Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
When it shows "1.5x spacing" it's look invisible, move it to center
Oh...resize your BG, it must be 800x600 or 1024x768 (but i advise you change it on another BG maybe touhou picture)

I find some..may be it is help you
i'll find accurate BG while i have time, thx for suggestion!

And else. Kiai must be it one time in each diff
add one in EASY

Easy
03:06:205 (1) - new combo why?
03:39:137 (1,2,3,4) - don't do jumps, it's easy fixed

Love
Try circle size = 2 i'll consider this
01:34:253 (1,1,1) - don't do this fixed
01:38:491 (7) - and this (do it how spacing tell you) fixed
01:47:947 (1,1,1) - i think you anderstand fixed
02:39:463 - strange break time..it's stopped the game process this break time is symmetrical to first break time
02:59:352 - add circle
there is a note here originally, i remove it when i receive some feedbacks from test players, anyway, fixed atm, ill still consider removing it in the future. basically i dont want here to be too difficult, and this note is the best to remove (which dont influence the gameplay).

Map looks random, look on sliders, on their evenness, same with circles
It must be beauty and playable

Good luck, star~

yongtw123 wrote:

哈囉
我把字體弄大一點好讀

整體
Offset 偏掉了,但是這首歌本身很慢,所以很難測.
BPM修正成92.000, offset 5227
記得勾選snap to new timing
已修正
fixed

整體節奏有待接強
Easy先不說 Love就實在不怎麼好
很多地方不用放1/16的卻放了
記得一點: 不要為了增加難度而放很多1/16連打
要跟背景鼓聲就好好跟
要跟歌詞也好好跟
兩個都跟那就跟著耳朵走
我真的會建議你重新map一次試試

音效部分除非有特別強調
不然soft-whistle要有規則的放
例如00:29:357 (2,4) - 這就放對了
簡單說是放在每小節的第2.4白線
把不規則的地方整理一下吧

最近比較忙，有時間時我會慎重考慮你的提議，基本上Love這個難度沒有特別跟著樂器或歌詞而是照著自己聽這首歌的感覺下去擺note，我已經請很多認識的人試玩過(包含排名高也有排名低的)，大多數的意見表示還能接受，但如果這樣照感覺擺會影響這個圖是否被rank，我會想辦法去改正的。
I'm a bit busy these days and will considered your suggestion once I have time. Basically, I dont sync with instrument and/or lyrics in LOVE but place notes with my feeling to this song instead, I have found many players (including high ranker and newbies) to test play this and most of them think this diff is acceptable, but if my notes placement will make this map not being ranked, ill try to fix it.

[Easy]
1. 盡量不要改變slider velocity
2. 節奏偏難

00:41:748 (5) - new combo fixed
01:00:661 (2) - 這鼓聲也太明顯了 選其一1)用soft-whistle就好 2)把鼓聲弄小聲些 fixed
01:39:140 (6) - !!?? 簡單難度不要這樣大幅度的改變slider velocity, 而且這裡何必用x0.5BPM呢?
x1 BPM slider太長我不知道怎麼擺，無論如何，這邊先改回x1了
x1 BPM makes slider too long for me, anyway i'd fixed it atm
02:27:727 (7) - 我覺得repeat一次就好了 fixed
03:00:009 (1) - 何必x0.5BPM咧 as above
03:13:705 (2) - 聽起來怪怪的 不知道是跟著什麼 change to 4 notes
03:30:498 (6) - 簡單難度盡量不用藍線 若不得已請用slider帶過去 fixed
03:33:107 (2) - 同上 fixed
03:35:716 (6) - 同上 fixed

[Love]
為什麼比較難的難度反而slider velocity才x1.2???
East都x1.8了耶?
這兩個設定都是為了圖擺起來比較舒服點
slider velocity setup is for notes position arrangement purpose
01:38:488 (7) - 不要把slider藏起來 fixed

==========

把節奏好好重新規劃一下吧
倒是有一點不錯
你排列的技巧不算差

加油吧!
屆時我再回來看看

• I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
  Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
  Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
  SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
  01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
  03:24:792 (4) - ^
  02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
  01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
  02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  03:43:053 (3) - new combo

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late ^^"

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
  in this touhou anime, i think they draw character too rough, and since i want to choose a BG that is relative to this anime but not a rough one, it's a hard choice, anyway since many had mentioned BG problem, ill fix it ASAP
  Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
  yes they are all snapped correctly
  Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
  SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).

ill full submit again with BG fix in the future

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
  looks nice, added.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
  yes
  01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
  yes
  03:24:792 (4) - ^
  yes
  02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  ok
  03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)

ok

- Love:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
  most of the notes is not snapped to the grid in this diff
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
  change both of them to stacking
  01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
  ok
  02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
  ok
  03:43:053 (3) - new combo

ok

Conider this starred after fixing ^^

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry I didn't get here sooner

[General]

- Have Kiai the same for all diffs

[Easy]

00:31:313 (1) - Remove new combo to match 00:41:748
(OR MAYBE: 00:41:748 (5) - Add new combo to match 00:31:313) OK

01:45:661 (1,2) - This part seems awkward. You should change up the pattern and add a note on 01:46:966. OK
01:52:183 - End Kiai here? OK
02:28:705 (8) - New combo
02:29:357 (1) - Remove new combo NO
03:11:096 - End this slider at the same place, but move it so it's 1/4 before the (1). Like so http://puu.sh/Akr
Since this is EASY, ill do but fix it to 1/2
03:15:661 (1) - End Kiai here OK


[Love]

00:42:563 (2) - Remove finish, sounds weird. NO

RS~AT

^ Unscramble that

a0178042 wrote:

歌很不錯:3
我可以做個guest diff嗎~ 雖然我對長歌會有點不耐煩
如果可以的話...暫定Hard好了

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
slider的形狀試著弄得更好點。 會把一些直的改彎orz

[Normal]
03:09:140 (x) - 聲音和後面不搭調，這裡很響 fixed
01:44:357 (3) - 聲音效果和前面2個slider一樣 ok :3
01:45:661 (4) - ^ ok :3

[Love]
02:25:118 (4) - use two slider instead of it. 我發現的確排太滿, 所以第一個slider少repeat一次, 否則太多slider
03:15:661 (3) - delete whistle.add finish fixed, 順帶改了(5)和後面的綠線
03:35:226 (4) - 好吵的聲音。。重改了這區的音效
04:13:216 (2) - delete . fixed
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圖不錯~:3 音效上面有點怪怪的感覺。。
然後主要slider再美觀些就行了~
Star~☆

AngelHoney wrote:

Snowy Dream wrote:

其實我想說乃那些彎的slider上的點弄的更有規律些。。可能會好看點。

y u c a wrote:

加油ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Heya,

General
00:47:618 - Map this break? D:
02:39:466 - Map this break! D:
this is a painful choice..because the map will have too few breaktime but i want some
anyway, i'll map those if more modders point out this

Love
01:41:748 (8) - too many whistles. remove them on the white and red ticks, so that there are only 2 whitsles left on the blue ticks. you're right, but i remove whistle on blue ticks instead
01:44:357 (3) - ^ yes
02:50:553 (4) - don't let the repeat arrow overlap the slider yes
02:53:161 (4) - ^ yes
03:36:531 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit D: it's a sign of laziness for me. it's intentional, but i'll consider your suggestion
03:56:096 (3) - 2 grids down yes

Normal
01:11:096 - where did the notes go? mapped
01:50:226 (1) - make this start and end at the same position as in love? you'd have to place some extra notes if you do so. ok :3
02:57:400 (5) - I guess bad spacing? yes
03:16:313 (1) - start at 03:15:987 - i think it's ok now..

That's all from me. Star'd >w<

ouranhshc wrote:

Overall
make kiai times the same on both diffs?
done, also rearrange combo colors and remap a bit in normal

Love
04:14:194 (2,3) - these look weird ingame. maybe place them under the slider end? oops, done

Normal
03:33:596 (5) - new combo? ok :3

good map

Kana Anaberal wrote:

路过star O.O

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

About the breaks, of course you don't HAVE to map them.
I just think the break at 01:56:096 - is more than enough for the entire map.

/me runs away

DarkRingSystem wrote:

!

a0178042 wrote:

Finish＼(′ ▽ ‘)／

thepianist wrote:

hihihi

[Normal]
00:45:009 (1) - Add a finish? yes with lower volume :3
02:55:770 (4) - Move up to align with 2? good idea
03:00:987 (3) - Move up to be higher than 2 and 4? yes
03:02:618 (6) - make it curve so it heads downward? yes, rearrange (6,7,8,9,10)
03:15:335 (6,7) - shift right a few grids. okey

[Hard]
00:29:683 (5) - shift left a grid or so aha to line up with 4
01:31:966 (5,6) - have these slightly closer to each other!
01:51:205 (1) - map to 1:52:183?

[Love]
Same comment on spinner as above! nope, it's ok for me
2:40ish map this break~ i'll do if one more modder point out this

I don't quite agree with the 1.5x spacing in the mid-end of the song though! Otherwise a great map! Congrats, star.

loveFantasy wrote:

SPOILER

a0178042 wrote:

Finish＼(′ ▽ ‘)／

辛苦了, 下了非常多綠線, 肯定花了你不少時間

- 你目前使用45%-100%的音量, 我建議縮小到35%-65%, 另外因為我當初命名時把soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap打反了, 我懷疑因此有什麼誤會, 因為從你傳過來的版本我看得出你使用的應該是剛被Alace revive時附近的時間的檔案, 後來做過許多改變, 現在覺得這個diff音效很怪, 而且finish類音效(soft-hitclap)驚人的多, 我要打出來會是一個很長的mod, 因此我直接改了你的diff(原本你的diff有備份), 請你聽聽看決定<你不想改哪些>, 非音效類的diff我只寫出mod並沒有改動, 所以我把音效mod和其他mod分開列出
-10%Vol (有些hitsound我是覺得可以大一點 soft太小聲有時會沒感覺 畢竟soft跟normal比起來聲音小了許多._.) , 聲音改得不錯o.o

注意: 現在soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap已經修正並且也修正了所有[Normal]和[Love]中的音效

- 如果有自己對於hitsound的看法, 你必須確定N:C1和S:C1切換時的綠線不在note上(通常是稍微提前), 因為玩家有可能會打早或打晚而造成怪音效. (通常大幅度的升降音量也會如此做, 不過這麼一來你可能要花非常多時間調整綠線, 所以這點先不管)
<00:16:669> (T) 改為S:C1
<00:28:705> (3) 加finish
<00:30:661> (6) *改為clap (為相對應音效檔改名之檔案, 以下類似情況省略說明, 並註明 * )
<00:32:944..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms >>我好像沒看到這條線o.o???
<00:41:096> (5) *改為clap
<00:43:379..> (T) 改為S:C1 (5) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (6) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
<01:01:964> (6) *改為clap
<01:04:247..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
- 這中間的地方我沒動, 因為你交錯使用S和S:C1, 但是S: clap聽起來很不適合歌, 請check一下
OK,我把clap鬼隱了 但我覺得S:finish還可以用 所以補留一些S:的Timeline :3
<02:18:270> (2) 加finish
<02:22:509> (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap
- 後面都沒動了, 一樣覺得S: clap不搭 ^
<04:21:205> (3) *中間改clap
- 嗯..我不想提太多意見, 不然三個diff hitsounds會變成幾乎一樣(如果都是我在提意見), 但我真的認為S: default不夠適合這首歌
沒關係的...我對hotsound苦手


<00:38:813> (1,2) 減spacing Done
<00:43:705> (6,1,2) 難讀, 減少spacing或使用你喜歡的解決辦法 分開(1,2)並重疊(2,3)
<01:04:247> (1,2) 猜測是誤擺? 擺成對稱 Done
<01:13:053> (1,2,3,4) 成菱形? Done 順便改了下(6)的位置
- 副歌部分的spacing好飄逸Orz
基本上只有01:36:205 (1,2) 和 01:32:781 (2,1) 關掉dis snap._. 連打部分是0.5x換combo和其他地方則改為正常的1.0
恩...有其他modder也覺得這裡不好會馬上改x_x
- 照要求刪除了spacing warning的SB
<03:47:455> (2,1,2,3,4) 非常難讀, 疊(2,1) 加大(1,2,3,4) spacing?
<04:05:226> (1,2) slider先, circle後, 否則就別做(2,3)的jump, 另外, 這附近太多reverse jump
互換位置了 另外04:05:716 (1) 和04:07:835 (3) 是jump 其他是開著snap做的' ˇ '

另外, 既然有了GD, 我會準備做Vocal/歌名/Mapper的Storyboard, 如果有特別的要求或喜好請告訴我
我沒意見~

thepianist wrote:

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:29:683 (5) - shift left a grid or so aha to line up with 4 Done~
01:31:966 (5,6) - have these slightly closer to each other! OK :3 have checked the distance
01:51:205 (1) - map to 1:52:183? Sorry no change >_< Considered if someone also points out

Thx for yout modding (>ω <)~~

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Halo~
maybe i just can give some suggestion~

as per your request:

Normal
*please don't do the jump style on normal diff...
this song has low bpm, and i think the largest spacing is acceptable as a normal, also i found several test-player between #5000 to #20000 with 85%-95% acc and no complain yet
00:45:006 (1) - this spinner start on 00:44:843? looks good, but i like game process at the moment more
01:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - please use 0.7x distance to same as other note distance. rearranged
02:49:574 (3) - delete this note. then add a slider to 02:50:226 end.
02:52:183 (3) - same as above, 02:52:835 to end.
02:53:487 (7,8) - this two notes change to the slider?
^ i think i know what you mean, redesign 02:48-02:54
02:55:770 (4) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1liL yes
03:10:444 (5) - delete this note?
03:10:770 (1) - move to 03:10:444 . and 03:11:748 to end. ?
03:12:400 (x) - add a circle?
^ i think i know what you mean, but instead i just change the spinner to start at 03:11:096
03:16:313 (1) - this spinner start on 03:15:987 ? no due to above fix to stay symmetrical
04:00:661 (1) - start on 04:00:335 ? about this one, yes
04:23:487 (1) - remove new combo no

Love
00:30:987 (6) - new combo
00:31:313 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:966 (4) - change to the slider? it's a circle to makes rhythm symmetrical to previous combo
00:33:270 (8) - new combo
00:33:922 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:205 (1) - new combo
00:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:813 (9) - new combo
00:39:140 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:422 (9) - new combo
00:41:748 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:379 (8) - new combo
00:44:357 (1) - remove new combo
- about combo colors suggestion, i know your meaning and those change were also solid (since the vocal's first voice is on red line in first two combo), but i'll keep it unchanged because the drum technically indicate it was starting on white line at <00:28:705> and the fact that i'm following drums more than vocal in this paragraph.
01:20:879 (1) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljQ this slider shape is because the lyric "meguri meguru", so i want a curvy one
01:25:770 (5) - new combo
01:26:096 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:379 (5) - new combo
rearrange some combo colors, no to <01:28:379> (5)
01:36:205 (6) - ^
01:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
yes and yes
02:20:553 (9) - new combo
02:20:879 (1) - remove new combo and change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljX rearranged slider shape
02:22:509 (1) - new combo
02:23:487 (1) - remove new combo
02:25:770 (4) - new combo
yes to this paragraph, since i followed nothing on 3rd/4th combo
*change your combo on the lyrics.. and some slider is ugly
fix some sliders with larger curve
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nice song... so GoodLuck~!!
starrrrr~~~

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

a... forget to tell you..
the preview point set at 01:29:357~
p/s: no Kud for this post..

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

SPOILER

Yuki's Hard
00:40:118 (5) - delete this cirlce? then add a slider to 00:40:770 end.?
Will change if somone also refer it >_<

00:43:705 (6) - new combo?
Done

00:44:194 (1) - remove the new combo and too far from the preveious note...
Done and make the its site change:3

00:49:574 (x) - add a circle and finish?
Done

01:00:987 (6) - delete this cirlce? then add a slider to 01:01:640 end.?
Will change if somone also refer it

01:06:531 (6) - new combo?
Done

01:07:672 (1) - remove the new combo and add a 1 tick back?
Done but what means for adding a 1 tick back o.o? If it means add a reverse ,done

01:17:292 (7) - new combo?
No change here maybe it needs discussion

01:24:792 (6) - change to the slider? 01:25:444 to end.
Seems good but...If I put it stacked some notes will be covered so no change >.<

You can see something tragedy in it

01:32:455 (1) - remove new combo
Done

01:34:411 (1) - i can't see this note. ;-;
Change site instead>_<

01:36:531 (2) - too far from the preveious note..
Flip Horizontally o_o"

01:37:183 (3) - if your preveious note is jump style. then this note add a new combo..
Done

01:40:770 (5) - new combo?
Done

02:45:990 (7) - ^
No change here and issue too

03:05:229 (2) - too far from the preveious note..
03:05:881 (3) - if your preveious note is jump style. then this note add a new combo
Same with 01:36:531 (2) & 01:37:183 (3)

03:09:468 (5) - new combo?
Done

03:37:509 (1) - too far from the preveious note.. and remove the new combo
03:38:161 (8) - add a new combo
New combo to separate the jump 0.0~

03:45:499 (1) - remove new combo?
Done

03:47:455 (1) - ^ and too close from the preveious note
Remove NC but it needs more mod to decide to stack or not

03:53:814 (6) - new combo
Done

04:07:835 (3) - too far from the preveious note.
Change site :3
04:14:683 (5) - new combo
Done

Thanks for modding ' ˇ ' ~

KRZY wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
01:25:118 (X) - Add a note.
01:25:444 (X) - Add a note.
Prefer to connect for a slider :3

01:33:922 (4,1) - Spacing makes the latter note very difficult to read...use consistent spacing please
Decrease 1 reverse for 01:33:922 (4) and make enough spacing to read
(just like the arrangement between 01:31:313 (1) ~01:32:781 (8) )

03:35:879 (2) - Using both a clap and a finish does not work very well, I suggest removing the clap.
Done :3

03:36:857 (5) - ^
Done :3

04:00:335 ~ 04:05:226 - Is this break necessary? I suggest mapping it o.o
There are two overlapping vocals and I map it or not imo:
03:18:596 - 03:22:183 >> I map it because it is continous
04:00:335 ~ 04:05:226 >> It's weird to play when it turns to refrain rapidly

Thanks for your modding ^^

ZLOdeuka wrote:

BPM 184,000
OFFSET 2 646
fix it.I rechecked.

KRZY wrote:

[Normal]
03:21:531 (X) - Add a note. ok
03:22:183 (X) - ^ ok
03:22:509 (X) - ^ ok
03:29:357 (X) - ^ ok

[Love]
00:42:563 (2,4) - Remove these notes and
00:43:216 (X) - Add a note here? Fits the music better imo
00:48:433 (X) - Add a note here and
00:48:759 (5) - Remove this note.
i know yours fits the music better, but i'm trying not to use triplets the whole songs...need more consideration
01:11:748 (4) - Make this slider a short repeating one instead of a non-repeating one to represent the snare drum?

SPOILER

ok
01:14:357 (4) - ^ ok
02:30:009 (2) - ^ no due to pattern design
03:35:226 (4) - ^ ok
01:16:966 (X) - Add a note no
01:17:129 (X) - ^ no
01:18:270 (X) - ^ ok
01:22:346 (X) - ^ ok
01:24:955 (X) - ^ ok
01:27:563 (X) - ^ ok
01:40:607 (X) - ^ ok and break (6) into circles
01:48:433 (X) - ^ ok
02:24:303 (X) - ^ ok
02:35:063 (6) - Remove this note and
02:35:390 (X) - Add a note here ok
02:51:042 (X) - ^ instead repeat 1 more time
02:53:650 (X) - ^ instead rearrange a bit
03:09:303 (X) - ^ no due to pattern design
03:27:563 (X) - ^ ok
03:30:172 (X) - ^ ok
03:30:661 (X) - ^ ok
04:07:509 (X) - ^ i think it makes too many notes then
04:19:737 (X) - ^ i think it makes too many notes then

Beautiful song TwT

Star!

_Kiva wrote:

OVERALL, this is a good map :3
主要没有什么问题
以下纯属建议..为了增加图的美观可能有点nazi
因为还很多事情做所以只能mod hard..抱歉

wanhyrzh wrote:

这歌太美了...
整体的感觉还不错，作为第一张图真的挺不错...相比起来我的第一张就……远目
下面只是一些建议lol
改不改随意XD

General:
1.去掉countdown吧，挺碍眼的（喂 you're right, 我會做一下countdown skin (喂filesize要無限上漲啦)
2.去掉break段的letterbox？ done (請教了學姐才知道這功能在幹嘛, 當初為了讓歌詞對齊黑線還花了不少retry..)
3.KIAI TIME的起止时间应该都在长白线（重音）上...？ 修正了Normal, Hard是GD又有些mod所以等他改完我再check

Skin:
1.skip太小了...调大些？ 嗯..考慮考慮, 畢竟skip不算太重要的element
2.sectionpass和fail用默认的太大了...调小一些，顺便换换颜色？k. 喂filesize要無限上漲啦x2
3.考虑加些skin什么的...（最建议加sliderball和warningarrow...这两个真的很不搭调OTL）k. 喂filesize要無限上漲啦x3
4.话说circle.png是做啥用的？誤會, 忘記刪了, 等增加skin element後會resubmit
5.spinner-circle的中心点有点偏离中心了...最好拿张默认的skin来参照一下修正？ 實際上呢, 他偏了1px, 而且無法修正 (因為畫不到0.5px去啊囧), 遊戲時應該是沒問題的

SB:
1.建议不要用au_a0178042/au_lovefantasy和sb_lovefantasy来替代vocal，而是把它们移到vocal下面，然后vocal不消失...这样显得构图更丰满些？
2.你自己的难度都不用sb_lovefantasy么...？我建议都用上吧XD
SB design我得考慮考慮..不過因為BG的關係確不太好arrange..

Normal:
挺好的，没什么问题...

Insane: 這是Hard啊淚目
这个节奏挺舒服的...证据就是ACC比Hard要高很多（喂
Circle Size+1？我觉得你的排布适合大点的圈...更好看些（殴
想多找些人拿feedback, 畢竟我認為我給的spacing算小, 而且這又是最高的難度
star~

1. circle.png remove and full submit
2. enable 'Display storyboard in front of combo fire'
3. the reverse-arrow in your skin has an odd direction x_x
4. bg.png 1.1MB used jpg instead can save a lot of space
5. lyric1.png there is a blank between け and る? (same in lyric24.png)

1. move the quoted code from [Yuki's Hard].osu to .osb. Pay attention that don't copy mine cuz that would lead to the lose of blanks
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbwhite.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,1
   F,0,116096,117400,0,0.2
   F,0,117400,122618,0.2
   F,0,122618,123596,0.2,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbtitle_jp.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,0.64
   M,0,116096,117400,139,120,161,120
   F,0,116096,117400,0,1
   F,0,117400,122618,1
   M,0,122618,123596,161,120,151,120
   F,0,122618,123596,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbtitle_en.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,0.52
   M,0,116096,117400,195,150,173,150
   F,0,116096,117400,0,1
   F,0,117400,122618,1
   M,0,122618,123596,173,150,182,150
   F,0,122618,123596,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbvocal.png",320,240
   S,0,118053,,0.6
   M,0,118053,118216,0,215,127,215
   F,0,118053,118705,0,1
   M,0,118216,118314,127,215,147,215
   M,0,118314,118412,147,215,157,215
   M,0,118412,118510,157,215,162,215
   M,0,118510,118608,162,215,165,215
   M,0,118608,118705,165,215,167,215
   F,0,118705,120009,1
   M,0,120009,120661,167,215,195,215
   F,0,120009,120661,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbsb_lovefantasy.png",320,240
   M,0,120009,,167,230
   S,0,120009,,0.6
   F,0,120009,120661,0,1
   F,0,120661,121966,1
   M,0,121966,122618,167,230,177,230
   F,0,121966,122618,1,0

1. 00:23:324 (T) - move the hitsound-sample setting to the uninherited section and remove this
2. 01:27:086 (T) - unused section
3. 01:45:661 (3,4) - suggesting keep the spacing like 01:44:357 (3,1).
4. 03:10:444 (1,2,3) - i'm really supporting this, a bit confusing with a low AR but should be fine
5. 03:13:053 (2,3) - ^
6. 03:17:517 (T) - unused section
7. 04:25:933 (T) - a bit early for a star-stream here, starting KIAI at 04:26:096 and end it at 04:26:178 could be better. same thing happens at 01:54:629

1. 00:16:669 (T) - move the hitsound-sample setting to the uninherited section and remove this
2. 01:53:976 (T) - same thing like 04:25:933 (T) in [Love]
3. 04:27:890 (T) - ^
4. 02:59:747 (T) - remove and start the KIAI at 03:00:009

1. 04:25:933 (T) - just U know Y
2. 01:54:629 (T) - ^

_Kiva wrote:

[HARD] [Love]
00:44:357 (1) - left 1 grid (1,2) left 1 grid.
00:44:357 (1,5) - whistle instead remove the whistle on 00:43:053 (5)
01:00:661 (3,4) - right 1 grid 這邊是刻意的
01:07:183 (8,9) - 可以和3,4平行 調整了1,2,3,4,8,9
01:13:053 (1) - 这个做一个ctrl+r不是正好吗lol 這邊也是刻意的, 再有人提到不適會考慮改
01:14:357 (4) - 间距变成了1.0X 虽然变动很微小但是保持0.9还是更好看吧:3 1:10-1:15 由於是一個vocal的小轉折我做了一個很小的spacing change, 後面兩句又換回來
01:18:596 (2) - 微小的spacing fixed
01:49:900 (3) - ^ 這邊是刻意的
02:22:183 (5) - ^ 欸? 這個spacing沒有不對呀0.0
02:22:509 (1) - 可以左移一点保持三角形 slight rearranged
02:37:835 (2) - 末尾clap ok
02:54:140 (6) - 微小的spacing slight rearranged
03:10:933 (2,3) - 可以考虑与1重叠 這邊也是刻意的, 由於屬於比較會被念的部分, 再有一個抱怨就改
03:28:705 (10) - 上移一点 why 0.0
03:56:422 (1) - new combo? ok
04:07:672 (6) - tiny spacing 左移1 pixel (喂這個也太nazi了)

歌好好听> < 而且还很送分

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. circle.png remove and full submit k.
2. enable 'Display storyboard in front of combo fire' my bad Orz..always turn it off..
3. the reverse-arrow in your skin has an odd direction x_x working on a new one
4. bg.png 1.1MB used jpg instead can save a lot of space k.
5. lyric1.png there is a blank between け and る? (same in lyric24.png) in fact it's the font itself, decreased spacing

[StoryBoard]:

1. move the quoted code from [Yuki's Hard].osu to .osb. Pay attention that don't copy mine cuz that would lead to the lose of blanks
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbwhite.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,1
   F,0,116096,117400,0,0.2
   F,0,117400,122618,0.2
   F,0,122618,123596,0.2,0
   ^this is not done because it has to be in lower layer to other storyboard elements, and elements in .osb seems to be in higher layer compared to .osu, in fact this is the reason i put all these in .osu instead
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbtitle_jp.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,0.64
   M,0,116096,117400,139,120,161,120
   F,0,116096,117400,0,1
   F,0,117400,122618,1
   M,0,122618,123596,161,120,151,120
   F,0,122618,123596,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbtitle_en.png",320,240
   S,0,116096,,0.52
   M,0,116096,117400,195,150,173,150
   F,0,116096,117400,0,1
   F,0,117400,122618,1
   M,0,122618,123596,173,150,182,150
   F,0,122618,123596,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbvocal.png",320,240
   S,0,118053,,0.6
   M,0,118053,118216,0,215,127,215
   F,0,118053,118705,0,1
   M,0,118216,118314,127,215,147,215
   M,0,118314,118412,147,215,157,215
   M,0,118412,118510,157,215,162,215
   M,0,118510,118608,162,215,165,215
   M,0,118608,118705,165,215,167,215
   F,0,118705,120009,1
   M,0,120009,120661,167,215,195,215
   F,0,120009,120661,1,0
   ^done above in every diff.
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sbsb_lovefantasy.png",320,240
   M,0,120009,,167,230
   S,0,120009,,0.6
   F,0,120009,120661,0,1
   F,0,120661,121966,1
   M,0,121966,122618,167,230,177,230
   F,0,121966,122618,1,0
   ^this paragraph is not done since it's diff-specific

[Love]:

1. 00:23:324 (T) - move the hitsound-sample setting to the uninherited section and remove this k. my bad
2. 01:27:086 (T) - unused section deleted.
3. 01:45:661 (3,4) - suggesting keep the spacing like 01:44:357 (3,1). nice.
4. 03:10:444 (1,2,3) - i'm really supporting this, a bit confusing with a low AR but should be fine
5. 03:13:053 (2,3) - ^ i'm really happy to hear that, thanks
6. 03:17:517 (T) - unused section deleted
7. 04:25:933 (T) - a bit early for a star-stream here, starting KIAI at 04:26:096 and end it at 04:26:178 could be better. same thing happens at 01:54:629 nice.

[Normal]:

1. 04:25:933 (T) - just U know Y
2. 01:54:629 (T) - ^ k.

star~

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hard:
说实话这个难度的节奏打着有点奇怪...各种长短不一confusing的折返slider lol...嘛不过打多几遍也没那么怪了
其实我个人感觉最大的问题可能是在于节奏下得太短促了，特别是各种短slider和各种间歇泉式的节奏...主要是这歌是那种比较悠长的感觉，总觉得和这节奏不是很搭调...不过是我个人感觉而已，没什么XD 我大部分note都跟著vocal所以感覺會怪怪就是...
HP-1?有点高了。 OK
下面我说一些试了几次还是觉得比较怪的地方...
00:45:009(4) 强烈建议不要stack...按了好多次都没按准OTL
Change site

01:12:237(6) 加一个折返？
feel weird

02:36:368(1) ^？
add :3

02:40:933(5) ^？
feel weird

03:34:574(x) 加个note？
add :3

04:05:716(1) 这个真的有些unexpectable....
o.o

Colin Hou wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]:

1. 00:16:669 (T) - move the hitsound-sample setting to the uninherited section and remove this
   Done
   
   
2. 01:53:976 (T) - same thing like 04:25:933 (T) in [Love]
3. 04:27:890 (T) - ^
   Both done :3
   
   
4. 02:59:747 (T) - remove and start the KIAI at 03:00:009
   Done

also delete some uneeded same timing section to previous , it's easy to separate the same timing sections after osu b1800

wanhyrzh wrote:

01:12:237(6) 加一个折返？

a0178042 wrote:

feel weird

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!


[Yuki's Hard]
01:15:335 (3,4) - Move 1 grid up Done~
01:29:031 (1) - Start at 01:29:357 Done~
02:45:990 (7) - New Combo No change also 01:17:292 (7) continuous combo maybe fitter
02:57:729 (1) - Start at 02:58:053 Done~

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[General]
- The .mp3 is very long, maybe cut or fade it out at the end
i'll consider cutting the last 30s, but i'm not cutting the preludes.

[Normal]
00:45:009 (1) - Start spinner at 00:44:683
03:02:618 (6) - new combo yes
03:16:313 (1) - Start spinner at 03:15:987
no to spinners since i sync with drums more and want to control gameflow with those 1-beat spacing from spinners.

[Love]
00:49:900 - Map this break? no
02:39:466 ^ ??? i'm beaten at this break mapped

Very nice,
Have a Star~

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:34:574 (2) - add a hitwhistle, so it follows the pattern ok
2:20:553 (5) - delete this hitwhistle at it's end, sounds quite better ok
2:28:705 (8,1) - spaw new combos ok
2:54:140 (6) - i don't really like the idea of silencing this note, how about deleting 173976 and 174303 timing sections? ok
3:22:835 (1,3) - spaw new combos ok
3:56:748 (3) - a whistle instead of a clap sounds way better ok
3:59:357 (4) - ^ ok

[Love]
0:23:487 (1) - this spinner should end at 0:26:096, like on the rest of difficulties ok
0:30:009 (4) - it misses a hitwhistle at 0:30:172 on the timeline. /me is stupid and can't explain what does he mean fixed
1:22:835 (1,3) - swap new combos well i sync with lyrics there
1:37:183 (1) - this new combo isn't really necessary ok
2:29:357 (1) - add a hitwhistle at it's beginning ok
4:21:531 (1) - i've never liked using new combos like this. sorry but i'm keeping them atm
4:22:835 (1) - ^ ^

storyboard:
221748 - 1.5x spacing...o.o i'd suggest using something like 'speed up', because '1.5x spacing' doesn't look cool.
i'll consider this

i like maps like those, they're original and show something that's not seen so often
good job! /

rEdo wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
0:37:835 (5) - i kinda miss a hitclap at the ends of those sliders. ;w;
Σ(>Δ <"")....Add clap~

3:30:009 (1,2) - swap new combos
Change~●▽●

3:37:183 (6,1) - uh...this is at least weird o.o rearrange this part
change (6) to a circle and reduce the distance of jump

3:37:509 (1,2) - swap new combos
Change~●▽●

3:50:227 (3) - new combo (take a look at previous choruses, you will see why)
Done~

4:05:716 (1) - this new combo isn't really necessary
4:08:487 (1) - ^
remove

Thanks for modding~

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
loveFantasy叫我mod [Yuki's Hard] 所以只有这个难度

[Yuki's Hard]
Sorry for long long post

>.<

00:28:379 (1,2) - 为啥要stack... 我觉得把2放到1和3中间比较好
Make the shape

00:28:705 (3,4) - 跳的不是非常make sense... 不过也还可以接受
^ (Horizontal flip + Reverse)

00:30:498 - 加note?
If the modders mention, too

00:30:661 (6) - 既然前后都是关于中间Y轴对称的，这个circle最好也放到Y轴上feel
feel weird put on Y axis , but change site to keep distance snap

00:30:987 (1,2) - 同00:28:379 (1,2)
00:31:313 (3,4) - 同00:28:705 (3,4)

00:36:205 (3) - 减1 repeat?
No.

00:39:629 (3) - 这稍微有点artificial difficulty >.> 按正常方式来转180度?
ATTACH[lf_sldr.JPG]
00:42:238 (3) - ^
Both change~

01:07:672 (3) - 最后一个repeat +clap
Done

01:09:140 (5) - 建议位置与01:07:672 (3)水平对称
Distance between (3.4) will be different with (5.6)

01:10:444 (2) - slider开始只用clap就好了,去掉finish 有点吵
Done

01:11:422 (5) - +clap. clap是normal组的底音 没有clap只有finish不好听...
Normal-clap doesn't fit this song

01:13:053 (1,2,3,4) - 你是想做菱形么0.0 如果是的话可以考虑用下面的坐标

01:13:053 (1) - x 152 y 112
01:13:379 (2) - x 96 y 208
01:13:705 (3) - x 152 y 304
01:14:031 (4) - x 208 y 208

make symmetry from 01:13:379 (2) - 01:15:335 (3)

01:16:640 (6) - 开头去掉clap 结尾+clap
Done

01:18:270 (10) - 去掉中间那个repeat的finish...?
No.

01:35:390 (8) - 开始+clap
Done

01:36:205 (1,2) - why jump here 0.0 如果是我map的话我可能会stack 做成DS的点或者slider也不错 但是这个jump... 抱歉我无法理解
stack instead

02:19:248 (6,7) - 换长slider...?
Only change (6) to slider . Maintain (7) for a circle

02:25:770 (3) - 减1 repeat?
No.

02:29:520 (4) - 建议换成02:29:520 - circle 然后 02:29:683 - 跟vocal的长slider 后面那段感觉有点空
Change

SPOILER

02:45:338 (6) - 开头去掉clap 结尾+clap
Done

02:46:968 (10) - 去掉中间那个repeat的finish...?
No.

02:50:555 (5,6) - 5 去clap, 6 +clap
Done

02:53:162 (4,5) - 4 去clap, 5 +clap
Done

03:04:903 (1,2) - why jump here again 0.0
stack

后面还好点>.> -.-

04:00:661 - 04:05:226 why break...?
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=41651&p=770219#p770219

Nice skin & SB =w= And star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Heyy ~ Skin check by request >w<

Skin;
- For reverse arrow try this
[attachment=0:003fa]reversearrow.png[/attachment:003fa] that's a great one, thank you >v<
- The play-skip is too small, make it bigger done
- Hit 300 is not well centered done to all hit blahblah elements :3
- The black glow on the hitcircle overlay is cut remaked
- I personally don't like the font you are using for the elements I'd suggest using a simplier one like the one for the lyrics
i'm keeping at the moment it since my friend and me likes it and the lyrics font doesn't fit the spinner, need more feedbacks
- For slider ball I really don't know what you could use, maybe the default one but grayed out ?
Orz..i'll think about other solutions

SB;
- Some elements have unnecessary transparency, most/all lyrics and some of the other elements, that makes the pic bigger in size
i'll fixed this but since it may take hours so not now

* Star ~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Seriously, you have a unnesescary transparent space in your lyric SB. So you should cut the transparent space, or it'll be lag in ancient PC all fixed now
* You should re-make the skin elements, some shadow are cut off fixed

Normal
00:37:835 (5,6) - IMO, this is hard to click for average player
00:39:140 (1) - No jump in normal diff please rearrange (5,6,1)
00:41:748 (5) - Activate new combo yes
01:20:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern are random, change something better? change (3) into slider
01:31:313 (1) - Inconsistent spacing it's a bit nazi... fixed
01:33:922 (3) - Activate new combo yes
01:39:140 (6) - ^ no
01:51:205 (6,7) - Don't stack these in slider. It's confusing for average player yes
02:26:748 (5) - Activate new combo maybe not
02:30:661 (4) - ^ fixed instead on (5)
03:58:705 (2) - Don't stack these in slider. It's confusing for average player
04:17:618 (3) - ^
04:20:227 (3) - ^ about these, i think i'll keep them, since this is a Normal not Easy

Love
* At beginning of map, the distance spacing was 0,9x and other was 1,0x please re-spacing them
this is intentional and i don't think they influence gameplay so i'll keep most of them
01:16:803 (x) - Add note? no for consistency
01:16:966 (x) - ^ yes but instead change (1) into slider starting from here
01:20:879 (1) - Ugly slider matching up lyrics, won't fix
01:29:520 (1) - New combo for prevent any spinner bug
02:27:726 (1) - ^
03:36:531 (1) - ^
03:39:140 (1) - ^
04:23:813 (1) - ^ all fixed

I feel sleepy because of this song hope that's a good thing (?)

winber1 wrote:

Sorry for slow mod :/, haven't really been wanting to look at my queue. now i have two other things to mod D:
/lazy

Love

00:49:574(break) - wut... why is there a break here lol. oh whatever.. < -- this should go in a general section, but i'm too lazy to do that. the feeling to this break is individual-based (many feedbacks said kay when many said map please), and i said keep
01:37:835(3,4) - not extremely clear and feels a bit weird. try something like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ceba4]screenshot033.jpg[/attachment:ceba4]

then put claps at 01:37:672 and at 01:37:998 and remove claps on combo 2 and 5 solid suggestion, but i like what they are now :/
01:48:270(2) - move 1/4 tick back and fix spacing. Remove clap from 01:47:944 and put one at 01:48:107. Sounds better instead remove whistles on (2,4)
02:46:966(1,2,3) - doesn't really seem to fit that well imo, but it doesn't matter. change (3) into clap
03:00:498(2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5.. 03:06:368) - wow this feels really awkward to me. It sometimes follows vocals and it sometimes follows something that doesn't seem to exist. The drums aren't doing anything this weird.
sticked to vocal more now
03:10:444(1,2) - it looks like the repeat slider will repeat 3 times, which it doesn't.
03:13:053(2,3) - ^ i like them
03:45:661(4,5,6,7) - I feel like it usually sounds better if this type of groupings of two started on a red tick no a white tick. Sometimes it feels correct or it fits the song when it's on the white tick, but this one feels much more awkward lol... the other ones are fine/sound good. removed finish on (2,4,5)

Normal

00:37:835(5,6) - it's the only place where player needs to press 1/4 tick after the last beat, not including those repeat sliders that last 1/2 a beat. perhaps you could change it.. or not. fix in Leorda's mod
01:46:966(1) - add finish is a bit noisy :/
03:09:466(2,3,4,5) - does not seem to fit highlighting the vocal, and i cant think of a better hitsound
03:17:618(spinner) - clap instead of finish fixed

Nice map :3

Leorda wrote:

SPOILER

NI HAO

Yuki's Hard
00:30:661 (6) - Activate new combo
00:30:987 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:37:835 (5) - Inconsistent spacing
Fix

00:39:629 (3) - ^
Fix

00:41:096 (5) - Activate new combo
00:41:422 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:42:238 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
Fix

00:43:379 (5) - Activate new combo
00:43:705 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:44:194 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
small jump

02:21:205 (3) - ^
Fix

03:25:933 (2) - ^
Adjust the patterns from 03:22:835 (1) - 03:25:118 (1) left 1 grid

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER

Yuki's Hard

01:31:313(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what.. the... this spacing makes no sense to me. it's harder to read first of all, and also this is kiai time, and I would expect that (if not the same spacing) that it would be larger spacing, not smaller spacing.
Adjust x_x

02:31:640(3) - naziing... could you make the slider end in the same place as 02:30:661?
Done :3

02:40:933(5) - sounds better if you start this slider at at 02:40:607 and end at 02:41:096. Then you can fix spacing if you'd like.
Done
02:46:966(10) - finishes do not fit imo.
No change temporary o_o"

03:44:357(1...) - same as 01:31:313. I would not decrease spacing like this. you can at least move combo 5 and 6 further apart, cuz it looks like they are 1/4 apart. at least imo.
adjust

04:05:716(3) - you haven't had a jump like this before, and i just did not expect it at all. If you're not going to stick with the same spacing, i would recommend you at least place it a bit closer than it is now.
Fix the shape and pattern

C R E A M wrote:

Hello. I want this one to be ranked. Awesome song~ I love it.
Actually I planned to make this one as beatmap... after my WIP one is finished.

Seems this one is too long. There is a shorter one (tv size) which is used in MAIKAZE Anime.
Anyway, my star is here~

loveFantasy wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

Hello. I want this one to be ranked. Awesome song~ I love it.
Actually I planned to make this one as beatmap... after my WIP one is finished.

Seems this one is too long. There is a shorter one (tv size) which is used in MAIKAZE Anime.
Anyway, my star is here~

yep, this is a full version of the song, i did consider making tv size one, but the final decision is as you see
thank you for the star

• Offset -5ms

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:13:053 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:23:487 (1)
   02:37:183 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:45:009 (1)

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:51:205 (1) - make it end at 01:54:792
   03:36:857 (5,6) - reverse them? that jump feels weird, the regular pattern looks so much better...
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   I know what you're doing with those 1/4 at the beginning and the end :>
   They're fine, but 00:43:705 (2,3) is the only one that's really easy to misread due to the song (i could explain but it would take a while), so please fix it.
   Also, 69 Unsnapped notes.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:23:487 (1) - add the Finish like in Normal
   02:13:053 (1) - ^ (or if you don't like the Finish at least remove it from Normal as well)
   04:23:813 (1) - ^
   01:16:966 - add a beat here. It's easy to misread 01:17:129 (1) because of this.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset -5ms

Not sure LF Change it or not . 如果還沒換的話請幫我換一下吧

- Yuki's Hard:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:51:205 (1) - make it end at 01:54:792
   Done~
   03:36:857 (5,6) - reverse them? that jump feels weird, the regular pattern looks so much better...
   Change
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   I know what you're doing with those 1/4 at the beginning and the end :>
   o.o?
   They're fine, but 00:43:705 (2,3) is the only one that's really easy to misread due to the song (i could explain but it would take a while), so please fix it.
   Fix . Also make the previous circle(1) and this slider (2) into a reverse slider
   I think it's better to play now "
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also, 69 Unsnapped notes.
   Done~

Thx for modding :3~~

• 01:39:050 (T) - useless timeline, delete?
  02:26:096 (4) - Remove whistle?
  03:08:161 (1) - Starts at 03:07:835?

• 00:45:661 (6) - Add whistle end or add a repeat?
  00:48:270 (5) - ^
  01:05:390 (4,5) - Stacking
  01:18:270 (10) - Remove the finish at repeat?
  01:25:770 (1) - Stacking
  02:24:140 (X) - add a note?
  03:22:835 (1) - add clap?
  03:34:574 (5) - clap end?

• 01:37:835 (3,4) - =_=b the spacing is really confusing
  03:13:053 (2,3,4) - ^
  04:02:618 (11) - move to y-axis?

Selee wrote:

[Normal]

• 01:39:050 (T) - useless timeline, delete? fixed
  02:26:096 (4) - Remove whistle? rearrange whistle in this combo instead
  03:08:161 (1) - Starts at 03:07:835? fixed

also rearranged some hitsound after 03:08:161..

[Love]

Circle size-1? I have to keep my eyes on notes rather listen to the music...Changing the circle size would not affect points either... no

• 01:37:835 (3,4) - =_=b the spacing is really confusing bpm is low so i think that's acceptable
  03:13:053 (2,3,4) - ^ same reason
  04:02:618 (11) - move to y-axis? rearranged and placed on y-axis now

Nicely done, star

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset -5ms

i need to discuss this with more people, since many BATs/MATs/modders who i know them are good at timing has different opinion (they're all +5 ~ -5 though), it's changed to 5224 atm.
- Normal:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:13:053 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:23:487 (1) done
   02:37:183 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:45:009 (1) done

- Love:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:23:487 (1) - add the Finish like in Normal done
   02:13:053 (1) - ^ (or if you don't like the Finish at least remove it from Normal as well) done
   04:23:813 (1) - ^ < remove whistle..it has finish on it already
   01:16:966 - add a beat here. It's easy to misread 01:17:129 (1) because of this.done

Selee wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

Just some suggestions XD

• 00:45:661 (6) - Add whistle end or add a repeat?
  prefer add whistle (both sounds good)
  
  00:48:270 (5) - ^
  ^
  
  01:05:390 (4,5) - Stacking
  Done
  
  01:18:270 (10) - Remove the finish at repeat?
  ok...since lots of modders advise it
  
  01:25:770 (1) - Stacking
  Done
  
  02:24:140 (X) - add a note?
  Add
  
  03:22:835 (1) - add clap?
  Done
  
  03:34:574 (5) - clap end?
  Done

明天換我生日

loveFantasy wrote:

ok it's 4/10 now

guest diff updated and Happy Birthday!

Alace wrote:

<Love>
01:37:832 (3,4) - bad spacing IMO fixed since many had mentioned and now you

題外話,因為歌曲慢可能不造成攻略上的問題,不過其實每個短來回slider的次數都有點不太一樣,玩起來不太直觀
要一直看著後面note的縮圈圈來判斷該鬆手的時機,這問題我在2009年作map也常有,有個人跟我提過後我在之後
作map都會特別住意一下了 talked on irc, thanks for suggestion

Alace wrote:

<Yuki>
01:03:919 (5) - i think this is a bad spacing, is it better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76575 ?

fix
抱歉...可能誤動到了....>_<(面壁思過

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Alace wrote:

<Yuki>
01:03:919 (5) - i think this is a bad spacing, is it better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76575 ?

fix
抱歉...可能誤動到了....>_<(面壁思過

thanks for modding :3