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- 00:06:515 - 00:06:774 - 00:06:860 - 00:06:946 - all of these has 1/4 snare sound that you follow similar like 00:07:032 (7032|0) - , check other haru modoki if you want to be sure. it's your hardest diff too, so, why not?
- 00:13:584 - add one, 1/4 drum sound.
- 00:15:480 - also add one, another heavy crash sound, you shouldn't ignore this.
- 00:18:038 (18038|3) - i'm sure this is 1/8, or you can ask others for confirmation too.
- 00:20:912 (20912|0,21084|0) - move to column 2, to make it the same column as 00:21:429 (21429|3,21429|1) - , because you did it the same at 00:18:153 (18153|2,18153|0,18325|0,18325|2,18670|2,18670|0) - ,00:23:670 (23670|0,23670|2,23843|0,23843|2,24187|0,24187|2) - ,etc. make it consistent.
- 00:25:222 - 00:25:394 - 00:25:567 - 00:26:084 - 00:26:256 - You didn't use short LN for piano, Okay. but the problem is, you did use short LN at 00:22:118 (22118|2,22463|0,22808|3) - to cover the short piano sound, this inconsistency surely will be a problem, please decide how you will layer the sound and do it consistenly.
- 00:26:343 - also additional 1/4 sound, i don't think this should be missed.
- 00:31:256 - lol i'm quite confused with this tbh , it has the same sound as 00:31:429 - (low kick) , but the differences in note amount is huge, do you see what i mean? the note amount you use ended up contradict each other, makes it confusing for consistency.
for this part, my suggestion is : for the sound like 00:30:912 - 00:31:601 - , etc (crash sound), use triple notes (the current one you use is already correct)
for the sound like 00:30:567 - 00:30:739 - 00:31:256 - 00:31:429 - 00:32:808 - 00:33:325 - ,etc (kick sound). use double notes (it serves to make it consistent within each instrument)
for the sound like 00:31:084 - 00:31:774 - 00:33:843 - 00:34:187 - (snare sound) , use one note. - 00:39:446 (39446|2,39532|3) - these LN are weird, it just didn't work for me.. i would just switch 00:39:446 (39446|2) - into normal note instead.
- 00:40:337 - add one, same sound as 00:40:222 -
- 00:44:532 (44532|2) - idk what you try to layer here.. better to follow the vocal with the LN.
- 00:58:929 (58929|2) - i'm pretty sure this is a ghost note.
- 00:58:670 - http://puu.sh/pkZAH/b93eeda9e0.jpg
- 00:59:963 - 01:00:049 - 01:00:136 - 1/4 snare sound here. better add it for consistncy.
- 01:10:739 (70739|2) - move to 1, more balance
- 01:17:808 - delete one note? you only use one at 01:15:394 - , and they're the same kick sound.
- 01:20:308 - add one, same sound as 01:20:222 -
- 01:20:567 - why double? you only use single at 00:40:567 - , it's not a strong sound either.
- 01:22:980 (82980|1,83153|1,83325|1) - if you can, avoid this, it plays not well for hand.
- 01:29:791 (89791|1,89877|0,89963|1,90049|0) - one hand trill here give an uneasy feeling when i testplay it, try: http://puu.sh/pl0cy/39e7c19620.jpg
- 01:45:912 - here have an additional cymbal sound, might want to take note of that.
- 01:47:722 - this part plays a bit weird, might want to try: http://puu.sh/pl0xp/cdb3fcbd78.jpg
- 01:54:187 (114187|1,114360|1,114532|2) - Ctrl+H. because there's already 01:53:325 (113325|1,113498|1,113843|1) - , try to make it balance.
- 02:00:912 - you forgot to add note for cymbal
- 02:05:567 - so, in this part, i think you better focus on the 1/4 sound and scrap the ln at 02:05:567 (125567|3) - here's what i mean: http://puu.sh/pl0UA/040bd310ec.jpg
- 02:13:067 - hmm, try to compare this part with 00:58:584 - , you see, they're quite different in note amount despite being exact same instrument enrolled here.
- 02:14:705 - add for cymbal, make it consistent as 01:00:222 -
- 02:17:118 - am i seeing dejavu? i mean.. 01:02:636 - ... , you can variate it..
- 02:25:739 - see, there's 1 LN and 1 note for this sound, and yet you add 2 notes at 02:29:187 - which have weaker sound..
- 02:36:429 - http://puu.sh/pl1mf/a38d4c381f.jpg , the current one makes it uncomfortable because of 02:36:429 (156429|1,156544|0,156659|1,156774|0) -
- 02:49:963 - also add for snare here.
- 02:52:894 (172894|3,172980|2) - Ctrl+G here, the shield isn't good.
- 02:56:084 - cymbal sound, better add.
- 03:00:653 - http://puu.sh/pl24k/a29b277778.png
- 03:16:601 (196601|3,196774|1) - i personally won't follow this, better focus on snare completely, this is too transparant and weird.
- 03:25:049 (205049|0,205049|3) - and 03:25:394 (205394|2,205394|1) - why 2 LN? you only follow vocal with 1 LN at 03:25:567 (205567|0) - 03:25:912 (205912|1) - , make it consistent.
- 03:45:739 (225739|3) - move to 3 to avoid 03:45:739 (225739|3,225912|3,226084|3) -
Ok, that's it , keep learning from other map
Good luck :3