ZHSteven wrote:

awesome arrangement and hitsound~
Like it very much~
just take note:

For ddd519's Koi:
[attachment=0:b7805].jpg[/attachment:b7805]
I don't know this is acceptable or not but... It is better not do like this...
It will make the whole map playing like "relax" mod..
if you want to reduce the star rate, my suggest is just change some of the stream into slider+note+slider.
Streams in this diff make it insane..

Star~

sico91212 wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
first. you should resnap all notes after changed timing!
and HP Drain Rate is 8, your should add more combo set
so here is my modding without combo mod(all diff)
00:02:268 - no break
00:35:598 - haaaa....
01:36:050 (1) - hmmmm.....
01:43:501 - ehhhhh...
02:31:522 - distance!
02:23:862 (1) - it too long,i lost so many HP about |--------------------------------------------------------| this much HP in HDR 8. you could add note here (02:27:174 -)and spinner end in blue line

Please mod all diffs EXCEPT 3.5star

soulfear wrote:

歌名:Rengetsu Ouka

sico91212 wrote:

你的BPM和offset实在让我无法接受，但我暂时也没办法确定正确的timing.这歌似乎有ddr3的bms，我会试着找找。

sico91212 wrote:

BPM测定软件是渣，pokie的BPM在无变奏处都需要两个offset来修减误差，而且我手测结果也和它相去甚远，这结果让我不能接受

Insane
Interesting choice of hitsounds.
00:02:889 (x) - add note
00:02:992 (x) - ^
00:11:791 (2) - replace 1/4 early
00:49:680 (5) - finish at start sounds bad, change it.
~2:17 - 2:26 - sounds like techno. fun :3
02:46:742 (2) - add note

winber1 wrote:

Insane[/b]

00:44:500(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing between some combos are different than others. I'm not sure if they supposed to look kinda weird(at least in my opinion) like that, but maybe you could make it more symmetrical. I'm mostly speaking of combo 3 tho.
00:49:675(5) - i don't think you should slience this
00:52:367(6) - 1 grid down?
01:30:665(1) - combo may work better if you delete this new combo and add a new combo at 01:31:701
02:01:922(5..etc) - whistle sounds a little weird to me lol. I kind of just like the more simple and calm hitsounds of Yumeko's Ouka (just a comment tho).
02:52:021(1,2,3,4,5,6) - i will probably get 300's if i just continuously press the notes in a regular 1/4 beat fashion, but still, this triplet grouping doesn't fit in my opinion.
02:54:815(6) - i would much rather have this slider start 1/4 beat later. In other words, switch the timing of combo 7 and 6 around.
~

winber1 wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka

02:00:262(red timing section) - does not seem to be needed... i think is necessary....
02:31:522(3) - i would rather this spacing be more correct fixed
02:54:294(3,4,5) - looks readable, but the time of when you need to actually press the note is not very clear in my opinion, cuz the music doesn't go along with these triplet type things. thanks for suggestion
Awesome hitsounds :3
and nice map

dksslqj wrote:

[ddd519]
HR +4
AR +1
CR +1
orz biggest circle cize doesn't fit this song

_Kiva wrote:

Ok look
In my song theres a change in bpm
it is so tiny that we cant find a perfect one
here's the song
just notice at my second red line
theres the change

Koi Gatsu Ouka
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24765

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

*

Wiinter wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka
01:36:878 (4) - new combo fixed

senaya wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
03:00:298 (1) - finish or clap? add clap
03:02:782 (5,6) - add something at these? I've tried clap, but I think it doesn't fit thanks for suggestion

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

*

I have try to put the new mp3 in, and sounds like you have changed the whole offset ,which causes all sound effects become delayed
as you said the bpm hasnt change. so it remains at 144.913
I have tryed to use 145 , but sounds bit too fast
the second offset (120266) is the main problem . the second red time line is set for re-adjust this tiny change but i still not sure if 120266 is accurate or not
as long as other players thinks it is sounds alright XD

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )

1. You forgot to resnap the notes on all the diff! ;_;
2. Kozato Snow Koi Gatsu Ouka, those tags are useless because it's artist and song. You must remove them.
3. Why colours are not the same on your diffs and on guest diffs?
4. On [Gatsu] I suggest +2 OD. And on [ddd519's Koi] I suggest +2 HP Drain and OD
5. I see a lot of random spacing, don't forget that the spacing must have some logic. Also lot of your streams have a bad shape.
6. I saw so much timing points and was like WOW... but then I noticed that a lot of them are useless, if a timing point have the same: audio, speed, hitsounds, and style than the one (or two or even more) before, please remove it.

1. 00:24:217 (4) - This one have a different spacing for no reason.
2. 00:27:115 (1) - This kind of things should not exist, except for some Hard/Insane, it's unplayable :/ You should remove this note and end the spinner here with a finish at least.
3. 00:36:224 (1,2) - Move it one grid down
4. 00:36:845 (4,5) - Move them so they are symmetric with 1 and 2 like this: http://puu.sh/Y1r
5. 00:37:466 (6) - Move 2 grid down to stack on the slider.
6. 00:48:231 (1) - WTF?! The jump is more than x2 distance snapping, I slider break on this obviously. You should use x1,6 distance snap or x1,8 at least.

1. What are all those tiny random kiai time?
2. The spacing is awful, it's unplayable, have you even used distance snap when you mapped this? Fix the spacing of your map with distance snap please.
3. Except for those two things the map seems ok, sorry but I don't want to look much at a random spaced map.

1. 00:09:720 (5) - Random spacing :/ You should stack it under the (3) or put it somewhere like here
2. 00:37:052 (3,4) - Those note are not really visible because of the (1) slider.
3. 00:39:122 (7) - stack it under (3)
4. 00:39:329 (8) - stack it under (4)
5. 00:46:161 (5) - stack it under (3)
6. If you can understand those three lines then you should be able to see all the other notes wich should be stacked. There's so much of them
7. 02:24:280 (2,3,4) - Those note are hard to see too because of a slider again.
8. 03:01:337 (6) - Same here... well this one is not so hard to see but it's not really nice

1. This diff is nice Just one thing: those stack with both 1/2 and 1/4 on them are annoying to play, you shouldn't abuse too much of them. And even more in the kiai time when it's harder too read.
2. 00:35:598 (7,8) - How about this:http://puu.sh/Y3p

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

offset 1663 is bit too large. Maybe i should just keep the timimg advise from MAT in previous posts
(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )
So for now i wont change the offeset yet

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hellooo Kiva :3

[General]

What's wrong with Kiai?do the same on all the diffs ! ---- I am just being lazy lol

and inappropriately to make it so tattered pieces -- agree

I do not like that during the spinner image is compressed..You can somehow do it the same size?

and two pink colors follow each other. -- fixing

can this be so?

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

Snowy Dream wrote:

>.>我的diff到底要被改的多惨。
这图rank之后我需要跟原来的对比下。。。

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Use 144.9 BPM, Why? to delete the last Red timing section... --- 144.90? How about the bpm change in second red time line

Nothing to say about the other diff's --

My Easy :
[attachment=0:03127]Kozato snow - Koi Gatsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Haku's Easy].osu[/attachment:03127]

justnobody wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
00:27:941 (1) - this finish sounds a bit strange to me. maybe i'm picky though. there is the same finish in the song... but made it less louder
00:31:667 (6,7) - don't like the overlap here
01:10:384 (4) - start 1/2 earlier? the keys start to go faster from the position it is now

wmfchris wrote:

do you want taiko diff =/

wmfchris wrote:

我大部分都是挑BMS做的 =w=

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25491

前幾天做這個 Artist一樣 BG一樣啊 looool

1. Three Insane difficulties... Good luck trying to get your map ranked with three Insane difficulties. ._.
2. Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
3. Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work.

1. 00:34:566 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Keep the spacing consistent. This is an Easy difficulty after all.
2. 01:16:802 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Oh, and extend the end of that slider onto 01:17:630. It would fit better that way. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.
3. 01:10:177 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
4. 01:11:626 (1)-^
5. 01:23:220 (1)-^
6. 01:26:533 (1)-^
7. 01:43:348 (2)-^But do something like this. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.

1. 00:52:781 (1)-Add a finish.
2. 01:25:076 (1)-Remove new combo.
   01:25:904 (1)-^

1. -Some timing points (green line) start off kiai time randomly and some start of at the wrong time. Fix this.

1. Same thing I mentioned on the Snowy Koi difficulty.

Roddie wrote:

General:

1. Three Insane difficulties... Good luck trying to get your map ranked with three Insane difficulties. ._.
2. Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
3. Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work.

Meh. Have my star. Looks like I didn't properly mod this. ._.

If you think my mod post wasn't really useful, then don't kudosu this post.

eveless wrote:

[Yumeko]
00:41:188 (2) - New combo fixed
01:31:080 (2,3) - 这两个顺序反过来会不会更好点x_x 嗯 是好点 fixed
01:31:908 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:36:048 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H 这个我觉得没必要了
01:37:911 (3,4) - ^ 这个spacing可以啊 Ctrl反而乱了
01:39:360 (2,3,4) - 很难按吧x_x fixed
02:14:753 (4) - 345之间的间距不一样 fixed
02:20:343 (8) - ^ fixed
02:21:274 (4) - ^ fixed
02:33:178 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 真没必要这样x_x 2移开吧 fixed
02:57:710 (3) - 间距 没注意到 fixed
02:58:538 (7) - ^ fixed 但感觉还是有点差别
03:09:820 (7) - ^ fixed

Roddie wrote:

Hi

[*]Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
[*]Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work. idk how to do a better work with hitsound >.<
[/list]

Easy:

• [*]00:34:566 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Keep the spacing consistent. This is an Easy difficulty after all.
  

1. 01:16:802 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Oh, and extend the end of that slider onto 01:17:630. It would fit better that way. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards. it's better as it is now ( starting from 01:17:009 (4) to 01:17:630 )
   
2. 01:10:177 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. 1.02x -> 1.00x >.<
   
3. 01:11:626 (1)-^ ^
   
4. 01:23:220 (1)-^
5. 01:26:533 (1)-^
   
6. 01:43:348 (2)-^But do something like this. >.> just strange that it isn't the same you modded on my pc >.<, though slider have their pattern
   
   And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]
- Haku's Easy have different BPM then the other diff,

[Haku's Easy]
The stack leniency is unrankable, increase it around 3 ticks it's rankable if selectionable in the editor, and i did have stacking problem that made the diff worsier (0 and 0.1 it's unrankable, >0.2 rankable)
00:34:566 (1) - no jump in the easiest diff please Arleady corrected
00:47:402 (6) - NC (new combo) this
01:44:131 (2) - ^ is arleady NC'ed
01:16:802 (4) - extend this 1/2 beat later uh?, having the present
01:18:458 (5) - please put this somewhere else, the spacing is bad and the previous silenced slider make this more confusing ?.? only slidertick was silenced tough >.<, and did use similiar thing over the map ...

Nice map and Good Luck~
Star

ziin wrote:

[general]

offset: 1440 or -216
Delete the second red timing section, there is no need for it.

[haku's easy]
map the whole thing Other blood for me >.<

eveless wrote:

[Easy]
00:41:191 (1,2,3) - 这个不好说 我估计不行 using 0.10x here >.< , to not occupy all the screen and have a good graphical effect >,<
00:47:402 (6) - new combo
00:54:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种的我建议你改掉...后面不提了 using 0.10x here >.< , to not occupy all the screen and have a good graphical effect >,<
01:16:802 (4) - 加长1/2 ?.?
01:42:475 (1) - 取消new combo oki
01:44:131 (2) - new combo

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

The stack leniency is unrankable, increase it around 3 ticks it's rankable if selectionable in the editor, and i did have stacking problem that made the diff worsier (0 and 0.1 it's unrankable, >0.2 rankable)

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

map the whole thing Other blood for me >.<

orioncomet wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
- why this diff use different offset? 1,440 =/= 1,026 tho, but it's 1,025. so +1 to offset. nor just use same offset as other diffs. sorry for nazi timing.
00:36:222 (3) - add hitsound like 00:34:566 (1)? it sound like missing hitsound to me when i heard all hitsound on your diff x_x

Kurisuchianu wrote:

[general]
Are at Unsnapped!

[all]
Great sound's

I wish you good luck un the remap

aesopl19193 wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
01:10:384 (4) - start at 01:10:177 , end at the same point
01:17:009 (4) - ^

not followed...

why not end the map same as [Gatsu]?

did

Selee wrote:

划水+路过 ._.

这张...啊啊 音效很好 但是觉得有些微妙的问题不想mod了...

以后有机会吧..我欠你个mod..

恩...Star~

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- aboit timing 1st BPM: 144.900 | Offset: 1,026
2nd BPM: 144.900 | Offset: 120,266

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya. Can't find really anything on the map... it's... nicely done, I think.

Yuki Yuki
01:07:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't like. You make the player sit through two 10 second long breaks and he only gets to play this.
The same goes for... any other diff like this, map at least one of the breaks. -hmm, this actually worked very well

Lunatic
Why is this diff called Lunatic? It doesn't make sense unless the song's related to Touhou :< - i should change back to "Insane"
01:20:115 (1,1,2,3,4) - I absolutely hate this kinda stack. -emm .well. fixed

01:54:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - add some hitsounds to this stream. -- currently cant find a hit sound that fits here
02:55:338 - why is there Kiai here? - ooops fixed

Koi
I guess you can use custom sounds for the begin of the map.
00:58:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this spacing is very confusing. I thought of this as a stream the first time I tested it.
02:02:750 (2,3) - stack properly
02:25:522 (1,2) - have those in Soft sample, without custom hitsounds :<
02:52:021 (1) - ^
02:52:021 (1) - extend to 02:52:849 - , remove (2), and a a 5 notes 1/4 stream, starting at 02:53:255

BAD end. End the diff please at the same spot as the 2 other Insanes. --agree, Snowy is just being lazy

Gatsu
Ah... always those lazy assed Normal and Easy diffs. At least end them on a point which makes sense.
Map the song until 02:27:181 - ah ok fixed
Very confusing spacing in this map. Jumps and Antijumps in combination don't work well together IMO. -agree, this map was in Normal (under3.5) and i put more notes in and makes it around 4.0

00:33:324 (2) - stack on the end of 00:32:081 (1) - , and adjust the pattern after this. - oh you sure? its an 2.0X jump
00:51:957 (1) - VERY bad jump. - agree fixed
01:07:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - no. exchange (1,2,3) with a slider. - fine

Easy
Map the song until 02:27:181
besides that... fine, I guess.

- thanks for modding

soulfear wrote:

不是說了歌名嗎
song name:Rengetsu Ouka

Snowy Dream wrote:

>.>还好你pending满了
否则估计你也要像我重复传2个一样的图杯具了

DarkRingSystem wrote:

8-) 绝世好图
我都能fc
就感觉上感觉OD很低可能在中间 但设置跟我想的不一样 (不要改 XD 节奏很好?
我渣渣 挑不出什么毛病 但还是感觉哪里有什么不对哈 XD

丢starrrrr~

Mystica wrote:

唔。音效有着某种微妙的感觉。。不好说
觉得比我那张十六夜好就是了XD

Snowy Dream wrote:

kiva，赶快找个BAT来看图。。

KillerRind wrote:

Awesome map,
But there are some unsapped notes in [Gatsu]

have a star~

1. Hmmm, this difficulty has a lot of spacing infringements. It can get really confusing between the combos so use a constant distance snap.
2. One example is 01:28:189 (2,3,1)

1. You really have to add some more hitsounds for the beginning.

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
00:19:036 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - the stack is kinda messed up here, decrease the stack leniency by 2 fixed
01:39:774 (5,6) - this is kinda unexpected and confusing if player didn't enabled the snaking slider, I suggest to move 5 somewhere else thanks for suggestion
02:33:178 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugh bad overlap and it's an anti-jump too. Move the streams somewhere else please fixed
Nice diff

1. 00:14:690 (1,2,3,4) - 这个叠得很诡异... 1从中心上移一格 2从中心右移 3中心下移 4中心下移一格试试
2. 00:39:535 (1,2) - spacing
3. 01:44:959 (5,6) - ^
4. 02:18:485 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 02:42:294 (4,5,6) - ^
6. 02:54:717 (5) - new combo
7. 02:54:924 (1) - cancel new combo
8. 02:55:131 (2) - new combo

1. 不太清楚3I现在究竟是什么个情况... 不过这个难度如果要当Hard的话有点牵强 stream长度维持在5连的话还可以接受 鉴于需要做大手术...先不作具体mod 注意难度要把握在Gatsu和其他两个I之间

Colin Hou wrote:

[Lunatic]:

1. 00:14:690 (1,2,3,4) - 这个叠得很诡异... 1从中心上移一格 2从中心右移 3中心下移 4中心下移一格试试
2. 00:39:535 (1,2) - spacing
3. 01:44:959 (5,6) - ^
4. 02:18:485 (5,6,7) - ^
5. 02:42:294 (4,5,6) - ^
6. 02:54:717 (5) - new combo
7. 02:54:924 (1) - cancel new combo
8. 02:55:131 (2) - new combo

[Snowy Koi]:

1. 不太清楚3I现在究竟是什么个情况... 不过这个难度如果要当Hard的话有点牵强 stream长度维持在5连的话还可以接受 鉴于需要做大手术...先不作具体mod 注意难度要把握在Gatsu和其他两个I之间