1. Easy (1,05 stars, 116 notes)
2. Hard (4,56 stars, 288 notes)
3. Normal (2,91 stars, 192 notes)

Charles445 wrote:

General
Get timing help ok ><
Kiai is used too much fixed
The custom hitcircle doesn't work correctly, especially at the end of sliders. oh, i don't see that
Sorry, I can't help with hitsounds

Easy
Avoid clusters and quick presses on an easy i think it's good

Normal
Nice

Hard
01:52:475 to 01:54:813
   This part is off timing-wise, but I can't find a better alternative.
   Try fixing this when you get timing help
02:32:604 If you're going to overlap things like this, they need to be perfect
   It's tough to do it correctly.
   To help, here's part of the guide from RandomJibberish oh my...

SPOILER

This is the easiest shape to make. Place all of your points symmetrically in the grid first of all. Select it and Ctrl+H when you think you have it accurate to make sure the points are on symmetrical grids. Then move the points around until the slider is the right length and falls just a little short of the final point. It's important that whenever you move a point, you move the corresponding point exactly the same way to keep all the points symmetrical with each other. Make sure you Crtl+H often to check you haven't made a mistake.

To make the sliderend and endpoint line up hold shift to disable grid snap and move the top point down until the sliderend is right on the last point. When you think it's perfect, select and Crtl+H a few times and see if the endpoint moves around. If it doesn't, congratulations, you have a beautiful slider. Show it off to your friends. If it does, move the top point around until it does.

If you want an arc at an angle, it's usually easiest to make it upright as above, then Edit > Rotate By... to make it the angle you want.

02:34:682 ^^
02:39:227 ^^

Overall, this is solid and you've done some good work.
Star.

karenying wrote:

General
Background should be 1024*768 or 800*600,but your background is 1365*768, resize it
I can't help with hitsound too ;_;

Easy
01:58:449(4,1) - separate them better.

Normal
02:42:604(1,2,3,4) - maybe hard for Normal.separate them

Hard
00:24:426(3) - 1 grid up
01:44:164(7,8) - follow (6) to JUMP

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Приветь ~

мне нрав скин )
[ general ]

слайдеры не нравятся ...темболее в харде... выровняй их ... бросается в глаза - кривизна

[ easy ]

есть места режущие слух...не в ритм ... как тут например -> 00:58:969 звучит хорошо и к месту , но 02:00:527 я бы перенесла на 02:01:047 а между ними сёркл ... мб clap

[ normal ]

ненадо так часто использовать этот тяжелый Finish ...

00:21:828 - убрать до 00:23:387 - тут вроде бы неплохо...

00:24:945 - убрать или перенеси на 00:24:426

00:26:504 - ^ перенести на 00:27:542 убери до 00:29:620 - ставь тут

вообщем разберёшься ... это как я вижу ...но всё равно не злоупотребляй фишинем.

[ hard ]

и тут наоборот нет этих , очень нужных , мощных ударов финиша)

вот эти некрасивые слайдеры ) 00:19:231 ~ 00:23:387 ~ 00:24:426 ~ 00:27:802 ~ 00:28:581 ~ 00:30:140 ...т.д... выровняв их выглядит намного лучше ... посмотри и продолжи поправлять слайдеры.

00:30:140 перенеси нью комбо на 00:31:438

00:33:776 (1,2) - тоже какие-то не симетричные )

01:00:269 новое комбо

вообщем неплохо...)

но слайдеры лучше подправь...

IceBeam wrote:

Привет ещё раз. привет ^^

[Папка с мапой]

Разрешение бэкграунда 800 х 450,т.е. не 4:3.Вообще,это не особо важно,но если найдешь лучше - поменяй. на данный момент это пока лучший варинт

Битрейт MP3 по новым правилам должен быть между 128-192 kbps,твой - 320. исправлю

Если используешь свой hitcircle,то в папке должны быть ещё файлы hitcircleoverlay.png,approachcircle.png
Даже если они будут такие же,как оригинальные,всё равно - добавь. ок

[Source]
Life Starts Now - это альбом? Если да - то переноси его в Tags.

[Song Setup]
Во вкладке Storyboarding убери галочку напротив Letterboxes during breaks.(В случае если поменяшь БГ,т.к.эта функция добавляет черные полоски во время брейков,а у тебя они и так изначально есть).

На счёт цветов - да,вижу что под БГ,но полностью белый цвет не разрешают использовать.Измени тональность хотя-бы чуток.

[Easy]
Наверное,мапать изи на 1/2 Snap Divisor это правильно,но всё же тебе нужно либо за ритмом следовать,либо за словами.
Ритм пойдёт,а вот для текста песни наверное нужно будет использовать другую сетку.
Так что я буду советовать на синие тики перемещать некоторые ноты.

00:25:465 - основной бит(длинный белый тик) по середине слайдера? плохо звучит.

Оставь на 00:24:945 сиркл,а с 00:25:465 начни этот слайдер.
Ну или добавь следующие ноты:
00:25:465 (6) -
00:25:724 (7) -
00:26:244 (8) -
00:26:504 (9) -

00:29:620 (1) - Убери новое комбо.
00:34:296 (2) - Идеально звучало бы на 00:34:166.
00:34:555 (3) - Тоже не идеально звучит.Здесь тоже синие тики используются:

00:34:555 - Нота
00:34:815 - ^
00:35:205 - ^
00:35:594 - ^
^ а это не сложно для изи будет? я оставлю потому что вариант нравится,но есть соменения
00:37:932 (1) - Убери новое комбо.
00:57:672 (1) - ^
01:09:619 (1,2,3) - Странно звучит.(3)-ку оставь на месте,выдели (1,2) и перетащи назад к 01:09:360.
01:22:086 - Добавь ноту.
01:23:125 (2) - Можешь убрать.
01:23:645 - Добавь ноту.
01:24:164 (1) - Передвинь на 01:24:034. опять же,не сложно?
01:27:021 (2) - Не нужна нота на самом деле,без неё лучше звучит.
01:43:385 (1) - Убери комбо.
01:56:371 (1) - ^
02:00:527 (3,4) - Не в ритм.На 02:00:527 должен быть сиркл,а следующяя нота на 02:01:047.
02:02:085 (1,1,1) - За такое ругают,убирай новые комбо.
02:43:123 (1) - Убери нк.
02:45:201 (2) - Добавь нк.
02:47:279 (1) - Убери нк.
02:53:513 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:42:088 (1) - Убери нк.
02:10:397 (1) - ^
Кстати,с 02:05:202 идут сплошные синие тики.
Всё переписывать не буду,но последовательность такая:
02:05:202 (1) -
02:05:592 (2) -
02:05:981 (3) -
02:06:241 (4) -
02:06:761 (5) -
02:07:280 ~ повторяетсю первые 4,а потом с 02:08:709:
02:08:709 (1) -
02:09:098 (2) -
02:09:358 (3) -
повторяется,т.е.
02:09:748 (4) -
02:10:137 (5) -
02:10:397 (6) -
Ну и дальше там идут другие ноты,вообщем ставь на 25% скорости,выбирай 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor,слушай и отмечай каждую ноту,нужно переделать этот кусок весь.

[Hard]
Неплохо
00:42:088 (4) - Увеличь дистанцию или новое комбо.
Мне кажется есть некоторые места где немного не в ритм,это правда не особо влияет на геймплей,т.к. там буквально несколько мс.Просто песня такая,я вот например нашёл где вообще 1/3 тики юзать надо:
01:54:164 (3) - на 01:54:120.
01:54:423 (4) - на 01:54:467.
Да..тяжелая песня для мапанья.
02:48:578 (6) - Подравняй под слайдер.

Дальше все сделала
Уф,вроде всё.
Можешь конечно посидеть над хардом,там где слышишь,что немного не попадает - менять сетки,искать нужную ноту,но это конечно долго и тяжело.

А вообще,прогресс на лицо,молодец!
Звезда~

спасибо большое, очень полезный мод

Vass_Bass wrote:

Help with hitsounds pleeeease

SPOILER

128,112,31698,6,0,B|32:112|40:224,1,140
112,184,32477,1,0
184,168,32737,2,0,B|184:264|80:256,1,140

• Perhaps the timing is a tiny bit off. I got BPM: 115.495, Offset: 10,916

1. For ranking, we don't accept 320kbps MP3's anymore. The max size is 192 (i'd rather it be 256, but if you're looking to get this ranked, you'll need to reencode to 192)
2. Your tags 'n' source are inconsistent between the difficulties. This affects the search as some tags might not work. You should make the tags and source the same for each diff. Also, album names go in the tags instead, not the source. The source is for music from games or movies, or something like those.
3. Oh, and in the tags, don't bother having "3 days grace" in there. It's already in the artist

Charles445 wrote:

I'm getting an offset of about 10,981 - don't know if it's good or not
This has gone a long way, and it shows.

frost-b-spec wrote:

mod4mod!(I waiting for modding my map~)

blue:suggestion
red:must chenge

[Easy]
Resnap all note
0.23.708(2) - delete or change return slider (this easy!)
0.30.845(4) - ^
0.43.449(3) - ^
1.56.699(3) - ^
2.34.623(2) - ^
2.35.662(5) - ^
2.53.845(3) - ^
2.00.076(2) - use distance snap x0.0 and off grid snap

[Normal]
Resnap all note
0.27.085(7) - spacing

[Hard]
Resnap all note
2.07.089(1) - use distance snap x0.0 and off grid snap

+star~

Clickz wrote:

Overall
the background file "Image00001" has size 800 * 450, only 1024 * 768 and 800 * 600 pixel image acceptable

lepidopodus wrote:

Request from form PM.

Overall
- You are using kiai time for fountain in certain point, and turn on kiai 1/4 ealier than a note. Well, I prefer a note with fountain.
- Put every new combo in every spinner. It should be automatically added, but in certain point there was a bug about that. didn' find that places

Easy
00:33:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe little hard for beginners, return slider might work, hmm... I'm not sure about this though.
00:35:657 (5,1) - Spacing is too long. fix
00:43:709 (4,1) - Spacing is slighty short. Might be confused with 3/4? nope
00:48:385 (1) - Add whistle or finish in the start point of the slider? ok
01:29:945 (1) - ^ ok
02:23:973 (1) - ^ ok
02:28:129 (1) - ^ ok

Normal
00:20:072 (2) - Move a grid(lvl.3) to left? fix
00:44:229 (1) - This is quite strong beat, so whistle or finish would be better in the start point of the slider? ok
00:48:385 (1) - ^ ok
01:09:944 (2) - Uh... Maybe removing this would be better? removed
01:19:555 (1) - ^ nope
01:29:945 (1) - Move a grid(lvl.3) down? fix
01:29:945 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle in 1, and clap in 2, remove clap in 3, and put clap in the start point of 4? ok~
02:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is short. fixed
02:40:597 (X) - Do we really need a break here? yes, because it's too long break without Break оО
02:44:234 (X) - ^ ^

Hard
00:20:332 (2,3,4) - It would be better to keep spacing same here. there's 1.0 spacing, it's ok
00:52:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Make this symmetric as much as possible. fixed
00:59:554 (8,9,10) - Move a grid(lvl.3) up and a grid(lvl.3) left? fixed
01:17:996 (1) - Hmm, this jump might be too radical for 'Hard', but I'm not sure. i didn't change it, because this map isn't VERY hard
01:19:555 (4) - Move a grid(lvl.3) right? fixed
02:11:505 (1,2,1,2) - Spacing is short. оО don't see anything bad
02:56:182 (6) - New combo? ok

Well, might be helpful, maybe not.

Combo1 : 0,0,0
Combo2 : 215,215,215
Combo3 : 250,5,183
Combo4 : 124,165,159

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Requested my mod and I'm here ~

General;
- Normal doesn't have letterbox enabled, decide if you want to enablle it on every diff or disable it on every diff oh оО fixed
- Combo colours 1 and 3 look almost the same, try to use these instead ??

Combo1 : 0,0,0
Combo2 : 215,215,215
Combo3 : 250,5,183
Combo4 : 124,165,159

I will think about it

Easy;
- 00:44:229 >> Make this more symetrical ?? -______-
- 00:47:346 >> Add whistle nope
- 00:48:385 >> Remove whistle, add finish at the start of the slider ok
- 01:16:957 >> Remove combo then add new combo to the next note ^
- 01:23:711 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note ^
- 02:23:973 >> Align the kiai time with the note ^
- End kiai time on a note please

Normal;
- 01:29:945 >> Remove whistle, add finish nope
- 01:34:101 >> ^ nope
- 02:23:973 >> Align the kiai time with the note ok
- End kiai time on a note please

Hard;
- 02:14:622 (2,3) >> Did you not stack well (3) with (2)'s end on purpose ?? It's a mistake, fixed
- 02:23:973 >> Start kiai time here, on the note ok ><
- End kiai time on a note please

* Star

DJPop wrote:

Short burst Kiai? I think it's fine but don't know if others would complain.

Deif wrote:

Hi! Your map is really good, so there are only suggestions

Here's my mod:

[Easy]

- 0.53.580 (3): Nazi - 1 grid left
- 2.48.909 (spin): Maybe it should end at 2.52.546

[Normal]

- 0.49.943 (3,4): It's OK to stack notes, but specifically this one can be hard to read for Normal players imo
- 1.13.581 (2): (And also the previous slider) overlap to the next one. Maybe change it a little bit?
- 2.33.324 (3): Same here, it's over (4)

[Hard] No prob ^^

DJPop wrote:

Short burst Kiai? I think it's fine but don't know if others would complain.

I think that kiai burst is fine ^^

Ok, I'll leave this star here. Good luck! /me runs

1. If "Life Starts Now" is album name, i'd rather put it in Source.

1. 01:38:257 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 02:34:363 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. 02:06:830 (4) - Spacing between 4-5 is too short. Fix it.

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. If "Life Starts Now" is album name, i'd rather put it in Source.

[Easy]

1. 01:38:257 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 02:34:363 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

1. 02:06:830 (4) - Spacing between 4-5 is too short. Fix it.

[Hard]
Looks fine.

Cool map. Star ^^

Revengexsoyah wrote:

ONLY SUGGESTIONS.


~Easy~
try this 2 slider tick rate i think 1 is better
Cute cute cute.

~Normal~
00:34:878 : whistle ok
00:46:826 : ^ ok
00:56:177 : not delete clap add whistle no
01:27:347 : whistle no
02:40:857 : test spinner end in 02:42:416 it's hard for normal
02:44:494 : test spinner end in 02:46:572 ^

~Insane~
00:41:631 : whistle no
01:17:737 : delete clap sounds ugly :s ok



very cute map i loved
starred. good luck go for ranked (SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH IS VERY UGLY)

~

Hushu wrote:

Hii! The map has really improved since I've last saw it! Kudo star!