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Sasha Asuka - Meguri Meguru

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loveFantasy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月12日 at 下午 02:08:26

Artist: Sasha Asuka
Title: Meguri Meguru
Source: Touhou
Tags: maikaze c75 musou kakyou tokine a0178042 Komeiji Yuki
BPM: 92
Filesize: 11682kb
Play Time: 04:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Love (4.63 stars, 514 notes)
  2. Normal (2.79 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Yuki's Hard (4.35 stars, 404 notes)
Download: Sasha Asuka - Meguri Meguru
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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沙紗飛鳥 / 廻り巡る
last full submit: 8/11 (fix some storyboard issue, need re-download)

[Normal] by me
[Hard] by Komeiji Yuki
[Love] by me (harder, but not insane)

enjoy
NanaDesu
:) :)
SinclareC
good song and he did good in his first map, please support it
KRZY
Hi :3

This is a modding ticket. Feel free to contact me whenever you finish this map, and I will mod the map as soon as possible XD
Heatherfield
>~< star
perfectcamel
Good map, and song is great, too.
fluidwind
nice song, nice map

keep on working! I'm looking foward this ranked! :)
joejoe321321
Good map.
I have some suggestions, which can be ignored if you think they're not appropriate.

[Easy]
03:13:70 (2) : It is behind (1) and may not be seen clearly by newbies.

[Love]
03:03:11 (8,9): move them to 03:03:27 and set (9) to 3-beat long, add a new circle (10) at 03:04:25
03:03:92 (1,2,3) delete them and set a new starting circle at 03:04:58

03:10:44 (1) set it to 5-beat long
03:13:05 (2) set it to 5-beat long

That's all. Again, good job.
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

joejoe321321 wrote:

Good map.
I have some suggestions, which can be ignored if you think they're not appropriate.

[Easy]
03:13:70 (2) : It is behind (1) and may not be seen clearly by newbies.

[Love]
03:03:11 (8,9): move them to 03:03:27 and set (9) to 3-beat long, add a new circle (10) at 03:04:25
03:03:92 (1,2,3) delete them and set a new starting circle at 03:04:58

03:10:44 (1) set it to 5-beat long
03:13:05 (2) set it to 5-beat long

That's all. Again, good job.
fixed some part
also thanks for star :)
fakewen_old
:roll: :roll:
good map
LAsTwaY_old
唬王ㄉㄉ好棒ㄚ
LAsTwaY_old
哎呀忘了給星星
arwang123
DADA :)
Tonoko
hi

這幾天考試很多 非常忙 抱歉來晚了

首先

[easy]
這個easy可能被挑太難 說不准 相對節奏還是比較多變的. 建議ar再弄低2格 更像個easy或許不會被挑 還有一些小jump在裏面 這個我就不說了 希望不被挑就好. 一些slider形狀好好調一下 如00:43:069 (7) - 01:14:370 (2) - 02:18:602 (2) -
00:44:373 (1) - 意義不明的new combo?
01:49:583 (1) - ^

至於[love]
基本都在規則以內完成 error倒沒有 但是感覺不太好.

我需要召喚迪西哥.

star
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Tonoko wrote:

hi

這幾天考試很多 非常忙 抱歉來晚了

首先

[easy]
這個easy可能被挑太難 說不准 相對節奏還是比較多變的. 建議ar再弄低2格 更像個easy或許不會被挑 還有一些小jump在裏面 這個我就不說了 希望不被挑就好. 一些slider形狀好好調一下 如00:43:069 (7) - 01:14:370 (2) - 02:18:602 (2) -
00:44:373 (1) - 意義不明的new combo?
01:49:583 (1) - ^

至於[love]
基本都在規則以內完成 error倒沒有 但是感覺不太好.

我需要召喚迪西哥.

star
fixed most of the suggestion

感謝星星和MOD
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
When it shows "1.5x spacing" it's look invisible, move it to center
Oh...resize your BG, it must be 800x600 or 1024x768 (but i advise you change it on another BG maybe touhou picture)

I find some..may be it is help you


And else. Kiai must be it one time in each diff

Easy
03:06:205 (1) - new combo
03:39:137 (1,2,3,4) - don't do jumps, it's easy

Love
Try circle size = 2
01:34:253 (1,1,1) - don't do this
01:38:491 (7) - and this (do it how spacing tell you)
01:47:947 (1,1,1) - i think you anderstand
02:39:463 - strange break time..it's stopped the game process
02:59:352 - add circle

Map looks random, look on sliders, on their evenness, same with circles
It must be beauty and playable

Good luck, star~
yongtw123
哈囉
我把字體弄大一點好讀

整體
Offset 偏掉了,但是這首歌本身很慢,所以很難測.
BPM修正成92.000, offset 5227
記得勾選snap to new timing

整體節奏有待接強
Easy先不說 Love就實在不怎麼好
很多地方不用放1/16的卻放了
記得一點: 不要為了增加難度而放很多1/16連打
要跟背景鼓聲就好好跟
要跟歌詞也好好跟
兩個都跟那就跟著耳朵走
我真的會建議你重新map一次試試

音效部分除非有特別強調
不然soft-whistle要有規則的放
例如00:29:357 (2,4) - 這就放對了
簡單說是放在每小節的第2.4白線
把不規則的地方整理一下吧

[Easy]
1. 盡量不要改變slider velocity
2. 節奏偏難

00:41:748 (5) - new combo
01:00:661 (2) - 這鼓聲也太明顯了 選其一1)用soft-whistle就好 2)把鼓聲弄小聲些
01:39:140 (6) - !!?? 簡單難度不要這樣大幅度的改變slider velocity, 而且這裡何必用x0.5BPM呢?
02:27:727 (7) - 我覺得repeat一次就好了
03:00:009 (1) - 何必x0.5BPM咧
03:13:705 (2) - 聽起來怪怪的 不知道是跟著什麼
03:30:498 (6) - 簡單難度盡量不用藍線 若不得已請用slider帶過去
03:33:107 (2) - 同上
03:35:716 (6) - 同上

[Love]
為什麼比較難的難度反而slider velocity才x1.2???
East都x1.8了耶?

01:38:488 (7) - 不要把slider藏起來

==========

把節奏好好重新規劃一下吧
倒是有一點不錯
你排列的技巧不算差

加油吧!
屆時我再回來看看
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
When it shows "1.5x spacing" it's look invisible, move it to center
Oh...resize your BG, it must be 800x600 or 1024x768 (but i advise you change it on another BG maybe touhou picture)

I find some..may be it is help you
i'll find accurate BG while i have time, thx for suggestion!

And else. Kiai must be it one time in each diff
add one in EASY

Easy
03:06:205 (1) - new combo why?
03:39:137 (1,2,3,4) - don't do jumps, it's easy fixed

Love
Try circle size = 2 i'll consider this
01:34:253 (1,1,1) - don't do this fixed
01:38:491 (7) - and this (do it how spacing tell you) fixed
01:47:947 (1,1,1) - i think you anderstand fixed
02:39:463 - strange break time..it's stopped the game process this break time is symmetrical to first break time
02:59:352 - add circle
there is a note here originally, i remove it when i receive some feedbacks from test players, anyway, fixed atm, ill still consider removing it in the future. basically i dont want here to be too difficult, and this note is the best to remove (which dont influence the gameplay).

Map looks random, look on sliders, on their evenness, same with circles
It must be beauty and playable

Good luck, star~
thanks for mod and star
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

yongtw123 wrote:

哈囉
我把字體弄大一點好讀

整體
Offset 偏掉了,但是這首歌本身很慢,所以很難測.
BPM修正成92.000, offset 5227
記得勾選snap to new timing
已修正
fixed

整體節奏有待接強
Easy先不說 Love就實在不怎麼好
很多地方不用放1/16的卻放了
記得一點: 不要為了增加難度而放很多1/16連打
要跟背景鼓聲就好好跟
要跟歌詞也好好跟
兩個都跟那就跟著耳朵走
我真的會建議你重新map一次試試

音效部分除非有特別強調
不然soft-whistle要有規則的放
例如00:29:357 (2,4) - 這就放對了
簡單說是放在每小節的第2.4白線
把不規則的地方整理一下吧

最近比較忙,有時間時我會慎重考慮你的提議,基本上Love這個難度沒有特別跟著樂器或歌詞而是照著自己聽這首歌的感覺下去擺note,我已經請很多認識的人試玩過(包含排名高也有排名低的),大多數的意見表示還能接受,但如果這樣照感覺擺會影響這個圖是否被rank,我會想辦法去改正的。
I'm a bit busy these days and will considered your suggestion once I have time. Basically, I dont sync with instrument and/or lyrics in LOVE but place notes with my feeling to this song instead, I have found many players (including high ranker and newbies) to test play this and most of them think this diff is acceptable, but if my notes placement will make this map not being ranked, ill try to fix it.

[Easy]
1. 盡量不要改變slider velocity
2. 節奏偏難

00:41:748 (5) - new combo fixed
01:00:661 (2) - 這鼓聲也太明顯了 選其一1)用soft-whistle就好 2)把鼓聲弄小聲些 fixed
01:39:140 (6) - !!?? 簡單難度不要這樣大幅度的改變slider velocity, 而且這裡何必用x0.5BPM呢?
x1 BPM slider太長我不知道怎麼擺,無論如何,這邊先改回x1了
x1 BPM makes slider too long for me, anyway i'd fixed it atm
02:27:727 (7) - 我覺得repeat一次就好了 fixed
03:00:009 (1) - 何必x0.5BPM咧 as above
03:13:705 (2) - 聽起來怪怪的 不知道是跟著什麼 change to 4 notes
03:30:498 (6) - 簡單難度盡量不用藍線 若不得已請用slider帶過去 fixed
03:33:107 (2) - 同上 fixed
03:35:716 (6) - 同上 fixed

[Love]
為什麼比較難的難度反而slider velocity才x1.2???
East都x1.8了耶?
這兩個設定都是為了圖擺起來比較舒服點
slider velocity setup is for notes position arrangement purpose
01:38:488 (7) - 不要把slider藏起來 fixed

==========

把節奏好好重新規劃一下吧
倒是有一點不錯
你排列的技巧不算差

加油吧!
屆時我再回來看看
thanks a lot for your mod, sorry for being busy these days, i dont have time for a full/large remap
Card N'FoRcE
Hi, sorry for being late ^^"

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
    Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
    Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
    SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).
- Easy:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
    01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
    03:24:792 (4) - ^
    02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
    03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)
- Love:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
    01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
    02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
    03:43:053 (3) - new combo
Conider this starred after fixing ^^
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late ^^"

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • I don't really like that Background... it feels so "empty"...
    in this touhou anime, i think they draw character too rough, and since i want to choose a BG that is relative to this anime but not a rough one, it's a hard choice, anyway since many had mentioned BG problem, ill fix it ASAP
    Can You check with AImod if all your beats are snapped correctly? (I can't atm because AImod is mean to me and it makes my PC crash)
    yes they are all snapped correctly
    Why is Hakurei Reimu a comboburst? Is this related to touhou? O.o Yes it is (lol)
    SB/orb.png and lyrics/_lyrics.txt seem to be unused. If that's the case, remove them (yeah i know they're small. Do that if you change BG too, you won't have to upload twice).
ill full submit again with BG fix in the future

- Easy:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    You should add a KIAI from 03:00:009 to 03:15:661.
    looks nice, added.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:14:357 (2) - move a bit closer to (1) and (3)?
    yes
    01:47:618 (2) - it's more intuitive if moved a bit more farther (You'll probably need to move other things too)
    yes
    03:24:792 (4) - ^
    yes
    02:02:756 - uhm, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
    ok
    03:33:107 (3) - Really really unsettling. You had a regular flow for 3 minutes, making something like this is, like, totally unexpected while playing. Make it like 03:35:227 (6,7)
ok

- Love:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Using Grid Size 2 penalized you for some patterns.
    most of the notes is not snapped to the grid in this diff
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:03:270 (2) - stack correctly? (Just place it on the same spot again and it will allign with the slider). Or move it like 01:04:574 (7,1)
    change both of them to stacking
    01:41:748 - awkward KIAI. Start it at 01:31:313 like Easy?
    ok
    02:02:756 - as i said in Easy, kinda long break. How about a spinner from 02:13:053 to 02:15:661?
    ok
    03:43:053 (3) - new combo
ok

Conider this starred after fixing ^^
thanks for your mod and star
Kiddo-Kun
Sorry I didn't get here sooner

[General]


- Have Kiai the same for all diffs

[Easy]

00:31:313 (1) - Remove new combo to match 00:41:748
(OR MAYBE: 00:41:748 (5) - Add new combo to match 00:31:313)

01:45:661 (1,2) - This part seems awkward. You should change up the pattern and add a note on 01:46:966.
01:52:183 - End Kiai here?
02:28:705 (8) - New combo
02:29:357 (1) - Remove new combo
03:11:096 - End this slider at the same place, but move it so it's 1/4 before the (1). Like so http://puu.sh/Akr
03:15:661 (1) - End Kiai here


[Love]


00:42:563 (2) - Remove finish, sounds weird.

RS~AT


^ Unscramble that
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry I didn't get here sooner

[General]


- Have Kiai the same for all diffs

[Easy]

00:31:313 (1) - Remove new combo to match 00:41:748
(OR MAYBE: 00:41:748 (5) - Add new combo to match 00:31:313) OK

01:45:661 (1,2) - This part seems awkward. You should change up the pattern and add a note on 01:46:966. OK
01:52:183 - End Kiai here? OK
02:28:705 (8) - New combo
02:29:357 (1) - Remove new combo NO
03:11:096 - End this slider at the same place, but move it so it's 1/4 before the (1). Like so http://puu.sh/Akr
Since this is EASY, ill do but fix it to 1/2
03:15:661 (1) - End Kiai here OK


[Love]


00:42:563 (2) - Remove finish, sounds weird. NO

RS~AT


^ Unscramble that
thanks for your mod and sorry for responding so late
Alace
good luck
Komeiji Yuki
歌很不錯:3

我可以做個guest diff嗎~ :) 雖然我對長歌會有點不耐煩

如果可以的話...暫定Hard好了
Snowy Dream
[General]
slider的形狀試著弄得更好點。


[Normal]
03:09:140 (x) - 聲音和後面不搭調,這裡很響
01:44:357 (3) - 聲音效果和前面2個slider一樣
01:45:661 (4) - ^

[Love]
02:25:118 (4) - use two slider instead of it.
03:15:661 (3) - delete whistle.add finish
03:35:226 (4) - 好吵的聲音。。
04:13:216 (2) - delete .
------------------------------------------
圖不錯~:3 音效上面有點怪怪的感覺。。
然後主要slider再美觀些就行了~
Star~☆
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

a0178042 wrote:

歌很不錯:3
我可以做個guest diff嗎~ :) 雖然我對長歌會有點不耐煩
如果可以的話...暫定Hard好了
歡迎guest diff :3 不過雖然我的[Love]是標I但是其實比較像Hard XD

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
slider的形狀試著弄得更好點。 會把一些直的改彎orz

[Normal]
03:09:140 (x) - 聲音和後面不搭調,這裡很響 fixed
01:44:357 (3) - 聲音效果和前面2個slider一樣 ok :3
01:45:661 (4) - ^ ok :3

[Love]
02:25:118 (4) - use two slider instead of it. 我發現的確排太滿, 所以第一個slider少repeat一次, 否則太多slider
03:15:661 (3) - delete whistle.add finish fixed, 順帶改了(5)和後面的綠線
03:35:226 (4) - 好吵的聲音。。重改了這區的音效
04:13:216 (2) - delete . fixed
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圖不錯~:3 音效上面有點怪怪的感覺。。
然後主要slider再美觀些就行了~
Star~☆
thx mod and star :3
AngelHoney
:) :) :)
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

AngelHoney wrote:

:) :) :)
kds for irc mod <3
- lower volume of all timing section from 25% to 35%
- new spinner skin elements
- some notes rearrangement in last KIAI
- remove all whistle during sliders
Snowy Dream
其實我想說乃那些彎的slider上的點弄的更有規律些。。可能會好看點。
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Snowy Dream wrote:

其實我想說乃那些彎的slider上的點弄的更有規律些。。可能會好看點。
啊..特別有很多很彎的slider其實是因為歌名的關係 orz
y u c a
加油ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

y u c a wrote:

加油ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
kudos for irc mod, thank you!
- added clap (actually it's finish orz) on many starting notes of a combo
- removed some whistle
- rearrange hitsound during 04:15:661 to 04:20:553
Tenshi-nyan
Heya,

General
00:47:618 - Map this break? D:
02:39:466 - Map this break! D:

Love
01:41:748 (8) - too many whistles. remove them on the white and red ticks, so that there are only 2 whitsles left on the blue ticks.
01:44:357 (3) - ^
02:50:553 (4) - don't let the repeat arrow overlap the slider
02:53:161 (4) - ^
03:36:531 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit D: it's a sign of laziness for me.
03:56:096 (3) - 2 grids down

Normal
01:11:096 - where did the notes go?
01:50:226 (1) - make this start and end at the same position as in love? you'd have to place some extra notes if you do so.
02:57:400 (5) - I guess bad spacing?
03:16:313 (1) - start at 03:15:987 -


That's all from me. Star'd >w<
ouranhshc
Overall
make kiai times the same on both diffs?


Love
04:14:194 (2,3) - these look weird ingame. maybe place them under the slider end?

Normal
03:33:596 (5) - new combo?

good map
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Heya,

General
00:47:618 - Map this break? D:
02:39:466 - Map this break! D:
this is a painful choice..because the map will have too few breaktime but i want some
anyway, i'll map those if more modders point out this

Love
01:41:748 (8) - too many whistles. remove them on the white and red ticks, so that there are only 2 whitsles left on the blue ticks. you're right, but i remove whistle on blue ticks instead
01:44:357 (3) - ^ yes
02:50:553 (4) - don't let the repeat arrow overlap the slider yes
02:53:161 (4) - ^ yes
03:36:531 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit D: it's a sign of laziness for me. it's intentional, but i'll consider your suggestion
03:56:096 (3) - 2 grids down yes

Normal
01:11:096 - where did the notes go? mapped
01:50:226 (1) - make this start and end at the same position as in love? you'd have to place some extra notes if you do so. ok :3
02:57:400 (5) - I guess bad spacing? yes
03:16:313 (1) - start at 03:15:987 - i think it's ok now..

That's all from me. Star'd >w<
thanks for your time to mod and star!

ouranhshc wrote:

Overall
make kiai times the same on both diffs?
done, also rearrange combo colors and remap a bit in normal

Love
04:14:194 (2,3) - these look weird ingame. maybe place them under the slider end? oops, done

Normal
03:33:596 (5) - new combo? ok :3

good map
thank you too >v<
Kana Anaberal_old
路过star O.O
Tenshi-nyan
About the breaks, of course you don't HAVE to map them.
I just think the break at 01:56:096 - is more than enough for the entire map.

/me runs away
Komeiji Yuki
Finish\(′ ▽ ‘)/

Download: Sasha Asuka - Meguri Meguru (loveFantasy) [Yuki's Hard].osu

Please add my ID into tags~ Thanks~
順便請把我的ID加到Tags裡 謝嚕~

This is the longest time I map for putting hitsound and timing points :P
這是我第一次加hitsound和timing points最久的一次(茶

這歌真是越聽越好聽

接下來才是remap的開始
DarkRingSystem
8-) !
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

Kana Anaberal wrote:

路过star O.O
感謝支持!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

About the breaks, of course you don't HAVE to map them.
I just think the break at 01:56:096 - is more than enough for the entire map.

/me runs away
thank you for rechecking! i discuss with some people in #chinese and some say breaktime is fine now while a few is against it.
i'm personally ok with it now, but since there ARE people disliking them, i'll bear this in mind and consider mapping in future.

DarkRingSystem wrote:

8-) !
感謝支持!
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

To modders, please read:

i was a idiot who named clap sound "soft-hitfinish" and named finish sound "soft-hitclap", since here comes a guest diff and it's sound very weird and contain massive finish ( i mean soft-hitclap, so they were clap in edit mode, fixed now ), i fixed this problem together, and yes i must change all the hitsounds in my diff too and i have done that, so please re-download after this post.

also, there might be chance i miss some notes when fixing these hitsounds, so please mention if you discovered strange/unfit hitsound in [Normal] and [Love]

since guest diff now contains strange hitsounds, i edited it to justify in MY VIEW, please just leave hitsounds mod in guest diff until a0178042 response to me, thank you.
additional line to make block beautiful, ignore this

a0178042 wrote:

Finish\(′ ▽ ‘)/
辛苦了, 下了非常多綠線, 肯定花了你不少時間 :?

- 你目前使用45%-100%的音量, 我建議縮小到35%-65%, 另外因為我當初命名時把soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap打反了, 我懷疑因此有什麼誤會, 因為從你傳過來的版本我看得出你使用的應該是剛被Alace revive時附近的時間的檔案, 後來做過許多改變, 現在覺得這個diff音效很怪, 而且finish類音效(soft-hitclap)驚人的多, 我要打出來會是一個很長的mod, 因此我直接改了你的diff(原本你的diff有備份), 請你聽聽看決定<你不想改哪些>, 非音效類的diff我只寫出mod並沒有改動, 所以我把音效mod和其他mod分開列出

注意: 現在soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap已經修正並且也修正了所有[Normal]和[Love]中的音效

- 如果有自己對於hitsound的看法, 你必須確定N:C1和S:C1切換時的綠線不在note上(通常是稍微提前), 因為玩家有可能會打早或打晚而造成怪音效. (通常大幅度的升降音量也會如此做, 不過這麼一來你可能要花非常多時間調整綠線, 所以這點先不管)
<00:16:669> (T) 改為S:C1
<00:28:705> (3) 加finish
<00:30:661> (6) *改為clap (為相對應音效檔改名之檔案, 以下類似情況省略說明, 並註明 * )
<00:32:944..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
<00:41:096> (5) *改為clap
<00:43:379..> (T) 改為S:C1 (5) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (6) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
<01:01:964> (6) *改為clap
<01:04:247..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
- 這中間的地方我沒動, 因為你交錯使用S和S:C1, 但是S: clap聽起來很不適合歌, 請check一下
<02:18:270> (2) 加finish
<02:22:509> (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap
- 後面都沒動了, 一樣覺得S: clap不搭
<04:21:205> (3) *中間改clap
- 嗯..我不想提太多意見, 不然三個diff hitsounds會變成幾乎一樣(如果都是我在提意見), 但我真的認為S: default不夠適合這首歌

<00:38:813> (1,2) 減spacing
<00:43:705> (6,1,2) 難讀, 減少spacing或使用你喜歡的解決辦法
<01:04:247> (1,2) 猜測是誤擺? 擺成對稱
<01:13:053> (1,2,3,4) 成菱形?
- 副歌部分的spacing好飄逸Orz
- 照要求刪除了spacing warning的SB
<03:47:455> (2,1,2,3,4) 非常難讀, 疊(2,1) 加大(1,2,3,4) spacing?
<04:05:226> (1,2) slider先, circle後, 否則就別做(2,3)的jump, 另外, 這附近太多reverse jump

另外, 既然有了GD, 我會準備做Vocal/歌名/Mapper的Storyboard, 如果有特別的要求或喜好請告訴我
thepianist
hihihi

[Normal]
00:45:009 (1) - Add a finish?
02:55:770 (4) - Move up to align with 2?
03:00:987 (3) - Move up to be higher than 2 and 4?
03:02:618 (6) - make it curve so it heads downward? ie (a bad example)

03:15:335 (6,7) - shift right a few grids.

[Hard]
00:29:683 (5) - shift left a grid or so aha to line up with 4
01:31:966 (5,6) - have these slightly closer to each other!
01:51:205 (1) - map to 1:52:183?

[Love]
Same comment on spinner as above!
2:40ish map this break~

I don't quite agree with the 1.5x spacing in the mid-end of the song though! Otherwise a great map! Congrats, star.
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

thepianist wrote:

hihihi

[Normal]
00:45:009 (1) - Add a finish? yes with lower volume :3
02:55:770 (4) - Move up to align with 2? good idea
03:00:987 (3) - Move up to be higher than 2 and 4? yes
03:02:618 (6) - make it curve so it heads downward? yes, rearrange (6,7,8,9,10)
03:15:335 (6,7) - shift right a few grids. okey

[Hard]
00:29:683 (5) - shift left a grid or so aha to line up with 4
01:31:966 (5,6) - have these slightly closer to each other!
01:51:205 (1) - map to 1:52:183?

[Love]
Same comment on spinner as above! nope, it's ok for me
2:40ish map this break~ i'll do if one more modder point out this

I don't quite agree with the 1.5x spacing in the mid-end of the song though! Otherwise a great map! Congrats, star.
thank you!
Franknine
push 8-)
Komeiji Yuki

loveFantasy wrote:

SPOILER

a0178042 wrote:

Finish\(′ ▽ ‘)/
辛苦了, 下了非常多綠線, 肯定花了你不少時間 :?

- 你目前使用45%-100%的音量, 我建議縮小到35%-65%, 另外因為我當初命名時把soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap打反了, 我懷疑因此有什麼誤會, 因為從你傳過來的版本我看得出你使用的應該是剛被Alace revive時附近的時間的檔案, 後來做過許多改變, 現在覺得這個diff音效很怪, 而且finish類音效(soft-hitclap)驚人的多, 我要打出來會是一個很長的mod, 因此我直接改了你的diff(原本你的diff有備份), 請你聽聽看決定<你不想改哪些>, 非音效類的diff我只寫出mod並沒有改動, 所以我把音效mod和其他mod分開列出
-10%Vol (有些hitsound我是覺得可以大一點 soft太小聲有時會沒感覺 畢竟soft跟normal比起來聲音小了許多._.) , 聲音改得不錯o.o

注意: 現在soft-hitfinish和soft-hitclap已經修正並且也修正了所有[Normal]和[Love]中的音效

- 如果有自己對於hitsound的看法, 你必須確定N:C1和S:C1切換時的綠線不在note上(通常是稍微提前), 因為玩家有可能會打早或打晚而造成怪音效. (通常大幅度的升降音量也會如此做, 不過這麼一來你可能要花非常多時間調整綠線, 所以這點先不管)
<00:16:669> (T) 改為S:C1
<00:28:705> (3) 加finish
<00:30:661> (6) *改為clap (為相對應音效檔改名之檔案, 以下類似情況省略說明, 並註明 * )
<00:32:944..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms >>我好像沒看到這條線o.o???
<00:41:096> (5) *改為clap
<00:43:379..> (T) 改為S:C1 (5) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (6) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
<01:01:964> (6) *改為clap
<01:04:247..> (T) 改為S:C1 (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap, 綠線皆往前100ms
- 這中間的地方我沒動, 因為你交錯使用S和S:C1, 但是S: clap聽起來很不適合歌, 請check一下
OK,我把clap鬼隱了 但我覺得S:finish還可以用 所以補留一些S:的Timeline :3
<02:18:270> (2) 加finish
<02:22:509> (1) 改為clap, 降音至35%, (2) 加clap
- 後面都沒動了, 一樣覺得S: clap不搭 ^
<04:21:205> (3) *中間改clap
- 嗯..我不想提太多意見, 不然三個diff hitsounds會變成幾乎一樣(如果都是我在提意見), 但我真的認為S: default不夠適合這首歌
沒關係的...我對hotsound苦手 :|


<00:38:813> (1,2) 減spacing Done
<00:43:705> (6,1,2) 難讀, 減少spacing或使用你喜歡的解決辦法 分開(1,2)並重疊(2,3)
<01:04:247> (1,2) 猜測是誤擺? 擺成對稱 Done
<01:13:053> (1,2,3,4) 成菱形? Done 順便改了下(6)的位置
- 副歌部分的spacing好飄逸Orz
基本上只有01:36:205 (1,2) 和 01:32:781 (2,1) 關掉dis snap._. 連打部分是0.5x換combo和其他地方則改為正常的1.0
恩...有其他modder也覺得這裡不好會馬上改x_x

- 照要求刪除了spacing warning的SB
<03:47:455> (2,1,2,3,4) 非常難讀, 疊(2,1) 加大(1,2,3,4) spacing?
<04:05:226> (1,2) slider先, circle後, 否則就別做(2,3)的jump, 另外, 這附近太多reverse jump
互換位置了 另外04:05:716 (1) 和04:07:835 (3) 是jump 其他是開著snap做的' ˇ '

另外, 既然有了GD, 我會準備做Vocal/歌名/Mapper的Storyboard, 如果有特別的要求或喜好請告訴我
我沒意見~ :D

thepianist wrote:

SPOILER
[Hard]
00:29:683 (5) - shift left a grid or so aha to line up with 4 Done~
01:31:966 (5,6) - have these slightly closer to each other! OK :3 have checked the distance
01:51:205 (1) - map to 1:52:183? Sorry no change >_< Considered if someone also points out
Thx for yout modding (>ω <)~~
Download: Sasha Asuka - Meguri Meguru (loveFantasy) [Yuki's Hard].osu
The 08 team_Bourdon
Halo~ :)
maybe i just can give some suggestion~

as per your request:

Normal
*please don't do the jump style on normal diff...

00:45:006 (1) - this spinner start on 00:44:843 ?
01:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - please use 0.7x distance to same as other note distance.
02:49:574 (3) - delete this note. then add a slider to 02:50:226 end.
02:52:183 (3) - same as above, 02:52:835 to end.
02:53:487 (7,8) - this two notes change to the slider?
02:55:770 (4) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1liL
03:10:444 (5) - delete this note?
03:10:770 (1) - move to 03:10:444 . and 03:11:748 to end. ?
03:12:400 (x) - add a circle?
03:16:313 (1) - this spinner start on 03:15:987 ?
04:00:661 (1) - start on 04:00:335 ?
04:23:487 (1) - remove new combo

Yuki's Hard
00:40:118 (5) - delete this cirlce? then add a slider to 00:40:770 end.?
00:43:705 (6) - new combo?
00:44:194 (1) - remove the new combo and too far from the preveious note...
00:49:574 (x) - add a circle and finish?
01:00:987 (6) - delete this cirlce? then add a slider to 01:01:640 end.?
01:06:531 (6) - new combo?
01:07:672 (1) - remove the new combo and add a 1 tick back?
01:17:292 (7) - new combo?
01:24:792 (6) - change to the slider? 01:25:444 to end.
01:32:455 (1) - remove new combo
01:34:411 (1) - i can't see this note. ;-;
01:36:531 (2) - too far from the preveious note..
01:37:183 (3) - if your preveious note is jump style. then this note add a new combo..
01:40:770 (5) - new combo?
02:45:990 (7) - ^
03:05:229 (2) - too far from the preveious note..
03:05:881 (3) - if your preveious note is jump style. then this note add a new combo
03:09:468 (5) - new combo?
03:37:509 (1) - too far from the preveious note.. and remove the new combo
03:38:161 (8) - add a new combo
03:45:499 (1) - remove new combo?
03:47:455 (1) - ^ and too close from the preveious note
03:53:814 (6) - new combo
04:07:835 (3) - too far from the preveious note.
04:14:683 (5) - new combo

Love
00:30:987 (6) - new combo
00:31:313 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:966 (4) - change to the slider?
00:33:270 (8) - new combo
00:33:922 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:205 (1) - new combo
00:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:813 (9) - new combo
00:39:140 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:422 (9) - new combo
00:41:748 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:379 (8) - new combo
00:44:357 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:879 (1) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljQ
01:25:770 (5) - new combo
01:26:096 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:379 (5) - new combo
01:36:205 (6) - ^
01:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:553 (9) - new combo
02:20:879 (1) - remove new combo and change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljX
02:22:509 (1) - new combo
02:23:487 (1) - remove new combo
02:25:770 (4) - new combo
*change your combo on the lyrics.. and some slider is ugly :(
-----
nice song... so GoodLuck~!! ;)
starrrrr~~~
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Halo~ :)
maybe i just can give some suggestion~

as per your request:

Normal
*please don't do the jump style on normal diff...
this song has low bpm, and i think the largest spacing is acceptable as a normal, also i found several test-player between #5000 to #20000 with 85%-95% acc and no complain yet ;)
00:45:006 (1) - this spinner start on 00:44:843? looks good, but i like game process at the moment more
01:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - please use 0.7x distance to same as other note distance. rearranged
02:49:574 (3) - delete this note. then add a slider to 02:50:226 end.
02:52:183 (3) - same as above, 02:52:835 to end.
02:53:487 (7,8) - this two notes change to the slider?
^ i think i know what you mean, redesign 02:48-02:54
02:55:770 (4) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1liL yes
03:10:444 (5) - delete this note?
03:10:770 (1) - move to 03:10:444 . and 03:11:748 to end. ?
03:12:400 (x) - add a circle?
^ i think i know what you mean, but instead i just change the spinner to start at 03:11:096
03:16:313 (1) - this spinner start on 03:15:987 ? no due to above fix to stay symmetrical
04:00:661 (1) - start on 04:00:335 ? about this one, yes
04:23:487 (1) - remove new combo no

Love
00:30:987 (6) - new combo
00:31:313 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:966 (4) - change to the slider? it's a circle to makes rhythm symmetrical to previous combo
00:33:270 (8) - new combo
00:33:922 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:205 (1) - new combo
00:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:813 (9) - new combo
00:39:140 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:422 (9) - new combo
00:41:748 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:379 (8) - new combo
00:44:357 (1) - remove new combo
- about combo colors suggestion, i know your meaning and those change were also solid (since the vocal's first voice is on red line in first two combo), but i'll keep it unchanged because the drum technically indicate it was starting on white line at <00:28:705> and the fact that i'm following drums more than vocal in this paragraph.
01:20:879 (1) - change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljQ this slider shape is because the lyric "meguri meguru", so i want a curvy one :D
01:25:770 (5) - new combo
01:26:096 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:379 (5) - new combo
rearrange some combo colors, no to <01:28:379> (5)
01:36:205 (6) - ^
01:36:531 (1) - remove new combo
yes and yes
02:20:553 (9) - new combo
02:20:879 (1) - remove new combo and change like this? http://puu.sh/1ljX rearranged slider shape
02:22:509 (1) - new combo
02:23:487 (1) - remove new combo
02:25:770 (4) - new combo
yes to this paragraph, since i followed nothing on 3rd/4th combo
*change your combo on the lyrics.. and some slider is ugly :(
fix some sliders with larger curve
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nice song... so GoodLuck~!! ;)
starrrrr~~~
thank you!

also uploaded guestdiff update after 2 mods
The 08 team_Bourdon
a... forget to tell you..
the preview point set at 01:29:357~ ;)
p/s: no Kud for this post..
Topic Starter
loveFantasy

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

a... forget to tell you..
the preview point set at 01:29:357~ ;)
p/s: no Kud for this post..
fix in all diff

thanks for recheck
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