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NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)

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Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 октября 2011 г. at 20:27:45

Artist: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H.
Title: THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)
Source: Fate/Stay Night
Tags: visual novel unlimited blade works heavens feel type-moon reiji-rj
BPM: 168
Filesize: 10934kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ilya (4,92 stars, 249 notes)
  2. Rin (3,93 stars, 121 notes)
  3. Saber (1,9 stars, 67 notes)
  4. Sakura (4,83 stars, 183 notes)
Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)
Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (no video)
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My second beatmap. Need in modding!

Fate/Stay Night spoilers, warning
Easy - Saber, because this route like is a fairy tale. Shiro looks like a kid, who believes in his dream.
Normal - Rin, because Ubw is more darker and realistic than Saber's route. Shiro looks like a teenager, who believes in his dream, but understands that it is impossible.
Hard - Sakura, the darkest and cruelest route. Shiro abandons his dream and becomes an adult.
Insane - Ilya, because she is cute and cruel sadist, who, anyway, is very kind. (I cant express my thoughts :|)

28.12.10 - New guest diff of Reiji-RJ: Ilya
29.12.10 - New bg on Ilya. Redownload, please.
24.01.11 - Artist was changed. Redownload, please.
31.01.11 - New bg on Rin, Sakura and Ilya. Redownload, please.
01.02.11 - New bg on Rin. Redownload, please.
09.02.11 - Combobursts from Reiji-RJ. Redownload, please.
13.02.11 - Video was changed. Redownload, please.
Last edited by Ch1ka , edited 91 times in total.
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Suta desu~
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Your [Ilya] :o

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
Weez
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Weez
Time to stop being lazy and start modding XP

Ilya
00:11:972 (6) Right one grid
00:12:151 (7) Left one grid

Sakura
Fine

Rin
01:08:743 (2,3) bring the end of the slider down a bit so its centered on the x-axis.

General
- Uncheck "letterbox during breaks" for all diffs not being used

Nice map ^_^
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you :3 Done!
Axey
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Axey
[Sakura]
00:31:615(8)-new combo

[Rin]&[saber]
00:37:329-choose Inherit previous timing setting


really good map ,i can't find any problem :)

star~~ :oops:
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you :3 done
Sandpig
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Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Ilya

00:27:508 (1,2) - the rhythm here seems not to match the music. try making them 1/2 earlier and add a note on 00:27:865


Sakura

approach rate +1?

00:28:222 (11,12,1) - spacing
01:15:529 - add a note?


Rin

00:23:937 (4) - new combo?
00:26:794 (5,6,7,8,9) - the rhythm here makes no sence to me
01:12:672 (6) - new combo


Saber

it is necessary to increase the distance between circles.

for instance 00:11:080 (1,2,3) - the distances between 1,2 and between 2,3 look the same. in this way the rhythm here is hard to recognize, especially for beginners

and I think there are too many notes on red ticks. I don't think beginners can deal with them

00:25:365 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm makes no sence

I'd like to suggest you remap this diff if you will take it as a Easy. seriously


that's all. you can call me for recheck if you need
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

Sandpig wrote:

Ilya

00:27:508 (1,2) - the rhythm here seems not to match the music. try making them 1/2 earlier and add a note on 00:27:865
Done. Thank you :3 Also fixed some hitsounds.

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
MoonShade
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MoonShade
General
Offset: 11.615 ("1" of the measure shoud start here, this doesn't change your timing really)

Saber
00:24:294 (4) - move to 00:24:472
00:24:651 (5) - delete
00:27:508 (3) - move to 00:27:329 or 00:27:686
00:54:457 (6,7) - try something like this:
SPOILER
also for 01:03:029 (2), 01:08:743 (2), 01:12:672 (6), ...

Rin
00:13:579 (4,1) - overlapping
00:26:437 (5,6) - ^
00:26:972 (6) - delete
00:27:508 (7) - ^
00:28:222 (7) - move to 00:27:865
00:53:565 (4,1) - overlapping
01:08:743 (2) - make it more symmetric

Sakura
00:38:207 (5) - move this to 00:38:386
00:38:565 (6) - delete
00:38:565 (6) - overlapping
01:16:600 - place circle
01:16:779 (12) - move to 01:16:957

Ilya
no problems found

Nice map, Star :3
Last edited by MoonShade , edited 1 time in total.
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you! Done :3
Sandpig
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Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Ilya

00:27:687 (3,4) - place them between 00:26:972 (8,1)?


Sakura

00:26:794 (6,7,8) - the rhythm here seems not to follow the music. here is my personal advice:

SPOILER


Rin

00:27:329 - add a note?


Saber

00:54:457 (6) - new combo
01:08:743 (2,3,4) - reduce some finish
01:14:457 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:21:600 (3,4) - ^

ok looks better now 8-)
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you! Done :3
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Первое,что бросилось в глаза - скрытый в спойлербокс ник автора гостевой сложности.
Их обычно выдеют ярким цветом или хотя бы на видном месте.
Если бы не увидел знакомый ник в тэгах - и не докопался бы.

Первый оффсет на сложности Ilya другой,надо исправить.

[Saber]
Такой большой слайдер тик рейт что бы скора больше было? Ну,в принципе не страшно.
00:25:364 (1) - Далековато,исправь дистанцию.
00:26:793 (2) - Как-то плохо звучит/играется.Удали слайдер и вместно него добавь просто сиркл на 00:26:793 и на 00:27:329 для поддержания ритма.
00:37:315 (1) - Финиш.
00:43:029 (1) - ^
00:48:743 (1) - ^
Вообще,наверное,небольшой перебор с финишами в конце,но я их люблю,и звучит неплохо,поэтому не буду ничего советовать.

[Rin]
00:17:329 (1) - Финиш?
00:23:043 - ^
01:12:672 (1,2,3) - Вообще-то времени довольно много,что бы не мисскликнуть.Но всё равно,если сможешь придумать что-нибудь другое тут - будет лучше.
Вижу что симметрия,всё красиво,но всё равно,даже с симметрией можно использовать всю площадь поля,не нужно ограничивать себя осью x/y

[Sakura]
00:17:329 (1) - На 1 клетку в право и будет ровно по центру.И вообще,это ж хард,поэтому если нарушишь дистанцию на 1 клетку - никто даже не заметит.
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:43:029 (1) - ^
00:48:743 (1) - ^
01:04:814 (6,7,8) - Сделать их симметричными?
01:16:957 (13) - Новое комбо тут? Вообще такие длинные комбо это не то что бы плохо,но и хорошего мало.

[Ilya]
00:11:437 (3) - Свисток идеально подчеркивает вокал.
00:14:472 (5) - ^
00:17:330 (1) - Финиш?
00:18:758 (3) - Свисток.
00:19:830 (7) - ^
00:20:365 (9) - ^
00:22:865 - ^
00:23:044 (2) - Финиш.
00:24:472 (5) - Свисток.
00:25:008 (7) - ^
00:25:901 (4) - ^
00:27:508 (2) - ^
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:31:794 (2) - Свисток.
00:32:687 (6) - ^
00:43:029 (1) - Финиш?
00:48:743 (1) - ^
За хитсаунды в конце - 10/10.

Отличная мапа,кстати.
Да и песня хороша.
Делаешь большие успехи,уже совсем про.

Звезда~
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

IceBeam wrote:

[Ilya]
00:11:437 (3) - Свисток идеально подчеркивает вокал.
00:14:472 (5) - ^
00:17:330 (1) - Финиш?
00:18:758 (3) - Свисток.
00:19:830 (7) - ^
00:20:365 (9) - ^
00:22:865 - ^
00:23:044 (2) - Финиш.
00:24:472 (5) - Свисток.
00:25:008 (7) - ^
00:25:901 (4) - ^
00:27:508 (2) - ^
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:31:794 (2) - Свисток.
00:32:687 (6) - ^
00:43:029 (1) - Финиш?
00:48:743 (1) - ^
За хитсаунды в конце - 10/10.
Все исправила, спасибо большое *о*

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Спасибо, сделал :3
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Ilya]
00:32:150 (4) - left 1 grid
01:00:350 (x) - delete break

[Sakura]
00:11:079 (1,2) - not symmetrical, down 1 grid
01:22:294 (7,8) - (7) right+up 1 grid, (8) right 2 grids

[Rin]
00:13:579 (4,2) - Just try to stack them?

nice map, star~
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you, done :3
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
[Easy]

00:12:507 (2,3,4) - I find it tricky to be an easy.

Only this :?

Star~
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thanks, done :3
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Sorry for long delay D;
=======================
BluE=Suggestion Only
ReD=I think you should fix this
* Major issue are in Bold

[General]
Maybe have some issue about Timing...Because it is a bit weird when i play.
Maybe find some experience mapper to help you...so I just give a general mod to you.

[Saber]
Hitsound sound is too soft..Maybe +10% would better?
00:20:186(5)-New combo
00:22:507(1)-Remove whistle
00:28:757(1~6)-Will make confused
00:33:400(x)-This spinner is too close with (6)-.I'm not recommend it in Easy diff
00:50:172(3.4)-Make it more beautiful?
00:55:886(2)-Hairlike spacing mistake...Better to fix this
00:57:850(x)-Same as 00:33:400
01:17:136(5)-Will make confused

[Rin]
00:19:829(3~9)-well..suggestion only..Bad arrangement here..Try to replace the notes
00:22:864(2)-Make it more symmetrical
01:12:850(2)-1 grid left
01:16:422(4.5)-Don't like this stack too much..well you decide to change or not

[Sakura]
00:17:329(1)-Don't change the slider speed suddenly...Modder and player are hate this
00:20:543(10)-New combo
00:28:757(1)-Same as 00:17:329
00:33:222(8)-^
01:12:672(6)-New combo

01:15:886(8)-New combo

[Ilya]
00:17:329(1)-a spacing issue?anyway..Don't like this jump too much
00:20:186(8)-New combo
00:21:614(1.2)-Sudden jump!!
00:48:207(1~5)-I think this stream is not necessary
00:53:029(1)-Don't Sudden jump..Please= =||
01:17:672(1)-^
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thanks! Done :3 Ilya will soon be fixed.
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Don't know why you against jumps in insane
However, ok.
Done~ Thank you!

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
jericho2442
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jericho2442
Design mod

Rin
00:11:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this seems to be following nothing, thus it plays really odd, what is it following?
00:23:937 (1) - this note being stacked under the combo before makes it really hard to read, i kept mistiming it, maybe unstack i say
01:04:279 (3) - same with this note stacked, it plays better if you move it down abit and unstack it
01:11:422 (4,5) - i kno you did that spacing for pattern, the problem is it dont feel right, its the same timing as 01:10:529 (1,2,3) so it really feels odd that the spacing is wider, please move (5) abit closer to (4)
01:16:422 (4) - again this plays much better if you unstack it, like this
SPOILER

Sakura
01:16:957 (1,2) - only small, but move these apart abit so they dont overlap

Ilya
01:05:886 (1,2,3,4) - spacing of (3,4) plays really really bad, the jumps just does not feel good to play, maybe think of giving this pattern normal spacing

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maps are fun, just them design points irk me abit xD, good luck
Faust
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Faust
Change this to "NUMBER 201 feat. M.H - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)"

VGMDB: Fate/Stay Night ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK

Also, I have a map of the Recapture ver. Good choice of song.

No kudosu,
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Thank you, done!
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

jericho2442 wrote:

Ilya
01:05:886 (1,2,3,4) - spacing of (3,4) plays really really bad, the jumps just does not feel good to play, maybe think of giving this pattern normal spacing
Oh :o
Fixed, thank you!

Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
Kamure
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Kamure
By Mod Request:

[Saber]
01:03:029 - start kiai times here

Both [Sakura] and [Ilya]
Make sure the offset is the same as the others.

Star now....
Leorda
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Leorda
Privet

General
1) You have 3 OSB in your mapset, delete it the wrong one
2) Offset : 186? I think that is the place where is heavybeats goes on, but I don't think so, you should contact kioukiou for that
3) I don't think that some BG are fit to the diff~ Try this :
Easy = Ilya
Normal = Sakura
Hard = Rin
Insane = Saber

Saber
Use Slider Tick Rate 1, using slider tick rate 2 makes combo higher~

00:15:364 (2,3,4,5) - Too confusing for new player, since the circle are place in red ticks, try change something
00:21:614 (4) - This slider is too short for easy diff, try replace from this slider into 2 circle
00:27:329 (3,4,5,1) - This timing pattern seems too confusing for new player
01:03:029 (T) - Snap the green timing here for kiai

Rin
00:18:758 (2) - Try make a slider like this, to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52984
00:27:865 (8) - Move to X:288 | Y:176. Look upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for nazing
01:10:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern seems messy, try make it something?

Sakura
00:37:315 (1,2,3,4) - Move this further away from 00:36:079 (6,7,8) to avoiding from overlapping
01:15:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try making a star or flower pattern?
01:19:815 (1) - Don't like it if this overlapped by 01:18:743 (6,7)

Ilya
00:33:222 (1,1) - Combine this into one spinner?
01:14:011 (2,3) - I feel it's too close

Nice one
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka

Leorda wrote:

Privet

General
1) You have 3 OSB in your mapset, delete it the wrong one
2) Offset : 186? I think that is the place where is heavybeats goes on, but I don't think so, you should contact kioukiou for that
3) I don't think that some BG are fit to the diff~ Try this :
Easy = Ilya
Normal = Sakura
Hard = Rin
Insane = Saber I dont wanna change diffs name, i just will try to find good BG

Saber
Use Slider Tick Rate 1, using slider tick rate 2 makes combo higher~

00:15:364 (2,3,4,5) - Too confusing for new player, since the circle are place in red ticks, try change something
00:21:614 (4) - This slider is too short for easy diff, try replace from this slider into 2 circle
00:27:329 (3,4,5,1) - This timing pattern seems too confusing for new player
01:03:029 (T) - Snap the green timing here for kiai

Rin
00:18:758 (2) - Try make a slider like this, to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52984
00:27:865 (8) - Move to X:288 | Y:176. Look upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for nazing
01:10:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern seems messy, try make it something?

Sakura
00:37:315 (1,2,3,4) - Move this further away from 00:36:079 (6,7,8) to avoiding from overlapping
01:15:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try making a star or flower pattern?
01:19:815 (1) - Don't like it if this overlapped by 01:18:743 (6,7)

all done! Thanks~


Ilya
00:33:222 (1,1) - Combine this into one spinner?
01:14:011 (2,3) - I feel it's too close

Nice one
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

Leorda wrote:

Ilya
00:33:222 (1,1) - Combine this into one spinner? no :c
01:14:011 (2,3) - I feel it's too close fixed
Thank you, Leo :3

Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Oh, how about this one for my diff's BG?
SPOILER
Vergence
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Vergence
Overall: Suggestion - Normal hitsounds seems suitable at kiai time instead of soft hitsounds

Saber
01:00:261 (X) - Insert a break here
Fine~

Rin
00:57:672 (6) - Move this back by 1/4 and move it closer to 5
Some of the patterns may be confusing

Sakura
00:22:507 (X) - Increase volume here and increase the volume of others because they are softer than the music

Ilya
00:38:386 (5) - Move this farther from 4
00:39:815 (10) - Move this farther from 9
01:00:261 - Kiai Time - Insert a break here or this will be a useless HP drain only..... :o
___________________________________________
Star~
Faust
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Faust
Lmao. The BG for Rin is from UBW Movie? I'd use an image extracted from the game itself to consistency, really.

It's just so odd. Consider it, will you?
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
All done, BG was changed. Thank you!
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

DragonSparta wrote:

Ilya
00:38:386 (5) - Move this farther from 4
00:39:815 (10) - Move this farther from 9
01:00:261 - Kiai Time - Insert a break here or this will be a useless HP drain only..... :o
All fixed, thanks!

Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu
Xeno_old
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Xeno_old
This is a very well mapped beatmap! I liked ALL the difficulties :> I love it when I see people put effort in their sliders! So have a Star + Pink Star.

The following are really just suggestions, and can all be ignored. ( apart from the objects that arent snapped in [Rin]

[Ilya]
00:24:114 (3) - Look closely, move down 1 grid :?

[Sakura]
Decrease AR by 1

00:11:972 (6,7) - Press cntl+J to check if they are aligned properly ( Move up 2 grids )
00:17:329 (1) - I would end this slider at 00:18:400 - (0.75x speed)
00:18:758 - Start a slider here and end at 00:19:472 then make it repeat once (0.75x speed)
00:25:365 (1) - overlaps are ugly :< flip it please ;>
00:34:651 (1) - Hard to hit this if you focus on spinning in the middle in small circles :> like mee lol, consider moving it closer to center please, since it ends so closely to spinner.
01:16:600 (5,1) - spacing, I'd suggest you also make (1) & (2) jumps

[Rin]
00:17:329 (1,2) - I see what you did here :> try this. I tweaked the sliders a little. 

424,280,17329,54,2,B|256:385|69:271,1,360,4|2
168,236,18758,2,0,B|204:251|255:264|304:254|349:235,1,180
replace these lines in the .osu and see if you like it :>

00:28:222 (9,10) - delete these, then copy 00:27:687 (7,8) - flip it both H and V then space it. Looks & plays better IMO. ( remove whistle's too ) :>

00:31:615 (4) - New combo :?
00:57:315 (5,6) - Stack?
01:04:814 (4) - New Combo :?

~

open AIMod to fix these quickly :>

00:11:080 (1) - Object isn't snapped
00:20:187 (4) - ^
00:23:937 (1) - ^
00:26:437 (5) - ^
00:27:687 (7) - ^
00:30:187 (3) - ^
00:32:685 (8) - ^
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka

Xeno32 wrote:

This is a very well mapped beatmap! I liked ALL the difficulties :> I love it when I see people put effort in their sliders! So have a Star + Pink Star. Thank you <3

The following are really just suggestions, and can all be ignored. ( apart from the objects that arent snapped in [Rin]

[Ilya]
00:24:114 (3) - Look closely, move down 1 grid :?

done!

[Sakura]
Decrease AR by 1

00:11:972 (6,7) - Press cntl+J to check if they are aligned properly ( Move up 2 grids )
00:17:329 (1) - I would end this slider at 00:18:400 - (0.75x speed)
00:18:758 - Start a slider here and end at 00:19:472 then make it repeat once (0.75x speed)
00:25:365 (1) - overlaps are ugly :< flip it please ;>
00:34:651 (1) - Hard to hit this if you focus on spinning in the middle in small circles :> like mee lol, consider moving it closer to center please, since it ends so closely to spinner.
01:16:600 (5,1) - spacing, I'd suggest you also make (1) & (2) jumps

done!

[Rin]
00:17:329 (1,2) - I see what you did here :> try this. I tweaked the sliders a little. 

424,280,17329,54,2,B|256:385|69:271,1,360,4|2
168,236,18758,2,0,B|204:251|255:264|304:254|349:235,1,180
replace these lines in the .osu and see if you like it :>

00:28:222 (9,10) - delete these, then copy 00:27:687 (7,8) - flip it both H and V then space it. Looks & plays better IMO. ( remove whistle's too ) :>

00:31:615 (4) - New combo :?
00:57:315 (5,6) - Stack?
01:04:814 (4) - New Combo :?

~

open AIMod to fix these quickly :>

00:11:080 (1) - Object isn't snapped
00:20:187 (4) - ^
00:23:937 (1) - ^
00:26:437 (5) - ^
00:27:687 (7) - ^
00:30:187 (3) - ^
00:32:685 (8) - ^


All done! Thank you <3
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
И Вам тоже привет ;)

[General]
В видосе есть звук. По идее, его нужно вырезать, потомучто звук и так уже есть отдельным аудиофайлом.

[Rin]
Это должен быть Нормал? Если да, то может AR поменьше выставить?
01:18:386 (1) - новое комбо? Ты используешь такой приём на 01:12:672 (1) вроде бы.

В остальном проблем не заметил. Да, и в Ilya прикольные хитсаунды в припеве. Очень понравилось :)
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haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
[General]
Maps does not have that many errors,
but umm.. i feel placement of sliders and circle could be improve more.
It's okay on hard and insane difficulty, but in Saber and Rin.
Yours is still ok, but i'm saying it can improve more.






[Saber]

00:12:503(2,3,4) Make this completly flat or curve the previous slider more to make it good better.
try to match start and end of the slider with 2 and 4
00:17:324 (1,2,3) make it look more nicer, maybe flowing the slider's curve would be nice

[Rin]

00:27:865(8) move this circle a bit
00:43:565(1,2,3) make these more symmetrical

[Sakura]

there are too many sliders overlapping each other.
yet it doesn't matter since there doesnt appear at the same time, but still.
they are okay, but slider continuously appearing at the same spot, does not look good.


[Iyka]
Nice mapping! no problem at all.


[Overall]

sure it was good map! star of course.
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
All done, thank you!

Насчет удаления звука из флв, я не знаю, как это сделать, а если конвертировать в ави и только потом удалять, он будет даже больше весить.
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ

senaya wrote:

Да, и в Ilya прикольные хитсаунды в припеве. Очень понравилось :)
Спасибо большое :oops:

haha5957 wrote:

[Iyka]
Nice mapping! no problem at all.
Thank you :)
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
hi ;))
Here's my mod^^

Saber:
01:11:243 (5) maybe 1 grid down?

Rin:
nice^^

Sakura:
Nothing found^^

Ilya:
Nice^^

No Kudosu pls cuz I didn't find anything ;)

Ymmm. Star :)
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
Thank you, done :3
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Make someone create a skin ? or at least add some comboburst...

[Saber]
aehm... i'd say: hitsound finish is used too much..

[Rin]
+3 AR, +1 Cs(smaller circles)
00:27:865 (8) - Move hit in another position....
00:57:493 (6) - Move to 00:57:672

[Sakura]
-1 AR

[Ilya]
+1 AR
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
Thank you! All done, maybe will add comboburst later
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Tags: "vn" is too short, remove it. "Fate" is already in the source, remove it too.
  2. Nice BGs
Saber
  1. 00:16:967 (4) - This clap sounds so weird, mainly because you didn't use claps for this part
  2. 01:00:350 - This break is not necessary,It's too short plus the song is short too.
  3. 01:14:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Finish Spam, It doesn't seem necessary and It sounds too loud, remove it from (3), (4) and (5).
  4. 01:19:814 (1,2,3,4) - ^ remove it from (4)
Rin
  1. 00:13:936 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistent, fix spacing between (2) and (3).
  2. 00:33:400 - The song is short so I don't feel like a break is necessary, I suggest to remove it and place a spinner here: 00:34:471.
Sakura
  1. 00:17:328 - Increase volume by 2~3+ ticks, It's too silent.
  2. 00:25:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is too long in compare with the whole diff, New Combo on (8)
  3. 00:30:007 - I don't see why you reduce volume here, Increase it please.
  4. 01:15:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - I love the "Star" pattern but reduce spacing a bit so it suits more the diff.
Ilya
  1. Reduce AR -1 , The current AR is too high
  2. 01:00:350 - Again I suggest to remove this break.
  3. I don't like this kind of maps, Small circles and wide spacing, But that's just personal taste. No Major Problems.
Cool Map.
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
All done, thank you!
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
All seem fine to me
star
Zorlok_
146 posts
Joined August 2010
Zorlok_
-Mod

-General
  1. Задай Playfield Bg Color под цвет фона.
  2. Желтый цвет сделай чуть бледнее.
-Timing
  1. 00:37:315 - Зачем здесь красная полоска?
-Saber

00:13:575 (4) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:16:967 (4,1) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 00:15:895 (3) -
00:21:608 (4,5) - Динстанс. снап.
00:23:572 (2,3) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:27:321 (3) - Грид. Одна клетка вправо.
00:30:177 (1) - Убери новое комбо.
00:30:177 (1) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:31:605 (3) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 00:30:891 (2) -
00:53:029 (5) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 00:51:600 (4) -
00:57:314 (3) - Подровняй под стак с началом слайдера 00:54:457 (1) -
01:02:672 (1) - Подровняй по одной линии с 01:03:029 (2) -
01:10:886 (4,5) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 01:10:172 (3) -
01:14:100 (1) - Подровняй по одной линии с 01:14:457 (2) -
01:15:886 (3,4) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 01:14:457 (2) -
01:17:136 (5) - Подровняй по одной линии с 01:16:600 (4) -
01:19:814 (1) - Подровняй по одной линии с 01:20:172 (2) -

-Rin

00:11:794 (2) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 00:11:078 (1) -
00:14:651 (3) - Подровняй по одной линии с концом слайдера 00:14:651 (3) -
00:27:865 (8) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:29:829 (2) - Расположи ровно между 00:28:758 (1) - и 00:30:185 (3) -
00:40:172 (1) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:53:029 (3) - Подровняй по одной линии с началом слайдера 00:51:600 (1) -
01:02:672 (1) - Подровняй по одной линии с 01:01:957 (3) -
01:04:279 (3) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
01:11:422 (3) - ^
01:19:814 (1) - Убери новое комбо
01:20:172 (2) - Новое комбо.

-Sukaru


01:20:172 (2) - Подровняй по одной линии с 00:12:151 (7) -
00:12:151 (7) - Подровняй по одной линии с 00:17:329 (1) -
00:26:794 (6) - Грид. Одна клетка вправо.
00:27:329 (8) - Подровняй по одной линии с 00:26:794 (6) -
00:28:222 (11) - Подровняй по одной линии с 00:27:686 (9) -
00:38:743 (6,7,8,9) - Выдели это и подровняй 00:38:921 (7) - по одной линии с 00:38:386 (5) -
00:43:565 (2) - Грид. Одна клетка влево.
00:44:457 (4,5,6,7) - Выдели это и подровняй 00:44:636 (5) - по одной линии с 00:44:100 (3) -
00:48:743 (1) - Подровняй по одной линии с 00:48:565 (11) -
01:09:457 (8) - Кликни по ноте она подровняется

-Ilya

Могут наругать за много коротких комбо.
И это единственное к чему можно придраться.

Удачи. Звезда~
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