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Starrodkirby86
Hey Gonzvlo! :)

So let's see what you got here. Nice song choice. xD

It seems that there's duplicate Slow Downs in your Storyboard script. Since they're all at the same location (for the most part), you might as well remove the Slow Down warnings in the .osu storyboards for [Normal] and [Difficult]. Keep the Slow Down warning in the .osb.

That's pretty much the needed stuff there. xp

So let's see the other stuff...

First of all, really cool storyboard. The Photoshop effect and the MUSE flash was really interesting and creative. Especially liked the build up you made as it went into the chorus.

Suggestions!

Your strobes for strobe.png. I'm trying to understand why you decided to place them on the 2nd and 4th 1/1 beat. It's really irregular. xD Are you trying to emphasize the "wrong" in the lyrics? Well, my suggestion here is to try it out 1/1 earlier (e.g. try it on L,100037,1 instead) and see how you like it. It's up to you. :3

Also, the strobes for BNFLASH.png. It's a nice build up, but when I feel it actually reaches to the Kiai chorus, there isn't really that climax I was expecting. Perhaps you can have a full white background that fades from 1 to 0 when you're at 128037 and 224037? (By the way, the line here isn't fully invisible; F,0,224037,226259,1,0.01351351 , you may consider just putting that off to 0) What do you think?

My suggestions might suck, or whatever. XD But that's rather up to you. This is awesome stuff anyway. ;)
Hushu_old
- Relaxing is quite boring and very alike ur other pending beatmap, is there anything what can be done about it? :|
- Difficult is way better (and harder somewhat,..) than ur other pending beatmap! Thanks for the creativity :D

Advice: This might be dubledori, but I wonder why you've chosen oragne and green for the buttom and above of the storyboard, wouldn't orange and red be more 'suitable'? <-- Just a proposition!
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Hey Gonzvlo! :) HI Kirby =D

So let's see what you got here. Nice song choice. xD

It seems that there's duplicate Slow Downs in your Storyboard script. Since they're all at the same location (for the most part), you might as well remove the Slow Down warnings in the .osu storyboards for [Normal] and [Difficult]. Keep the Slow Down warning in the .osb. Oops :P , Ok I had to remove it from .obs, Because Larto's diff doesn't need the warning.

That's pretty much the needed stuff there. xp

So let's see the other stuff...

First of all, really cool storyboard. The Photoshop effect and the MUSE flash was really interesting and creative. Especially liked the build up you made as it went into the chorus. Thanks =]

Suggestions!

Your strobes for strobe.png. I'm trying to understand why you decided to place them on the 2nd and 4th 1/1 beat. It's really irregular. xD Are you trying to emphasize the "wrong" in the lyrics? Well, my suggestion here is to try it out 1/1 earlier (e.g. try it on L,100037,1 instead) and see how you like it. It's up to you. :3 Uhm yeah I tried to emphasize "wrong", But you gave me an idea for the 1/1 earlier beats, I'll try it later.

Also, the strobes for BNFLASH.png. It's a nice build up, but when I feel it actually reaches to the Kiai chorus, there isn't really that climax I was expecting. Perhaps you can have a full white background that fades from 1 to 0 when you're at 128037 and 224037? (By the way, the line here isn't fully invisible; F,0,224037,226259,1,0.01351351 , you may consider just putting that off to 0) What do you think? =D Ok, It looks nice.

My suggestions might suck, or whatever. XD But that's rather up to you. This is awesome stuff anyway. ;)
Thanks Kirby =]

Hushu wrote:

- Relaxing is quite boring and very alike ur other pending beatmap, is there anything what can be done about it? :|
How is it boring :( ? , I find it very creative and fun for the easiest diff.
- Difficult is way better (and harder somewhat,..) than ur other pending beatmap! Thanks for the creativity :D
Thanks =]

Advice: This might be dubledori, but I wonder why you've chosen oragne and green for the buttom and above of the storyboard, wouldn't orange and red be more 'suitable'? <-- Just a proposition!
Yeah the colors are very random also the BG has a lot of colours so it's difficult to choose the right ones, I'll try something later.
Thanks for the feedback.
NotShinta
General:
An inbetween diff between Difficult and Larto's would certainly be nice.
Larto goes in tags.

Larto's Intense
~

Difficult:
01:39:815 - Put a hitcircle here. (If you do this, do the same for 01:43:371, 01:46:926 etc.)
01:55:148 (4,5) - Doesn't really matter, but I thought there was a hitcircle inbetween these...
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.
03:14:704 (1) - Why such a short spinner?
03:51:148 (1) - End 1/2 earlier.
04:08:037 (1) - I think the slowdown should come AFTER this slider. Plus I wouldn't make it 0.5 but meh
04:30:037 (1) - Make this last for most of the break too like a bawse.
04:39:148 - Whistles from here onward offend my ears. I think finishes would achieve the 'epic' feel you were probably aiming for better.

Relaxing:
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.

Very impressive in general <3
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

NotShinta wrote:

General:
An inbetween diff between Difficult and Larto's would certainly be nice.
Larto goes in tags.

Larto's Intense
~

Difficult:
01:39:815 - Put a hitcircle here. (If you do this, do the same for 01:43:371, 01:46:926 etc.)
01:55:148 (4,5) - Doesn't really matter, but I thought there was a hitcircle inbetween these...
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.
03:14:704 (1) - Why such a short spinner?
03:51:148 (1) - End 1/2 earlier.
04:08:037 (1) - I think the slowdown should come AFTER this slider. Plus I wouldn't make it 0.5 but meh
04:30:037 (1) - Make this last for most of the break too like a bawse.
04:39:148 - Whistles from here onward offend my ears. I think finishes would achieve the 'epic' feel you were probably aiming for better.

Relaxing:
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.

Very impressive in general <3
Almost everything fixed, Thanks =D
EDIT: About the other diff, When I started mapping this I planned to have 3 diffs only but if someone else agrees with you I'll map a new one.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Ugh double post D:
DJ Lightning
great map and song...didn´t found anything
star~
Shohei Ohtani
I did this mod a while ago, but I stopped and forgot to do it again

Yay

Overall:
This map seems a bit long :D~

omghitsound mod :D~. I didn't say stuff on easy, though ;~;. If you want me to do stuff on easy, I can, but you can just get a basic idea from hard :D~.
Larto:
So much overlapping ;~;
01:56:482 (2) - Clap
02:00:482 (3) - ^
02:04:037 (4) - ^
03:58:259 (1) - Clap on end of slider
03:59:593 (3) - Clap
04:00:037 (4) - Clap on end of slider
04:40:926 (1) - New Combo
04:44:481 (1) - ^
04:51:704 (1,1,1) - Triple spinners are gay D:

Hard
00:47:593 (1) - Whistle
00:48:482 (3) - ^
00:48:926 (4) - Whistle of end
00:52:037 (2) - Whistle
00:52:926 (4) - Whistle on beginning, Finish on end
00:54:259 (1,2) - Whistle on beginning
00:56:704 (3) - Whistle on blue tick, finish on white tick
00:59:148 (2) - Whistle
01:00:037 (4) - ^
01:00:259 (5) - Finish
01:02:704 (2) - Whistle
01:03:593 (3) - ^
01:03:815 (4) - Finish
01:05:148 (1) - Whistle on end
01:06:259 (2) - Whistle
01:06:704 (3) - Whistle on beginning
01:08:482 (1) - ^
01:09:593 (2) - ^
01:10:926 (3) - ^
01:24:037 (1) - Clap
04:37:815 - Remove break
04:54:259 (7,8,9,10) - Slightly touching HP bar

Easy:
Hitsound the beginning <3~.
01:52:482 (1) - Lazy. . .
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
O.O

Thanks CDFA ~

EDIT: Added Some skin elements and some new things to the SB.
Luvdic
Relaxing:

01:52:482 (1) - I would start spinner at 01:53:815, and end it at 01:58:037. Main idea of doing this is to shorten the spinner, cause its too long for my taste and something else could be done. Anyways, if you were to do this, you can fill the blank space before the spinner placing beats like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53953. And maybe, just maybe add a circle at 01:58:704 (1) if you feel that there is enough time for newbies to recover from the spinner.
02:16:926 - Consider adding a circle here, and 02:17:815 - too
03:43:593 (4) - Couldnt you start the slider at 03:44:037 - so it fits more to the sb? I really hate strobes than don't fits with the map, specially those strong strobes like this one and + the kiai >_>
03:52:926 - Consider adding a circle here, and 03:53:815 - too

A really nice easy diff to be honest

Average:

01:15:593 (6) - Can't believe i'm going to say this, but... 1 grip up please
01:39:815 - Really needs a beat in this spot.
01:43:371 - Really needs a beat in this spot. You could also shorten 01:41:815 (5) - by 1/2 so it ends at 01:42:926 - to make it a bit easier.
01:46:926 - Same as above.
01:50:482 - I guess this one is okay for me.

Larto's Insane:

04:07:148 (9) - Consider adding a new combo here...
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

ErufenRito wrote:

MOD
Ok, Fixed some stuff, Thanks.
cesc
Finally I've finish the guest diff, sorry for the delay!
I really love this song and Muse in general, so I've put the best of myself here...I hope °°

Download: Muse - Resistance (Gonzvlo) [Cesc's Extreme].osu
p.s: I named it as "Cesc's.." (with caps) on purpose, if you want you can replace it with "cesc's.."
p.p.s: Hey Gonzvlo! Why don't you use a Kudosu Star here? haiohoiahoai
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
- Diff Added.
- Added some Skin elements.
- Added SB at the end.
- Fixed Combo Colours.

@cesc: Thanks :3 , The diff is cool, I'm not convinced about some "Whistles Spam" tho.

p.s: About the k-stars, Blame my browser :(
narakucrimson
Awesome. Really awesome.

This is actually one of the maps I want to see ranked soon :O

Here's my contribution~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

narakucrimson's sign wrote:

30 Seconds to Mars - Kings and Queens
I want to see that map!, I love that song o.o


Thanks for supporting :3
lovhin456
Hey Gonz ~ >w<

General;
- Todo bien aqui ~

Skin;
- En el comboburst al costado de la cara hay algo que quedo seguro de borrar lo que estaba alrededor, ademas tiene transparencia que no se usa >w>
- Ese spinner-approach circle D: me has decepcionado >w> el borde de afuera de ve mal, mejor usa este que hice :3

Relaxing;
- 00:58:037 >> Mejor en el tick blanco que sigue >w>
- 01:37:815 >> Finish al final ?
- 03:12:926 (4,5,6) >> Un slider en lugar de todos ?
- 04:13:815 >> Cambia por finish ?
- Umm, pienso que el volumen esta muy alto, bueno para mi se escuchan mas los hitsounds que la musica misma, tal vez bajale 1 o 2 ticks a cada timing section, creo que esto va para todas las diffs =w=

Average;
- 03:35:593 >> Que de reversa en 03:36:259 y despues agrega una nota en el espacio con un nuevo combo
- 04:54:481 (2,4) >> Umm, mejor sin los claps ~

Larto's Intense;
- Nice

Cesc's Extreme;
- 01:52:926 (3,4,5,6) >> I don't like how these sound ;w;
- 02:07:148 ~ 02:07:815 >> Add notes on the blue ticks ?
- 02:32:704 >> End kiai here
- 03:28:593 >> Remove clap and maybe add a note on the next tick (red)
- 04:10:926 (2,3,4) >> I don't like how these sounds ;w;

* Star ~

cesc
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Most of the suggestions done!

Thanks!
Mashley
Surprise bubble! :D
mm201
-20ms to the offset. Also consider setting tick 2?

I'll volunteer a diff for this if you like.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Thanks Mashley and MetalMario201

Offset and Tickrate Fixed
mm201
Please also set a BPM of 134.980

(do not kudosu me again for timing)

Download: Muse - Resistance (Gonzvlo) [iNiS201].osu
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Diff added and Timing Fixed

Thanks
Card N'FoRcE
cesc's difficulty is missing.

Something happened when you resubmitted?
Luvdic
Wheres cesc's diff?

ADD IT.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Hmm, Ok we're ready to go.
cesc
Fix'd something on mine

Download: Muse - Resistance (cesc) [Cesc's Extreme].osu
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Updated~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Bump.
NoHitter
General
IMO the last kiai section should start on 04:40:941.

Relaxing
01:48:915 (3) - This slider actually surprised me when I tried playing it. I play with snaking sliders off. Perhaps make it a regular one instead?
03:24:930 (5) - ^

Average
Great.

iNiS201
04:10:714 (x) - Perhaps map this part? This is the only diff with a break here.

Larto's Intense
03:42:043 (5) - Not too sure about this spacing...

Cesc's Extreme
I kind of biased against small circle sizes, but other than that, it's good.

Overall
Great mapset, solid difficulties, skin is a nice touch. Best mapset I've played in a while.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

NoHItter wrote:

General
IMO the last kiai section should start on 04:40:941. It seems better on 04:39:163 imo

Relaxing
01:48:915 (3) - This slider actually surprised me when I tried playing it. I play with snaking sliders off. Perhaps make it a regular one instead?
03:24:930 (5) - ^
Lol, Ok fixed both :3
Thanks, I'll get Larto and MM to check the mod.
cesc

NoHItter wrote:

Cesc's Extreme
I kind of biased against small circle sizes, but other than that, it's good.
How can a MAT say something like this? You have no idea of what "small circle sizes" are in osu.
By the way, I appreciate you think it's fine.
mm201
Voluntary fixes, keeping the break~

Download: Muse - Resistance (Gonzvlo) [iNiS201].osu
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Sorry, I'm late

MM's diff updated, no changes on Larto's
LuPiiTa
8-)
NoHitter

cesc wrote:

How can a MAT say something like this? You have no idea of what "small circle sizes" are in osu.
By the way, I appreciate you think it's fine.
Well it's rare to find a map with a circle size of 5, most people tend to use circle size 4 as their smallest, but yeah it's not the smallest circle size.

OK, rechecked everything, seems fine.
Here's your bubble.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Oh great, thanks NoHitter
gustjr1997
:)
PotsBreaker
I like this song.
Card N'FoRcE
Sorry, but the amount of Strobes does not justify a Epilepsy warning, so please remove it.

I mean, that kind of effect is something that can happen in everyday life and would not cause epilepsy, we can't just add the warning everytime we have a small flash, it breaks the purpose of the warning.
(Also i'd like to recall the 6-strobes per second i was told by peppy)

Other small suggestions if you want to follow them:

I suggest making the lighting a bit more brighter, it's almost like if it's not there at all.
Please please please, add some Finish hitsounds to the choruses, they would fit so great.

- Average:
Approach Rate -1? 6 Feels a bit too fast sometimes.
02:17:809 (4) - 04:47:386 (4) - remove these?
03:40:043 (4,5,6) - please move them down a bit

- Larto's:
04:23:161 (6) - new combo?

Feel free to PM me after you check these things.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry, but the amount of Strobes does not justify a Epilepsy warning, so please remove it.

Fair enough.

Other small suggestions if you want to follow them:

I suggest making the lighting a bit more brighter, it's almost like if it's not there at all. No changes here :3
Please please please, add some Finish hitsounds to the choruses, they would fit so great. Added

- Average:
Approach Rate -1? 6 Feels a bit too fast sometimes. Ok, reduced
02:17:809 (4) - 04:47:386 (4) - remove these? Done
03:40:043 (4,5,6) - please move them down a bit Done

- Larto's:
04:23:161 (6) - new combo? Updated
Thanks Cn'F :3
Mantis
;)
foulcoon
First of all, I love this song.

Second, I only played Larto's and the Cesc's Extreme difficulties

[Larto's Intense]
effin' brilliant

except

03:34:264 (3,4,5) - makes me want to punch a baby, and made me mess up on the streams at the end because i was still thinking violent thoughts


the other diff i played was kinda safe and boring with weird rhythmic patterns.

but yeah Larto's diff was fun and thats all i really cared about. Good job.

Edit: oh yeah and the orange flashing on the top and bottom of the screen is stupid. other than that thumbs up
Card N'FoRcE
Sorry for being late, i was busy these days ;_;

Anyway, my suggestions were mostly cosmetic, so here we go~
IceBeam
Awesome,Gonz <3

I love this song so much,thanks for mapping it!

10/10
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
Oh! Great thanks Cn'F :3

B-but I was still waiting Larto's decision about those sliders included in foulcoon's mod post, oh well...
narakucrimson
At last!
OzzyOzrock
he could be wrong...
lovhin456
Congrats Gonz !! >w<
Sallad4ever
Finally ranked, gratz~
;)
professeur layton
i like this beatmap good job and good job for skin MUSE :)
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