1. Hard - 4Key (3,06 stars, 1542 notes)
2. Landung - 4Key (4,96 stars, 2910 notes)
3. MEGA's Insane - 4Key (4,05 stars, 2478 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (1,77 stars, 847 notes)

Status:
Bubble - Nivrad00 | Qualified - -Kamikaze- | DQ - IamKwaN | Qualified - IamKwaN | DQ - Feerum | Qualified - Feerum
|RANKED|

Normal - 100% || 10 mods
Hard - 100% || 12 mods
MEGA's Insane - 100% || 6 mods
Landung - 100% || 16 mods

Special Thanks

Nivrad00 for bubble and -Kamikaze-for Qualified
MEGAtive for Mega's Insane diff
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MrDorian wrote:

Hejka!
Mod i sugestie

Terror

00:08:590 (8590|0,8590|1) - tutaj jest inny dźwięk, może dodasz notkę?
00:08:965 (8965|3) - tutaj też jest głośniejsze, notka też by pasowała
01:04:058 (64058|1,64058|3,64058|0) - wyraźnie słychać drum (nie pamiętam tego słowa po polsku XD), idealny na 4 notki
01:18:276 (78276|1) - to zrób tak samo, jak w 01:18:026 (78026|2,78026|3,78026|0) - to ten sam dźwięk
02:14:087 (134087|1,134087|2) - to jest tak ledwo słyszalne, że nie ma po co kłaść 2 notek
02:15:087 (135087|0) - to usunąć, bo ^
zrób tak w całym fragmencie
02:36:555 (156555|0) - przesuń o jeden tick na 1/16, dokładniej będzie
03:55:898 (235898|3,235898|1,235898|0,235898|2) - o jedną notkę za dużo, ten sam dźwięk jak wcześniej ☑ no dobra.
03:56:460 (236460|2,236460|3,236460|1,236460|0) - ^ ☑ ^.
03:57:085 (237085|3) - duszek
03:59:944 (239944|2,239944|0) - tutaj pododawaj notki, bo tak jak przy 00:08:590 (8590|0,8590|1) -
04:00:319 (240319|2) - też na podobnej zasadzie, jak góra
04:21:709 (261709|0) - przesuń na niebieskiego ticka w 1/4

EYA- wrote:

hello dude,ill mod NM, okay? so...

normal

00:46:058 (46058|2) - i think what ln here dont need ☑
00:50:058 (50058|3) - up it to 00:50:308 (50308|2) - ☒ It's not fit in my opinion
00:56:058 (56058|1,58058|0,59058|2,60058|3) - ^ ☒ ^
01:10:542 (70542|0) - this sound dont exist ☒ Exist. This is echo
01:18:526 (78526|3) - ^ ☒ ^
02:54:305 (174305|0) - add 1 note I'm not sure if it's needed. For now I'll leave it as it is.
04:21:678 (261678|3,261865|1,261990|0,262115|3,262365|0) - hmmmmmmmm Something wrong with this pattern?

!!Hide it in your post plz ;_;!!

I like dat diff. 03:42:398 (222398|2,222648|1,222898|3,223148|0,223398|2,223648|1,223898|0,224148|3,224273|2,224398|1,224648|0,224898|2,225148|3,225398|0,225398|1,225648|2,225898|3,225898|1,226148|0,226398|2,226648|3,226898|1,227148|0,227398|2,227648|1,227898|3,228148|0,228398|2,228648|1,228898|3,229148|0,229398|2,229648|1,229898|0,230148|3,230398|1,230648|2,230898|0,231148|1,231398|2,231648|3,231898|1,232398|2,232648|1,232898|0,233148|2,233398|3,233398|1,233648|0,233898|3,233898|2,234148|1,234398|0,234648|2,234898|3,235148|1,235398|0,235648|2,235898|3,236460|1,236710|2,237210|0,237460|3,237460|1,237710|2,237944|1,238194|0,238444|3,238444|2,238944|1,239444|0) - that was mapped perfect i think.

Goodbye mate )

Thanks

Ereedon wrote:

Normal

(mapując te fragmenty licz się z tym, że będziesz musiał zastosować to na całej mapie, a że pewnie Ci się nie chce, to omiń ten part )
00:23:715 - , 00:25:715 - , Dodałbym tu krótkie lny podkreślające ten szybszy dzwięk ☒ Myślę że nie ma co komplikować. To tylko normal i takie nagłe krótkie do tego zmiany tempa + bardzo krótkie slidery nie wpłynęłyby pozytywnie na mapę
od 00:32:308 - do 00:46:058 - Jest tu troszkę za nudno, zmapowałbym dodatkowy dźwięk, taki jak tu: (przy takich szybszych dźwiękach, nie pojedynczych tylko wielu). Oczywiście, to tylko moja sugestia, niestety wymaga to zastosowania innego snapa niż 1/2 więc może wiązać się to z możliwością DQ w przyszłości, więc to zależy od Ciebie. (zwróć uwagę, że to jest normal, więc z pewnością możesz to pominąć. I nawet powinieneś to zrobić Teraz nie wiem czemu się tak rozpisałem, ignore) ☒ Nie ma co bawić się ze snapami. Na tej mapie stosuję tylko 1/1 i 1/2 stosowanie innych snapów to przekombinowanie
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01:02:308 - , 01:02:808 - , 01:03:308 - dodałbym notke, odpowiednio: 2, 3, 3 kolumna. Według mnie całkiem dobrze to pasuje (nawet sv byłoby tu dobre, ale się na tym nie znam to się nie wypowiem), zaś w tym miejscu: 01:03:558 - dodałbym jednak lna, ponieważ dźwięk w tym miejscu się zgłaśnia, i jest ich wiele. Nie wiem jak to dokładnie wytłumaczyć, jeśli nie rozumiesz to dam znać na PW. ☒ Chyba rozumiem. Co do notek oczywiście masz rację ale te miejsca są zarezerwowane dla Hard diffa. Dodając tam te notki za bardzo bym upodobnił Normala do Harda. Co do dodania LNa to też tak niebałdzo. Na Normalu staram się unikać krótkich LNów no bo... to normal. Stawiam krótkie tylko w tych miejscach w których bardzo wyraźnie slychać dłuższe dźwięki
01:44:308 (104308|0,104558|1,104808|3,105058|2,105308|0,105558|1,105808|3,106058|2,106308|0,106558|1) - Zmieniłbym w tym miejscu jakoś pattern, troszkę się to powtarza i jest nudne :p ☑ Co prawda nie czuć tego że się powtarza. Nudne jest dlatego bo Normal ale dla estetyki zmieniam ułożenie
01:54:964 (114964|3,115089|2,115214|1,115339|3) - oraz 01:55:589 (115589|0,115714|1,115839|2,115964|3) - bym zamienił na lny, ponieważ znajdują się tutaj dużo szybsze dzwięki. Po prostu inaczej to troszkę zmapowałeś, a to tak niezbyt pasuję moim zdaniem :p. Ale to już opcjonalne ☒ LNy nie zawsze załatwiają sprawę. Masz rację. Są tu szybsze dźwięki i one są zaznaczone w Hardzie i Insane. tak jak w Hardzie jest przejście z 1/2 do 1/4 (w tym szybszym momencie) tak tutaj jest wygodne (moim zdaniem) przejście z 1/1 na 1/2
01:59:589 (119589|3,119839|0) - Troszkę nie pasuje mi tutaj te przejście... W środku się wycisza, Może tego lna 01:59:339 (119339|1) - przedlużyć do 01:59:339 (119339|1) - , usunąć 01:59:589 (119589|3) -, wtedy skrócić tego kolejnego lna do 01:59:964 (119964|0) - . To troszkę dziwnie wygląda, ale zobaczymy jakie jest twoje zdanie (również opcjonalnie) ☒ Zostawiam tak jak jest. Słychać wyraźnie 3 dłuższe dźwięki. Myślę że na ten moment nie ma co usuwać, przedłużać itd... ale oczywiście jeżeli ktoś jeszcze zwróci na to uwagę to być może zmienie zdanie
01:59:964 (119964|0) - chyba brakuje jednej notki . Yyyy ale co ty mi tu zaznaczyłeś? Przecież na tej linii jest w 3 kolumnie notka
w tym miejscu jest zły snap: 02:09:087 - chyba ten jest prawidłowy. ☑Masz rację. Była tu linia timingowa i zapomniałem przestawić notki. Jeśli mapujesz ten sam dźwięk, to powinieneś również dodać go w tym miejscu: 02:08:900 - Mam dylemat. Bo dwie notki są na pozostałych dwóch diffach. Nie chcę aż tak upodabniać. Zostawię to tak jak jest ale zmienię to gdy ktoś się przyczepi
02:12:087 - dodałbym tu notke
02:16:087 - ^
02:20:087 - ^
02:24:087 - ^
02:28:087 - ^
02:32:087 - ^ ☒ Owszem pasowałyby tu notki ale nie na Normalu. Są na Hardzie i tam się dobrze sprawują. Nie ma potrzeby dawać ich na normalu
02:36:462 (156462|0,156712|1,156837|2,156962|3,157212|1) - Nie znam się na mapowanie wokali, ale bym tego nie robił (taka drobna uwaga, nie zwracaj na nią uwagi) Ależ wiem o tym. Na ogół staram się unikać mapowania wokalu ale ten fragment jest niegroźny i prosty do zagrania.
03:45:398 (225398|1,225398|0,225898|1,225898|3) - dobrze zrobione, ale jednak 03:45:898 (225898|3) - przesunąłbym do 1 kolumny, 03:46:148 (226148|0,226398|2) - Ctrl + G i przesunąć o jedno w prawo. ☒ Źle to wygląda i miesza :v
03:53:398 (233398|1) - przesunąć do 3, poprzednią notke jakoś zmienić ☒ Nie ma takiej potrzeby.
04:19:178 (259178|0,261678|3,261865|1,261990|0,262115|3,262365|0) - bym to usunął, ale to już opcjonalnie (po prostu nie pasuje ten wokal) ☒ A tam czepiasz się. Dobrze jest :p

Wybacz, że tylko jeden diff, ale nie mapuję i nie moduję 4k, bo się na tym nie znam. Mam nadzieję, że pomogłem :p

Niewiele skorzystałem aleee skorzystałem. Zawsze coś prawda? Utwór nie jest łatwy do modowania więc rozumiem trudności z tym związane. Przy okazji zauważyłem błąd w Hardzie (ten moment ze złym snapem) i też poprawiłem więc jak najbardziej się mod przydał. Dzięki

Garalulu wrote:

Hello~!! From my queueee >W< sorry for late OwO
Column : 1|2|3|4

[General]
BG size is 1365×768 1 pixel lol maybe it's Okay 1 pixel plz xD It's ok :p
MP3 is 192kbps. OK!
BPM is 240.

how about 239.56 and set offset 0? ☒
lots of timing setting ;o; u just follow my mod and resnap this OwO

[Normal]
00:15:840 (15840|3) : You didn't note here before that parts. It was intentional . This note in this moment gives a very cool transition effect to LN
01:02:308 : missing part. add 1 note
01:02:808 : ^
01:03:308 : ^ ☑ I'm not sure because on these lines, I have notes on hard difficulty and I'm not want repeat this in Normal diff but ok. I see what will next.
01:03:558 - 01:04:058 : Using LN note is better ☑ Ok
01:04:058 : add 1 note ☒
01:10:542 (70542|0) : delete this or add 1 note at 01:04:308 , 01:05:292 , 01:06:292 , 01:06:792 , 01:08:292 , 01:09:292 , 01:09:792 ☒ No because this sound 01:10:542 (70542|0) is more pronounced than 01:04:308 and others
01:36:995 : add 1 note at 2 ☒ It's too hard for Normal diff
01:37:058 (97058|1) : move to 1 ☒
02:36:462 (156462|0,156712|1,156837|2,156962|3,157212|1) : I don't know what he said. but placing note at his voice is not good. Is it significant message? How about just LN? I did so to fill the empty space in the map
04:21:678 (261678|3,261865|1,261990|0,262115|3,262365|0) : ^ ^
02:39:242 " add 1 note at 2 ☒ It's too hard for Normal diff
02:39:305 (159305|1) : move to 1 ☒
03:24:336 - 03:26:336 : add LN like 03:08:070 - 03:10:320 ☒ Yyym.. no. It doesn't fit in my opinion
04:10:444 (250444|2) : scale down to 04:16:933 ☒ It's good
04:19:178 : add 1 note ☑ Ok
[Hard]
00:32:090 : add 1 note ☒ There is no need.
00:55:683 (55683|2) : move to 00:55:745 ☒ This change disrupts rhythm.
01:03:933 : add 1 note for balanced
01:05:917 : ^
01:07:917 : ^
01:11:542 : ^ ☑ Ok
01:11:667 : ^
01:13:917 : ^
01:15:917 : ^
01:50:058 (110058|1) : delete this and scale up this 01:48:308 (108308|0) to 01:50:308 <--No.1 ☒ I don't know why would I do that. It's good
01:50:433 (110433|0) : move to 2 ☒
01:51:714 (111714|1) : can't hear any sound. delete it. ☒ I can hear
02:04:353 (124353|0,126103|1) : same reason with No.1 ☒
02:36:462 (156462|3,156712|2,156837|1,156962|0,157212|3) : same reason with NM
02:48:305 (168305|1) : pitch is changed at 02:49:805. scale down this LN and add new LN at 02:49:805 - 02:50:305. ☒ This would be too uncomfortable in my opinion
02:50:305 (170305|2) : remove this LN and rechange this 02:50:555 (170555|0) to start from 02:50:305. ☒
02:50:555 (170555|0,172305|1) : same reason with No.1
03:06:570 (186570|1,188320|2) : same reason with No.1
04:21:678 (261678|0,261865|1,261990|2,262115|3,262365|0) : same reason with NM

[Insane]
what a jack pattern.... OwO can't mod this sry No problem :p

well, Good luck!! >w<

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's Modding Queue
1|2|3|4

[Insane]
00:18:090 - Missing a note here *Following the style ☑ Ok
00:19:090 - Same, missing a note ☑ Ok
01:22:526 - Add a note, and 01:22:651 (82651|1) - this to col 1 ☑ Ok
01:25:526 - Add a note at 1, 01:25:651 (85651|0) - Move this to 3 ☑ Ok
01:26:526 - Add a note at 3 ☑ Ok
01:52:026 (112026|0,112026|1) - This to 3-4. Too much note intensity ☑ Ok. Nice idea
01:51:901 (111901|1,111964|0) - These Ctrl+G ☑ Ok ^
03:29:211 - This section... wow bit too hard for Insanish-Extra difficulty. Heheh. Maybe but fits perfectly :p

[Hard]
00:16:090 - Add a note *Following the patterns ☒ I think that one note and LN in this line is sufficient
01:47:558 - Here's a split on the long note, listen carefully
* I could see that these sections ignore the style, and follows discontinuously. I would suggest to follow every single of them, or just make that part simply consisting of notes. Same happens over here 02:38:305 - too. Your choice to re-pattern it or leave it like that. ☒ I leave it because at this moment I don't focus on this sound because here 01: 47: 558 - are two notes. I will not give one note and one LN because it would spoil the pattern
02:11:087 - Add a note for snare ☑ Ok
02:15:087 - Add a note?
* Same goes on these: 02:19:087 - 02:23:087 - 02:27:087 - 02:31:087 - ☒ Noo... It won't be necessary
02:32:087 - Add a note for cymbal ☒ Noo... This LN is for cymbal soo... :p
03:01:555 - Add a note? ☒ No need.

That would be it. Feel free to reject if you think my modding was not good enough.
Good luck !

Reject? Noo... Nice mod. Thanks

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi

M4M your req my Queue

Col : 1|2|3|4

Easy Normal* :p
Just like this ? 00:31:590 -
00:37:058 (37058|2,37308|1) - ctrl+g ☒ It's not ballanced
01:09:042 (69042|2) - move col 4 ☐ No but I change this and it is also good.
01:40:308 (100308|2,100558|3) - ctrl+g ☑ & 01:41:558 (101558|1,101808|0) ☒ - ctrl+h I modified your idea
03:29:211 (209211|2,209961|2) - delete ? in normal diff distress ☒ No. It must be.

Insane
00:18:590 (18590|2,18840|0) - ctrl+g & 00:19:090 (19090|2) - move col 1 ☒ I think that is balanced. See the third column. If I applied your advice would be for a lot of free space in column 3
00:33:933 (33933|0,34058|1) - ctrl+g keep balanced ☑ Ok
00:36:058 (36058|2) - move col 4 keep balanced ☑ Ok
00:44:558 (44558|0) - ^ col 2 ☑ Ok
01:11:292 (71292|3,71417|3,71542|3,71542|2,71667|3,71667|2,71792|2,71792|1,71792|3) - Felt heavy in his right hand T.T https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5079075 my recommended ☐ Ehh... It's funny pattern and I like it. I change this pattern but I think about it or not restored. ☑ Ok
01:35:089 (95089|0) - move col 4 keep balanced ☑ Ok
02:38:680 (158680|1) - ^ col 3 & 02:38:805 (158805|3) - col 2 ☑ Yes. I must change it but I bumped into this
02:39:430 (159430|2,159555|3) - ctrl+g keep balanced ☒ I think that is balanced. See the third column. Before and after

GL ~

Modren wrote:

Small chat mod!

Code

2016-05-06 22:22 Janko: dawaj xd
2016-05-06 22:22 Modren: 04:19:178 (259178|0,259178|2) - 
2016-05-06 22:22 Modren: niezsynchronizowane z dźwiękiem
2016-05-06 22:23 Modren: hard
2016-05-06 22:23 Modren: notki są trochę za wcześnie
2016-05-06 22:23 Modren: w normal to samo
2016-05-06 22:24 Modren: tam trzeba dodać kolejny offset XD
2016-05-06 22:24 Modren: no i w insane też
2016-05-06 22:24 Modren: ofc
2016-05-06 22:25 Janko: na 1/8 na żółtej chyba jest ok
2016-05-06 22:27 Janko: w sumie to dałem 2 sekcje
2016-05-06 22:27 Janko: tam gdzie powiedziałeś i pod sam koniec
2016-05-06 22:27 Modren: aa okej
2016-05-06 22:30 Janko: i w każdym diffie to zrobiłem
2016-05-06 22:30 Janko: bo by aimod krzyczał
2016-05-06 22:31 Modren: no tak

puxtu wrote:

kawaii song
[General]
- same HP OD in all diffs lol ☑ Ok. I don't know much about it but I set to other values
- bg resolution 1365x768 1 pixel plz xD It's ok :p
- dat enormous gap tho ☐I'm working on it.
[Hard]
00:08:590 (8590|3,9590|2,10590|0,11590|0,12590|2,13590|3,14590|0,15590|0) - add jumps for snare like in here 00:16:590 (16590|2,16590|1) - ☑ Ok
00:31:590 (31590|0,31652|1,31715|2) - ctrl+j ☒
00:47:808 (47808|3,48058|1) - missing 1/2, based 00:41:808 (41808|2,41933|1) - ☒ It does not fit at this moment
00:49:745 (49745|3) - a wild 1/4 appears ☑ Ok. Fixed
01:03:808 (63808|0,64058|1) - 01:05:792 (65792|2,66042|2) - 01:07:792 (67792|1,68042|1) - 01:15:792 (75792|3,76042|3) - it wont hurt to add1/2 here ☐Yes. You're right but I planning add a GD between Hard and Insane diff so...I prefer to just leave
01:28:026 (88026|0) - rip http://puu.sh/oJlYo/8eb09cadd1.png ☑ LOL. I didn't see that. Fixed
02:36:462 (156462|3,156712|2,156837|1,156962|0,157212|3) - do you have to layer that vocal sound cuz it feels so randomly awkward for me I did so to fill the empty space in the map
02:49:305 (169305|3,169805|3) - add cymbal hs ☒ I think there is not need.
04:21:677 (261677|0,261864|1,261989|2,262114|3,262364|0) - lol wat Hehe It's a trap :v Seriously I can delete it but I look forward to the reactions of others.

goodshit

Baim wrote:

hi m4m via my queuueueue

Hard

00:12:585 (12585|0) - add note ☑ Ok
00:22:960 - add note * i think you must follow the istrument in here 00:17:835 (17835|2,17960|1,18085|0) - cause if you don't use this on 00:18:835 - poeple can confused with your map ☒
00:31:585 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5108330 ☑ Ok. Nice idea.
00:41:808 (41808|2,41933|1) - add note same as 00:39:808 (39808|3,39808|0) - ☑ Ok
00:47:808 - to 00:48:058 - still have a sound there ☑ Ok
01:03:933 - add note
01:05:917 - ^
01:07:917 - ^
01:11:667 - ^ ☑ Ok. All added
03:54:398 - add note for cymbal like you put here too 03:53:898 - ☒

That's all Good luck~

Thanks for mod

erlinadewi- wrote:

hi janko ^^/

sorry for late mod :'(

4K Column 1|2|3|4

click me!

just my little suggest, free to reject
[Normal]
01:04:058 - add for cymbal ☑ Ok
02:07:103 - add note for snare sound ☑ Ok
02:36:462 (156462|0,156712|1,156837|2,156962|3,157212|1) - ghost note, right? better you del it. ☒ I wrote about this in other mods
02:59:117 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5128330 just my suggest ☑ Ok
03:57:944 (237944|1,238194|0) - ctrl j ☑ Ok

[Hard]
01:24:776 (84776|2,84901|3) - ctrl j ? ☒
02:07:103 - add note for snare sound 02:03:603 (123603|1,123603|0) - have same sound, right? ☒ Yes but think that this is too complicated for this diff
02:36:462 (156462|3,156712|2,156837|1,156962|0,157212|3) - ghost ? ☒
02:53:305 - add for snare
03:09:320 - ^ ☒ ^

nice diffs

Goodluck~

Janko wrote:

Hello
NM
Song Name: Gabba Front Berlin - Lacrima Mosa Est!
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/407237
Key Count: 4k
Note consistency and hand ballance on Insane and Normal. If you can hard too.

thanks in advance

SPOILER

A couple of suggestions to help improve flow, please try suggestions in paragraphs together

01:55:089 try deleting 01:54:964 (114964|3)
01:55:214 (115214|1) - move to 01:55:089
01:55:589 add note to 3 for clap

01:56:589 (116589|2,116839|1) - perhaps move right for balance

02:32:087 (152087|1) - suggest making this a 23 normal notes to allow an echo effect instead of a long hold. The crash sound is just "hit" on a real drum so it would fit alot better imo

02:57:055 copypasta detected . Maybe do the same as at 01:55:089 if you applied that suggestion. or even ctrl+h it to make it different

03:13:211 (193211|3) - remove please, it feels out of place for a normal diff.
04:10:444 (250444|2) - maybe finish at 04:16:178 and end the song here. Generally for Osu! it would be better since the rest of the song will finish in the results screen.

Crono wrote:

hi from my queue

Janko wrote:

Hello
NM
Song Name: Gabba Front Berlin - Lacrima Mosa Est!
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/407237
Key Count: 4k
Note consistency and hand ballance on Insane and Normal. If you can hard too.

thanks in advance

0 1 2 3

Normal

SPOILER

A couple of suggestions to help improve flow, please try suggestions in paragraphs together

01:55:089 try deleting 01:54:964 (114964|3)
01:55:214 (115214|1) - move to 01:55:089
01:55:589 add note to 3 for clap

01:56:589 (116589|2,116839|1) - perhaps move right for balance I haven't used fully but slightly modified

02:32:087 (152087|1) - suggest making this a 23 normal notes to allow an echo effect instead of a long hold. The crash sound is just "hit" on a real drum so it would fit alot better imo ☒

02:57:055 copypasta detected . Maybe do the same as at 01:55:089 if you applied that suggestion. or even ctrl+h it to make it different I've done a little differently

03:13:211 (193211|3) - remove please, it feels out of place for a normal diff. ☒
04:10:444 (250444|2) - maybe finish at 04:16:178 and end the song here. Generally for Osu! it would be better since the rest of the song will finish in the results screen. I have to think about it.

If not helpful then no kudos pls
Will do Insane diff later

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hard -> Insane gap is too big
you may want to add a diff between it or reduce Insane and raise Hard diff

Minseo2000 wrote:

From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

0|1|2|3

What a creepy song...

Insane

00:02:210 - Add note here? I don't think there's a reason to not map the weird rubber rubbing sound (or whatever that is) here.
00:08:085 - to 00:25:835 - Adding a single note every 1/2 might be a good idea since it feels awkward to suddenly not have notes for that sound (which i can't describe) mentioned above.
01:25:276 (85276|1) - I thought you're skipping the 1/2 for each hi hat here.
01:26:276 (86276|3) - Same goes for this
01:27:651 - Add note?
01:29:666 - ^
01:48:058 - I think it should be triple here. I here some kind of snare sound here.
01:48:558 - Same goes for here.
01:52:089 - I don't think there is a need for this to be a triple since the same sounds are represented with doubles afterwards.
02:04:103 - & 02:04:603 - more snare sounds here.
02:36:462 (156462|0,156712|1,156837|2,156962|3,157212|0) - Although not a big problem, I find it awkward to be hitting to a dialogue.
02:54:305 - I can't find the difference between the sound here and the sounds above for doubles. I think a double should suffice.
04:21:692 (261692|0,261879|1,262004|2,262129|3,262379|0) - Kinda the same as the part mentioned above.

As Kuo Kyoka mentioned above, a jump from 3* to 5* is pretty big and it might be good to have a difficulty between it. I know. I'm working on getting GD

Good luck on ranking!

Parachor wrote:

Don't worry about giving me any kudosu, I just want to point out this section in the Insane diff:

00:48:058 - 01:02:058 - This section is pretty darn fun. I like the way you mapped it. But something I'd like to point out is that this whole section isn't stuttered. 00:50:058 - The eight measures from this point (until 00:52:058 - ) are played normal and aren't stuttering, so I think the mapping should reflect that (by not using jacks, or using jacks more infrequently). It will add a little variation to the section, and works well with the song. Hmm... I'm not sure. For me everything is ok and you do not need to change anything but I'll think about that.

When going through the Insane diff, look for parts that might drag on a little too long and see if there's any kind of variation you can add (While still keeping with the music). Like the whole doubles+LN part starting from 03:14:336 - . I think there could be some subtle variation for this part, because it repeats quite a lot. I dunno, whatever you feel comfortable with doing. Just thought I'd say something to hopefully help. Yes I know. I'll correct it if it enters me the idea to the head, or someone suggest me something interesting in this part.

Good luck with this set ^-^

Protastic101 wrote:

I am really bad at getting to my mods in time, so, sorry

Almost forgot to update this to complete. I think I'd cry if I forgot to update T.T

General

- Ayyy, you got an unsnapped note in Hard and Normal at 04:21:693 (261693|0) ☑ Lol. You're right. Fixed
- Also, HP and OD 7 for Normal? It's kind of noodley. ☑ Ok
- Maybe OD and HP of ~7.7 since it has some noodles but also a lot of notes. Besides, there aren't real areas for button mashing so the HP doesn't need to be set too high.
- Do you think that the OD and HP values of Insane might be a *little* too high? I think, at most, OD and HP ~8.7 is fine since it's mainly notes and few holds. ☑ Ok. I changed to 8.5
- I want to jump on the bandwagon of everyone complaining about your difficulty gap! XD Jk. *Finding GDer's is impossible nowadays* I found a person who will do GD so isn't so bad
- Yooo, the BPM is actually ~244bpm. That's why your timing points keep getting off. You should *really* fix that. ☒ From some sources I know that it should have 240 BPM. I think that these timing poins stems from quality this music

Hard

Ok, I'm actually going to mention something here real quick: I think this difficulty could be more focused on short bursts and simple 1/1 rhythms with occasional jumps in it. But that is just my opinion so please don't take it as an attack if a lot of my suggestions seem to be trying to do that as you are completely free to reject everything.
00:00:085 (85|0) - This and the next few things I say about LN's should be applied to all difficulties. So, this ends at 00:02:460
00:02:085 (2085|3) - Starts where the last LN ends, and ends at 00:03:460
00:03:085 (3085|2) - Starts where the last LN ends, ends at 00:04:460
00:04:085 (4085|1) - Start where the last LN ends, end at the same place. Same goes for some other parts in the song with the same musical structure. ☒ I won't follow the above tips because it breaks down flow of the game. Transition from 1/1 to 1/2 will be very uncomfortable in this case so I preferred to simplify it how I could for the consistency of the game was preserved
00:23:772 and 00:24:022 and 00:24:085 and 00:24:147 - Add notes for the distorted clap? ☒ I think there's no needed
00:28:085 (28085|2,31085|3) - Between these notes, I suggest adding a 1/2 stream since there's that heartbeat kind of sound going on in the background. I really don't remember my reasoning here because I took a nap midsentence -.- ☒ Heheh. I try not to hinder the map until I get GD
00:32:085 (32085|3,34058|2,35058|0,36058|1,37558|3,38308|2) - Alright, I'ma list off the end points of all these LN's, and hopefully you'll see what I'm trying to say and apply them elsewhere. So, in order, from first highlighted to last, 00:34:308 then 00:35:308 then 00:36:308 then 00:37:808 but this one kind of blends into the next note, so you might check me on that, and 00:38:308
00:39:745 - Add a note here for the clap? You mapped it back at 00:33:745 (33745|2)Ineresting. You know what? I will remove this note and it will be good too :p so consistency wise...
00:39:995 - ^^
00:41:745 - ^^
00:41:808 (41808|2,41808|3) - Reduce this to a single? It's the same distorted clap sound as the notes around it, with no extra emphasis in the music. ☑ Ok. Fixed
00:46:308 - Hmmm, so the music suddenly becomes a lot lighter in this section, but the map doesn't, and I can understand why because there's no real way to make this lighter without undermapping. Welllll, this section needs to be slightly different somehow, and I'm thinking SV's, but that proves to be an inconsistency since you don't use any SV's in this difficulty at all. Anyways, if you accept, SV of ~.8 seems fitting, and then SV .9 at 00:47:058 and finally back to 1 at 00:48:058 I'm not sure about SV
00:55:683 (55683|2) - Move this to 00:55:745 ☒ It wouldn't be too comfortable.
00:55:995 and 00:56:058 - Add notes for the clap?
00:57:745 - ^^ ☒ If I haven't added a notes 1/4 is not I add here too.
01:00:308 - In this measure, I think you could add notes on the red ticks, and alternate them like so, since the musical pattern is soft - loud - soft - loud ☒ Emm... No ;_; I try not to hinder the map until I get GD
01:02:058 to 01:03:308 - Well, since I already suggested them, I might as well try again. Suggest a glitch SV here since the notes are very staccato and short. ☒
01:05:729 - Suggest adding a note here for the clap? ☒ I wrote about this before
01:07:042 (67042|1) - I swear, this song has way too many musical technicalities that can't be expressed in mania >.< Like, this is so much quieter than the other notes, but there's nothing you can really do to it to make it different and this frustrates me and hnrghhhh. Ok, well, reduce the HS volume to 30% for this note just because it's quieter? Control + shift + i, and then yeah. Ok. ☑Ok
01:09:292 and 01:09:792 - Add single notes. quiet claps here, similar to the note I highlighted above.
01:11:542 (71542|3) - Same stuff I said about HS. Make this like, volume 30% since it's quieter than the next note. ☑Ok
01:13:729 - Add note for clap?
01:13:917 - ^^
01:15:917 - ^^ ☒ When I created this part, well I thought about myself every note and I don't want add any notes
01:27:526 (87526|1,87526|2,87776|3,87776|1,88041|0,88041|3) - Why are these doubles? They're not accented in the music. ☒ In my opinion they are
01:28:026 - Add an LN here and end at 01:30:291 This is because you begin following that eerie sustained sound at 01:30:041 (90041|1) which makes no sense to start following it after it's already started, you get what I mean? Also, fix the LN lengths like I mentioned a few lines ago. ☑I added LN[/color]
01:42:808 (102808|3) - I'm pretty sure this just ends at 01:43:308 ☒ but I'm not sure
01:51:589 and 01:51:839 - Kind of a consistency thing, but don't just drop the LN all of a sudden. Try something like this to make the burst fit It looks kind of messy though, but that should give you a general idea. ☒ yymm... no. sorry.
01:58:839 (118839|3) - Extend this LN to touch 01:59:339 (119339|2) ? ☒
03:09:320 - Add a double here for the accented sound (kind of like a door slamming). ☒ I wrote about this in another post
03:04:195 - Missing a note here, ayyy. ☑ Fixed
03:37:336 (217336|0,217336|1,217836|0,217836|2) - I notice that you use the same combination double for sounds like this, but here you don't. So I suggest, for consistency, moving 03:37:336 (217336|1) to column 3 and 03:37:211 (217211|2) to 2 to avoid a jack. ☒ I'll leave it
03:51:898 - I think you could add an LN here to represent the small pause in the drums and 8-bit kind of sustained sound there too. End at the start of the next measure. ☒
03:56:710 - ^^ Alternatively, you could add a *small* slow SV like ~.9 and do a catch like SV, where it speeds up, then goes back to 1. ☒
04:01:194 (241194|2,241319|3,241444|1) - For symmetry, make this a {121} pattern so it's like the opposite of 04:00:194 (240194|3,240319|2,240444|3) ☒
04:06:444 - You know how I said it doesn't really make much sense to start the LN's following the eerie sound when the musical phrase has already started? Yeahhh, same here, so add an LN, and remember to fix LN lengths. ☑ Ok. Fixed

Reminder to myself to take a look at the section Parachor highlighted and give suggestions if possible 03:14:336 (194336|2) - Basically all I can really suggest here is to follow the eerie sustained sound in the background, to which I have no idea what to call it. Anyways, so split this LN and follow the eerie sound similar to how you did it in Hard. Would that work? That might make this way too messy, but I can't even pass the section, so I'm just looking at technicality. Ah well.

MEGAtive wrote:

MEGA's Insane

Never thought it would be this hard to map this haha

_underjoy wrote:

Szybki mod bo nie jestem w stanie tego ocenić poprawnie:
01:24:291 - czerwona linia ☑ No dobra. Dodana
01:47:058 (107058|2,107058|1,107058|0) - ten chord (i inne 3 chordy, 01:51:058 (111058|1,111058|3,111058|0) - ) są nierówne, i one psują sync, nie sprawdzałem dokładnie bo mnie już od tego głowa boli ale prawdopodobnie są tam do postawienia czerwone linie ☒ Czerwone linie tu nic nie dadzą. Nie wiem czy dałeś radę zauważyć ale dźwięk jest tutaj01:47:058 - oraz tutaj 01:47:099 - na tej drugiej linii jest ten "mocny dźwięk" ale jakbym go tam dał to by to zaburzyło grę... tak sądzę
02:03:089 (123089|0,123089|3,123089|2) - 02:03:589 (123589|0,123589|2,123589|1) - to samo ☒ To samoj
02:09:087 (129087|2) - tu ma stać notka ☒ Tutaj stoi notka http://puu.sh/p4yVT/66e9ad5a27.png
02:11:087 (131087|3,131087|2) - tutaj jest 1/8 za wcześnie ☑ o 1/16 za wcześnie ale poprawiłem
w ogóle po co dawałeś 120 bpm? xD to nie robi absolutnie żadnej różnicy w gameplayu Daje. Jest wolniejszy part który ma tyle BPM to tyle daje. Wg mnie to jest prostrze niż dawanie 240 i 0,5SV
02:38:305 (158305|1,158305|3) - notki mają stać tu, nie potem ☒ Ale tu stoją
końcówka drugiego chorusa też jest chyba nie halo, ale nie jestem pewien czemu, pewnie znowu chodzi o te 3-chordy
03:10:320 (190320|0) - nierówny ln ☒ Jak nierówny. Ty masz zaktualizowaną wersje mapy w ogóle? xD
03:21:336 - ten chord jest nieco później
03:25:336 - ten też ☒ pisałem o tym wyżej
03:37:336 - spróbuj naprawić czerwoną linią w tym miejscu, albo 03:37:836 - tu, albo nawet oba naraz jeśli coś się psuje ciągle o tym samym mowa
03:38:711 (218711|0) - nierówny ln ☒ Niby z której strony?
03:41:351 (221351|0,221351|1,221413|0,221413|2,221413|3) - to jest właśnie ten nierówny chord który tutaj zrobiłeś jackiem. to tak nie wygląda, dźwięk jest mniej więcej pośrodku. ☑ No tak to tak powinno wyglądać. Ustawiłem na 1/8... Tutaj taki zabieg pasuje ale robienie takiego czegoś w takich momentach jak wyżej jest niezbyt wygodne. Tak mi się wydaje
03:42:398 (222398|0) - napraw żeby notki leżały na tej linii (w ogóle sprawdź czy wszystkie snapy na liniach są poprawne)
btw tu jest chyba parę ms za późno ☒ Są na tej linii. Co do tego czy jest za późno... Trudno powiedzieć. Na moje ucho jest ok
03:57:960 - tutaj chyba chciałeś to skorygować Nieee tutaj jest ok

00:48:058 - w tym parcie nie zmapowałeś burstów, nie wiem czy specjalnie ale możesz spokojnie je imo dodać Wut? Tu nic więcej sie nie da zmapować xD
Aha no i zmień tą copypastę w fragmencie z LN, bo się to naprawdę niewygodnie gra :/ Nic nowego mi nie napisałeś... Czekam aż ktoś zaproponuje mi coś ciekawego bo sam pomysłu na to nie mam

uff na więcej nie mam siły, ciężką mapę sobie wybrałeś :c
W razie czego dalsze wyjaśnienia na pw

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' Osumania Mod Nest Of Mappers"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles

Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggestion and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: It should be exactly 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Breaktime in MEGA's Difficulty. Make him fix it~

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

Since this is quite hardcore, I decided to do the hardest difficulty instead.

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:21:335 - add note to 4 since the clap-like sound is becoming audible and kinda awkward if not double note. It is similar to 00:25:335 (25335|2,25335|0) -

00:22:335 (22335|2) - ^ same

00:23:335 - ^

00:36:058 (36058|2) - move to 4 to avoid that 1/2 jack at 3rd column.

00:48:308 - until 01:02:058 - the patterns are too much imo. 3 notes in a column of 1/2 measure jacks for 240 bpm are not good and a total fun killer. Suggesting something like this: http://puu.sh/p4QDx/65fef87dab.png which you can notice the 1st 3 1/1 white lines are spread until 2 note 1/2 jacks appeared. The 1/2 jacks in the image are most likely emphasizing the peak audible sound of that synth-like sound we can hear in the mp3. In the image, the jacks starts at 00:49:058 - then eventually ends at 00:50:308 - . Then after that it will go spread pattern again and go back to 2-note column jacks patterns for that repeating synth. If you got my point here, apply it until 01:02:058 -

01:03:558 (63558|0,63683|0,63808|0,63933|0,64058|0) - I do not recommend to use 5-note stacks as it throws off people, better rearrange.

01:36:808 (96808|2) - move to 2 to avoid 3-note 1/2 jack at 3rd column

01:47:308 (107308|2) - move to 4 ^

01:52:026 (112026|3) - remove as the sound here is exactly the same as 01:51:901 (111901|0,111964|1) - which are only single notes.

02:07:228 (127228|0,127353|1) - swap column to avoid 3-note stack at 1st column.

02:39:055 (159055|1) - move to 3

02:39:430 (159430|0) - ^ to 3

02:49:555 (169555|1) - ^ to 1

03:06:070 (186070|3) - ^ to 2

Pretty nice hardcore map if you will ask me~

[Overall]
Cool Gabba song to be honest, at first I thought it sucks but it seems actually good! Good luck o/


~ END OF MOD ~

1. 02:34:836 - add note or notes for reduce breaktime
2. 03:29:273 - 03:29:523 - add note as this part 03:29:836 (209836|2,209898|3,209961|1) - and this part 03:30:086 (210086|3,210148|2,210211|1,210273|3) -
3. 03:42:226 (222226|1,222226|2) - move to 03:42:163 -
4. 03:53:398 - add note in column 1 or 4
5. 03:53:898 - ^
6. 03:56:960 (236960|2) - ghost note. Remove.

juankristal wrote:

oh wow its the guy that makes cool videos for the polish community.

Leaving a mark here DAMN THE SONG CHOICE WILL KILL MY EARS

Thanks >///<

Abraxos wrote:

yo gabba gabba!

holy fucking shit this song was originally released on a vinyl wtf how chav can you get

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( × )
   
   time

   seems like your timing is all wonky and fucked up
   
   seems like what this track suffers from is the lack of a solid consistent bpm thing; which isnt surprising given how tech was limited back then
   
   choo choo
   
   

   wikiped wrote:

   Lacrima Mosa Est, for example, has 480 BPM, although over the bass is a contrasting slow ambient sound.

   your measure ticks make more sense if its on 480 bpm, but because of technical limitations (measure lines) id kinda suggest you keep it at 240
   
   ive fixed most of the measure tick issues (and the offset ones), keep in mind that this song was made in 2006 and the inconsistencies in the timing offset can be real tough to catch. idk if i managed to catch everything, better to ask someone else to check it for you
   
   the timed diff is here, just copy paste it into a new diff (dont be an dum and copy paste it into one of your diffs pls)
   
   you can crtl-a to select everything in the pastebin if you didnt know
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( × )
   
   tags

   add
   

   Project: Enigma Electronic

   both are confirmed to be inside, check nom
   
   idk if you should keep terrorcore ok maybe suicide is kinda scary idk, im not that scared hearing this (ok maybe i dont understand the langauge its speaking)
   

   googlo wrote:

   This is the story of a man
   The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
   
   This is the story of a man
   The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
   As he falls, he repeated to calm down, again and again:
   So far, we went quite well
   
   But the important thing is not the case
   But the landing
   
   The important thing is not the case
   But the landing

   thanks google!
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) those are some weak ass hitsounds
6. Video : ( × ) .osb in your file? did i open it accidentally or

MEGA spoopy

01:37:058 (97058|0,97058|3,97183|2,97183|1,97308|3,97308|0,97433|2,97433|1,97558|3,97558|0,97683|2,97683|1,97808|3,97808|0,97933|2,97933|1) - maybe you might wanna variate the chords a little, the repetitive nature of these almost jumpthrills throw me off easily IDK, isn't the pattern already simple enough? Maybe it's just me because I'm not getting problem playing this part.

03:10:336 (190336|3) - the intensity of this is not equal to the intensity of 03:12:461 (192461|3,192461|1,192586|2,192586|0,192711|1,192711|3,192836|0,192836|2) - you might wanna consider layering more chords in the LN, maybe on each 1/2 tick would be good enough. applies for all similar sections Welp, LN for the long scratching-esque pad sounds. And I do this so it wouldn't be so monotonous.

nothing else, chart is really consistent, which is why i dont have much to pick on the layering. also why i dont really have a lot of points here, generally main issues are a couple of pattern executions

MEGAtive wrote:

Abraxos wrote:

MEGA spoopy

03:10:336 (190336|3) - the intensity of this is not equal to the intensity of 03:12:461 (192461|3,192461|1,192586|2,192586|0,192711|1,192711|3,192836|0,192836|2) - you might wanna consider layering more chords in the LN, maybe on each 1/2 tick would be good enough. applies for all similar sections Welp, LN for the long scratching-esque pad sounds. And I do this so it wouldn't be so monotonous. i get what youre following, but thats not the issue here. the issue is how this particular long LN section isnt as hard per se as compared to sections like 03:12:461 (192461|3,192461|1,192586|2,192586|0,192711|3,192711|1,192836|2,192836|0,192961|3,192961|1,193086|0,193211|2,193211|3,193336|0,193336|1) - the drop in intensity isnt held accountable by the music itself, since the bass beats still continue on with the same speed and intensity even when the " long scratching-esque pad sounds" are layered over it.

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

General
The measure lines are incorrect throughout this map... In general they get thrown off whenever there's a red line somewhere other than the start of a measure
I think the sync isn't quite right either ;n;

box

Normal
00:51:308 - 00:52:433 - it looks like these LNs are a beat late. It might be intentional to represent the delayed start of the sound, but I think it's inconsistent with the other LNs Yeah. It was intentional and I think that setting the end of the LN at 00:52:433 - this point don't be comfortable during the game
01:12:042 - seems like this one is early. Maybe you accidentally put it on the bass drum instead of on the melodic sound afterward ☒ It was intentional so I leave it
02:15:086 - the two objects are on different snaps ☑ o.O lol. Ofc fixed
03:41:413 - the timing is probably off, since you have to put a 1/1 sound on a 1/4 snap to make it sound on-sync I know. I must work on this timing.

Hard
00:51:308 - 00:52:433 - late, like in Normal ^^^^
03:40:476 (220476|3,220663|2) - Maybe these should be on 1/1 snaps? Currently it's inconsistent with the LNs in Normal
03:41:351 - same timing issue as Normal ☑ I work to do so

Insane
In the intro, I think it would be logical to make all the of the LNs delayed from the downbeat by the same amount. Right now, most of them are delayed by a half-beat, but 00:03:460 (3460|1) - is delayed by a beat and a half ☑ Ok. Fixed
00:46:058 - it seems like the bass drum ends here, so maybe 00:46:308 - should be a single ☑ Yeah. Changed
00:48:058 (48058|2,48183|2,48308|2) - is this jack on purpose? it seems kinda random, especially because it's the only 3-note jack in this section ☑ Yeah. Changed
01:13:729 - and 01:05:729 - are a bit inconsistent. They're both similar sounds in the same section, but the first has a really strong jack and the second doesn't ☑ Changed
01:28:041 - the long LNs here seem to have the same problem as the intro... most are delayed by a full beat, but 01:31:166 - is delayed by a half-beat ☑ Ok. Fixed
I think it would be more reasonable for the jacks at 01:55:026 - and 01:55:589 - to be in different lanes (or different hands), since they're pretty close to each other and very difficult
02:57:242 - and 02:57:805 - same
03:13:273 - and 03:13:836 - same I will see what I can do with it
03:20:336 - why not end the LN here when the static sound stops? (like you did at 03:24:336 - ) ☑ Ups. Fixed

Thanks for using my queue!

Abraxos wrote:

yo gabba gabba!

holy fucking shit this song was originally released on a vinyl wtf how chav can you get

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( × ) ☑ fixed
   
   time

   seems like your timing is all wonky and fucked up
   
   seems like what this track suffers from is the lack of a solid consistent bpm thing; which isnt surprising given how tech was limited back then
   
   choo choo
   
   

   wikiped wrote:

   Lacrima Mosa Est, for example, has 480 BPM, although over the bass is a contrasting slow ambient sound.

   your measure ticks make more sense if its on 480 bpm, but because of technical limitations (measure lines) id kinda suggest you keep it at 240
   
   ive fixed most of the measure tick issues (and the offset ones), keep in mind that this song was made in 2006 and the inconsistencies in the timing offset can be real tough to catch. idk if i managed to catch everything, better to ask someone else to check it for you
   
   the timed diff is here, just copy paste it into a new diff (dont be an dum and copy paste it into one of your diffs pls)
   
   you can crtl-a to select everything in the pastebin if you didnt know
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   Project: Enigma Electronic

   ☑ Ok
   both are confirmed to be inside, check nom
   
   idk if you should keep terrorcore ok maybe suicide is kinda scary idk, im not that scared hearing this (ok maybe i dont understand the langauge its speaking) hmm... http://puu.sh/pbJLK/b356e7dfd7.png
   

   googlo wrote:

   This is the story of a man
   The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
   
   This is the story of a man
   The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
   As he falls, he repeated to calm down, again and again:
   So far, we went quite well
   
   But the important thing is not the case
   But the landing
   
   The important thing is not the case
   But the landing

   thanks google! I will try to get accurate translation :v
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) those are some weak ass hitsounds Important that they are.
6. Video : ( × ) .osb in your file? did i open it accidentally or WAT? I don't see this file in my folder lol

scary skeletins

this is insane btw
00:00:085 (85|2,2210|3) - the LN heads are at the wrong place, 00:02:335 - is where the background violin thingy changes pitch ☑ Ok fixed

00:03:460 (3460|1,4210|0) - same thing as above, changes at 00:04:335 - ☑ Ok fixed

00:31:647 (31647|2,31710|3,31835|2,31897|3,32022|2,32085|3) - eh could you do something else here its pretty biased on the right. 00:31:897 - also why is this a double now? if youre looking for the crash its 00:31:835 - right here bb ☑ Nice idea.

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assuming you got the crash double thing wrong

00:37:058 (37058|3,37058|1,37308|2,37308|0,37558|3,37558|1,37808|2,37808|0,38058|3,38058|1) - idk if theres a structure im supposed to follow here, the doubles here seem to be randomly placed, weve got this thing here but then 00:34:808 (34808|3,34808|2,35058|1,35058|0,35308|1,35308|3,35558|3,35558|0) -? not a big issue, just something to take note

00:43:808 (43808|3,43808|2,43933|1,43933|2,44058|0,44058|3) - can you flip this, weve got the same exact pattern as before 00:35:808 (35808|2,35808|3,35933|2,35933|1,36058|3,36058|0) - ☑ Ok

00:48:058 (48058|2,48183|2,48308|2) - pls there isnt that eheheh synth sound unlike 00:49:058 (49058|3,49183|3) - also btw 00:48:183 (48183|2,48308|2,48308|3,48433|0,48558|2,48558|1,48683|3,48808|1,48808|0,48933|2) - arent these supposed to have stacks because of the eheheh synth sound?

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☑ Ok

00:50:808 (50808|3,50933|3) - the ehehehe synth isnt here, dont stack ☑ Ok

00:52:183 (52183|3,52308|3) - wat from where ?
00:52:308 (52308|3,52308|0,52433|1,52558|0,52558|2,52683|3) - these are then meant to be stacked ☑ Ok

00:55:745 (55745|2,55745|3,55995|1,55995|0) - iirc these are singles, maybe you did something wrong either here or 00:49:745 (49745|0,49808|2,49808|3) - I don't think so but maybe... No. However, no.

00:59:058 (59058|2,59058|3,59183|0) - the iiiiii synth sound still here, stack ☑ Ok

01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - why is 01:02:058 (62058|1,62058|0) - left out

01:03:558 (63558|0,63683|0,63808|0,63933|0,64058|0) - seriously this is a little too much too sudden, ik youre trying to balance it out with 01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - but eh it isnt working. crtl-h 01:03:933 (63933|0,64058|1) - pls ☒ Frankly I didn't think about the balance just about increasing sound... so I leave.

01:05:729 (65729|1,65729|0,65792|2,65792|0) - can you not, a simple short jumpthrill will suffice, no need to slap me with 240 minis ☑ Ok

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if youre scared that the right hand takes too much you could move things like i did in the picture

01:11:292 (71292|0,71417|0,71542|1,71542|0) - you jack better with your left hand do you? maybe you could make this a little nicer on the left by 01:11:667 (71667|1) - shifting to 4 and 01:11:792 (71792|2) - to 2 ☒ Yes but I think that this arrangement of notes shows the growing power of sound so I leave.

01:13:729 (73729|0,73729|1,73792|2,73792|3) - im assuming your 240 mini jack thing was a mistake

01:25:291 (85291|1,85291|3,86291|2,86291|3,87291|1,87291|0) - maybe you might wanna keep your layering consistent, beforehand these LNs dont have notes (see 01:22:276 (82276|3) - and others) ☑ Ok fixed

01:26:041 (86041|2,86041|0) - same thing about layering, there isnt a clap here ☑ Ok fixed

01:27:666 - you wanna put a note here ☒ No because this is a kind of transition to the next part.

01:31:166 (91166|1,91291|0) - move the short LN to the otherhand, these things on one hand are pretty ehehes to hit ☑ Ok fixed

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01:36:933 (96933|3,97058|3,97183|3) - be more friendly pls ☑Hah Okay

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01:52:089 (112089|3,112214|3,112339|3) - same thing as above ☑ok

01:55:026 (115026|3,115089|3,115589|3,115651|3) - you dont have to emphasize the clap anymore than this, these jacks come so suddenly i cant emphasize how awkward they are tbh. a simple jumpthrill shenanigan thing is enough
I do not know what to think about it. I'll ask others and decide what to do

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01:54:839 (114839|1,114964|0,114964|1,115089|1,115089|0,115214|0,115339|0) - you might wanna watch out for hand balance thing too

you could theoractically have those jacks things, but i dont see a proper set-up smooth enough for the player to hit without making them angry. you could spread the jacks out to the other hand, but i dont see any change in how sudden and out of place it feels. which is the main problem here

01:57:964 (117964|2,118089|2,118214|2,118464|1,118589|1,118714|1) - weird how here you kinda changed things up a little. its cool and all, idk why you chose this section to feature this thing tho ☑ok fixed

02:02:964 (122964|3,123089|3,123214|3) - same ☑^

02:07:228 (127228|2,127228|1,127478|2,127478|1,127728|2,127728|1) - dont think these deserve doubles ☑hmm... me too. I forgot XD fixed


02:54:055 (174055|0) - move up by one 1/4 tick ☑lol How did it here ... fixed

02:54:242 (174242|3,174305|3) - same ☑ fixed

02:57:242 (177242|0,177305|0,177430|0,177555|0,177805|0,177867|0) - just copy paste whatever i said above and flip it I will wait

03:10:336 (190336|0) - nope i dont recommend this at all, the LNs forces the stacks onto one hand. maybe you could have everything here stack each other, since beforehand you had much nicer chords 03:07:070 (187070|0,187070|2,187195|3,187195|1) - like this ☒ I simply prefer to leave it as is. These LNs aren't so bad. Seriously

03:13:273 (193273|3,193336|3,193836|3,193898|3) - copy paste but dont flip

03:29:273 (209273|0,209336|0,209836|3,209898|3) - hey you changed it a little, same things still apply here tbh, the LNs and everything here makes it hard to anticipate such a thing

03:37:086 (217086|0,217211|1,217211|0,217336|0,217336|1,217461|1,217586|1,217586|0) - maybe you might wanna reconsider your choice of LN here. also the timings of the LNs are wrong heh I think over it

03:41:913 (221913|1) - the transition should be on the red tick ☒ Sound starts on the blue line in this case

03:58:444 - why isnt this one the 4 note chord but 03:58:319 - this is what Because I think that it fits but I will consider yet

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also you might wanna make things a little bit more balanced

i dont have much to say for the chorus, the layering is quite simple there

you might wanna look over the LNs in the second half of the chart, its pretty awkward on both hands

ill mod 2 for today, think i had enough for a fill

hope my mod helped

good luck with rank

Lenfried- wrote:

Testplay as requested via PM

only doing Insane

sooo here's a result screen:

ya

This is not a kind of map im good at judging and also my 4k skills went down to 7th dan-ish sooo yeah but its a nice map to warmup for jacking

Map construction is not something i would be able to make a full mod but here's a quickie:

00:35:064 (35064|0,35314|0,35564|0) - its kinda weird to see this stack + the fact that there no similar doubles usage stacking on the right hand later in the section ☑ Good point. Fixed

01:02:043 - stutter SVs will work perfectly here I wonder on adding sv but I have no idea about it so... maybe something will come of this.