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Arctic Monkeys - Brianstorm

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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 04 de mayo de 2011 at 05:39:59 p.m.

Artist: Arctic Monkeys
Title: Brianstorm
Tags: RandomJibberish Favourite Worst Nightmare Brainstorm
BPM: 165.16
Filesize: 21939kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Average (2.89 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Relaxing (0.87 stars, 93 notes)
  3. RJ's Challenging (4.77 stars, 298 notes)
  4. Tough (4.88 stars, 320 notes)
Download: Arctic Monkeys - Brianstorm
Download: Arctic Monkeys - Brianstorm (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The video is kinda flashy, so download it only if you can handle it.

Thanks to Lybydose!(Timing Help)

Some want to kiss, some want to kick you.

Pending
  1. Relaxing (Easy 100%)
  2. Average (Normal 100%)
  3. RJ's Challenging (Hard 100%)
  4. Tough (Insane 100%)
Skin
  1. Hitcircles and overlay made by MathiasXII ( Contease) (tweaked)
RandomJibberish
I forecast a storm

Change the diff name to whatever you want that fits in with yours :P

Download: Arctic Monkeys - Brianstorm (Gonzvlo) [RJ].osu
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

RandomJibberish wrote:

I forecast a storm

Change the diff name to whatever you want that fits in with yours :P
That's Great, Thanks
Added =D
wmfchris
The offset is not unique.

[Storm]
00:31:720 (1) - right 1 lv4 grid
00:37:532 (1) - left 1 lv4 grid
01:13:316 (1) - extend by one more reverse tick?
01:15:495 (2) - left 1 lv4 grid
Awesome ending.

[RJ]
00:29:538 (2,3) - right 1 grid
00:32:444 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:35:350 (4,5) - right 1 grid
00:38:257 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:44:069 (2,3) - left 1 grid
00:52:788 (2,3) - right 1 grid [correct all similar spacing? :/]
00:58:601 (4) - right 1 grid [There's similar pattern later, but the spacing is 0.76x instead of 0.82x

[Average]
no problem for me...

Overall nice lol
star~
RandomJibberish

wmfchris wrote:

[RJ]
00:29:538 (2,3) - right 1 grid
00:32:444 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:35:350 (4,5) - right 1 grid
00:38:257 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:44:069 (2,3) - left 1 grid
00:52:788 (2,3) - right 1 grid [correct all similar spacing? :/]
00:58:601 (4) - right 1 grid [There's similar pattern later, but the spacing is 0.76x instead of 0.82x
Yeah no. These are all incredibly minor and unimportant spacing changes which, if made, break symmetry :V
I don't generally uninentionally break spacing, FYI.

Also, set the preview point the same on my diff :P
Lybydose
Ok the instruments go pretty out of sync at times, so it's difficult to get it perfect. This timing is a lot better than before:

SPOILER
BPM for every section is 165.16 except one

Offset: 5,401
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Offset: 133,643
BPM: 166 Offset: 139,425
Offset: 145,237
IceBeam
Yo~

Hey,why BG is so big?
Resize :|

Add RJ to Tags?

Also,2-nd combo colour on RJ's difficulty is different to your one,however,have to say it fits better,moreover using white combo colours isn't allowed as I remember.

Countdown disabled on RJ and Storm,but Relaxing and Average use it.Fix please.

RJ's preview point is different too.

[Relaxing]
00:40:618 (1) - Finish?
00:55:149 (3) - ^
01:15:493 (1) - ^
01:18:400 (1) - ^
01:27:118 (1) - ^
01:30:025 (1) - ^
01:32:931 (1) - ^
01:34:384 (3) - ^
01:35:837 (1) - ^
01:38:743 - ^
01:40:469 (3) - Eh,sounds weird to me.Start this slider from 01:40:560.
01:50:369 (1) - Finish?
01:53:275 (1) - ^
01:56:181 (1) - ^
01:59:087 (1) - ^

[Average]
00:28:993 (1) - Finish?
00:40:618 (1) - ^
00:43:524 (1) - ^
00:52:243 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1) - ^
01:18:400 - ^
02:10:712 (1) - ^
02:28:150 (1) - ^
02:40:865 - Clap?
02:41:228 (3) - Finish?
02:42:681 (1,2) - ^ Same.Finish on start and clap on the end?

[RJ]
00:36:985 (2) - Finish?
00:39:891 (2) - ^
02:04:900 (1) - ^
02:06:353 (4) - ^
02:10:712 (1) - ^
02:12:166 (3) - ^
02:25:244 (1) - ^

[Storm]
00:31:901 (2) - Finish?
00:37:713 (2) - ^
00:46:433 - ^
00:47:886 (7) - ^
00:49:339 (2) - ^
00:52:245 (3) - ^
00:55:151 (3) - ^
00:58:057 (3) - ^
01:00:964 (3) - ^
01:15:677 (1) - Move finish to 01:15:495 (2)?
01:18:402 - Finish.
01:27:120 - ^
01:30:027 (1) - ^
01:32:933 (5) - ^
01:34:386 - ^
01:35:839 (6) - ^
01:38:745 - ^
01:44:558 (1) - ^
02:39:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - OMG SO MANY NEW COMBOS :o

Awsm
Star,bro~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

wmfchris wrote:

The offset is not unique. , Ok.

[Storm]
01:13:316 (1) - extend by one more reverse tick? Fixed.
Thanks

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Thanks Lybydose =]

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IceBeam wrote:

Resize :| I'll take care of this later
Add RJ to Tags? It's too short, But I'll add the full name
Also,2-nd combo colour on RJ's difficulty is different to your one,however,have to say it fits better,moreover using white combo colours isn't allowed as I remember. Fixed
Countdown disabled on RJ and Storm,but Relaxing and Average use it.Fix please. Fixed
RJ's preview point is different too. Fixed
Thanks Icebeam :3
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
EDIT: :|
RandomJibberish
Lybydose's timing goes off the main beat quite a bit, which messes up the main menu flashes. I've made some slight adjustments to the timing on my diff which should fix this, you should be able to swap in my red sections and resnap just fine :P

Download: Arctic Monkeys - Brianstorm (Gonzvlo) [RJ's Challenging].osu
Kuroneko-sHerald
[Relaxing]
:o Song setup
Please increase at least to +2 HP Drain Rate, OD and AR.
01:40:508 (3,4) - I think that here it's better to follow the instrumental part instead of the vocal because it's an easy.

[Average]
02:25:237 (1) - Don't know if it's rankable.
02:35:045 (1) - Maybe start at 02:35:227 - ?
02:42:674 (1,2) - I don't like at all the shape of these spinners sliders :?

Star~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Relaxing]
:o Song setup
Please increase at least to +2 HP Drain Rate, OD and AR. +1 OD and AR
01:40:508 (3,4) - I think that here it's better to follow the instrumental part instead of the vocal because it's an easy. I consider vocals easier for this part

[Average]
02:25:237 (1) - Don't know if it's rankable. I'll keep it for now.
02:35:045 (1) - Maybe start at 02:35:227 - ? Ok~
02:42:674 (1,2) - I don't like at all the shape of these spinners :? What's wrong with those sliders* D: ?
Thanks :P
Dusty
There's 5 diffs in the .osz. o_o

[Relaxing]
coolest Easy diff I've seen recently :D
Nice sliders too.

[rest of the diffs]
the whole mapset is really cool, nice job!

*star
Lesjuh
Do you accept Lesjuh diffs?
OzzyOzrock
Maybe a taiko diff?
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Thanks for the stars but I planned to have only 4 diffs for this map, I'm really sorry guys ):
OzzyOzrock
Sad face. I had already done the intro lol.

luckily
Khono_old
This is a pure win.
Star~
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
It's just impression or you made the BPM sync with the vocal?

/me completely ignored...
Kamure
*shiver.....

By Mod Request:

Average
02:25:237 (1) - would we consider this to be an unrankable burai slider?

uhh, there's more, i know it.... But I can't mod any more right now...
James2250
Pro mappers these days :P
My main concern is that you might want to either put an epilepsy warning or a notice in the song info about the video. It has some bright flashes at times.

Average
02:25:237 (1) - I think its ok to read personally

Touch:
01:41:689 (1) - they aren't hidden but these repeats might trip some people up
01:43:142 (1) - ^
02:39:768 (1) - add some hitsounds to these?

Only thing I can't be 100% sure on is all of the timing sections
Have a star~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

James2250 wrote:

Pro mappers these days :P
My main concern is that you might want to either put an epilepsy warning or a notice in the song info about the video. It has some bright flashes at times.

Touch:
01:41:689 (1) - they aren't hidden but these repeats might trip some people up
01:43:142 (1) - ^
02:39:768 (1) - add some hitsounds to these?

Only thing I can't be 100% sure on is all of the timing sections
Have a star~
Thanks James :3
Luvdic
[mod=fail]

Tough:

00:44:998 (5,6) - Place them like... 00:39:186 (5,6) - in timeline?
01:13:345 (1) - They dont have whistles on the white ticks, intentional?
01:16:591 (1) - Consider adding a clap?
01:29:865 - Adding a circle here wouldn't hurt so much... hmm...
02:49:940 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - And ill say it again. These new combos are pointless Lol. And are kind of ugly ;D

RJ's Challenging

00:29:559 (2) - Just curious about why this note is so special that it deserves to be soft hitsounded, while the rest are not... Lol

Average:

00:28:448 - Move this timing section to 00:28:651. Mainly to avoid that slider slide sound.
02:51:393 - Consider adding a finish?

Relaxing:

00:28:448 - Move this timing section to 00:28:651. Mainly to avoid that slider slide sound.

[/mod]

Oh well, nothing else to say i guess!
RandomJibberish
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

ErufenRito wrote:

02:49:940 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - And ill say it again. These new combos are pointless Lol. And are kind of ugly ;D
No you D:
Thanks
NotShinta
Uh, did I mention how fucking awesome this is?
jericho2442
Relaxing
01:15:502 (1,2) - these feel too close due to the spacing for the combo after, reverse the (1) and this plays much much better
02:33:592 (1) - the place this spinner ends feels really bad and out of time, it "should" end at either 02:34:682 or 02:35:045

Average
00:47:541 - add a note here and it improves the playability of this pattern a lot

RJ's Challenging
nothing i can say xD

Tough
01:03:355 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream really really plays bad and does not suit the map, i do really advise to map somethin else at this point :/
01:28:593 (1,2) - timing here plays and sounds really bad, much better with a timing like this

01:38:402 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i found this extremely blind to read, the fully hidden notes behind the sliders completely killed the flow of this map to me, if you made them less blind this map would be much much better
02:26:690 (2,3) - i kno its done for pattern, but the spacing here was rather bad to play, they do need more space between them :/
02:29:596 (1,2) - same

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very nice maps but i really do advise you to seriously look at some of them things i pointed out on the hardest, by fixing and changing them you would increase the fun and playability of the diff massively
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

It's just impression or you made the BPM sync with the vocal?

/me completely ignored...
Sorry, but I don't get it...

NotShinta wrote:

Uh, did I mention how fucking awesome this is?
You're awesome too.

jericho wrote:

mod
Wow I didn't notice those things :3


Thanks, Great mod.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Bump.
Sallad4ever
Hi Gonz :D

[General]

- honestly, I thought you mistyped the title then I see the video, it is actually Brianstorm :oops:
- Well the video doesn't really need an epilepsy warning, but it's true that all the movement in it is very annoying
- 02:25:244 (T) - hmm might as well remove this green timing section, if it only to add kiai, then add kiai on the red timing section

[Relaxing]
01:16:955 (2) - why the anti jump? it doesn't fit here

[Avarage]
02:28:143 (1) - I suggest to align the head of this slider to the end of the previous slider to make a better curve , something like this


[RJ's Challenging]
01:47:449 (1) - extend this spinner 1/4 beat more?

[Though]

02:49:940 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - xD

I'm guessing this is still not bubble yet because of the Timing, it's good enough imo
anyway Great map you pro mappers
~STAR
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Gonz :D Hey Sallad :D

[General]

- honestly, I thought you mistyped the title then I see the video, it is actually Brianstorm :oops: Added Brainstorm to tags.
- 02:25:244 (T) - hmm might as well remove this green timing section, if it only to add kiai, then add kiai on the red timing section
I'll keep the green section.

[Relaxing]
01:16:955 (2) - why the anti jump? it doesn't fit here Oops, fixed.

[Avarage]
02:28:143 (1) - I suggest to align the head of this slider to the end of the previous slider to make a better curve , something like this
Done.

Thanks Sallad :D
Zelos
I honestly could not find anything wrong. yay great mapsets :D!

Star
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. abouth the gray combo circle, I have difficult telling the approachcircle at sometime.
  2. example:
  3. combo color in [Relaxing] is different from other diffs
[Tough]:
  1. 00:44:634 (3,4,5) - spacing? 00:44:816 (4) move this upper may look better
  2. 00:53:731 (1) - the end is a bit off
  3. 01:14:040 (T) - unused section
  4. 01:27:503 (2,3) - seems crowed
  5. 01:41:689 (1) - reverse arrow is kind of hidden, should be fine though
  6. 01:43:142 (1) - ^
  7. 01:47:449 (2) - unsnapped sliderend, or something should be fixed on the timing
  8. 02:25:246 (T) - move the settings on the section to the uninherited one, and remove this.
  9. 02:49:940 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - cool solo
[RJ's Challenging]:
  1. AR+1
  2. 01:02:415 (T) - snap this KIAI section
  3. 01:03:900 (T) - add note here with a finish?
  4. 01:47:449 (1) - start this on the new section.
[Average]:
  1. 02:36:135 (2) - end this at 02:36:680
  2. 02:25:244 (T) - move the settings on the section to the uninherited one, and remove this.
[Relaxing]:
  1. 02:25:208 (1) - snap this to the new section. and also the double-section issue here
star~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
SPOILER

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. abouth the gray combo circle, I have difficult telling the approachcircle at sometime. Seems fine, I will change it if somebody else agrees tho.
  2. combo color in [Relaxing] is different from other diffs
Fixed

[Tough]:
  1. 00:44:634 (3,4,5) - spacing? 00:44:816 (4) move this upper may look better Ok
  2. 00:53:731 (1) - the end is a bit off I'm not sure about this.
  3. 01:14:040 (T) - unused section Removed.
  4. 01:27:503 (2,3) - seems crowed What :3 ?
  5. 01:47:449 (2) - unsnapped sliderend, or something should be fixed on the timing Fixed.
  6. 02:25:246 (T) - move the settings on the section to the uninherited one, and remove this. Done.
[Average]:
  1. 02:36:135 (2) - end this at 02:36:680 Ok.
  2. 02:25:244 (T) - move the settings on the section to the uninherited one, and remove this. Done.
[Relaxing]:
  1. 02:25:208 (1) - snap this to the new section. and also the double-section issue here Ok.
star~

Thanks Colin~
Gens
{Relaxing}

01:39:128 (1,2,3) - I don't know, this little bit sounds weird. You could try to follow the lyrics closer.
02:33:592 (1) - This spinner seemed a bit short to me, plus I don't think it fits very well in that part. You could change it for a slider or something.

{Average}

01:00:630 (1) - I don't like this spinner, practically behind the same reason of the spinner I pointed out in Relaxing.
01:50:401 (1,2,3) - I would avoid doing this, it just doesn't seem as intuitive for me. It doesn't really matter though.

~ ~ ~

I didn't touch timing.

The map overall has a good style. The music style is a bit messy though, which doesn't really add up to the map... and on a side note I kind of disliked Tough's last trap.

Well I guess this is ready to be bubbled. Yeah, everything checks out, just check what I said above.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gens wrote:

{Relaxing}

01:39:128 (1,2,3) - I don't know, this little bit sounds weird. You could try to follow the lyrics closer. Oops, Fixed.
02:33:592 (1) - This spinner seemed a bit short to me, plus I don't think it fits very well in that part. You could change it for a slider or something. I Agree

{Average}

01:00:630 (1) - I don't like this spinner, practically behind the same reason of the spinner I pointed out in Relaxing. Done.
01:50:401 (1,2,3) - I would avoid doing this, it just doesn't seem as intuitive for me. It doesn't really matter though. Remove the circle in the middle to make it easier.

Fixed some ninja spinners, also re-arranged some patterns on Average and Relaxing.
~ ~ ~

... and on a side note I kind of disliked Tough's last trap. I'm not sure about that stream, but I can't come up with anything else, do you have any suggestion :3 ?
Thanks Gens *pokes*
Gens
The last trap in Tough could use some short jumps instead, with sliders instead of circles. Maybe in a square or diamond formation. Just a random thought.

I skimmed through the difficulties again (except RJ's since it seems it had no changes), and everything seems to be alright.
RandomJibberish
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gens wrote:

The last trap in Tough could use some short jumps instead, with sliders instead of circles. Maybe in a square or diamond formation. Just a random thought.

I skimmed through the difficulties again (except RJ's since it seems it had no changes), and everything seems to be alright.

Hmm ok, Tried something with sliders.

Oh, RJ's diff updated.
Gens
{Average}
01:02:084 (2) - It irks me that this doesn't follow some instrument or vocal.
02:33:592 (5) - This slider also suffers the same thing as above, just not that bad.

And that last trap seemed a bit easy now :P. Not that it matters, it's pretty good.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gens wrote:

{Average}
01:02:084 (2) - It irks me that this doesn't follow some instrument or vocal.
02:33:592 (5) - This slider also suffers the same thing as above, just not that bad.

Hmm ok I think that those 2 sliders will be fine now.

And that last trap seemed a bit easy now :P. Not that it matters, it's pretty good. D:
Thanks Gens :3

Also changed:
-Sample Set to "Normal" here: 02:45:444 - (Tough)
-02:39:768 - Slider shape (Relaxing)
-02:45:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improved Star Formation (Relaxing)
Gens
More somewhat trivial things, bear with me. :L

Yeah, the sliders are a little bit better. They don't irk me as much anymore. Although they could follow the vocals better...

{Relaxing}
01:03:900 - Either a beat should be here, or the spinner should be extended here. I did notice this last time but it slipped my mind, sorry.

{Average}
01:53:276 (1,1) - Were these always like that? Seeing this as a Normal-like difficulty these don't go with the difficulty as well.

Dammit, I hope I'm not missing something else. I feel silly for having to recheck this so much.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gens wrote:

More somewhat trivial things, bear with me. :L

Yeah, the sliders are a little bit better. They don't irk me as much anymore. Although they could follow the vocals better...
Tweaked them a bit


{Relaxing}
01:03:900 - Either a beat should be here, or the spinner should be extended here. I did notice this last time but it slipped my mind, sorry.
I rather use rhythmical breaks for Easy :3

{Average}
01:53:276 (1,1) - Were these always like that? Seeing this as a Normal-like difficulty these don't go with the difficulty as well.
Are these too hard? too easy maybe D:? Oh well replaced them. 01:58:361 (4,1) - I'm ok with this jump.
Dammit, I hope I'm not missing something else. I feel silly for having to recheck this so much.
This reminds me of Wavin' Flag :3
Thanks Gens :3
Gens

Gonzvlo wrote:

Gens wrote:

Dammit, I hope I'm not missing something else. I feel silly for having to recheck this so much.
This reminds me of Wavin' Flag :3
Thanks Gens :3
Haha, you're right. In any case, thanks for being patient. I see no other problems with the map, and I love the tweaks you've done so far.

So it's time for Bubs.
braian5234
STAR! 8-)
Larto
Tough:
01:41:689 (1) - Hitbursts more or less completely cover the repeat arrow. To be on the safe side, make the repeat arrow more visible by moving the slider somewhere else.
01:43:142 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Larto wrote:

Tough:
01:41:689 (1) - Hitbursts more or less completely cover the repeat arrow. To be on the safe side, make the repeat arrow more visible by moving the slider somewhere else.
01:43:142 (1) - ^
Done, thanks Larto :3
Larto
THIS SONG
Gens
Going by the same principle, at 01:45:087 (2) the repeat arrow is also covered! You should move previous combo's (3) somewhere else too.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gens wrote:

Going by the same principle, at 01:45:087 (2) the repeat arrow is also covered! You should move previous combo's (3) somewhere else too. Fixed
I was not happy with this map, so I re-arranged most of the patterns in [Tough] to improve flow and pattern design. Also modified the combo colors to fit the video and added some skin elements. (+ SB'd a little effect)

kudosu'd~ D:
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