I can't remember if you requested this or I picked it up from #modreqs. ;_;
[General]
Add Parmy to tags
Maybe darubisshuP (guitar solo) and karu (for illustration) to tags as well?
Please rename GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu to Megpoid GUMI - For my soul (val0108) [Normal].osu
Also delete GUMI - For my soul (val0108).osb and full resubmit.
[Normal]
There are a lot of tricky techniques that you have used in this difficulty that leaves me wary for this to be the easiest difficulty of the set. If you could get an easy difficulty mapped, I think this mapset would benefit greatly.
00:40:521 (2,3) - I have found with cutting sliders like these that if you can arrange them so that the hitcircles are not overlapping with the slider body, it will look 1000x better. So maybe something like this would look better:
02:16:522 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row. D: Think you can maybe map through 02:21:574 (1,1) - ? 4 of them is tiring.
Kind of wish you didn't copy/paste the chorus, but oh well.
[Hard]
00:19:047 (4,5,6) - This overlap is a little ugly.
02:41:784 (1) - This is really hard to tell if it's a slider or note. Maybe rearrange to something like this?
02:44:311 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:574 (1,1,1) - ^
02:46:837 (1) - ^
Not much wrong here, though it felt a little streamy considering the part of the song you decided to map. You could make this a little simpler with the rhythms and still have it fun, imo.
[Insane]
Can you even play this well? @_@
00:11:469 (2,3,4,5) - This seems a little ridiculous. :/
00:17:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:44:626 (2,3) - Control + R these? Confusing as is.
02:16:521 (1) - This part is neat with the video, but too many new combos. Please reduce some. ><
02:39:890 (1) - Kind of expected this to be at 02:39:732 - and a note added at 02:40:363 -
Feels really over-the-top for this song.
複雑の英語はすみません。