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Nana Takahashi & 709sec. - The World is All my loving

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Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 7. März 2011 at 19:28:54

Artist: Nana Takahashi & 709sec.
Title: The World is All my loving
Source: Touhou
Tags: reimu hakurei magicphoenix impossiblexu endless seeker maiden's cappricio dream battle imperishable night sound holic
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5891kb
Play Time: 04:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,68 stars, 475 notes)
  2. Impossiblexu's Easy (2,11 stars, 173 notes)
  3. Magic's Loving (5 stars, 735 notes)
  4. Normal (3,86 stars, 300 notes)
Download: Nana Takahashi & 709sec. - The World is All my loving
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Nana Takahashi & 709sec - The World is All my loving.

Easy by Impossiblexu
Normal by me
Hard by me
Lunatic by Magicphoenix

Thanks Impossiblexu and Magicphoenix for your guest diffs!

Let's get this modded.
Last edited by Tenshi-nyan , edited 71 times in total.
Kyonko Hizara
2,855 posts
Joined August 2010
Kyonko Hizara
:)
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Remove countdown from all diffs
- I like the intro of the song ~~~
- Tags >> Add Imperishable Night SOUND HOLIC Maiden's Capriccio ~ Dream Battle ?? Not sure >w<
- Try one of these BGs ??
SPOILER

- If you change the BG, change to these colors
Combo1 : 254,218,107
Combo2 : 255,198,206
Combo3 : 233,39,54

Impossiblexu's Easy;
- 03:08:497 >> Remove whistle, add finish

Normal;
- 01:46:211 >> Align with (3)
- 03:10:211 >> End kiai time here
- Remove the 3rd kiai time period

Hard;
- 01:19:211 >> Align the timing section
- 03:10:211 >> End kiai time here
- 03:30:997 >> Weird, not stacked well ... ??
- 04:26:069 >> Align the timing section

Magic's Loving;
- 01:19:211 >> Align the timing section
- 03:08:819 >> Add finish
- 03:10:211 >> End kiai time here
- Oh, that break it seems like is too long >w>
- 04:26:069 >> Align the timing section

* Star & Good Luck !! (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Magic's Loving

00:35:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too many claps in this stream
01:13:854 (1,2,3) - stack them. the difference of distance here is hard to recognize
01:29:497 (1) - this slider is too slow and too long. there should be more notes here
01:42:783 (1,2) - stack them. the slowing down confused me because the distance spacing is same as previous stream
02:31:211 (1,2,3) - the rhythm hears bad :< make some change (why clap on 02:32:283?)


Hard

Aproach Rate +1 or +2?

00:48:033 (5) - I'd prefer if you use 2 circles here. the short 1/4 slider that starts from a blue line is really awkward to hit.
01:13:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - the using of 0.5x makes the rhythm here harder to recognize
01:35:068 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:59:497 (2,3) - anti jump. prefer if you stack them
02:13:747 (4) - same problem
02:39:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem (ctrl+v part lol)
02:46:426 (6) - I don't like the using of 0.5x here, 02:45:783 (4,6) they are too close and in the same combo colour
0202:53:712 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
04:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - ^


Normal

01:29:497 (2) - I don't like the slowing down during kiai time
02:55:211 (2) - ^
03:26:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of arrangement is too stiff. and I think the rhythm should be started from 03:26:069. try not to follow the music with normal-sample


Impossiblexu's Easy

fine

star
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
Nana Takahashi<3
709sec. <3
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Remove countdown from all diffs
- I like the intro of the song ~~~
- Tags >> Add Imperishable Night SOUND HOLIC Maiden's Capriccio ~ Dream Battle ?? Not sure >w<
- Try one of these BGs ?? I won't change the BG since I like that pic ^_^
- If you change the BG, change to these colors
Combo1 : 254,218,107
Combo2 : 255,198,206
Combo3 : 233,39,54



Normal;
- 01:46:211 >> Align with (3)
- 03:10:211 >> End kiai time here
- Remove the 3rd kiai time period

Hard;
- 01:19:211 >> Align the timing section
- 03:10:211 >> End kiai time here
- 03:30:997 >> Weird, not stacked well ... ??
- 04:26:069 >> Align the timing section


* Star & Good Luck !! (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)




Hard

Aproach Rate +1 or +2? +1 then.

00:48:033 (5) - I'd prefer if you use 2 circles here. the short 1/4 slider that starts from a blue line is really awkward to hit.
01:13:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - the using of 0.5x makes the rhythm here harder to recognize how's that?
01:35:068 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:59:497 (2,3) - anti jump. prefer if you stack them
02:13:747 (4) - same problem
02:39:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem (ctrl+v part lol)
02:46:426 (6) - I don't like the using of 0.5x here, 02:45:783 (4,6) they are too close and in the same combo colour new combo then.
0202:53:712 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
04:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - ^


Normal

01:29:497 (2) - I don't like the slowing down during kiai time might change it later...
02:55:211 (2) - ^
03:26:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of arrangement is too stiff. and I think the rhythm should be started from 03:26:069. try not to follow the music with normal-sample



star

thx 4 ya mods.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
General
-Please have all your diffs satrt and end at the same point!!!


Impossiblexu Easy
00:53:497 (5) Seems weird to me. I say shorten the slider to make it end at 00:54:354 and add a note at 00:54:783

Normal
00:52:854 (1) Make this spinner start at 00:53:497 ?
02:18:569 (1) ^same as this but (02:19:211)
03:22:426 (6) up and right one grid

Hard
01:35:926 (3) fix the spacing to its the same as (1,2)
01:46:640 (1) remove new combo
02:02:711 (2,3,4) Properly stack these or space them out (looks ugly right now)
02:13:747 (4) Weird note here. Remove this and add 2 notes at 02:13:640 and 02:13:854

Magic's Loving
00:59:926 (9) delete this, copy (7) and paste it where (9) is then press crtl+H
01:00:140 (10) ^same thing but with (6)
03:10:854 Really this break seems waaaay to long
04:00:569 (6) straighten up the slider

Nice map/song :)
good luck with your map!!!!
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hello~ Some little suggestions.

Normal
02:08:926 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is not wrong.. but the pattern looks a bit.. boring XD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43499 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43500 are examples of what you could do to change this
02:18:140 (x) - add a note here?
03:21:354 (2) - instead of this slider, this http://puu.sh/BD1. Sounds better imo

Hard
01:14:711 (5) - finish it at 01:15:140. In case you do that, add a note at 01:15:354
03:05:176 (x) - add a note here
03:05:283 (x) - ^
04:01:426 (x) - ^
04:01:640 (7) - instead of this slider, add a simple note here and start the slider at 04:01:854, finishing at 04:02:711
04:05:283 (x) - add a note here
04:17:497 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/BDo use this spacing to follow how you started the combo?

Magic's Loving
01:22:211 (1) - I don't know of there is any biiiig problem with this, but well.. It's a little bad to see. I suggest changing it's placement
02:47:069 (2) - this is totally nazi sorry T^T change a little bit this slider to be like (1). something like this http://puu.sh/BDv

This is such a cool map of a cool song and a nice bg XD Have a star ^.~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Magic's loving]
0:18:247 If you don't mind, remove those excess bookmarks lol
0:34:211 (5,6) stack properly
0:35:497 (1~9) make them symmetrical along the y-axis
0:49:211 (1,2,3,4) stack properly (there're many slider-notes like this in the diff, and not stacked properly~ I'll not mention them anymore, but better check all of them~)
0:59:711 (8,9) spacing, just make (6,7,8,9,10) symmetrical?
1:24:140 (3,4) ^
2:39:783 (3,4,5,6) make them into a square
2:49:211 (1) left a bit looks better
3:10:854 oh god this break is too long, put some notes inside...

[Hard]
0:30:569 (5) down 1 (lv4) grid?
0:33:569 (3,4) stack properly!
0:37:584 (3) left 1 grid?
0:52:640 (3) put this at symmetrical position of (2)
2:16:747 (2) left+down 1 grid?
2:37:640 (3) left 1 grid
2:57:783 (3) left 1 grid
3:24:140 (4,5) stack properly.....

[Normal]
better than hard...

[Easy]
impossiblexu is good :3

weird spacing but good song, star~
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Normal :
Nothing to say...

This map has a lot of quality issues in Normal - Hard and beyond I can't put a judgment on it... So star and good luck for rank !
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Re-worked some parts in Hard slightly and updated Magic's diff.

MOAR MODS NAO!
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
Overall
Audio 40%? I can't hear the hitsounds.

Easy
Fine

Normal
No hitsounds? O.o
00:38:711 (6,7) 1 grid up and new combo at (5)
00:40:640 Clap
02:03:783 ^

star
Musty
2,246 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
My Mod =w=b

[General]

NoNeed for the .osb file, delete it :3 ( or if you can't, it's not urgent ( 1Ko ))
Offset : 2070

[Magic's]

00:28:747 (5) - Delete note
00:28:961 (7) - ^
00:34:211 (5) - reduce by 1 tick ( 1/4 )
OKAY I RETAKE MY MOD!
00:48:890 (2) - Delete Note
01:04:640 (1,2,4) - Replace by a whistle and remove the Clap
01:17:604 (1) - Start to 1/2
01:27:569 (1,2) - Spacing

[Hard]

00:28:854 (4) - Up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:32:711 (5) - Remove New Combo
00:33:140 (2) - New Combo
00:34:426 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:34:855 (2) - New Combo
00:51:783 (1) - Remove New Combo

Well

Star ~
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Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Mustaash wrote:

My Mod =w=b

[General]

NoNeed for the .osb file, delete it :3 ( or if you can't, it's not urgent ( 1Ko ))
Offset

[Magic's]

00:28:747 (5) - Delete note
00:28:961 (7) - ^
00:34:211 (5) - reduce by 1 tick ( 1/4 )

uh
sorry i finish my mod later, it's time to eat and it's the last day of 2010..

Star ~
No need to hurry, take your time :)
Oh and have a happy new year.
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Very good map, i love it, star :)
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
Sorry for the late Christmas Mod!

[General]
Shouldn't the "my" and the "loving" in the title be capitalized?

[Hard]
00:50:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Idk, jumps don't really seem to fit here IMO.
04:08:498 (4,5,6) - Anti-jumps are completely unexpected.

[Loving]
03:34:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wtf? You make people wait through a 24 second break (Which IMO is way too long for one) and then they just play this, and have to wait again. IMO, that is a dick move. Sure the next break isn't that long, but this is the insane map, the people playing this won't need as many breaks as the people playing the lower diffs. I suggest you actually map the guitar solo for this one. And then keep the rest the same, I think that would be appropriate for an insane.

Maps aren't bad, the timing seemed off to me when playing, yet when I checked it, it seemed fine, I think you should look into the timing. Anyway, here's your star.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]

  • Artist: SOUND HOLIC feat. 709sec. (I'm 100% sure...Nana Takahashi is just vocal)

    Tags: add "Endless Seeker" (Album name) "Nana Takahashi" (Vocal)
    also "Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle" and "keine kamishirasawa imperishable night" (The song use these two original musics)

    Not sure if all diff should have same length...lol, leave this for MAT/BAT..
[Impossiblexu's Easy]

Awesome.

[Normal]

Fine, kinda copy&pastal diff, but found nothing wrong with it.

[Hard]

More whistle for beginning part to follow rhythm?

The volume of kiai parts are too quiet...Use 80%?

  • 00:31:427 (2) - Whistle begin+end
    00:33:570 (2,3) - Stacking
    01:15:784 (1) - Shorten it for 1/2 beat?
    01:28:212 (5,6) - Stacking
    01:39:355 (3) - Finish?
    01:45:248 (X) - feel like to add a note? (there is a drum in the music...)
    01:46:105 (X) - ^
    Also I'm not very comfortable with the spacing of this part...maybe try arrangement like this?
    SPOILER
    04:25:212 (3) - Add a reverse?

[Magic's Loving]

Nice~

  • 01:37:855 (5,6,7) - Decrease the spacing for a little bit?
    01:39:784 (1,2) - Sounds arkward to me...try Finish-hit-clap-hit?
    02:12:355 (1,2) - hmm, little unexpected jump, not hard though...Try shift 45° like this?
    SPOILER
    02:19:641 (2) - Clap begin?
    02:23:498 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Feel too quiet for this part...02:23:498 (1,3) - clap end? 02:25:641 (3) - Whistle?
    02:31:212 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat?
    02:32:177 (2) - Move it 1/2 beat backward?
    02:32:284 (3) - Extend 1/2 beat and move 1/2 beat backward?
    03:05:070 (10) - Clap?
    03:53:284 (X) - Add a note with finish?
    04:25:641 (8) - End with finish instead of clap?
lol,well done~

Have my star~
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
hi :)

Impossiblexu's Easy
  1. 02:59:498 (3,4) - far
Normal
  1. 00:20:927 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48014
  2. 00:45:355 (2,3,4) - 1grid down
  3. 01:20:712 (5,6) - far
  4. 01:26:927 (2,3) - ^
  5. 01:27:998 (5,6,7) - ^
  6. 01:41:712 (5,6) - ^
  7. 02:15:355 (3,4,5) - ^
  8. 02:53:712 (5,6,7) - ^
  9. 03:00:141 (5,6) - ^
  10. 03:22:212 (5,6) - near
Hard
  1. 00:30:570 (5) - 1grid up , 1grid right
  2. 00:32:070 (4) - far
  3. 00:33:570 (2,3) - stack
  4. 01:19:641 (2,3) - spacing
  5. 01:36:355 (4) - 1grid left
  6. 01:46:641 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48025
  7. 01:54:784 (4,5) - 1grid down
  8. 03:36:355 - long orz
  9. 04:08:519 (4,5,6) - near
  10. 04:25:212 (3,4) - far
Magic's Loving
  1. 00:25:854 (9) - add new combo
  2. 00:29:069 (8,9) - near
  3. 00:34:211 (5,6) - ^
  4. 00:49:211 (1) - remove new combo
  5. 00:54:783 (10) - end at 00:55:104 & 00:54:319 (1) - start at 00:55:211
  6. 01:07:426 - delete break time
  7. 01:20:497 (6,7) - far
  8. 01:22:211 (1) - remove new combo , 01:22:854 (2) - add new combo
  9. 03:36:140 (10) - 1/4 is better.
  10. 04:24:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48027

+star
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
Star LOL
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Muya wrote:

hi :)
SPOILER
Normal
  1. 00:20:927 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48014 oh well,
  2. 00:45:355 (2,3,4) - 1grid down
  3. 01:20:712 (5,6) - far
  4. 01:26:927 (2,3) - ^
  5. 01:27:998 (5,6,7) - ^
  6. 01:41:712 (5,6) - ^
  7. 02:15:355 (3,4,5) - ^
  8. 02:53:712 (5,6,7) - ^
  9. 03:00:141 (5,6) - ^
  10. 03:22:212 (5,6) - near
Hard
  1. 00:30:570 (5) - 1grid up , 1grid right
  2. 00:32:070 (4) - far
  3. 00:33:570 (2,3) - stack
  4. 01:19:641 (2,3) - spacing
  5. 01:36:355 (4) - 1grid left
  6. 01:46:641 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48025 Nah. New combo, it's fine
  7. 01:54:784 (4,5) - 1grid down
  8. 03:36:355 - long orz mapped some extra T_T
  9. 04:08:519 (4,5,6) - near
  10. 04:25:212 (3,4) - far

+star
Map updates.

Very late star, Magic D:
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