1. EZ (2.75 stars, 155 notes)
2. HD (4.92 stars, 355 notes)
3. MX (5 stars, 545 notes)
4. NM (4.32 stars, 231 notes)

Deif wrote:

[EZ]
- Background image doesn't show should be ok now, if it's not, not sure how to fix this
- 0.38.900 (2): Spacing - Move 6 grids down, 3 left ok
- 0.39.700 (4): ^ Move 7 grids right ok
- 0.42.100 (2): ^ Move 6 grids up, 3 right ok
- 0.42.900 (4): ^ Move 7 grids left ok
- 1.09.500 (5): This should be at 1.09.300 I actually want them this way...
- 1.10.100 (6): ^ at 1.09.900 ...will change if others can't read them/don't like them too
- 1.10.700 (7): ^ at 1.10.500 ^
- 1.10.900 (x): Add note ^
- 1.44.300 (spin): This should end at 1.46.500 fixed, and for nm/hd too
- 1.50.500 (1): Spacing - Move 4 grids left ok
- 1.50.900 (2): ^ Move 4 grids right ok
- 1.52.100 (4): ^ Move 4 grids right ok
- 1.52.500 (5): ^ Move 4 grids left ok

[NM]
- 1.06.500 (2,3): Spacing, try to separate them from slider ok
- 1.20.900 (8): Convert it into a slider (end: 1.21.300) ok
- 1.21.300 (1): Remove note ok
- 1.36.900 (9): New combo ok

[MX]
- Hp Drain: +1 or +2 wanted to, but then star rating gets lower than hd..?
- 1.40.200 (7,8): Nazi, but if you move them 1 grid right, it'll be more centered ok

Haneii wrote:

~General~
What is the purpose of the lame.exe in the beatmap file?
It's there? whoops, it's an mp3 encoder command line that I used ._. Also, fixed tags.

~EZ~
Changed, no more stacking..
There's 2 other parts which stacks 2 notes (that you didn't mention) but it should be okay.

~HD~
Reduced AR by 1.
Added the clap-hitcircle but didn't overlay with 8 (idk, that'd cause a huge jump)..
Instead, horizontally symmetrical. (still has a jump but less)
Fixed kiai time (didn't know there was such a rule..?)

1. Add one more combo colour? this code might work
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 220,16,67
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 255,128,255

2. Why is "portable" in the tags? I think you should delete it , it's too generic.

1. 00:12:900 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the slider.
2. 00:25:700 (1) - ^
3. 01:05:700 (1) - ^
4. 01:09:500 (5) - New Combo
5. 01:31:300 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the slider + this is a short slider, too hard for [E]
6. 01:32:500 (2,4) - I suggest to unstack these, stacks are too hard for beginners.
7. 01:42:500 (2,3,4) - ^, try something like this
8. 01:44:300 (1) - Add "Whistle"
9. 02:01:700 (1) - Remove Finish it doesn't fit here.

1. 00:44:700 (7) - Add "Clap" to follow your pattern.
2. 02:03:300 (1) - Start this here: 02:03:400 and,
3. 02:03:300 (X) - Add a circle here using finish.

1. 01:12:100 (1) - Unstack this it looks ugly.
2. 02:03:300 (1) - Start this here: 02:03:400 and,
3. 02:03:300 (X) - Add a circle here using finish.

Licnect wrote:

hello Hello~
my some suggestions

[Overall]
offset 114 [you should fix it] Yes, thanks for this.
Lead-in 0 Done (idk why it was even there..)
note color please not use pink because MX diff Bg Okay, colours will be dealt with later..

(I use offset 114 modding)
[EZ]
00:36:914 [9] add finish
00:37:314 [9] add finisg and remove clap
00:37:714 [9] add finish
00:38:114 [9] add finisg and remove clap
Added whistles instead (and removed clap) to those points and added a finish at 38:514.

[MN]
looks good

[HD]
00:25:714 [?] add note or stretch slider and add whistle
00:31:914 [?] ^
01:43:614 [?] add note and Thread
I get what you mean, I'll see how.. *

[MX]
00:17:115 [11] remove clap
00:36:914 [1] clap change finish
00:37:314 [2] ^
00:37:714 [3] ^
00:38:114 [4] ^
01:50:114 [1.2] remove clap
01:54:714 [11] remove clap and whistle
Okay, those hitsounds are changed, sounds better now imo, thanks.

nice map and good song
star~ thanks~

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

EZ - good~
- 00:57:700 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly pattern :/ Move the (2) and the (3) 1 square down won't destroy your spacing and won't turn the gameplay into something harder. So I suggest:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:00cb0]mod1.PNG[/attachment:00cb0]

and maybe mirror horizontally the 01:00:100 (4,1,2,3,4)?
Thanks for this, done and also horizontally mirrored.
- 01:08:500 (4,5,6,7,8) - might be cool but doesn't really follow sthe song rythm... and btw, New Combo on the (4), please.
Gahh why.. >_< I still stand by my judgment that it really follows the song rhythm..
Anyway, if more people disagree and I'll see how :/
- 01:26:100 (4) - move 1 square up? looks better.
- 02:00:100 (7) - what about a New Combo?

NM - Nice diff!!
01:15:300 (8) - New Combo Done.
02:00:100 (6) - ^ Done.

HD - hard to read, but fun overall~
No mods~ *

MX - wow! Pretty fun! My favorite stream style
Looks perfect for me~

Star~ Thanks~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Add one more combo colour? this code might work Thanks for this, but still not decided on colours yet (Like Licnect said)
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 220,16,67
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 255,128,255

2. Why is "portable" in the tags? I think you should delete it , it's too generic.
3. From DJMAX Portable, and I see many of its songs with 'portable' as tags, like MoonFragrance's maps, so should be fine.

EZ

1. 00:12:900 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the slider.
2. 00:25:700 (1) - ^
3. 01:05:700 (1) - ^
4. Did you mean spinner? Okay, I changed all notes to be 2 notes after spinners (Which means there are different (and less) notes)
5. 01:09:500 (5) - New Combo Changed stuff (above reason), so no problem anymore./color]
6. 01:31:300 (1) - This slider is too close to the end of the slider + this is a short slider, too hard for [E]
7. 01:32:500 (2,4) - I suggest to unstack these, stacks are too hard for beginners. Fixed.
8. 01:42:500 (2,3,4) - ^, try something like this Okay, changed.
9. 01:44:300 (1) - Add "Whistle" Added in NM & HD too.
10. 02:01:700 (1) - Remove Finish it doesn't fit here. Done.

NM

1. 00:44:700 (7) - Add "Clap" to follow your pattern. Changed sound pattern (No more double-claps at those parts)
2. 02:03:300 (1) - Start this here: 02:03:400 and,
3. 02:03:300 (X) - Add a circle here using finish. Doesn't work because I have a spinner before it, too hard.

HD

1. 01:12:100 (1) - Unstack this it looks ugly. Yes. *
2. 02:03:300 (1) - Start this here: 02:03:400 and,
3. 02:03:300 (X) - Add a circle here using finish. This works.

Great Job~ Thanks~