1. You forgot to resnap the notes on all the diff! ;_;
2. Kozato Snow Koi Gatsu Ouka, those tags are useless because it's artist and song. You must remove them.
3. Why colours are not the same on your diffs and on guest diffs?
4. On [Gatsu] I suggest +2 OD. And on [ddd519's Koi] I suggest +2 HP Drain and OD
5. I see a lot of random spacing, don't forget that the spacing must have some logic. Also lot of your streams have a bad shape.
6. I saw so much timing points and was like WOW... but then I noticed that a lot of them are useless, if a timing point have the same: audio, speed, hitsounds, and style than the one (or two or even more) before, please remove it.

1. 00:24:217 (4) - This one have a different spacing for no reason.
2. 00:27:115 (1) - This kind of things should not exist, except for some Hard/Insane, it's unplayable :/ You should remove this note and end the spinner here with a finish at least.
3. 00:36:224 (1,2) - Move it one grid down
4. 00:36:845 (4,5) - Move them so they are symmetric with 1 and 2 like this: http://puu.sh/Y1r
5. 00:37:466 (6) - Move 2 grid down to stack on the slider.
6. 00:48:231 (1) - WTF?! The jump is more than x2 distance snapping, I slider break on this obviously. You should use x1,6 distance snap or x1,8 at least.

1. What are all those tiny random kiai time?
2. The spacing is awful, it's unplayable, have you even used distance snap when you mapped this? Fix the spacing of your map with distance snap please.
3. Except for those two things the map seems ok, sorry but I don't want to look much at a random spaced map.

1. 00:09:720 (5) - Random spacing :/ You should stack it under the (3) or put it somewhere like here
2. 00:37:052 (3,4) - Those note are not really visible because of the (1) slider.
3. 00:39:122 (7) - stack it under (3)
4. 00:39:329 (8) - stack it under (4)
5. 00:46:161 (5) - stack it under (3)
6. If you can understand those three lines then you should be able to see all the other notes wich should be stacked. There's so much of them
7. 02:24:280 (2,3,4) - Those note are hard to see too because of a slider again.
8. 03:01:337 (6) - Same here... well this one is not so hard to see but it's not really nice

1. This diff is nice Just one thing: those stack with both 1/2 and 1/4 on them are annoying to play, you shouldn't abuse too much of them. And even more in the kiai time when it's harder too read.
2. 00:35:598 (7,8) - How about this:http://puu.sh/Y3p

_Kiva wrote:

MathiasXII wrote:

Oh and BTW, in insane : 01:59:662, I doubt that part will ever be rankable XD There's a slider and two notes all tangled. Probably something you didn't notice.

offset 1663 is bit too large. Maybe i should just keep the timimg advise from MAT in previous posts
(As long as the timing is really small and players would notice much )
So for now i wont change the offeset yet

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hellooo Kiva :3

[General]

What's wrong with Kiai?do the same on all the diffs ! ---- I am just being lazy lol

and inappropriately to make it so tattered pieces -- agree

I do not like that during the spinner image is compressed..You can somehow do it the same size?

and two pink colors follow each other. -- fixing

can this be so?

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

Snowy Dream wrote:

>.>我的diff到底要被改的多惨。
这图rank之后我需要跟原来的对比下。。。

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Use 144.9 BPM, Why? to delete the last Red timing section... --- 144.90? How about the bpm change in second red time line

Nothing to say about the other diff's --

My Easy :
[attachment=0:03127]Kozato snow - Koi Gatsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Haku's Easy].osu[/attachment:03127]

justnobody wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
00:27:941 (1) - this finish sounds a bit strange to me. maybe i'm picky though. there is the same finish in the song... but made it less louder
00:31:667 (6,7) - don't like the overlap here
01:10:384 (4) - start 1/2 earlier? the keys start to go faster from the position it is now

wmfchris wrote:

do you want taiko diff =/

wmfchris wrote:

我大部分都是挑BMS做的 =w=

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25491

前幾天做這個 Artist一樣 BG一樣啊 looool

1. Three Insane difficulties... Good luck trying to get your map ranked with three Insane difficulties. ._.
2. Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
3. Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work.

1. 00:34:566 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Keep the spacing consistent. This is an Easy difficulty after all.
2. 01:16:802 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Oh, and extend the end of that slider onto 01:17:630. It would fit better that way. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.
3. 01:10:177 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
4. 01:11:626 (1)-^
5. 01:23:220 (1)-^
6. 01:26:533 (1)-^
7. 01:43:348 (2)-^But do something like this. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.

1. 00:52:781 (1)-Add a finish.
2. 01:25:076 (1)-Remove new combo.
   01:25:904 (1)-^

1. -Some timing points (green line) start off kiai time randomly and some start of at the wrong time. Fix this.

1. Same thing I mentioned on the Snowy Koi difficulty.

Roddie wrote:

General:

1. Three Insane difficulties... Good luck trying to get your map ranked with three Insane difficulties. ._.
2. Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
3. Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work.

Meh. Have my star. Looks like I didn't properly mod this. ._.

If you think my mod post wasn't really useful, then don't kudosu this post.

eveless wrote:

[Yumeko]
00:41:188 (2) - New combo fixed
01:31:080 (2,3) - 这两个顺序反过来会不会更好点x_x 嗯 是好点 fixed
01:31:908 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:36:048 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H 这个我觉得没必要了
01:37:911 (3,4) - ^ 这个spacing可以啊 Ctrl反而乱了
01:39:360 (2,3,4) - 很难按吧x_x fixed
02:14:753 (4) - 345之间的间距不一样 fixed
02:20:343 (8) - ^ fixed
02:21:274 (4) - ^ fixed
02:33:178 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 真没必要这样x_x 2移开吧 fixed
02:57:710 (3) - 间距 没注意到 fixed
02:58:538 (7) - ^ fixed 但感觉还是有点差别
03:09:820 (7) - ^ fixed

Roddie wrote:

Hi

[*]Both Haku's Easy and Gatsu have five combo colors. And all of those difficulties have different color schemes. Try and keep the combo colors all the same for the all difficulties.
[*]Those five difficulties needs some more hitsound work. idk how to do a better work with hitsound >.<
[/list]

Easy:

• [*]00:34:566 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Keep the spacing consistent. This is an Easy difficulty after all.
  

1. 01:16:802 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Oh, and extend the end of that slider onto 01:17:630. It would fit better that way. And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards. it's better as it is now ( starting from 01:17:009 (4) to 01:17:630 )
   
2. 01:10:177 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. 1.02x -> 1.00x >.<
   
3. 01:11:626 (1)-^ ^
   
4. 01:23:220 (1)-^
5. 01:26:533 (1)-^
   
6. 01:43:348 (2)-^But do something like this. >.> just strange that it isn't the same you modded on my pc >.<, though slider have their pattern
   
   And fix the spacing on the notes afterwards.

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]
- Haku's Easy have different BPM then the other diff,

[Haku's Easy]
The stack leniency is unrankable, increase it around 3 ticks it's rankable if selectionable in the editor, and i did have stacking problem that made the diff worsier (0 and 0.1 it's unrankable, >0.2 rankable)
00:34:566 (1) - no jump in the easiest diff please Arleady corrected
00:47:402 (6) - NC (new combo) this
01:44:131 (2) - ^ is arleady NC'ed
01:16:802 (4) - extend this 1/2 beat later uh?, having the present
01:18:458 (5) - please put this somewhere else, the spacing is bad and the previous silenced slider make this more confusing ?.? only slidertick was silenced tough >.<, and did use similiar thing over the map ...

Nice map and Good Luck~
Star

ziin wrote:

[general]

offset: 1440 or -216
Delete the second red timing section, there is no need for it.

[haku's easy]
map the whole thing Other blood for me >.<

eveless wrote:

[Easy]
00:41:191 (1,2,3) - 这个不好说 我估计不行 using 0.10x here >.< , to not occupy all the screen and have a good graphical effect >,<
00:47:402 (6) - new combo
00:54:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这种的我建议你改掉...后面不提了 using 0.10x here >.< , to not occupy all the screen and have a good graphical effect >,<
01:16:802 (4) - 加长1/2 ?.?
01:42:475 (1) - 取消new combo oki
01:44:131 (2) - new combo

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

The stack leniency is unrankable, increase it around 3 ticks it's rankable if selectionable in the editor, and i did have stacking problem that made the diff worsier (0 and 0.1 it's unrankable, >0.2 rankable)

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

map the whole thing Other blood for me >.<

orioncomet wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
- why this diff use different offset? 1,440 =/= 1,026 tho, but it's 1,025. so +1 to offset. nor just use same offset as other diffs. sorry for nazi timing.
00:36:222 (3) - add hitsound like 00:34:566 (1)? it sound like missing hitsound to me when i heard all hitsound on your diff x_x

Kurisuchianu wrote:

[general]
Are at Unsnapped!

[all]
Great sound's

I wish you good luck un the remap