1. Platter (2.75 stars, 428 notes)
2. Rain (3.27 stars, 509 notes)
3. Salad (1.75 stars, 349 notes)

- Magic Bomb -
JBHyperion

alienflybot wrote:

Hello! It was a M4M for Vajuranda

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

• 
  Difficulty Spread

1. AR gap between Salad and Platter is really high compared to the one between Platter and Rain. What about either keeping them with uniform gaps, or using default AR settings of 7, 8, 9 respectively? Be reminded that you need to change the OD too. - Yeah I see what you mean. It was kinda weird for me to have done this. Fixed to 7, 8, 9
   EDIT: Actually changed Platter to 8.3 as it seems weird with 8 AR and don't want to go through all that Slider velocity stuff XD.
2. Increase HP of Rain to 6. - Alright cool
   
   Tags
3. You may want to add 'glitch hop', 'future bass' and 'Newgrounds'. - *Proof - Added all
   
   * Nice storyboard! - Thanks Takes so long when doing it manually instead of using the software ;w;

[ Salad]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:17:588 (5,1) - You may add a dash here to emphasize the Finish at (1). - Fixed
2. 00:29:448 (1,2) - It is perfectly fine to use straight sliders, however the flow would be much better if you bend them a bit inwards (to the center) as it is really easy to miss the tail of (1) or the head of (2) if the players didn't catch at the right moment. Bending a little will allow them to hold their buttons to catch more easily. - Alright cool. It fits with 00:35:029 (1,2) - also
3. 00:29:971 (2,3) - ^ - Yep
4. 00:34:332 (5,6,1) - I think it is better to add dash at (6,1) instead of (5,6) as (1) is sounding much stronger and with a Finish hitsound, so it is more prominent. - Alright yeah
5. 01:01:541 (3,4,5,1) - The distances between (3,4) and (5,1) can be larger, I know you tried to add dashes between them but it is still possible to FC without dashing. Hence I suggest moving (4,5) to x:428. - Sure
6. 01:40:960 (8,9,1) - Add dash at (9,1) instead of (8,9)? The dash is not emphasizing the right note in my opinion. - Fixed
7. 03:05:378 (5,1) - Add a dash? You may move (5) to x:392 and 03:05:727 (1,2) - to x:140. - Very cool! Fixed
8. 03:10:960 (5,1) - Dash? - Increased a little but already is kind of a dash ain't it ?

[ Platter]

• 
  Gameplay
  In general, I think the intro part and the first Kiai Time contains so many dashes because most of the distances are so large, players may occasionally dash from time to time. I suggest reducing most of them and only add dashes in rhythm. - Yeah I fiddled around a little bit and fixed some things here and there

1. 00:09:913 (1,2,3) - This part may seem fine to most of us but in my opinion, this can be difficult to Platter beginners, since this involve multiple dashing at 00:09:216 (5,1,2,3) - , which is hard to newcomers. I suggest reducing the distance by moving (2) closer to the left. - Fixed already when said gameplay comment
2. 01:05:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This may not be intentional. In my opinion this should be trimmed down to simpler patterns, it feels cramped with notes at this point when compared to the parts in the Kiai Time, most of them are not with this density of notes. Please reduce it. - Okay I removed (2)
3. 02:03:285 (4,5,6,1) - Multiple dash usage, I suggest cutting it down by reducing the distances. If possible you may reduce the distance of (5,6). - Fixed
4. 02:19:506 (6,7,8) - Double dash in middle, where I find the distance of (6,7) is so big that it may be easy for beginners to miss the jump at (7,8) after the big dash at (6,7). I suggest reducing the distance of (7,8), and so you may move 02:20:727 (8,9,1) - together to the left to reduce the distance. In addition, it seems minor but the tail of 02:19:506 (6) - is out of the editor, please fix it. - Fixed
5. 02:55:262 (2,3,4,5) - Comparing to 02:44:099 (2,3,4,5) - , you should remove the HDash at (2,3) and put HDash at (4,5) for consistency. - Fixed
6. 03:00:843 (2,3) - ^, so remove the HDash. - Also added a note and hyper at (4,5) again to stay consistent
   
   * Nice Platter. Thanks Man

[ Rain]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:28:750 (6,7,1) - The jump at (6,7) is a bit far in my opinion, which can be easy for players to miss here for not seeing them coming. I suggest moving (6) closer to the left to reduce the distance of (6,7). - Fixed (slightly)
2. 01:35:029 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Comparing to the Platter, the stream here is not cut suddenly at 01:35:611 - in the Platter but not for the Rain. Hence I suggest adding it back in the Rain here. You may want to rearrange the whole stream pattern and move it closer to the right, so the HDash won't be too strong. - Oh good point. Fixed
3. 01:46:018 (6,7,1) - I think the distance of (7,1) should at least be bigger than that of (6,7) since (1) is sounding stronger with the Finish hitsound. So I suggest moving (7) closer to the right while increasing the distance of (7,1). Or, more recommended, you may want to add HDash at (7,1) if possible. - increased space but didn't add hyper as I don't think it really fits here as it's not that loud of a crash and feels nicer without a hyper as it's quite a quiet finish sound
4. 01:59:971 (4,5,6) - I think it is very easy to miss (6) after catching the HDash of (4,5) as it will drag players away from (6), where (5,6) also require dashing to FC. In that way I suggest moving (6) closer to the right to ease it out. - Alright but not too much as I think it's alright
5. 02:02:239 (3,4,5) - ^, you may try moving (5) closer to the right. You can drag 02:03:111 (5,6,7,8,9) - whole thing and move to a favorable place. - ^
6. 02:07:820 (2,3,4) - ^ - I am going to leave this one as I think it's quite easy to catch
7. 02:11:134 (4,5,6,1) - ^, you can reduce all the distance in same scale while maintaining the HDash at 02:12:704 (1,2) - . - Not quite sure what you mean here but fixed around this section anyways a very tiny bit
8. 02:35:029 (1,2) - The distance here is way too big, please reduce it. It is really easy to miss here. - Woops yeah
9. 02:40:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It is very strange to suddenly remove the note at 02:41:890 - , which make the stream look incomplete. I would suggest adding it back and you can add HDash every 4 circles, it will be fitting to the rhythm in my opinion. - Added it in but I think the 4,3,5 combo bit work here with the music more imo
10. 02:59:448 (7,8,1) - (7,8) is a massive jump, please shorten it. - Fixed
11. 03:02:239 (5,6,1) - I think it is fine to reduce the distance of (5,6), I don't think it is a good spot to include a HDash since it will be very inconsistent comparing to the previous stanzas, at 02:47:936 (7,8) - , 02:53:518 (6,7) - , 02:59:448 (7,8) - and suchlike, they don't have HDash included. - Alright good point. Removed
12. 03:05:029 (7,8,1) - You may move (8) closer to the left. I deem it is possible to reduce the distance yet keeping the HDash working. - Was really hard to keep that hyper still alive but tried my best to move it closer

Nice difficulties, you may find me again later after finding 3 more mods and have a +12 Star Priority.

Good luck!

AFB

ursa wrote:

Overall Diff Comment : Your low bpm flow are good & it's fun to play. But i found that there's slider that have position offscreen (like this one) & it makes the slider kinda unconfortable for playing & it's unranked too (& I had an when my maps got DQ'ed because of offscreen slider). Oh yeah cool. Good point. Although some little bit over going the edge are alright since the editor fixes that for you in play but ones like that example you showed me I will fix.

Rain

1. 00:24:564 (2) - try move this circle to x =248 so you'll got a exta little dash flow to catch this beat - Alright I see no harm in this (Although you don't really dash still XD. It can still be caught with normal movement speed)
2. 00:29:448 (1) - it would be good to move this slider to x=448 for making the hyper have an ideal distance - Alright I see no harm in this either.
3. 00:35:553 (2,3) - this part have good potental for a little jump dash, so i think moving into x=304 would be good, for giving a good dash distance to catch - Changed differently to x:256
4. 00:40:436 (8) - i think moving this beat to x=348 will give a good dash jump distance 00:41:134 (2,3) - since the music enters the trance part , i think moving this beat to x=252 would be good - At first I was not sure but then I tested it out and actually yeah it works quite nicely.
5. 01:04:681 (5) - the slider actually out of the minimum hitbox & most of the bn/qat' will point this, i think you should fix the slider or try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5195503 - Instead I just flicked the tail in by curving the tail instead.
6. 01:05:378 (6) - the music has a potent to hyper jump, i think you should try to move it into x=44 - Hmm I don't really want this hyper as it gives a good emphasis for the next section at 01:05:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Which is a nice build up imo
7. 01:07:471 (7) - the distance kinda feels so short , i think moving the slider to x=376 will give a good position - Alright fixed
8. 02:06:425 (7) - same reason from 01:04:681 (5) , the sliders are out of hitbox range - Yep I fixed from your earlier screenshot
9. 02:09:913 (1) - same reason as above , i think moving to x=152 would be better - Fixed
10. 02:37:471 (7) - i think you should move this beat to x=32 for a good ideal hyper distance - Fixed (did some previous moving around for this)
11. 02:40:262 (8,1) - the distance gap feels so high - Tried reducing but wanted to keep the hyper. But yeah reduce a little
12. 02:42:006 (7,8,9) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5195685 - Alright done something similar but only a little difference with the slider.
13. 02:45:495 (8) - this slide are out of hitbox range too - Fixed
14. 03:26:483 (4) - try to keep the slider on hitbox range https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5195704 - Fixed
15. 03:33:634 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - the last slider mostly looks offscreen, i think you can reduce the length of sldier by reducing the slider multipier by 0.75 - Alright but did 0.85 instead to keep the glide in play nice.

Platter

1. 00:32:239 - i think you should add beat here , I stongly can feels the empty flow if there's no beat on this part - I would but it's not following the guitar sound I am focusing on for this diff as I don't want to try overmap.
2. 00:45:495 (4) - try to avoid the offscreen slide by moving to x=344 - Fixed
3. 00:51:425 (7,1) - i think the long jump distance kinda high for platter diff , so moving 00:51:425 (7) - to x=376 would fix it - I really like this hyper and moving it any closer would ruin it D: No change
4. 01:06:425 (4,5,6,7) - What o-o ?
5. 01:16:541 (6) - x=476 - Sure
6. 01:18:111 (5) - x=36 - x:20 instead. It's fine here
7. 01:25:262 (1,2,3) - I feels the slider position kinda weird here to play, maybe you should try this placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5196229 - More or less fixed with some changes here and there
8. 01:33:285 (7,1) - i think you can move the slider to x=472 for better distance - Fixed differently
9. 02:02:762 (3) - i think you can move this slider to x=220 for creating a good little dash movement - Alright I see no harm
10. 02:43:402 (1) - offscreen slider , maybe rotate by 30 degrees+ selection centre will fix this - Fixed
11. 02:46:192 (1,2) - i think you should move this sliders to x=168 to avoid offscreen position on 02:46:192 (1) - - Fixed
12. 03:11:309 (1) - move it to x=140 to avoid offscren position - Fixed another way
13. 03:16:890 (1) - try to rotate by 30 degrees+ selection center - Fixed anotherway
14. 03:19:681 (1) - i think you should move the slider to x=480 for better position - ^
15. 03:23:518 (3,4) - try to move to x=376 - Will leave this one

plz contact me ingame since if you had a problem on your diff later , also contact me too for salad diff mod on Irc - Alright will keep in mind

goodluck

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

not even 10 posts what a speedranker :^) - M8 it's been months (^: Careful mapping also (^:

[Storyboard]

This may be stupid, so ignore me if it'd be difficult to do, but I think it'd be nice to have it so that the harder the difficulty is, the heavier the rain in the storyboard is. If this is hard to do or whatever, it's not necessary, I just feel it'd be nice if possible. - I honestly think that's a cool idea but yeah it took me ages to have what I have now and a lot of stress XD. Plus not quite sure on SB's that only are in one diff and not sure what to do about .osb for that one diff at a time.


[Salad]

00:20:204 (4) - Distance to this feels kinda big for a non-dash, may be best to reduce it to like x:172. - Yeah I see your point. Fixed
00:23:169 (4) - A tad strong too, try x:320. - Fixed
02:48:983 (1) - This is a pretty strong note right now, and the lack of dash feels strange to me. Maybe Ctrl+H and move it to x:180? - Ohh good spot. Fixed
02:51:425 (6) - Maybe try x:216 on this, distance feels kinda far to me right now, a slight reduction would feel nicer. - Fixed but had nudged 02:51:774 (1) - to the right also so not so close
02:53:867 (4) - Same with this one, distance feels kinda strong, x:248 would be nicer to play. - Very noice

Really nice difficulty overall, some distances feel a tad strong but I feel it's fine. - Thank you

[Platter]

I think the AR would be better at AR8, both for spread, and because the bpm isn't that high, AR8 feels fine. - As said in PM. Leaving this because 8.3 feels smoother with sliders etc. (Yes having it on 8 did make it feel different XD)

01:16:890 (1) - Maybe curve this instead of having it as a straight line, droplet flow would feel better imo. - Hmm yeah very weird here in play. Tried curving and I think it made a little improvement but not so much. Just weird osu ;w;
02:59:448 (4,5,1) - This is one of the only times where there isn't a HDash to a note like 1, and it feels odd and quite noticable, I'd recommend changing the pattern around a bit to add a HDash to 1 here. - Did a lot of changing but yeah I managed to do it. defo did need a hyper here
03:21:774 (7) - Might be nice to curve this a bit like this for better flow out of the HDash, as currently a platter player could overdash the slider after the head, because of the direction change being too sudden. - I know what you mean here as I tried for ages to find something that would work well but curving it as you suggested made it somehow harder to catch the droplets for me. I find it fairly easy to have as it was.

Amazing platter overall. - Thanks again >w<

[Rain]

01:36:425 (1) - Maybe try and curve this slightly more? I feel like the droplets are a bit too close right now, resulting in overdashing. - Yep Fixed
02:37:820 - to 02:40:611 - Because this is the highest difficulty, maybe have a note on each 1/4 here for the lead in to the kiai? - I would if it was an overdose but I kind of wanted to get that feel that the player feels the song and map get slower to faster for the build up if that makes sense. I would feel it would be slightly overmapped also since the stream ahead.
03:41:832 (2) - Distance to this may feel a bit too strong considering how slow this last section is, I'd prefer not to have any dashes at all, and if you don't know this note is coming, it can result in a dash. Try x:168 instead. - Omg I never noticed this LOL! Yeah thanks XD Fixed

Amazing map, starred. Call me back.

Proof of metadata by the way (Seeing as the other bossfight song has the artist in all caps): https://bossfightmusic.bandcamp.com/album/sonder-2

xi-False wrote:

「MOD」

(Due to BN reasons I must apply this XD. I will still try to mod your map soon. These suggestions sadly might be a bit old though as I was waiting for the finished version but never happened ;w;)

Salad

-You can add a note here 00:16:018 - at x:240 and if you add a note make it a Whistle hit sounds goes well - Sorry I was focusing mainly on the drums here for salad
same here 00:16:541 - at x:152 place a note also make it whistle - There is no prompt sound here though O_o
and here as well 00:16:890 - at x:152 but make it Clap sound this time - Drum patterns again ;w;
and Lastly here as well 00:17:239 - at x:252 - Already one here (Must have added beforehand)

-I feel like this note 01:02:588 (5) - would be better at x:260 - I would spread 4 and 5 out but there would be no jump otherwise. And I quite like this stacked

-Move this note 02:41:657 (2) - a bit to the right, at x:304 - I will have on x:260 instead.
(Some sections on your beat maps can use more notes to make it sound catchy) - Don't want to overmap ;w;

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Beautiful map, with an amazing storyboard (as well as being one of the only storyboards that doesn't lag my computer).

Bubbled <3

To the next BN: Check to make sure you're fine with AR on the platter. I agree with Wild that it should be fine, but another opinion just to make sure would be nice.

1. Removed an unused SB object
2. Clarified some dash usage in Salad
3. Corrected some incorrect snaps in Platter and Rain

Chat Log

14:51 WildOne94: Heyooo. Just wanted clarify that you wanted to check Sonder again? (Because of what MB said yesterday)
14:51 JBHyperion: I sent you a skype message
14:51 JBHyperion: like 2 hours ago
14:51 JBHyperion: xd
14:51 WildOne94: Oh sorry skype still loading up
14:51 WildOne94: (well done now)
14:51 JBHyperion: ripppppppppp
14:51 JBHyperion: ok let's gogogogo
14:51 WildOne94: Only just got up xddd
14:52 JBHyperion: ohhhhh
14:52 WildOne94: I am excited
14:53 *JBHyperion is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/928444 Bossfight - Sonder [Salad]]
14:53 WildOne94:
14:53 JBHyperion: 00:45:843 (6,1) - can you increase this a tiny bit? can juuuuuuuust about be caught without dash, more distance would make it more clear
14:53 WildOne94: Btw just so we're right in thinking that "Bossfight" is correct ?
14:53 WildOne94: Because we think Deif got it wrong last time with "BOSSFIGHT"
14:54 JBHyperion: does he have a soundcloud or bancamp or something?
14:54 JBHyperion: like an official artist page
14:54 WildOne94: Sure. What note should I move where if possible ?
14:54 JBHyperion: (1) to x-396 would be good
14:54 WildOne94: Yeahhttps://bossfightmusic.bandcamp.com/album/sonder-2
14:54 WildOne94: okay fixed
14:54 WildOne94: (nudged 00:46:716 (2) - right also)
14:54 JBHyperion: yeah then "Bossfight" is used everywhere on that page
14:55 WildOne94: Coolio
14:55 JBHyperion: incidentally, however
14:55 JBHyperion: https://soundcloud.com/bossfightswe
14:55 JBHyperion: all lowercase
14:55 JBHyperion: lol
14:55 WildOne94: Yeah it's confusing XD
14:55 JBHyperion: Bandcamp will be more offical
14:55 WildOne94: but I have seen mostly with cap letter at the start
14:56 WildOne94: Including there youtube channel
14:56 WildOne94: Yeah
14:56 JBHyperion: ok if it's the most widely used, we'll stick with that
14:56 WildOne94: Cool
14:58 JBHyperion: 01:32:064 (2,3) - this is tempting to dash for but I don't think there should be one here, stack (2) with 01:33:285 (5) - ?
14:58 WildOne94: Fixed
14:59 WildOne94: would you say here needs to be a tiny bit bigger also ? 01:34:681 (3,4) -
15:00 JBHyperion: x-360?
15:01 WildOne94: Sure
15:01 WildOne94: moved (5) along with it also
15:01 WildOne94: makes a nicer jump 01:36:076 (5,1) - with music
15:01 WildOne94: Unless it's too big ?
15:02 WildOne94: I think it's fine tbh
15:02 JBHyperion: seems fine to me, there's really big emphasis there
15:02 WildOne94: Yeah true
15:03 JBHyperion: 02:14:448 (3,4,5,1) - I think (4) and (1) are both supposed to be jumps but the spacing is a little ambiguous, I'd move (3) to x-304 and (5) to x-252
15:03 WildOne94: Fixed
15:04 JBHyperion: 02:53:867 (4) - x-224 to make this a more clear jump please
15:05 WildOne94: Done
15:06 JBHyperion: that's all for Salad
15:06 WildOne94:
15:08 *JBHyperion is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895273 Bossfight - Sonder [Platter]]
15:08 JBHyperion: 01:16:541 (6,1) - I have to stop here as I expect a little more spacing in the kiai, kinda spoils the flow for me a little
15:09 JBHyperion: could you make (1) a C-shaped slider that ends in the same place?
15:09 JBHyperion: or closer to that anyway
15:09 JBHyperion: something like 1.8-2x spacing would feel smoother
15:09 JBHyperion: than 1.5x
15:10 WildOne94: You mean a C shape that ends on (2) ?
15:10 JBHyperion: no keep the same snapping
15:10 JBHyperion: something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320869 this]
15:10 WildOne94: (could you screenshot what you mean if pos)
15:10 WildOne94: Oh ty XD
15:11 WildOne94: Ahhh okay i see
15:12 WildOne94: okay done
15:12 WildOne94: http://puu.sh/phDjR/54a1e9c8e9.jpg
15:12 WildOne94: (just to show on my end)
15:12 JBHyperion: sick that m9
15:12 WildOne94: Hue
15:13 WildOne94: oh just noticed something of my own
15:13 WildOne94: in other diffs 01:46:018 (1,1) -
15:13 WildOne94: I have that spaced out
15:13 WildOne94: Put final note before break to the left also ?
15:13 WildOne94: (hey wait a second who it modding here! not me! XD)
15:14 JBHyperion: self modding is good
15:14 WildOne94: like x:68?
15:14 JBHyperion: totally up to you
15:14 JBHyperion: jump or antijump work nicely there
15:14 WildOne94: Alrighty
15:14 WildOne94: Well will change due to other diffs doing it
15:14 JBHyperion: 01:42:006 (1,2,3) - these should be 1/3 instead of 1/4, there are no drums here I think
15:15 JBHyperion: following synth is a better option
15:15 WildOne94: there is a ticking noise but hmmm
15:15 JBHyperion: hmm
15:15 WildOne94: but yeah I think synth
15:15 JBHyperion: it's very faint
15:15 JBHyperion: but still, synth is the clear dominant sound there
15:16 WildOne94: 01:42:297 (2) - and 01:42:529 (3) - alright ?
15:17 JBHyperion: (1) will also need to removed an replaced with a circle
15:17 JBHyperion: wait
15:17 JBHyperion: oh god
15:18 JBHyperion: no
15:18 JBHyperion: it's 1/12 ;_;
15:18 WildOne94: or extend slider ?
15:18 WildOne94: Yeah ;w;
15:18 WildOne94: should i just keep the 1/4 ?
15:18 JBHyperion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320944
15:18 JBHyperion: this is the best option imo
15:19 WildOne94: okedoke
15:26 JBHyperion: 02:49:855 - any reason why you chose not to map this 1/4 beat when you did all the others?
15:27 JBHyperion: making (3) a 1/4 slider would be cool
15:27 WildOne94: Yeah good idea. Fixed
15:28 JBHyperion: last diff
15:28 JBHyperion: le Rain
15:28 WildOne94:
15:29 WildOne94: was weird how I didn't map that
15:29 JBHyperion: yeah
15:29 JBHyperion: xD
15:29 WildOne94: xD
15:30 JBHyperion: not asking you to change since it's personal taste, but I would have made 00:32:413 (2) into a 1/8 triplet for the guitar grace
15:30 JBHyperion: 00:32:413 (2) -
15:30 JBHyperion: oops
15:31 WildOne94: XD
15:31 JBHyperion: there are lots of similar sounds, I just feel it gives a unique touch, but it's not necessary at all
15:31 JBHyperion: I've used them ever since my first ranked map lol
15:31 WildOne94: Hmmm it is a good idea but would I need to change all of them then ?
15:31 WildOne94: actually
15:31 WildOne94: that might be the only one
15:32 JBHyperion: for consistceny, yes
15:32 JBHyperion: they come every stanza
15:32 JBHyperion: such as 00:37:995 (2) -
15:32 JBHyperion: actually ut's just those two I thinkl
15:32 JBHyperion: then the synth comes in
15:32 WildOne94: will have a quick try
15:33 JBHyperion: kk
15:33 WildOne94: Yeah I like this
15:33 WildOne94: fixed
15:33 JBHyperion: sweeeet
15:33 JBHyperion: groovy guitar strums
15:34 WildOne94: Indeed
15:35 JBHyperion: yeah after 00:40:611 (1) - you follow wynth so it wouldn't make sense to add 1/8 guitar after that
15:35 JBHyperion: synth*
15:35 WildOne94: Yeah
15:36 WildOne94: hmmm should i have added a note here ? 00:59:448 -
15:36 JBHyperion: yeah good call
15:36 WildOne94: or even another 1/8 triplet inface
15:36 WildOne94: t
15:36 JBHyperion: closer to (7)
15:37 WildOne94: Yeah like this http://puu.sh/phEAa/1355d78136.jpg
15:37 JBHyperion: yayayayaya that's sick
15:38 WildOne94: Now all it needs it a banging big donk on it
15:39 JBHyperion: 01:10:262 (6) - right a bit please? currently 01:10:611 (7,8) - is a flowstop
15:40 WildOne94: Like how far ? x:432 ?
15:40 JBHyperion: was gonna say 428 but yeah close enough xD
15:40 WildOne94: XD
15:51 JBHyperion: 02:12:704 (1,2) - disagree with this hyper here, (2) is really weak
15:52 WildOne94: Oh that should have been 02:12:878 (2,3) - right ?
15:52 JBHyperion: hmm
15:52 JBHyperion: (5) would be better for the clap, but (3) is also acceptable
15:53 WildOne94: hmm I think I will just remove hyper XD
15:53 JBHyperion: kk
15:54 JBHyperion: 02:40:960 (4,5) - aaaah why jump here when this is a ternary rhythm
15:55 JBHyperion: notes should be paired into 3s
15:55 JBHyperion: jump (3,4), (6,1), etc.
15:56 WildOne94: oh shit arh!
15:56 JBHyperion: 02:41:890 (6,7) - also 1/12 burst between these two and why not continue the 1/3 pattern? (7) feels weird as a single slider
15:56 JBHyperion: kinda anticlimactic
15:56 JBHyperion: I think that's hwo you say that xD
15:57 JBHyperion: "hwo"
15:57 JBHyperion: KILL ME
15:58 WildOne94: xD
15:58 WildOne94: changing now
15:58 JBHyperion: kk
15:58 JBHyperion: I'll just see if there's anything else
15:59 WildOne94: want me to update ?
15:59 JBHyperion: nah
15:59 JBHyperion: not yet
15:59 JBHyperion: 03:18:809 (5,6,7) - these should be 1/12
16:00 JBHyperion: 03:24:739 - map this kick drum?
16:00 WildOne94: also added a note here 03:18:867 -
16:01 JBHyperion: yeah you should have a triplet there in 1/12
16:01 JBHyperion: and then 03:18:983 (8) - on the downbeat
16:01 WildOne94: and yeah added
16:02 WildOne94: Yep
16:02 JBHyperion: 03:19:506 - synth note?
16:03 WildOne94: Oh yeah cool. Makes a little nice jump also then
16:03 JBHyperion: yeee
16:03 WildOne94: when placed at x:164
16:05 JBHyperion: apparently "Rain Drop 7(small)" is unused
16:05 JBHyperion: o_O
16:06 WildOne94: Oh is that in the folder still ?
16:06 JBHyperion: seems so
16:06 JBHyperion: xD
16:06 WildOne94: ah then my bad XD
16:07 WildOne94: removed
16:07 JBHyperion: that should be everything
16:07 WildOne94: Update ?
16:07 JBHyperion: yeah
16:08 WildOne94: Updated
16:23 JBHyperion: oh one more thing
16:24 JBHyperion: 03:13:750 (10,11,1) -
16:24 JBHyperion: this hyper is easy to overshoot and droplet miss, so if you could weaken it that would be cool
16:24 JBHyperion: but also
16:24 JBHyperion: there is another 1/12 triplet synth here you can add in
16:24 WildOne94: hmmmm how to do
16:26 WildOne94: I might leave the synth this time though as it would look weird on the timeline and in play imo. Best to keep consistent with the stream
16:26 JBHyperion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5321473
16:26 JBHyperion: see what you make of that
16:26 JBHyperion: synth is very noticeable
16:26 WildOne94: Oh like that
16:26 WildOne94: I see
16:26 JBHyperion: ?even though I missed it just before/
16:27 WildOne94: fixed little differnently
16:27 JBHyperion: kk
16:27 JBHyperion: that's it
16:27 JBHyperion: for real
16:27 JBHyperion: I ho[e
16:27 JBHyperion: hope*
16:27 WildOne94: XD
16:27 WildOne94: updating
16:27 JBHyperion: ffffffffff spelling
16:27 WildOne94: Updated
16:28 JBHyperion: yeah that's totally fine
16:28 WildOne94:

JBHyperion wrote:

Did some IRC with Wild:

1. Removed an unused SB object
2. Clarified some dash usage in Salad
3. Corrected some incorrect snaps in Platter and Rain

Chat Log

14:51 WildOne94: Heyooo. Just wanted clarify that you wanted to check Sonder again? (Because of what MB said yesterday)
14:51 JBHyperion: I sent you a skype message
14:51 JBHyperion: like 2 hours ago
14:51 JBHyperion: xd
14:51 WildOne94: Oh sorry skype still loading up
14:51 WildOne94: (well done now)
14:51 JBHyperion: ripppppppppp
14:51 JBHyperion: ok let's gogogogo
14:51 WildOne94: Only just got up xddd
14:52 JBHyperion: ohhhhh
14:52 WildOne94: I am excited
14:53 *JBHyperion is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/928444 Bossfight - Sonder [Salad]]
14:53 WildOne94:
14:53 JBHyperion: 00:45:843 (6,1) - can you increase this a tiny bit? can juuuuuuuust about be caught without dash, more distance would make it more clear
14:53 WildOne94: Btw just so we're right in thinking that "Bossfight" is correct ?
14:53 WildOne94: Because we think Deif got it wrong last time with "BOSSFIGHT"
14:54 JBHyperion: does he have a soundcloud or bancamp or something?
14:54 JBHyperion: like an official artist page
14:54 WildOne94: Sure. What note should I move where if possible ?
14:54 JBHyperion: (1) to x-396 would be good
14:54 WildOne94: Yeahhttps://bossfightmusic.bandcamp.com/album/sonder-2
14:54 WildOne94: okay fixed
14:54 WildOne94: (nudged 00:46:716 (2) - right also)
14:54 JBHyperion: yeah then "Bossfight" is used everywhere on that page
14:55 WildOne94: Coolio
14:55 JBHyperion: incidentally, however
14:55 JBHyperion: https://soundcloud.com/bossfightswe
14:55 JBHyperion: all lowercase
14:55 JBHyperion: lol
14:55 WildOne94: Yeah it's confusing XD
14:55 JBHyperion: Bandcamp will be more offical
14:55 WildOne94: but I have seen mostly with cap letter at the start
14:56 WildOne94: Including there youtube channel
14:56 WildOne94: Yeah
14:56 JBHyperion: ok if it's the most widely used, we'll stick with that
14:56 WildOne94: Cool
14:58 JBHyperion: 01:32:064 (2,3) - this is tempting to dash for but I don't think there should be one here, stack (2) with 01:33:285 (5) - ?
14:58 WildOne94: Fixed
14:59 WildOne94: would you say here needs to be a tiny bit bigger also ? 01:34:681 (3,4) -
15:00 JBHyperion: x-360?
15:01 WildOne94: Sure
15:01 WildOne94: moved (5) along with it also
15:01 WildOne94: makes a nicer jump 01:36:076 (5,1) - with music
15:01 WildOne94: Unless it's too big ?
15:02 WildOne94: I think it's fine tbh
15:02 JBHyperion: seems fine to me, there's really big emphasis there
15:02 WildOne94: Yeah true
15:03 JBHyperion: 02:14:448 (3,4,5,1) - I think (4) and (1) are both supposed to be jumps but the spacing is a little ambiguous, I'd move (3) to x-304 and (5) to x-252
15:03 WildOne94: Fixed
15:04 JBHyperion: 02:53:867 (4) - x-224 to make this a more clear jump please
15:05 WildOne94: Done
15:06 JBHyperion: that's all for Salad
15:06 WildOne94:
15:08 *JBHyperion is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895273 Bossfight - Sonder [Platter]]
15:08 JBHyperion: 01:16:541 (6,1) - I have to stop here as I expect a little more spacing in the kiai, kinda spoils the flow for me a little
15:09 JBHyperion: could you make (1) a C-shaped slider that ends in the same place?
15:09 JBHyperion: or closer to that anyway
15:09 JBHyperion: something like 1.8-2x spacing would feel smoother
15:09 JBHyperion: than 1.5x
15:10 WildOne94: You mean a C shape that ends on (2) ?
15:10 JBHyperion: no keep the same snapping
15:10 JBHyperion: something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320869 this]
15:10 WildOne94: (could you screenshot what you mean if pos)
15:10 WildOne94: Oh ty XD
15:11 WildOne94: Ahhh okay i see
15:12 WildOne94: okay done
15:12 WildOne94: http://puu.sh/phDjR/54a1e9c8e9.jpg
15:12 WildOne94: (just to show on my end)
15:12 JBHyperion: sick that m9
15:12 WildOne94: Hue
15:13 WildOne94: oh just noticed something of my own
15:13 WildOne94: in other diffs 01:46:018 (1,1) -
15:13 WildOne94: I have that spaced out
15:13 WildOne94: Put final note before break to the left also ?
15:13 WildOne94: (hey wait a second who it modding here! not me! XD)
15:14 JBHyperion: self modding is good
15:14 WildOne94: like x:68?
15:14 JBHyperion: totally up to you
15:14 JBHyperion: jump or antijump work nicely there
15:14 WildOne94: Alrighty
15:14 WildOne94: Well will change due to other diffs doing it
15:14 JBHyperion: 01:42:006 (1,2,3) - these should be 1/3 instead of 1/4, there are no drums here I think
15:15 JBHyperion: following synth is a better option
15:15 WildOne94: there is a ticking noise but hmmm
15:15 JBHyperion: hmm
15:15 WildOne94: but yeah I think synth
15:15 JBHyperion: it's very faint
15:15 JBHyperion: but still, synth is the clear dominant sound there
15:16 WildOne94: 01:42:297 (2) - and 01:42:529 (3) - alright ?
15:17 JBHyperion: (1) will also need to removed an replaced with a circle
15:17 JBHyperion: wait
15:17 JBHyperion: oh god
15:18 JBHyperion: no
15:18 JBHyperion: it's 1/12 ;_;
15:18 WildOne94: or extend slider ?
15:18 WildOne94: Yeah ;w;
15:18 WildOne94: should i just keep the 1/4 ?
15:18 JBHyperion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5320944
15:18 JBHyperion: this is the best option imo
15:19 WildOne94: okedoke
15:26 JBHyperion: 02:49:855 - any reason why you chose not to map this 1/4 beat when you did all the others?
15:27 JBHyperion: making (3) a 1/4 slider would be cool
15:27 WildOne94: Yeah good idea. Fixed
15:28 JBHyperion: last diff
15:28 JBHyperion: le Rain
15:28 WildOne94:
15:29 WildOne94: was weird how I didn't map that
15:29 JBHyperion: yeah
15:29 JBHyperion: xD
15:29 WildOne94: xD
15:30 JBHyperion: not asking you to change since it's personal taste, but I would have made 00:32:413 (2) into a 1/8 triplet for the guitar grace
15:30 JBHyperion: 00:32:413 (2) -
15:30 JBHyperion: oops
15:31 WildOne94: XD
15:31 JBHyperion: there are lots of similar sounds, I just feel it gives a unique touch, but it's not necessary at all
15:31 JBHyperion: I've used them ever since my first ranked map lol
15:31 WildOne94: Hmmm it is a good idea but would I need to change all of them then ?
15:31 WildOne94: actually
15:31 WildOne94: that might be the only one
15:32 JBHyperion: for consistceny, yes
15:32 JBHyperion: they come every stanza
15:32 JBHyperion: such as 00:37:995 (2) -
15:32 JBHyperion: actually ut's just those two I thinkl
15:32 JBHyperion: then the synth comes in
15:32 WildOne94: will have a quick try
15:33 JBHyperion: kk
15:33 WildOne94: Yeah I like this
15:33 WildOne94: fixed
15:33 JBHyperion: sweeeet
15:33 JBHyperion: groovy guitar strums
15:34 WildOne94: Indeed
15:35 JBHyperion: yeah after 00:40:611 (1) - you follow wynth so it wouldn't make sense to add 1/8 guitar after that
15:35 JBHyperion: synth*
15:35 WildOne94: Yeah
15:36 WildOne94: hmmm should i have added a note here ? 00:59:448 -
15:36 JBHyperion: yeah good call
15:36 WildOne94: or even another 1/8 triplet inface
15:36 WildOne94: t
15:36 JBHyperion: closer to (7)
15:37 WildOne94: Yeah like this http://puu.sh/phEAa/1355d78136.jpg
15:37 JBHyperion: yayayayaya that's sick
15:38 WildOne94: Now all it needs it a banging big donk on it
15:39 JBHyperion: 01:10:262 (6) - right a bit please? currently 01:10:611 (7,8) - is a flowstop
15:40 WildOne94: Like how far ? x:432 ?
15:40 JBHyperion: was gonna say 428 but yeah close enough xD
15:40 WildOne94: XD
15:51 JBHyperion: 02:12:704 (1,2) - disagree with this hyper here, (2) is really weak
15:52 WildOne94: Oh that should have been 02:12:878 (2,3) - right ?
15:52 JBHyperion: hmm
15:52 JBHyperion: (5) would be better for the clap, but (3) is also acceptable
15:53 WildOne94: hmm I think I will just remove hyper XD
15:53 JBHyperion: kk
15:54 JBHyperion: 02:40:960 (4,5) - aaaah why jump here when this is a ternary rhythm
15:55 JBHyperion: notes should be paired into 3s
15:55 JBHyperion: jump (3,4), (6,1), etc.
15:56 WildOne94: oh shit arh!
15:56 JBHyperion: 02:41:890 (6,7) - also 1/12 burst between these two and why not continue the 1/3 pattern? (7) feels weird as a single slider
15:56 JBHyperion: kinda anticlimactic
15:56 JBHyperion: I think that's hwo you say that xD
15:57 JBHyperion: "hwo"
15:57 JBHyperion: KILL ME
15:58 WildOne94: xD
15:58 WildOne94: changing now
15:58 JBHyperion: kk
15:58 JBHyperion: I'll just see if there's anything else
15:59 WildOne94: want me to update ?
15:59 JBHyperion: nah
15:59 JBHyperion: not yet
15:59 JBHyperion: 03:18:809 (5,6,7) - these should be 1/12
16:00 JBHyperion: 03:24:739 - map this kick drum?
16:00 WildOne94: also added a note here 03:18:867 -
16:01 JBHyperion: yeah you should have a triplet there in 1/12
16:01 JBHyperion: and then 03:18:983 (8) - on the downbeat
16:01 WildOne94: and yeah added
16:02 WildOne94: Yep
16:02 JBHyperion: 03:19:506 - synth note?
16:03 WildOne94: Oh yeah cool. Makes a little nice jump also then
16:03 JBHyperion: yeee
16:03 WildOne94: when placed at x:164
16:05 JBHyperion: apparently "Rain Drop 7(small)" is unused
16:05 JBHyperion: o_O
16:06 WildOne94: Oh is that in the folder still ?
16:06 JBHyperion: seems so
16:06 JBHyperion: xD
16:06 WildOne94: ah then my bad XD
16:07 WildOne94: removed
16:07 JBHyperion: that should be everything
16:07 WildOne94: Update ?
16:07 JBHyperion: yeah
16:08 WildOne94: Updated
16:23 JBHyperion: oh one more thing
16:24 JBHyperion: 03:13:750 (10,11,1) -
16:24 JBHyperion: this hyper is easy to overshoot and droplet miss, so if you could weaken it that would be cool
16:24 JBHyperion: but also
16:24 JBHyperion: there is another 1/12 triplet synth here you can add in
16:24 WildOne94: hmmmm how to do
16:26 WildOne94: I might leave the synth this time though as it would look weird on the timeline and in play imo. Best to keep consistent with the stream
16:26 JBHyperion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5321473
16:26 JBHyperion: see what you make of that
16:26 JBHyperion: synth is very noticeable
16:26 WildOne94: Oh like that
16:26 WildOne94: I see
16:26 JBHyperion: ?even though I missed it just before/
16:27 WildOne94: fixed little differnently
16:27 JBHyperion: kk
16:27 JBHyperion: that's it
16:27 JBHyperion: for real
16:27 JBHyperion: I ho[e
16:27 JBHyperion: hope*
16:27 WildOne94: XD
16:27 WildOne94: updating
16:27 JBHyperion: ffffffffff spelling
16:27 WildOne94: Updated
16:28 JBHyperion: yeah that's totally fine
16:28 WildOne94:

Great chill map and cool SB, congrats!

Qualified~