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Double posting so I don't confuse myself with all these different thingys

Evening wrote:

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03:12:644 (192644|5,192644|2) - Piano starts 1/4 earlier here, you might want to take note of that added a chord just before

03:21:491 (201491|6,201683|5) - Not sure if you want to but you can probably squeeze in this 1/6 piano here added on [4][5]

03:22:548 (202548|2,202741|1,202933|0,203125|2) - There is also a piano sequence that goes up in pitch here, you can probably do a stair-to-the-right pattern here for the left hand added

03:29:369 (209369|4,209369|5,209369|3) - The chord here starts on the next measure line actually (on the red line) fixed

03:29:691 (209691|4) - think you missed a piano thing here changed that first note to a chord

03:29:991 (209991|0,210041|1,210091|2) - Suggesting a 1/12, the grace sounds faster than a 1/8 yeah sounds about right. fixed

03:35:264 (215264|5,215332|6,215400|4) - Shift this to the left by 1 column, quite sure the 2nd note is of the same pitch as 03:35:060 (215060|5) - shifted

03:37:022 (217022|5) - Think this is a 1/8 grace changed indeed to 1/8

03:37:566 - Snaps should be as follows (highlighted notes are the only ones shifted, the 2nd note there is on 1/12:

wow o_o thanks man, i'm bad at snaps

* 03:38:944 - Suggesting something like this since the last 2 beats there is a skip/grace beat so it's better to kind of separate both of them instead of doing them as a chord

that looks like a cool pattern, fixed

03:46:487 - Taking note of the accents in the piano here, you can potentially break the stream to do a chord pattern here just to map to them:

looks good!

** 03:55:269 (235269|2,235301|1,235333|0,235397|1) - The anchor here on column 2 is rather hard to execute, 03:56:102 (236102|6) - the anchor on 6 here is also hard to execute, quite a big change but i suggest:

oof. yeah agree that that pattern is kinda dumb, changed to your suggestion since it's about the best i'll get

03:56:935 (236935|0,237064|1,237192|2) - Not too sure why are they 1/6 lagging behind those drum hits oops, fixed.

04:05:141 (245141|0,245205|1,245269|2) - This is 1/8, not sure if you plan to change it however did that

* 04:13:987 (253987|3,253987|0,254083|1,254083|5,254179|2,254275|3,254371|4,254468|5,254564|2,254564|0,254564|6) - Personally think that you can do a more grand/intense/strong build up here:
Not too sure if you're a fan of big chord hammers but this is one of many ways you can do it:

the [367] hammer was a bit awkward for me personally so I changed it to a simple [56] hammer: http://puu.sh/pmviy/a82fd3cba7.jpg

04:33:506 (273506|3) - Think this can be a 2 note chord considering how you layered this part added

04:35:237 (275237|5) - and this can be 3 added also

04:42:737 (282737|1) - Suggesting to move up by 1/4 because 1) it's a ghosty 2) for drum thing did

04:55:044 (295044|4,295044|1) - Think you can shift these upwards, same reason as above coincidentally did also coincidentally

* 04:56:294 (296294|1,296294|2,296487|5,296487|4,296583|2,296679|1,296775|4,296775|5,296871|3,296968|2,297064|1,297064|0) - Think you can structure this like:

cooL

** 05:06:679 (306679|1,306679|2,306679|0,306968|0,306968|2,306968|1,307064|2,307064|0,307064|1,307352|1,307352|2,307352|0,307641|0,307641|2,307641|1,307737|1,307737|0,307737|2) - eeeh i can only hear notes on:

discussed with you on discord :D

** 05:13:025 - the pattern here is... just really hard to execute well, i think this will work better:

agreed and fixed!
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happy birthday

edit: waiting for a QAT confirmation for a certain pattern
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happy birthday
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Sent Blocko a PM to ask about one of the patterns near the end. He sent his suggestions, which I have implemented.

Blocko wrote:

Level 51 wrote:

Hi Blocko!

Evening gave me a BN check, but there is one issue he and I are both not sure about. He asked me to ask you to check out this one issue and provide some feedback on it before he bubbles, since as far as we both know you're probably the most qualified for this task. Here's a link to his check: >click< and specifically the issue we are looking at is the one which he brought up at 05:06:679 (306679|1,306679|2,306679|0,306968|0,306968|2,306968|1,307064|2,307064|0,307064|1,307352|1,307352|2,307352|0,307641|0,307641|2,307641|1,307737|1,307737|0,307737|2) - .

Any help would be appreciated, thanks!
Hi Level 51!

Well, those chords are rather faint but they're still pretty audible to me. If you wanna keep things consistent, you can keep that current pattern.

Though, if you wanna be more correct with those piano chords in the end, see this:
05:01:775 - http://puu.sh/pnTro/981c933e66.png
05:04:852 - http://puu.sh/pnTtn/724c37ab18.png
There's a piano chord that's in between those two big chords from what I'm hearing.

05:07:544 - http://puu.sh/pnTCE/b0b40cb0fa.png
This one is to accentuate the louder chords there.

Hope this helps your map overall! Good luck.
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Works In Progress/Help :arrow: Pending Beatmaps
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SpectorDG wrote:

Works In Progress/Help :arrow: Pending Beatmaps
The system won't let me move this to Pending as I only have one difficulty and it's not named "Marathon". I think. Anyway, it's comfortable over here~
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BN check
Timing

I see the timing corrections you and Evening did, but I hate to see a map approximating the rhythm with 1/12 adjustments and odd offset changes. I went through and timed the weird part more rigorously for you. Here's my version of the timing points + resnapped notes: http://puu.sh/pSHMJ.osu (right click > save link as)

You can choose to stay with the old timing if you'd like. My version may have the advantage of being slightly more on-sync (I hope) and having more sensible snaps, but it also clutters up the playfield with measure lines. I'm pretty sure the old version is synced well enough to be rankable, so if you don't like the measure lines that's cool

04:38:025 - can I ask you to reconsider this kiai start? Unlike 00:18:224 - , 01:57:452 - , 02:09:760 - , etc, I don't hear a significant buildup to the second beat of the measure. The kiai start might fit better at 04:36:006 - which sounds like the culmination of the buildup or 04:37:641 - at the start of the measure

Metadata

I suggest you add the album name AD:PIANO 2 (source: http://diverse.jp/dvsp-0107/ ) and marathon cus why not, maybe people will be searching for marathons

Can you explain what the tag world fragments means? I need to know before I bubble
hahaha because DNA is in the nucleus hehehehe ok

00:26:750 - did you mean to put the two-note chord here for the drum? the only sound at 00:26:782 - is a hi hat i think
00:42:070 - no 1/6? (you mapped the corresponding 1/6 at 00:54:378 - )
01:32:455 (92455|6,92519|5,92583|4,92647|0,92711|1,92775|2) - I only hear 1/4 here
02:07:741 - chord pls
03:31:183 - shouldn't this all be 1/6
03:44:516 (224516|0,224804|0) - I think these both go on the 1/12 before it
04:59:083 - I don't hear a piano here

I just had the best idea. Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/pSNl6.osu
note that I added notes at 02:53:894 - and 02:54:535 - to preserve the pattern. I think there are quiet piano sounds there, but you can get rid of them if you want
don't feel pressured to change it but please, it would be LEGENDARY

My two cents:

I think the other modders were on to something when they said the patterning was *too* consistent. Just look at the 1-2-3 and 5-6-7-esque patterns everywhere. However, what they failed to point out is that it makes the map feel more cohesive and distinct. It gives it more personality. You can even consider 1-2-3 to be a sort of motif :) (Of course, if all your maps end up looking like that then it can get tiresome)

This song is great for mapping and you really did justice to the nuances of rhythm, pitch, and structure. The streams are fun too. I'll be glad to bubble this set once you respond to my suggestions. Note that if you implement any of the larger changes then we'll need Evening to re-bubble as well. Cheers 8-)
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Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check
Timing

I see the timing corrections you and Evening did, but I hate to see a map approximating the rhythm with 1/12 adjustments and odd offset changes. I went through and timed the weird part more rigorously for you. Here's my version of the timing points + resnapped notes: http://puu.sh/pSHMJ.osu (right click > save link as)

You can choose to stay with the old timing if you'd like. My version may have the advantage of being slightly more on-sync (I hope) and having more sensible snaps, but it also clutters up the playfield with measure lines. I'm pretty sure the old version is synced well enough to be rankable, so if you don't like the measure lines that's cool Added the new timings, thank you so much! I'm not good with timings which is why I couldn't do it myself :P also measure lines are cool

04:38:025 - can I ask you to reconsider this kiai start? Unlike 00:18:224 - , 01:57:452 - , 02:09:760 - , etc, I don't hear a significant buildup to the second beat of the measure. The kiai start might fit better at 04:36:006 - which sounds like the culmination of the buildup or 04:37:641 - at the start of the measure Agreed! Changed the start of the kiai to 04:36:006 -

Metadata

I suggest you add the album name AD:PIANO 2 (source: http://diverse.jp/dvsp-0107/ ) and marathon cus why not, maybe people will be searching for marathons Added both!

Can you explain what the tag world fragments means? I need to know before I bubble World Fragments is what I assumed the name of the album or something was. Of course I'm just inferring this off contextual clues, so I could be very wrong about this. Source: http://diverse.jp/dvsp-0145/
hahaha because DNA is in the nucleus hehehehe ok Technically DNA is a subset of the wider range of nucleic acids. Of course I'm always up for changing it to the Gradual Intensification of an Incomprehensibly Complex Deoxyribonucleic Structure.

00:26:750 - did you mean to put the two-note chord here for the drum? the only sound at 00:26:782 - is a hi hat i think fixed
00:42:070 - no 1/6? (you mapped the corresponding 1/6 at 00:54:378 - ) uh, the 1/6 here is significantly softer, which is why I missed it out to begin with. Nonetheless I've added it
01:32:455 (92455|6,92519|5,92583|4,92647|0,92711|1,92775|2) - I only hear 1/4 here oops. fixed!
02:07:741 - chord pls chorded
03:31:183 - shouldn't this all be 1/6 correct! not sure what I was hearing the first time
03:44:516 (224516|0,224804|0) - I think these both go on the 1/12 before it oh ok cool. wasn't sure about that myself.
04:59:083 - I don't hear a piano here oh ok. changed to [4][5][3]

I just had the best idea. Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/pSNl6.osu
note that I added notes at 02:53:894 - and 02:54:535 - to preserve the pattern. I think there are quiet piano sounds there, but you can get rid of them if you want
don't feel pressured to change it but please, it would be LEGENDARY added. something something legendary

My two cents:

I think the other modders were on to something when they said the patterning was *too* consistent. Just look at the 1-2-3 and 5-6-7-esque patterns everywhere. However, what they failed to point out is that it makes the map feel more cohesive and distinct. It gives it more personality. You can even consider 1-2-3 to be a sort of motif :)

(Of course, if all your maps end up looking like that then it can get tiresome) <-- oh no

This song is great for mapping and you really did justice to the nuances of rhythm, pitch, and structure. The streams are fun too. I'll be glad to bubble this set once you respond to my suggestions. Note that if you implement any of the larger changes then we'll need Evening to re-bubble as well. Cheers 8-)thanks! I implemented like everything so I assume that means I need Evening to rebub this ;_;
implemented and updated and etc so bubble is pop. dunno what that means. o well
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Rechecked the suggestions and rebubbled

Bubble #1
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great betmap... wow
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I think you forgot to add the tags, if you wouldn't mind doing that. small change so we don't need a re-bubble from Evening

You noticed what the pattern I suggested resembles, right? :)
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Nivrad00 wrote:

I think you forgot to add the tags, if you wouldn't mind doing that. small change so we don't need a re-bubble from Evening
AAAA I somehow forgot to do that!! Or maybe I accidentally edited the tags on the wrong map oops BUT it's done now >:3
You noticed what the pattern I suggested resembles, right? :)
OH I JUST REALISED LOL THAT'S GREAT
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Rebubble (bubble #2)

^^
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Blocko sent me his check (http://puu.sh/qeHTX/ddfd6f71b9.txt) and it is here below. We did the first minute on IRC prior to this check. I've edited the map accordingly, just waiting on him for a hitsound check. Coincidentally, this map has been around for 7 months! Happy 7/12 birthday!!!

01:04:763 (64763|6) - pretty sure this is a ghost note
01:05:243 (65243|4) -
removed one note from each.

01:05:628 (65628|5) - move down to 01:05:436 -
pretty sure you mean 01:05:724 - ? I moved it there.

01:09:763 - maybe you can add 1/6 there
01:10:532 - 1/6 starts here
changed the relevant part to http://puu.sh/qitIj/6033fe89ab.jpg

01:13:801 - 1/6 starts here
fixed

01:14:667 (74667|4) - delete or move down to 01:14:474 -
moved

01:24:186 - 1/6
1/6ed

01:24:763 (84763|1,84763|2,84859|5,84859|6,84859|3) - 1/6
added a 1/6 between there

01:31:301 - this whole part is 1/6
1/6ed it kinda

01:44:667 (104667|6) - move to 2 for a bit of hand balance and pitch
done

01:52:647 (112647|6,112647|0,112711|4,112711|2,112775|1,112775|5) - trill this to accent the piano/drum? 232 545
done

02:37:068 to 02:41:491 - Pretty weird to have drums at the start then it disappears later on.
02:55:337 to 02:56:298 - Same here.
kept the drum / cymbal beat at the start as it leads into the softer section fairly well, but i removed the chord at 02:38:221 - . the chords at 02:55:337 - and 02:55:721 - are for the cymbal, not for the drum, but i lowered them to 4-note chords.

02:59:760 - keep that 3-2-3-2-3 pattern density going
fixed

03:04:087 - Add another note here to complete the double-stream
added on 4

03:04:760 (184760|4,184760|3,184760|5,185048|3,185048|2,185048|4,185337|2,185337|1,185337|3) - 4-note chords for more impact
ok

03:06:587 - add on 3 for that deep tom
03:06:875 - add on 6
both are suggested because of 03:07:164 -
added, good catch

03:09:568 - another note here for kick
03:18:029 - add another note for crash
done

03:26:683 (206683|6,206875|0,207260|0,207452|6,207644|0,208231|1,208429|0,208823|0,209021|1) - seems to make this simple part a bit overdone. remove them?
removed

03:29:712 - piano note here
added

03:29:975 (209975|0,209975|5,210008|1,210040|2,210073|3) - snap to 1/16
resnapped

03:31:204 - overdone imo, change to a > pattern (1357531)
did not want to make the change, but i lowered the starting and ending notes to 2-note chords.

03:32:614 (212614|5,212614|4,212639|6) - move to the left hand
ctrl-H'd

03:50:910 (230910|5,230910|0) - 1/3?
aye. moved upwards.

03:53:987 (233987|6,234083|5,234179|4,234275|3,234371|2,234468|1) - ghost?
yeah. changed to this: http://puu.sh/qiuXs/d49e4d1045.png

03:58:218 (238218|5,238410|3) - move up one line under 1/4 (or map it in a way that emphasizes those chords)
done this

04:01:487 - another note here for the chord
04:08:987 - same, on 1
done

04:28:025 (268025|2,268121|0,268218|4,268314|6) - double stream this?
aye. also added a note on the red line because of drum thing.

04:29:371 - add the drums here? cuz of 04:28:987 -
changed to http://puu.sh/qiuAi/47c3985b29.jpg

04:38:314 (278314|5) - move to 4 for bigger impact? dunno how to say this, but it's just to avoid 567
done

04:43:794 - add note here
04:44:179 - add note here
aye

04:44:468 (284468|5) - move to 3
yep

04:50:333 - add note here
done

05:16:871 - 6-note chords here for a denser ending?
added notes! :D

make drain/od higher to about 9/9 if applicable
raised od to 8.3 and hp to 8.5. big chords so i don't want to make hp 9, especially with the chordjack section at the end. chordstreams are also more fun on lower ods.
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get rebubbles after those changes and call me for rank, dis is gud shit fam
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Reuploaded to fix one thing as pointed out by Evening:
[7:24 PM] Evening: 03:50:974 (230974|5,230974|0) -  pretty sure this is 1/8
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