Insane
Interesting choice of hitsounds.
00:02:889 (x) - add note
00:02:992 (x) - ^
00:11:791 (2) - replace 1/4 early
00:49:680 (5) - finish at start sounds bad, change it.
~2:17 - 2:26 - sounds like techno. fun :3
02:46:742 (2) - add note

winber1 wrote:

Insane[/b]

00:44:500(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing between some combos are different than others. I'm not sure if they supposed to look kinda weird(at least in my opinion) like that, but maybe you could make it more symmetrical. I'm mostly speaking of combo 3 tho.
00:49:675(5) - i don't think you should slience this
00:52:367(6) - 1 grid down?
01:30:665(1) - combo may work better if you delete this new combo and add a new combo at 01:31:701
02:01:922(5..etc) - whistle sounds a little weird to me lol. I kind of just like the more simple and calm hitsounds of Yumeko's Ouka (just a comment tho).
02:52:021(1,2,3,4,5,6) - i will probably get 300's if i just continuously press the notes in a regular 1/4 beat fashion, but still, this triplet grouping doesn't fit in my opinion.
02:54:815(6) - i would much rather have this slider start 1/4 beat later. In other words, switch the timing of combo 7 and 6 around.
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winber1 wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka

02:00:262(red timing section) - does not seem to be needed... i think is necessary....
02:31:522(3) - i would rather this spacing be more correct fixed
02:54:294(3,4,5) - looks readable, but the time of when you need to actually press the note is not very clear in my opinion, cuz the music doesn't go along with these triplet type things. thanks for suggestion
Awesome hitsounds :3
and nice map

dksslqj wrote:

[ddd519]
HR +4
AR +1
CR +1
orz biggest circle cize doesn't fit this song

_Kiva wrote:

Ok look
In my song theres a change in bpm
it is so tiny that we cant find a perfect one
here's the song
just notice at my second red line
theres the change

Koi Gatsu Ouka
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24765

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

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Wiinter wrote:

Yumeko's Ouka
01:36:878 (4) - new combo fixed

senaya wrote:

[Yumeko's Ouka]
03:00:298 (1) - finish or clap? add clap
03:02:782 (5,6) - add something at these? I've tried clap, but I think it doesn't fit thanks for suggestion

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

EDIT : Download the new mp3 here, put your old MP3 somewhere safe, remove the offset change in your beatmap in Osu!, and send me feedback . Oh and don't hesitate if we're on the right track, but it still needs a slight change. I saved it in editable format.

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I have try to put the new mp3 in, and sounds like you have changed the whole offset ,which causes all sound effects become delayed
as you said the bpm hasnt change. so it remains at 144.913
I have tryed to use 145 , but sounds bit too fast
the second offset (120266) is the main problem . the second red time line is set for re-adjust this tiny change but i still not sure if 120266 is accurate or not
as long as other players thinks it is sounds alright XD

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )

1. You forgot to resnap the notes on all the diff! ;_;
2. Kozato Snow Koi Gatsu Ouka, those tags are useless because it's artist and song. You must remove them.
3. Why colours are not the same on your diffs and on guest diffs?
4. On [Gatsu] I suggest +2 OD. And on [ddd519's Koi] I suggest +2 HP Drain and OD
5. I see a lot of random spacing, don't forget that the spacing must have some logic. Also lot of your streams have a bad shape.
6. I saw so much timing points and was like WOW... but then I noticed that a lot of them are useless, if a timing point have the same: audio, speed, hitsounds, and style than the one (or two or even more) before, please remove it.

1. 00:24:217 (4) - This one have a different spacing for no reason.
2. 00:27:115 (1) - This kind of things should not exist, except for some Hard/Insane, it's unplayable :/ You should remove this note and end the spinner here with a finish at least.
3. 00:36:224 (1,2) - Move it one grid down
4. 00:36:845 (4,5) - Move them so they are symmetric with 1 and 2 like this: http://puu.sh/Y1r
5. 00:37:466 (6) - Move 2 grid down to stack on the slider.
6. 00:48:231 (1) - WTF?! The jump is more than x2 distance snapping, I slider break on this obviously. You should use x1,6 distance snap or x1,8 at least.

1. What are all those tiny random kiai time?
2. The spacing is awful, it's unplayable, have you even used distance snap when you mapped this? Fix the spacing of your map with distance snap please.
3. Except for those two things the map seems ok, sorry but I don't want to look much at a random spaced map.

1. 00:09:720 (5) - Random spacing :/ You should stack it under the (3) or put it somewhere like here
2. 00:37:052 (3,4) - Those note are not really visible because of the (1) slider.
3. 00:39:122 (7) - stack it under (3)
4. 00:39:329 (8) - stack it under (4)
5. 00:46:161 (5) - stack it under (3)
6. If you can understand those three lines then you should be able to see all the other notes wich should be stacked. There's so much of them
7. 02:24:280 (2,3,4) - Those note are hard to see too because of a slider again.
8. 03:01:337 (6) - Same here... well this one is not so hard to see but it's not really nice

1. This diff is nice Just one thing: those stack with both 1/2 and 1/4 on them are annoying to play, you shouldn't abuse too much of them. And even more in the kiai time when it's harder too read.
2. 00:35:598 (7,8) - How about this:http://puu.sh/Y3p

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

offset 1663 is bit too large. Maybe i should just keep the timimg advise from MAT in previous posts
(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )
So for now i wont change the offeset yet

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hellooo Kiva :3

[General]

What's wrong with Kiai?do the same on all the diffs ! ---- I am just being lazy lol

and inappropriately to make it so tattered pieces -- agree

I do not like that during the spinner image is compressed..You can somehow do it the same size?

and two pink colors follow each other. -- fixing

can this be so?

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

Snowy Dream wrote:

>.>我的diff到底要被改的多惨。
这图rank之后我需要跟原来的对比下。。。

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Use 144.9 BPM, Why? to delete the last Red timing section... --- 144.90? How about the bpm change in second red time line

Nothing to say about the other diff's --

My Easy :
[attachment=0:03127]Kozato snow - Koi Gatsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Haku's Easy].osu[/attachment:03127]

justnobody wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
00:27:941 (1) - this finish sounds a bit strange to me. maybe i'm picky though. there is the same finish in the song... but made it less louder
00:31:667 (6,7) - don't like the overlap here
01:10:384 (4) - start 1/2 earlier? the keys start to go faster from the position it is now

wmfchris wrote:

do you want taiko diff =/

wmfchris wrote:

我大部分都是挑BMS做的 =w=

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25491

前幾天做這個 Artist一樣 BG一樣啊 looool

1. Three Insane difficulties... Good luck trying to get your map ranked with three Insane difficulties. ._.
2. Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
3. Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work.

1. 00:34:566 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Keep the spacing consistent. This is an Easy difficulty after all.
2. 01:16:802 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Oh, and extend the end of that slider onto 01:17:630. It would fit better that way. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.
3. 01:10:177 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
4. 01:11:626 (1)-^
5. 01:23:220 (1)-^
6. 01:26:533 (1)-^
7. 01:43:348 (2)-^But do something like this. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.

1. 00:52:781 (1)-Add a finish.
2. 01:25:076 (1)-Remove new combo.
   01:25:904 (1)-^

1. -Some timing points (green line) start off kiai time randomly and some start of at the wrong time. Fix this.

1. Same thing I mentioned on the Snowy Koi difficulty.