rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:34:574 (2) - add a hitwhistle, so it follows the pattern ok
2:20:553 (5) - delete this hitwhistle at it's end, sounds quite better ok
2:28:705 (8,1) - spaw new combos ok
2:54:140 (6) - i don't really like the idea of silencing this note, how about deleting 173976 and 174303 timing sections? ok
3:22:835 (1,3) - spaw new combos ok
3:56:748 (3) - a whistle instead of a clap sounds way better ok
3:59:357 (4) - ^ ok

[Love]
0:23:487 (1) - this spinner should end at 0:26:096, like on the rest of difficulties ok
0:30:009 (4) - it misses a hitwhistle at 0:30:172 on the timeline. /me is stupid and can't explain what does he mean fixed
1:22:835 (1,3) - swap new combos well i sync with lyrics there
1:37:183 (1) - this new combo isn't really necessary ok
2:29:357 (1) - add a hitwhistle at it's beginning ok
4:21:531 (1) - i've never liked using new combos like this. sorry but i'm keeping them atm
4:22:835 (1) - ^ ^

storyboard:
221748 - 1.5x spacing...o.o i'd suggest using something like 'speed up', because '1.5x spacing' doesn't look cool.
i'll consider this

i like maps like those, they're original and show something that's not seen so often
good job! /

rEdo wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
0:37:835 (5) - i kinda miss a hitclap at the ends of those sliders. ;w;
Σ(>Δ <"")....Add clap~

3:30:009 (1,2) - swap new combos
Change~●▽●

3:37:183 (6,1) - uh...this is at least weird o.o rearrange this part
change (6) to a circle and reduce the distance of jump

3:37:509 (1,2) - swap new combos
Change~●▽●

3:50:227 (3) - new combo (take a look at previous choruses, you will see why)
Done~

4:05:716 (1) - this new combo isn't really necessary
4:08:487 (1) - ^
remove

Thanks for modding~

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
loveFantasy叫我mod [Yuki's Hard] 所以只有这个难度

[Yuki's Hard]
Sorry for long long post

>.<

00:28:379 (1,2) - 为啥要stack... 我觉得把2放到1和3中间比较好
Make the shape

00:28:705 (3,4) - 跳的不是非常make sense... 不过也还可以接受
^ (Horizontal flip + Reverse)

00:30:498 - 加note?
If the modders mention, too

00:30:661 (6) - 既然前后都是关于中间Y轴对称的，这个circle最好也放到Y轴上feel
feel weird put on Y axis , but change site to keep distance snap

00:30:987 (1,2) - 同00:28:379 (1,2)
00:31:313 (3,4) - 同00:28:705 (3,4)

00:36:205 (3) - 减1 repeat?
No.

00:39:629 (3) - 这稍微有点artificial difficulty >.> 按正常方式来转180度?
ATTACH[lf_sldr.JPG]
00:42:238 (3) - ^
Both change~

01:07:672 (3) - 最后一个repeat +clap
Done

01:09:140 (5) - 建议位置与01:07:672 (3)水平对称
Distance between (3.4) will be different with (5.6)

01:10:444 (2) - slider开始只用clap就好了,去掉finish 有点吵
Done

01:11:422 (5) - +clap. clap是normal组的底音 没有clap只有finish不好听...
Normal-clap doesn't fit this song

01:13:053 (1,2,3,4) - 你是想做菱形么0.0 如果是的话可以考虑用下面的坐标

01:13:053 (1) - x 152 y 112
01:13:379 (2) - x 96 y 208
01:13:705 (3) - x 152 y 304
01:14:031 (4) - x 208 y 208

make symmetry from 01:13:379 (2) - 01:15:335 (3)

01:16:640 (6) - 开头去掉clap 结尾+clap
Done

01:18:270 (10) - 去掉中间那个repeat的finish...?
No.

01:35:390 (8) - 开始+clap
Done

01:36:205 (1,2) - why jump here 0.0 如果是我map的话我可能会stack 做成DS的点或者slider也不错 但是这个jump... 抱歉我无法理解
stack instead

02:19:248 (6,7) - 换长slider...?
Only change (6) to slider . Maintain (7) for a circle

02:25:770 (3) - 减1 repeat?
No.

02:29:520 (4) - 建议换成02:29:520 - circle 然后 02:29:683 - 跟vocal的长slider 后面那段感觉有点空
Change

SPOILER

02:45:338 (6) - 开头去掉clap 结尾+clap
Done

02:46:968 (10) - 去掉中间那个repeat的finish...?
No.

02:50:555 (5,6) - 5 去clap, 6 +clap
Done

02:53:162 (4,5) - 4 去clap, 5 +clap
Done

03:04:903 (1,2) - why jump here again 0.0
stack

后面还好点>.> -.-

04:00:661 - 04:05:226 why break...?
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=41651&p=770219#p770219

Nice skin & SB =w= And star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Heyy ~ Skin check by request >w<

Skin;
- For reverse arrow try this
[attachment=0:003fa]reversearrow.png[/attachment:003fa] that's a great one, thank you >v<
- The play-skip is too small, make it bigger done
- Hit 300 is not well centered done to all hit blahblah elements :3
- The black glow on the hitcircle overlay is cut remaked
- I personally don't like the font you are using for the elements I'd suggest using a simplier one like the one for the lyrics
i'm keeping at the moment it since my friend and me likes it and the lyrics font doesn't fit the spinner, need more feedbacks
- For slider ball I really don't know what you could use, maybe the default one but grayed out ?
Orz..i'll think about other solutions

SB;
- Some elements have unnecessary transparency, most/all lyrics and some of the other elements, that makes the pic bigger in size
i'll fixed this but since it may take hours so not now

* Star ~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Seriously, you have a unnesescary transparent space in your lyric SB. So you should cut the transparent space, or it'll be lag in ancient PC all fixed now
* You should re-make the skin elements, some shadow are cut off fixed

Normal
00:37:835 (5,6) - IMO, this is hard to click for average player
00:39:140 (1) - No jump in normal diff please rearrange (5,6,1)
00:41:748 (5) - Activate new combo yes
01:20:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern are random, change something better? change (3) into slider
01:31:313 (1) - Inconsistent spacing it's a bit nazi... fixed
01:33:922 (3) - Activate new combo yes
01:39:140 (6) - ^ no
01:51:205 (6,7) - Don't stack these in slider. It's confusing for average player yes
02:26:748 (5) - Activate new combo maybe not
02:30:661 (4) - ^ fixed instead on (5)
03:58:705 (2) - Don't stack these in slider. It's confusing for average player
04:17:618 (3) - ^
04:20:227 (3) - ^ about these, i think i'll keep them, since this is a Normal not Easy

Love
* At beginning of map, the distance spacing was 0,9x and other was 1,0x please re-spacing them
this is intentional and i don't think they influence gameplay so i'll keep most of them
01:16:803 (x) - Add note? no for consistency
01:16:966 (x) - ^ yes but instead change (1) into slider starting from here
01:20:879 (1) - Ugly slider matching up lyrics, won't fix
01:29:520 (1) - New combo for prevent any spinner bug
02:27:726 (1) - ^
03:36:531 (1) - ^
03:39:140 (1) - ^
04:23:813 (1) - ^ all fixed

I feel sleepy because of this song hope that's a good thing (?)

winber1 wrote:

Sorry for slow mod :/, haven't really been wanting to look at my queue. now i have two other things to mod D:
/lazy

Love

00:49:574(break) - wut... why is there a break here lol. oh whatever.. < -- this should go in a general section, but i'm too lazy to do that. the feeling to this break is individual-based (many feedbacks said kay when many said map please), and i said keep
01:37:835(3,4) - not extremely clear and feels a bit weird. try something like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ceba4]screenshot033.jpg[/attachment:ceba4]

then put claps at 01:37:672 and at 01:37:998 and remove claps on combo 2 and 5 solid suggestion, but i like what they are now :/
01:48:270(2) - move 1/4 tick back and fix spacing. Remove clap from 01:47:944 and put one at 01:48:107. Sounds better instead remove whistles on (2,4)
02:46:966(1,2,3) - doesn't really seem to fit that well imo, but it doesn't matter. change (3) into clap
03:00:498(2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5.. 03:06:368) - wow this feels really awkward to me. It sometimes follows vocals and it sometimes follows something that doesn't seem to exist. The drums aren't doing anything this weird.
sticked to vocal more now
03:10:444(1,2) - it looks like the repeat slider will repeat 3 times, which it doesn't.
03:13:053(2,3) - ^ i like them
03:45:661(4,5,6,7) - I feel like it usually sounds better if this type of groupings of two started on a red tick no a white tick. Sometimes it feels correct or it fits the song when it's on the white tick, but this one feels much more awkward lol... the other ones are fine/sound good. removed finish on (2,4,5)

Normal

00:37:835(5,6) - it's the only place where player needs to press 1/4 tick after the last beat, not including those repeat sliders that last 1/2 a beat. perhaps you could change it.. or not. fix in Leorda's mod
01:46:966(1) - add finish is a bit noisy :/
03:09:466(2,3,4,5) - does not seem to fit highlighting the vocal, and i cant think of a better hitsound
03:17:618(spinner) - clap instead of finish fixed

Nice map :3

Leorda wrote:

SPOILER

NI HAO

Yuki's Hard
00:30:661 (6) - Activate new combo
00:30:987 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:37:835 (5) - Inconsistent spacing
Fix

00:39:629 (3) - ^
Fix

00:41:096 (5) - Activate new combo
00:41:422 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:42:238 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
Fix

00:43:379 (5) - Activate new combo
00:43:705 (1) - Deactivate new combo
Change

00:44:194 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
small jump

02:21:205 (3) - ^
Fix

03:25:933 (2) - ^
Adjust the patterns from 03:22:835 (1) - 03:25:118 (1) left 1 grid

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER

Yuki's Hard

01:31:313(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what.. the... this spacing makes no sense to me. it's harder to read first of all, and also this is kiai time, and I would expect that (if not the same spacing) that it would be larger spacing, not smaller spacing.
Adjust x_x

02:31:640(3) - naziing... could you make the slider end in the same place as 02:30:661?
Done :3

02:40:933(5) - sounds better if you start this slider at at 02:40:607 and end at 02:41:096. Then you can fix spacing if you'd like.
Done
02:46:966(10) - finishes do not fit imo.
No change temporary o_o"

03:44:357(1...) - same as 01:31:313. I would not decrease spacing like this. you can at least move combo 5 and 6 further apart, cuz it looks like they are 1/4 apart. at least imo.
adjust

04:05:716(3) - you haven't had a jump like this before, and i just did not expect it at all. If you're not going to stick with the same spacing, i would recommend you at least place it a bit closer than it is now.
Fix the shape and pattern

C R E A M wrote:

Hello. I want this one to be ranked. Awesome song~ I love it.
Actually I planned to make this one as beatmap... after my WIP one is finished.

Seems this one is too long. There is a shorter one (tv size) which is used in MAIKAZE Anime.
Anyway, my star is here~

loveFantasy wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

Hello. I want this one to be ranked. Awesome song~ I love it.
Actually I planned to make this one as beatmap... after my WIP one is finished.

Seems this one is too long. There is a shorter one (tv size) which is used in MAIKAZE Anime.
Anyway, my star is here~

yep, this is a full version of the song, i did consider making tv size one, but the final decision is as you see
thank you for the star

• Offset -5ms

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:13:053 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:23:487 (1)
   02:37:183 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:45:009 (1)

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:51:205 (1) - make it end at 01:54:792
   03:36:857 (5,6) - reverse them? that jump feels weird, the regular pattern looks so much better...
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   I know what you're doing with those 1/4 at the beginning and the end :>
   They're fine, but 00:43:705 (2,3) is the only one that's really easy to misread due to the song (i could explain but it would take a while), so please fix it.
   Also, 69 Unsnapped notes.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:23:487 (1) - add the Finish like in Normal
   02:13:053 (1) - ^ (or if you don't like the Finish at least remove it from Normal as well)
   04:23:813 (1) - ^
   01:16:966 - add a beat here. It's easy to misread 01:17:129 (1) because of this.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset -5ms

Not sure LF Change it or not . 如果還沒換的話請幫我換一下吧

- Yuki's Hard:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:51:205 (1) - make it end at 01:54:792
   Done~
   03:36:857 (5,6) - reverse them? that jump feels weird, the regular pattern looks so much better...
   Change
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   I know what you're doing with those 1/4 at the beginning and the end :>
   o.o?
   They're fine, but 00:43:705 (2,3) is the only one that's really easy to misread due to the song (i could explain but it would take a while), so please fix it.
   Fix . Also make the previous circle(1) and this slider (2) into a reverse slider
   I think it's better to play now "
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also, 69 Unsnapped notes.
   Done~

Thx for modding :3~~

• 01:39:050 (T) - useless timeline, delete?
  02:26:096 (4) - Remove whistle?
  03:08:161 (1) - Starts at 03:07:835?

• 00:45:661 (6) - Add whistle end or add a repeat?
  00:48:270 (5) - ^
  01:05:390 (4,5) - Stacking
  01:18:270 (10) - Remove the finish at repeat?
  01:25:770 (1) - Stacking
  02:24:140 (X) - add a note?
  03:22:835 (1) - add clap?
  03:34:574 (5) - clap end?

• 01:37:835 (3,4) - =_=b the spacing is really confusing
  03:13:053 (2,3,4) - ^
  04:02:618 (11) - move to y-axis?

Selee wrote:

[Normal]

• 01:39:050 (T) - useless timeline, delete? fixed
  02:26:096 (4) - Remove whistle? rearrange whistle in this combo instead
  03:08:161 (1) - Starts at 03:07:835? fixed

also rearranged some hitsound after 03:08:161..

[Love]

Circle size-1? I have to keep my eyes on notes rather listen to the music...Changing the circle size would not affect points either... no

• 01:37:835 (3,4) - =_=b the spacing is really confusing bpm is low so i think that's acceptable
  03:13:053 (2,3,4) - ^ same reason
  04:02:618 (11) - move to y-axis? rearranged and placed on y-axis now

Nicely done, star

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Offset -5ms

i need to discuss this with more people, since many BATs/MATs/modders who i know them are good at timing has different opinion (they're all +5 ~ -5 though), it's changed to 5224 atm.
- Normal:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:13:053 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:23:487 (1) done
   02:37:183 (1) - add the same Finish as 00:45:009 (1) done

- Love:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:23:487 (1) - add the Finish like in Normal done
   02:13:053 (1) - ^ (or if you don't like the Finish at least remove it from Normal as well) done
   04:23:813 (1) - ^ < remove whistle..it has finish on it already
   01:16:966 - add a beat here. It's easy to misread 01:17:129 (1) because of this.done

Selee wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

Just some suggestions XD

• 00:45:661 (6) - Add whistle end or add a repeat?
  prefer add whistle (both sounds good)
  
  00:48:270 (5) - ^
  ^
  
  01:05:390 (4,5) - Stacking
  Done
  
  01:18:270 (10) - Remove the finish at repeat?
  ok...since lots of modders advise it
  
  01:25:770 (1) - Stacking
  Done
  
  02:24:140 (X) - add a note?
  Add
  
  03:22:835 (1) - add clap?
  Done
  
  03:34:574 (5) - clap end?
  Done

明天換我生日

loveFantasy wrote:

ok it's 4/10 now

guest diff updated and Happy Birthday!

Alace wrote:

<Love>
01:37:832 (3,4) - bad spacing IMO fixed since many had mentioned and now you

題外話,因為歌曲慢可能不造成攻略上的問題,不過其實每個短來回slider的次數都有點不太一樣,玩起來不太直觀
要一直看著後面note的縮圈圈來判斷該鬆手的時機,這問題我在2009年作map也常有,有個人跟我提過後我在之後
作map都會特別住意一下了 talked on irc, thanks for suggestion

Alace wrote:

<Yuki>
01:03:919 (5) - i think this is a bad spacing, is it better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76575 ?

fix
抱歉...可能誤動到了....>_<(面壁思過

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Alace wrote:

<Yuki>
01:03:919 (5) - i think this is a bad spacing, is it better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76575 ?

fix
抱歉...可能誤動到了....>_<(面壁思過

thanks for modding :3