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Raediaufar wrote:

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[General]
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The spread of the HP isn’t much good here. I suggest:

Easy: 7
Normal: 7
Hard: 7.5
Replica: 8

[Replica]
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This one is already good, but there are some part which I think need to be revise

00:51:946 – add more note to this. I sense the sound of synth, kick and crash here so three notes would be really fit

00:54:963 – I heard a sound here, maybe add a note?

00:58:412 – this too, add a note so the pattern is like short jumpstream between the double notes

00:58:584 - ^ so it’ll be look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4972855

01:05:739 (65739|3) – move to 1? Kinda of unexpected trill 01:05:394 (65394|3,65567|2,65739|3) - for me

01:33:153 – add more notes to it, it’s crash, kick and synth, so three notes

01:38:325 – better to add more note here. There’s a piano sound so have this note and these 01:38:153 (98153|3,98153|0,98498|0,98498|3,98670|2,98670|0,98670|3) – is good to represent that there’s piano sound in it

01:40:739 (100739|2,101084|2) - ^

Well I think if you are going to map that piano then you can look again for this part (and parts similar to this) and map the piano sound too coz something like in here 01:44:705 - to 01:45:567 - you’re ignoring the piano so yeah I think you are not going to map it as well. But if you applied that piano mod I said above you can apply what I said here as well

02:36:314 (156314|2,156429|1,156544|0,156659|1) – I’m looking for straight 4321 stair since 1/3 is a bit tricky you know. So if you applied change this 02:36:774 (156774|0,156774|2) – to 23

03:21:256 – on this part, I think it’s good to make the pattern more straight for the sake of readability since it’s a long streamy part. Especially this part 03:22:032 (202032|2,202118|0,202205|3,202291|1,202291|0,202377|3,202463|2,202463|1,202549|3) – it feels so jumpy. This 03:21:946 (201946|0,201946|1,201946|3,202032|2,202118|0,202205|3,202291|1,202291|0) - is ok imo but the next is not. So from what I think this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4973078 can be a good pattern. Not just for the readability but also comfortable to hand

03:42:980 (222980|2) – move to 2, for better hand balance

03:53:325 (233325|3) – why changing LN? I think the sound is still same

04:18:756 (258756|2,258843|3) – I feel that the sound you map from these LN is end here 04:22:291 -

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These are hitsound problems. It’s only one same hitsound needed on the exact time point. Adding two same hitsound on two or more notes for example is just really unnecessary. And also same with adding two or more different hitsound to one note. So what you must do with these are remove the unnecessary hitsound and just leave one hitsound on one note only.

These are which I found on your map but please check again if I missed something.

00:07:636 (7636|1,7636|2,7636|3) –
00:10:394 (10394|3,10394|2,10394|0) –
00:13:153 (13153|1,13153|0,13153|3) –
00:18:670 (18670|2,18670|3,18670|0) –
00:21:429 (21429|3,21429|1) –
00:24:187 (24187|0,24187|2) –
00:26:946 (26946|1,26946|0,26946|3) –
00:29:705 (29705|2,29705|3) –
00:32:463 (32463|1,32463|2) –
00:35:222 (35222|1,35222|2) –
00:37:980 (37980|0,37980|1) –
00:40:912 (40912|0,40912|2) –
00:46:429 (46429|0,46429|1) –
00:54:705 (54705|0,54705|2) –
01:00:222 (60222|3,60222|1) –
01:11:256 (71256|2,71256|0) –
01:22:291 (82291|1,82291|3) –
01:24:877 (84877|1,84877|0,84877|3) –
01:27:636 (87636|2,87636|0,87636|3) –
01:30:394 (90394|1,90394|3) –
01:44:187 (104187|2,104187|3) –
01:55:394 (115394|0,115394|2) -
02:06:429 (126429|3,126429|1) –
02:09:187 (129187|3,129187|1) -
02:13:153 (133153|2,133153|3) –
02:21:429 (141429|3,141429|0) –
02:36:774 (156774|2,156774|0) –
02:52:980 (172980|0,172980|1,172980|2) –
03:01:601 (181601|3,181601|0) –
03:02:291 (182291|3,182291|2) –
03:02:808 (182808|2,182808|3) –
03:15:739 (195739|3,195739|1) –
03:16:429 (196429|0,196429|2) –
03:19:187 (199187|2,199187|0) –
03:20:222 (200222|3,200222|1) –
03:20:567 (200567|3,200567|0) –
03:20:912 (200912|2,200912|0,200912|3) –
03:24:877 (204877|2,204877|1,204877|0) –
03:26:084 (206084|2) – (pick what you want here, crash or clap?)
03:36:601 (216601|0,216601|2) –
03:46:946 (226946|2,226946|0,226946|3) –
03:48:498 (228498|2,228498|1) –
03:52:463 (232463|1,232463|2) –
04:06:256 (246256|3,246256|1) –
04:07:808 (247808|3,247808|1) –

and yeah, please check on other diffs too regarding to these hitsound problems

[Hard]
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00:18:670 (18670|3) – I think this LN is until here 00:19:015 –

00:57:980 (57980|3) – this LN ends here 00:58:153 – and add a note here 00:58:153 – and 00:58:239 – to represent the drum sound

01:24:877 – add a note because of crash here

01:27:636 – same as above

01:34:446 (94446|1) – move to 1, you can see note on column 1 is really empty here

01:55:308 (115308|2,115394|1) – better to make it straight 23, because it’s pretty confusing around here.

02:12:463 (132463|3) – this LN ends here 02:12:636 –

02:33:153 – better to add note here, there’s a sound (synth) and better to not ignore it

02:35:222 (155222|0) – I can’t listen clearly but what sound that this LN follow? You’re ignore the synth part after this 02:34:360 – and there must be two LNs instead of one in here 02:34:015 (154015|2) – if you follow the synth

02:42:118 (162118|3,162291|1) – ctrl + J this. It’s a better pattern. Personally don’t like to hold LN and jacking with one hand and left another hand not tapping anything

02:51:946 – this stair umm.. this is only personal thought yea but 1324 is more fun and suitable for this drum section rather than a straight stair pattern. It will be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4976836 try to testplay that, ok

02:53:153 – add LN note for guitar sound

03:18:153 (198153|0) – does this should be two notes? Like what you do before and afterwards

03:25:567 (205567|2) –extend the LN until 03:25:912 – the vocal is until there as well

03:42:291 – this is the better one imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4976856

03:47:291 – same thought as the 1324 stair, if you like that than apply to this as well since it’s similar
03:58:498 (238498|0) – the LN must be until here 03:59:187 – because the synth is until there

04:00:739 (240739|1) – this LN is until 04:01:084 –

04:18:843 (258843|2) – this until 04:22:291 – since the wind sound is ends there

[Normal]
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00:10:049 – add note for kick

00:12:808 – add note for snare

00:17:980 – add note of 4 here because there’s a sound and btw it’s still normal diffs so it’s ok

00:40:222 (40222|3,40337|2,40452|1,40567|0,40682|2,40797|1,40912|0) – are you sure to put 1/3 here? I found it will be hard for targeted players to play that and I suggest to follow the guitar here. Just add LN from here 00:40:222 – to 00:40:567 – and add a note as well here 00:40:567 –

00:54:705 (54705|0) – you can add note for the snare sound alongside this LN section

01:24:877 – add a note on 2 to represent the crash sound

01:27:636 – add note on 1, similar reason as above

01:30:394 – add a note on 3. You know, what I feel from this is that part is has the impact, so it’s really good to add another note there.

01:43:843 (103843|2) – move to 2, I don’t feel a bit trill is necessary here and also column 2 is pretty empty here

01:54:705 – you know that this stream pattern is a bit tricy, I suggest to make a straight 1234 1234 stair rather than this

02:05:222 (125222|2,125394|3) – ctrl + G

02:09:187 (129187|1) – you can add note to represent snare sound in this LN section

02:15:739 (135739|3) – move to 2

02:16:429 (136429|1) – move to 4, it’s pretty much better

02:28:843 (148843|0) – move to 4

02:36:084 – make a more readable pattern for targeted players. Mine is like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4976940

02:56:256 (176256|1,176343|0) – snap this to 1/3 as in other diffs

03:26:084 (206084|3) – double note on here

03:26:429 – add another note beside the LN

03:57:291 (237291|0) – move to 4

03:57:636 (237636|3) – move to 2

04:07:291 – if you follow the synth then it should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4976959

04:07:808 – from what I see here and afterwards. You map like kinda uhh not consistent. If you decided to follow the synth. The follow the synth fully. You map the synth here is really parted. Except here 04:14:532 (254532|2,254618|1) – the synth is 1/2 or 1 beat length of LN I decided to remap this part.

[Easy]
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00:29:015 (29015|2) – move to 2 or 1 for better hand balance. Coz you jacking after this note

00:29:015 (29015|0,40222|3,40567|1) – change this note to LN to represent drum? Nope

01:17:463 (77463|2) – move to 2, column 2 is pretty empty there

01:54:705 (114705|0,115049|1) – change to LN?

02:00:222 (120222|2) - ^

02:20:912 (140912|2) – move to 2

02:26:084 (146084|3,146429|2) – make it 23, for a bit variety

02:36:084 (156084|1,156429|2) – change to LN for drum?

02:55:049 (175049|2) – move to 1 for balance

03:52:463 (232463|0) – better to double notes here

04:06:774 – add note on 3 here
Almost appiled! Thanks for modding! Very Helpful
Dellvangel
Hi, from my queue.

1|2|3|4
[Replica]
00:18:670 (18670|3) - change to LN? like you did at 00:21:429 (21429|0) - , 00:24:187 (24187|3) - etc.
00:40:337 (40337|1,40452|2,40567|3,40682|2,40797|1) - how about to change all that notes to double? since the sound is pretty loud and this is the hardest diff.
00:57:980 (57980|1,57980|3) - why double? the double should be at 00:58:153 - .
01:35:049 - add note? same sound with 01:34:532 - .
01:35:739 (95739|3,95739|1) - not loud enough for double, the double should be at 01:35:567 - to make it consistent with 01:35:394 (95394|3,95394|0) - .
01:40:912 (100912|3,100912|0,101084|2,101256|1,101256|3) - ^same problem.
01:41:429 (101429|1) - move to 3, different pitch with 01:41:256 (101256|3,101256|1) - and for note variation.
01:43:670 (103670|0,103670|3) - delete one, i think this part should be same with 01:42:291 (102291|2,102463|2) - .
... etc, please check the consistency, from 01:33:670 - to 01:54:705 - , sometimes you use 2 notes for kick sound, for example 01:51:946 (111946|0,111946|3) - , but sometimes you only use 1 note, like 01:42:291 (102291|2,102463|2) - .
02:00:337 (120337|2,120452|1,120682|1) - 2 notes seems better, loud sound, may be try to change it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031215 .
02:06:170 - and 02:06:343 - i can hear a sound, i think make 1/4 stream from 02:05:998 - to 02:06:429 - is better.
02:36:314 (156314|3,156429|2,156544|1,156659|0) - double notes is better .
02:56:371 - i can hear guitar sound here (1/6 snap) but its up to you want to add note or not.
03:16:429 (196429|2,196429|0) - double? i think this should be same with 03:15:049 (195049|2) - , 03:17:118 (197118|2) - , etc.
03:17:808 (197808|2,197808|0) - ^ , or may be change all of them (ex: 03:17:118 (197118|2) - ) to double if you really want to keep it as double.
03:35:394 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031294 seems better since the LN (violin sound) at 03:35:739 - not as loud as 03:36:256 (216256|1) - , you can make it different col each other.
03:47:722 (227722|1,227722|0) - one note is enough imo.
03:55:394 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031327 because actually 03:55:653 - not that loud.

Sorry for only mod 1 diff. good luck!
Topic Starter
pnx

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

1|2|3|4
[Replica]
00:18:670 (18670|3) - change to LN? like you did at 00:21:429 (21429|0) - , 00:24:187 (24187|3) - etc.
00:40:337 (40337|1,40452|2,40567|3,40682|2,40797|1) - how about to change all that notes to double? since the sound is pretty loud and this is the hardest diff. Umm, I thinks single is okay.
00:57:980 (57980|1,57980|3) - why double? the double should be at 00:58:153 - .
01:35:049 - add note? same sound with 01:34:532 - .
01:35:739 (95739|3,95739|1) - not loud enough for double, the double should be at 01:35:567 - to make it consistent with 01:35:394 (95394|3,95394|0) - .
01:40:912 (100912|3,100912|0,101084|2,101256|1,101256|3) - ^same problem.
01:41:429 (101429|1) - move to 3, different pitch with 01:41:256 (101256|3,101256|1) - and for note variation.
01:43:670 (103670|0,103670|3) - delete one, i think this part should be same with 01:42:291 (102291|2,102463|2) - .
... etc, please check the consistency, from 01:33:670 - to 01:54:705 - , sometimes you use 2 notes for kick sound, for example 01:51:946 (111946|0,111946|3) - , but sometimes you only use 1 note, like 01:42:291 (102291|2,102463|2) - .
02:00:337 (120337|2,120452|1,120682|1) - 2 notes seems better, loud sound, may be try to change it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031215 .
02:06:170 - and 02:06:343 - i can here a sound, i think make 1/4 stream from 02:05:998 - to 02:06:429 - is better. Nope
02:36:314 (156314|3,156429|2,156544|1,156659|0) - double notes is better . Nope
02:56:371 - i can hear guitar sound here (1/6 snap) but its up to you want to add note or not.
03:16:429 (196429|2,196429|0) - double? i think this should be same with 03:15:049 (195049|2) - , 03:17:118 (197118|2) - , etc.
03:17:808 (197808|2,197808|0) - ^ , or may be change all of them (ex: 03:17:118 (197118|2) - ) to double if you really want to keep it as double.
03:35:394 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031294 seems better since the LN (violin sound) at 03:35:739 - not as loud as 03:36:256 (216256|1) - , you can make it different col each other.
03:47:722 (227722|1,227722|0) - one note is enough imo.
03:55:394 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5031327 because actually 03:55:653 - not that loud. Nope

Sorry for only mod 1 diff. good luck!
Thanks in advance
Reba


Hello there, I came to do a NM due to your request.

[General]
BG: 1366 x 768 Ok
AI mod: Ok
Audio: 190 kbps Ok
Offset check: Ok
Etc: .

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Replica]
01:09:705 (69705|3,70394|1) - I think the cymbal sound in these timings should have more than 2 notes in my opinion, i recommend to add a note in coulmn 1 for this timing -> 01:09:705, and move this 01:10:394 (70394|1) - to column 3 and add a note in column 1. I know that in other parts you've used 2 notes to represent similar sounds, but since this part is kind of a finishing part, i want to tell that 3 notes here wouldn't be bad.
01:33:670 ~ 01:54:705 - just a personal opinion here, i feel like if you used kick sounds as 2 notes in hard difficulty and changed that into 3 notes in replica difficulty, i think that converting the bass sounds into two notes could be good too giving a bit more of a gap between the two difficulties. (01:34:015 (94015|1,94187|1) - places like here)
01:34:791 (94791|2) - I think there can be a note here
01:35:308 (95308|2) - this part has the same sound as 01:35:049 (95049|0) . Adding a note in col 2 wouldn't bother the play
01:43:843 (103843|2) - this timing has a bass sound, which has the same soundrate as 01:43:670 - i recommend to add a note in col 2 in 01:43:843 . Move this 01:44:015 (104015|1) - to col 1 and 01:44:187 (104187|0) - this to col 2. If you applied this do the same with other timings that have the same issue
01:46:601 (106601|2) - add a note in col 1
01:50:222 (110222|2) - u've used 3 notes in other parts that have a kick sound, i think you should add a note in col 1
02:00:049 ~ 02:00:222 - these are 1/6 snaps, as it is the hardest difficulty i feel like u could use them. Moreover, 02:00:567 - this part is a definitely a finish sound so representing it with 3 notes wouldn't be bad either, just like here 02:14:360 . Example: http://puu.sh/oCZj9/1b3f16aa30.jpg
02:47:118 - How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/oCZx6/c1e5409f75.jpg
02:51:946 - How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/oCZCe/cc1999cb8a.jpg
02:56:199 (176199|3) - shouldn't this be here? 02:56:256
02:56:314 (176314|0) - i feel like there is too much pressure in left hand, move to column 3
03:00:653 (180653|1) - ghost note, i recommend you to delete it
03:01:429 (181429|2) - i dont feel the necesity of the LN here, delete it and i think this pattern works out better in that part to show off the drums clearly. http://puu.sh/oCZQm/6edeb70315.jpg
03:16:084 ~ 03:16:429 - it is a bit uncomfortable to play in this part, i recommend using similar patterns as 03:14:705 , 03:16:256 (196256|3) - move this to col 3 , 03:16:343 (196343|1) - this to col 4 and 03:16:429 (196429|2) - to col 2.
03:55:480 (235480|1,235567|3) - it has the same amount of sound with 03:55:394 (235394|3,235653|0) - just add notes in col 1 and 3
04:17:032 (257032|1,257205|3) - i feel like these notes are ghost sounds, delete these and add a note in col 2 for 04:17:118 (257118|2). and add a note in
col 4 for 04:17:291 to give more impact as it is the finishing time.

I guess my mod's done here, good luck on getting it ranked :)
Topic Starter
pnx

- R e b a - wrote:



Hello there, I came to do a NM due to your request.

[General]
BG: 1366 x 768 Ok
AI mod: Ok
Audio: 190 kbps Ok
Offset check: Ok
Etc: .

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Replica]
01:09:705 (69705|3,70394|1) - I think the cymbal sound in these timings should have more than 2 notes in my opinion, i recommend to add a note in coulmn 1 for this timing -> 01:09:705, and move this 01:10:394 (70394|1) - to column 3 and add a note in column 1. I know that in other parts you've used 2 notes to represent similar sounds, but since this part is kind of a finishing part, i want to tell that 3 notes here wouldn't be bad.
01:33:670 ~ 01:54:705 - just a personal opinion here, i feel like if you used kick sounds as 2 notes in hard difficulty and changed that into 3 notes in replica difficulty, i think that converting the bass sounds into two notes could be good too giving a bit more of a gap between the two difficulties. (01:34:015 (94015|1,94187|1) - places like here) I don't sure what do u mean here?
01:34:791 (94791|2) - I think there can be a note here
01:35:308 (95308|2) - this part has the same sound as 01:35:049 (95049|0) . Adding a note in col 2 wouldn't bother the play
01:43:843 (103843|2) - this timing has a bass sound, which has the same soundrate as 01:43:670 - i recommend to add a note in col 2 in 01:43:843 . Move this 01:44:015 (104015|1) - to col 1 and 01:44:187 (104187|0) - this to col 2. If you applied this do the same with other timings that have the same issue
01:46:601 (106601|2) - add a note in col 1
01:50:222 (110222|2) - u've used 3 notes in other parts that have a kick sound, i think you should add a note in col 1
02:00:049 ~ 02:00:222 - these are 1/6 snaps, as it is the hardest difficulty i feel like u could use them. Moreover, 02:00:567 - this part is a definitely a finish sound so representing it with 3 notes wouldn't be bad either, just like here 02:14:360 . Example: http://puu.sh/oCZj9/1b3f16aa30.jpg I change it a bit.
02:47:118 - How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/oCZx6/c1e5409f75.jpg OMG! This is nice pattern. Appiled!
02:51:946 - How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/oCZCe/cc1999cb8a.jpg
02:56:199 (176199|3) - shouldn't this be here? 02:56:256
02:56:314 (176314|0) - i feel like there is too much pressure in left hand, move to column 3
03:00:653 (180653|1) - ghost note, i recommend you to delete it
03:01:429 (181429|2) - i dont feel the necesity of the LN here, delete it and i think this pattern works out better in that part to show off the drums clearly. http://puu.sh/oCZQm/6edeb70315.jpg I want some bass there, cuz it is drum and bass solo verse.
03:16:084 ~ 03:16:429 - it is a bit uncomfortable to play in this part, i recommend using similar patterns as 03:14:705 , 03:16:256 (196256|3) - move this to col 3 , 03:16:343 (196343|1) - this to col 4 and 03:16:429 (196429|2) - to col 2.
03:55:480 (235480|1,235567|3) - it has the same amount of sound with 03:55:394 (235394|3,235653|0) - just add notes in col 1 and 3
04:17:032 (257032|1,257205|3) - i feel like these notes are ghost sounds, delete these and add a note in col 2 for 04:17:118 (257118|2). and add a note in
col 4 for 04:17:291 to give more impact as it is the finishing time. Appiled

I guess my mod's done here, good luck on getting it ranked :)
Thanks! >,< (Some wasn't appiled)
Amethyst507
Note that these mods are for REplica diff, you can apply these mods on the other diffs of your decision

These are the mod i gave you via Message


Time:
00:26:946 - slows down, normal speed at 00:29:187 -
Slow down 03:04:705 - , normal speed at 03:15:394 -

Notes:
column 1|2|3|4

01:43:843 (103843|1,104015|2) - switch to 01:43:843 (103843|2,104015|1) -
01:44:187 (104187|1) - move to column 3 and remove thenote at column 1

These are the mods I recently made

Time:
Same here 01:30:739 - , slow down and normal speed at 01:32:463 - or 01:32:636 -

Note:
00:29:015 (29015|0) - move to column 2 (same pitch)
Add note 01:22:808 - ? (sounds here)

Well once again... kinda lazy , sry for that... that's all the mod I can give for the moment, PM me if you want more, I will find the time to help out
REUSE-ABLE
|1|2|3|4|
Red: Important Must Change
Blue: Can be change or you can reject it

I only mod Replica because im to tired for the other diff but i PROMISE ( I don't know :3 ) i will mod the other diff
because im busy with my home work :3 Sorry ok?
Replica
01:06:084 (66084|3,66084|0,66429|3,66429|0,66774|3,66774|0) - make random pattern
02:00:912 (120912|0,120912|2) - add 1 note instead
02:02:980 (122980|3) - remove it please
02:33:325 (153325|0,153670|0,154015|0) - Just remind you, i think there is no jack sound :3
03:01:946 (181946|2,181946|0,181946|3,182118|2,182118|0) - i think its suppose to be switch that and at the 3 note add 1 Cymbal sound
03:05:739 (185739|0,185739|3,187118|1,187118|2,187808|3,187808|1,188498|0,188498|2,188843|1,189187|2,189532|3,189877|3,189877|1,190222|2,190394|1,190912|1,191256|2,191256|0,191429|1,191946|1,191946|3,192291|2,192636|0,192636|1,192980|3,193153|2,193670|1,194015|0,194015|3,194187|1) - Use Soft Hitsound
THANK YOU~ :) :) :)
Topic Starter
pnx

Gabriel_Batara wrote:

|1|2|3|4|
Red: Important Must Change
Blue: Can be change or you can reject it

I only mod Replica because im to tired for the other diff but i PROMISE ( I don't know :3 ) i will mod the other diff
because im busy with my home work :3 Sorry ok? Why not! Thanks.
Replica
01:06:084 (66084|3,66084|0,66429|3,66429|0,66774|3,66774|0) - make random patternokay
02:00:912 (120912|0,120912|2) - add 1 note insteadI use it on 01:55:394 too.
02:02:980 (122980|3) - remove it please I use 2 note to
02:33:325 (153325|0,153670|0,154015|0) - Just remind you, i think there is no jack sound :3 If I change its position I think it's quite not good enough. But, nice suggestion! Thanks
03:01:946 (181946|2,181946|0,181946|3,182118|2,182118|0) - i think its suppose to be switch that and at the 3 note add 1 Cymbal soundNice Catch!
03:05:739 (185739|0,185739|3,187118|1,187118|2,187808|3,187808|1,188498|0,188498|2,188843|1,189187|2,189532|3,189877|3,189877|1,190222|2,190394|1,190912|1,191256|2,191256|0,191429|1,191946|1,191946|3,192291|2,192636|0,192636|1,192980|3,193153|2,193670|1,194015|0,194015|3,194187|1) - Use Soft Hitsound I used Whistle as soft sound.
THANK YOU~ :) :) :)
Topic Starter
pnx

Amethyst507 wrote:

Note that these mods are for REplica diff, you can apply these mods on the other diffs of your decision

These are the mod i gave you via Message Oh! I forgot to check that message.


Time:
00:26:946 - slows down, normal speed at 00:29:187 -
Slow down 03:04:705 - , normal speed at 03:15:394 -

Notes:
column 1|2|3|4

01:43:843 (103843|1,104015|2) - switch to 01:43:843 (103843|2,104015|1) -
01:44:187 (104187|1) - move to column 3 and remove thenote at column 1

These are the mods I recently made

Time:
Same here 01:30:739 - , slow down and normal speed at 01:32:463 - or 01:32:636 -

Note:
00:29:015 (29015|0) - move to column 2 (same pitch)
Add note 01:22:808 - ? (sounds here)

Well once again... kinda lazy , sry for that... that's all the mod I can give for the moment, PM me if you want more, I will find the time to help out
It's okay!
Amids
Go Go Ranked >< Syutooooooo~
Topic Starter
pnx

Hamids- wrote:

Go Go Ranked >< Syutooooooo~
Thanks! I will do my best on ranking it!
Wonki
M4M request :D
0 1 2 3
Normal
00:39:877 (39877|0) - different sound 00:39:705 (39705|0) - move 2
00:58:670 (58670|2) - it's finish part, it should be better not to stick notes for more playable feeling like this
01:30:739 (90739|2,90912|1,91256|3,91601|0,91946|2,92291|0) - change normal note i dont feel that long note
01:35:308 - shoulde be note here impact!
01:47:291 (107291|3,107722|2) - ctrl j is right to player
03:04:360 - should be note here finish sound
04:18:929 - ,04:19:446 - ,04:19:877 - how about add note ? piano sound
Hard
00:59:705 (59705|1,59705|3,59791|2) - hard to play 00:59:705 (59705|1,59791|2) - ctrl j this
01:30:739 (90739|2,90912|1,91256|3,91601|0,91946|2,92291|0) - change normal note i dont feel that long note
01:58:843 (118843|3,119015|3) - this jack not match should be changed. recommend
03:04:360 - how about add note 0?
04:06:084 (246084|0,246256|1) - should ctrl j 04:06:256 - here is more impactful
nice map XD
Topic Starter
pnx

Wonki wrote:

M4M request :D
0 1 2 3
Normal
00:39:877 (39877|0) - different sound 00:39:705 (39705|0) - move 2 ok
00:58:670 (58670|2) - it's finish part, it should be better not to stick notes for more playable feeling like this ok
01:30:739 (90739|2,90912|1,91256|3,91601|0,91946|2,92291|0) - change normal note i dont feel that long note I actually forgot it, thanks.
01:35:308 - shoulde be note here impact! Nice suggestion, but I like this one more.
01:47:291 (107291|3,107722|2) - ctrl j is right to player ok
03:04:360 - should be note here finish sound I will change LN sound instead.
04:18:929 - ,04:19:446 - ,04:19:877 - how about add note ? piano sound It's very low sound, Imo It quite not fit in Normal.

Hard
00:59:705 (59705|1,59705|3,59791|2) - hard to play 00:59:705 (59705|1,59791|2) - ctrl j this
01:30:739 (90739|2,90912|1,91256|3,91601|0,91946|2,92291|0) - change normal note i dont feel that long note Imo, long note will represent soft sound than normal note, so that why I use LN in this case.
01:58:843 (118843|3,119015|3) - this jack not match should be changed. recommend I want the stair represent the pitch of the piano. But If the jack doesn't fit, I will change some pattern.
03:04:360 - how about add note 0? Nope
04:06:084 (246084|0,246256|1) - should ctrl j 04:06:256 - here is more impactful Wow, nice suggestion
nice map XD Thanks >_<
Critical_Star
Hi PnX mod request via forum pm
and we agreed to m4m too!
column 1 2 3 4

Easy
00:07:980 - actually there is a drum sound here, u probarly shoudn't miss it
00:10:739 - here too ^ i think is fine add it and it won't make hard for easy diff
00:13:670 (13670|3,14360|3,15049|3,15739|3) - move to 3rd column? just to avoid the same pattern used at 00:08:153 (8153|3,8498|1,8843|3,9187|1,9532|3,9877|1,10222|3) -
00:18:153 - 00:18:325 - the bass sound are pretty obvious here, i think is good to add here.
00:19:532 (19532|3,19705|3) - just thought it would be better to differentiate the kick and bass sound at 00:20:912 (20912|3,21084|3) - so 00:19:532 (19532|3,19705|3,20049|0) - CTRL+H to make them different
00:26:084 (26084|1,26429|2,26601|2) - CTRL+H? like before the reason to make different from 00:25:049 (25049|2,25222|2) -
00:40:912 (40912|2) - this LN should end at 00:41:946 - u may refer to normal diff
01:06:084 (66084|2) - move to col 1 could be more balance
01:11:946 (71946|2) - move to col 1? u can make both hand to play the kick pattern
02:09:187 - i think is fine to have a note for crash here
03:08:843 (188843|1,189187|2,189532|3) - move to the left by 1 and 03:09:877 (189877|1) - move to 4 for piano pitch
03:32:291 (212291|1) - move to 3 for balance
03:51:946 (231946|2) - u can make into a LN end 03:52:463 - to emphysize the drum roll here
04:08:153 (248153|2,248498|2,248843|2) - move to col4 or other col u like, these sound are actually different from 04:07:808 (247808|2) -
04:09:532 (249532|0,249877|0,250222|0) - this too, maybe u can move to col2
04:10:912 (250912|3,251256|3,251601|3) - and to col 3 ^
04:12:291 (252291|1,252636|1,252980|1) - maybe col 1 and so on yea, i think u got it xd

Normal
00:40:222 (40222|0) - is this is for the 1/6 drum roll? i think is better to end at 00:40:912 -
01:44:187 - double note for crash?
02:05:998 (125998|2) - this sound are not really audible, i will suggest to remove it
02:47:118 (167118|0,167205|1,167291|2,167377|1,167463|0,167549|3,167636|2,167722|1,167808|3) - this might be a little hard for normal diff, would suggest http://puu.sh/pk5v3/e745fa2b9a.jpg , use LN to cover the drum roll
02:56:429 (176429|2,176601|3,176687|2,176774|1,176946|0,177032|3,177118|2,177291|0,177377|1,177463|2,177636|3,177722|0,177808|1,177980|3,178067|2,178153|1,178325|2,178412|3,178498|0) - i just got confused this part, i know u want to follow the electic guitar sound and kick sound but u missed some of them, i suggest for to follow only kick sound here to make it simple
03:21:429 - 03:22:463 - missing kick note? i think is good to add them here
03:25:998 - add for kick note since u already mapped kick at 03:25:912 (205912|0) -
03:39:705 (219705|2) - move to 2 for balance, i can see u spreading the kick pattern like 03:38:153 (218153|0,218325|1,218498|0,218670|3) -
04:00:222 (240222|2) - move to 2 and 04:00:394 (240394|0) - to 3 . make a stair here could be nice
04:01:774 (241774|2) - move to 4, the sound is different from 04:01:429 (241429|2) -
04:06:946 - i think the sound should be http://puu.sh/pk8dn/99b44934f3.jpg
04:09:705 - there is a main chord sound here, add?
04:17:291 - u can add a note for crash here

Hard
00:00:912 - till 00:06:429 - would prefer to use LN pattern like u do in normal diff, it fit the sound better here
00:06:946 - u missed the sound here, refer to normal diff
00:10:567 - 00:13:325 - i recommend to add a note for kick here since this is hard diff. i think is fine.
00:13:670 (13670|3,13670|2,14015|0,14015|1,14360|3,14360|2,14705|1,14705|0,15049|2,15049|3,15394|0,15394|1) - would prefer to rearrange them into different column to make something different from 00:08:153 (8153|2,8153|3,8498|1,8498|0,8843|2,8843|3,9187|1,9187|0,9532|2,9532|3,9877|0,9877|1) -
00:30:567 (30567|0) - make double here like 00:33:325 (33325|0,33325|3) -
00:33:325 (33325|3,33325|0,33498|2,33670|0,33670|3,33843|1,34015|0,34015|3,34187|0,34360|3,34360|1,34532|2) - http://puu.sh/pk913/5f70e69ef7.jpg ?
01:06:429 (66429|3) - move to 1 for balance
02:00:049 (120049|3,120136|2) - this snap are different from your Replica diff, should check this again
02:00:567 - u can have double here for louder kick
02:18:153 (138153|0,138325|1) - mnove to the right by 1 and 02:18:498 (138498|2) - to 2 for balance
02:40:049 (160049|1,160222|0,160394|1,160567|0,160739|0,160912|1,161084|0,161256|1) - look inbalance for left hand, try rearrange them?
02:45:394 - add for snare? i see u map this sound too at this part
02:51:946 (171946|0,172032|2,172118|1,172205|3,172291|0,172377|2,172463|1,172549|3,172636|0,172722|2,172808|1,172894|3) - hmm how about http://puu.sh/pk9QH/680cf53777.jpg? pretty much more pattern variation
02:57:549 (177549|2,177636|1,177722|0,177808|3,177808|1,177894|2,177980|1,178067|0,178153|1,178153|2,178239|3,178325|2,178412|1,178498|2,178498|0) - CTRL+H it could be better, these stream are just repeating from right to left, cx

good luck! :D
Topic Starter
pnx

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi PnX mod request via forum pm
and we agreed to m4m too!
column 1 2 3 4

Easy
00:07:980 - actually there is a drum sound here, u probarly shoudn't miss it
00:10:739 - here too ^ i think is fine add it and it won't make hard for easy diff
00:13:670 (13670|3,14360|3,15049|3,15739|3) - move to 3rd column? just to avoid the same pattern used at 00:08:153 (8153|3,8498|1,8843|3,9187|1,9532|3,9877|1,10222|3) -
00:18:153 - 00:18:325 - the bass sound are pretty obvious here, i think is good to add here. I thinks I doesn't essential to add note there, I want newbie player to focus on only one note.
00:19:532 (19532|3,19705|3) - just thought it would be better to differentiate the kick and bass sound at 00:20:912 (20912|3,21084|3) - so 00:19:532 (19532|3,19705|3,20049|0) - CTRL+H to make them different
00:26:084 (26084|1,26429|2,26601|2) - CTRL+H? like before the reason to make different from 00:25:049 (25049|2,25222|2) -
00:40:912 (40912|2) - this LN should end at 00:41:946 - u may refer to normal diff
01:06:084 (66084|2) - move to col 1 could be more balance
01:11:946 (71946|2) - move to col 1? u can make both hand to play the kick pattern
02:09:187 - i think is fine to have a note for crash here Umm... I have it already, haven't I?
03:08:843 (188843|1,189187|2,189532|3) - move to the left by 1 and 03:09:877 (189877|1) - move to 4 for piano pitch
03:32:291 (212291|1) - move to 3 for balance
03:51:946 (231946|2) - u can make into a LN end 03:52:463 - to emphysize the drum roll here
04:08:153 (248153|2,248498|2,248843|2) - move to col4 or other col u like, these sound are actually different from 04:07:808 (247808|2) -
04:09:532 (249532|0,249877|0,250222|0) - this too, maybe u can move to col2
04:10:912 (250912|3,251256|3,251601|3) - and to col 3 ^
04:12:291 (252291|1,252636|1,252980|1) - maybe col 1 and so on yea, i think u got it xd

Normal
00:40:222 (40222|0) - is this is for the 1/6 drum roll? i think is better to end at 00:40:912 -
01:44:187 - double note for crash?
02:05:998 (125998|2) - this sound are not really audible, i will suggest to remove it
02:47:118 (167118|0,167205|1,167291|2,167377|1,167463|0,167549|3,167636|2,167722|1,167808|3) - this might be a little hard for normal diff, would suggest http://puu.sh/pk5v3/e745fa2b9a.jpg , use LN to cover the drum roll I gonna use LN as you suggest, but change a little of pattern.
02:56:429 (176429|2,176601|3,176687|2,176774|1,176946|0,177032|3,177118|2,177291|0,177377|1,177463|2,177636|3,177722|0,177808|1,177980|3,178067|2,178153|1,178325|2,178412|3,178498|0) - i just got confused this part, i know u want to follow the electic guitar sound and kick sound but u missed some of them, i suggest for to follow only kick sound here to make it simple
03:21:429 - 03:22:463 - missing kick note? i think is good to add them here
03:25:998 - add for kick note since u already mapped kick at 03:25:912 (205912|0) -
03:39:705 (219705|2) - move to 2 for balance, i can see u spreading the kick pattern like 03:38:153 (218153|0,218325|1,218498|0,218670|3) -
04:00:222 (240222|2) - move to 2 and 04:00:394 (240394|0) - to 3 . make a stair here could be nice
04:01:774 (241774|2) - move to 4, the sound is different from 04:01:429 (241429|2) -
04:06:946 - i think the sound should be http://puu.sh/pk8dn/99b44934f3.jpg
04:09:705 - there is a main chord sound here, add? I cannot hear any chord there, maybe it too low to put a note in.
04:17:291 - u can add a note for crash here

Hard
00:00:912 - till 00:06:429 - would prefer to use LN pattern like u do in normal diff, it fit the sound better here I want to create a different from other difficulty. So, I gonna use only double note at now.
00:06:946 - u missed the sound here, refer to normal diff
00:10:567 - 00:13:325 - i recommend to add a note for kick here since this is hard diff. i think is fine. For me, It would be fine but I thinks only those sound can be fine here.
00:13:670 (13670|3,13670|2,14015|0,14015|1,14360|3,14360|2,14705|1,14705|0,15049|2,15049|3,15394|0,15394|1) - would prefer to rearrange them into different column to make something different from 00:08:153 OK!(8153|2,8153|3,8498|1,8498|0,8843|2,8843|3,9187|1,9187|0,9532|2,9532|3,9877|0,9877|1) -
00:30:567 (30567|0) - make double here like 00:33:325 (33325|0,33325|3) -
00:33:325 (33325|3,33325|0,33498|2,33670|0,33670|3,33843|1,34015|0,34015|3,34187|0,34360|3,34360|1,34532|2) - http://puu.sh/pk913/5f70e69ef7.jpg ?
01:06:429 (66429|3) - move to 1 for balance
02:00:049 (120049|3,120136|2) - this snap are different from your Replica diff, should check this again
02:00:567 - u can have double here for louder kick I gonna put It in Replica
02:18:153 (138153|0,138325|1) - mnove to the right by 1 and 02:18:498 (138498|2) - to 2 for balance
02:40:049 (160049|1,160222|0,160394|1,160567|0,160739|0,160912|1,161084|0,161256|1) - look inbalance for left hand, try rearrange them?
02:45:394 - add for snare? i see u map this sound too at this part
02:51:946 (171946|0,172032|2,172118|1,172205|3,172291|0,172377|2,172463|1,172549|3,172636|0,172722|2,172808|1,172894|3) - hmm how about http://puu.sh/pk9QH/680cf53777.jpg? pretty much more pattern variation
02:57:549 (177549|2,177636|1,177722|0,177808|3,177808|1,177894|2,177980|1,178067|0,178153|1,178153|2,178239|3,178325|2,178412|1,178498|2,178498|0) - CTRL+H it could be better, these stream are just repeating from right to left, cx

good luck! :D
Thanks for modding my map. I gonna mod your map soon >_<
Maxus
Well, hello PnX
Mod req via PM

Insane
  1. 00:06:515 - 00:06:774 - 00:06:860 - 00:06:946 - all of these has 1/4 snare sound that you follow similar like 00:07:032 (7032|0) - , check other haru modoki if you want to be sure. it's your hardest diff too, so, why not?
  2. 00:13:584 - add one, 1/4 drum sound.
  3. 00:15:480 - also add one, another heavy crash sound, you shouldn't ignore this.
  4. 00:18:038 (18038|3) - i'm sure this is 1/8, or you can ask others for confirmation too.
  5. 00:20:912 (20912|0,21084|0) - move to column 2, to make it the same column as 00:21:429 (21429|3,21429|1) - , because you did it the same at 00:18:153 (18153|2,18153|0,18325|0,18325|2,18670|2,18670|0) - ,00:23:670 (23670|0,23670|2,23843|0,23843|2,24187|0,24187|2) - ,etc. make it consistent.
  6. 00:25:222 - 00:25:394 - 00:25:567 - 00:26:084 - 00:26:256 - You didn't use short LN for piano, Okay. but the problem is, you did use short LN at 00:22:118 (22118|2,22463|0,22808|3) - to cover the short piano sound, this inconsistency surely will be a problem, please decide how you will layer the sound and do it consistenly.
  7. 00:26:343 - also additional 1/4 sound, i don't think this should be missed.
  8. 00:31:256 - lol i'm quite confused with this tbh , it has the same sound as 00:31:429 - (low kick) , but the differences in note amount is huge, do you see what i mean? the note amount you use ended up contradict each other, makes it confusing for consistency.
    for this part, my suggestion is : for the sound like 00:30:912 - 00:31:601 - , etc (crash sound), use triple notes (the current one you use is already correct)
    for the sound like 00:30:567 - 00:30:739 - 00:31:256 - 00:31:429 - 00:32:808 - 00:33:325 - ,etc (kick sound). use double notes (it serves to make it consistent within each instrument)
    for the sound like 00:31:084 - 00:31:774 - 00:33:843 - 00:34:187 - (snare sound) , use one note.
  9. 00:39:446 (39446|2,39532|3) - these LN are weird, it just didn't work for me.. i would just switch 00:39:446 (39446|2) - into normal note instead.
  10. 00:40:337 - add one, same sound as 00:40:222 -
  11. 00:44:532 (44532|2) - idk what you try to layer here.. better to follow the vocal with the LN.
  12. 00:58:929 (58929|2) - i'm pretty sure this is a ghost note.
  13. 00:58:670 - http://puu.sh/pkZAH/b93eeda9e0.jpg
  14. 00:59:963 - 01:00:049 - 01:00:136 - 1/4 snare sound here. better add it for consistncy.
  15. 01:10:739 (70739|2) - move to 1, more balance
  16. 01:17:808 - delete one note? you only use one at 01:15:394 - , and they're the same kick sound.
  17. 01:20:308 - add one, same sound as 01:20:222 -
  18. 01:20:567 - why double? you only use single at 00:40:567 - , it's not a strong sound either.
  19. 01:22:980 (82980|1,83153|1,83325|1) - if you can, avoid this, it plays not well for hand.
  20. 01:29:791 (89791|1,89877|0,89963|1,90049|0) - one hand trill here give an uneasy feeling when i testplay it, try: http://puu.sh/pl0cy/39e7c19620.jpg
  21. 01:45:912 - here have an additional cymbal sound, might want to take note of that.
  22. 01:47:722 - this part plays a bit weird, might want to try: http://puu.sh/pl0xp/cdb3fcbd78.jpg
  23. 01:54:187 (114187|1,114360|1,114532|2) - Ctrl+H. because there's already 01:53:325 (113325|1,113498|1,113843|1) - , try to make it balance.
  24. 02:00:912 - you forgot to add note for cymbal
  25. 02:05:567 - so, in this part, i think you better focus on the 1/4 sound and scrap the ln at 02:05:567 (125567|3) - here's what i mean: http://puu.sh/pl0UA/040bd310ec.jpg
  26. 02:13:067 - hmm, try to compare this part with 00:58:584 - , you see, they're quite different in note amount despite being exact same instrument enrolled here.
  27. 02:14:705 - add for cymbal, make it consistent as 01:00:222 -
  28. 02:17:118 - am i seeing dejavu? i mean.. 01:02:636 - ... , you can variate it..
  29. 02:25:739 - see, there's 1 LN and 1 note for this sound, and yet you add 2 notes at 02:29:187 - which have weaker sound..
  30. 02:36:429 - http://puu.sh/pl1mf/a38d4c381f.jpg , the current one makes it uncomfortable because of 02:36:429 (156429|1,156544|0,156659|1,156774|0) -
  31. 02:49:963 - also add for snare here.
  32. 02:52:894 (172894|3,172980|2) - Ctrl+G here, the shield isn't good.
  33. 02:56:084 - cymbal sound, better add.
  34. 03:00:653 - http://puu.sh/pl24k/a29b277778.png
  35. 03:16:601 (196601|3,196774|1) - i personally won't follow this, better focus on snare completely, this is too transparant and weird.
  36. 03:25:049 (205049|0,205049|3) - and 03:25:394 (205394|2,205394|1) - why 2 LN? you only follow vocal with 1 LN at 03:25:567 (205567|0) - 03:25:912 (205912|1) - , make it consistent.
  37. 03:45:739 (225739|3) - move to 3 to avoid 03:45:739 (225739|3,225912|3,226084|3) -

Ok, that's it , keep learning from other map :)
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
pnx

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Well, hello PnX
Mod req via PM

Insane
  1. 00:06:515 - 00:06:774 - 00:06:860 - 00:06:946 - all of these has 1/4 snare sound that you follow similar like 00:07:032 (7032|0) - , check other haru modoki if you want to be sure. it's your hardest diff too, so, why not?
  2. 00:13:584 - add one, 1/4 drum sound.
  3. 00:15:480 - also add one, another heavy crash sound, you shouldn't ignore this.
  4. 00:18:038 (18038|3) - i'm sure this is 1/8, or you can ask others for confirmation too.
  5. 00:20:912 (20912|0,21084|0) - move to column 2, to make it the same column as 00:21:429 (21429|3,21429|1) - , because you did it the same at 00:18:153 (18153|2,18153|0,18325|0,18325|2,18670|2,18670|0) - ,00:23:670 (23670|0,23670|2,23843|0,23843|2,24187|0,24187|2) - ,etc. make it consistent.
  6. 00:25:222 - 00:25:394 - 00:25:567 - 00:26:084 - 00:26:256 - You didn't use short LN for piano, Okay. but the problem is, you did use short LN at 00:22:118 (22118|2,22463|0,22808|3) - to cover the short piano sound, this inconsistency surely will be a problem, please decide how you will layer the sound and do it consistenly.
  7. 00:26:343 - also additional 1/4 sound, i don't think this should be missed.
  8. 00:31:256 - lol i'm quite confused with this tbh , it has the same sound as 00:31:429 - (low kick) , but the differences in note amount is huge, do you see what i mean? the note amount you use ended up contradict each other, makes it confusing for consistency.
    for this part, my suggestion is : for the sound like 00:30:912 - 00:31:601 - , etc (crash sound), use triple notes (the current one you use is already correct)
    for the sound like 00:30:567 - 00:30:739 - 00:31:256 - 00:31:429 - 00:32:808 - 00:33:325 - ,etc (kick sound). use double notes (it serves to make it consistent within each instrument)
    for the sound like 00:31:084 - 00:31:774 - 00:33:843 - 00:34:187 - (snare sound) , use one note.
  9. 00:39:446 (39446|2,39532|3) - these LN are weird, it just didn't work for me.. i would just switch 00:39:446 (39446|2) - into normal note instead.
  10. 00:40:337 - add one, same sound as 00:40:222 -
  11. 00:44:532 (44532|2) - idk what you try to layer here.. better to follow the vocal with the LN.
  12. 00:58:929 (58929|2) - i'm pretty sure this is a ghost note.
  13. 00:58:670 - http://puu.sh/pkZAH/b93eeda9e0.jpg
  14. 00:59:963 - 01:00:049 - 01:00:136 - 1/4 snare sound here. better add it for consistncy.
  15. 01:10:739 (70739|2) - move to 1, more balance
  16. 01:17:808 - delete one note? you only use one at 01:15:394 - , and they're the same kick sound.
  17. 01:20:308 - add one, same sound as 01:20:222 -
  18. 01:20:567 - why double? you only use single at 00:40:567 - , it's not a strong sound either.
  19. 01:22:980 (82980|1,83153|1,83325|1) - if you can, avoid this, it plays not well for hand.
  20. 01:29:791 (89791|1,89877|0,89963|1,90049|0) - one hand trill here give an uneasy feeling when i testplay it, try: http://puu.sh/pl0cy/39e7c19620.jpg
  21. 01:45:912 - here have an additional cymbal sound, might want to take note of that.
  22. 01:47:722 - this part plays a bit weird, might want to try: http://puu.sh/pl0xp/cdb3fcbd78.jpg
  23. 01:54:187 (114187|1,114360|1,114532|2) - Ctrl+H. because there's already 01:53:325 (113325|1,113498|1,113843|1) - , try to make it balance.
  24. 02:00:912 - you forgot to add note for cymbal
  25. 02:05:567 - so, in this part, i think you better focus on the 1/4 sound and scrap the ln at 02:05:567 (125567|3) - here's what i mean: http://puu.sh/pl0UA/040bd310ec.jpg
  26. 02:13:067 - hmm, try to compare this part with 00:58:584 - , you see, they're quite different in note amount despite being exact same instrument enrolled here.
  27. 02:14:705 - add for cymbal, make it consistent as 01:00:222 -
  28. 02:17:118 - am i seeing dejavu? i mean.. 01:02:636 - ... , you can variate it..
  29. 02:25:739 - see, there's 1 LN and 1 note for this sound, and yet you add 2 notes at 02:29:187 - which have weaker sound..
  30. 02:36:429 - http://puu.sh/pl1mf/a38d4c381f.jpg , the current one makes it uncomfortable because of 02:36:429 (156429|1,156544|0,156659|1,156774|0) -
  31. 02:49:963 - also add for snare here.
  32. 02:52:894 (172894|3,172980|2) - Ctrl+G here, the shield isn't good.
  33. 02:56:084 - cymbal sound, better add.
  34. 03:00:653 - http://puu.sh/pl24k/a29b277778.png
  35. 03:16:601 (196601|3,196774|1) - i personally won't follow this, better focus on snare completely, this is too transparant and weird.
  36. 03:25:049 (205049|0,205049|3) - and 03:25:394 (205394|2,205394|1) - why 2 LN? you only follow vocal with 1 LN at 03:25:567 (205567|0) - 03:25:912 (205912|1) - , make it consistent. I wanna make 2 LN per Vocal at first, but cause of the drum, I have to remove some of LN there.
  37. 03:45:739 (225739|3) - move to 3 to avoid 03:45:739 (225739|3,225912|3,226084|3) -

Ok, that's it , keep learning from other map :)
Good luck :3
All Applied! >_< Thanks very helpful
Topic Starter
pnx
UPDATED
REUSE-ABLE
um actaully im Gabriel_Batara lol. so am i hve to mod ur map again or what? XD
L A U R A
here my mod hope itll be useful >.<

replica
00:06:429 (6429|2,6601|0,6687|1,6774|3,6860|2,6946|1,7032|0) - delete it i think

00:20:337 (20337|3) - delete this one i think

00:36:946 - 00:58:670 - add 1 note here

00:58:670 - better keep it empty till 00:59:618 - and you can add sv here to move faster for a bit spice :3

00:59:963 (59963|1,60049|2,60136|3) - delete this as well its not really like the song if you add this one

02:00:567 (120567|0,120567|1,120912|3,120912|1,120912|0) - maybe like http://prntscr.com/c1gzel

02:05:998 (125998|0) - delete this

02:06:343 - - add 1 note here instead

02:13:325 (133325|1,133412|0,133498|2,133584|3,133670|1,133756|0,133843|2,133929|1,134015|3,134101|2) - delete this part too

02:14:446 (134446|2,134532|1,134618|0) - delete this too

03:37:980 - add note here

03:38:670 - add here as well

03:39:360 - here too

03:40:049 - here too

03:40:049 - here too

03:43:498 - here too

03:45:567 - here too

04:14:791 (254791|3) - better start from 04:14:705

thats all i can do. good luck!!!!!
laughingcomet
Normal seems fine :)

Hard - 00:57:808 - missed note? for violin?
02:32:463 (152463|0) - ends at white
03:48:843 (228843|2,229015|1,229360|3) - sounds like these starts at blue
Topic Starter
pnx

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

um actaully im Gabriel_Batara lol. so am i hve to mod ur map again or what? XD
Ahh.. I'm so sorry. I didn't know that you change your name.
Topic Starter
pnx

L A U R A wrote:

here my mod hope itll be useful >.<

replica
00:06:429 (6429|2,6601|0,6687|1,6774|3,6860|2,6946|1,7032|0) - delete it i think

00:20:337 (20337|3) - delete this one i think

00:36:946 - 00:58:670 - add 1 note here

00:58:670 - better keep it empty till 00:59:618 - and you can add sv here to move faster for a bit spice :3

00:59:963 (59963|1,60049|2,60136|3) - delete this as well its not really like the song if you add this one Ok!~

02:00:567 (120567|0,120567|1,120912|3,120912|1,120912|0) - maybe like http://prntscr.com/c1gzel

02:05:998 (125998|0) - delete this nice catch

02:06:343 - - add 1 note here instead

02:13:325 (133325|1,133412|0,133498|2,133584|3,133670|1,133756|0,133843|2,133929|1,134015|3,134101|2) - delete this part too ok

02:14:446 (134446|2,134532|1,134618|0) - delete this too ok

03:37:980 - add note here

03:38:670 - add here as well

03:39:360 - here too

03:40:049 - here too

03:40:049 - here too

03:43:498 - here too

03:45:567 - here too

04:14:791 (254791|3) - better start from 04:14:705 BN told me that this one should be here~~

thats all i can do. good luck!!!!! Thanks
Topic Starter
pnx

laughingcomet wrote:

Normal seems fine :)

Hard - 00:57:808 - missed note? for violin? np
02:32:463 (152463|0) - ends at white Ahh.. nice catch
03:48:843 (228843|2,229015|1,229360|3) - sounds like these starts at blue quite no, i didn't sure about that
Thanks
WolfyArmato-
Hello, From My Queue.


|1|2|3|4|



[Hard]

00:06:429 (6429|2) - move to |2| and move 00:06:687 (6687|1) to |3|? maybe flow better
00:34:187 (34187|0) - why jacks here? move to |3|
00:49:705 (49705|3) - ^ to |2|
00:54:187 (54187|0) - ^ to |2|
01:37:463 (97463|3) - delete this if you want to follow the drum
01:48:498 (108498|0) - ^
01:44:187 (104187|2) - why triple there? delete
02:00:222 (120222|0) - ^
03:13:670 - do like this? http://puu.sh/qyqJe/b7107fd455.PNG
03:15:739 - add note at |2|
03:17:118 - ^ at |2|
03:18:498 - ^ at |4|
03:19:877 - ^ at |2|
03:16:084 - 03:17:463 - 03:18:843 - 03:20:049 - i think you should make trills here since it's the Hard diff
03:21:170 - there is the drum here, should add note at |4|
04:02:118 (242118|0) - should hold it till 04:03:153, because in Replica diff you hold it till 04:03:153
04:13:153 (253153|2) - same reason with ^, hold till 04:14:360
04:15:394 (255394|0) - do like this? http://puu.sh/qyr4N/82131a694f.PNG //P.S. this LN in Replica end here too

[Replica]

00:12:636 - http://puu.sh/qynNp/7531869f52.PNG maybe do like this
00:29:015 (29015|0) - move to |3|
00:54:963 (54963|3) - move to |3| maybe flow better
01:06:946 - you can add note at |4| because it's louder than 01:05:739
01:10:739 - http://puu.sh/qyo64/9cdde8c71c.PNG like this?
01:29:877 (89877|0,89963|0) - why jacks here? i think do like this http://puu.sh/qyobN/9b6b3483c9.PNG
01:32:679 - maybe add note here? (1/8)
01:33:153 - maybe add note at |4| because this 00:18:670
01:35:739 - there is the sound here, maybe add note at |2|
01:41:256 - maybe add note at |3| and move 01:41:429 (101429|2) to |2|
01:44:015 - add note at |3|
I think this part should add more note, because it's almost near the hook, so do like this 01:53:153 - add note at |4| 01:53:670 - add note at |2| 01:54:015 - add note at |4|
01:54:618 - there is the drum here, add note at |1|
02:36:774 - add note at |4| cymbal here
02:36:774 to 02:42:118 - I think the LN in this part isn't suitable with instrument, you should change all of LNs this this part to circle and spread all of the notes here
02:47:722 (167722|0) - move to |2|
02:47:118 - do like this? http://puu.sh/qypiE/e96108c28c.PNG
03:12:291 - add note at |2|?
03:25:912 - do ike this? http://puu.sh/qypsA/68f2c5842a.PNG
03:27:463 - i don't understand why you do triple notes here? but previous parts you do only double notes such as 01:01:256 - 02:15:739 - i think you should make it same, if you want to do triple, please make it into triple, if you want to make double make it into double

thanks, senpai!
Topic Starter
pnx

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hello, From My Queue.


|1|2|3|4|



[Hard]

00:06:429 (6429|2) - move to |2| and move 00:06:687 (6687|1) to |3|? maybe flow better ok
00:34:187 (34187|0) - why jacks here? move to |3| np it will make overall more bored
00:49:705 (49705|3) - ^ to |2| ok
00:54:187 (54187|0) - ^ to |2| np
01:37:463 (97463|3) - delete this if you want to follow the drum ok
01:48:498 (108498|0) - ^ ok
01:44:187 (104187|2) - why triple there? delete it's a cymbal finish desu
02:00:222 (120222|0) - ^ ok
03:13:670 - do like this? http://puu.sh/qyqJe/b7107fd455.PNG np followed other sound
03:15:739 - add note at |2| np
03:17:118 - ^ at |2| np
03:18:498 - ^ at |4| np
03:19:877 - ^ at |2| np
03:16:084 - 03:17:463 - 03:18:843 - 03:20:049 - i think you should make trills here since it's the Hard diff
03:21:170 - there is the drum here, should add note at |4| np
04:02:118 (242118|0) - should hold it till 04:03:153, because in Replica diff you hold it till 04:03:153 will change both diff
04:13:153 (253153|2) - same reason with ^, hold till 04:14:360 np
04:15:394 (255394|0) - do like this? http://puu.sh/qyr4N/82131a694f.PNG //P.S. this LN in Replica end here too ok


[Replica]

00:12:636 - http://puu.sh/qynNp/7531869f52.PNG maybe do like this old one have more flow
00:29:015 (29015|0) - move to |3| old one have more balance
00:54:963 (54963|3) - move to |3| maybe flow better for balance
01:06:946 - you can add note at |4| because it's louder than 01:05:739 this point already have triple note and note for cymbal
01:10:739 - http://puu.sh/qyo64/9cdde8c71c.PNG like this? change into new pattern for more balance
01:29:877 (89877|0,89963|0) - why jacks here? i think do like this http://puu.sh/qyobN/9b6b3483c9.PNG To emphasize the continuation of drum sound
01:32:679 - maybe add note here? (1/8) i thinks this one is better
01:33:153 - maybe add note at |4| because this 00:18:670 change in 00:18:670 and this mod is incorrect lolz
01:35:739 - there is the sound here, maybe add note at |2| Many modders told me to remove this note, and i agreed with them. So, no added
01:41:256 - maybe add note at |3| and move 01:41:429 (101429|2) to |2| np
01:44:015 - add note at |3| np
I think this part should add more note, because it's almost near the hook, so do like this 01:53:153 - add note at |4| 01:53:670 - add note at |2| 01:54:015 - add note at |4| np, the hook verse isn't near here and next verse already have turning-point stream.
01:54:618 - there is the drum here, add note at |1| np, it's true that the drum sound is there, but it will decrease more comfort in this pattern too.
02:36:774 - add note at |4| cymbal here nice catch
02:36:774 to 02:42:118 - I think the LN in this part isn't suitable with instrument, you should change all of LNs this this part to circle and spread all of the notes here ahh, it is the violin sound. It will make more variety of overall note for me, but let's me think about it.
02:47:722 (167722|0) - move to |2| same reason as above
02:47:118 - do like this? http://puu.sh/qypiE/e96108c28c.PNG np, this pattern is better. It have more synced with instrument.
03:12:291 - add note at |2|? np
03:25:912 - do ike this? http://puu.sh/qypsA/68f2c5842a.PNG np
03:27:463 - i don't understand why you do triple notes here? but previous parts you do only double notes such as 01:01:256 - 02:15:739 - i think you should make it same, if you want to do triple, please make it into triple, if you want to make double make it into double cuz it's a final verse -- that's it.

thanks, senpai! thanks for a mod~~
Fubukicat
Hey there,
this looks good overall so will try to find some thingys , hope it can help

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[Replica]
00:17:118 (17118|0) - Move to 2 same pitch as : 00:16:429 (16429|1) -
00:25:825 (25825|0) - you should have a note here because of this : 00:20:308 (20308|3,20394|2,20394|1) - (it's the same rythm )
00:40:330 (40330|2,40330|1,40437|3,40545|2,40653|1,40761|0) - this shouldn't be 1/3 ? the snapping is kinda strange as in it's not linear in any snap divisor (so pretty sure it should be 1/3)
00:59:446 (59446|2) - add a note ?
01:40:308 (100308|3) - add a note ? same reason as the second suggestion
02:00:682 (120682|3,120682|2) - add two notes there is a drum sound here , also you can add one note to 02:00:797 (120797|1) - on 2 to complete the 1/3 stream (there is also an instru sound here)
02:36:084 (156084|1,156084|3) - from here the stream is 1/3 , I just noticed that you used 1/16 and probably did the same for the previous one aswell but well i'm pretty sure it's 1/3 snap
03:19:877 (199877|1) - this should be two notes according to your previous patterns
04:14:791 (254791|3) - this LN should start 1/4 earlier imho
[Hard]
00:40:330 (40330|1,40437|2,40545|0,40653|3,40761|1) - really feels like 1/3 , when listening closely the all rythm dosn't seems concistent at all so actually it's maybe just the way the song is idk anymore XD
00:51:256 (51256|3) - should be two notes cause of the snare sound
00:58:843 (58843|1,59015|3,59101|2) - how about following the vocals here ?
01:24:877 (84877|0,84877|2) - should be 3 notes according to : 01:27:636 (87636|0,87636|1,87636|3) -
02:00:682 (120682|2) - add note in 3 then add : 02:00:797 (120797|1) - a note in 2 (there is drum sounds here)
[Normal]
00:51:084 (51084|2) - add note , then add : 00:51:429 (51429|3) - one note aswell (drum sound , and it would make the flow more catchy imo)
01:42:808 (102808|2) - should be two notes (snare sound)
01:46:084 (106084|3) - ^ add one more note

catchy~~ , Good Luck :3/
Topic Starter
pnx

Eternalie wrote:

Hey there,
this looks good overall so will try to find some thingys , hope it can help

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[Replica]
00:17:118 (17118|0) - Move to 2 same pitch as : 00:16:429 (16429|1) - ok
00:25:825 (25825|0) - you should have a note here because of this : 00:20:308 (20308|3,20394|2,20394|1) - (it's the same rythm ) ok
00:40:330 (40330|2,40330|1,40437|3,40545|2,40653|1,40761|0) - this shouldn't be 1/3 ? the snapping is kinda strange as in it's not linear in any snap divisor (so pretty sure it should be 1/3) I refer from other Haru Modoki map and use it as reference.
00:59:446 (59446|2) - add a note ?
01:40:308 (100308|3) - add a note ? same reason as the second suggestion
02:00:682 (120682|3,120682|2) - add two notes there is a drum sound here , also you can add one note to 02:00:797 (120797|1) - on 2 to complete the 1/3 stream (there is also an instru sound here) ok
02:36:084 (156084|1,156084|3) - from here the stream is 1/3 , I just noticed that you used 1/16 and probably did the same for the previous one aswell but well i'm pretty sure it's 1/3 snap
03:19:877 (199877|1) - this should be two notes according to your previous patterns ok
04:14:791 (254791|3) - this LN should start 1/4 earlier imho yep, i thinks the same -- cuz someone told me that snap is incorrect.
[Hard]
00:40:330 (40330|1,40437|2,40545|0,40653|3,40761|1) - really feels like 1/3 , when listening closely the all rythm dosn't seems concistent at all so actually it's maybe just the way the song is idk anymore XD
00:51:256 (51256|3) - should be two notes cause of the snare sound nice catch! thx~
00:58:843 (58843|1,59015|3,59101|2) - how about following the vocals here ? nice suggestion
01:24:877 (84877|0,84877|2) - should be 3 notes according to : 01:27:636 (87636|0,87636|1,87636|3) - ok
02:00:682 (120682|2) - add note in 3 then add : 02:00:797 (120797|1) - a note in 2 (there is drum sounds here) ok
[Normal]
00:51:084 (51084|2) - add note , then add : 00:51:429 (51429|3) - one note aswell (drum sound , and it would make the flow more catchy imo) ok
01:42:808 (102808|2) - should be two notes (snare sound) ok
01:46:084 (106084|3) - ^ add one more note[/color][/color]

catchy~~ , Good Luck :3/ So Helpful. Thx~~~
Hilmi Ghazian

Req Mod :) :) :) :)
Sorry,, I'm Late :( :( :( :(
|1|2|3|4|

Hard
01:54:877 (114877|2,114877|3) - why 2 notes? it's sound same as 01:54:963 (114963|1) -
03:44:187 (224187|0) - move to 2 please
03:58:843 (238843|2,239015|3) - ctrl+g please
04:04:532 (244532|0) - move to 3 please

Replica
00:17:808 (17808|3,17808|0,17894|2,17980|1,18024|3) - http://puu.sh/qHpAt/7d6af9e4fc.jpg please
01:26:429 (86429|1,86601|2) - ctrl+g please
01:54:877 (114877|0,114877|3) - why 2 notes? it's sound same as 01:54:963 (114963|1) -
02:25:308 (145308|3,145308|2) - ^ 02:25:222 (145222|0) -
01:55:049 - add 1 note please
02:47:722 (167722|0) - Move to 2 please

sorry for my little mods :D :D :D :D :D :D
thanks~~~ 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
[MTF] Wolfette
Replica
00:00:912 (912|1,912|2,2291|0,2291|3,3670|2,3670|1,5049|3,5049|0,6429|2) - Add some short notes in this section that correspond to the constanent sound of the Japanese words (sorry for poor wording)

00:07:118 - 00:07:808 - Modyify the pattern so that a long note can be placed here

00:16:429 (16429|1,16774|3) - Hold note between these two

00:26:946 (26946|0,29015|0) - Put something here (long notes probably)

00:40:330 (40330|2,40330|1) - Snap this to the grid

00:59:877 (59877|0) - Remove this

02:51:946 (171946|1,172032|1) - Make these two hold notes

02:55:912 (175912|2,175912|1,176084|0,176084|3,176199|1,176314|2,176371|0,176429|3,176429|2,176429|1,176515|0,176601|3,176659|1,176716|2,176774|0,176774|3,176860|2,176946|0,177003|2,177061|1,177118|0,177118|3,177205|1,177291|2,177377|1,177463|3,177463|2,177463|0,177549|1,177636|3,177693|1,177751|2,177808|3,177808|0,177808|1,177894|2,177980|3,178038|1,178095|0,178153|2,178153|1,178153|3,178239|0,178325|1,178325|3,178412|2) - There are a LOT of notes in this section that aren't grid snapped. (intentional?)

Sorry it took so long to get to this mod, I've been really busy lately :(
Topic Starter
pnx

[1st GCorp] wrote:


Req Mod :) :) :) :)
Sorry,, I'm Late :( :( :( :(
|1|2|3|4|

Hard
01:54:877 (114877|2,114877|3) - why 2 notes? it's sound same as 01:54:963 (114963|1) -
03:44:187 (224187|0) - move to 2 please
03:58:843 (238843|2,239015|3) - ctrl+g please
04:04:532 (244532|0) - move to 3 please

Replica
00:17:808 (17808|3,17808|0,17894|2,17980|1,18024|3) - http://puu.sh/qHpAt/7d6af9e4fc.jpg please i thinks i like the older one more.
01:26:429 (86429|1,86601|2) - ctrl+g please
01:54:877 (114877|0,114877|3) - why 2 notes? it's sound same as 01:54:963 (114963|1) -
02:25:308 (145308|3,145308|2) - ^ 02:25:222 (145222|0) - i thinks it doesn't have same sound
01:55:049 - add 1 note please
02:47:722 (167722|0) - Move to 2 please

sorry for my little mods :D :D :D :D :D :D
thanks~~~ 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
Thanks for modding my map >.<
Topic Starter
pnx

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Replica
00:00:912 (912|1,912|2,2291|0,2291|3,3670|2,3670|1,5049|3,5049|0,6429|2) - Add some short notes in this section that correspond to the constanent sound of the Japanese words (sorry for poor wording) somehow i don't like the vocal in very beginning like here

00:07:118 - 00:07:808 - Modyify the pattern so that a long note can be placed here Just like above

00:16:429 (16429|1,16774|3) - Hold note between these two actually np

00:26:946 (26946|0,29015|0) - Put something here (long notes probably) i thinks only these note can represent this sound.

00:40:330 (40330|2,40330|1) - Snap this to the grid it is their actually snap.

00:59:877 (59877|0) - Remove this why? it have very strong sound.

02:51:946 (171946|1,172032|1) - Make these two hold notes np

02:55:912 (175912|2,175912|1,176084|0,176084|3,176199|1,176314|2,176371|0,176429|3,176429|2,176429|1,176515|0,176601|3,176659|1,176716|2,176774|0,176774|3,176860|2,176946|0,177003|2,177061|1,177118|0,177118|3,177205|1,177291|2,177377|1,177463|3,177463|2,177463|0,177549|1,177636|3,177693|1,177751|2,177808|3,177808|0,177808|1,177894|2,177980|3,178038|1,178095|0,178153|2,178153|1,178153|3,178239|0,178325|1,178325|3,178412|2) - There are a LOT of notes in this section that aren't grid snapped. (intentional?) Absolutely intented, cuz it was 1/6 snap.

Sorry it took so long to get to this mod, I've been really busy lately :(
Thanks for your effort :)
DustMoon
Hi~PnX
1|2|3|4|
Normal
01:28:467 (88467|3,88467|1,88467|0) - hitsound
00:15:912 (15912|1) - move to 4
00:51:601 (51601|2) - delete
01:04:705 (64705|2) - move to 3
01:32:291 (92291|0) - move to 2
02:36:084 (156084|3,156192|2,156299|1,156407|0,156515|1,156623|2) - ^
02:52:980 (172980|0) - move to 3
02:53:325 (173325|0,174360|2,174532|0,174705|2,174877|3,175049|1) - ^
03:15:394 (195394|3,195394|2) - ^
03:38:153 (218153|0) - move to 4
03:39:877 (219877|3) - move to 3
03:51:946 (231946|3,232032|2,232118|1,232205|0,232291|2,232377|3) - change
03:55:567 (235567|1) - ?no sound
04:10:912 (250912|1) - move to 4
04:17:291 (257291|0) - end timeline shoud put this04:23:670 -
Hard
00:17:463 (17463|3,17549|0,17636|2,17722|1,17808|3,17894|0,17980|2,18067|1) - ^
00:47:118 (47118|1) - move to 3
01:24:532 (84532|2) - ^
01:46:946 (106946|3) - move to 3
02:01:256 (121256|2) - move to 1
02:11:946 - ^
02:34:360 (154360|2) - move to 4
02:43:498 (163498|2) - move to 2
03:15:394 (195394|3,196601|2,196687|1,196774|0) - ^
03:31:256 (211256|0) - move to 2
04:07:032 (247032|2,247118|1) - move to 4,3
04:19:360 (259360|2,259877|0) - ^
04:17:291 (257291|3) - - end timeline shoud put this04:23:670 -
Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
pnx

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~PnX
1|2|3|4|
Normal
01:28:467 (88467|3,88467|1,88467|0) - hitsound
00:15:912 (15912|1) - move to 4
00:51:601 (51601|2) - delete
01:04:705 (64705|2) - move to 3
01:32:291 (92291|0) - move to 2
02:36:084 (156084|3,156192|2,156299|1,156407|0,156515|1,156623|2) - ^
02:52:980 (172980|0) - move to 3
02:53:325 (173325|0,174360|2,174532|0,174705|2,174877|3,175049|1) - ^
03:15:394 (195394|3,195394|2) - ^
03:38:153 (218153|0) - move to 4
03:39:877 (219877|3) - move to 3
03:51:946 (231946|3,232032|2,232118|1,232205|0,232291|2,232377|3) - change
03:55:567 (235567|1) - ?no sound
04:10:912 (250912|1) - move to 4
04:17:291 (257291|0) - end timeline shoud put this04:23:670 -
Hard
00:17:463 (17463|3,17549|0,17636|2,17722|1,17808|3,17894|0,17980|2,18067|1) - ^
00:47:118 (47118|1) - move to 3
01:24:532 (84532|2) - ^
01:46:946 (106946|3) - move to 3
02:01:256 (121256|2) - move to 1
02:11:946 - ^
02:34:360 (154360|2) - move to 4
02:43:498 (163498|2) - move to 2
03:15:394 (195394|3,196601|2,196687|1,196774|0) - ^
03:31:256 (211256|0) - move to 2
04:07:032 (247032|2,247118|1) - move to 4,3
04:19:360 (259360|2,259877|0) - ^
04:17:291 (257291|3) - - end timeline shoud put this04:23:670 -
Good luck! :D
Sorry, I've just remapped before your mod. But thanks for modding my map.
- Ly0572 -
allloooo o/

m4m :D

|1|2|3|4|
feel free to reject~ this is just my pov xD

NM
01:55:912 - im sure theres a sound here same sound as 01:57:291 (117291|3) -
02:15:394 (135394|2) - delete maybe cuz idk what sound it covers
02:22:636 (142636|0) - delete cuz u already have Ln~ if u keep two notes 02:22:636 (142636|2,142636|0) - u should double the same parts like 02:24:015 -
02:24:705 - should be single
02:35:049 - ^
02:51:946 (171946|0,172291|1,172636|2) - i would change them to Ln since its a drumroll
03:00:394 (180394|3,180567|2,180739|1,180912|2,181084|0,181256|3) - keep them 1/1 feels more comfortable
03:31:256 (211256|0,211429|0) - jack out of nowhere :D maybe move one note to |4|
03:33:153 (213153|3) - move to |1|
03:34:015 (214015|1) - move to |4| -comfortability
03:34:187 (214187|0) - ^ to |2|
03:34:360 (214360|1) - ^ to |1|
03:35:049 (215049|3,215394|2,215567|3) - swap col
03:36:429 - should be single only
03:36:946 (216946|0) - change to normal note ~ it doesnt fit having 2 ln's
03:38:153 (218153|0,218498|0) - move to |4| left side is kinda heavy
03:40:049 - missing note here
--
will continue later~ :)

aaaaaaaaa back for more lololol


Normal
03:46:256 (226256|3) - u can change this to Ln for the drumroll like 03:45:739 (225739|0) -
03:47:463 (227463|0) - i would chaaange to ln this up until 03:48:498 -
03:49:187 (229187|3) - move to |1| to avoid notes before a Long note
03:49:532 (229532|1) - this one to |3|
03:51:256 (231256|3) - to |3| aswell
03:51:601 (231601|2) - to |1| for balance
04:10:394 - missed aaaa note here
04:11:774 - ^
04:13:153 - ^
04:24:705 - end the long note here~

Hard
00:12:980 (12980|2,12980|3) - single?
00:41:256 - missed a note
00:45:222 - ^
u should definitely add note here 01:10:825 - |3|
01:10:912 - here |1|
and here 01:11:084 - |2|
much better
01:31:946 (91946|3,92291|1) - move one col to the left to make it balance
if u accept that then swap these 01:32:636 (92636|0,92808|2) -
02:00:567 (120567|3) - change to aa long note to cover the empty spot there
02:14:015 (134015|0,134101|1) - dunno whaat sound these note represent so maaybe just delete
02:25:222 (145222|0) - how about start this long note here 02:25:394 - so that u will be able to map the sound here 02:25:308 - ~
02:42:980 (162980|0,164360|2) - excess layers delete 1234567890-
02:59:101 (179101|2,179187|0) - mehh feels awkward~ swap them
03:46:774 - should be doubles
04:15:998 - deserves a note

Replica
00:17:980 - 1/6 would work here
00:29:015 (29015|3,29015|2,29072|0,29072|1,29187|2,29187|3) - same here
00:59:705 (59705|1,59705|0,59762|2,59762|3,59877|0,59877|1,59877|3) - ^^
01:09:705 (69705|1) - prefer extending this ln up to 01:10:049 - then 01:10:049 (70049|3) - change into normal note
01:10:394 (70394|0) - ^same , extend ln up to 01:10:739 - so u can flip these or rearrange 01:10:739 (70739|0,70825|1,70912|2) -
01:46:256 (106256|1) - based on what i hear this note should be a mini ln to like those 01:46:429 (106429|3,106601|1,106774|2,106946|0) -
02:05:739 (125739|3) - change to ln?
02:08:843 (128843|2) - can be deleted since there is no finish?
02:22:636 (142636|3) - ^
02:24:187 - this part should be the triple
02:35:739 - owo ? y 4?
02:37:463 - triple
03:11:429 (191429|0,191601|1,191774|2,191946|0,191946|1,192291|2) - similar to hd? maybe rearrange
theres a lot of parts on this dif similar to hard~ did u just buff / added some notes to make it harder? if so , rearrange the pattern

GL p o/ ;)
Topic Starter
pnx

- Ly0572 - wrote:

allloooo o/

m4m :D

|1|2|3|4|
feel free to reject~ this is just my pov xD

NM
01:55:912 - im sure theres a sound here same sound as 01:57:291 (117291|3) - oops. maybe I forgot it~ XD
02:15:394 (135394|2) - delete maybe cuz idk what sound it covers without it, imo i gonna be strange.
02:22:636 (142636|0) - delete cuz u already have Ln~ if u keep two notes 02:22:636 (142636|2,142636|0) - u should double the same parts like 02:24:015 - fixed!
02:24:705 - should be single fixed!
02:35:049 - ^
02:51:946 (171946|0,172291|1,172636|2) - i would change them to Ln since its a drumroll ok
03:00:394 (180394|3,180567|2,180739|1,180912|2,181084|0,181256|3) - keep them 1/1 feels more comfortable i think so.
03:31:256 (211256|0,211429|0) - jack out of nowhere :D maybe move one note to |4| ok
03:33:153 (213153|3) - move to |1| ok
03:34:015 (214015|1) - move to |4| -comfortability ok
03:34:187 (214187|0) - ^ to |2| ok
03:34:360 (214360|1) - ^ to |1| ok
03:35:049 (215049|3,215394|2,215567|3) - swap col ok
03:36:429 - should be single only similar issue to above
03:36:946 (216946|0) - change to normal note ~ it doesnt fit having 2 ln's
03:38:153 (218153|0,218498|0) - move to |4| left side is kinda heavy accepted
03:40:049 - missing note here accepted
--
will continue later~ :)

aaaaaaaaa back for more lololol


Normal
03:46:256 (226256|3) - u can change this to Ln for the drumroll like 03:45:739 (225739|0) - maybe i will think about it later.
03:47:463 (227463|0) - i would chaaange to ln this up until 03:48:498 - ok
03:49:187 (229187|3) - move to |1| to avoid notes before a Long note ok
03:49:532 (229532|1) - this one to |3| ok
03:51:256 (231256|3) - to |3| aswell ok
03:51:601 (231601|2) - to |1| for balance ok
04:10:394 - missed aaaa note here ok
04:11:774 - ^ ok
04:13:153 - ^ ok
04:24:705 - end the long note here~ ok

Hard
00:12:980 (12980|2,12980|3) - single? I think it has a strong sound more than one note can occupied.
00:41:256 - missed a note I can't hear anything except a small cymbal sound which i don't use it.
00:45:222 - ^
u should definitely add note here 01:10:825 - |3|
01:10:912 - here |1|
and here 01:11:084 - |2|
much better accepted
01:31:946 (91946|3,92291|1) - move one col to the left to make it balance I want it to follow a pitch same as 01:31:256 (91256|3,91601|1) -
than focusing on a balance here

if u accept that then swap these 01:32:636 (92636|0,92808|2) -
02:00:567 (120567|3) - change to aa long note to cover the empty spot there wow, nice suggestion
02:14:015 (134015|0,134101|1) - dunno whaat sound these note represent so maaybe just delete maybe i forgot it lol
02:25:222 (145222|0) - how about start this long note here 02:25:394 - so that u will be able to map the sound here 02:25:308 - ~ you're right
02:42:980 (162980|0,164360|2) - excess layers delete 1234567890- accepted
02:59:101 (179101|2,179187|0) - mehh feels awkward~ swap them ok
03:46:774 - should be doubles ok
04:15:998 - deserves a note might be fine

Replica
00:17:980 - 1/6 would work here maybe
00:29:015 (29015|3,29015|2,29072|0,29072|1,29187|2,29187|3) - same here
00:59:705 (59705|1,59705|0,59762|2,59762|3,59877|0,59877|1,59877|3) - ^^ I prefer the old one than this pattern
01:09:705 (69705|1) - prefer extending this ln up to 01:10:049 - then 01:10:049 (70049|3) - change into normal note owo i don't think so.
01:10:394 (70394|0) - ^same , extend ln up to 01:10:739 - so u can flip these or rearrange 01:10:739 (70739|0,70825|1,70912|2) -
01:46:256 (106256|1) - based on what i hear this note should be a mini ln to like those 01:46:429 (106429|3,106601|1,106774|2,106946|0) - I think a violin sound right here is too low. so i use cymbal here
02:05:739 (125739|3) - change to ln? accepted
02:08:843 (128843|2) - can be deleted since there is no finish? ok
02:22:636 (142636|3) - ^ ok
02:24:187 - this part should be the triple I forgot it =3= lol
02:35:739 - owo ? y 4? I prefer 4 here but btw i reduce it to 3 cuz of consistency.
02:37:463 - triple
03:11:429 (191429|0,191601|1,191774|2,191946|0,191946|1,192291|2) - similar to hd? maybe rearrange
theres a lot of parts on this dif similar to hard~ did u just buff / added some notes to make it harder? if so , rearrange the pattern maybe i started with this diff and try to reduce a note in other instead owo

GL p o/ ;) thanks for a mod ~
Maxus
M4M here from PM

[Replica]
00:06:774 - 00:06:946 - I felt it really empty if you don't add note to these 2 points, its audible and makes the stream actually reflect the instrument more properly.

00:15:739 - The drum is too small for double note, better to reduce this to single note.

00:18:038 (18038|3) - Wrong snapped, should be 1/8, precisely at 00:18:024 -

00:26:343 - Add another note for drum here, it's audible.

01:35:308 - I think this needs to be double, the drum is big here.

01:38:153 - Prefer you to layer the piano sound with LN here.

01:39:360 (99360|1,99446|2) - I will be honest that this is extremely inaudible, I almost can't hear things here, i don't think you need to layer sound extremely thin like this either.

02:00:567 - Kinda unclear here, i think the LN at 02:00:739 - is ghost note with inaccurate layering sound, the sound here is actually still 1/3 all the way, the correct layering is http://puu.sh/w0L4W/ff2db9185f.jpg

03:04:360 - Too surprising SV, and the sudden slowdown actually don't really match up imo, I suggest 0,9x instead.

03:09:877 (189877|1,190394|1,190739|2,190912|3) - and also other similar place, actually it would be much variation if you try to layer this with 1/2 LN for BG synth.

03:25:049 - I wonder why this place is so undermapped, other places you map the 1/4 sound occured here, and here only have LN, even if you want variation, i believe it doesn't mean you need to ignore all these sounds, especially when we want to reach the climax ending.

03:49:015 (229015|2,229187|3) - Better switch places here, Having this LN at the same column with 03:49:360 - is really odd when they have different pitch.

03:58:325 (238325|0) - Turn this into 1/2 LN, there's still synth left.

03:58:498 (238498|2) - Stop this to 03:59:187 - , the synth already end here, continue the LN kinda take away the emphasis which is not good.

04:01:601 (241601|2,241774|3,241946|1) - Correct PR for synth is 1-2-3 here, it is ascending higher instead of repeating.

04:10:394 - Should be double if following the layering at 04:10:049 -

04:19:446 (259446|1,259532|0) - Completely wrong, should be at 1/8 at 04:19:403 - and 04:19:489 -

You're improved much better compared to the last time I mod this, I can help you push this in one condition.
Confirmed all the snap in the map, because it's extremely hard for me to discern some part of the snap because it got blended too thin between each deeper snap, I'm not even completely sure whether i spot all the issues or not. so i need you to ask QAT/other trustable source regarding the snap.
If you're done, call me back, I will do full check.
Topic Starter
pnx

Maxus wrote:

M4M here from PM

[Replica]
00:06:774 - 00:06:946 - I felt it really empty if you don't add note to these 2 points, its audible and makes the stream actually reflect the instrument more properly.

00:15:739 - The drum is too small for double note, better to reduce this to single note.

00:18:038 (18038|3) - Wrong snapped, should be 1/8, precisely at 00:18:024 -

00:26:343 - Add another note for drum here, it's audible.

01:35:308 - I think this needs to be double, the drum is big here.

01:38:153 - Prefer you to layer the piano sound with LN here. I don't prefer a LN here maybe it might look odd here.

01:39:360 (99360|1,99446|2) - I will be honest that this is extremely inaudible, I almost can't hear things here, i don't think you need to layer sound extremely thin like this either. fix mostly of this

02:00:567 - Kinda unclear here, i think the LN at 02:00:739 - is ghost note with inaccurate layering sound, the sound here is actually still 1/3 all the way, the correct layering is http://puu.sh/w0L4W/ff2db9185f.jpg fixed

03:04:360 - Too surprising SV, and the sudden slowdown actually don't really match up imo, I suggest 0,9x instead.

03:09:877 (189877|1,190394|1,190739|2,190912|3) - and also other similar place, actually it would be much variation if you try to layer this with 1/2 LN for BG synth.

03:25:049 - I wonder why this place is so undermapped, other places you map the 1/4 sound occured here, and here only have LN, even if you want variation, i believe it doesn't mean you need to ignore all these sounds, especially when we want to reach the climax ending. okay, i try to think of this part here and i finally notice that. thanks

03:49:015 (229015|2,229187|3) - Better switch places here, Having this LN at the same column with 03:49:360 - is really odd when they have different pitch.

03:58:325 (238325|0) - Turn this into 1/2 LN, there's still synth left.

03:58:498 (238498|2) - Stop this to 03:59:187 - , the synth already end here, continue the LN kinda take away the emphasis which is not good.

04:01:601 (241601|2,241774|3,241946|1) - Correct PR for synth is 1-2-3 here, it is ascending higher instead of repeating.

04:10:394 - Should be double if following the layering at 04:10:049 -

04:19:446 (259446|1,259532|0) - Completely wrong, should be at 1/8 at 04:19:403 - and 04:19:489 -

You're improved much better compared to the last time I mod this, I can help you push this in one condition.
Confirmed all the snap in the map, because it's extremely hard for me to discern some part of the snap because it got blended too thin between each deeper snap, I'm not even completely sure whether i spot all the issues or not. so i need you to ask QAT/other trustable source regarding the snap.
If you're done, call me back, I will do full check. okay i gonna find someone who can check a snap of this map. thanks for modding
Rivals_7
PNX ask me to confirm snaps. I'll use the highest diffs to see it

use 1/16
00:40:337 (40337|0) - 00:40:567 (40567|2) - yellow line below
00:40:452 (40452|3) - 00:40:797 (40797|3) - Blue line below
00:40:682 (40682|0) - Red line below
00:40:797 (40797|3) - yellow line below ( 00:40:761 )

02:25:279 (145279|2,145279|3) - pretty sure this is straight up 1/4 so snap it to blue

use 1/16
02:36:199 (156199|0,156199|2,156314|1,156429|3,156544|1,156659|2) - I guess this entire section is the same as the first one.

02:52:593 (172593|2) - yellow line above (1/16)

use 1/12
02:56:199 (176199|1) - one line above
02:57:003 (177003|2,177061|1) - move one line above
02:57:751 (177751|1) - one line above

03:46:486 (226486|0) - straight up 1/4 so snap to blue
03:55:631 (235631|1) - same

04:19:403 (259403|1) - the piano seems to be 1/16 earlier (yellow line below)

maybe thats all. I have 50:50 feeling i spot the guitar part correctly anyways but good Luck o/
Topic Starter
pnx

Rivals_7 wrote:

PNX ask me to confirm snaps. I'll use the highest diffs to see it

use 1/16
00:40:337 (40337|0) - 00:40:567 (40567|2) - yellow line below
00:40:452 (40452|3) - 00:40:797 (40797|3) - Blue line below
00:40:682 (40682|0) - Red line below
00:40:797 (40797|3) - yellow line below ( 00:40:761 )

02:25:279 (145279|2,145279|3) - pretty sure this is straight up 1/4 so snap it to blue

use 1/16
02:36:199 (156199|0,156199|2,156314|1,156429|3,156544|1,156659|2) - I guess this entire section is the same as the first one.

02:52:593 (172593|2) - yellow line above (1/16)

use 1/12
02:56:199 (176199|1) - one line above
02:57:003 (177003|2,177061|1) - move one line above
02:57:751 (177751|1) - one line above

03:46:486 (226486|0) - straight up 1/4 so snap to blue
03:55:631 (235631|1) - same

04:19:403 (259403|1) - the piano seems to be 1/16 earlier (yellow line below)

maybe thats all. I have 50:50 feeling i spot the guitar part correctly anyways but good Luck o/
Very thank for snap checking :D
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