨香） you're using SBC case （） but DBC case :. And also, add a blank in Romanisez Artist (I am using _ instead of blank) : Satoshi (CV:_Rica Matsumoto)
I not sure about it but https://osu.ppy.sh/s/379028 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/409649 are not have _ so Not change.
Salad
01:26:462 (5) - newbies may dash to catch 01:26:698 (1) - and miss this note. consider 01:23:981 (4,5,1) - . Change about distance of it.
remove hitclap.
00:18:430 add soft-hitclap. Add.
Platter
00:52:800 missing note here. also consider ctrl + H 00:52:446 (6,7,8,9) - to make them flow with 00:52:918 (1) - ? move 00:52:446 (6) - to X: 140 https://puu.sh/uesOQ/cb1417d08b.png Change a bit distance.
Rain
00:51:383 (2) - move to X: 390 for hdashes ? Move to x:360.
01:14:060 (2) - move to X: 85 and for hdash ? It's Hdash now?

GL~

Thank you

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-02-22T10:41:30+00:00

Vanillas wrote:
Nely's Overdose

打不动啊。。。我也是
01:07:682 (4,6) - 考虑加clap？可以用绿线降低下音效音量
01:16:659 (2) - 考虑加finish ？这里mapper copy音效所以我不愿意加finish。对我来说finish听得不太合适
[/box]

GL~

thanks

@rew : 01:07:682 (4,6) - add claps for them please thanks xD

Last edited by Xinely 2017-02-22T14:48:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-02-22T10:44:53+00:00

Add it and Update all.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-02-27T15:13:24+00:00

There were a lot of mods in the meantime! Recheck time:

[Overdose]

00:16:068 (1,2) - I don't really see the point in having a hyper with the next slider in this calm part. I do realise that jumps like 00:15:005 (3,1) - want to remark the cymbals, but you should've included a jump at 00:16:422 (2,3) - at most if you want to remark the vocals, though it's not that necessary.
00:22:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - On the other hand, in this part it's odd that you stopped including hypers after seeing the previous section. Would it be possible to get some at 00:23:509 (6,1) - and 00:23:981 (2,3) - .
00:44:887 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more to the left to increase the strength of that hyper? That'd give a nice introduction to the chorus.
00:51:029 (1,2,3,4) - Move both (2) and (4) to x:256... because of... you know, reasons? (:
00:58:115 (3,4) - It can be more intuitive to follow the vocals on this section. What about reorganising those 2 sliders into note+slider+note instead? Otherwise you'd be placing rather important beats at the end of the sliders instead.
01:05:202 (1,2,3,4) - This section flows rather funky having to combine stops and goes with those vertical + horizontal sliders. What about making (2) and (4) not so horizontal to have better remarked jumps instead?
01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Hm... What about making this section more interesting? I'm thinking of 01:19:847 (3) - could just go well with Ctrl-G and 01:20:556 (2) - could go for Ctrl-G and be moved to x:304 more or less so you can remark the vocal beats, which are rather strong in here.

[Rain]

00:12:997 (5,1) - I wouldn't really go for such strong hyper in the calm part. Care to reduce it a bit? Transforming (5) into a simple note could also work.
00:14:414 (5,6,7) - Something similar can be done for this part too. Consider reducing the distance of the hyper, since the music doesn't ask for that much.
00:27:879 (4,5,1) - The hyper should be between (5,1) instead, since that's closer to the cymbal sound. Consider moving (5) to abour x:448 for that.
00:43:470 (9,1) - The distance between the note and the spinner is quite short at this BPM. You should consider increasing it from 1/2 a beat to 1/1 instead as the Ranking Criteria states, or look for alternatives to that spinner.
00:51:737 (3,1,2) - I'd try avoiding (1) to have such great distance after the continuous hypers you placed with the previous sliders. Consider cancelling the hypers this slider (1) creates to have a bit of rest for the not-so-experienced players.
01:12:643 (3) - Consider placing the head of this slider at the left side of the previous slider instead to have a better flow in here. x:160 or similar positions would work.
01:13:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I know this is supposed to be an intense part, but having that many chained hypers are way too much for this difficulty. I'd get some of them cancelled this way, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7439885 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7439897 .
01:18:785 (4,5,1) - Something similar as what I found at 00:27:879 (4,5,1) - , it'd be better to place the hyper between (5,1) instead. Placing (5) into ~x:272 would make the deal.
01:23:036 (1,4) - Soften a bit the curve of both sliders? The created curve is especially spiky at the second slider though, but I bet you want to keep the symmetry.

[Platter]

00:54:808 (1,2) - A dash is probably missing between those sliders, taking into account the intensity of the vocals. What about moving the head of (2) more to the right, to about x:384?
00:58:588 (1,2) - Avoid placing antiflow structures after a hyper. Please make (2) vertical at least or make a little "C" shape out of it.
01:03:785 (6,1) - In this case you can improve the flow by placing the middle slider point of (1) at x:64 instead, so the slider starts vertical and turns horizontal. Making it more vertical wouldn't hurt either.
01:07:800 (4,1) - A similar case where the slider (1) could be more vertical to avoid borderline situations.
01:09:926 (1,2) - Quite unexpected to have an almost 0-distance spacing there, considering the intensity of the vocals. Would it be possible to introduce some dash in here?
01:23:036 (1) - Please curve this slider a bit more to improve the flow of the previous jump.

[Salad]

00:11:344 (1) - Move the head of the slider more to the left? You can create easily a more notorious dash instead of the current walkable one. Other dashes on this section that should be more remarked would be: 00:15:123 (1,2) - 00:18:666 (4,1) - .
01:07:564 (2) - Place this slider at more or less x:376 to include a dash into the next chorus?

[]
\o/

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-02-28T11:19:56+00:00

Deif wrote:
There were a lot of mods in the meantime! Recheck time:

[Rain]
00:12:997 (5,1) - I wouldn't really go for such strong hyper in the calm part. Care to reduce it a bit? Transforming (5) into a simple note could also work. Change.
00:14:414 (5,6,7) - Something similar can be done for this part too. Consider reducing the distance of the hyper, since the music doesn't ask for that much. Change.
00:27:879 (4,5,1) - The hyper should be between (5,1) instead, since that's closer to the cymbal sound. Consider moving (5) to abour x:448 for that. Change in my pattern.
00:43:470 (9,1) - The distance between the note and the spinner is quite short at this BPM. You should consider increasing it from 1/2 a beat to 1/1 instead as the Ranking Criteria states, or look for alternatives to that spinner. Change.
00:51:737 (3,1,2) - I'd try avoiding (1) to have such great distance after the continuous hypers you placed with the previous sliders. Consider cancelling the hypers this slider (1) creates to have a bit of rest for the not-so-experienced players. Ok. cancel Hdash.
01:12:643 (3) - Consider placing the head of this slider at the left side of the previous slider instead to have a better flow in here. x:160 or similar positions would work. Change.
01:13:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I know this is supposed to be an intense part, but having that many chained hypers are way too much for this difficulty. I'd get some of them cancelled this way, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7439885 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7439897 .
Change.
01:18:785 (4,5,1) - Something similar as what I found at 00:27:879 (4,5,1) - , it'd be better to place the hyper between (5,1) instead. Placing (5) into ~x:272 would make the deal. Change.
01:23:036 (1,4) - Soften a bit the curve of both sliders? The created curve is especially spiky at the second slider though, but I bet you want to keep the symmetry.
[Platter]
00:54:808 (1,2) - A dash is probably missing between those sliders, taking into account the intensity of the vocals. What about moving the head of (2) more to the right, to about x:384? Move to x:360.
00:58:588 (1,2) - Avoid placing antiflow structures after a hyper. Please make (2) vertical at least or make a little "C" shape out of it. Change.
01:03:785 (6,1) - In this case you can improve the flow by placing the middle slider point of (1) at x:64 instead, so the slider starts vertical and turns horizontal. Making it more vertical wouldn't hurt either. Change.
01:07:800 (4,1) - A similar case where the slider (1) could be more vertical to avoid borderline situations. Change.
01:09:926 (1,2) - Quite unexpected to have an almost 0-distance spacing there, considering the intensity of the vocals. Would it be possible to introduce some dash in here? Change.
01:23:036 (1) - Please curve this slider a bit more to improve the flow of the previous jump. Change.
[Salad]
00:11:344 (1) - Move the head of the slider more to the left? You can create easily a more notorious dash instead of the current walkable one. Other dashes on this section that should be more remarked would be: 00:15:123 (1,2) - 00:18:666 (4,1) - . Change.
01:07:564 (2) - Place this slider at more or less x:376 to include a dash into the next chorus? Change.
[]
\o/

Thanks a lot <3

Last edited by rew0825 2017-03-01T07:02:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-03-01T04:03:00+00:00

Deif wrote:
There were a lot of mods in the meantime! Recheck time:

[Overdose]
00:16:068 (1,2) - I don't really see the point in having a hyper with the next slider in this calm part. I do realise that jumps like 00:15:005 (3,1) - want to remark the cymbals, but you should've included a jump at 00:16:422 (2,3) - at most if you want to remark the vocals, though it's not that necessary.this was ur idea ayy, ok i tried to make jump on 2,3 instead
00:22:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - On the other hand, in this part it's odd that you stopped including hypers after seeing the previous section. Would it be possible to get some at 00:23:509 (6,1) - and 00:23:981 (2,3) - .
00:44:887 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more to the left to increase the strength of that hyper? That'd give a nice introduction to the chorus.
00:51:029 (1,2,3,4) - Move both (2) and (4) to x:256... because of... you know, reasons? (: ^^' 00:51:265 (2) - but move this to 324 for remove the hyper for consistency sake with (4)
00:58:115 (3,4) - It can be more intuitive to follow the vocals on this section. What about reorganising those 2 sliders into note+slider+note instead? Otherwise you'd be placing rather important beats at the end of the sliders instead.
01:05:202 (1,2,3,4) - This section flows rather funky having to combine stops and goes with those vertical + horizontal sliders. What about making (2) and (4) not so horizontal to have better remarked jumps instead?
01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Hm... What about making this section more interesting? I'm thinking of 01:19:847 (3) - could just go well with Ctrl-G and 01:20:556 (2) - could go for Ctrl-G and be moved to x:304 more or less so you can remark the vocal beats, which are rather strong in here.
\o/

basically fixed all but i did variation on last ur mod point。thanks deifu \w/

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-01T07:01:55+00:00

Update all.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-03-23T11:21:13+00:00

Let's give it another try:

Bubbled!

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2017-03-23T19:26:26+00:00

Better finish the M4M now before this gets qualified lmao

[General]

Looks fine.

[Salad]

00:14:651 (4) - This distance might appear as intimidating for beginners due to the fruit being caught on the edge of the platter(which is hard to time) - I suggest you to decrease the distance, also to be consistent with 00:22:210 (4) - .
00:18:903 (1) - However this distance is quite underwhelming considering this is a part transition - I suggest you to increase it.
00:53:863 (3) - Don't really get why you made a dash here considering 00:46:304 (3) - this had a similar pitch and didn't have a dash. Would be nice to see consistency between them.
00:54:808 (1) - Wouldn't make a dash here because all the other downbeats until now in the kiai at least had a cymbal to support them, while this doesn't. Making a distance increment would be better to emphasize the downbeat however.
01:14:651 (2) - This also comes off as another intimidating distance cause it is quite close to being a dash. Try to reduce a little bit.
01:26:698 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could add a dash here as it is the end of the song, so that it gives more emphasis. Your choice though.

[Platter]

00:13:706 (2) - Vocals here have a similar pitch like 00:14:178 (3) - this does so I don't really get why you use a distance close to being a dash - would try to lower the distance to avoid ambiguity.
00:20:438 (6) - This dash comes off as really weird for gameplay because your hitnormals are close to silent, and because you are not making a dash on a prominent sound(there's none here). I highly suggest you to remove the dash here.
00:21:265 (2) - This is very ambiguous due to how close it is close to being a dash, yet you can catch it by walking. This actually makes all the following notes quite intimidating to catch(these 00:21:737 (3,4) - two) cause if you mess the dash(or not) to this note, players are likely to encounter another ambiguous distance to the next note due to them overshooting a dash. Would reduce the distance here, and I highly recommend it.
00:23:155 (2) - Due to the previous hyper, catching this note solely by walking will be a challenge. I would try to reduce the distance so that the pattern becomes more linear to walk.
00:32:131 (1) - I'm surprised this can have no dash at all while the others can. You should be adding a dash here for the cymbals, and to stay consistent with your previous dashes(once every 2 downbeats).
00:39:218 (3) - Feels more like a dash than a simple distance increment, you only can catch this if you have a perfect timing. Even 00:41:107 (3) - this is easier to catch, so why not reduce the distance here?
00:48:666 (5) - I swear this is the only note I miss in the kiai. The distance makes this feel like a dash - but it is quite ambiguous cause your overall distance of the whole kiai is quite high. Would try to reduce this so that the pattern is a lot more linear to catch.

[Rain]

I gotta say, I like the beginning part until the chorus. Nice job
00:45:950 (4) - Placing a hyper on this red tick where there's nothing significant feels really off. For all the previous hypers I at least could see what you were following but not this one. Would have made more sense to add a hyper 00:46:068 (5) - here instead for both snare and the vocals, so maybe you could do that.
00:57:525 (4,1) - Swap NC for dem consistency.
01:26:698 (1) - The tail fruit of the slider feels quite out of the blue - all the droplets were in quite a vertical fashion so it was very easy to catch them with just walking, but because of how much the tail fruit is spaced out compared to the droplets, players who don't react fast enough will miss(and they will likely do so because the droplets doesn't suggest anything intense), or players who actually reacted would try to dash to that note might fail. To remove that likely scenario I would make the ending part of this slider more vertical. (so instead of this, you will end up with something like this if you decide to apply)

That's all, GL!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-24T07:59:22+00:00

Deif wrote:
Let's give it another try:

Bubbled!

Thank you so much TwT.

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:
Better finish the M4M now before this gets qualified lmao

[General]
Looks fine.
[Salad]
00:14:651 (4) - This distance might appear as intimidating for beginners due to the fruit being caught on the edge of the platter(which is hard to time) - I suggest you to decrease the distance, also to be consistent with 00:22:210 (4) - . Ok change.
00:18:903 (1) - However this distance is quite underwhelming considering this is a part transition - I suggest you to increase it. Change.
00:53:863 (3) - Don't really get why you made a dash here considering 00:46:304 (3) - this had a similar pitch and didn't have a dash. Would be nice to see consistency between them. Ok change.
00:54:808 (1) - Wouldn't make a dash here because all the other downbeats until now in the kiai at least had a cymbal to support them, while this doesn't. Making a distance increment would be better to emphasize the downbeat however. Change.
01:14:651 (2) - This also comes off as another intimidating distance cause it is quite close to being a dash. Try to reduce a little bit. Change.
01:26:698 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could add a dash here as it is the end of the song, so that it gives more emphasis. Your choice though. Ok add a dash.
[Platter]
00:13:706 (2) - Vocals here have a similar pitch like 00:14:178 (3) - this does so I don't really get why you use a distance close to being a dash - would try to lower the distance to avoid ambiguity. Change.
00:20:438 (6) - This dash comes off as really weird for gameplay because your hitnormals are close to silent, and because you are not making a dash on a prominent sound(there's none here). I highly suggest you to remove the dash here. Change.
00:21:265 (2) - This is very ambiguous due to how close it is close to being a dash, yet you can catch it by walking. This actually makes all the following notes quite intimidating to catch(these 00:21:737 (3,4) - two) cause if you mess the dash(or not) to this note, players are likely to encounter another ambiguous distance to the next note due to them overshooting a dash. Would reduce the distance here, and I highly recommend it. Change.
00:23:155 (2) - Due to the previous hyper, catching this note solely by walking will be a challenge. I would try to reduce the distance so that the pattern becomes more linear to walk. Change.
00:32:131 (1) - I'm surprised this can have no dash at all while the others can. You should be adding a dash here for the cymbals, and to stay consistent with your previous dashes(once every 2 downbeats). Ok change.
00:39:218 (3) - Feels more like a dash than a simple distance increment, you only can catch this if you have a perfect timing. Even 00:41:107 (3) - this is easier to catch, so why not reduce the distance here? Change.
00:48:666 (5) - I swear this is the only note I miss in the kiai. The distance makes this feel like a dash - but it is quite ambiguous cause your overall distance of the whole kiai is quite high. Would try to reduce this so that the pattern is a lot more linear to catch. Change.
[Rain]
I gotta say, I like the beginning part until the chorus. Nice job Thank you :3
00:45:950 (4) - Placing a hyper on this red tick where there's nothing significant feels really off. For all the previous hypers I at least could see what you were following but not this one. Would have made more sense to add a hyper 00:46:068 (5) - here instead for both snare and the vocals, so maybe you could do that. Change.
00:57:525 (4,1) - Swap NC for dem consistency. Ok.
01:26:698 (1) - The tail fruit of the slider feels quite out of the blue - all the droplets were in quite a vertical fashion so it was very easy to catch them with just walking, but because of how much the tail fruit is spaced out compared to the droplets, players who don't react fast enough will miss(and they will likely do so because the droplets doesn't suggest anything intense), or players who actually reacted would try to dash to that note might fail. To remove that likely scenario I would make the ending part of this slider more vertical. (so instead of this, you will end up with something like this if you decide to apply) Change.
That's all, GL!

Thanks a lot.

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-03-24T10:53:42+00:00

This mod was done with JBHyperion about a week ago, so I'm here to post it in case there's anything else that may be worth fixing.

Mod was done before Deif and Sc4's mod, so there might be something that had been mentioned.

[Rain]

00:04:611 (5,1) - why is this a hyper but not 00:05:556 (6,1) -? the second one has a finish hitsound just like 00:04:493 (4,5) - yet one is a hyper, and the other is walkable? On the other hand, this one got highlighted is a little bit unexpected.
00:09:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these reverse plays a lot easier than high space walks as you did on 00:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but I'd say the quoted one has higher intensity. You may turn those reverse into straight walks (or small dashes)
00:14:533 (6,7) - A normal dash is enough? the vocal in this whole part is not that heavy, so even you may jump for vocal, it still feels forced.
00:22:682 (1,2,3) - 2->3 need a farther distance if you refer to vocal because generally longer vocals are easier to catch attention and easy to be felt as emphasized. The current design is: 1->2 is not walkable (after a dash on the opposite direction), while 2->3 is completely walkable. it's actually quite easy to totally overshoot (3), because the spacing is much smaller than expected
00:26:462 (1,2) - Recommend make higher SV for these two sliders. Because in playing screen, it looks quite similar to 00:24:572 (1,2) - 00:17:013 (1,2,3) - . The sudden rhythm change of similar pattern has no enough implication. But making those two sliders longer can solve this problem (because there's obvious other hints than a red fruit)
00:27:288 - This vocal sounds really emphasized and should be a sliderhead. something like this fits the music more.
00:35:910 (1,2) - This HDash is acceptable but kinda inconsistent in this whole part (you don't do 1/1 HDash in this calm part generally)
00:45:832 (3,4) - unjustified HDash. The drum on 00:45:950 (4) - is quite soft. You should probably move it to x336, or you can also move 00:45:832 (3) - to x368
00:46:540 (2,3) - This jump is completely walkable. It feels a little bit unnatural during a Kiai. So probably make distance larger so that this jump is clear on playing screen?
01:01:895 (7,8,9,10,1) - overdone considering it is in a calmer part. this is an antiflow hyper chain after all.
01:03:548 - this sound being missed is really weird lol. I'd rather remove 01:03:076 (3) - and add something on 01:03:548 - because you are partially following vocal. 01:03:076 (3) - is just quite a soft drum while 01:03:548 - is a heavy vocal start.
Very decent flow.

[Nely's Overdose]

00:03:076 (3) - ctrl+G this will make the finish emphasis more consistent
00:05:438 (4) - being a border hyper is of a problem, it's an uncomfortable stop from that hyper for sure
00:20:084 (2,3,4,5) - wrong emphasis of rhythm. jump should be on 00:20:202 (3) - for the vocal probably
00:21:265 (3,4,1) - I think the distance is sorta too large?
00:42:643 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is pretty weird as a whole. Using 1 more 1/1 slider first, and then two 1/2 sliders might be a better option, since then the guitar sound mapped by 00:41:580 (1,2,3) - is mapped 4 times instead of 3. makes more sense for a 4/4 song. You may argue that those 1/2 sliders are made for vocals. But you also do hitsounds for drums. CTB players are mostly following one track instead of multi ones (mania players do). And the hitsound track is really catchy that most players will regard it as the main track. As a result, the vocal following patterns feel really weird anyway.
00:52:682 (2) - the drum-whistle at slidertail is confusing. I don't see anything to be expresses by this whistle :thinking:
00:53:863 (1,2,3,4) - these spaces are just weird. 00:54:218 (2,4) - these sounds are not really to be emphasized from my side, but there must be speed buff from 00:53:863 (1,3) - these vertical sliders toward those circles. It doesn't play right imo. Besides, it's really easy to overshoot those vertical sliders. If you are trying to make some differences with following pairs, that's even more weird: why would a slider with lower pitch play harder? In fact similar setting in next kiai plays better: 01:08:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . I strongly suggest you use something similar to the latter one.
00:57:879 (2,3) - Ctrl+G the rhythm. Otherwise rhythm arrangement here 00:57:879 (2,3,4,5) - is not really understandable for me. Clear drums and vocals are all on 00:57:879 - 00:58:115 - , and 00:58:233 - .
01:19:021 (3) - something also should be done on this slider for the strong drum on slidertail. You can 01:18:785 (2) - ctrl+G this, then split 01:19:021 (3) - into 2 circles. The first one is on the left side to generate a normal walk from 01:18:785 (2) - (after Ctrl+G), then another circle on the right side to generate a jump. BESIDES, 1/1 slider and single circle for the vocal could also work.
01:26:344 (4,5,6,7) - from a player perspective, they hyper strengths are significantly different, so this is pretty uncomfortable to play. And to make it worse, it doesn't follow a pattern of increasing or decreasing strength. if 01:26:462 (5,6,7) - were moved left a bit so that first hyper isn't so strong, you could have strong > weak > strong, but the difference between them would be less, so it's less "random" to play.

Good luck~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-03-24T11:57:00+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
This mod was done with JBHyperion about a week ago, so I'm here to post it in case there's anything else that may be worth fixing.

[Nely's Overdose]
00:03:076 (3) - ctrl+G this will make the finish emphasis more consistent
00:05:438 (4) - being a border hyper is of a problem, it's an uncomfortable stop from that hyper for sure
00:20:084 (2,3,4,5) - wrong emphasis of rhythm. jump should be on 00:20:202 (3) - for the vocal probably nope, vocal at 3 is weaker than 5 for me
00:21:265 (3,4,1) - I think the distance is sorta too large? not really but i find that ctrl+g is better so i do
00:42:643 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is pretty weird as a whole. Using 1 more 1/1 slider first, and then two 1/2 sliders might be a better option, since then the guitar sound mapped by 00:41:580 (1,2,3) - is mapped 4 times instead of 3. makes more sense for a 4/4 song. You may argue that those 1/2 sliders are made for vocals. But you also do hitsounds for drums. CTB players are mostly following one track instead of multi ones (mania players do). And the hitsound track is really catchy that most players will regard it as the main track. As a result, the vocal following patterns feel really weird anyway. that made for emphasis vocal yes, i think i can just change the hitsounds, i tried to try with ur suggestion but i cant find good emphasis to make them hyperdashes
00:52:682 (2) - the drum-whistle at slidertail is confusing. I don't see anything to be expresses by this whistle :thinking:
00:53:863 (1,2,3,4) - these spaces are just weird. 00:54:218 (2,4) - these sounds are not really to be emphasized from my side, but there must be speed buff from 00:53:863 (1,3) - these vertical sliders toward those circles. It doesn't play right imo. Besides, it's really easy to overshoot those vertical sliders. If you are trying to make some differences with following pairs, that's even more weird: why would a slider with lower pitch play harder? In fact similar setting in next kiai plays better: 01:08:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . I strongly suggest you use something similar to the latter one. lowered their circles spacings, hopefully its good enough
00:57:879 (2,3) - Ctrl+G the rhythm. Otherwise rhythm arrangement here 00:57:879 (2,3,4,5) - is not really understandable for me. Clear drums and vocals are all on 00:57:879 - 00:58:115 - , and 00:58:233 - . use circles and consistent spacing instead, i tried ctrl+g but cant find cute placement for them
01:19:021 (3) - something also should be done on this slider for the strong drum on slidertail. You can 01:18:785 (2) - ctrl+G this, then split 01:19:021 (3) - into 2 circles. The first one is on the left side to generate a normal walk from 01:18:785 (2) - (after Ctrl+G), then another circle on the right side to generate a jump. BESIDES, 1/1 slider and single circle for the vocal could also work. yap, i use 1/2 slider repeat and circle instead
01:26:344 (4,5,6,7) - from a player perspective, they hyper strengths are significantly different, so this is pretty uncomfortable to play. And to make it worse, it doesn't follow a pattern of increasing or decreasing strength. if 01:26:462 (5,6,7) - were moved left a bit so that first hyper isn't so strong, you could have strong > weak > strong, but the difference between them would be less, so it's less "random" to play.rippu pp ya i tried to reduce the (6) spacing a bit
Good luck~

xiexie

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[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-24T18:52:47+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
This mod was done with JBHyperion about a week ago, so I'm here to post it in case there's anything else that may be worth fixing.

Mod was done before Deif and Sc4's mod, so there might be something that had been mentioned.

[Rain]
00:04:611 (5,1) - why is this a hyper but not 00:05:556 (6,1) -? the second one has a finish hitsound just like 00:04:493 (4,5) - yet one is a hyper, and the other is walkable? On the other hand, this one got highlighted is a little bit unexpected. Change.
00:09:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these reverse plays a lot easier than high space walks as you did on 00:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but I'd say the quoted one has higher intensity. You may turn those reverse into straight walks (or small dashes) Change.
00:14:533 (6,7) - A normal dash is enough? the vocal in this whole part is not that heavy, so even you may jump for vocal, it still feels forced. I think it's not a problem because 00:22:092 (2,3) - is consistant and it have hdash too
00:22:682 (1,2,3) - 2->3 need a farther distance if you refer to vocal because generally longer vocals are easier to catch attention and easy to be felt as emphasized. The current design is: 1->2 is not walkable (after a dash on the opposite direction), while 2->3 is completely walkable. it's actually quite easy to totally overshoot (3), because the spacing is much smaller than expected Change a bit distance.
00:26:462 (1,2) - Recommend make higher SV for these two sliders. Because in playing screen, it looks quite similar to 00:24:572 (1,2) - 00:17:013 (1,2,3) - . The sudden rhythm change of similar pattern has no enough implication. But making those two sliders longer can solve this problem (because there's obvious other hints than a red fruit) I think it's look ok but I will change a bit about distance.
00:27:288 - This vocal sounds really emphasized and should be a sliderhead. something like this fits the music more. Change in my.
00:35:910 (1,2) - This HDash is acceptable but kinda inconsistent in this whole part (you don't do 1/1 HDash in this calm part generally) Ok change.
00:45:832 (3,4) - unjustified HDash. The drum on 00:45:950 (4) - is quite soft. You should probably move it to x336, or you can also move 00:45:832 (3) - to x368 Have change on Sc4's mod
00:46:540 (2,3) - This jump is completely walkable. It feels a little bit unnatural during a Kiai. So probably make distance larger so that this jump is clear on playing screen? Ok change.
01:01:895 (7,8,9,10,1) - overdone considering it is in a calmer part. this is an antiflow hyper chain after all.
01:03:548 - this sound being missed is really weird lol. I'd rather remove 01:03:076 (3) - and add something on 01:03:548 - because you are partially following vocal. 01:03:076 (3) - is just quite a soft drum while 01:03:548 - is a heavy vocal start. I think it's ok follow a drum sound.
Very decent flow. Thank you :3

Good luck~

Thank you

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-03-26T16:49:17+00:00

Re-checking this.

[Salad]

00:09:454 (1) - I personally don't recommend having pattern which goes backwards after a jump because new players are hardly have controls over their movements and they often overjump. Its better to have something closer to vertical or one which goes into the same direction as the flow.
00:17:958 (4,1) - I'm not sure if it is intentional but this distance is perfectly walkable while can deceive newbies to jump and have a miss on the tick. Either move the head of 1 a bit closer to 4 or make the distance bigger to make it clearer.
00:59:533 (2,3,1) - Similar spot to the first again. I would recommend to make the distance between 2,3 a bit bigger so you can eventually make 1 to be a bit more vertical to make it easier to handle.
01:09:926 (1,2) - I would go with this pattern instead here: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/U2pBwbAU ctrl+g where I basically rotated 1 to face to left then ctrl+g 2 and move it to x:232. For the next few note:
01:10:871 (3,4,1) - http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/albMQlEY (oh I accidentally ended 1 on blue tick that is just a mistake. :c)
01:12:643 (3) - After the changes above this will remain what I changed to be like http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/oaIkWNWl Feel free to make something different, or to be honest, you are encouraged to do that.
01:17:485 (1) - For this while I don't really like the idea you could try moving a bit more to left to have it closer to the side of the screen so newbies will have a support in case they want to overjump it and might be able to handle the movement of this slider.

These are not must to be fixed and mainly just personal preferences. Other wise the difficulty is fine.

[Platter]

00:18:785 (5,1) - This Hyper is strong and the problem is not mainly come from the distance because 00:15:005 (5,1) - plays just fine. I think the problem is that here you almost used a vertical slider which requires sudden stop and good Hyper handling skill which I don't think players have at this level. I advice you to change the direction of 1 to be a bit more horizontal instead.
00:29:651 (4,1) - I wonder why there is no Hyper here while there is one at 00:25:989 (4,1). I know it is not exactly the same so if you do not want that higher spacing is fine as well (currently the distance is walkable).
00:41:580 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be really hard to those with no Hyper control yet. I tried out 2 scenario, the first when I only catched the first fruit by the edge of the platter, here I was able to catch the whole pattern without any additional dash. The other scenario was when I allowed myself to hit the wall and here comes the twist, after this not only several more additional dash needed but I even had some miss as well. My advice here to try to make these patterns a little bit more vertical to allow players to only move a few in the case the second scenario.
00:50:084 (3,4,1) - This is the only spot where you used double Hyper on the whole difficulty. I'm not sure if it is even needed but if you really want to keep it then at least make 4 to face left to make it easier for new players to easily reach the second Hyperfruit.

[Rain]

00:03:076 (3) - I would make this more vertical. Currently coming out of the previous pattern it is easy to overjump the tail of this slider.
00:15:123 (1,2) - Honestly this distance feels a little bit overdone to me. After that Hyper this requires a full dash to right but there is nothing in the music which suggest this kind of movement. I'm not against the pattern but it just don't fit in here. Please shorten the distance so the movement will be less harsh.
01:07:328 (2) - This note feels kinda out of place to me. I would go with an 1/2 slider instead.

I honestly don't like this rain. It seems you used Hyper at every possible strong beat which makes it to be really close to Overdose level. I do believe that there are at least 4 different way to highlight stronger beats. But this also could be personal preference.

[Overdose]

00:52:918 (1) - I personally find it easy to miss this slider"s tick because of the previous Hyper pattern. It might be better to make this a little bit more horizontal.
00:58:588 (1,2) - I fond the distance between these a little bit higher than it should be. It might be because I'm not used to ar9.6 but it is kinda hard to reach 2 due the previous Hyper.
01:26:462 (5,6) - Same issue as at the previous, the distance is quite higher which makes it easier to miss.

Rest is fine to me.
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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-26T18:56:45+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Re-checking this.

[Salad]

00:09:454 (1) - I personally don't recommend having pattern which goes backwards after a jump because new players are hardly have controls over their movements and they often overjump. Its better to have something closer to vertical or one which goes into the same direction as the flow. Change.
00:17:958 (4,1) - I'm not sure if it is intentional but this distance is perfectly walkable while can deceive newbies to jump and have a miss on the tick. Either move the head of 1 a bit closer to 4 or make the distance bigger to make it clearer. Change.
00:59:533 (2,3,1) - Similar spot to the first again. I would recommend to make the distance between 2,3 a bit bigger so you can eventually make 1 to be a bit more vertical to make it easier to handle. Change.
01:09:926 (1,2) - I would go with this pattern instead here: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/U2pBwbAU ctrl+g where I basically rotated 1 to face to left then ctrl+g 2 and move it to x:232. For the next few note:
01:10:871 (3,4,1) - http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/albMQlEY (oh I accidentally ended 1 on blue tick that is just a mistake. :c) Change both.
01:12:643 (3) - After the changes above this will remain what I changed to be like http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/oaIkWNWl Feel free to make something different, or to be honest, you are encouraged to do that. Change a little.
01:17:485 (1) - For this while I don't really like the idea you could try moving a bit more to left to have it closer to the side of the screen so newbies will have a support in case they want to overjump it and might be able to handle the movement of this slider. Change.

These are not must to be fixed and mainly just personal preferences. Other wise the difficulty is fine. Thank you.

[Platter]

00:18:785 (5,1) - This Hyper is strong and the problem is not mainly come from the distance because 00:15:005 (5,1) - plays just fine. I think the problem is that here you almost used a vertical slider which requires sudden stop and good Hyper handling skill which I don't think players have at this level. I advice you to change the direction of 1 to be a bit more horizontal instead. i do 00:18:666 (4,5) - ctrl+g, it's look better.
00:29:651 (4,1) - I wonder why there is no Hyper here while there is one at 00:25:989 (4,1). I know it is not exactly the same so if you do not want that higher spacing is fine as well (currently the distance is walkable). Change.
00:41:580 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be really hard to those with no Hyper control yet. I tried out 2 scenario, the first when I only catched the first fruit by the edge of the platter, here I was able to catch the whole pattern without any additional dash. The other scenario was when I allowed myself to hit the wall and here comes the twist, after this not only several more additional dash needed but I even had some miss as well. My advice here to try to make these patterns a little bit more vertical to allow players to only move a few in the case the second scenario. Change.
00:50:084 (3,4,1) - This is the only spot where you used double Hyper on the whole difficulty. I'm not sure if it is even needed but if you really want to keep it then at least make 4 to face left to make it easier for new players to easily reach the second Hyperfruit. Move (4) to left 2 grid.

[Rain]

00:03:076 (3) - I would make this more vertical. Currently coming out of the previous pattern it is easy to overjump the tail of this slider. Change.
00:15:123 (1,2) - Honestly this distance feels a little bit overdone to me. After that Hyper this requires a full dash to right but there is nothing in the music which suggest this kind of movement. I'm not against the pattern but it just don't fit in here. Please shorten the distance so the movement will be less harsh. Ok, Move it.
01:07:328 (2) - This note feels kinda out of place to me. I would go with an 1/2 slider instead. I think it's look ok because on 01:07:446 i hear a sound is low.

I honestly don't like this rain. It seems you used Hyper at every possible strong beat which makes it to be really close to Overdose level. I do believe that there are at least 4 different way to highlight stronger beats. But this also could be personal preference. Maybe because I want my Rain is enjoy so it will have a lot Hdash nearby Overdose but i try to delete it for new players.
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Thank you so much

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-03-26T19:12:55+00:00

Do not force yourself to remove Hypers from Rain at all. Only do that if you truly think that should be done in case you do it. My last words are mainly aimed to your future mapping and not for this one. I tend to speak a little about my personal feelings and preferences about the difficulty itself at every one's end.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-03-27T07:07:16+00:00

basically changed all. i tried to reduce those 2 kuro's mentions a bit. hopefully they can be caught easier than before

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rew0825

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Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-27T07:15:40+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Do not force yourself to remove Hypers from Rain at all. Only do that if you truly think that should be done in case you do it. My last words are mainly aimed to your future mapping and not for this one. I tend to speak a little about my personal feelings and preferences about the difficulty itself at every one's end.

Ok, in the future mapping I will do it better more. And Update All.

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2017-03-27T07:55:34+00:00

Let's move this forward.

rew0825

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Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-03-28T06:45:48+00:00

Ohh, Thank you

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-04-04T02:19:20+00:00

As this is not yet qualified, I want to address an issue regarding the Romanised Artist now.

Since サトシ（CV:松本梨香） is not an individual alias by the voice actress, please stick with the "surname, first name" format unless there's official information on romanisation of this alias. This is to make sure the order does not mess up when there are several artists having their own romanisation with different orders within the same group - this map or artists showing both voice actor and character name - this map. It is quite weird to see something like Tomita Miyu, Onishi Saori, Naomi Ohzora, Hanazawa Kana or Naoki Miki(CV.Rie Takahashi) & Ebisuzawa Kurumi(CV.Ozawa Ari), right?

The above reason seems not applying to this case but to make things standardized, let's have Satoshi (CV:Matsumoto Rica) as the artist before pushing this map forward.

rew0825

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rew0825 2017-04-04T05:26:36+00:00

Ok, Change it and Update.

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2017-04-07T19:00:32+00:00

too short

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2017-04-24T10:25:54+00:00

It seems that nobody will check this, so here I am.

Keep in mind that I'm trying to avoid being picky, so I'm pointing out only important stuff, read it carefully and poke me if you have any doubt about my mod. In other words, Let yourself help or I won't be able to do anything else.

Salad

00:03:312 (3,1) - why aren't you enphasizing the strong sound on 00:03:785 -? I recommend you to move 00:00:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - to x:168.
00:12:761 (4,1) - why are you still using the same distance as strong sounds like 00:07:092 (5,1) - or 00:08:981 (5,1) -? I can't hear a prominent sound that deserve a long jump or something related, reduce it around 2.30x or 2.40x of distance as u did on 00:20:320 (4,1) -, I suggest you to move 00:13:233 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - to x:376
00:22:210 (4,1) - why a huge jump if the enphasis should be only at 00:22:918 (2,3) - as u did on 00:15:832 (4,5) -, try moving 00:22:682 (1,2,3) - to x:307, also I don't understand why 00:24:572 - and 00:26:225 - don't have notes if instruments are very intenses, so after apply my previous suggestion, I recommend you to add a note at 00:24:572 - at x:277 and other note at 00:26:225 - at x:182, add a jump between 00:26:225 - and 00:26:462 -
00:54:808 (1,2) - add a little bit more distance here as you were doing on 00:53:863 (3,4) -, 1.30x of distance could be ok.
00:58:115 (4,1) - I was expecting a little bit more of distance if you think that your current distance is ok, reduce at 00:50:556 (4,1) -, it's up to you, but keep consistency, don't use different distances when the sound is the same.
01:00:477 - missing NC.
01:07:564 (2) - what are you following with this slider? instrument or vocal? in both cases I feel that you miss a note at 01:07:328 -.
01:24:572 (5,1) - try to use the same distance as 01:22:564 (4,1) - cause is the same instrument sound and vocal pitches are more than similar.

Platter

00:22:564 (5) - I can't hear a prominent sound that deserve note, hyper dash could be aceptable but I strongly recommend you to remove such note.
00:33:785 - add clap, sounds much better.
00:34:493 - no hitsound? clap with soft sampleset as you did on 00:36:383 -?
00:48:666 (5,1) - this jump is overdone compared to the rest of hypers throughout the whole difficulty, keep the hyper dash but reduce the distance a bit
00:50:084 (3,4) - unnecessary hyper dash, I can hear voice pitch only, very similar as 00:54:808 (1,2,3) - and you are not using hyper dashes, be constant and don't place random hyper dashes
00:57:525 - add NC, I don't understand how you placed NCs cause there is a long Combo at 00:56:698 - and then NC for 3 fruits ( 00:58:588 (1) - ), also ( 00:59:533 (1,2,3,4) - )
01:05:674 - missing clap

Rain
I'm agree with kurokami about you used Hyper at every possible strong beat also at some nonsense parts, please reconsider removing some, specially to keep a better spread, and avoid more possible DQs around your map.

00:11:344 - this part is calmer than 00:18:903 -, but where is the difference? plus, did you take a look to overdose at this part? your rain have more hyper dashes at this part than the highest diff, I don't think it is ok, so you should remove the current hyper dashes:
- 00:11:816 (2,3) -
- 00:12:997 (5,1) -
- 00:14:533 (6,7) -
00:20:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you used this kind of patterns more than twice at kiai time, I won't say to remove it at least at kiai but this part isn't kiai, so be reasonable, there isn't a strong sound at 00:21:265 -, why hyperdash? you are overenphasizing some sounds without a reason, so remove the current hyper dash between 00:21:147 (4,5) -
00:22:092 (2,3) - same as above here, remove the current hyper dash, after removing it, try to test your diff and you will find a better balance between this part and kiai.
00:18:430 - are you missing a clap here? with soft sampleset maybe?
00:19:847 - 00:25:753 - 00:31:422 - 00:34:966 - 00:42:997 - 01:10:871 - 01:15:123 - 01:17:013 - add NC, your current combos are near to the maximum allowed of the RC.
00:49:611 (2,3,4,5) - I recommend you to make this part like 00:50:084 (1,2,3,4) - and change 00:50:556 (5,6,7,8) - into 00:49:611 (2,3,4,5) - cause drums at 00:50:556 (5,6,7,8) - have more intensity, take a look to 01:07:564 (3,4) -
It's ridiculous how you enphasize 00:55:162 (4,5) - where I can't find a prominent sound that deserve a hyper and you missed one at 00:56:698 (1) -, first of all, I recommend you to remove hyperdash between 00:56:107 (2,3) -, add a note on 00:56:580 - to make a hyperdash between 00:56:580 - and 00:56:698 -
00:59:769 - clap, same as overdose, this part sounds empty without hitsound
01:02:013 (8,9) - unnecessary hyper dash, where is the strong sound? specially when you have a similar pattern so close that really deserve this pattern ( 01:07:564 (3,4) - )
01:05:792 (7,8) - same as above, you can keep the hyper dash between 01:06:029 (9,1) - but make 01:05:674 (6,7,8,9) - like 00:50:084 (1,2,3,4) - or something related, this is a calm part, is the break between kiais, so be reasonable please.
01:25:517 (2,3) - another unnecessary hyper dash, this diff have potential patterns to get some DQ mods, if you are tired of getting your maps desqualified, please reconsider some hypers and read my mod carefully, I'm giving you examples and reasons, so I'll be waiting a good reply if you will decline it.

Himely's Overdose

00:12:997 (4,1) - add hyperdash, the current gap between rain and overdose at this part is weird cause rain have more hypers than you, I suggested him to remove some, but platter, rain (after apply my mod) and overdose will be basically the same (without hyper dash), so reconsider.
00:46:777 (4,5,6) - this is very unconfortable at testing, make a mirrored pattern of 00:46:304 (1,2,3) - please, remove 00:46:777 (4,5,6) - and copy/paste 00:46:304 (1,2,3) -, then press ctrl+h and move to x:152
00:51:029 (1,2) - I was asking me, why I'm always missing at this part, and I strongly recommend you to reduce the distance between such notes, around 1.20x feels better tbh.
00:51:383 (3,4) - same as above for consistency.
00:51:737 (5) - I don't think if this slider is following the song propertly and I'll explain why, drums are basically the same as 00:51:973 (1,2,3,4) - so it will be a good idea if you made a continues pattern like 00:31:422 (2,3,4) - or 00:26:816 (2,3,4,5) - avoiding a hyperdash between 00:51:737 (5,1) -
00:52:446 - 1/4 starts here, change it into slider and don't skip 00:52:505 -
00:52:564 (1,2,3,1) - why are you decreasing the distances gradually? I mean, normally when I play this kind of patterns the distances should increase between each note gradually cause the strongest sound is at the end of the pattern, 00:52:918 - at this case, or do you think that 00:52:682 - is stronger than 00:52:918 -? because the current distance between 00:52:564 (1,2) - is longer than 00:52:800 (3,1) -.
00:56:107 (2,3) - add hyperdash, I'm imagining that you skip the hyper dash here cause no vocal right? but what happened at 01:11:225 (2,3) - ? is the same but... why hyper dash? so keep consistency, add between 00:56:107 (2,3) - or remove between 01:11:225 (2,3) -
why if 00:58:588 (1,2) - and 00:58:942 (3,4) - have the same pitch, the second one have more distance? also with hyper dash, I recommend you to move 00:58:588 (1,2) - to x:468, then remove 00:58:942 (3,4) -, copy/paste 00:58:588 (1,2) - on 00:58:942 - and press ctrl+h, feels better imo
01:20:792 (3) - can you finish it at 01:20:910 - and add notes at 01:21:029 - and 01:21:088 - cause drums are prominent.

Call me back

Xinely

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Xinely 2017-04-24T10:47:24+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Himely's Overdose

00:12:997 (4,1) - add hyperdash, the current gap between rain and overdose at this part is weird cause rain have more hypers than you, I suggested him to remove some, but platter, rain (after apply my mod) and overdose will be basically the same (without hyper dash), so reconsider.
00:46:777 (4,5,6) - this is very unconfortable at testing, make a mirrored pattern of 00:46:304 (1,2,3) - please, remove 00:46:777 (4,5,6) - and copy/paste 00:46:304 (1,2,3) -, then press ctrl+h and move to x:152
00:51:029 (1,2) - I was asking me, why I'm always missing at this part, and I strongly recommend you to reduce the distance between such notes, around 1.20x feels better tbh.
00:51:383 (3,4) - same as above for consistency.
00:51:737 (5) - I don't think if this slider is following the song propertly and I'll explain why, drums are basically the same as 00:51:973 (1,2,3,4) - so it will be a good idea if you made a continues pattern like 00:31:422 (2,3,4) - or 00:26:816 (2,3,4,5) - avoiding a hyperdash between 00:51:737 (5,1) - nah i make 00:51:973 - hdash in here because to seperate prev pattern to this drum pattern, 00:51:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - since they have constant drum strengths here so i decide to make them like that with consistent spacing
00:52:446 - 1/4 starts here, change it into slider and don't skip 00:52:505 -
00:52:564 (1,2,3,1) - why are you decreasing the distances gradually? I mean, normally when I play this kind of patterns the distances should increase between each note gradually cause the strongest sound is at the end of the pattern, 00:52:918 - at this case, or do you think that 00:52:682 - is stronger than 00:52:918 -? because the current distance between 00:52:564 (1,2) - is longer than 00:52:800 (3,1) -.
00:56:107 (2,3) - add hyperdash, I'm imagining that you skip the hyper dash here cause no vocal right? but what happened at 01:11:225 (2,3) - ? is the same but... why hyper dash? so keep consistency, add between 00:56:107 (2,3) - or remove between 01:11:225 (2,3) - lol removed the second one hdash instead
why if 00:58:588 (1,2) - and 00:58:942 (3,4) - have the same pitch, the second one have more distance? also with hyper dash, I recommend you to move 00:58:588 (1,2) - to x:468, then remove 00:58:942 (3,4) -, copy/paste 00:58:588 (1,2) - on 00:58:942 - and press ctrl+h, feels better imo
01:20:792 (3) - can you finish it at 01:20:910 - and add notes at 01:21:029 - and 01:21:088 - cause drums are prominent. since the drum is weak its barely hearable in 100%, i prefer to emphasis "to" vocal here

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rew0825

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rew0825 2017-04-24T15:25:55+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
It seems that nobody will check this, so here I am.

Keep in mind that I'm trying to avoid being picky, so I'm pointing out only important stuff, read it carefully and poke me if you have any doubt about my mod. In other words, Let yourself help or I won't be able to do anything else.

Salad
00:03:312 (3,1) - why aren't you enphasizing the strong sound on 00:03:785 -? I recommend you to move 00:00:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - to x:168. Move to x:136
00:12:761 (4,1) - why are you still using the same distance as strong sounds like 00:07:092 (5,1) - or 00:08:981 (5,1) -? I can't hear a prominent sound that deserve a long jump or something related, reduce it around 2.30x or 2.40x of distance as u did on 00:20:320 (4,1) -, I suggest you to move 00:13:233 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - to x:376 Change.
00:22:210 (4,1) - why a huge jump if the enphasis should be only at 00:22:918 (2,3) - as u did on 00:15:832 (4,5) -, try moving 00:22:682 (1,2,3) - to x:307, also I don't understand why 00:24:572 - and 00:26:225 - don't have notes if instruments are very intenses, so after apply my previous suggestion, I recommend you to add a note at 00:24:572 - at x:277 and other note at 00:26:225 - at x:182, add a jump between 00:26:225 - and 00:26:462 - Change all.
00:54:808 (1,2) - add a little bit more distance here as you were doing on 00:53:863 (3,4) -, 1.30x of distance could be ok. Change.
00:58:115 (4,1) - I was expecting a little bit more of distance if you think that your current distance is ok, reduce at 00:50:556 (4,1) -, it's up to you, but keep consistency, don't use different distances when the sound is the same. Try to make distance of both is equal.
01:00:477 - missing NC. Add.
01:07:564 (2) - what are you following with this slider? instrument or vocal? in both cases I feel that you miss a note at 01:07:328 -. Change.
01:24:572 (5,1) - try to use the same distance as 01:22:564 (4,1) - cause is the same instrument sound and vocal pitches are more than similar. Change.

Platter
00:22:564 (5) - I can't hear a prominent sound that deserve note, hyper dash could be aceptable but I strongly recommend you to remove such note. Not change. I need to have Hdash on 00:22:682 (1) - so it's hard to make Hdash with other pattern.
00:33:785 - add clap, sounds much better. Sure.
00:34:493 - no hitsound? clap with soft sampleset as you did on 00:36:383 -? Forget, Add it.
00:48:666 (5,1) - this jump is overdone compared to the rest of hypers throughout the whole difficulty, keep the hyper dash but reduce the distance a bit Change.
00:50:084 (3,4) - unnecessary hyper dash, I can hear voice pitch only, very similar as 00:54:808 (1,2,3) - and you are not using hyper dashes, be constant and don't place random hyper dashes Change.
00:57:525 - add NC, I don't understand how you placed NCs cause there is a long Combo at 00:56:698 - and then NC for 3 fruits ( 00:58:588 (1) - ), also ( 00:59:533 (1,2,3,4) - ) Add.
01:05:674 - missing clap Add.

Rain
I'm agree with kurokami about you used Hyper at every possible strong beat also at some nonsense parts, please reconsider removing some, specially to keep a better spread, and avoid more possible DQs around your map.

00:11:344 - this part is calmer than 00:18:903 -, but where is the difference? plus, did you take a look to overdose at this part? your rain have more hyper dashes at this part than the highest diff, I don't think it is ok, so you should remove the current hyper dashes:
- 00:11:816 (2,3) -
- 00:12:997 (5,1) -
- 00:14:533 (6,7) - Change all.
00:20:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you used this kind of patterns more than twice at kiai time, I won't say to remove it at least at kiai but this part isn't kiai, so be reasonable, there isn't a strong sound at 00:21:265 -, why hyperdash? you are overenphasizing some sounds without a reason, so remove the current hyper dash between 00:21:147 (4,5) - Change.
00:22:092 (2,3) - same as above here, remove the current hyper dash, after removing it, try to test your diff and you will find a better balance between this part and kiai. Change.
00:18:430 - are you missing a clap here? with soft sampleset maybe? Add.
00:19:847 - 00:25:753 - 00:31:422 - 00:34:966 - 00:42:997 - 01:10:871 - 01:15:123 - 01:17:013 - add NC, your current combos are near to the maximum allowed of the RC. Change.
00:49:611 (2,3,4,5) - I recommend you to make this part like 00:50:084 (1,2,3,4) - and change 00:50:556 (5,6,7,8) - into 00:49:611 (2,3,4,5) - cause drums at 00:50:556 (5,6,7,8) - have more intensity, take a look to 01:07:564 (3,4) - Change.
It's ridiculous how you enphasize 00:55:162 (4,5) - where I can't find a prominent sound that deserve a hyper and you missed one at 00:56:698 (1) -, first of all, I recommend you to remove hyperdash between 00:56:107 (2,3) -, add a note on 00:56:580 - to make a hyperdash between 00:56:580 - and 00:56:698 - Change.
00:59:769 - clap, same as overdose, this part sounds empty without hitsound Change.
01:02:013 (8,9) - unnecessary hyper dash, where is the strong sound? specially when you have a similar pattern so close that really deserve this pattern ( 01:07:564 (3,4) - ) Change.
01:05:792 (7,8) - same as above, you can keep the hyper dash between 01:06:029 (9,1) - but make 01:05:674 (6,7,8,9) - like 00:50:084 (1,2,3,4) - or something related, this is a calm part, is the break between kiais, so be reasonable please. Change.
01:25:517 (2,3) - another unnecessary hyper dash, this diff have potential patterns to get some DQ mods, if you are tired of getting your maps desqualified, please reconsider some hypers and read my mod carefully, I'm giving you examples and reasons, so I'll be waiting a good reply if you will decline it. Change.

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-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2017-04-25T00:36:34+00:00

Everything looks fine to me, let's go for the second round. Gratz

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2017-04-25T04:50:41+00:00

IKUZE!!!

Gratzz! :3

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