1. Hard (4.08 stars, 155 notes)
2. Insane (4.72 stars, 219 notes)
3. Kenezz's Easy (0.98 stars, 68 notes)
4. Lissette's Normal (2.79 stars, 108 notes)

KenezzEdward wrote:

Liz <33~
Kenezz's Bakamod~
Solo Recomendaciones

General
-Elimina el Countdown de todas las Diffs Listo
-Pondras Kia Time? :3 Nope >.<~

Kenezz's Easy
-Olvide ponerle unos finish~
[attachment=0:8a76b]Adrian Barba - Angeles Fuimos (Lizbeth) [Kenezz's Easy].osu[/attachment:8a76b] Updated =)

Lissette's Normal
-00:39:532 (3) - Modifica este slider para que el stack se vea bien~ Talvez: http://puu.sh/134P
-00:41:158 (1) - Finish al inicio?
-00:46:851 (2) - Finish al final?
-00:50:715 (2) - ^ (elimina clap)
-00:51:732 (3,4) - Alinealos con 2 verticalmente? http://puu.sh/134X
-01:14:505 (4) - Acortalo 1/2 beat y agrega un hit aqui? 01:15:318 (x) al nuevo hit agregale finish~

Hard
-00:41:158 (6) - Finish al inicio? Listo

Insane
-No veo problemas~ <333

Star!~ espera... ya di star xD moe >//<

Astom wrote:

baka baka ~

Algunas sugerencias
[Insane]
00:20:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - alinea bien los circles se ve feo. ok >.<
00:33:025 (3) - D: que es este slider deja a mis slider feos vivir en paz ;_;
00:58:238 (1) - -^ y a sus hermanitos tambien
00:59:662 (4) - -^
00:48:885 (2,3,4) - alinear bien estos circles, se ve mejor. ya, creo @.@

Eso seria mi mod baka baka ~ triple baka >.>
Star :>

1. Hmm el video aún tiene audio ? No lo pude abrir pero en un programa aparecia con el audio habilitado entonces no estoy seguro~
2. El Lead In varía unos pocos ms en Insane

1. Kenezz :3
2. 00:30:585 (X) - Siento que una nota es más necesaria aquí que en: 00:31:805 (Principalmente para que suene mejor con las vocales), Sugiero mover el slider (00:30:991 (3)) a 00:30:585.
3. 00:44:411 (1) - Este slider debería terminar aquí: 00:46:648 - , puedes agregar una nota aquí: 00:47:665 - si es que sientes que hay un vacío.
4. 00:52:748 (1) - Este spinner se siente un poco raro ya que el ritmo termina aquí: 00:53:968 - Sugiero terminarlo ahí y agregar unas notas ó eliminar el spinner y reemplazarlo por algunos sliders.
5. 01:20:198 (5,6,7) - Este 1/2 triplet es algo random, sería mejor si lo conviertes a un slider con 2 repeats (pues debe terminar aquí: 01:20:808 - ) .
6. 01:24:265 (2) - Esto está tecnicamente "bien" pero sonaría mejor si mueves slider aquí: 01:24:875 -

1. Liss :3
2. 00:51:732 (3,4) - El overlap se puede evitar fácilmente, se vería mejor así
3. Perfecto~

1. El OD y Hp Drain podrían ser aumentados en 1 para que no sean iguales que Normal~ Hmm eso arruinaría el spread perfecto (ENHI) entonces solo OD +1 eso estará bien y no afectará el spread.
2. 00:43:801 (1,2) - El New Combo aquí se ve fuera de lugar, sugiero removerlo. Para no causar un combo muy largo puedes hacer esto
3. 01:00:678 (4,1) - En este caso el New Combo cumple su funciona al "advertir" el cambio de velocidad sin embargo siento que al estar puesto en stack "anula" esta función, sugiero separarlo del stack.
4. 01:13:692 (3,1) - ^

1. 00:31:398 (1,2) - En Insane este New Combo pasa desapercibido :o
2. Excelente Insane <3

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Do you have a better mp3? It’s kinda quiet. no, and is really hard to find ;_;
-- Offset 100 works better imo. Totally =O thanks alot

Hard:

Nice! ty<3

Insane:

00:33:025 (3) – Is the slider meant to look like that? XD ;_; why nobody likes my ugly sliders?? /cries in corner
00:41:361 (1) – Remove new combo? done
00:58:238 (1) – Slider looks strange =P more crying
00:59:662 (4) - ^ *snif >:

Good maps! Star! ^_^ thanks<3

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Hmm el video aún tiene audio ? No lo pude abrir pero en un programa aparecia con el audio habilitado entonces no estoy seguro~ sip tiene, pero no creo que afecte >.<
2. El Lead In varía unos pocos ms en Insane listo

Hard

1. El OD y Hp Drain podrían ser aumentados en 1 para que no sean iguales que Normal~ Hmm eso arruinaría el spread perfecto (ENHI) entonces solo OD +1 eso estará bien y no afectará el spread. con mucho gusto ^^
2. 00:43:801 (1,2) - El New Combo aquí se ve fuera de lugar, sugiero removerlo. Para no causar un combo muy largo puedes hacer esto si, definitivamente, gracias :3
3. 01:00:678 (4,1) - En este caso el New Combo cumple su funciona al "advertir" el cambio de velocidad sin embargo siento que al estar puesto en stack "anula" esta función, sugiero separarlo del stack. prefiero dejarlos stacked, porque no quiero hacer esto: http://puu.sh/15bc :<
4. 01:13:692 (3,1) - ^

Insane

1. 00:31:398 (1,2) - En Insane este New Combo pasa desapercibido ok, new combo removed~
2. Excelente Insane <3 Graciasss >3<

Yay :3

Shulin wrote:

Kenezz’s Easy:

00:11:878 (1) – Finish? Done
01:20:808 (x) – Note? Sounds weird without it =S Ok, Added Repeat Slider

Gonzvlo wrote:

Kenezz's Easy

1. Kenezz :3
2. 00:30:585 (X) - Siento que una nota es más necesaria aquí que en: 00:31:805 (Principalmente para que suene mejor con las vocales), Sugiero mover el slider (00:30:991 (3)) a 00:30:585. x_x no me gusta como suena ahi, lo dejare como esta
3. 00:44:411 (1) - Este slider debería terminar aquí: 00:46:648 - , puedes agregar una nota aquí: 00:47:665 - si es que sientes que hay un vacío. Hecho
4. 00:52:748 (1) - Este spinner se siente un poco raro ya que el ritmo termina aquí: 00:53:968 - Sugiero terminarlo ahí y agregar unas notas ó eliminar el spinner y reemplazarlo por algunos sliders. Lo dejare asi, vere que opinan los demás y si es necesario lo cambiare :3
5. 01:20:198 (5,6,7) - Este 1/2 triplet es algo random, sería mejor si lo conviertes a un slider con 2 repeats (pues debe terminar aquí: 01:20:808 - ) . ~
6. 01:24:265 (2) - Esto está tecnicamente "bien" pero sonaría mejor si mueves slider aquí: 01:24:875 - Ok~

ziin wrote:

http://mp3gain.sourceforge.net/

If you need to make the mp3 louder, but it sounds fine to me.

ykcarrot wrote:

Hola~ ^^/

[General]
- Increase HPDR of Hard by a tick or Decrease HPDR of Normal by a tick. I decreased on normal :3
- The MP3 audio volume is little bit low, whatever~ >.> working on it ^^'


[Insane]
00:17:180 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid down
01:21:230 (1,2,3) - 1 grid down
01:23:060 (5,6) - ^

all done


[Hard]
Fine


[Liss's Normal]
00:40:563 (4,5,6,1) - try to move them to x:360 / y:80, if you won't change stack leniency. Perfect *.*
01:29:973 (1) - audio fade out instead of 0 ? mm decided to remove this to keep consistence in all diff ^^


[Kenezz's Easy]
Well..


Good luck

deadbeat wrote:

<3

ErufenRito wrote:

Easy:

00:02:133 (2) - Nuke al slider D: (http://puu.sh/17a4 o como sea, pero cambialo, porque como esta ahora, suena horrible :T)
horrible? tanto asi? orz... Fixed~

ErufenRito wrote:

Hard:

00:13:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Asegpurate de que tengan spacing constantes (ahem.. check 4,5,6) listo
00:36:700 (3) - Ugly overlap innecesario :T Listo
00:40:970 (5,1) - Ahem... spacing otra vez. Listo ^^'
00:52:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Otra vez spacing, y etc etc etc etc ^^'
01:11:673 (6,1) - Me parece algo malvado que pongas el slider stacked al circulo, considerando que ahi podria ir perfectamente una nota separado por 1/2 beat. Lo que quiero decir es que ese stack es confuso en mi opinion. no me parece >.<

Normal:

00:40:563 (4,5,6,1) - Por qué no simplemente lo stackeas como se debe ser y aumentas el stack leniency? Lo digo porque cuando se juegue con hard rock (y mucha gente lo hará por ser un normal) se verá muy feo esa parte. Ya Liss lo arregló a su manera @.@ Estoy conforme

Easy:

00:02:133 (2) - Nuke al slider D: (http://puu.sh/17a4 o como sea, pero cambialo, porque como esta ahora, suena horrible :T)

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Si soy nazi lol no lo eres

1. Offset 500. Current one doesn't follow time signature hmm.

Wiinter wrote:

Kenezz's Easy
00:05:176 (4) - ohwell. i'm not a big fan of short combos, buut.. for me it sounds like the rhythm really changes here, soo... consider adding new combo D: Ok~
00:18:800 (5) - new combo here instead of 00:20:426 (1) is better imo ^

arien666 wrote:

[General]
If possible, try to remove audio from video file :3 When I remove audio from video, its low the quality alot, I don't know why, I'm not good at editing vids T_T Anyway beatmap folder have a good size so i dont think it would be a problem to leave it like this.

[Kenezz's Easy]
:3

[Lissette's Normal]
<3

[Hard]
00:51:333 (1,2,3) - Dunno about this stacking but whatever ;_; ^^ I think is fine, is hard diff, so is not a big problem ^^

[Insane]
00:21:036 (4) - [Nazi] It's not on grid so why don't you move this on grid well :3? oops, done~~



Haha :3
Good song anyway ;_;
[I won't pick up about why no (TV Size) on this :3]

Good luck :3
ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply why not? >.>

arien666 wrote:

After some fix for this mapset, enough :3

Bubbled XD

ps. I need to make another D.Gray-man song with TaikOsu ;_;

1. BPM: 147.500
2. OFFSET: 502

jericho2442 wrote:

srry but your map has the wrong timing

1. BPM: 147.500
2. OFFSET: 502

fixed timing, thanks a lot
ALL your diffs must have the same timing tbh oh i know, silly mistake there ~~
mp3 is not good at all, but i cant find a better so i guess it will do believe me, I know and every one in spanish community as well orz
also here's the video same quality without audio http://puu.sh/2dML thanks~~

Hard
01:01:703 (1) - im not sure over this slowdown slider, its rather hard to notice tbh I don't agree, i ll keep it
01:14:717 (1) - same

Insane
same comment as Hard over the 2 sliders tbh same as hard

1. Rechecking :3 HI LIZ :3
2. Make sure to check every slider in [Hard] and [Insane] after fixing the timing.

1. 00:48:095 (1) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly, the repeat sounds quite off, It should land here: 00:48:908 -
2. 00:47:688 (X) - Kinda expected a circle here. Perhaps something like this
3. 00:48:095 (1) - Oh I guess this and the other slider were not intentional, these are bugged (Timing change I guess). The repeat should land here: 00:48:908 -

1. 00:41:179 (1) - Bugged slider >w< It should end here: 00:42:400 -
2. 00:44:434 (3) - ^
3. 00:48:908 (3,4) - Kinda nazi, but I suggest to use the same spacing between (2)&(3)

1. BPM is not the same here :|
2. 00:52:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO the stream should start on (2) that's where the rhythm starts, you should remove (1).
3. 01:22:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps slip it up this combo?

1. BPM is not the same here either.
2. 00:52:773 (1) - Same suggestion about removing this circle :3
3. 01:21:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same suggestion about splitting this combo too.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Rechecking :3 HI LIZ :3
2. Make sure to check every slider in [Hard] and [Insane] after fixing the timing.

Already did that~~

[Kenezz's Easy]

1. 00:48:095 (1) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly, the repeat sounds quite off, It should land here: 00:48:908 - oops, i messed up , fixed ><
2. 00:47:688 (X) - Kinda expected a circle here. Perhaps something like this Kenezz agreed, done!
3. 00:48:095 (1) - Oh I guess this and the other slider were not intentional, these are bugged (Timing change I guess). The repeat should land here: 00:48:908 - yes, it was that

[Lissette's Normal]

1. 00:41:179 (1) - Bugged slider >w< It should end here: 00:42:400 -
2. 00:44:434 (3) - ^
3. 00:48:908 (3,4) - Kinda nazi, but I suggest to use the same spacing between (2)&(3)

Liss fixed her stuff

[Hard]

1. BPM is not the same here I used half the BPM to avoid a second offset i had to make the slowdown at the beginning.. same in Insane
2. 00:52:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO the stream should start on (2) that's where the rhythm starts, you should remove (1). I hear a beat here ><
3. 01:22:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps slip it up this combo?

I dont see the need, isnt that long, and is a hard diff~~

[Insane]

1. BPM is not the same here either.
2. 00:52:773 (1) - Same suggestion about removing this circle :3 i hear the beat ><'
3. 01:21:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same suggestion about splitting this combo too. ok this one i agree, done~~

:3

gdeath wrote:

Liz

Gonzvlo wrote:

Grats Liz \o/