Been practicin' some more and just wondering what can be improved and whether I can collab at this point or still keep working cx
Your text doesn't really fit the image well at the moment, due to the outer glow and the text colour clashing, which makes it less appealing, in my opinion. Try experimenting and see what looks good. (:Jonawaga wrote:
How do I make my banners less ugly? Any suggestions welcome.
Thanks for the help. <3Almaz wrote:
Your text doesn't really fit the image well at the moment, due to the outer glow and the text colour clashing, which makes it less appealing, in my opinion. Try experimenting and see what looks good. (:Jonawaga wrote:
How do I make my banners less ugly? Any suggestions welcome.
I hope I don't offend you by saying this aaaa
Hm, maybe making the black border a different, lighter colour? I don't know otherwise, as it looks good as it isShiv wrote:
maybe any suggestion to make it better?Almaz wrote:
Dude, that looks good at it is. The filter on the text is nice, and the blur on the edges is good (:
still beautiful-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXed
Overgfxed indeed.-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXed
I love this commentSSShaymin wrote:
Overgfxed indeed.-[Jess]- wrote:
We call this over-GFXedCnC, I'm being sort of general with this and I might gloss over some thingsLet's start off with the good. The colors mesh pretty well for the most part and I like your placement of text. Your focals are also placed rather well. Probably the best of this bunch is the first piece since it has all of the things I've listed as good, plus the circle on Amatsukaze's face gives the piece a good focus on the focal.
Unfortunately, I have more problems with these pieces that I have more compliments about them. The lighting is messed up to hell and back where it's in places where it's not supposed to be. Last I checked, lights don't go into the folds of clothing or under armpits. I also mentioned earlier that one of the good things in these pieces were the colors? Yeah, it's also a weakness, but more so the coloring than the colors themselves, and combined with the textures that you've used, it makes some of them look like a mess. The worst offender of all of this is probably the last one, where it's just texture spam on top of texture spam with one color all over it (though you probably knew that already). It's just really hard to focus the focal and to be honest, it kind of hurts my eyes a little.
With that said, some advice:
- Limit your light sources to just one part of the canvas
- Rely less on coloring
- Try not to use as many textures spread across the canvas