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Yura Hatsuki - Yuki no Hana

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Lan wings
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Lan wings
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年5月16日 at 20:01:18

Artist: Yura Hatsuki
Title: Yuki no Hana
Tags: Drop 竜と炎の物語 ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu c85 Sharlo yanlu spboxer3 Beren
BPM: 142
Filesize: 10017kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.13 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Hard (2.82 stars, 163 notes)
  3. Sharlo's Insane (4.3 stars, 279 notes)
  4. Snow (4.6 stars, 303 notes)
  5. yanlu's Normal (2.11 stars, 141 notes)


Download: Yura Hatsuki - Yuki no Hana
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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discography of 清風明月 (Drop x 葉月ゆら) - 竜と炎の物語 (C85)
I.ガナンドラの魔術師 ar3.................. | V. 雪の華 Lan wings cyc17
II.少女と黄金竜の物語 zweib cyc17 .... | VI. 告解の部屋 ～蜜薬ランガージュ～ Kotone
III.純潔と時の天秤 kalei cyc17.............| VII. Granat Lan wings
IV.サラマンドラの踊り子 ar3/toto cyc17 Zero_wind
Awesome Skin by My Queen and thx for Beren's SB!
Click here to download skin
[Normal] by [yanlu] [Hard] by [spboxer3] [Insane] by [Sharlo]
Last edited by Lan wings , edited 49 times in total.
dqs01733
297 posts
Joined October 2013
dqs01733
awesome!! love it :)
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

dqs01733 wrote:

awesome!! love it :)
thx star >.<
Azure
656 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
把文件覆蓋過去就好，有句歌詞出現的時間錯了我直接改了
http://puu.sh/q5ShL/c63471cc95.osb
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,199 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
As requested.
skin里的spinner好好看啊！
[Sharlo]
00:05:284 (1,1) - 滑条尾巴静音一下比较好
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - 这里音变轻了 反而应改用更小的间距。
00:21:552 (4,5,1) - 最好不要1/4 毕竟4那里没有音
稍微扩大一下滑条之间的间距就更好啦！（和pp跳平衡一下）
[Snow]
00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 离得太远了还是antiflow感觉不是很好
00:22:608 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:08:664 (7) - NC
01:11:200 (7) - NC
加油！
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Regraz wrote:

As requested.
skin里的spinner好好看啊！
[Sharlo]
00:05:284 (1,1) - 滑条尾巴静音一下比较好
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - 这里音变轻了 反而应改用更小的间距。
00:21:552 (4,5,1) - 最好不要1/4 毕竟4那里没有音
稍微扩大一下滑条之间的间距就更好啦！（和pp跳平衡一下）
[Snow]
00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 离得太远了还是antiflow感觉不是很好这里音乐有需求哦 所以就jump了
00:22:608 (1,2,3) - 同上这里音乐有需求哦 所以就jump了
01:08:664 (7) - NC 这里是12个一组的超大型雪花哦
01:11:200 (7) - NC 这里是12个一组的超大型雪花哦
加油！
窝巢 你什么时候变BN了
tutuhaha
2,988 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
22:31 Lan wings: 更新好了
22:31 tutuhaha: 00:09:087 (1,2) - 这边突然间距正常打起来很奇怪
22:32 tutuhaha: 先强调我手残哦
22:32 tutuhaha: 是从手残的角度说的
22:32 Lan wings: 更新osb好像要重下
22:32 tutuhaha: 艾玛我对sb一无所知
22:32 tutuhaha: 等我先摸完再重下
22:33 Lan wings: 那先更新一下呗
22:33 Lan wings: 00:06:552 (1,2,3) - 跟前面差不多间距啊
22:34 tutuhaha: 你前面是2x啊这边是1x :O
22:35 Lan wings: 你看我作图像是会看这个的人么!_(:з」∠)_
22:35 tutuhaha: _(:зゝ∠)_好吧！
22:36 Lan wings: 不过问题是没地方拉远了
22:36 Lan wings: 其实这些节奏都是一样的
22:36 Lan wings: 间距根本无所谓
22:36 tutuhaha: 01:07:397 (1,2) - 我觉得从这边开始可以从小变大这样摆比较好玩儿
22:36 Lan wings: 从小变大?
22:36 tutuhaha: （手残式白眼.jpg
22:36 tutuhaha: （手残式冷漠.jpg
22:37 Lan wings: 有示范么_(:з」∠)_
22:37 tutuhaha: 间距由小变大
22:37 Lan wings: 我一直很纠结这里
22:37 Lan wings: 间距变了就不好玩了
22:37 Lan wings: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6612531
22:38 tutuhaha: 我也是个摆pattern懵逼狂人
22:38 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6612533
22:38 tutuhaha: flow大概这样？
22:38 Lan wings: 这样就拆了我的大雪花啦
22:38 Lan wings: 不干不干
22:38 tutuhaha: 噫
22:38 tutuhaha: 那你可以摆个小点的雪花嘛！！！
22:39 Lan wings: 你不是说很善良的吗
22:39 tutuhaha: 01:17:537 (1) - 这块就挺不错的，就是有那种由小变大的赶脚
22:39 tutuhaha: 去你妹的很善良
22:40 tutuhaha: 宝宝打的时候都懵逼了
22:40 tutuhaha: ar可以稍微调低一丢丢？
22:41 tutuhaha: widescreen关掉
22:41 Lan wings: AR有人吐槽过
22:41 Lan wings: 太低打的坠毁
22:41 Lan wings: 原来是8的
22:41 tutuhaha: 哎呦hard是sp3做的？
22:41 tutuhaha: 8.5呗
22:41 Lan wings: 然后夏萝搞了个8.3的Hard
22:42 Lan wings: 部队 I
22:42 Lan wings: 咦 你看出来是SP3了?
22:42 tutuhaha: 没啊
22:42 tutuhaha: 你不是写了么
22:42 Lan wings: 哦
22:42 Lan wings: 我以为你看图看出来的
22:43 Lan wings: 薯片不让我用sp3's Hard这样的难度吗
22:43 Lan wings: 难度名*
22:43 tutuhaha: 为啥呀
22:43 tutuhaha: 他想冒充蓝翅膀？
22:44 Lan wings: 他觉得这样丑
22:44 Lan wings: xxx
22:44 Lan wings: xxx's xxx
22:44 tutuhaha: 那我还老2ha's xxx呢
22:44 tutuhaha: 更傻逼
22:45 tutuhaha: 以前的Tuhard多好
22:45 tutuhaha: Tueasy
22:45 Lan wings: 233333
22:45 tutuhaha: insane我也跟你说么？
22:46 Lan wings: 你写着
22:46 tutuhaha: 我看这个人好像akf了
22:46 Lan wings: 我转给夏萝
22:46 Lan wings: 没事 找不到人我去他家找
22:47 tutuhaha: 噗
22:47 tutuhaha: 哦夏萝
22:47 tutuhaha: 怪不得ID看的很眼熟！
22:47 Lan wings: 你不是见过了么
22:49 tutuhaha: 我是见过了
22:49 tutuhaha: 但是我对他的id不是特别熟悉...........
22:49 Lan wings: 哦
22:49 tutuhaha: 00:11:199 (1) - 这块让我懵逼了一下(⊙-⊙)....觉得不减速比较好
22:50 tutuhaha: 艾玛夏萝的比你善良了一个蓝翅膀
22:50 Lan wings: .
22:51 tutuhaha: 00:17:115 (2,3) - 这块距离稍微拉开一丢丢比如2x的话打起来就会很舒服
22:52 Lan wings: 什么叫善良了一个蓝翅膀
22:52 tutuhaha: 哇塞spinner的皮肤真好看
22:52 tutuhaha: 你不打算加个在你的diff里么
22:53 Lan wings: 不加哦
22:53 tutuhaha: 就是说你一般鬼畜起来威力超群
22:53 tutuhaha: 效果x2
22:53 tutuhaha: 夏萝是正常发挥那种
22:53 Lan wings: 每个难度效果都不同才好玩嘛
22:54 Lan wings: 除了我的diff其他都有spinner
22:54 tutuhaha: 00:28:101 (1,2) - 00:33:594 (2,3) - slider放太近打起来不太舒服，建议拉远一点
22:55 tutuhaha: 唔
22:55 tutuhaha: 你的hp升个零点五？
22:55 Lan wings: 我的?
22:55 tutuhaha: 经常会有人说某难度和某难度的设定相同之类的
22:55 tutuhaha: snow这个
22:55 Lan wings: GD来的不用管啦
22:56 Lan wings: 全是我的diff的话我会注意这个
22:56 tutuhaha: 好吧！
22:56 tutuhaha: 哦对了记得加leadin
22:56 Lan wings: GD不用注意这个的
22:56 Lan wings: 按照以前的经验
22:56 tutuhaha: 1500左右就好了
22:57 Lan wings: 现在不知道了.
22:57 Lan wings: 我有几年没上过图了好像
22:57 Lan wings: 夏萝的摸完了?
22:58 tutuhaha: 摸完了
22:58 tutuhaha: 用生命在找茬
22:58 Lan wings: widescreen我怎么记得要开着?
22:58 Lan wings: 现在要关的么
22:58 tutuhaha: 哦那就开着吧
22:58 tutuhaha: 我也忘了/-\..........
22:58 Lan wings: ;w;
22:58 tutuhaha: 懵逼
22:58 tutuhaha: sp3的diff
22:58 Lan wings: 我印象中好像是其他都关了 就开这个
22:58 Lan wings: 我也是懵逼
22:58 tutuhaha: 01:12:467 (1) - （黑人问号.jpg
22:59 tutuhaha: 本来前面还打着打着觉得夏萝和sp3这个难度间距会不会差的有点大
22:59 tutuhaha: 然后就死了！！！！
22:59 Lan wings: 2333333
22:59 Lan wings: 打爆薯片
22:59 tutuhaha: 前面辣么！辣么！！堪比normal的善良！！！！
22:59 tutuhaha: 一圈boom了薯片
23:00 tutuhaha: 就像对着没有开装的袋装薯片一拳打了下去
23:00 Lan wings: 这个N可能做的不是很好
23:00 tutuhaha: 碎片四溅
23:00 Lan wings: 然后下面开了
23:00 tutuhaha: 一个hard的od设定赶上了insane，这样不好，不好
23:02 Lan wings: 那应该调到多少
23:02 tutuhaha: 5.5？
23:02 Lan wings: 唔 话说lead in怎么调来着
23:02 tutuhaha: 哦还有你们考虑下加那个闪光警告？
23:02 tutuhaha: 开文本加啊
23:02 tutuhaha: ←_←
23:03 Lan wings: 哦哦 想起来了
23:03 Lan wings: AudioLeadIn: 0
23:03 Lan wings: 改1500是吧
23:03 tutuhaha: 恩恩
23:03 tutuhaha: normal
23:03 Lan wings: 1500好像不太够
23:03 Lan wings: 还得改SB
23:03 tutuhaha: 哦那就2500
23:03 Lan wings: 不然开头会从黑到白闪一下
23:04 tutuhaha: 都可以你自己调嘛
23:04 tutuhaha: 恩我看到了2333
23:04 tutuhaha: 好的接下来normal
23:04 tutuhaha: 艾玛总算有个我玩不会死的diff了
23:04 tutuhaha: 00:19:861 (2) - 这块突然不跟vocal了很奇怪，建议继续跟vocal
23:05 tutuhaha: 00:30:636 (2,3) - 建议不覆盖，本来就挺慢的曲子了这边突然停一下很容易被坑，normal里被坑是会打人的/皿\
23:06 tutuhaha: 00:35:706 (7) - 可能有人会吐槽这个出格太多了，拉回来一点
23:06 tutuhaha: 00:42:044 (1,2) - 一般来说normal里是强制性间距统一.-.所以
23:07 Lan wings: 话说说起这个
23:07 Lan wings: 我之前做了个图
23:07 Lan wings: 我EN全是没看间距的
23:07 tutuhaha: 00:44:580 (1,2,1) - 这个...节奏...肯定不是这样的.........
23:07 Lan wings: 是不是没救了
23:07 tutuhaha: 是的
23:07 tutuhaha: 没救了
23:07 tutuhaha: remap pls
23:08 *Lan wings is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878765 flumpool - Yoru Wa Nemureru Kai?]
23:08 Lan wings: 多标准的ENHI啊
23:08 tutuhaha: 01:06:763 (2) - 跟vocal比较好
23:08 Lan wings: 为什么要看间距这些蛋疼玩意
23:08 tutuhaha: 科科宝宝不信
23:09 Lan wings: 什么
23:09 Lan wings: 你居然不信我的EN不标准
23:09 Lan wings: 等会摸到我的E你就知道
23:09 tutuhaha: 好的normal摸完了
23:09 tutuhaha: easy
23:10 tutuhaha: 00:31:904 (1) - 放到x132 y72比较好
23:11 tutuhaha: 00:35:706 (2) - 靠那么近逼死强迫症
23:11 Lan wings: 放了
23:11 tutuhaha: 00:42:044 (1,2,1) - 据说这样的覆盖在e里会被喷
23:11 Lan wings: x204 y256
23:12 Lan wings: 管他
23:12 Lan wings: 我一大堆覆盖
23:12 tutuhaha: 01:03:594 (2) - 放到x412 y112
23:12 Lan wings: 固定间距太难玩了
23:12 tutuhaha: 01:17:960 (2) - 往上移一格（最小格子
23:12 tutuhaha: 好啦没啦
23:12 tutuhaha: 骗kd去
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
突然看到更新了
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

raririn wrote:

突然看到更新了
然后不打算来个摸顺便再射一发吗
Last edited by Lan wings , edited 1 time in total.
Sharlo
548 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo

Regraz wrote:

[Sharlo]
00:05:284 (1,1) - 滑条尾巴静音一下比较好 哦
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - 这里音变轻了 反而应改用更小的间距。 哦
00:21:552 (4,5,1) - 最好不要1/4 毕竟4那里没有音
稍微扩大一下滑条之间的间距就更好啦！（和pp跳平衡一下） 谁让我这么善良呢（摊手

tutuhaha wrote:

2016-11-20 13:49 tutuhaha: 00:11:199 (1) - 这块让我懵逼了一下(⊙-⊙)....觉得不减速比较好 哦
2016-11-20 13:49 tutuhaha: 艾玛夏萝的比你善良了一个蓝翅膀
2016-11-20 13:49 Lan wings: .
2016-11-20 13:50 tutuhaha: 00:17:115 (2,3) - 这块距离稍微拉开一丢丢比如2x的话打起来就会很舒服 好
2016-11-20 13:54 tutuhaha: 00:28:101 (1,2) - 00:33:594 (2,3) - slider放太近打起来不太舒服，建议拉远一点 好
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Sharlo wrote:

Regraz wrote:

[Sharlo]
00:05:284 (1,1) - 滑条尾巴静音一下比较好 哦
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - 这里音变轻了 反而应改用更小的间距。 哦
00:21:552 (4,5,1) - 最好不要1/4 毕竟4那里没有音
稍微扩大一下滑条之间的间距就更好啦！（和pp跳平衡一下） 谁让我这么善良呢（摊手

tutuhaha wrote:

2016-11-20 13:49 tutuhaha: 00:11:199 (1) - 这块让我懵逼了一下(⊙-⊙)....觉得不减速比较好 哦
2016-11-20 13:49 tutuhaha: 艾玛夏萝的比你善良了一个蓝翅膀
2016-11-20 13:49 Lan wings: .
2016-11-20 13:50 tutuhaha: 00:17:115 (2,3) - 这块距离稍微拉开一丢丢比如2x的话打起来就会很舒服 好
2016-11-20 13:54 tutuhaha: 00:28:101 (1,2) - 00:33:594 (2,3) - slider放太近打起来不太舒服，建议拉远一点 好
为什么要把某句话特别凸显出来
Dark and Hard
29 posts
Joined November 2011
Dark and Hard
100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Dark and Hard wrote:

100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_
这还没rank,怎么看到pp多少的...？
yanlu
539 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
tuhaha 說的我全都改囉 謝謝吐哈哈~ :)

ps藍翅膀找我就寫站內信吧...我的QQ號實在是忘記號碼啦(真的qq了 

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 214
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Yuki no Hana
TitleUnicode:雪の華
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Lan wings
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:
Tags:竜と炎の物語 ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu c85 Sharlo yanlu spboxer3
BeatmapID:981364
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254,82,17325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,54,17537,2,0,P|141:49|95:73,1,100,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
20,192,18382,1,2,0:3:0:0:
148,252,18805,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,232,19016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,19228,6,0,P|336:224|384:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,19861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,20073,2,0,P|488:164|504:124,1,50
464,84,20495,6,0,P|388:84|316:60,1,150,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,21340,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,156,21763,6,0,P|340:176|392:180,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,61,23030,2,0,P|196:110|217:156,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
312,260,23875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,24087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,304,24298,6,0,P|136:304|88:316,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,25143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,40,31481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,112,31692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,40,33171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,33594,1,2,0:3:0:0:
476,244,34016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,312,34439,2,0,P|308:340|259:340,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,35284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,35495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,244,35706,2,0,B|6:226|7:168|7:168|0:164,1,100,0|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
44,56,36552,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,104,36974,2,0,L|228:104,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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484,144,38242,6,0,P|484:193|460:236,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,272,38875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,276,39087,2,0,P|300:272|268:272,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,276,39509,6,0,P|120:284|88:192,1,200
188,92,40777,2,0,P|228:128|272:140,1,100,0|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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320,276,44157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,196,44580,6,0,B|259:111|183:24|295:38|346:35|346:35|388:63|492:107|383:144|389:245,1,500
272,316,47115,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,48,49228,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,52,49650,2,0,P|400:84|420:128,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,50284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,50495,2,0,P|343:297|362:343,1,100
484,276,51340,1,2,0:3:0:0:
496,136,51763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,68,51974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,28,52185,6,0,P|360:40|320:68,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,52819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,76,53030,2,0,P|164:68|136:64,1,50
72,72,53453,2,0,P|36:112|24:160,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
76,288,54298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,280,54721,6,0,P|268:284|312:304,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,55354,2,0,L|420:360,2,50
372,264,55988,6,0,P|412:232|428:184,1,100,0|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,128,56622,2,0,L|344:104,2,50,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57256,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,24,57678,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,58101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,24,58523,1,2,0:3:0:0:
8,284,59791,6,0,P|56:288|104:312,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,348,60425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,360,60636,2,0,P|280:352|320:324,1,100
400,212,61481,1,2,0:3:0:0:
388,72,61904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,96,62115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,84,62326,6,0,P|211:64|161:79,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,132,62960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,63171,2,0,P|49:226|0:225,1,100
0,84,64016,1,2,0:3:0:0:
124,16,64439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,88,64861,6,0,P|256:136|248:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,248,65495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,280,65706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,66129,6,0,P|32:144|40:92,1,100,0|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
80,40,66763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,28,66974,2,0,P|176:24|212:24,1,50
268,28,67397,6,0,P|296:36|320:36,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,28,67819,1,2,0:3:0:0:
512,96,68242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,68664,6,0,P|412:232|412:256,1,50
420,324,69087,1,2,0:2:0:0:
312,236,69509,1,0,0:1:0:0:
244,356,69932,6,0,P|216:348|192:348,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,356,70354,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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92,180,71199,6,0,P|100:152|100:128,1,50
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204,328,75002,6,0,P|232:336|256:336,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,75425,1,2,0:3:0:0:
460,364,75847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,244,76270,6,0,P|400:216|400:192,1,50
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428,0,77115,1,0,0:1:0:0:
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196,112,77960,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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52,236,79228,2,0,L|4:216,1,50
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288,20,80918,1,0,0:3:0:0:
412,84,81340,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82608,12,0,87678,0:0:0:0:
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder
1,535 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp

Dark and Hard wrote:

100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_
您很会评价图 : )
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

yf_bmp wrote:

Dark and Hard wrote:

100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_
您很会评价图 : )
别这样啦 人家意思只是神PP图
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
hello! from the Christmas☆Queue 2016

[General]
- is it acceptable to avoid placing the programmed epilepsy warning by storyboarding your own in? you may want to ask some BNs or QATs
- why is "Hard" not named "sp3's Hard", or something along the likes of that?
00:06:552 - this timing section should be deleted. the entire song is 3/4 from what it looks like since the piano is following 3/4 more so than 6/4
- you need to get rid of excess skinning files in the map's folder. there are many, like the images for "Mode", "Auto", and all of the letter rankings. there are more, so be sure to go through the folder and delete them. according to modding software, these are the unused filed:
button-left.png
button-middle.png
button-right.png
hit0.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300g.png
hit300k.png
hit50.png
inputoverlay-key.png
menu-back.png
menu-button-background.png
play-unranked.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-title.png
ranking-X.png
ranking-XH.png
selection-mod-autoplay.png
selection-mod-cinema.png
selection-mod-doubletime.png
selection-mod-easy.png
selection-mod-flashlight.png
selection-mod-halftime.png
selection-mod-hardrock.png
selection-mod-hidden.png
selection-mod-nightcore.png
selection-mod-nofail.png
selection-mod-perfect.png
selection-mod-relax.png
selection-mod-relax2.png
selection-mod-spunout.png
selection-mod-suddendeath.png
selection-mode-over.png
selection-mode.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-mods.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-random.png
star.png
- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin.
- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds bad

[Easy]
00:14:157 (1) - there is not enough time between the end of this spinner and the next object for lower level players to recover from spinning. to fix this, i would shorten this spinner by 1/1 so it ends at 00:15:425. this is crucial because because new and inexperienced players usually have a very hard time transitioning from spinner to circle/slider.
00:26:833 (1,2,3) - space these objects out a bit farther so they don't overlap. the overlap looks rather ugly, and is also inconsistent with the spacing you have at 00:29:368 (1,2,3), a very similar pattern.

[yanlu's Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - remove the whistle sound from the body of this slider. it doesn't sound right, and there is nothing in the music to support adding that whistle sound there.
00:11:622 (1) - adding one more node at the center of this slider, like this, would make it look much better. it gives the curves of the slider more definition and shape
00:15:002 (3,4) - why is the spacing between these notes larger? please make it consistent and symmetrical; there's no reason to have such an odd spacing change, and especially not in a normal difficulty.
00:34:439 (4) - seems as if you're missing a NC here. placing one would make your NC pattern here consistent with the rest of the map.
00:36:974 (2,3,4) - why are these all slanted in different directions? it would make more sense for you to make them all parallel to each other for neatness
01:14:580 (3) - perhaps you should move this up a bit. the border of this circle almost goes off the screen

[Hard]
- OD +0.5. the OD is pretty low for a hard difficulty
- HP drain +1. why is it so low?
00:07:819 (4,5) - the large spacing here really caught me off guard. so soon into a hard difficulty and you already have a pretty large jump. i would move (5) upwards a bit so the jump isn't too big and out of place. example: 00:17:960 (3,4)
00:10:777 (2,3) - space these out a bit more so they don't overlap.
00:29:368 (4) - NC here for consistency
00:44:685 (1) - the HP drain is lenient enough here so you can remove the break after this spinner
00:51:763 (5) - same as previously mentioned for consistency
00:53:876 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned for consistency

[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low..
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing:
00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1)

[Snow]
- OD +0.5 or even +1. i think it would be best for the highest difficulty in a set to be at least OD 7.5
- HP drain +2 or +2.5. it doesn't need to be that low; the map is not too challenging and the song is not very long.

really fun circle jump set. good luck, and happy holidays
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Low wrote:

hello! from the Christmas☆Queue 2016

[General]
- is it acceptable to avoid placing the programmed epilepsy warning by storyboarding your own in? you may want to ask some BNs or QATs
- why is "Hard" not named "sp3's Hard", or something along the likes of that? because sp3 don't like "xxx's xxxx", she felt so ugly.
00:06:552 - this timing section should be deleted. the entire song is 3/4 from what it looks like since the piano is following 3/4 more so than 6/4 Fixed
- you need to get rid of excess skinning files in the map's folder. there are many, like the images for "Mode", "Auto", and all of the letter rankings. there are more, so be sure to go through the folder and delete them. according to modding software, these are the unused filed:Fixed
button-left.png
button-middle.png
button-right.png
hit0.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300g.png
hit300k.png
hit50.png
inputoverlay-key.png
menu-back.png
menu-button-background.png
play-unranked.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-title.png
ranking-X.png
ranking-XH.png
selection-mod-autoplay.png
selection-mod-cinema.png
selection-mod-doubletime.png
selection-mod-easy.png
selection-mod-flashlight.png
selection-mod-halftime.png
selection-mod-hardrock.png
selection-mod-hidden.png
selection-mod-nightcore.png
selection-mod-nofail.png
selection-mod-perfect.png
selection-mod-relax.png
selection-mod-relax2.png
selection-mod-spunout.png
selection-mod-suddendeath.png
selection-mode-over.png
selection-mode.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-mods.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-random.png
star.png
- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin. eh my english is bad,i can't understand D:
- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds badI will try it

[Easy]
00:14:157 (1) - there is not enough time between the end of this spinner and the next object for lower level players to recover from spinning. to fix this, i would shorten this spinner by 1/1 so it ends at 00:15:425. this is crucial because because new and inexperienced players usually have a very hard time transitioning from spinner to circle/slider. i think have 2/1 is sufficient :Dhttps://osu.ppy.sh/s/72767 <--like this. but this is a good idea :D, Fixed
00:26:833 (1,2,3) - space these objects out a bit farther so they don't overlap. the overlap looks rather ugly, and is also inconsistent with the spacing you have at 00:29:368 (1,2,3), a very similar pattern.Fixed

[yanlu's Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - remove the whistle sound from the body of this slider. it doesn't sound right, and there is nothing in the music to support adding that whistle sound there.
00:11:622 (1) - adding one more node at the center of this slider, like this, would make it look much better. it gives the curves of the slider more definition and shape
00:15:002 (3,4) - why is the spacing between these notes larger? please make it consistent and symmetrical; there's no reason to have such an odd spacing change, and especially not in a normal difficulty.
00:34:439 (4) - seems as if you're missing a NC here. placing one would make your NC pattern here consistent with the rest of the map.
00:36:974 (2,3,4) - why are these all slanted in different directions? it would make more sense for you to make them all parallel to each other for neatness
01:14:580 (3) - perhaps you should move this up a bit. the border of this circle almost goes off the screen

[Hard]
- OD +0.5. the OD is pretty low for a hard difficulty
- HP drain +1. why is it so low?
00:07:819 (4,5) - the large spacing here really caught me off guard. so soon into a hard difficulty and you already have a pretty large jump. i would move (5) upwards a bit so the jump isn't too big and out of place. example: 00:17:960 (3,4)
00:10:777 (2,3) - space these out a bit more so they don't overlap.
00:29:368 (4) - NC here for consistency
00:44:685 (1) - the HP drain is lenient enough here so you can remove the break after this spinner
00:51:763 (5) - same as previously mentioned for consistency
00:53:876 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned for consistency

[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low..
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing:
00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1)

[Snow]
- OD +0.5 or even +1. i think it would be best for the highest difficulty in a set to be at least OD 7.5 +1
- HP drain +2 or +2.5. it doesn't need to be that low; the map is not too challenging and the song is not very long. +2

really fun circle jump set. good luck, and happy holidays
happy holidays~
Sharlo
548 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo

Lan wings wrote:

为什么要把某句话特别凸显出来
手滑选错了而已。。。
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low

Lan wings wrote:

Low wrote:

- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin. eh my english is bad,i can't understand D:
in the .osu file, under the section "[Colours]", add this in (this is the code for a white sliderborder)
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

example of what it should look like in the .osu file:
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Low wrote:

in the .osu file, under the section "[Colours]", add this in (this is the code for a white sliderborder)
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

example of what it should look like in the .osu file:
sry for late _(:з」∠)_

Turned out to be such, i know thx :Dz
yanlu
539 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
All you said is fixed. Thank u Low :)

update plz :P
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 5.V. Yuki no Hana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 214
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 214,6552,14157,16692,36974,47115,49650,57256,59791,67397
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuki no Hana
TitleUnicode:雪の華
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Lan wings
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:
Tags:竜と炎の物語 ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu c85 Sharlo yanlu spboxer3
BeatmapID:981364
BeatmapSetID:437097

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
214,422.535211267606,3,2,1,50,1,0
44791,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45002,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
46059,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
46270,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
49650,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
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Loneight
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1,326 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－Easy－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:30 Loneight: 先從Easy開始吧
12:30 Lan wings: 嗯嗯
12:31 Lan wings: GD的你照样说
12:33 Loneight: 00:07:819 (2,1) - 這裡的kick音, 讓我有點違和, 原因是會感覺00:09:087 (1) - 尾巴按照前面配置, 這邊應該也會跟著一個kick, 然而並沒有, 所以產生了違和感, 看要不要00:06:552 (1,2) - 這兩個音效設置交換一下, 我主觀的想法, 只是提提xD
12:34 Lan wings: kick音是啥来着
12:34 Loneight: 好像是你的clap？
12:35 Loneight: 就是有個don的聲音
12:35 Loneight: 00:49:650 (1) - 這跟上面那個差不多的想法
12:36 Lan wings: 我这里跟的钢琴诶
12:38 Loneight: 你有目的就可以了, 提提而已, 因為畢竟我沒看出目的, 需要理解xD
12:38 Lan wings: 这里前面第一个跟后面2个的力度都不同的
12:38 Lan wings: 所以第一个用了drum的hitnormal
12:38 Lan wings: 后面用了clap
12:38 Loneight: 哪乳吼都！
12:39 Lan wings: 你可以仔细听听后面两个力度重很多
12:39 Loneight: 嗯
12:40 Loneight: 01:04:861 (1) - 強迫症, 這好像沒對稱, 不要理我 xD
12:40 Lan wings: 纳尼
12:41 Lan wings: 我再对一下
12:41 Loneight: 長度的問題
12:41 Loneight: 中間點可能要再往上拉一點點
12:41 Loneight: Easy真的看不出甚麼問題 ;w;
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－LuLu's Normal－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:42 Loneight: 換來講講lulu的難度
12:43 Loneight: 00:02:326 (1) - 這個開頭, 有對上甚麼嗎, 若是自創節奏的話我覺得還是別加上音效, 違和感挺大的, 畢竟這裡的whistle聲音很突出, 一聽就知道不是歌的source
12:43 Lan wings: 好了 我强行用shift把红点拉上去一点对齐了
12:44 Loneight: 我們都有強迫症
12:44 Loneight: (逃
12:44 Lan wings: 没强迫症怎么做图！
12:44 Loneight: 對阿！
12:45 Lan wings: 00:43:312 (2,1) - 你说我这里要不要把红色的尾巴跟白色的轨迹重叠
12:46 Loneight: 00:27:678 (2) - 感覺這部分對上鋼琴音會比較讓人有節奏感, 就像00:35:284 (2,3,4) - 打得很舒服, 後面同樣的地方就不多指出了
12:46 Loneight: 等等噢, 我看看
12:46 Lan wings: 嘛 想了想还是算了 不然要被人说Easy里面搞这样挡着看不了了
12:47 Loneight: 我覺得可以呀, 我也常常這樣做說
12:47 Loneight: 不擋著怎麼訓練新人讀圖呢！
12:48 Lan wings: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714359
12:48 Lan wings: 那就这样惹._.
12:48 Loneight: 反正顏色不一樣, 不容易被誤導
12:49 Loneight: 後面鋼琴獨湊, lulu偷懶我看到囉
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－薯片你個Baka－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:49 Loneight: 來換Hard
12:52 Loneight: 藍翼連你也偷懶
12:53 Lan wings: 这是薯片
12:53 Loneight: 00:27:678 (2,5) - 這個我想, 原因跟lulu的那一樣, 少了打擊感, 感覺換circles跟著鋼琴會很舒適, 就像00:32:749 (2,3,2,3) -
12:53 Loneight: 這是薯片的難度！？
12:53 Loneight: 真的耶！
12:53 Loneight: 那, 難度名稱記得統一 xD
12:54 Loneight: 難怪我覺得怎麼沒有橫軸移動感覺
12:54 Loneight: 00:38:875 (4,5) - DS可能要修正一下
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－sharlo's Insane－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:54 Loneight: 好, 換sharlo的
12:55 Lan wings: 薯片不喜欢那样的难度吗
12:55 Lan wings: 难度名
12:55 Loneight: 00:01:270 (6,1) - Distance？
12:56 Loneight: 其實我剛沒看到譜面上的介紹, 以為是你做的www
12:58 Loneight: 00:30:425 (6,1) - 感覺這部分的circles會有點誤導, 看要不要統一顏色, 把NC移到00:30:847 (2) - , 雖然會讓NC規律亂掉就是了
12:59 Loneight: 前面不提原因是因為slider旁邊突出的身體還能免被誤導, 而這裡因為是circles, 是整塊stack再一起
13:01 Loneight: 01:21:340 (1) - 感覺可以再增加些距離, 比較能符合鋼琴的音調, 也不會讓移動產生不舒適的感覺, 原因是前面鋼琴獨奏部分都是一堆跳, 然而到這邊突然縮減距離
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－藍翼重頭戲－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
13:02 Loneight: 好, 換我們藍翼show time的難度了！
13:03 Lan wings: ;w;
13:03 Loneight: 藍翼跟sharlo一樣開頭都是用六角耶
13:03 Lan wings: 嗯
13:03 Lan wings: 有一点点区别
13:04 Lan wings: 不过明显我的善良多了
13:05 Loneight: 藍翼, 00:28:101 (1,2,1) - 要不要試著把NC對著這裡最突出的鋼琴音？[https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714423 就像這樣]
13:05 Lan wings: 曾经试过
13:06 Loneight: 好, 當我沒說
13:06 Lan wings: 我看看你的图
13:06 Lan wings: 哦 这样
13:06 Lan wings: 最后还是跟整体不太搭
13:06 Lan wings: 最后没改
13:07 Loneight: 嗯, 理解了
13:07 Lan wings: 所以用距离凸显了
13:07 Lan wings: 距离和音效
13:07 Loneight: 00:44:157 (1) - 感覺這個NC是為了避免stack而導致讀圖困難, 不過我想應該不會有事, 看要不要刪掉？
13:08 Loneight: 還是為了對vocal呀xD
13:08 Loneight: 嘛, 當我沒說好了
13:08 Lan wings: 00:42:890 (4,1) -
13:08 Lan wings: 其实是跟前面一样
13:08 Lan wings: 做到这里发现后面变了
13:08 Lan wings: 后面节奏变了
13:08 Lan wings: 然后就这样了
13:09 Lan wings: 反正正好可以做stack提示
13:09 Loneight: 根本沒什麼好說的呀, 神麻婆;w;
13:09 Lan wings: 啊
13:09 Lan wings: 我错了
13:09 Lan wings: 我刚看错了
13:09 Lan wings: 听你的把NC去掉吧233
13:11 Loneight: 我剛試打了一下, 我的手腕卡到滑鼠, 然後就死掉了233
13:11 Lan wings: _(:з」∠)_
13:11 Lan wings: 这都是手腕的锅
13:11 Lan wings: 为什么手腕要卡到滑鼠
13:11 Loneight: 然後打的時候發現有兩個地方能提提
13:12 Lan wings: 嗯嗯
13:12 Loneight: 00:52:608 (2) - 這個雖說我想DS應該是跟前面的部分一樣, 但感覺這邊可以做點修改, 增加一下DS, 效果好像步錯
13:12 Loneight: *不錯
13:12 Loneight: 00:59:368 (3) - 強迫症, 感覺能加點緩速
13:13 Loneight: 好, 沒了~
13:13 Lan wings: 00:52:608 (2) - 有效果图吗
13:13 Lan wings: 感觉没位置拉了！
13:13 Loneight: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714457 差不多這種感覺]
13:14 Lan wings: 唔
13:14 Lan wings: 这样的话弯度要弄大一点了
13:14 Loneight: 嗯, 提提而已, 別在意
13:15 Lan wings: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714466
13:15 Lan wings: 这样啦
13:15 Loneight: 不錯！
13:15 Lan wings: 00:59:368 (3) - 已经这么短了就不减速拉
13:15 Loneight: 那我去貼囉
就這些了！藍翼加油！
star~

Edit:
突然發現這是我第1000post, 來紀念一下
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Flower
1,661 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
局的没什么好摸的，随便说点了
截图用的puush，可能要用代理才能看到

[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀，建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦，所以请务必拜托了

[Snow]
00:12:678 (2) - 往左上平移2格，这样00:11:833 (2,2,2) - 的距离保持一致，并且flow不致过于呆板
00:16:270 (3) - 这个地方没有音，打起来有点惨，建议这样子：http://puu.sh/sCxlz/e3b4310cbd.jpg
00:59:368 (3) - ^
00:17:960 (1,2,3) - 建议这里距离保持一致，比如说1放到248,272左右，打起来比较舒服
00:23:875 (1,2,3) - 丑死
怀疑jubeat玩家

[Sharlo's]
00:16:270 (3) - 这里据我看是没有音的，所以建议删掉
00:59:368 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:10:354 (1,2,3) - 间距看起来有点不一样，把3往上移一点。你懒也可以不改
00:43:946 (8) - 这里在这个AR下非常难读，而且又跳，主要是丑，不如放在00:43:523 (6) - 下面
00:49:228 (1,2) - 可以blanket更好些
01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 不太hard啊 :| 主要是感觉01:14:157 (3,1) - 之类的的间距有点吓人。可以把01:14:368 (1,2) - 交换位置。

[Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - 个人感觉删掉比较舒服。滑条头都不在音上
00:44:580 (1) - 这个绝对是不好看。建议修改

没了，祝好运
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Flower wrote:

局的没什么好摸的，随便说点了
截图用的puush，可能要用代理才能看到

[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀，建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦，所以请务必拜托了

[Snow]
00:12:678 (2) - 往左上平移2格，这样00:11:833 (2,2,2) - 的距离保持一致，并且flow不致过于呆板 Fixed
00:16:270 (3) - 这个地方没有音，打起来有点惨，建议这样子：http://puu.sh/sCxlz/e3b4310cbd.jpg 改成音量50 40 30
00:59:368 (3) - ^ ^
00:17:960 (1,2,3) - 建议这里距离保持一致，比如说1放到248,272左右，打起来比较舒服 Fixed
00:23:875 (1,2,3) - 丑死 扔在3的sliderhead了
怀疑jubeat玩家 俺不玩jubeat._.

没了，祝好运
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings
spboxer3: fixed some
Jukkii
593 posts
Joined October 2015
Jukkii
quick mod from the christmas modding queue

i suck at low diffs so im going to only mod the highest one (sorry)

00:21:657 (2,3) - why are these stacked like this when all the other slider doubles are stacked differently?
00:56:411 (2) - looks a bit weird imo
01:01:059 (1,2,3) - why is this reversed compared to the other 2 similar patterns before? its a bit weird to play and i cant really hear anything in the song to justify it

cant actually find anything else, its a really good map and im really digging the christmas skin elements
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Lan wings

-Jukke- wrote:

quick mod from the christmas modding queue

i suck at low diffs so im going to only mod the highest one (sorry)

00:21:657 (2,3) - why are these stacked like this when all the other slider doubles are stacked differently?because another slider's pattern not suitable this style
00:56:411 (2) - looks a bit weird imo me too, but i don't have another good idea ;w;
01:01:059 (1,2,3) - why is this reversed compared to the other 2 similar patterns before? its a bit weird to play and i cant really hear anything in the song to justify it ehhh sry, i can't explain in english(because my english is bad),00:59:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 6circle a group
cant actually find anything else, its a really good map and im really digging the christmas skin elements
thx for mod~
Iolite
185 posts
Joined February 2014
Iolite
叶月大法好！这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸，不知dalao需要吗？
Jukkii
593 posts
Joined October 2015
Jukkii
i decided to come up with a couple solutions to 00:56:411 (2) -


ofc a normal curved slider would work, but might be a bit boring, you can make them go into a different direction too


this would otherwise be a good choice but it overlaps with the followpoints in the jumps (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6757248)


maybe something like this to blanket the slider before? (sorry for bad blanket)

these are my ideas for fixing it
yanlu
539 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
sorry I'm late a bit >_<;

I deled 00:02:326 (1) - and re'do the slider00:44:580 (1) -
蟹蟹花花和肥翔:3/
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raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
都挺好的 只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊

[Snow]
  1. 00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
    1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样
  2. 00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:890 (1) - 和前面1脑袋差了一格没有叠上 强迫症玩家看着不太舒服
  2. 00:14:791 (4,1,2) - 有点难啊 能不能换成个折返啥的
  3. 我本来还想说00:43:946 (8,1,2,3) - 难 然后看到 01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这也太不hard了....


[Normal]
也好久不见啦
  1. 00:02:326 (1) - 这个诡异的whistle是啥...
  2. 00:26:833 (1) - DS好像突然变小了？好像也不是幻觉啊
  3. 00:58:523 (4) - 这个drum whistle也有点怪怪的...我个人觉得可能soft还好一点吧



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Lan wings
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LunaSaika wrote:

叶月大法好！这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸，不知dalao需要吗？
可以啊~
Lan wings
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raririn wrote:

都挺好的 只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊 我觉得没问题;w;

[Snow]
  1. 00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
    1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样 这样的话也许会好看点，但是flow就不好了 拒绝
  2. 00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差 可以




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Iolite
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Iolite
主要想说说音效，都是些主观建议，不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds

Snow

  1. 00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了，要不有些刺耳
  2. 00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和，soft+whistle就很好，00:49:650 (1) -同理
  3. 00:15:214 (3) - 略吵，只放一个sample-drum就好
  4. 00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了
  5. 00:23:664 (5) - 同上
  6. 00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧，前面音效都比较密集，00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理
  7. 00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧，和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致
  8. 00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点
  9. 00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧
  10. 00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下
  11. 如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle，00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum，00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle，会不会感觉更好?
  12. 00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2，改成两滑条吧
  13. 00:41:199 - drum去了吧，没必要加
  14. 00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了
  15. 00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle
  16. 00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish
  17. 00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致
  18. 00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受
  19. 00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle
  20. 00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致
  21. 00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧，有点随手
  22. 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐，这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理
  23. 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些?
  24. 01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好，体现和前两个的区别

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UndeadCapulet
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UndeadCapulet

general


it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it

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how2mod lan


i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps

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sharlo


00:30:002 (4) - think you should move this somewhere else so the repeated 00:30:214 (5,6,1) - jump pattern is more obvious

01:06:129 (1) - maybe add one more grey point to smooth out this slider: http://puu.sh/sR2R3/daa4cdc854.png, your current one has a weird kick toward the end

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:
Lan wings
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LunaSaika wrote:

主要想说说音效，都是些主观建议，不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds

Snow

  1. 00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了，要不有些刺耳 只去掉2
  2. 00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和，soft+whistle就很好，00:49:650 (1) -同理 这个音效跟的是钢琴 不适合whistle的音色 整曲大部分同样节奏都是采用同样的音效 而且drum hitnormal不算很重 我并不觉得违和啊？
  3. 00:15:214 (3) - 略吵，只放一个sample-drum就好 同上和00:14:791 (1) -
  4. 00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了^
  5. 00:23:664 (5) - 同上^
  6. 00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧，前面音效都比较密集，00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理 Fixed
  7. 00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧，和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致 同00:06:552 (1) - 至于为什么跟前面不一致,如果你看过我的一些图会发现同样的两段节奏排列跟节奏甚至音效都会有一定的区别
  8. 00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点同00:06:552 (1) -
  9. 00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧 这里音色不适合finish
  10. 00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下 00:37:819 (1) - 改为drum hitnormal
  11. 如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle，00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum，00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle，会不会感觉更好?00:38:664 (3) - 00:39:932 (1) - 仔细听你会发现这两个只适合下soft whistle
  12. 00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2，改成两滑条吧 自己脑补有就是了>.<
  13. 00:41:199 - drum去了吧，没必要加 同理00:06:552 (1) - 不过音量的确有点高 我调低点
  14. 00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了Fixed
  15. 00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle 同上面的 很多时候drum的音色会比soft更适合钢琴
  16. 00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish 这里不太适合finish
  17. 00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致 同00:33:805 (2) -
  18. 00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受 唔 之前改过形状 忘了ctrl+g回来了 ps:图坠毁看不了
  19. 00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle 这里不适合softwhistle啦
  20. 00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致同00:33:805 (2) -
  21. 00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧，有点随手同00:33:805 (2) - 我再说一下吧,对于我来说 同样的节奏在不同的时间段会带给我不同的感觉,所以梗是会有变化的,所以这是我不喜欢复制的理由
  22. 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐，这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理 根据我的感觉这里应该从小变大 而且对于后面的节奏排列等等会更适合
  23. 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些? 调整了一下音量
  24. 01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好，体现和前两个的区别 考虑过 但是这里实在不适合finish

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UndeadCapulet wrote:


general


it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it
actually,have more beatmap same this
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how2mod lan


i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats sry, i can't understand?(my english is bad)

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps These music give me the feeling should be like this _(:з」∠)_

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:
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